第一篇:英语速效高分作文万能模块
高考英语作文万能句子
一、引出开头¬
1:It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …(就我所知…)¬
2:Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus.==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)¬
3:Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今,人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)¬
4:Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)¬
5:With the rapid development of science and technology,more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展,越来越多的人认为……)¬ 6:It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……)¬
7:A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……)¬ 8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)¬
二、表达不同观点¬
1:People's views on……vary from person to person.Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异,有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)¬
2:People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)¬
3:Attitudes towards(drugs)vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)(人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)
4:There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)¬
三、表示结尾¬
1:In short, it can be said that……(总之,他的意思是……)¬
2:From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……(从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论……)¬
3:Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑,我们自然可以得出结论……)¬
4:Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此,我们最好的出这样的结论……)¬
5:There is no doubt that(jo有优点也有缺点)¬
6:All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之,我们没有…无法生活,但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)
四、提出建议¬ 1:It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)¬
2:There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够重视)¬
3:Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然,如果我们想要做么事,很重要的是……)¬
4:Only in this way can we ……(只有这样,我们才能……)¬ 5:Spare no effort to + V(不遗余力的)¬
五、预示后果¬
1:Obviously,if we don't control the problem, the chances are that…will lead us in danger.(很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险)
2:No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,否则我们很可能会……)¬
3:It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation(很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展)¬
六、表示论证¬
1:From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.(在我看来,支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)¬
2:I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……(我无法完全同意这一观点)¬
3:As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……(就我来说……)¬ 4:I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced(that)子句.(我真诚地相信……)¬
5:Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……(最后,坦率地说,还有另外一个实际的原因……)¬
七、给出原因¬
1:The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)¬ 2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First,…….Second,…….Third,……。
这一现象存在有很多原因的,第一……第二……第三……¬
3:For one thing,…… For another thing,…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……¬
4:I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即……。其主要原因如下。¬
八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法¬
1:The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……¬
2:As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言,……¬ 3:It is obvious that……很显然……¬
4:It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……
可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……¬
5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that… …认为……是自然的,但我们不应忽视……¬
6:There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……¬
九、表示好处和坏处¬
1:It has the following advantages.它有如下优势¬ 2:It is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有益处¬
3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处¬
十、表示重要、方便、可能¬
1:It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do sth.对于某人做……是……
2:It plays an important role in our life.十一、采取措施¬
1:We should take some effective measures.我们应该采取有效措施¬ 2:We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难¬
3:We should do our utmost in doing sth.我们应该尽力去做……¬
4:We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我们应该解决我们面临的困难¬
十二、显示变化¬
1:Some changes have taken place in the past five years.过去五年发生了很多变化¬
2:Great changes will certainly be produced in the international communications.在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化
3:It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…¬ 4:The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%¬
十三、表明事实现状¬
1:We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实…… 2:No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实…… 3:This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.4:be closely related to ~~(与...息息相关)
十四、进行比较¬
1:Compared with A,B……与A比较,B……¬ 2;I prefer to read rather than watch TV.¬
十五、常用英语谚语¬
1:Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩¬
2:All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子¬ 3:All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马¬
4:A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半¬ 5:Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊¬ 6:A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘,差之千里¬ 7:Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母¬ 8:Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母¬ 9:It is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老¬ 10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量¬
11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事,只怕有心人
第二篇:万能英语作文(高分必备)
1议论文:Now we are entering a new era,full of opportunities and challenges.Along with the advance of the society,more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that----.When it comes to---, most people believe that----, But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that---.What is also worth noticing is that----。It's quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have different attitude towards it,just as the old saying goes“Every advangtage has its disadvantage.”In conclusion,although---has its negative effects,it can to a great extent bring us more advantages.现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是 当提到-----时,大多数人认为------,但是另一方面,也有一些人强烈坚持------。另外值得一提的是-----。当然,不同的人对此可能持不同的观点,就像古语说:每件有利的东西都有其不利的一面。总的说来,虽然_______ 有其负面的影响,在很大程度上,其也将给我们带来很多好处。After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the latter view that...经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即________________________。2说明文:Along with the advance of the society, more and more controversialissues have been brought to our attention, one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是___。(与上面议论文一样哟!)Why have there been so many……,maybe the reasons can be listed as follows1.To begin /start with2.furthermore/besides/in addition3.last but not least.为什么有这么多……,理由如下 1.…… 2.……3.……Obviously, it is high time that we took(注意:虚拟语气,用过去式)some measures to solve the problemFor one thingFor another很明显,我们现在必须采取一些措施一方面另一方面(也可以用1.To begin /start with等 之类。为避免重复,最好别用~)I think all the measures above can make present situation better.Let us all startto do so by ourselves.我认为上述措施能使现状变好。让我们都从自身做起!As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展,人们开始关注.....People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting 求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们带来了很多问题。.....plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“ ______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题,这是无可厚非的。不过,问题是:”我们该如何抉择?"Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer...rather than...
第三篇:高考英语作文高分
英语作文模板
第一类:观点对比
模板一:
The topic about … is becoming more and more popular in our school recently.There are two sides of opinion about it.Some students prefer to consider doing sth.(Some students say … is their favorite.)they think that…(理由一).What’s more,…(理由二)。Moreover,…(理由三)
However,others believe … is a better choice for three reasons.(然而,其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择,有三个方面的理由)to begin with,…(理由一)。Next。In addition,…
From my point of view,the former is surely a wise choice.The reason is that…(或者用:As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that…(依我来看,我坚决支持这种观点… that引导同位语从句)
模板二:
There is a widespread concern over the issue that(作文题目)。But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that 观点一。In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因一.Furthermore,in the second place,原因
二。So it goes without saying that 观点一。
People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that 观点二。In their point of view,on the one hand,原因一。On the other hand,原因二。Therefore,there is no doubt that 观点二。
As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that 观点一或二。It is not only because,but also because。The more,the more。
第二类:好处与坏处的对比
模板一:
In recent years,…… has been popular.There are many advantages in…… First,…… Second,…… Third,……
However,there’re some disadvantages.……(之一)。Besides,……(之二)。Also,……(之三)
In my opinion,it is true that advantages are more than disadvantages.(依我看,的确是好处多于坏处)I think…… One big advantage of … is that…。/ One obvious advantage of … is …。/ Finally,…
While it is true that … has many advantages,andit is also important to realize that…。(虽然某事确实有许多好处,但是意识到…也很重要。
第三类:问题与建议
(第一段 提出问题)In recent days,we have to face a problem that……近来,我们面临这样一个问题,就是(that同从)。
(第二段:解决办法:)With the help of modern technology,we now have many means to solve it.By doing ……,we can……What’s the most important is that……
(第三段:结论:)In a word,it is clear / obvious that…… Only when……can we ……。
第四类:要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法
模板:1.有一些人认为… 2.另一些人认为… 3.我的看法…
The topic of ①____________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②____________(支持A的理由一)What is more,③(理由二)。Moreover,④_____________(理由三)。
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_________(支持B的理由一)。Secondly(besides),⑥______________(理由二)。Thirdly(finally),⑦_____________(理由三)。
From my point of view,I think ⑧__________(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨__________(原因)。As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice。
第五类:给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①____________(观点一)。For example,they think ②___________(举例说明).And it will bring them ③_______________(为他们带来的好处)。
In my opinion,I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④__________(我不同意该看法的理由一)。For another thing,⑤____________(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said/In a word/In conclusion,I agree to the thought that ⑥__________(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).第六类:解决方法题型
模板:要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径:1。问题现状;2。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)。
In recent days,we have to face a problem A,which is becoming more and more serious.First,_________(说明A的现状).Second,___________(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,_____________(解决方法一)。For another thing ____________(解决方法二)。Finally,______________(解决方法三)。
Personally,I believe that ____________(我的解决方法)。Consequently,I‘m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________(带来的好处)明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1。说明事物现状;2。事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);3。你对现状(或前景)的看法。
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First _________(A的优点之一)。Besides ___________(A的优点之二)。
But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that _______________(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,_______________(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to _______________(我的看法).From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A,we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,(对前景的预测).)
第四篇:考研英语作文高分必备
考研英语作文高分必备
1. 开头超强公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that„ 2. 开头超强公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that „ 结尾超强公式
1. 结尾超强公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that„, Therefore, we can find that„ 2. 结尾超强公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recoMMend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作的“七项基本原则”
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友„可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away„
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!文章主体段落三大杀手锏
一、举实例
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型:
To take „ as an example, One example is„, Another example is„, for example
二、做比较
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
相似的比较:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with „, „
三、换言之
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
领航名师墨东博:考研英语作文模板--国有企业
As is vividly depicted in the picture , with a clear cracking sound , two bowls clashed into each other , in which the shinning one keeps its integrity , whereas the shabby one breaks into pieces.Just like being symbolically revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that the intact bowl, as a symbol of soly-invested companies , overwhelms the broken bowl representing the state-owned companies, with collision standing for fierce companies, profoundly indicates that it is time that our state-owned companies entailed reform especially after china’s entry into WTO when facing soly-invested companies abroad.To the popular mind , it is immediately assumed that when reform in state-owned companies is argued,it is car industry that is meant.To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon , several points should be figured out.For one thing, some of car industries once enjoyed the glorious past , They have ,however, gradually lost their market shares when soly ?invested companies were sweeping into domestic market.For another , in order to turn the corner ,the leaders of them should adopt the policy of reform such as acquisition, re-engineering and introduction of advanced technology and concepts of management.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below, No 1 Motor Vehicle Plant has witnessed from predicament to rejuvenation through none other than effective steps mentioned above.Therefore ,no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as reform in state-owned companies.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture.It is ,hence, necessary that efforts be made to follow the spirit of reform concerning state-owned companies.On one hand, the government should make law to perfect irrational rules and regulations being visible in reform process.On the other hand, the leaders of state-owned companies should enhance the awareness of reform.Only by undergoing these steps ,can our more state-owned companies become members of Top 500 in the world, which, indeed, has gone to the heart of maintaining good momentum of national economy growth.一、要求:考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。考生在答题卡2上作答。满分10分。
注意事项:
1)格式:称呼,结尾,署名
2)简明扼要,清楚明确。
3)遵照要求,内容齐全。
4)言语得体,真心诚意。
二、备忘录
备忘录是一种录以备忘的公文。在公文函件中,它的等级是比较低的,主要用来提醒、督促对方,或就某个问题提出自己的意见或看法。在业务上,它一般用来补充正式文件的不足。它的内容可以分为以下几项:
书端(Heading)
收文人的姓名、头衔、地址(Addressee's Name, Title, Address)
称呼(Salutation)
事因(Subject)
正文(Body)
结束语(Complimentary Close)
署名(Signature)
写作注意事项
1、书端部分包括发文机关的名称、地址、发文日期,有的还包括电报挂号、电传号、电话号码等。许多机关有自己特制的信笺,在写书端时,其格式和标点符号的使用与一般信件的相同。
2、称呼从左边顶格写起,对一般机关、团体的负责人一般用 Dear Sir,对政府官员可用Sir。
3、正文、结束语和署名等项与一般信件的格式相同。“事因”一项目前采用得较少。
范文
Directions: Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory.MEMO
August 16, 2005
To: The leader of student service department
From: Li Ming
Subject: Telephone
Dear Sir,I would like to remind you that we are in want of a telephone for each dormitory.As a university student, we need to cope with the daily increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the campus.We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us.Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of communication.I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as possible.Regards.Yours,Li Ming
三、摘要
文章摘要是对所写文章主要内容的精炼概括。美国人称摘要为“Abstract”,而英国人则喜欢称其为“Summary”。
通常国际刊物要求所要刊登的文章字数,包括摘要部分不超过1万字。而对文章摘要部分的字数要求则更少。因此写摘要时,应用最为简练的语言来表达论文之精华。论文摘要的重点应放在所研究的成果和结论上。
国际会议要求的论文摘要的字数不等,一般为200字-500字。而国际刊物要求所刊登的论文摘要的字数通常是100字-200字。摘要的位置一般放在一篇文章的最前面,内容上涵盖全文,并直接点明全旨。语言上要求尽量简炼。摘要通常多采用第三人称撰写。
科学书籍、论文和学术报告一般都附有内容摘要,这样可以节省读者的时间,使他们不必读完整个文章就能够了解它的主要内容。书籍摘要,一般放在封二或封三;论文和学术报告的摘要,一般放在正文前面。摘要应做到简明扼要,切题,能独立成文,使读者能准确地了解书籍的要义。写摘要时,最好用第三人称的完整的陈述句,文长一般不超过200个词。
英文摘要分类
摘要分陈述性的(Descriptive)和资料性的(Informational)两类。陈述性摘要只陈述书籍或文章的主题,不介绍内容。资料性的摘要除了介绍主题外,还应介绍文章的要点和各个要点的主要内容。它可以包括三个组成部分:
①点明主题,解析文章或书籍的目的或意图;
②介绍主要内容,使读者迅速了解文章或书籍的概貌;
③提出结论或建议,以供读者参考。
英文摘要常见句型
1)This paper deals with...2)This article focuses on the topics of(that, having, etc)...3)This eassy presents knowledge that...4)This thesis discusses...5)This thesis analyzes...6)This paper provides an overview of...7)This paper elaborates on...8)This article gives an overview of...9)This article compares...and summarizes key findings.10)This paper includes discussions concerning...11)This paper presents up to date information on...12)This article covers the role of chemicals in...13)This paper addresses important topics including...14)This paper touches upon...15)This paper strongly emphasizes...16)This eassy represents the preceedings of...17)This article not only describes...but also suggests...18)This paper considers...19)This paper provides a method of...20)This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze...摘要题型写作要点:
① 动笔之前,考生一定要认真仔细地阅读所给原文,弄懂原文大意,掌握原文要点。
② 摘要的长度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一,考试时应遵守规定的字数限制。
③ 在做摘要时考生切忌照搬原文。
④ 摘要应与原文的观点保持一致,并且仍按原文的逻辑顺序排列。
⑤ 重点反映主要观点,删除细节。
⑥ 简化从句,用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。
⑦ 检查与修改时,考生应重点检查是否遗漏了原文的要点或包含了细节。
摘要题型写作实例
① 试题题目
Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 words.We continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have come in understanding some of the profound aspects of biology.We have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it;it is an indelicacy, like talking in mixed company about venereal disease or abortion in the old days.Death on a grand scale does not bother us in the same special way: we can sit around a dinner table and discuss war, involving 60 billion volatilized human deaths, as though we were talking about bad weather;we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a tear.It is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying circles.At the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one’s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, unthinkable.We may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go away.We like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just become, next year, say, a bit smarter.② 原文要点:
1.continue to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors
2.avoid talking about death
③ 参考摘要:
People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the issue.They talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in war.When they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they become very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their doom.Therefore, they fear very much.However, they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)
开头与结尾用语
开头:Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear sir or Madam, Dear President, Dear Sales Manager, Dear Dean, Dear Professor, To whom it may concern, Dear Mr.Smith,结尾:Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours, Yours sincerely, Best regards, Best wishes, lovingly yours, sincerely yours,l 正文第一句
朋友:Hi!How are you?
Hello!I hope everything is fine.Hi!How is everything going?
如不认识:I was a guest at your hotel from June 25 to 28.I am a student at your college, enrolled in the computer course.致谢:Thank you for your invitation to the international medical conference on October 11.Thank you for your letter dated October 11.解释写信原因:I am writing to advise you for the loss of my credit card.I’d like to inquire about course details.I am writing to complain about/of the poor service at your restaurant.l 结尾段
发出请求:I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Please reply to us at your earliest convenience.表达歉意:once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies once again.提出投诉:I expect to hear from you very soon.Please give this matter your immediate attention.常用信件写作介绍
1. 投诉信
开头:自我介绍,交代投诉内容,表明本信的目的和要求
正文:说明情况,讲清利害,分析利弊。告诉对方你因此受到的伤害或不便,提出解决问题的建议,表明希望如何处理。
结尾:表达希望问题得到迅速恰当解决的强烈愿望。希望尽快得到满意的答复。
常用句型:
I am writing to you to complain about….I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at…
I beg to call your attention to the fact that…
I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred…, calling for some remedial action.I very much regret to have to inform you that…
I am totally/completely disappointed/upset to find…
I find it awful/quite distressing that…
My experience in…on…(date)shocked me.I can hardly put up with it.There are some problems with the … that I wish to bring to attention.For one thing, there is….For another, …..I can hardly stand/bear/tolerate/put up with it any more.To improve the situation/solve the above problem, it is advisable for you to take the following measures:…
I look forward to a day when we could really enjoy a more efficient service.I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would complain to the Consumer’s Association.I request you to be kind enough to solve the problem as soon as possible.应注意:
1)礼貌用词,不能过激。
2)提出希望/要求,句型要多样化。
3)反映问题集中,不要联想其他。
Ex.1
Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem.2. 咨询信、请求信、说明信
开头:简要告知身份,表明写信原因或请求
正文:详细阐明询问、请求的具体内容、希望获得的信息。说明信应写明原因、实情及希望对方做些什么。强调所需信息/帮助的重要性。(按要求)
结尾:表达谢意,希望得到对方回复、帮助或合作。
常用句型:
I would like to inquire about some information concerning/regarding….I am writing in the hope that you can…
I am writing because I would like to…
Needless to say, your approval of my request will be beneficial not only to myself but to the company.Could you tell me what I have to do to…
It is sincerely requested that you…
My first question is that …
Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.If additional information is required, please advise me at your early convenience.Should I send you copies of my qualification in advance?
I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Please render me some valuable advice which is conducive to my final decision.I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.应注意:
1)请求内容/信息一定要详尽,具体。
2)语气要客气,委婉。
3)语言直接,具体,简明。
Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to
1)describe the book you want to borrow,2)specify by when the book will be returned, and
3)express your gratitude.3. 道歉信。
开头:简单交代对何事进行道歉。
正文:解释事情发生的原因,消除误会或矛盾。
结尾:再次表示遗憾何歉意,表明愿意补救的愿望,提出建议或安排。
常用句型:
I must apologize to you for…
I am very sorry that..I regret to inform you that I will not be able to…
I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences to you.I sincerely hope you understand that I offended you quite unintentionally.I believe you can understand that I have not intended to hurt you.I owe you an apology.It is my fault.I am to blame for this unpleasant thing.Please pardon/excuse/forgive me.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.I will try my utmost not to make such a stupid mistake again.I trust the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.I hope you will kindly forgive my lapse of attention.I am so sorry to have put you to/into so much trouble.应注意:
1)事情原委要解释清楚。
2)说明情况与理由,实事求是,简明扼要。
3)态度诚恳。
4)用词委婉,语气温和,得体。
Ex.You have invited a friend over to have dinner with you one night, but just before the dinner you received an urgent phone call from your office and you had to leave immediately.Write a letter of apology to your friend.4. 感谢信
开头:表达谢意,提及受到的帮助。
正文:回忆该帮助,高度评价/赞扬对方,表达当时的心情感受。
结尾:再次表达谢意,提出回报希望。
常用句型:
I am grateful/thankful to you for…
I am much obliged to you for your help.I shall always appreciate the assistance you have given me.I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.It was most thoughtful and generous of you to send me such a beautiful and fancy gift.Thoughtful considerate considerable
It’s very kind of you to help us.I hope you can know how much I appreciate your hospitality and your many kindnesses to me.Hostility
But for your help, I would not..If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that..Thanks from the bottom of my heart for…
With thanks from every one of us and best wishes to you.Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.应注意:
1)开头要直截了当。
2)表明诚意,避免空洞。
3)态度热情
Ex.You got sick just a week before the final examinations and were sent to a hospital.One nurse treated you very well and you recovered soon.Write a letter of appreciation to the nurse(Miss Smith).Dear Miss Smith,I was just at your hospital when I got sick before the final examinations.First, I thanks for you could treat me very well and let me recovered soon.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I’m afraid that I couldn’t pass the exam.Thank you for the bottom of my heart for your help and service.Dear Miss Smith,I hope you can know how much I appreciate your kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.I got sick just a week before the final examination.I was so worried that I couldn’t take part in the examination.It was just you that encouraged me to face the illness bravely.So I recovered soon, and I got good results in my final examination.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid I can’t have recovered so soon and achieved such good results.Again, I would like to express my thanks to you.Sincerely yours,Dear Miss Smith,I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that I would be still in hospital now.I got sick just a week before the exam.You treated me well and I recovered soon.Now I pass the exam.But for your kindness help, I would not have passed the exam.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.Yours sincerely,Dear Miss Smith,I was a patient of yours one week ago, and I write the letter to you to show my appreciation for your help.It was near the final exam then, and without your hospitable and generous help, I couldn’t have recovered so soon, let alone to get a high mark on the exam.I shall always appreciate the help you’d offered me and I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when opportunity arises.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.Best wishes,Sincerely yours,邀请信
开头:开门见山,说明目的。
正文:邀请内容(活动性质,地点,时间,日期),有关要求与希望。
结尾:重申对方参加的重要性,希望尽快回复。
常用句型:
I should be much pleased if you would come to our party on Friday the 15th at 6.I am pleased to invite you to participate in …to be held from…to….in..I feel it a great honor if you could..It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to…
We would be greatly honored if you could come…
I am writing to invite you to…
I am particularly anxious to have you join us.It’s a long time since I have had the pleasure of seeing you and I do hope you can come.We hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.I will cover all the expenses involved.应注意:
1)用词清晰,简明。
2)邀请内容清楚。
5. 求职信
开头:说明信息来源,表明写信目的 正文:提供个人资料,询问相关问题。
结尾:表达愿望,提供联系方式,表示感谢。
常用句型:
I have read your advertisement in…for a(position/post), and should be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for the position.I wish to apply for the post mentioned in your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper.I wish to apply for a position with your company.I myself like the job very much and I think my personality is well suited to working as a ….Honest, trust-worthy, reliable, enthusiastic, diligent, bright, smart, careful, patient, responsible, efficient, productive, versatile, open-minded, optimistic,I am confident that my experience and ability will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirement of your position.Born in…in.., I graduated from….University majoring in …..I have been working in…since my graduation, and I have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was ….And currently I am working for…
I intend to give up my present post in order to get a more challenging opportunity.With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than 4,000.I shall be very much obliged if you will offer me an opportunity for an interview.I am looking forward with great interest to hearing from you soon regarding my application.应注意:
1)适当展示自己(经历,才能)
2)不要言他
3)语言明确清楚,流露自信。
6. 推荐信
开头:开门见山,表明关系。
正文:称赞被推荐人(举例说明),客观介绍其相关能力,突出表现、性格与人品
结尾:作出保证,提出希望,表示感谢。
常用句型:
I am very glad to recommend you a former student of mine, Mr./Miss… to be a candidate for…
I am writing to recommend…
I have great pleasure to provide a letter for recommendation for Mr./Miss…
With reference to your advertised position, I have the pleasure to say that he is the just person you are looking for.He has proved to be industrious, responsible and skillful in carrying out his assignment.Besides being thoroughly honest and reliable he showed an unusual quickness and ability in…
I hope the above information will help you to know…
If you need any further information about his qualification, please do not hesitate to contact me.If further information about him/her is required, please do not hesitate to let me know/contact me
In view of his/her previous achievements in…, I am firmly convinced that Mr./Miss.., will make a successful graduate student/staff member.I would be most grateful if you would consider my recommendation and kindly offer him a…
应注意:
1)开门见山,简明扼要。
2)举例说明,客观叙述。
7. 表扬信
开头:身份简介,提及感谢的人,事。
正文:叙述经过,详细介绍值得表扬之处,表达感受
结尾:提出祝愿与希望
常用句型:
I am writing to tell you how highly I think of…
I am writing because I appreciate very much what Mr./Miss…from your company has done.I am greatly impressed by….What he has done shows that…
He deserves praise for what he has done.I am greatly inspired by…
It is your good service as well as excellent food that help you set up a world reputation.For this reason, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks and hope that your company will have a brighter future.应注意:
1)叙述经过,明确具体。
2)上升到一个高度。
3)语言诚恳。
8. 祝贺信
开头:开门见山,说明消息来源
正文:回忆过去,表明感受,展望未来,提出建议。
结尾:表达祝愿
常用句型:
What exciting/thrilling news!
It’s good/sensational news.I was delighted/thrilled to hear/to receive the news that ….It’s the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.I congratulate you on/upon your success.Congratulations and all good/best wishes.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on…
Permit me to congratulate you…
We want you to know how happy we were when…
It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…
Wish you all the happiness in the world.I hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life/career.All the luck in the world to you!
Best of luck to you!
范文:
Ex.1
Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem
Dear manager,I was a guest/customer at your restaurant last Saturday.I wish to refer you to the incident that happened that day, calling for your immediate attention to the matter.It shocked me when I found a fly in a dish in the middle of our meal.I could hardly bear it.I felt sick.If it happens again, I am convinced that no one will come to eat here any more.It is advisable for you to tidy up/ clean up your kitchen as soon as possible.Please give me your immediate attention to this matter.Sincerely yours,***
Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to
1)describe the book you want to borrow,2)specify by when the book will be returned, and
3)express your gratitude.Dear Jones,I am writing to ask for your help in lending me a book.Recently I’ve been busy preparing my graduate thesis, and therefore have been reading and researching numerous books and references.One of the books that my advisor believes to be particularly relevant to my thesis is called The Legal System in Society.Unfortunately I have been unable to find it at the library or in any bookstores.Do you happen to have this book? If so, may I borrow it? I promise to take good care of it and will return it to you within three days.Thank you very much.I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
练习题:
Ex.1
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has friends visiting.They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You should prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Ex.2
Your classmate and close friend, Jack, has just passed the graduate entrance examination and is going to study at a famous university in another city.Write a letter of congratulation to him.Ex.3
You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in UK.You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had left your laptop in the family.Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality.Describe the computer and where it is and ask the host to send it back to you.Ex.4
You are a college student who applies for a part-time job in a shop during the summer vacation.Write a letter to the shop owner explaining why you are a suitable person for the job.Remember to ask him or her about the rate of payment.Ex.5
You are a college student who applies to a university for an MA degree program of the major “Life Science”.Introduce yourself and state out the reasons.Ask them to send the necessary information concerning the course.1.审题要认真
短文的标题是对全文的高度概括。通过认真审题来确定标题的核心词或者说关键词,依此来整理思路。因此,考生看到试题后绝对不能提笔就写,而是应该认真审题,看清题目的要求和提示,充分利用题目所提供的信息、关键词所圈定的范围,在确立主题后再动笔。
如 从标题 The Misery of Shyness 中得知,考生不但要解释说明 Shyness ,更重要的是要突出由 Shyness 带来的Misery。至此,短文要重点阐述带来了什么Misery。
2.文体要统一
正式文体的文章不宜用非正式的语句。有些考生在一篇很正式的议论文中用以下的句子做结语 OK, this is what I want to say.或是That’s my opinion.Do you agree with me?等等,使文章显得不伦不类。
3.主题要突出
标题如果是 Pollution from Cars 或 Air Pollution ,以下段落的阐述显得有些赘述 1 Part of this problem is the world’s exploding population.2 A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air.3 Besides, land and water pollution has also increased.4 Pollution is, in fact, threatening our health, our happiness, and our civilization.尤其是第三句,还有点跑题。
4.文字要连贯
一篇好文章要注重连贯性。连贯性主要体现在句子与句子、段落与段落的衔接上,这种衔接要通过过渡词语来实现,以达到文章通顺,语言流畅。例如 It is clear that television news can vividly bring into us dramatic events of importance, such as wars, games and soon, but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation.On the contrary, print news excels in its ability to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit, though it can not compete with television visually.Besides, television is essentially a passive medium.Such as, but, because of, on the contrary, though, besides 这些过渡词把句子从语义上连接起来,形成一个有机的整体,读起来犹如行云流水,自然酣畅。
5.内容要一致
要删除多余的词语,否则, 一是破坏了文章的一致性, 二是有凑字数之嫌。如 Scientists fear that nuclear energy will one day destroyus.2 They say that the explosion of a nuclear bomb can kill millions of people and cause disease and deformity in later generation.3 Because of limited energy resources, scientists are studying the possibilities of nuclear power.4 And any failure from a nuclear plant may cause enormous damage to the affected area5 What’s more, up to now people have not discovered a safe way to dispose of radioactive wastes.本段中的第三句与主题不符, 也与第二和第四句不连贯, 应删除。
6.表达方式要多样化
词、句型使用的多样化不仅给文章增加了色彩和可读性,与此同时也可反映考生的词汇量和语言掌握的程度等。为避免文章平淡、呆板, 可使用不同的句式 强调句、倒装句、否定句等等。长短句使用合理相间,用短句表达有力的结论,用长句体现严密的逻辑关系。考生在举例说明的段落中尤其要注意词语的多样性。
7.考点要覆盖全
无论是什么形式的写作都有写作内容上的要求,一般为三个方面。考生在动笔前一定要看清写作内容上的要求,以确保文章覆盖所有考点。
8.语言要流畅
评分标准已清楚地告诉考生 文章要语言流畅、字句通顺、表达准确, 这是得高分的基础。
Last year the public spent two hundred million pounds on pet food alone, to say nothing of animal care bills and furniture.1 It is difficult not to feel resentful about this when one considers what the same amount could do for victims of starvation and poverty,2 and it is not unusual for me to get hot under the collar when I read about another old person who has left all his /her money to a dog or cat home.这两句在表达意义上用词十分到位,随着两个 when 引导的状语从句内容的递进,主句对表现气愤程度的加强通过用词的不同而表达得淋漓尽致;排比结构的运用使观点更加明确 在1 中 It is difficult not 和 to feel resentful about this 与2 中的 it is not unusual 和 to get hot under the collar 词语表达极其准确。这需要考生在平时大量阅读文章时多注意积累好的语言表达。
9.首尾要呼应
上述几项被阅卷者称为闪光点 ,即加分的因素。除此而外, 更重要的一点是要注意文章的完整性,即首尾要呼应。
10.检查要到位
这个重要环节往往被考生忽略不计,而因为少了这个环节所造成的后果真可谓是功亏一篑。在阅卷过程中,时不时会发现 ourself、thinked、the person who are… ,而这些会酿成不良后果的错误完全可在一两分钟的时间内检查、修改完成。所以, 在写完短文后, 要耐心地再读一遍。
第五篇:考研英语作文高分
小作文模板
1.建议信
Dear ________,As ________, I’m writing to express my views concerning ________.Although ________, there is still much room for improvement.Forinstance, ________.In view of these facts, I would like to make the following suggestions.First, ________.Second,________.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Yours sincerely,________
2.辞职信模板
Dear ________,I am writing to inform you of my resignation from the current position.I can/will ________ for the transition process.Although I really appreciate the invaluable experience working here, I gradually find_______.In addition , ________.Therefore,________.I would like to thank you for ________.Should there be any inconvenience and trouble caused by my resignation, I am sorry indeed.Yours faithfully,________
3.致歉信模板
Dear ________,I am excessively sorry that I must apologize for ________.I’m afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.In order to ________, I will ________.Please accept my most cordial and humblest apology.I do hope you ________ and excuse me for ________.Cordially yours
________
4.求职信模板
Dear ________,I have become aware ________ that you are seeking people qualified to fill the vacancy for ________.I am convinced that ________.I major in ________.Furthermore, ________.My resume and list of references are available upon request.I appreciate your time and consideration, and look forward to meeting you in the near future.Faithfully yours,________
5.感谢信模板 Dear ________,I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ________.Without your help, ________.________.Many thanks again for ________.I hope I will have a chance to ________.Sincerely yours, ________
6.申请信模板 Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to you in the hope of ________.I would like to know more details about ________.If ________, I will/can ________.I am eagerly looking forward to your reply.And your kind help would be greatly appreciated.Yours respectfully,________
7.投诉信模板 Dear ________,This letter is to notify you about a problem I am having with ________.I am dissatisfied with ________ because ________.I have already attempt to ________.Unfortunately, it seemed that ________.I am sure you will agree that ________.I look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,________
8.询问信模板 Dear ________,I am writing to ask if ________.Since ________, I would be most grateful if ________.Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.I am expecting your early reply.Yours faithfully,________
9.邀请信模板 Dear ________,Please allow me to have the honor of inviting you ________.The occasion will start at/in ________.Following that, ________.We would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence at ________.Please inform me of ________.Yours sincerely,________
10.祝贺信模板 Dear ________,I am thrilled to know that ________.Please allow me to give my most sincere congratulations on this exciting occasion.As your ________, I _______.It means ________.And it is ________.I take this opportunity to express my best wishes to you.Wish you ________.Yours sincerely,________
11.推荐信模板 Dear ________,This letter is in reference to ________, who ________.He/She is applying for ________.With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend ________.During ________, I spent considerable time with him/her.He/She ________.I believe he/she will ________.I hope the above information will help you ________.If you ________, please do not hesitate to contact me.Yours faithfully, ________
12.介绍信 Dear ________,It gives me much pleasure to introduce ________ to you.He/She ________.Because ________, I hope ________, which I shall ________.I hope it won’t cause you much trouble.Your kindness will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,________
13.便签模板 Dear ________,This note is to ________.I will ________.I am sorry that I can’t pass on the message to you in your presence because ________.Yours, ________
14.通知模板
ANNOUNCEMENT 通知主题
Speaker: ________ Time: ________ Place: ________ 正文
单位/个人
15.备忘录模板
Memorandum
To: ________ From: ________ Date: ________ Subject: ________ 正文内容
16.简历模板
RESUME
Name: ________
Date of Birth: ________ Marital Status: ________ Address: ________ Telephone: ________ Education: ________
Work Experience: ________ Languages: ________
Awards and Scholarships: ________ Interests: ________ Reference: ________
17.摘要模板
Abstract
In order to ________, the paper takes ________ into consideration.It first ________, and further explores ________.Based upon the above, the author concludes that ________.大作文模板
1.价值观类
一、As is symbolically depicted in the cartoon, ________(图片内容).The caption indicates, ________(说明文字).Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to
attract our attention to the issue of ________(图片的主题).Why________(主题的重要性)? The answer seems selfevident.On the one hand, ________(重要性体现或变现1).On the other hand, ________(2).It is my view that, we can frequently use such drawings to enlighten the juvenile as to the importance of ________(主题).All in all, ________(深化主题).二、I was really fascinated by the above intriguing cartoon.As is vividly portrayed, ________(图画内容).Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to direct our attention to ________(图画内涵), which is ________ to/in our life.For one thing, ________(内涵重要意义 1).For another, ________(2).Therefore, it is essential for us to ________(针对图画内涵的态度).First of all, ________(具体措施1).In addition, ________(2).With correct understanding and practical acts, we will ________(出现的结果).三、As is shown in the picture, ________(图片内容).The drawing vividly illustrates ________(表达的主题).Obviously the drawing conveys the meaning that ________(图片内涵).As an old saying goes, ________(应用相关谚语).This also applies to ________(扩展论证).Examples to prove the idea are abundant, and the most persuasive is ________ 举例说明).In conclusion, ________(总结深化主题).2.教育类
一、As is vividly portrayed in the first cartoon, ________(第一幅图片的内容).In contrast, ________(第二幅图片的内容)as shown in the second cartoon.The fact that ________(图片体现的问题).For one thing, ________(问题的表现或原因1).For another, ________(2).Therefore, ________(问题的结果).In fact, ________(对待问题的正确态度).Accordingly, ________(应该采取的 措施及意义).二、As is vividly depicted in the above picture, ________(图片内容).The caption informs us that ________(说明文字内容).Undoubtedly, what the picture conveys is ________(图片主题).In fact, ________(论证支持主题).As a college student, I firmly believe that ________(自己的观点).Admittedly,________(公认的做法).At the same time, ________(进一步的做法).It is believed that ________(总结).三、________(话题)plays a very important role in ________(起作用的方面).Without ________(话题带来的好处), ________(结果).However, ________(现状及问题).Therefore, ________(提出措施).Undoubtedly, ________(解决问题的方法)is of great necessity.On the one hand, ________(必要性体现1).On the other hand, ________(2).As a result, ________(总结).From my point of view, ________(个人观点).The final way to improve the situation is ________(建议).3.社会热点类
一、As can be seen in the above picture, ________(图画的内容).Apparently, ________(图画象征的含义).The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to ________(图画的主题).On the one hand, ________(主题的一个方面).For
instance, ________(举例说明).On the other hand, ________(主题的另一个方面).A good case in point is that ________(举例说明).Personally, ________(我的观点).After all, ________(问题的根本).二、The set of drawings above vividly depict a common phenomenon that________(图片揭示的现象).As is portrayed in the first picture, ________(第一幅图片的内容).In the second one, ________(第二幅图片的内容).Obviously, ________(图片的相同点/不同点).It goes without saying that ________(现象积极的一面).First, ________(原因1).Second, ________(原因 2).However, we have to admit that ________(现象的弊端).In my view, ________(对待这一现象的正确态度).三、As is vividly depicted in the above drawing, ________(图片内容).Undoubtedly, ________(图片反映的事实).The drawer highlights the longstanding issue of ________(图片揭示的深层问题).Nowadays, ________(对问题深入分析).Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to solve the problem of ________(正在讨论的问题).To begin with, ________(措施 1).In addition, ________(措施2).In fact, ________(用一个基本事实来支持论点).4.人口环境类
一、The above pictures present us with two situations with sharp contrast.In the first picture, we learn that ________(第一幅图片的内容).On the contrary, ________(第二幅图片的内容).It is apparent that ________(图片的主题).The purpose of the pictures is to tell us that due attention has to be paid to ________(图片揭示的现象).For example, ________(举例说明).Consequently, ________(现象造成的结果).Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to deal with the urgent problem.First and foremost, ________(措施1).Furthermore, ________(措施2).二、As can be seen from the graphs, ________(图表内容).Apparently, ________(图表说明的问题).There are numerous reasons for this effect, and I would explore only two of the most important ones here.First, ________(原因 1).For example, ________(举例说明).Second, ________(原因2).For instance, ________(举例说明).Personally, it is imperative to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the graphs.One measure is ________(措施 1).More importantly, ________(措施 2).5.健康类
一、________(提出引出主题的问题).Of all the complaints I have heard, this is the one most frequently uttered.As is shown in the charts above, ________(图表内容 1).Accordingly, ________(结果).We can see from the charts that________(图表内容2).However, ________(讨论对象的变化).According to the given figures,________(变化趋势).There are probably several reasons responsible for the trend.In the first place, ________(变化原因1).In the second place, ________(变化原因 2).Hence, ________(结论).二、The desire for ________(美好的目标)is universal.________(正面论证支持).On the contrary, ________(反面论证支持).There are numerous ways to ________(达到目标).First and foremost, ________(方法 1).Moreover, ________(方法2).Finally,(方法 3).As for me, ________(我的做法 1).In addition, ________(我的做法2).Therefore, ________(总结).