2011年上海中考英语一模各区作文仿写[合集五篇]

第一篇：2011年上海中考英语一模各区作文仿写

(浦东)

Why do we come to school? Different people may have different answers.Some people say that they come to school to study just because they dream of a better job, a better future.But in my viewpoint, study brings me happiness.It is said that everyone who is interested in studying may find pleasure in reading.Exactly!Study can not only enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind, but bring me lots of fun as well.What's more, study always teaches me how to be honest, confident and knowledgeable.In a word, I like studying very much.（97）I'd like to say goodbye to what I used to be(虹口)

What did I use to be? I was not a clever boy and I never thought I should study hard.I hated school and disliked the teachers who were too strict with me.Maybe playing computer games and running after fashions were the only interesting things to me.But now I've changed a lot.Looking at the boys and girls who are studying hard all day, I feel lonely.Study hard, and try my best!

Chase my dream and never regret!This is who I am.Say goodbye to what I used to be!I feel good!

（98）

Changes the world expo has brought us(杨浦)

As we all know, the 2010 world expo was held in our city last year.It was a great success.Millions of visitors from home and abroad came to Shanghai to visit it.Changes have taken place after the great event.First, we can see “Haibao” here and there.The smiling mascot stands for the friendliness and confidence of people in Shanghai.Second, streets are wider and our

transportation is more convenient than before.There are flowers and trees on either side of the roads.Besides, more and more foreign companies are being built in Shanghai.Shanghai will be more prosperous in the future!“Better city, better life”.As a Shanghainese, I feel very proud.（115）

Li hua's visit to Julia's family(徐汇)

Li hua is in London on his study trip.Last Sunday he paid a visit to Julia's family.This was her first visit to a British family, so she arrived early in the morning.Julia welcomed her warmly.She introduced her parents to Li hua.Li hua gave them a traditional Chinese painting as a present.They liked it very much.Julia showed Li hua around her house.At noon, Jilia's mother cooked much western food.Li hua enjoyed it very much.What a good time Li hua had!(89)

I can learn about cooperation from our school activities(普陀)

All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.So our school always has various activities.They are good for our studies.Among them, I liked playing basketball best.I can learn about

cooperation from basketball.We know basketball needs team spirit, and a player on a basketball team should cooperate with the others.How will we live and work with others in the future? Maybe cooperation with others is the best choice.(74)

The best TV programme I've ever watched(青浦)

The best TV programme I've ever watched is《Tom and Jerry》《.Tom and Jerry》is a cartoon TV series and it is very famous in the world.The story is about a house cat(Tom)and a little cute

mouse(Jerry).Tom always chases Jerry and fights with him.But Tom hardly succeeds in catching Jerry mainly because of Jerry's cleverness, abilities, and luck.This cartoon TV series brings me a lot of fun.It also teaches me what friendship is.I love it very much.(90)

The best TV programme I've ever watched(青浦)

The best TV programme I've ever watched is《human and nature》.The programme is broadcasted on CCTV1 every week.It is about animals、plants and the relationship between human and nature.From this TV programme , I've got to know that nature is full of mysteries.I also realize that humans are responsible for the bad environment.If we don't care about nature, we will pay much more.The TV programme brings me much knowledge.I love it very much.(84)

Getting on well with friends(长宁)

Everyone needs friends.One can't imagine a life without friends.I always make friends with others, so I have many good friends.We share our joy as well as our sadness together.Of

course ,sometimes friends don't get on well.We may have problems.If so, we need to cool down.After all, trust and tolerance are the best ways to settle these problems.In a short time, we will make up and become friends again.(76)

The best way to make me happy(松江)

Sometimes things go wrong and I may feel rather upset/blue/depressed.When I'm not in a good mood, I like reading a funny story or playing games with my friends.But the best way to make me happy is to listen to music.For one thing, music can relax me and give me much pleasure.For another thing.Listening to English songs can improve my English skills.In one word, I feel happy while listening.(74)

How to use computers correctly(卢湾)

Dear friends,How time flies!I'm very glad here to tell you something about computers.Computers have both advantages and disadvantages.We can search the Internet for information, listen to music, chat with our friends, play computer games...But some students have problems.They spend too much time on the computers.This is not good for their eyes and does harm to their studies as well.Even worse, some students may watch bad web sites.So it is necessary for us to use computer correctly.Here is some advice: firstly, homework first and surf the Internet regularly.Secondly, don't give your personal information to a stranger.Thirdly, do things that are good to your studies.I wish you a colorful school life!(123)

Yours,Li Fei

New Year's Day 2011(黄浦)

My New Year's Day 2011 was a wonderful day.I had a three-day holiday.During the holiday, my grandma, who lives in the countryside ,came to see my family.She hasn't been in Shanghai for several years.So I showed her around Shanghai.We visited Nanjing walkway road, the Bund, the Jinmao Building ad so on.We also bought lots of things in shopping malls.Grandma felt surprised that Shanghai has changed a lot.She almost lost her way.We were both very tired, but we were very happy, too.(90)

Water shortage(宝山)

As we all know, water is very important in our life.We can't imagine life without water.But now, lots of rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Clean water is less and less.The problem of water shortage is becoming more and more serious.We should take some actions to solve this problem.First, government should make laws to

prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers or lakes.Second, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath.Finally, we shouldn't leave the tap running when we are brushing our teeth.If we don't save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(94)

I want to be an environment protector(金山)

Nowadays the problems of environment are becoming more and more serious.Factories pour dirty water(chemical waste)into rivers or lakes.Cars give off waste gas and the air is unhealthy for us to breathe.More and more trees are cut down.The earth is our only home and we have the duty to take care of it.So I want to be an environment protector.First, I will tell the people around me to protect environment.Second, I'd like to plant more trees with my friends.Finally, I will shop with a reusable bag instead of a plastic bag.I believe if every one of us do something to protect our environment, our world will be greener and more beautiful.(119)

Something I will never forget(崇明)

I will never forget the experience(I went through)when I was in Junior Two.It was an

English lesson.My English teacher, Mr.Wang, gave us a topic “Be confident in yourself”.We had only five minutes to prepare, and then someone would be asked to give a speech in front of the whole class.I was a shy boy/girl and I was not good at spoken English as well.But suddenly I found that Mr.Wang.was looking at me.His eyes seemed to tell me that I could be the first

volunteer.I was shocked but full of courage.Of course, I was the first to go onto the platform and gave my classmates a speech, not perfect but wonderful.Today I'm still thankful to Mr.Wang.This experience teaches me “Be confident in myself and nothing can beat me.”(137)

A thing happened in my class(奉贤）

Last Friday afternoon, our class held a special class meeting——Contest of singing English songs.We sang a lot of English songs , such as “Far away from home”, “big big world”, “my heart will go on”, “seasons in the sun” and so on.The whole class were excited and full of laughter.Through this activity, I began to love English songs.Also This contest is instructive and it makes me interested in learning English now.(78)

第二篇：2018上海各区中考一模作文

2018年一模作文汇总

宝山区

四、写作（60分）

27.题目：进步，就从这里开始

要求：（1）字数在600字左右，文体不限（诗歌除外）；（2）文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名等，请用A老师、B学校、C学生等字样代替；（3）不能抄用本试卷中的阅读材料；（4）请注意字迹端正，卷面整洁。

崇明县

四、作 文（60分）

27．题目：风景在路上

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章；（2）不得透露个人相关信息；（3）不得抄袭。

奉贤区

四、写作（60分）

27．题目：这不是一件小事

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章；（2）不得透露个人相关信息，不得抄袭。

虹口区

四、写作（60分）

27．题目：爱在我身边

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露个人相关信息。（3）不得抄袭。

黄浦区

四、写作（60分）

27.题目：我的动力之源

要求：⑴写一篇600字左右的文章。⑵不得透露个人相关信息。⑶不得抄袭。

嘉定区

四 写作（60分）

25.题目：我明白，这样做得对

要求：1.写一篇600字左右的文章。2.不得透露个人相关信息。3.不得抄袭。

金山区

四、写作（60分）

28．味觉，是人所具有的一种重要的感觉。很多生活感受，甚至生活经历，都会在味觉上留下记忆。请以《舌尖上的滋味》为题，写一篇不少于600字的文章。

要求：⑴不要透露个人相关信息。⑵不得抄袭。

静安区

四、写作（60分)

26.題目：打开另一扇门

要求：①这份试卷中出现过的素材请不要使用。②字数600字左右。③不要透露个人相关信息（如与本人有关的校名和姓名），若不可避免，用代号表示，如A中学、B老师，小C。④卷面整洁，字迹清楚。

闵行区

四、写作（60分）

27.题目： 成长路上，一直有阳光

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露个人相关信息。（3）不得抄袭。

浦东区

四、写作（60分）

27．题目：慢慢地，学会了欣赏

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露个人相关信息。（3）不得抄袭。

普陀区

四、写作（60分）27．题目：这才是值得珍爱的

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露个人相关信息。（3）不得抄袭。

青浦区

四、写作（60分）

27.题目：以自己的方式

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露个人相关信息。

松江区

四、写作（60分）

27．题目：这一次，我要大声喝彩

要求：写一篇不少于600字的文章，不得透露个人相关信息，不得抄袭。

徐汇区

四、写作（60分）

26．题目： 意外的收获

要求：（1）写一篇600字左右的文章。（2）不得透露个人相关信息。（3）不得抄袭。

杨浦区

四、写作（60分）

27．请以“陪伴”为题，写一篇作文。

要求：1.不少于600字。

2.作文中不得出现所在学校的名称和师生姓名。3.不得以本试卷中的阅读材料作为写作内容。

长宁区

四、写作（60分）

27．题目：我的世界还有你

要求：⑴写一篇记叙文，不少于600字；

⑵不要透露个人相关信息；

⑶不得抄袭。不得使用试卷中出现的材料。

第三篇：2014中考一模各区作文

24．每个人对快乐的理解都是不一样的，有人说考试得了高分很快乐，受到他人的赞赏很快乐，拥有自

己喜爱的玩具很快乐；也有人说一次探险的经历很快乐，一次战胜失败的过程很快乐；还有人说帮助他人很快乐，看到别人快乐很快乐„„房山一模

请以“也快乐”为题，写一篇文章。

要求：（1）在横线处填上适当的词语，构成你的作文题目，抄写在作文纸上。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600—l000之间。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

作文（共50分）昌平

23.根据情境，按要求写作（共10分）

母亲节就要到了，为了表达对母亲“教我做人”的感激之情，请你依据生活中的一个具体事例，写一段表示感谢的话。（要表明感谢的内容，表达感谢的心意，语言准确得体，不超过200字）

24.根据题目，按要求写作（共40分）

请你以“________是这样炼成的”为题目，写一篇文章。

要求：

（1）将题目补充完整后抄写在答题卡上。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600—800之间。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

一）根据情境，按要求写作。（10分）朝阳

24．新学期开始，朝阳中学举行了隆重的开学典礼。作为校报的通讯员，请你写一则消息，报道此次开学典礼的情况。（自拟标题，内容符合要求，语言通顺，不超过200字）

（二）根据题目，按要求写作。（50分）

25.请以“因为有你”为题，写一篇文章。

要求：（1）请将题目写在答题卡上。

（2）文体不限（诗歌除外）。

（3）不少于600字。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

（一）根据情境，按要求写作。（1）与（2）任选其一。（10分）大兴

（1）李畅要独自去市里参加特长考试。周六早上他匆忙出门，上了公交车，一摸口袋发现没带交通卡，再一摸钱包也落家了。于是忐忑不安地来到招呼他买票的售票员面前，支支吾吾说明了自己的情况。售票员看他这么着急，帮他妥善解决了问题，使他顺利赶到考场。

请你以李畅的名义给售票员写一段感谢的话。

要求：写明感谢的内容，表达感谢的心意，语言准确得体，不超过200字。

（2）赵一鸣酷爱读书。经过精心准备，代表学校参加了区少年宫组织的“走进经典，感悟成长”的演讲比赛，获得了全区第一名的好成绩。

请你以赵一鸣同班同学的身份对他说一段祝贺的话。

要求：写明祝贺的内容，表达祝贺的心意，语言准确得体，不超过200字

（二）根据题目，按要求写作。（40分）

“脚踏实地”，形容做事踏实认真，不虚浮。我国先贤荀子说：“不积跬步无以至千里，不积小流无以成江河。”西方哲人维特根斯坦说：“我贴在地面步行，不在云端跳舞。”这些话诗意形象，寓意深刻，能引发我们诸多想象或感悟。

请以“脚踏实地”为题目，写一篇文章。

要求：

（1）将题目抄写在答题卡上。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600-800之间。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。

东城

21．妞妞是个两岁的小姑娘，她最心爱的小白兔丢了，非常伤心。上初三的学生王红在家门口遇见了走失的小白兔，她把小白兔抱回家，抽出自己宝贵的时间，细心照顾，还在小区出口处写了一张告示，写明小白兔的特点和自己的联系方式。几天后，妞妞的妈妈从王红的手中接过完好无损的小白兔。请你以妞妞妈妈的名义给王红写一段表示感谢的话。（要写明感谢的内容，表达感谢的心意，语言准确得体，不超过200字）

（二）根据题目，按要求写作。（40分）

22．爱是一种美好的情感，看不见，摸不着，但是它总是出现在你最需要的时候。有了爱，生活变得无限美好。爱的甜美，让你体验了爱，懂得了爱，学会了爱。请以“爱”为题目，写一篇文章。要求：

（1）将题目抄写在答题卡上。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600-800之间。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

(一)根据情境，按要求写作。（10分）

24．育人中学学生李明做完值日最后一个回家，到车棚发现自行车爆胎了。正在李明不知所措的时候，居委会的一位叔叔发现了李明的情况，找来工具，帮他修好了车胎。请你以李明的名义给居委会的叔叔写一段表示感谢的话。(要写明感谢的内容，表达感谢的心意，语言准确得体，不超过200字)

(二)根据题目，按要求写作。（40分）

25．改变，指的是事物发生了显著的变化。个人因改变而美好，集体因改变而和谐，生活因改变而精彩„„请以“改变”为题目，写一篇文章。

要求：

（1）将题目抄写在答题卡上。丰台一模

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600-800之间。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名

（一）根据情境，按要求写作。（10分）海淀一模

24．任选一个活动，自拟标题，写一则消息，报道此次活动的情况。以“厚德中学”代替学校的名称，不超过200字。

（1）学校初三体育模拟测试活动。

（2）学校近期举办的某项大型活动（运动会除外）。

（二）根据题目，按要求写作。（40分）

25．请在“感谢您，我的手”中的横线上填写词语“牵着”或“放开”，构成你的作文题目，写一篇字数600—800字的文章。不限文体（诗歌除外），作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

19．依据情境，按要求写作。（10分）门头沟一模

李大爷今年81岁，是一位孤寡老人。心脏不好，老伴儿去世的早，膝下一子，也因疾病早亡。因此，李大爷没有人照顾。至今，住进养老院中已经11年了。重阳节就要到来，届时养老院准备为

院内的孤寡老人们举办庆祝活动。活动中将有快板、歌舞、诗歌朗诵等文艺演出。请你写一封慰问信，提前祝愿李大爷身体健康，节日快乐。

（要写明慰问的内容，表达慰问的心意，语言准确得体，不超过200字）

20．（40分）

“百尺竿头，更进一步”常用来比喻学问、成绩等达到了很高的程度以后仍继续努力。请你以此俗语为题，写一篇作文。

题目：百尺竿头，更进一步

20.小作文（10分）密云一模

很快你就初中毕业了，三年来，你的妈妈和爸爸为你学习与成长付出了很多很多，请你给妈妈（或爸爸）写一段感谢的话。

要求：要写明感谢的内容，表达感谢的心意，语言准确得体，不出现真实姓名，不超过200字。

21.大作文（40分）

在人生的旅途中，我们总在不断地出发，伴我们的，有亲情、友情、理想、知识、叮嘱……而这一切激励鞭策着我们勇往前行。

请以“带着出发”为题，写一篇文章。

要求：

（1）在横线处填上合适的词语，将题目填充完整。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600—800之间。

（一）根据情境，按要求写作。（10分）

22.幸福社区开展“保护生态环境、争做文明使者”公益活动，初三一班的全体同学积极响应社区的号召，利用周末时间到小区挨家挨户回收废电池，然后交由居委会统一处理，解决了人们无处存放废电池苦恼，得到居民们的好评。请你以社区居委会主任的名义给初三一班的同学们写一段感谢的话。（要写明感谢的内容，表达感谢的心意，语言准确，不超过200字）

（二）根据题目，按要求写作。（40分）顺义

23．在每一个成长的日子里，不可能总是充满着灿烂的阳光与和煦的微风，可以说当代社会，压力无处不在。压力面前你可能有过气喘吁吁，也可能有过痛苦不堪。然而，也正是压力，能激发出或许连我们自己都不清楚的内在潜质；是压力，让不懈奔跑的我们缩短了与目标的距离；是压力，让我们触摸到梦想实现的快乐与满足„„请以“面对压力”为题写一篇作文。

要求：

（1）将题目抄写在作文纸上。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600-800之间。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

作文一（10分）通州一模

学校的保洁员们，无论春夏秋冬，每天都一丝不苟地清扫校园，擦洗楼道，使我们能在清洁舒适的环境里学习成长。你很快就要初中毕业了，请你以“2014届毕业生”的名义给他们写封感谢信。不超过200字。

作文二（40分）

姿态，是容貌神态，姿态是风格气度，姿态是思维高度。好的姿态可以体现人的文明程度，好的姿态可以促进学业事业的成功。请以“最美的姿态”为题目，写一篇不少于600字的文章，除诗歌外，文体不限。注意不要透露个人和学校的真实信息。

（一）根据情境，按要求写作。（10分）西城

24．请从下列两个情境中任选一个，按要求写作。

（1）赵华要参加学校的辩论赛，王红作为陪练一直帮她收集材料，模拟演练。临近比赛，赵华嗓子沙哑了，王红帮她找药救急。最终，赵华顺利参赛，并获得了好成绩。请你以赵华的名义给王红写一段表示感谢的话。（要写明感谢的内容，表达感谢的心意，语言准确得体，不超过200字）

（2）4月14日（周一）下午，平安中学各班组织了以“校园安全”为主题的班会活动，作为初三（1）班的校报通讯员，请你给校报写一则消息，报道你们班此次班会活动的情况。（自拟标题，内容符合要求，语言通顺，不超200字）

（二）根据题目，按要求写作。（40分）

25．当你想解决生活、学习中的某个问题，了解某个自然现象、科学原理时，你就会开始探

索的历程，有过这个经历，无论结果如何，你的能力、认识都会得到提高，情感、经验

都会更加丰富。请以“在探索中成长”为题写一篇作文。

要求：

（1）将题目抄写在答题卡上。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数在600-800字之间。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

22.根据情境，按要求写作。（10分）燕山一模

临近中考，李萌同学的物理成绩总是不理想，每次月考都因物理成绩拉总成绩的后腿。他很苦恼。班长张洋看到这种情况，主动帮助李萌同学补习物理。有时周日张洋还约李萌到自己家里给李萌辅导。在班长张洋的帮助下，李萌成绩有了明显提升。

请你以李萌家长的名义给张洋同学写一段表示感谢的话。

（要写明感谢的内容，表达感谢的话，语言准确得体，不超过200字）

答：

23.根据题目，按要求写作。（40分）

歌手齐秦曾唱过一首歌《给我一个空间》，“给我一个空间，没有人走过……”是啊，生活需要空间，心灵需要空间，成长需要空间，就是植物的生长也是如此……留一点空间，给自己、给他人、或给它们，以此让生命活得惬意，活出精彩。

请以“空间”为题，自选角度，写一篇作文。

要求：（1）将题目抄写在答题卡上。

（2）不限文体（诗歌除外）。

（3）字数不少于600字。

（4）作文中不要出现所在学校的校名或师生姓名。

第四篇：上海中考各区模考英语作文题汇总

附：作文评分标准

作文满分18分,其中总体结构分为3分, 内容7分和语言8分。(1)内容：7分内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。

5－6分内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚，但不够完整。3－4分内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚，离题目要求较远。

0－2分文不对题，表达不清。

(2)语言：（本项扣分总和不得超过8分。）

词数：每少5个词扣0.5分, 依此类推。只写出个别单词、不成句子者不给分。拼写：每错扣0.5分, 同一错误不重复扣分。语法扣分标准同拼写。

标点符号、大小写错误每2处扣0.5分，但整卷此项错误扣分总和不得超过1分。

(3)组织结构：凡内容充实，不写废话，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇、句型和句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给足3分。（本项分四档给分： 3，2，1，0）注意：

1词数不足30个者，给分以6分为限； 词数:○2词数不足40个者，给分以9分为限； ○3词数不足50个者，给分以12分为限；

(以上3点应结合其余三项综合考虑。)○4词数在50－59个之间者，每少5个扣0.5分;○5只写出个别单词、词不成句者，则给0分。○组织结构3分参考标准：

一）内容和语言两项总分达15分及以上者方可得2－3分；

二）内容和语言两项总分在13－14分者，如文中确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1－2分； 三）通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，亦不予给此档分。

各区模考作文题

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “What Can I Do for the World Expo?”.(以“我能为世博会做什么？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型仅供参考）

 As the World Expo will be held…  As a Shanghainese, I…

 To do a bit of my share for the Expo, I…

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ Things I want to do during this summer holiday ”.(以“今年暑假我想做的事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示仅供参考) What are the things you want to do during this summer holiday?  What do you like to do most? Why?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic“Homework in our study”.(以“我们学习中的家庭作业”为题写一篇至少60字的短文，标点符号不占格)。

Use the following points as a guide（短文须包含下列要点） What do you think of homework in your study?

 Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons) Is there too much homework in your daily life?

 What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?

106．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Dream Life of Senior High School”.（以“我向往的高中生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。首句已给，不记入60个词。）Use the following questions as a guide.（下列问题供参考）

 What senior high school life do you like?  What do you hope to do in the senior high school?  What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have? You may begin your passage with: My dream seniorhigh school life is …

106.Write at least 60 words on the topic “My Secrets of Happiness”.(以“我的快乐秘诀”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness, so do I.… Outline for reference（以下内容仅供参考）．．．．．．．．1.Tell your secrets of happiness.2.Give the supporting details.106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My Summer Holiday Plan”.(以“我的暑假计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下内容仅供参考)．．．．．．．． Describe one thing you plan to do during the coming summer holiday. Tell when, where and how you plan to do it. List at least two reasons for your decision.106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “Traffic in our city”.（以“我们城市的交通”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） What do you think of the traffic in our city?  Why do you think so?(Give at least two reasons) What is /are your suggestion(s)to improve the traffic in the city?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “The Ways to Improve My English”.（以“提高英语学习的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

The following points are for your reference:

1.What do you do with your English study every day?

2.What are the most effective(有效的)ways for you to improve your English?

3.What progress have you made in your English study?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ To be a student with good manners”.(以“做一个有礼貌的学生”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

短文需包含下列要点：

1.Are you a student with good manners or bad manners?

2.Why do you think so?

3.To be a student with good manners, what should/shouldn’t you do in public?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'The most shocking news to me'.(以“最令我震惊的新闻”为题写一篇不少于60个词的作文，标点符号不占格。)Suggested questions：

What's the most shocking news to you?

Why do you think it's the most shocking news? •

What's your opinion about the news?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to find happiness ”.(以“How to find happiness”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a guide.(短文必须包含以下要点) What’s your view on happiness ?  Do you agree with the saying, “ Money is happiness.” ?(give two reasons)How do our students find happiness in our study and life？

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something I Will Never Forget”.(以“令我难忘的一件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示仅供参考) What was the experience that you will never forget?  Where and when did it take place?(Describe the experience)What effect does this experience have on you still?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to say ‘Goodbye’ to _______”“我想对_______ 说再见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型仅供参考）1.Who or what would you like to say ‘Goodbye’ to? 2.Why would you like to do so? 3.How do you feel when you do this?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ I want to be an environment protector” Use the following points as a guide: What are the problems of our environment? Why do you want to be an environment protector? What will you do to protect the environment?

106.Write a passage of 60-80 words on the topic “I can learn about ______ from our school activities”.（以“学校集体活动让我懂得了。。”为题写一篇60-80词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Suggested questions”

 What school activity(ies)do you like best?  What can you learn from it/them?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Changes the World Expo Has Brought Us”.(以“世博会给我们带来的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型仅供参考）．．．．．．．． Has the World Expo brought us any changes?  What are the changes that took place around you?Name at least two changes. What should we do after the World Expo?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'I like reading___________(comic strips/detective stories)better'.(以我更喜欢阅读_____________(连环画/侦探小说）为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，阐述你对连环画和侦探小说故事的看法。写作前先完成标题，标点符号不占格）Suggested questions(以下问题仅供参考)Which do you prefer to read, comic strips or detective stories? Why do you like to read them better?(Give at least two reasons.)What do you think of the other kind?(Give at least one reason.)

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic ”Getting on well with friends".(以“与朋友出好关系”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)短文需包含下列要点： 1.Do you have good friends? 2.Do you sometimes have problems with them? 3.How do you deal with the problems?

第五篇：上海中考各区模考英语作文题汇总

附：作文评分标准

作文满分18分,其中总体结构分为3分, 内容7分和语言8分。

(1)内容：7分内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。

5－6分内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚，但不够完整。

3－4分内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚，离题目要求较远。

0－2分文不对题，表达不清。

(2)语言：（本项扣分总和不得超过8分。）

词数：每少5个词扣0.5分, 依此类推。只写出个别单词、不成句子者不给分。

拼写：每错扣0.5分, 同一错误不重复扣分。语法扣分标准同拼写。

标点符号、大小写错误每2处扣0.5分，但整卷此项错误扣分总和不得超过1分。

(3)组织结构：凡内容充实，不写废话，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇、句型和句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给足3分。

（本项分四档给分： 3，2，1，0）

注意：

1词数不足30个者，给分以6分为限； 词数:○

2词数不足40个者，给分以9分为限； ○

3词数不足50个者，给分以12分为限；(以上3点应结合其余三项综合考虑。)○

4词数在50－59个之间者，每少5个扣0.5分;○5只写出个别单词、词不成句者，则给0分。○

组织结构3分参考标准：

一）内容和语言两项总分达15分及以上者方可得2－3分；

二）内容和语言两项总分在13－14分者，如文中确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1－2分；

三）通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，亦不予给此档分。

各区模考作文题

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “What Can I Do for the World Expo?”.(以“我能为世博会做什么？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型仅供参考）

 As the World Expo will be held…

 As a Shanghainese, I…

 To do a bit of my share for the Expo, I…

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ Things I want to do during this summer holiday ”.(以“今年暑假我想做的事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示仅供参考)

 What are the things you want to do during this summer holiday?

 What do you like to do most? Why?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic“Homework in our study”.(以“我们学习中的家庭作业”为题写一篇至少60字的短文，标点符号不占格)。

Use the following points as a guide（短文须包含下列要点）

 What do you think of homework in your study?

 Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons)

 Is there too much homework in your daily life?

 What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?

106．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Dream Life of Senior High School”.（以“我向往的高中生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。首句已给，不记入60个词。）

Use the following questions as a guide.（下列问题供参考）

 What senior high school life do you like?

 What do you hope to do in the senior high school?

 What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have?

You may begin your passage with:

My dream seniorhigh school life is …

106.Write at least 60 words on the topic “My Secrets of Happiness”.(以“我的快乐秘诀”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Everyone has his or her own secrets of happiness, so do I.…

Outline for reference（以下内容仅供参考）．．．．．．．．

1.Tell your secrets of happiness.2.Give the supporting details.106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My Summer Holiday Plan”.(以“我的暑假计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Use the following points as a reference.(以下内容仅供参考)．．．．．．．．

 Describe one thing you plan to do during the coming summer holiday. Tell when, where and how you plan to do it. List at least two reasons for your decision.106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “Traffic in our city”.（以“我们城市的交通”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）

 What do you think of the traffic in our city?

 Why do you think so?(Give at least two reasons)

 What is /are your suggestion(s)to improve the traffic in the city?

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “The Ways to Improve My English”.（以“提高英语学习的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

The following points are for your reference:

1.What do you do with your English study every day?

2.What are the most effective(有效的)ways for you to improve your English?

3.What progress have you made in your English study?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ To be a student with good manners”.(以“做一个有礼貌的学生”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

短文需包含下列要点：

1.Are you a student with good manners or bad manners?

2.Why do you think so?

3.To be a student with good manners, what should/shouldn’t you do in public?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'The most shocking news to me'.(以“最令我震惊的新闻”为题写一篇不少于60个词的作文，标点符号不占格。)

Suggested questions：

•What's the most shocking news to you?

•Why do you think it's the most shocking news?

•What's your opinion about the news?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to find happiness ”.(以“How to find happiness”为题

写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Use the following points as a guide.(短文必须包含以下要点)

 What’s your view on happiness ?

 Do you agree with the saying, “ Money is happiness.” ?(give two reasons)

How do our students find happiness in our study and life？

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something I Will Never Forget”.(以“令我难忘的一件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Use the following points as a reference.(以下提示仅供参考)

 What was the experience that you will never forget?

 Where and when did it take place?(Describe the experience)

What effect does this experience have on you still?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to say ‘Goodbye’ to _______”“我想对_______ 说再见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型仅供参考）

1.Who or what would you like to say ‘Goodbye’ to?

2.Why would you like to do so?

3.How do you feel when you do this?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ I want to be an environment protector”

Use the following points as a guide:

What are the problems of our environment?

Why do you want to be an environment protector?

What will you do to protect the environment?

106.Write a passage of 60-80 words on the topic “I can learn about ______ from our school activities”.（以“学校集体活动让我懂得了。。”为题写一篇60-80词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

Suggested questions”

 What school activity(ies)do you like best?

 What can you learn from it/them?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Changes the World Expo Has Brought Us”.(以“世博会给我们带来的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Sentence patterns for reference（以下句型仅供参考）．．．．．．．．

 Has the World Expo brought us any changes?

 What are the changes that took place around you?Name at least two changes. What should we do after the World Expo?

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic 'I like reading___________(comic strips/detective stories)better'.(以我更喜欢阅读_____________(连环画/侦探小说）为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，阐述你对连环画和侦探小说故事的看法。写作前先完成标题，标点符号不占格）

Suggested questions(以下问题仅供参考)

Which do you prefer to read, comic strips or detective stories?

Why do you like to read them better?(Give at least two reasons.)

What do you think of the other kind?(Give at least one reason.)

106.Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic ”Getting on well with friends".(以“与朋友出好关系”为题写

一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)短文需包含下列要点：

1.Do you have good friends?

2.Do you sometimes have problems with them?

3.How do you deal with the problems?