初中英语毕业会考作文预测指导二

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突发事件问题（热点）

突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要

典型例句

1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数

One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.2.It“s our duty to do sth

It”s our duty to help them.3.As„.as possible

We shoud help them as much as possible.4.here be„..Here are lots of things we can do.5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.6.make +sb+ 形容词

It makes many people homeless.7.too „..to

They are too young to look after themselves

例文

1、汶川大地震

（黑龙江鸡西）A.5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。

要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右；词汇参考：地震earthquake悲痛sorrow受到感动be deeply moved安慰comfort重建rebuild自愿做某事volunteer to do sth

参考范文：

On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan.Many people lost their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.I’m deeply moved by these people.SoI’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪灾

去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？

As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival.Everything was covered with heavy snow.It made the buses, trains and planes stop.Millions of people couldn"t go home.Many people suffered trouble.There was no food, water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow.As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.3.甲型HINI流感

从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。

要点：

一．询问

1.他的健康状况；

2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；

3.他们是否还上学。

二．建议

1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；

2.勤洗手；讲卫生

3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜；

4.多吃水果蔬菜。

Dear Mike,From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result.I’m so worried about you.Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?

To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people.Wash your hands more often to keep them clean;Open the window to have more fresh air in the room;And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be.Do be at ease!Take care and you’ll be OK.Yours truly,Li Hua4、(四川南充）“5.12”汶川大地震后，某校将开展“人人为灾区孩子献爱心”的主题班会活动，现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：

1.许多孩子地震后不能上学2.。没有足够的学习用品和衣物3.每个孩子都应该有上学的权利

4.我们应该作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他们，比如„„5.希望他们能尽快重返校园„„.注意：1.可根据要点，适当发挥，（参考词汇：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can）

2.词数：70词左右

参考作文：

Dear students，After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school.Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed.They can just live in the open air.They don’t have enough school things or clothes.As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble.As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can.We can raise some money and things for them.And we can also write to them to encourage them.I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.Students’ Union

第二篇：初中英语毕业会考作文预测指导三

初中英语毕业会考作文预测范文指导

（三）健康问题（热点）

健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。

典型例句

1.It is very important to keep healthy。

2.How can we keep healthy?

3.We can“t go to sleep too late.We can”t get up too late。

4.We should eat the food healthily。

5.We should do more exercise。

6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。

7.I didn“t feel like eating anything。

8.I decided to see the doctor。

9.In the doctor”s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。

10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。

11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful。

12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。

13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。

例文

1、根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考答案：

All of us want to be healthy.First，we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。

保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的结论9

(你的看法?)

1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯

(你的看法?)

How to stay our health /fit?

范文1: Dear boys and grils :

I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool studentfirst you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Nextkeep yourself happy.As

people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank youbye!范文2:Dear boys and girls:

I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit?Today many teenagers are unhealthybecause they do less exercise eat more junk foodisn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fitwe must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用）

有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer范文：

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat.But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

第三篇：初中英语作文指导

初中英语作文指导

解题步骤：

一、仔细审题

1、确定文章主题与题材。

2、确定文章基本时态及行文时应包括的要点。

二、提纲

1、把文章要求要点列出来。

2、确定句式、短语（主要为动词短语）及想要使用的连词。

3、在列短语与连词的同时，要构思好文章的整体框架。

三、精心行文

认真仔细地串起提纲，将材料里的相关内容描述出来。在完成文章的过程中应遵循以下原则：

（1）要点齐全原则（详细看作文评分标准）

（2）一句一意原则（对于普通班的同学）

没把握的情况下，尽量用短句子，尤其是要注意一个句子只能表达一个意思，千万不要希望用一个句子来表达出几个意思。

（3）避生就熟原则

就是在行文的过程中，尽量用熟悉的单词，若给出的提示词实在是不会用，就不要乱用，用其它方法表达，但切忌避而不谈。

四、仔细检查

1、细读文章（检查文章的句子结构）。

2、注重文章表达的准确性（语言的准确性很重要）。

一般来说，文章成文以后就不要做太大的改动，以保持卷面整洁，但还是需要在语言上做一些必要的小改动，这个时候重点是查：

（1）人称的搭配

（2）谓语部分是否完整、正确： l 动词的时态和语态。l 形容词前面是否有be 动词的不同形式与之一块构成谓语。l be后面是否用v的原型的错误结构。

（3）名词的单复数形式

（4）语句是否通顺

3、整篇文章的结构和流畅性；主要是看句与句之间的衔接 ,段落内容的组织是否有条理等 l,文章前后的照应。

五、作文评分标准

近年中考作文批改时的给分思路是：内容分6分：6→5→4 内容进行采点给分；语言的准确性占5分；整篇文章的结构和流畅性，4分。

内容语言表达

一档(13~15分)包含了所有的要点,能围绕内容适当发挥（有创意）,内容具体、丰富。运用了较丰富的词汇和正确的语言结构，句子通顺，上下文意思连贯，表达清楚，没有或基本上没有(不超过1~2处)语言错误。

二档(10~12分)包含了所有的要点，并能有所发挥，但内容欠丰富。语言结构和所运用的词汇能基本上达到提示的要点求，句子较通顺，意思表达较清楚，有少量(3~4处)语言错误。三档(7~9分)漏掉其中一个要点，只是简单地说明要点，内容不够丰富、具体，词数较少(约50~55个)。句子所表达的意思较简单，不大通顺，上下文意思不够连贯，有一定量(5~7处)的语言错误。

四档(4~6分)漏掉两个以上的要点，明显偏离内容要点，内容过少（约40个词以下）。语言不规范，句子无条理，上下文意思不够连贯，语言错误较多（10处以上）。

五档(0~3分)未能完成所规定的任务，所写内容与要点要求几乎无关，内容杂乱，不知所云。用词不准确，语句不通顺，语言结构很不规范，错误过多，几乎难以看懂。

六、写作常用连词、句型归纳

1.First, second, third…the last.2.and , then , after that , later ,3.though , even though , even if , no matter how ,but,4.because , so , thanks to

5.most importantly , in a word

6.for example, such as , …and so on

7.neither…nor… , not only…but also… , either…or…, both…and… , so that, so … that…,such…that…, too…to…, …enough to… , instead of , except, except for , besides

写作前问自己四个问题：这篇文章的体裁格式是怎样的？主体时态用什么时态？人称用第几人称？可以分几段，之间用什么过渡词、连接词？带着这四个问题去审题，搞清楚文章的主要内容，然后列出提纲，最后丰富自己的提纲就可以了。

第四篇：考前初中英语作文指导

关于中国梦我的梦初中英语作文：我的梦

My Dream

Yesterday, we had a discussion.the topic is.What is my dream? Every one has his dream.Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists.My dream is to become a doctor.My friends asked me why.I told them my story.When I was a small boy I was very weak.Once I was terribly iii.I had a high fever.My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me.then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town.they took me there.I was saved.A good doctor can save people＇ s lives.From then on I decided to become a doctor.I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard.I am sure my dream will come true.今年一月份，我国政府号召全民“拒绝浪费，文明用餐”，加入“光盘行动”。请根据下面提示，联系实际，适当发挥，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Save Food And Eat Healthily Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life.We middle school students should do something for it.To save food, we 【参考范文】

Save Food And Eat Healthily Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life.We middle school students should do something for it.To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food.We should eat up all the food.We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat.To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food.It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet.We’d better not eat in small restaurants.The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough.We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.With the development of china,the behaviors of wasting can be seen here and there.In our school,for example,there is always rice,chaken,and other food Ieft after finishing eating.Paper has been dropped have and ther.Water is still running and the light is on after we ues it.so what should we do to stop this?

first,we aer supposd to finish the food we order.and when we leave.the room,we should first turn off the lights or taps.The mostim portent is that we chrish the thing we have and say good bey to wating.I behave that as long as all of us take actiom to save things our school hall lecome moreandmore beautiful.We should save food.Food is important for people.Although we have enough food now,many people are still hungry.They don't have enough food to eat.We wast stop wasting food.In some countries if you eat all of the food in you plate,you will pay extra.So whenwe go out for super,we shouldtry our to save food.……

环境保护问题是中考(微博)热门话题，出现频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。、6月5日(June 5)是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重„„。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境？”专题演讲比赛，要求：(1)、举例说明环境存在的问题1-3方面；(2)、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1-3方面进行说明，字数80左右。

As we all know，the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse.In some places，we can't see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills.Some people even have no clean water to drink.So I think we must do something to protect the environment.But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike.we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping，and we can use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment，there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“There is only one earth”，I hope everyone will protect our environment well。

2、保护环境

(四川乐山)从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。内容包含：

(1)。在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋；(2)。尽可能地再利用使用过的课本；(3)。离开教室应关灯；(4)。最好走路或骑自行车上学；(5)。简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等。

参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保护protect 能源energy

污染pollution 课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

our environment is becoming worse and worse，what can we do for the environment?I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem。

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste。

In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in。

3.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢？请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词；1.save water，the source of life，protect drinking water，stop polluting，make full use of it;2.save electricity，crucial，turn off，other electric machines;3.save forests，useful，stop cutting down;4.recycle useful rubbish，save resources

参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better，the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them，something must be done。

Save water.Water is the source of life.No water，no life.So it's very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it，but also make full use of it。中华考试网(www.xiexiebang.com)

Save electricity.It is crucial.We can't imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don't forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working。

Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in。

Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans，paper，bottles，and so on。

We can save resources in this way.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in。

第五篇：初中英语作文指导之我见

初中英语写作指导之我见

大化县乙圩初中卢明胜

英语书面表达能力是体现英语应用能力的一个重要方面，它能够比较客观地反映学生英语综合素质和语言应用的能力。从单词拼写到语法结构，从遣词造句到谋篇布局，都能清楚地反映在一篇文章之中。英语写作能反映学生的英语水平，也能培养学生初步运用英语进行交际的能力。书面表达能力是基础知识与技能的综合体现，取决于学生平时的功夫和教师平时的培养。教师应抓好早期的基础知识、字、词、句、篇的教学，由简单的连词成句，连句成文，由仿写或改写到自己发挥等长期训练，指导学生将学过的语法知识用来检验句子的“准确性”；并能符合英美人士的语言表达习惯，使书面表达具有“合理性”；围绕中学生的校园日常活动、现实社会生活，注重书面表达的“应用性”。同时教师应加强对学生习作的批改和讲评，可针对不同水平的学生采取个别面评，自改或重写，公布范文，提高书面表达的有效性。经过十几年的实践，本人对学生英语写作的指导有以下几点体味：

一、灵活应用教材，注重写作的基本功训练

写作教学应以课文为中心，由易到难，由浅入深地逐一进行训练，训练可分为五个阶段。由“词汇积累”到“句式”的训练阶段从七年级开始就加强学生词汇方面的训练，让学生通过积累的方法增加词汇量。首先，在每个单元的对话和课文中都有很多单词、词组、习惯用语和句型等，老师应坚持每天听写学生，强化训练。对于课文中的重点句型，可以在课堂上帮助学生划分好句子成分，然后叫学生“读熟”。其次，让学生达到会用学过的单词、词组和句型造句。在课堂上，针对每节课所学的单词、词组及句型，老师带领学生操练。课后，老师应根据不同学生的特点，分层次的布置作业，帮助学生增强举一反三的能力。再次，要加强英汉互译练习。平时引导学生多做一些复述、表演、翻译等练习，让学生口头表述或书面整理，有助于启发学生的写作思路，培养和规范学生的英语表达能力。“由句式”到“段落”的训练阶段从七年级开始就对学生进行书写小段落的训练，做到口笔同步。随着教学的不断深入，写作内容也不断丰富，八年级就要注意段落中的时态差异、句型变化以及过渡句的使用等。到了九年级就要注意文章的体裁、格式、写作方法、复句的正确性以及中外文化的差异性。各种体裁文章的训练阶段在我们所学的课文中有记叙文、说明文和议论文，还有日记、通知、假条、书信、电子邮件等应用文。在实践教学中，根据教学进度及学生的接受程度在适当的时候介绍各种体裁文章的写作方法及各自的特点，这样可以避免写作练习的盲目性，做到有的放矢，有目标地训练。另外课文中还有大量的插图，可以利用图片让学生进行看图说话、写作。从一些常见的文体练起，由短到长，由浅入深，循序渐进。默写课文及优秀的作文范文提高学生的英语写作能力，以课文为中心进行训练尤为重要，因为课文能够体现各种英语语法及句法的特点，课文中的句子就是规范、地道的英语范文。因此，每学完一篇课文，都要求学生进行熟练地默写。这对夯实学生的基础写作能力有很大的帮助，会收到事半功倍的效果。教师还可以指导学生对作文进行自批和互批，将文中的主要错误批出并纠正，这样既可以锻炼学生的改错能力，又能增强学生修改文章的意识，同时还减轻了教师的负担。久而久之，学生形成了良好的写作习惯，写作能力将会大大提高。

二、注重阅读与写作的结合，提高学生的语言表达能力教师要及时对学生进行阅读技巧方面的指导学生在阅读过程中会遇到一些生词，教师应指导学生锻炼自己在阅读文章过程中的猜词能力，联系上下文语境理解文章主旨大意的能力，注意从阅读技巧方面指导学生，培养学生自行分析和解决问题的能力。帮助不同层次的学生进行阅读范围的指导根据不同学生的个体差异，教师可以帮助他们确定不同范围、不同标准和不同难易程度的文章，供他们去读。比如说，可以给阅读能力强的学生提供一些稍长、有哲理的趣味文章去阅读，给阅读能力稍弱一些的学生提供一些简单易懂的文章，增强他们的阅读兴趣，从而培养各层次学生的英语语言综合表达能力。教师及时与学生进行阅读文章方面的互动为了更好的强化各类学生的阅读效果，教师每周可以安排特定的时间检查学生的阅读效果，进行阅读文章的互动训练。通过口头练习和笔试相结合的方式检查各类学生阅读指定材料的能力。教师定期地组织学生开展话题讨论在平时的英语教学活动中，设置英语角。教师利用英语角组织学生分组进行讨论某一固定话题的主要情节、人物特征、中心思想，引导学生在英语交流与互动的宽松氛围中各抒己见，互相交流。这种做法可以促进学生积极思考，增强他们的阅读兴趣，加深对英语文章的理解，以增强他们的英语口语表达能力及书面表达能力。

三、注重课堂教学中写作技巧的传授，提高作文的档次仔细审题，明确要求每篇习作都有一定的要求，有些是通过文字给予说明的、有些是通过画面暗示出来的、还有些是要求用对话形式表达的，因此，教师在指导学生写作时应以精通审题技巧为重点，明确所写文章的体裁、中心内容、格式及采用的基本时态等。抓住重点，寻求思路首先拟定提纲。构思好文章的篇章结构安排，主旨大意的表达等，然后按时间、空间或逻辑顺序开头，再围绕中心内容周密选词、造句，做好句语句之间、段与段之间的过渡。拟好文章的结尾。语言规范，准确地道平时在指导学生作文时，要求学生尽量使用学过的、最熟悉的、也有把握的句型结构，重短轻长，就易避难，以写准确、通顺为最基本要求。在写作中尽量避免繁、难的句式，多

采用简单句来表达意思。但为了使文章可读性强，可以适当地使用复合句，复合句要注意连词的正确使用及从句时态的正确性。4过渡自然，通顺流畅写作时前后句、上下文要正确使用and，or，but，because，so，then，after等连词，使文章过渡自然。不重复使用可置换的词，但要注意前后的一致性。

5字迹美观，书写整洁工整的字迹会给人以良好的感受。写作时，如果时间允许，应先打草稿，修改过后再誊写清楚，这样可以提高作文的档次，给人以美的享受。

总之，初中英语写作教学要本着“以学生的发展为本”的新课程理念，力求多种多样的写作训练贯穿于英语教学的始终。教师在写作课上应树立以学生为主体的思想，精心设计写作教学课程，使学生拓展视野，增强自学能力，提高综合运用语言的能力。更为重要的是，学生在写作过程中的障碍各不相同，教师的教学策略也应有所不同，任何一种固定的教学策略都不是万能的，都需要教师在教学过程中对自己的教学方式进行调整，因此更多的问题还有待于我们共同去探索和研究。