如何写好英语作文-一

第一篇：如何写好英语作文-一

对于大多数同学来说，学习英语基本上是“考试驱动”的，所以对于作文，向来就不是很重视。原因很简单，从中学学习英语开始，作文虽然在考试中也占据一席之地，但是实际的重要程度和学生在作文考试中的区分度都不是很高。而且，国内的英语考试对学生写作的要求已经低到了令人发指的地步，比如四级考试仅仅要求考生写一篇非常简单的100个单词左右的文章。所以，很多同学从来就没有接触过真正的英文写作，在他们的心目中，英语写作就等于“背几个句型”并且进行生硬的套用。然而，当这些同学开始面对托福、雅思、GRE、GMAT、SAT之类的国外考试时，他们在写作能力上的巨大缺陷显现的淋漓尽致——文章结构松散，论证逻辑混乱，论据使用不合理，语言表达不准确等问题让他们的作文完全无法在考试中得到考官的认可。而绝大多数作文老师错误的教学思路和方法，让这些同学们在学习英语写作的道路上越走越偏。

实际上，当我们面对一个作文题目的时候，我们无非会思考两个问题：一是“写什么”，二是“怎么写”。显然，“写什么”应该是需要我们首先考虑的问题。比如，在托福考试的Independent Task和雅思考试的大作文中，题目通常会描述两件事情或者一件事情的两个方面，让考生进行比较或者选择，并阐述理由。而在GRE的ISSUE考试中，题目通常会要求考生对某一个问题发表看法。在考虑这样的题目时，我们应该明确我们的态度，并想出支持自己想法的理由，还的加上证明理由的例子。这里，“态度”、“理由”和“例子”就是要写的内容。态度通常是容易确定的。比如题目要求我们选择是喜欢在家吃饭还是在餐馆吃饭，我们可以立刻给出自己的选择。但是，“理由”和“例子”则是我们比较难以迅速想到的东西。

在这种情况下，很多同学愿意选择“读范文”的方式来帮助自己思考“理由”和“例子”。但是，这样势必会造成思维路线单一的问题，甚至有的同学还会被所谓的“范文”束缚，难以找到除了范文中所述理由和例子以外的东西。事实上，范文永远是不能解决我们“写什么”这个问题的，因为对于一个题目或者一个观点来说，我们可以选择的理由和例子是相当多的，不同的人会从不同的角度进行分析和阐述，并针对不同的理由给出大量的证据。因此，“讨论”是帮助大家扩展思维和找到理由和例子的有效途径。

这种积累理由和例子的方法我们在学习中文写作的过程中也是经常使用的。在小学或中学时，我们往往会成立若干个“学习小组”，然后大家一起讨论某一个问题应该如何解决，从哪些方面去思考，最后得到若干条写作的路径供小组成员选择。同样，我们在英文写作的学习中也可以使用类似的方法——找周围同样准备托福、雅思、GRE作文的同学成立作文小组，每个人都针对某个题目发表自己的看法，互相讨论，整理出若干理由和例子并选择使用。然而，相比之下，通过网络进行讨论则是更好的办法，因为它消除了场地、地域等限制，而且我们还可以在任何时间留下自己的思考的结果。

Langlib 的作文平台是包含有这种理由和论据讨论模块的。甚至，为了让大家能更好地参与讨论，Langlib 还针对每个题目提出了一些思考题让大家回答，以便于在进行理由和论据讨论的时候每个人都能够有话可说。对于A同学提出的理由和论据，其他同学可以表示赞同，也可以表示反对，并需要给出反对意见。这种讨论方式在国外的作文教学中已经非常流行，只不过Langlib 使用网络和SNS平台把它的功能实现的更强大，使用更方便而已。通过这样的讨论，在写作之前我们都可以拥有基本的写作思路，并能清晰地看到我们需要

„写什么”。至少，现在我们可以用中文写出文章了。至于“怎么写”的问题，我会在第二篇中进行阐述

第二篇：英语作文一

英语作文技巧一

一、好的英语作文的具体要求

1．要点全面、表达准确、语句连贯，符合交际要求。

2．能用书写体熟练清楚地书写，格式、连笔、词距、标点正确。

3．书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等无严重错误。

4．基本语法和常用句型无严重错误，意思表达清楚。

5．恰当使用复杂结构、新颖词汇和顺畅连接。

二、英语作文写作要领

1．第一步是仔细审题。重点注意内容要点，写作对象和交际目的。

2．要写草稿，实在没时间也要写一个提纲。

3．确定好时态。转述别人观点常用现在时。记叙经常发生的事用一般现在时，描写过去发生的事用过去时。

4．不出现中文，不用汉语拼音。不生造中国式的英语。要用你听过的话来说，用你读过的句子来写。

5．第一句很重要，不要轻易下笔。尾句部分容易出错，要留意。

6．为防止遗漏内容要点，可在原题上标出记号。

7．几个必要的连词一定要用，或顺接、或转折、或让步、或比较。

8．写记叙文，注意六个要素：who, where, when, why, how and the result.9．议论文，注意论点与论据一致。还要注意是让你写一方观点还是介绍对立的两种观点。

10．应用文主要是写信或通知，告知活动安排。一般按时间顺序写比较稳妥。

11．试卷注意部分给出的参考词汇应尽量用上，不要自作主张忽略不用。

12．词汇的闪光之处即不要重复你在本文中用过的和大家都可能用的。全是简单句得不了好分。要用新颖的词汇传达最通俗的信息。

13．采用多变的句式，如被动句式、定语从句，with加复合宾语以及倒装句等。

14．有时候阅读题中的句型可以稍加改造，抄来用在自己的作文中。

15．字数一般应稍多于试题的最低要求，但不宜过长，因为言多有失。

16．写完后要检查复核，重点看动词的使用。最好是写完作文后先查查别的题型，因为自己刚写完的东西马上检查常常看不出问题。

三、英语作文写作建议

1．经常写随笔，每日三五句。出点错误也没什么。

2．背诵小短文或漂亮句子，多多益善。

3．最好的练习材料就是近几年各地的高考试题。练习时，先看题，自己写，写完后看答案，根据答案，修正自己的作文。但注意不要过多修正，要保持自己作文的原貌，每次只改动3~4个地方即可。

4．初学写作多写记叙文。

5．抄写短文，会使自己摆脱中文式的英文，可练习抄写新概念第二册。

6．多听、多说、多读对写作的提高至关重要。

第一章文章开头句型

1、对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.例如

[1]When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that.......But I think/view a bit differently.当被问及····，大多数人认为|说·····但是我有点不这麽认为。

[2]When it comes to...., some people bielive that.......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both

arguements/statements , but(I tend to the profer/latter...)

当它涉及·····一些人相信·····其他人主张相反的观点。在这些观点里，有可能有一部分是真的，但是我倾向于前者或后者····

[3]Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that....They claim/ believe/argue that...But I wonder/doubt whether.....现在，大家普遍认为·····他们主张·····但是我怀疑····是否······

2、现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论.[1] Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of)...has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.最近，·····问题（现象）的逐渐严重已经引起广泛的关注。

[2]Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus.(has been brouth to public attention)

大意同上

[3]Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality...is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.通货膨胀/腐败/社会不平等·····是另外一个新的令人感到苦涩的我们不得不学会去面对的一个事实。

3、观点法----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.[1]Never history has the change of..been as evident as...Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of..benn more visible/popular than...[2]Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to

realize/accept/(be aware)that...现在，越来越多人开始认为（意识到）·····

[3]Now there is a growing awareness/recognation to the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of......大意同上

[4]Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......也许，是时侯对······观点拥有新的认识。

4、引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!

[1]“Knowledge is power.” such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.“知识就是力量”这句是培根的名言。这句名言已经被广泛的接受。

“Education is not complete with gradulation.” Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher.Now more and more people share his opnion.“教育不是完成于毕业”这句是美国一位著名的哲学家所说的。越来越多的人接受这句话。

[2]“.........” How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this.“······”我们经常听到这样的话。

In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this “......”.在我们的日常生活中，我们习惯于听到如此传统得解释“·······”。

[3]As the saying goes that“````````”

正如某句名言说的“······”

5、比较法------通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.[1]For years,...had been viewed as...But people are taking a fresh look now.With the growing..., people........[2]People used to think that...(In the past,....)But people now share this new.人们过去常常认为·····但是现在人们持这个观点。

6、故事法----先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.[1]Once in(a newspaper), I read of/learnt....The phenemenon of...has aroused public concern.这个现象激发人们的公共意识。

[2]I have a friend who...Should he....? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.如此进退两难的局面是我们日常生活中经常面对的。

[3]Once upon a time , there lived a man who...This story may be(unbelievable), but it still has a realistic significance now.很久以前，·······也许这个故事令人难以置信，但它仍有重大的现实意义

8、问题法-----先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.Should/What......? Options of...vary greatly , some..., others...But in my opinion ,.......第二章文章中间主体内容句型

原因结果分析

1、基本原因---分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.[1]Why...? For one thing..For another...为什么·····？第一·····第二·····

[2]The answer to this problem involes many factors.For one thing...For another......Still another...这个问题的答案涉及到许多因素。第一·····第二·····另外·······

[3]A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect..../both individual and social contribute to....许多因素，包括物质上的和精神上的·····个人原因都能导致·····

2、另一原因--------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!

[1]Another important factor is....[2]..is also responsible for the change/problem.[3]Certainly , the...is not the sole reason for.....当然，······不是·····的唯一因素

3、后果影响---------分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响.[1]It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....[2]In involves some serious consequence for........第三章文章结尾形式

1、结论性---------通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点.[1]From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that.....从以上所讨论的，我们确实可以得出·····的结论。

[2]In summary/In a word , it is more valuable.......2、后果性------揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.[1]We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of..., if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of.......我们必须提出一个紧急方案，因为当前的····现象，如果被允许进行，将理所当然的导致·····的重大代价花费

[2]Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that..will be put in danger.明显的，如果我们对这个问题视而不见，····将有更大的可能被置于危险之中。

3、号召性--------呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.[1]It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of......是我们促使将不好的趋势结束的时候。

[2]It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.有效的措施被用来改变这倾向是必须的。

4、建议性--------对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.[1]While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways.The most popular is....Another method is...Still another one is.....[2]Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.对这问题的察觉认识是面对这种情况的第一步。

5、方向性的结尾方式----其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.[1]Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be recognized in a wide way.make some sense：有意义，讲得通，有道理

[2]There is no quick method to the issue of.., but..might be helpful/benefical.[3]The great challenge today is......There is much difficulty , but........6、意义性的结尾方式--------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!

[1]Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort.It will not only benefit.....but also benefit.....[2] In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly..。

第三篇：英语作文一

Wealth and HappinessEverybody wants to get wealth.In today’s material world, making money or becoming wealthy symbolizes a person’s success and capability.Many people just make every effort, pay any price to attain greater wealth.With money, they can but nice, large apartments in nice neighborhood;with money, they can own stately luxury cars.Wealth seems with money, they can own stately luxury cars.Wealth seems to bring all happiness in life.In my opinion, people cannot do anything without money, but money is not everything.What money will bring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life.If you are kind enough to help others, especially the poor, money is a good thing to you.With it, you can do much more for the benefit of people and your country, and it will and to your own happiness.If you want money just for your own needs, you’ll never be satisfied or happy.In a word, you should have money spent for more people, only then can money be the source of your happiness.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Universities lower Admission Requirements for Celebrities? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1)近年来很多名牌大学都会降低标准招收名人学生，一些人强烈反对这样做

2)但也有不少人认为这很正常

3)你对此的看法是„„，为什么?

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一些人对于某种现象的看法，提纲第2点指出对该现象的另外一种看法，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近年来名牌大学降低标准招收名人学生这一现象;对比阐述关于该现象的两种不同的看法和各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种看法并说明理由。

【参考范文】

Should Universities lower Admission Requirements for Celebrities?

In recent years, many famous universities lower admission requirements for celebrities.More and more celebrities, especially sports stars, have been admitted to famous universities even without an entry examination.This phenomenon has become a subject of widespread controversy.Some people object strongly that universities lower admission requirements for celebrities.They hold that this admission pattern will damage the basic fairness rule of education.In addition, they say that if a person who has not enough academic ability is admitted to the university, it would be an insult on college education.However, still other people think it acceptable.They say that these celebrities deserve this privilege because they have proved their abilities in their field.Besides, in their opinions, these celebrities to some extent set a good model for other young people.Weighing these two arguments, I prefer the latter one.For one thing, these celebrities have sacrificed much learning time for their work, so they should be provided a better chance for learning.For another, if they accept advanced education, they could serve the society better.Therefore, I suggest that people should pay more attention to these celebrities’ efforts and contributions rather than the special treatment they enjoy.Wealth and Happiness

Everybody wants to get wealth.In today’s material world, making money or becoming wealthy symbolizes a person’s success and capability.Many people just make every effort, pay any price to attain greater wealth.With money, they can but nice, large apartments in nice neighborhood;with money, they can own stately luxury cars.Wealth seems with money, they can own stately luxury cars.Wealth seems to bring all happiness in life.In my opinion, people cannot do anything without money, but money is not everything.What money will bring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life.If you are kind enough to help others, especially the poor, money is a good thing to you.With it, you can do much more for the benefit of people and your country, and it will and to your own happiness.If you want money just for your own needs, you’ll never be satisfied or happy.In a word, you should have money spent for more people, only then can money be the source of your happiness.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Secondhand Goods.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1)目前购买二手货的人越来越多

2)分析产生这一现象的原因3)二手货交易可能带来的问题

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈该现象可能带来的问题，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前二手货的交易现状;说明二手货交易增加的原因;分析二手货交易可能带来的问题。

【参考范文】

Secondhand Goods

In recent years, second-hand transactions have become quite common.Nowadays there are more and more secondhand goods in the market, such as secondhand books, furniture, appliances, cars, and so on.Why do so many people like to buy secondhand goods?

The following reasons can account for this phenomenon.Above all, secondhand goods are cheaper than new ones.This enables those people who have poor financial abilities to buy the things they want.Moreover, secondhand goods transactions make it possible for people to make good use of the goods which may be useless in their hands.Besides, Internet provides a more convenient and quicker transaction platform for secondhand goods.However, there are also some problems in secondhand goods transactions.For one thing, the

quality of secondhand goods can not be promised and you can not enjoy the good after-sale service.For another, secondhand goods market lacks enough supervision and management, and there exist many dishonest business activities.In a word, I think secondhand goods transaction is a good trading way, but it needs further perfection of the rules.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a publishing house on food safety.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你的同学因食用从某超市买回的食品而食物中毒，后经治疗康复。请给报社写一封信，描述他(们)的中毒与脱险经过，呼吁社会各界重视食品安全。

【范文】

A Letter to a Publishing House on Food Safety

June 15th, 2006

Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for taking time to read this letter.As the problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays, I am obliged to write to you.Several days ago, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food.Because of having found a new style of tinned?ish in the food store, she was very glad.Several other roommates were invited to enjoy the “mouth?atering chicken”.Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends had stomachaches and vomited, their faces having become paler and paler.Due to

sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer.At that time, my mind went blank.I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital.The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem.I sincerely hope that the whole society could attach much importance to this issue.Thanks!

Yours,Julie

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter on the issue of employment for gradutes.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

1.就业的形势越来越严峻，东西部人才供需并不均衡。

2.你认为是否应在西部就业及其原因

【范文】

The Issue of Employment for Gradutes

As we all know, the situation of employment graduate is urgent nowadays.Employment

becomes a major social issue in our country.More and more people pay great attention to it.This issue result from two aspects.First many undergraduates are finding jobs.They hope to get a job with high salary and other pensions.So the government and the society face great pressure.More job opportunities are needed to create for them.On the other hand, there are many vacancies of jobs in the west.So there comes an imbalance between the supply and demand in the east and the west.Few people want to seek jobs in the west.They prefer to live in the major cities, such as Beijing , shanghai and other developped areas.To solve this issue, it is a better choice to encourage people to seek jobs in the west.This also help to develop local economy and offer a brandew chance for graduates.

第四篇：英语作文一

一、---the +中考试题】

2014年中考英语作文真题预测：网络游戏

题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。

提示词：give up concentrate on be(become)interested in

★ 范文

Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

第五篇：英语作文 一

英语作文 一

从2008年6月1日起，国家已禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What can we do for the environment”为题。写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

内容包括：

1.在购物时用布袋子代替塑料袋。

2.2尽可能使用二手课本。

3.离开教室应关灯。

4.最好走路或骑车上学。

5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等。

注意：

1.字数：80左右。开头和结尾已写好，不计入总数。

2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校，否则以零分处理。

4.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook

范文：

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I am Li Hua, It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.From now on, we should go to school by bike or on foot instead of in a car.We should plant more trees and flowers, so that the air will be fresher.We should prefer cloth bag to plastic bag to reduce white pollution.In order to save energy, we should take less lift and reuse water.We should use second-hand book, so we don’t need to cut down more trees.At last, please remember to turn off the light when you are leaving.If everyone takes action, our environment will be better and better, our world will be more beautiful.