第一篇:中考作文 环境范文
请以”It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment”为题,写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment
保护环境是我们的义务
It's our duty to protect our environment.Where do we live? The earth.The earth is the only one place we live in.So you know how important the environment is.保护环境是我们的义务。我们居住在哪里?地球。地球是我们唯一居住的地方,所以可想而知环境对于我们的重要性。
But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground.It's terrible if we still do it.但是现在,很多人都在破坏环境,比如砍伐树木,在公共墙壁上乱涂乱画,随地扔垃圾。如果我们继续这样下去是非常可怕的。
Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment.It's our duty.It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment.We should make our environment more and more beautiful.现在,是人们保护环境的时候了,这是我们的义务,我们都要为改善环境做贡献,我们应该努力让我们的环境变得更好。
点评:作者多用学过的词语,不但保证了正确,还巩固了所学的知识,并且注意句型的多样化,如长句、短句、疑问句,使用了“if,so,now,but”等词,整篇文章读起来朗朗上口。实际上,写文章就像串珠子,连接词就在于把一个个单词串起来。
议论文常用的句型有:
1、论点:
Computer is important.We must learn English well.It's very important for us to...In my opinion...2、论证过程常用一些衔接词可使文章读起来流畅、紧凑。如:
Firstly,...Secondly,...Lastly,...Above all,...等。
3、结尾强调观点,最好用不同的句型来表达相同的观点,如:
So we must...So it's very important for us to...I believe...We should...典型句子:
1.It’s our duty to save wate
2.As we know , water is very important to man,3.we can’t live without water.4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5.But some people don’t care about it.6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.7.It"s our duty to protect our environment。
8.It is very important to take care of our environment
9.We should not throw litter onto the ground
10.We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11.We should plant more flowers and trees。
12.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.14.Trees are very helpful and important for us.15.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy
in the future.It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.例文:
1、假如你是新华中学的学生,名叫MIKE。去年6月1日我国已经禁止使用塑料袋,你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?
参考答案:
I’m Mike.I am a student in Huaxing Middle School.Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don’t like them.I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production.And they can’t decompose(分解)in a short time.The plastic bags will make our world worse.I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets.It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets.It’s good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags.I hope we can take care of our environment.Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.、6月5日(June 5)是世界环境保护日,我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重……。假如你是学生Jone.,你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛。
要求:
1、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;
2、如何保护好我们的环境,采取怎样的措施,举例1—3方面进行说明,字数80左右。
参考答案:
Dear headmasters,teachers,classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit(=a little)nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse.In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills.Some people even have no clean water to drink.So I think we must do something to protect the environment..But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt? For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike.we can use shopping basskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment , there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.Thanks!
3、目前南通市正在积极创建全国文明城市,中学生也在为之努力。假如你是你是某中学的一名学生张通,请根据下列图表所示内容,给笔友John写一封电子邮件,介绍有关情况。
注意:1.邮件内容应包含所有要点,不要简单翻译,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数90左右(邮件中已经写好了的部分,不计入总词数)。
4.参考词汇:civilized 文明的 respect 尊敬
Dear John,I’m glad to hear from you.Now let me tell you something about our city.Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city.We middle school students
are also doing something for it.Zhang Tong
参考答案:
Dear John,I’m glad to hear from you.Now let me tell you something about our city.Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city.We middle school students are also doing some things for it.We are all polite to our teachers.(In class, we listen carefully to them./ When we meet them, we always say hello to them./…)We also respect the old.For example, we help them cross the streets.We are always ready to help each other.(When one has difficulty with his studies, others will help him at
once./...)We often show our love to those in trouble.Last month, the students of my class donated money to the earthquake-hit areas.Besides, we plant trees to protect the environment and make our city more beautiful.Nantong is my hometown.I will do my best to turn Nantong into a civilized city.Zhang Tong4、保护环境
从2008年6月1日起,国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋,掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华,准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题,写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。
内容包含:
1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;
2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;
3.离开教室应关灯;
4.最好走路或骑自行车上学;
5.简述理由:保护环境,减少污染,节约能源等
注意:
1.词数:80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可根据要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名,否则以零分处理。
4.参考词汇:布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbookWhat Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
参考作文:
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse(再利用)the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try
our best to reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities(日常活动)can make a real difference to(对…有影响)the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!
中考英语作文范文1
1)It’s our duty to save water(节约水是我们每个人的责任。)
As we know , water is very important to man,(我们知道,水对人类来说是非常的重要。)we can’t live without water.(没有水我们就不能生存。)The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.(适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。)But some people don’t care about it.(但是有些人却不关心或不在意。)They waste a lot of water in their daily life.(日常生活中他们浪费很多水。)Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.(更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。)They throw rubbish into rivers , too.(他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。)Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.(很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。)Something must be done to stop the pollution.(人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。)Only in this way can we live happily.(只有这样,我们才过得幸福开心。)If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我们不节约水,那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪)
2)Planting trees
Trees are very helpful and important for us.(树对我们人类是多么的重要和有用。)We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.(为了将来我们的生活过得更好、更加健康我们应该种更多的树。)It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.(爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任和义务。)
范文5:
人与环境是和谐相处的,我们生存在地球上,人是自然之子,而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者,大家都知道,人类只有一个地球,地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞,如果我们把它损坏了,破坏了大自然的组织,等 于消灭人类。因此,环境要与社会公德联系起来,与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务
Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals.Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind.Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it.Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.保护我们的城市(Saving Our City)
It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities.(解决城市垃圾问题是很重要的)Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly.(垃圾必需远离我们的生活或适当更新)Or it may cause a lot of problems.(否则它可能会造成很多问题)It may pollute the air and water.(它可能会污染空气和水)People may get ill when the they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.(当人们喝了被污染的不或呼吸了被污染的空气,他们会生病的)
Our city has started to face the problem.(我们的城市已经开始面对这个问题)Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place(一些垃圾被存放起来再送到一个合适的地方).Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air.(废气在进入空气前被清除)Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers.(废水在倒入河流前被清理)
People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere.(人们应该从随处乱扔垃圾中得到警示)We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.(我们应尽我们最在的努力保护我们的环境和污染作斗争)
保卫地球(Saving the Earth)
As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.(当时光多匆匆流过,人类正在使地球遍地沧夷)People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere.(人们砍伐了许多的树木和到处乱扔垃圾)Factories let out their waste without doing anying to it.(工厂没有做任何措施就让废弃物流出)This has cause some serious problems.(这引起了一些严重的问题)Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less clean, even the temperature of the earth is rising.(例如:土地少化,河水肮脏,空气不大干净,甚至地球的气温也在上升)What should we do to save the earth ?(我们要怎样拯救地球呢?)My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dusbins and stop factories pouring waste directly into the air or rivers.(我的建议是,多种树,把垃圾扔进垃圾箱用阻止工厂向空气或河流直接排放废弃物)In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it,(就这样吧,我样只有一个地球,我们应尽我胶最在的努力去保护它)or we will regret.(否则,我样会后悔的.)
如何保护环境(How to Protect the Environment)
Good environment can make people feel happy and fit.(好的环境能例人们觉得健康又开心)To improve the environment means to improve our life.(改善环境就是改善我们的生活)We should plant more trees and flowers around us.(我们应该在我们的周围多种花草)草地 We shouldn’t cut them down.(我样不应损坏它们)We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air.(我们应该阻止工厂废水流入河流,废气进入大气层)Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins.(无论在什么时候,我们看见有垃圾在地上时,我们应把它扔进垃圾箱)Never spit in public.(决不在公共场所吐唾液)Don’t draw on public walls.(不要在公共墙壁上乱画)It’s our duty to protect the environment.(保护环境是我们的职责)
第二篇:中考英语作文环境问题
中考英语作文范文 环境问题
环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕环境问题影响着人们的工作学习生活等而我们的工作生活生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重
4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面,80字左右的。
范文: How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and
less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population isincreasing faster and faster resources is getting less and
less„etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We should n’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.
第三篇:中考英语作文 关于人口和环境问题
关于人口和环境问题
A.你愿意为濒危动物做些什么呢?也许你也可以写一篇文章来介绍你所喜欢的动物,并呼吁人们行动起来保护野生动物。下面词汇会对你有些帮助:
furry, smart, intelligent, fast, strong, aggressive, enormous, gentle, fun, shy, friendly, endangered, laws, zoos, feed, etc.One possible version:
My favourite animals are pandas.I like them very much because they are gentle and shy.They are also friendly to people.And they look funny, too.Their eyes are the most interesting part.The black circles around their eyes make them look like they are wearing glasses or have just been in a fight.Their favourite food is bamboo leaves.They don’t like to move around very much.In fact, they prefer to sleep all day if they can.But now pandas are endangered.For one thing, people have destroyed many of their habitats.For another, they don’t have enough food to eat.We must think of ways to protect them.I think we should build more panda zoos and plant more bamboo for them.I hope everyone can do something for animals, so that we can keep our world rich and colourful and full of interesting animals.B.今年几个世界大国首脑都参加了“八国峰会”,这次的主题是世界经济、能源问题和气候变化。经济发展离不开环境话题,能源使用必然污染环境,而气候变化就是经济发展和环境问题矛盾的产物。
范文提示
1)Planting trees
Trees are very helpful and important for us.(树对我们人类是多么的重要和有用。)We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.(为了将来我们的生活过得更好、更加健康我们应该种更多的树。)It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.(爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任和义务。)
2)It’s our duty to save water(节约水是我们每个人的责任。)
As we know , water is very important to man,(我们知道,水对人类来说是非常的重要。)we can’t live without water.(没有水我们就不能生存。)The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.(适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。)But some people don’t care about it.(但是有些人却不关心或不在意。)They waste a lot of water in their daily life.(日常生活中他们浪费很多水。)Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.(更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。)They throw rubbish into rivers , too.(他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。)Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.(很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。)Something must be done to stop the pollution.(人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。)Only in this way can we live happily.(只有这样,我们才过得幸福开心。)If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我们不节约水,那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪)C.中考英语作文范文:保护我们的城市(Saving Our City)
It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities.Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly.Or it may cause a lot of problems.It may pollute the air and water.People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.Our city has started to face the problem.Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place.Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air.Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers.People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere.We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.D.
中考英语作文范文:保卫地球(Saving the Earth)
As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere.Factories let out their waste without doing anying to it.This has cause some serious problems.Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less clean, even the
temperature of the earth is rising.What should we do to save the earth ? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dusbins and stop factories pouring waste directly into the air or rivers.In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it, or we will regret.E
中考英语作文范文:保护环境(How to Protect the Environment)
Good environment can make people feel happy and fit.To improve the environment means to improve our life.We should plant more trees and flowers around us.We shouldn’t cut them down.We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air.Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins.Never spit in public.Don’t draw on public walls.It’s our duty to protect the environment.环保(environmental matter)
The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays.Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.Due to lacking of environmental concepts, people's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world.We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world!F
关于环境保护(水资源节约)的话题
Our environment is very important for our lives.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now, people cut down many trees.Air pollution and water population are very serious.The environment around us becomes very terrible.We should protect our environment.First, we
should plant many trees to keep water.Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work..Third , we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river.Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags.Finally, we can ask more people to join us.
第四篇:中考作文环境描写经典好句子
有范文有指导:
一、写作指导
在记叙文写作中,进行人物语言的描写是不可缺少的。进行人物语言的描写,不是随心所欲的,想怎样写就怎样写,而应该像鲁迅先生指出的那样:“人物语言的描写,能使读者由说话看出人来。”这就是说从人物语言的描写中看出人物的鲜明特点。那么,怎样才能达到这种境界呢?
一、人物语言的描写要符合人物的年龄、经历、身份、文化教养等特点。
二、人物语言的描写,力求反映人物的特征。成功的对话描写,不仅要符合人物的身份、年龄、职业等特点,而且也要能反映出人物的思想感情,表现人物的性格特征。
三、人物语言要力求简洁,避免有话必录和拖泥带水的现象。
四、具有鲜明个性的人物语言描写,并不是垂手可得,而要通过艰辛的努力才能获得。同学们为自己笔下的人物设计语言,更应该如此。
心理描写,是对人物内心活动的描写。深入描写人物的内心活动,是展示人物形象的重要手段。事出有因。任何心理活动的引起是有原因的,把心理活动的起因写清楚,对于展示人物形象是必不可少的。通过心理描写来展示人物形象,一定要把心理活动的过程展现出来。不然,人物的形象无论如何都会显得苍白无力。
心理活动的展现和其它事物的发展一样,都是有层次的。我们把人物心理活动的层次逐渐写出来,人物形象的展示也会越来越具体。写心理活动时,有一点要特别注意:用第一人称写人时,可以写“我”的心理活动,但不能写别人的心理活动。因为别人心里是怎样想的,“我”是无法知道的呀!
在现实生活中,不同人物之间的性格特征,或同一人物在不同环境下内在性格的变化,常常处在不协调的矛盾状态之中。为了显示人物性格的差异,写作文就必须通过对比加以表现,将他们面对相同的事物作出不同的反应抖落出来,从而突出人物的形象。通过对比描写来突出人物形象,要注意几点:
一、运用对比描写,不应该勉强凑合,主要看作文的材料是否适合采用对比的写法。如果材料本身需要用对比的写法,那么作者才可以通过对比来写人,完成自己的写作意图。如果材料的本身不适合采用对比的手段,那么也不要人为的牵强附会,为对比而对比。
二、两个人进行对比,不能割裂开来先写一个,后写一个,互不相干,而是围绕中心事件叙述,刻画两个人不同的思想性格。
写人,如果从一个侧面去描写,人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写,人物形象就容易丰满。多侧面地描写人物形象,这个“侧面”的选择不是随心所欲的,而是从众多的材料中选择整理出各具代表性的若干侧面,分工而又合作地表现人物形象。
通过多侧面描写来丰满人物形象,我们可以称它是“众星拱月”。“月”就是人物,“星”就是侧面,“拱”就是多侧面展示人物形象的过程。不过应该看到,“众星拱月”的“众星”也不是平分秋色的,它们之间也有主次、详略的区别。所以在写“众星”的时候,是没有必要平均使用力量的。
写一群人,比写一个人、两个人难一些,难就难在要通过一定的材料组织,巧妙地将一群人凝聚在一起,从而反映各自的思想、性格、面貌。那么,怎样组织材料才能把一群人凝聚在一起呢?应该抓住贯串各个人物之间的线索。写人物群像,是不是每个人在文章中所占据的位置都一样呢?不是的。在一群人中,有的在文章中担任“主角”,有的在文章中担任“配角”,谁主谁次,是根据表现文章中心思想的需要来决定的。
人体是靠骨架支撑的,文章也是一样的道理。如果把文章的中心思想比作“灵魂”,材料比作“血肉”,那么,结构就是灵魂和血肉的“骨架”。
因此,同学们在有了写人的材料以后,就应该进一步考虑它的结构。写人的结构方式主要有以下两种: 第一种,总分总式。
这是最常见最朴素的写人结构。它的特点是有一个点明题意的开头(A),简洁醒目,作为文章的总起部分。主干部(B、C、D)也可以说是文章的分述部分,它的几段互相独立,从不同的角度表达中心,在编排先后的次序上还需要有一定的斟酌。结尾E是文章的总结部分,它不仅是D的自然过渡,而且常常是对B、C、D的归纳小结,又是对A的照应。
第二种,逐层进入式。
这种结构方式适用于用一件事写人。它的特点是:第一层次A,写事情的起因;第二层次B,写事情的发展;第三层次C,写事情的高潮;第四层次D,写事情的结局。文章的二三层次是全文的灵魂和力量所在。这两个层次写得好,常常可以使文章内容丰富起来。根据表达的需要,描写人物的外貌
对人物的容貌、身材、衣着和表情的描写,叫做外貌描写。我们有的同学一写到以记人为主的作文时,往往是作这样的描写:高高的个子,大大的眼睛,目光炯炯有神……好像天下的人都是一个模样。其实,世界上的人有千千万万,没有完全相同的外貌。关键的问题是没有根据表达的需要,去描写人物的外貌。怎样根据表达的需要去描写人物的外貌呢?
第一、根据表达的需要,描写人物的外在特征。每个人物都有他(她)自己的特有外貌,总是在一定的程序上表现出内在状态。由于人们的出身、经历、素养、社会环境的影响,同时自己鲜明的个性,这些在他(她)的表情、姿态、服饰等方面都能流露出来。第二、根据表达的需要,有重点地描写外貌。
有的同学他们不分主次,不根据中心思想的需要,面面俱到地进行描写。“眉毛胡子一把抓。”可是效果呢?罗里罗嗦,让人看半天也不会知道特征在哪里。
第三、根据表达的需要,安排好外貌描写的顺序。对于一个人的外貌,作者往往是从多方面进行的.这些方方面面,哪些先写,哪些后写,应该遵循一定的顺序。但是,有时为了表达的需要,或者观察角度的变化,外貌描写的顺序也会有变化。
总之,外貌描写要有利于文章的中心思想的表达,有利于人物内心世界的展示,只有这样,才可以说文章的外貌描写是成功的。
二、范例 妈 妈 的 手
在手的世界中,有勤劳的手,懒惰的手,致富的手,灵巧的手,然而,我写的却是妈妈一双勤劳的手。她的手不怎么大,长期的劳动使茧皮爬上了手指,使手背上长了一层浅黑色的皮。
当鸡叫三遍的时候,妈妈的手已经开始工作了:忙着做早点。临近中午,她的手又工作了:忙着做午饭。下午,她的手又开始工作了:忙着做晚饭。夜晚,当明月高悬的时候,妈妈的手又工作了:忙着洗衣服。总之,妈妈的手时时刻刻工作着。
妈妈的手既是勤劳的手,又是充满母爱的手。记得一个寒冬的下午,天气比较冷。我在做作业,妈妈在做针线活。
夜深了,天气变得更冷了,我的手直打颤,不敢写了,怕把作业做坏。这时,妈妈走到了我身旁,关心地对我说:“冷吗?”我轻轻地把我的手夹在她的两手之中。顿时,我觉得无比暖和。在她的鼓励下,我终于认真地完成了作业。
记得还有一个隆冬的早晨,天气很冷。为了御寒,我和伙伴们到小河边滑冰。我一不小心,双脚跌进了石灰坑。我好不容易把脚提出来,可皮靴里已塞满了石灰。“不能穿了”,我果断地把皮靴脱掉,准备要妈妈给我洗,又一想:妈妈会批评我的。最后,我想出了一个两全其美的办法,把皮靴藏到门缝里,等天气暖和一点再洗。第二天,天气稍微暖和一点,我就去洗
皮靴。但门缝里皮靴的影子都没有。我着急得差点哭起来,过了一会儿,镇静下来,就到别处去找。刚找到后门,就听见熟悉的“唰、唰、唰”声。这不是妈妈的手工作时的声音吗?我随着声音走去,在天井里,我发现了妈妈,她正在为我洗皮靴。她的手冻得红红的,裂开了几条缝。虽然天冷,但是从妈妈的两颊中仍然掉下几颗晶莹的汗珠,我走到她的身边,夺下刷皮靴的刷子,一边说:“妈妈,我来洗。”妈妈关心地说:“振振,我来洗。”我怎么也不答应,可是,她已经把皮靴和刷子夺去了。最终,还是妈妈洗了。她洗完后,又一丝不苟地烤皮靴,当我重新穿上皮靴时,眼睛已被泪水模糊了。
啊!我要赞美,赞美妈妈的手,更要赞美您――妈妈。老师点评
《妈妈的手》作者写妈妈的勤劳品质,不是像许多同学那样,就“勤劳”写“勤劳”,而是选择一个侧面,从“手”的角度,具体而集中地表现了妈妈勤劳的特点:吃的,是妈妈这双手做好;穿的,是妈妈这双手缝成;温暖,是妈妈这双手送来;懒惰,是妈妈这双手驱走……,由于作者巧妙地选择“妈妈的手”这个角度来寄托自己的情感,因而文章中“我”对妈妈无限敬爱之情就表现得非常充分。我的语文老师
瞧,这位身穿黑华达呢中山装,戴着黑色宽边眼镜,脸上带着微笑的中年教师,他就是我们敬佩的语文老师――陈老师。陈老师知识渊博,教学经验丰富,上起课来总是那么轻松、活泼、生动、有趣。我们尤其爱听他的作文课。他讲起课来总是那么风趣、幽默,引人入胜,使我们兴趣盎然。我们在不知不觉中爱上作文,逐步懂得一点写作的“奥秘”。“叮铃铃”,上课的铃声响了,这一节是作文课。陈老师大步跨进教室。今天他显得格外兴奋,走到讲台前,笑嘻嘻地说:“同学们,今天我特别高兴,你们知道我为什么高兴吗?”我们都咧开嘴,摇摇头。陈老师接着说:“今天早上,我到贸易市场,一元钱,买了两只老母鸡,你们说能不高兴吗?” ??
同学们哄的一声笑了,张瑾笑得连腰也直不起来了。我想:陈老师准又在开玩笑了。哪知陈老师却一本正经地说:“真的,我从来不说假话,不信,我读给你们听。”说着,他拿起一本作文本大声念了起来。原来一个同学在作文中写他跟爸爸到贸易市场去买鸡,爸爸只付了一元钱,买到两只肥壮的大母鸡。同学们恍然大悟,陈老师在批评有的同学写作文不顾事实,胡编乱造。陈老师说:“不管你的描写多么生动,词语多么丰富,不真实的文章是没有意义的,就不是好作文。”我想,我也常犯这种毛病,如以前写秋游时,总写“春光明媚,百花争艳……” 打这以后,同学们写作文时,总要细心琢磨,深入了解,遇到不明白奈侍猓阄世鲜Α⒓页せ蛘卟樵淖柿希嗨频拇砦缶痛蟠蠹跎倭恕?br> 又是一堂作文课。
今天,一向和蔼可亲的陈老师,忽然一把拉着陈俊同学拖出门外。我们都吓得大气也不敢喘一口。哪知陈老师关上门,转过身来笑眯眯地说:“同学们,大家不要紧张,现在我要考考大家的眼力。你们熟悉陈俊吗?”“熟悉!”同学们异口同声地回答。陈老师接着问大家:“你们说陈俊今天穿的是什么颜色、什么式样的衣服?脚上穿的是皮鞋,布鞋,还是跑鞋?”这一问,大家都怔住了,谁也不吭声。过了一会儿,陈老师叫陈俊走进教室,我们这才打量起来: 他上身穿一件天蓝色拉链衫。下着海蓝色的裤子,脚穿一双解放球鞋。陈老师笑着对我们说:“这就叫仔细观察。”接着又讲了几个仔细观察的小故事,然后布置我们去观察校园的花园。这次我们看得更仔细了。对花辅的每种花草,从它们的颜色到形状,生活习性及生活规律,都进行深入的观察,有的还翻查有关参考书。这次作文,大家都写得较好。通过这件事,我们懂得:要仔细观察,才能写出好作文。
陈老师就是这样指导我们学习和作文的。你说,我们有这样一位优秀的语文教师,能不感到高兴吗?我们对写作怎么能不产生浓厚的兴趣呢? 老师点评
《我的语文老师》中,作者对两次作文课进行详细的描写,通过这两个典型事件,反映出了陈老师生动的教学风格,写作文象画画一样;我们写人,反映一个人的特征,应该巧妙的选择角度,作者就是从一个学生的角度,通过对陈老师在课堂上的动作,语言的描写,非常成功的塑造了一个教师的形象。小小音乐家
我的小伙伴——张梦瑶,有一双水灵灵的大眼睛,一口整齐、洁白的牙齿,可爱极 了。告诉你,她还是同学们公认的“小小音乐家”呢!
有一次,我跟赵梦雪去找张梦瑶玩,梦瑶正在练习拉二胡。她说:“你们来当小听 众,听我演奏二胡,行吗?”我们答应了,坐在沙发上,听着,看着。只见她左手拨弦,右手拉弓,脚不停地在地上打着拍子,显得那么投入,又那么富有感情。她说:“我在 艺术节比赛时,一定要夺到冠军。”张梦瑶拉了一遍又一遍,我们被深深地吸引住了。艺术节文艺汇演那天,我跑到后台,去给张梦瑶送冰淇淋。她说:“你吃吧,我没 有时间。”我只好自己吃。我边吃边对梦瑶说:“梦瑶,祝你成功!”她忙说:“谢 谢。”轮到梦瑶上场了,她走上舞台,向观众鞠了一个躬,然后,坐到椅子上,忘情地 演奏起一首曲子——《光明行》。她的演奏优美动听。观众们仔细地听着,我也入了迷,仿佛回到了抗战的岁月,跟着抗日军民浴血奋战。正当我沉浸在乐曲中时,一个高音 “i”,结束了整个曲子。顿时,台下响起了热烈的掌声,老师和同学都为她的出色演 奏表示祝贺。
几天之后,老师宣布,张梦瑶获得了艺术节器乐比赛第一名。听到这振奋人心的消 息,梦瑶激动得眼泪夺眶而出。她知道这是自己几年来坚持苦练的结果,多年的汗水没 有白流,终于为学校争了光。为此,她感到无比骄傲和自豪。啊,张梦瑶,我佩服你,你是我们的骄傲!
第五篇:天水市中考满分作文-爱护环境从我做起
爱护环境从我做起
讲究卫生是个人的美德,更是公共环境的需要。只有讲究卫生,才能有优美的环境,才能有健康的生活。讲究卫生是我们搞好学习成绩的出发点,也是我们健康成长的基础。
当我们从繁忙的学习或工作中抽身投入到大自然的怀抱,我们发现我们的大自然母亲已经变了模样——群山光秃秃的;水塘变成泥浆坑;小河捞不到鱼和虾……。让我们看得更大一些,更远一点吧!据科学家统计:中华民族的摇篮——黄河,近两千年来竟决口一千五百多次,改道二十六次,给两岸的人民带来深重的灾难。为什么会这样呢?伟大的长江就要变成第二条黄河了!现在南极上空的臭氧层已经裂开,这些都意味着什么?这意味着我们如果再不急时保护环境,珍惜我们的地球家园,美丽的地球家园连同人类自身将会一同消失掉!所以我要大声地呼吁:我们要保护环境!
保护环境和我们小学生的日常卫生有什么联系?我认为两件事联系十分密切:因为我们现在最大的活动范围就是校园!我们现在是在校的学生,也是未来社会的接班人!我们现在养成了讲究公共卫生的好习惯,长大以后也就会成为合理利用资源,保护环境的新一代接班人。
我们是小学生,我们每个人要从小养成爱护环境的好习惯,从日常生活当中一点一滴做起:不向窗外仍东西,不随地丢垃圾,搞好个人卫生,爱护集体卫生。严格遵守《小学生日常卫生行为规范》,把学校的每一个角落都打扫得干干净净,美化好学校的一草一木,让我们生活在既卫生又文明的校园里。
从小我们是爱清洁的学生,长大了我们就会成为爱护环境的公民,我们要让秃山变绿,让河水变清,鱼虾重新生活在干净的水塘中。那时,黄河长江一样清澈(chè)迷人……
我再一次呼吁:讲究卫生,保护环境,从美化校园做起!