2013高考英语二轮书面表达指导与训练(10)及参考--英语写作十字经

第一篇：2013高考英语二轮书面表达指导与训练(10)及参考--英语写作十字经

2013高考英语二轮书面表达指导与训练（10）及参考范文--英语写作十字经

英语的书面表达一直以来就是英语学习的瓶颈。在此，笔者向各位学习者提供突破英语写作的十字建议，即研习、背诵、默写、互译、模仿，概括出培养写作能力的五个方面，如能严格遵循，定能柳暗花明。

研习

“没有规矩，不成方圆。”对于一般英语学习者而言，写出优秀的文章有赖于后天习得，但并不意味着机械背诵、生吞活剥，或者照搬照抄、人云亦云。所谓研习，需要有独立思考和个人的判断，本着“他山之石，可以攻玉”的精神，汲取文章的精华部分加以研究。研习主要侧重两个方面，包括文章章法和语言表达。文章章法指文章的行文思路、布局谋篇、结构安排、逻辑顺序。许多学习者面对一个话题，可能存在两种不同的困惑，一是下笔千言，但离题万里；二是思绪万千，却无从落笔。导致两种困惑的根源皆在于欠缺思考问题、组织思路的恰当方式，以至于文章不得要领、章法紊乱。这就要求我们从全篇脉络角度多研习范文，之后领悟如何以演绎法行文、怎样用归纳法谋篇以及如何围绕特定话题拓展思路等等。此外，研习还要侧重于语言表达，包括遣词造句和句子、段落之间的各种衔接手段，以期在自己日后的写作中派上用场，因为英文写作皆通一理。只有善于借鉴，勤加研究，才会借他人的优势和长处，提高自己的写作水平。背 诵

背诵是提高写作的又一有效途径。要学好写作文，首先要处理好语言输入与输出之间的关系。前者是后者的前提条件。如果头脑空空如也，就根本谈不上写出像模像样的文章。只有读过大量东西，并且有意识地将其中精彩部分储存于记忆之中(commit the highlights to memory)，才能保证下笔流畅、文通字顺。因此，背诵对于写作极为重要。但背诵不是机械记忆，而是有选择性的背诵，是有意义的记忆。因为机械背诵的结果要么是记忆很快就荡然无存、了无痕迹，要么是无法活学活用、付诸实践。背诵包括五个方面：重点词汇、常 用套语、精彩句子、优秀段落、经典篇章。重点词汇

美妙的用词及搭配皆在此列，像fall victim(受害)，stand a fair chance(大有希望)这种地道的动宾搭配要勤加记忆。为了积累写作词汇，应将文中同属一个话题的用词汇总归纳，组成主题词族(topic family)。归类记忆可以使自己日后即写即用，得心应手。下文是一篇阐释爱心的优秀文章，多处用词精巧，现将文中关于爱心这一主题的词汇总结如下： 情感的力量 人类最高尚的情感 不计得失 爱心之灯

支援自然灾害受害者 倾囊相助 帮助有需要的同胞 随时准备伸出援手

常用套语

套语指流行的公式化语言，在写作中适当使用颇有必要。

当前流行应试写作模板，即套语的使用贯穿文章始终，为考生提供万能公式型的文章主架，每句表达皆由固定套语框定，考生只要背下套用句型、过渡词语，在考试中根据特定考题填充具体内容。这种应试策略使写出的文章矫揉造作，生硬刻板，虽可以让考生及格过关，但绝对得不到高分。套语的过多使用不妨可以比作大海中的救生圈，有了它，仅仅可以让不擅游泳者保全性命，却无法自在畅游，一展泳姿。一般而言，套语较为空洞，如使用过多，文章容易流于空泛，言之无物。写作宜虚实结合，形式与内容相统一。精彩句子

精彩句子指文章中句式优美、蕴含哲理的句子。精彩句子的背诵有助于写作时的引用和模仿。如在阅读美国前总统约翰？肯尼迪(John F.Kennedy)的就职演说(Inaugural Address)时，可以记住诸如“Ask not what your country can do for you，ask what you can do for your country.”(不要问国家能为你做什么，而要问你能为国家做什么。)这样的传世佳句，当你写关于爱国(patriotism)主题的作文时，则可以适时引用。现仍以上面谈“爱心”的文章为例，其中值得背诵的句子为数不少。摘录如下：

①Love is emotional strength，which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes。

爱心是情感的力量，不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗，爱心都能支撑我们。

②People all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can ― be it money or goods ― to help their needy fellow citizens。

全国人民毫不犹豫地倾囊相助——不管是钱还是物——帮助那些有需要的同胞。

③The best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are。

表达爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人。

④The darker the shadows of sorrow become，the more brightly the lamp of love shines。

悲伤的阴影越黑暗，爱心之灯的光芒就越闪亮。

【预测试题19】人生态度——【看图写话】【议论文】

请根据下面的图片，写一篇短文，内容包括：

的观点。

1、描述漫画内容；

2、说出其中的寓意：

3、发表你在我们的实际生活中，对同一事物持不同的态度就会采取不同的行动，用乐观的态度看待事物，我们就会积极主动地行动起来，最终就会得到满意的结果。用悲观的态度看待事物会得到相反的结果。

采用二段成文法。第一段对给出的图画做简要的描述；第二段阐明图画所反映的社会现实及哲理，并发表自己的看法。

As can be seen in the picture, two men are staring at a potted flower with different expressions on their faces.One man is thinking about the sad ending of the flower while the other is imagining the flower blooming.To the same thing, different people have different mews, leading to different results.One is happy while the other is sad.In our daily life, faced with the same situation, pessimistic people may feel helpless and complain about it all day long.Optimistic people, however, may look at it positively and take it as a chance to show his abilities and talents.When we are in trouble, we should keep the optimistic attitudes, take effective measures to solve the problems.1、经典句子

（1）One man is thinking about the sad ending of the flower while the other is imagining the flower blooming.（2）In our daily life, faced with the same situation, pessimistic people may feel helpless and complain about it all day long.（3）When we are in trouble, we should keep the optimistic attitudes, take effective measures to solve the problems.2、推荐素材

诚信话题——【提纲类】演讲稿

请以“诚实、诚信”为话题，写一篇英语短文。要求如下：

1、生活中确实存在不讲“诚信”的现象：

2、单一例说明（如：有毒奶粉、冒名顶替上大学、考试作弊等）；

3、讲究“诚信”的意义。

本文属于半开放写作，学生有较大的发挥空间。一般采用三段成文法：第一段概括性地引出话题；第二段举例说明不诚信的现象；第三段发表个人的观点，阐述诚信的意义。

As is known to us all, the story Here Comes the Wolf tells us that we must be honest.However, there're lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself.Take the case of fake milk powder for example.After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and anus were still thin, which badly affected their health.To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.Having the reputation of being honest and reliable wi11 make other people trust you, which wi11 provide you with many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get.Being honest, you wi11 find it easier to cooperate with others and people wi11 be friendly to you and support you.In a sense, if life is a long journey, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.

第二篇：湖北省高考英语二轮复习书面表达专题训练：完成句子+写作

完成句子+短文写作（57）

第一节：完成句子

1.With __________________(一切打包好了), the soldiers who withdrew from the front couldn’t wait to get home in no time.(pack)2.Only by shouting __________________(他才能)make himself heard by people on the other side of the river.(able)3.What he mentions is __________________(与„无关)what he is up to at the moment.(do)4.Although she was not the group leader, she insisted that __________________(自己来安排)the trip properly.(organize)5.It is the first time that I __________________(参观)the Summer Palace.(pay)6.It is not easy for a Chinese to __________________(像„一样流利地说英语)as a native speaker.(fluently)7.I am advised __________________(利用)my spare time to practise playing the guitar.(make)8.__________________(以„为基础)what happened to him many years ago, it reads like a real-life story.(base)9.__________________(因为)his carelessness that we are suffering a great loss.(because)10.I have been dreaming of climbing that mountain, __________________(山顶上耸立着)an old temple.(stand)

第 1页

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第二节：写作

假如你校要举办一次主题为“How to communicate with friends”的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：

1．尊重并信任朋友； 2．常与朋友聊天； 3．换位思考问题。注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．参考词汇：换位思考 put oneself in sb’s shoes

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第三篇：湖北省高考英语二轮复习书面表达专题训练：完成句子+写作

完成句子+短文写作（61）

10.So difficult I find it(解决这个问题)that I decided to ask my

teacher for advice.(work)

第二节：写作

90后出生的学生行为方式和价值观令人担忧。假如你是90后出生的学生，请根据下表中所提供的信息以”Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”为题写

一篇英语演讲稿，以消除人们的忧虑。

面临更多的升学和就业烦恼，所处环境竞争更

90后的境遇

加激烈。

1、注重自我，轻视合作，……

人们的忧虑

2、缺乏毅力，容易气馁，……

3、盲目追求，渴望成名，……

敢于挑战，……

我们的长处

（请考生联系自己拟定内容，再列举两至三点）

注意：

1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数在120左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the

90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.Thank you for your listening!

第一节：完成句子

1.Take part in

2.making/having made so foolish/stupid a mistake

3.we would have got lost

4.What people are concerned about

5.taken into consideration

6.that the war had ended

7.where I was brought up

8.will deal better with

9.did we express sympathy

10.to work out the problem

第二节： 写作（one possible version）Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern.They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.Besides, they consider us as lacking in determination, and this is what it takes to do any job well.Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty.They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly,which will in turn ruin our values and future.However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses.Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams.In addition, we are quick-minded and creative.We can do our work more efficiently.Yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced.Please do trust us!

Thank you for your listening!

第四篇：2013高考英语二轮书面表达(话题为主)训练(13)及参考

2013高考英语二轮书面表达（话题为主）训练（13）及参考范文

1.书面表达(满分25分)(注意：在试题卷上作答无效)

假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导 中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1．本人简介； 2．求助内容： 3．约定时间；

4．你的联系方式(Email：lihua@1236．com；Phone：12345678)。注意：1．词数100左右;2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3．结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam, Look forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua

2.第三节书面表达（满分30分）

【预测试题12】毕业感言——【提纲类】【演讲稿应用文】

假如你是高三学生李华，英语老师要求你在毕业典礼上做一个简短的演讲，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。

1、最难忘的一次经历；

2、所取得的优异成绩：

3、你对未来的展望。

（半）开放作文是一种传统的“书面表达”限制更少，留给考生自由发挥空间更多的书面表达题型。这样的考试模式注重突出语言的应用、突出在语境中对学生语言能力的考查。与传统的“书面表达”相比，这种“开放作文”对学生构思、表达、写作以及语句的组织应用能力有了更高的要求。它要求考生在写开放作文时，要注意审题，尽可能做到内容充实、逻辑清晰、表达得体、语言准确。这样的考试模式能让考生发挥出自己的特长，有利于高校选拔优秀学生。

对于（半）开放作文,同学们写作时要注意以下事项：

1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态；

2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应：

3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者意识；

4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑；

5、要有主次之分，详略得当：

6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑；

7、要做到思想健康，积极向上。主题演讲型

Ladies and gentleman, Today I will talk about.（演讲主题）.As you know, there are many advantages of（演讲主题）

First of all，.（分要点一）..（展开一句或两句）.Besides,.（分要点二）.,（展开一句或两句）.Last but not least,（分要点三）..（展开一句或两句）

In a word（In my opinion/Personally）,（重申主题/总结主题）.Hello, everyone!I'm glad to make a speech here.When I look back on the past three years, what

第五篇：2013高考英语二轮书面表达(图文为主)训练(10)及参考

2013高考英语二轮书面表达（图文为主）训练（10）及参考范文

假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。

注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。2．词数不少于60。

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.基本分析： 1.文体：周记。2.人称：I 3.时态：一般过去时

4.事件大意：我为爷爷奶奶准备出行＋我送行 5.图片要素：

图一：查询信息（train ticket, weather, hotel）

图二：买票（buy ticket）

图三：准备行装（package）

图四：送行（see-off）3.图片关联：

图一、二、三都是并列关系，主题是旅游前的准备阶段，三幅图没有轻重之分，所占篇幅比例相当。图四是最后的送别阶段，文章末尾要有点睛之笔，可以是送别感受，对爷爷奶奶的祝福，也可以是自己的成长和收获。

4.文章立意：今年的作文和90后的学生特点相联系，积极引导高中学生要培养独立性，增加实践能力，并要照顾体谅长辈。所以文章末尾的立意也可以往这方面考虑。5.参与范文（官方）：

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information.In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map.The next morning, I went to the station to see them off.Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.*********************************************************结束

预测三：

近年来，由食品卫生安全引发的问题在校园内外时有发生。你校上周就发生了一次食物中毒事件，两名学生在校外吃了一种油炸食品而引起胃痛。请你以李华的名义用英文给学校英语报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这一现象的看法。词数：100左右。内容必须包括：

Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Editor, I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua.Now many students have iPods and think it’s a fashion to use them.Using an iPod,we can listen to music,download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Some students,however,bring their iPods to classroom and listen to music with earphones,which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed.What’s worse,some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion,as a student,we should make good use of iPod to help achieve academic success.Classroom is a place for students to study,and therefore,the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPods in a proper way.Yours sincerely, Li Hua