第一篇：2009年12月四级写作真题及参考
2009年12月四级写作真题及参考范文
题目：
Create a green campus
1.建设绿色校园十分重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境
3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……
范文：
①
Create a Green Campus
It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college.Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society。
The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable.Some of the authorities’ budget should be on how to reduce of the waste.What’s more, we’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life。
It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses。
本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句＋逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变。相信大多新东方学员应该能够习惯的应用新路老方法走的思路。但是，还是这句话，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。②I am the part of the Green Campus
The Olympic Games was hold in our country last year.“Green and Environment-protecting ” is one of the Three Themes of it.Our government has made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more green project to keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource.As a university student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of green and environment-protecting homeland.We will start it from ourselves, our classmates, our friends and other people around us.We can stop cars running through our campus streets.And in the bathrooms, we will never leave the water running on after using.We will never throw things everywhere without thinking, They are wrong.These things are taking place everyday everywhere in our school.So, let's begin to act!Don't talk loudly in public places.Turn off the water tap after using it.After washing the clothes, use it to flash the toilet.Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car.Save your pocket money and contribute to environmental protection organizations.Collect waste paper or bottles for recycling.Plant more trees and flowers。
We can start from every little thing around us to truly realize the green campus.Publicize the theme of green and environment-protecting, and let us really reach the “Green and Environment-protecting” goal in our generation.This is the responsibility of everyone who loves life and peace。
To Create Green Campus
Recently, more and more colleges have realized the great importance of creating green campus, and it has become a new trend throughout the whole country。
Then, what does it mean when we refer to green campus? On one hand, the environmental protection is essential and undeniable, which is the premise to this concept.On the other hand, it is far from enough to meet the overall goals of green campus to simply maintain green environment.Instead, it also requires the construction of active cultural atmosphere among all the staff and students by our mutual efforts.Therefore, in order to create green campus, first, it is necessary that everyone consider themselves as the host of our campus and be aware of the inspirations green house has brought to us.More importantly, actions need to be taken to achieve the aims.Last but not least, we can spread the spirit to a wider area to call upon more people to join this promising project。③2009年12月四级写作真题及参考范文(新东方)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Creating a Green Campus.You should write at least 120 words following the outline below in Chinese。
1.绿色校园的重要性，2.什么样的校园是绿色的？
3.我们应该怎么做。
In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus.We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use;food is wasted just because of its poor taste;clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion.As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus。
There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus.On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account.On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels。
Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps.For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on.For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves。
④及格版：Nowadays, campus construction has been brought into focus.According to a survey, almost all the schools and colleges are rebuilding their campus: not only the teaching buildings but also the circumstances.In this essay, I will discuss the importance of campus construction and offer my own view on it。
A lot of efforts have been made to better the campus environment, in particular, the construction of a green campus.Many colleges have taken serious measures to build environmental friendly campus, such as lawns, artificial pools, and tree-lined roads.However, in my view, this is only the initial step and we can do more。
To begin with, the schools and colleges may implement strict regulation of waste on campus: no matter the leftovers in canteens or the litter in classrooms.Moreover, on the student side, we can use green bags instead of disposable plastic bags and use more recycling chopsticks and bowls.In addition, the most important thing for everyone is that we should raise our awareness of environmental protection。
⑤高分版：
On the Importance of Campus Construction
Campus is the place where university students spend most of their daily life through the four-year’s study.Hence, campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well。
Concerning campus construction, it doesn’t exclusively involve green environment preservation and protection, such as planting more trees and flowers, which makes campus an ecological and natural resort, but advocating green products.For example, students are encouraged to avoid using disposable plastic containers in campus dining hall and recycle wasted batteries and other electrical products properly.In addition to the environmentally friendly practice, we shall make every effort to improve the moral standard and ethical level of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’ mental health.For example, students will be severely punished in case of cheating in exams and plagiarizing in academic papers.As a university student, not only shall we increase our awareness of the importance of green environment in campus but also we take prompt action to purify the campus atmosphere and make it more harmonious。
⑥Create a Green Campus
“Green campus” is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us.It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind.Of course, this concept is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world。
The young generation is under the burden of severe environmental problems and the hopes of environmental improvement are lying in them.Therefore, campus plays a more important role in educating the young generation.The creation of “Green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities;most importantly, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own mission and responsibility.Under such stimulations, students may grasp the chance to learn every necessary course for the harmonious and sustainable development of the world。
To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities.Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities.Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people’s well-beings。
⑦ The university’s branch campuses in suburban areas
In recent years more and more universities have built up their branch campuses in suburban areas.Now it is very difficult to find a university without a branch campus.Maybe no one can tell clearly when the first branch campus came out。
But the reasons behind this phenomenon are obvious.Among these reasons, the enrollment expansion of universities plays a very vital role.As more and more freshmen are remitted to universities, the original facilities, including classrooms, apartments, dining houses, laboratories and the like, are not enough any more.What’s more, the land in the suburb is relatively low in price, which is affordable for most universities.Besides, the quiet environment in suburban areas is more suitable for students to study。
As a college student, I think, it is necessary and beneficial for many universities to build up a branch campus.However the building of branch campuses brings some problems.For one thing, the students in some branch campuses cannot enjoy good enough facilities and the teachers due to limited resources.For another it leads to less direct communications among teachers and students.Therefore the university should take a full account before it decides to build up a branch campus。
第二篇：历年四级写作真题
专四辅导之便条写作
（一）便条的写作
便条是一种简单的书信形式。要求考生仔细阅读和分析所给的情景，确定便条所涉及的内容，如写便条者与便条接收者的身份、两者之间的关系及情景的正式程度等。
便条的特点在于内容简短，大多是临时性的询问、留言、通知、要求等。与正规书信相比，便条的语言更为口语化，比如要通知某事只需这样开头：Just a line to tell you that...而无须像正规书信那样This is to inform you that...开头。有急事需要告诉别人而又不能面谈时，就可以写便条，如请假条、留言条等。一般不写地址，与普通书信基本相同。结尾时也无需要结尾礼词，只需要写上便条者姓名。
便条的日期通常写在右上角，一般只要写上星期几，也可以写明上午、下午的具体时间；日常应用中，写上几月几日的也很普遍。但一般不写年份，因为便条的内容多半是当日或近日内要办的事情。
便条具有用途广泛、形式简单、文字要求不十分严格的特点。
基本写作格式
便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但必须包括以下四个基本要素； 1）Date：便条日期2）Salutation：称呼3）Body：正文 4）Signature：署名
注意事项
1.词句简洁，尽量避免应酬语和敬词 2.切忌内容空洞、言不达意。分类举例
1）请假（Asking for Leave）
例1 Directions: You are about to write a Business Leave Note of about 100 words.Please describe the information clearly.1)the reason you ask for the leave 2)the time and how long you will leave
Aug.22nd Secretary Li, I’m sorry to apply for ten days’ leave from the Aug.23rd to sept.3rd instant.As I have to leave with the time is urgent.My father now in the hospital is badly ill.I have to go to see him and take care of him for a few days.You know I’m the only child in my family.Of course I will show you the telegram about my father’s illness which is received from my mother to support my application.As concern as the missed lessons during my absence, I promise I will do my best to catch them on after I come back to the campus.Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully，××× 本文是一封请假条，一般我们要向上级或老师请假，通常用的是ask for leave这个短语，请三天假可写作：ask for three days’ leave;因病请假则是ask for sick leave.leave在这里是名词用法，文中用的短语是apply for意为“申请”，含有更加郑重的意味，常用于下级对上级或晚辈对长辈的书面语中，“Only child”意为“独生子女”相应的，“独生女”译作“only daughter”而“独生子”译作“only son”.As concern as后面跟名词性结构，意为“涉及到，至于”与Concerning同义，两者可以互换。
例2 Directions: Your father is seriously ill, and you want to go back home.Write a note to the secretary and it should include 1)the cause for leaving;2)the days: from 16th to 21st;3)Catch on the lesson after returning school.July 5th Dear Miss Huang, My sister called me last night, and she said that my father is dangerously ill.I beg to apply for seven days’ leave of absence from 16th to 21st instant, in order that I can see my beloved father.I should be much obliged if you would grant me my application.As regards the lessons to be missed during my absence, I will do my best to make up for them as soon as I get back from home.Sincerely yours，××× I should be much obliged if you would...是一种客套语，表示“……，我当不胜感激。”“补课”的英文是to make up for the lessons。2)约请(Invitation)Directions: You have a ticket to the Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is visiting and you want to give it to your friend Alice.Write a note to her and say: 1)the time of the show, 2)the place where you will wait for her.Sunday Dear Alice, Here is a piece of good news for you.The Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is now on a visit in Beijing, will give a performance in the Beijing Grand Theater tomorrow evening.I am sure that you will be happy to watch it.Here I leave you an admission card.The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp.I will wait for you at the theater entrance.Please let me know whether you are prevented from coming or not.××× 约朋友一起去看戏，可是朋友不在家，只好留下票子和一张便条，但又怕朋友来不了，所以在便条最后特地写上“如果你来不了，告诉我一声”（Please let me know whether you are prevented from coming）3)道歉（Apology）
人非圣贤，孰能无过。在社会交往中，人们常常会出现一些疏忽、过失等。如果发生此类事情，就会给对方带来麻烦和不便。为了避免误解，不影响感情，在这种情况下，应写信给对方予以解释，以请求谅解。此类信要写得及时，态度要诚恳，用词需谦逊。一般在信一开始就向对方表示歉意或内疚，然后说明原因并提出补救的办法。
例1 Directions: You have missed a date of your friend, now you have to write a letter for appologization in about 100 words.May 20th Dear Lily, I am sorry I missed seeing you yesterday.I know that you must have been disappointed.I also feel worried and anxious in my heart.The fact is that my manager at the last moment asked me to prepare a urgent plan while I could not get to a phone to call you and yesterday I have worked late until about 8:30 p.m.I am terribly sorry.However, I would like to ask you out this weekend to make up for yesterday.Please give me a chance and I am waiting for your reply.××× 临时有事未能赴约，一定要把事情解释清楚并真诚的道歉，最好能有弥补（to make up），邀请对方周末再碰头（I would like to ask you out this weekend）注意句子you must have been disappointed中情态动词的用法：情态动词+完成时态，表示过去行为。这句话应该理解为“你当时一定感到很失望”。
例2 Directions: You have received a invitation from your friend, but you have already had some guests in your house.Please express the reason you can’t go clearly in about 100 words.6.April Dear Lucy, I do apologize for having to send this letter about Saturday night.When I accepted your invitation, I simply forgot that Saturday was a holiday and that my own guests were not leaving until Sunday morning.It is difficult for me to make a choice.Though I also wonder to meet you very much.I could not very well go out by myself and leave the guests at my home.I hope you know how sorry I am not to be with you this Saturday.Should I make a visit to you in my other spare time? Thank you very much.××× 自己家里有客人，自然不方便再接受别人邀请去做客所以可以明正言顺的表示拒绝或可另约时间。英文要强调谓语动词，可以加上助动词，例如：I do apologize for being late.例3 Directions: You are already have a date with your friend but suddenly have another thing to do and you have to tell your friend that you can’t go.Express your reason clearly in about 100 words.Monday 9:00 am Dear Jane, I am sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to come this afternoon because I have to go to the airport at 2:00 p.m.to meet an overseas visitor from Australia.I really have kept our date in my mind all these days, however, I received my boss’s e-mail this morning, he asked me to go to the airport to meet one of his friends from abroad, it’s urgent and I must go.Please forgive me.Would you please ring me up to make another time? Many thanks.××× 因有事而不能赴约，只能另约时间（to make或to fix another time）。英国人一般把“打电话”说成to ring somebody up，还可以说 to give somebody a ring，不要错以为别人要送你个戒指。美国人通常说to call somebody。与别人已经定好的约会却临时不能赴约时，应说明原因并诚恳地道歉，以期获得别人的谅解。4）借物(Borrowing)Directions: You are going to write a note for borrowing sth.Please describe these information clearly 1)the thing you ask 2)what you are going to do with it 3)how long will you take it.Tuesday Dear Xiao Wang, I wonder if I could borrow your electronic dictionary for a few days.Now I am translating some important articles.There are many new words which I have to look up the dictionary usually.I just have a paper dictionary but of course it’s not as convenient as the electronic one, which has a bad effect upon my velocity of my translating.So I think your electronic dictionary is more suitable for me to complete my work.I promise that I must be very careful of your dictionary and make no damage done on it.Thank you very much!
Yours ever，××× 字典是我们日常生活中常用的学习工具，但千万不能从字面上认为“查字典”就是“check the dictionary”，而应该用“look up”这个固定短语来表达。“影响……”有一个很地道的短语。“have effect upon/on”,如果是积极影响就在have和effect之间加a good，反之，就加“a bad”其他的形容词例如great，remarkable也可以用来修饰effect，此词在这里是名词。5）回复友人问候(Reply for Regards)Directions: You have just had an operation, and received a note of regards from your friend Jenny.Now please write a reply to her to tell her your current situation.Jan.8th.Dear Jenny, Thanks for your letter of sympathy I received the day before yesterday.The operation on my leg was a wonderful success.You know I had been suffering a lot from my leg since my childhood.The operation removed the cause of trouble.It is quite worth having the operation.I am daily recovering from my illness.I’m confident I will soon be in the office again after proper treatment.Thank you for kind wishes.My best wishes to all your family
××× 这是对好友问候便条的回复。形式简单，内容明了。过去完成进行时“I had been suffering…my childhood”表示动作从过去一直持续到现在。便条写作中的语言表达：
中国人与西方人看问题的方法的确在许多方面存在着差异，而且这种差异的的确确在束缚着中国学生，成为他们英文写作中的拦路虎，使他们不能准确而简洁地表达思想。
比如写下面一则便条，因母亲突然生病，周末你不能和汤姆去跳舞了，你找了舞跳得很好的时黛来代替你，并表示抱歉。
July 6
Dear Tom，I am sorry to inform you that I won't be able to go to dance with you this weekend．My mother is suddenly taken ill．In order not to disappoint you，I have asked Shi Dai to take my place．She is a better dancer，I think．
My regrets．
Joe 从便条中可看出，英语表达先“果”—I won't be able to go to dance with you this weekend后“因”—my mother is suddenly taken ill，即所谓“先果后因”。
一般来说，在单个句子中，英语句子也是先中心，也就是将主要思想、结果放在句首，放在主句里表达；而汉语正相反，一般为后中心，主要的观点、信息往往放在句末。如：He had to stay at home yesterday because he was ill．（因为他病了，昨天他不得不呆在家里。）
Tragedies can be written in literature since there is tragedy in life．（生活中既然有悲剧，文学作品就可以写悲剧。）
所以说，大学生用英文写作时，要按照英美人的思维模式进行思考，避免写出中国式的英语。
专业四级便条写作范例： 1.A note of Invitation Dear Mrs.Hudson:
Will you and Mr.Hudson be able to join us and a couple of friends on Saturday evening, October 5th, for dinner? Later we plan to go to the City's Performance Hall to see a Huangmei opera.Dinner starts at six-thirty to allow plenty of time for the drive into town and arrival before curtain time.We do hope you can come.Sincerely yours, Ma Ming
2.A note of thanks Dear Betty, The beautiful electronic translator for me arrived today.Thank you so much for sending me such a nice present.It is very useful for me to study English with, especially when I come across some new words while reading.Thanks to your gift, vocabulary is no longer my headache now.Besides, it is lovely and the size is perfect for me to carry.It is the best gift I have ever received.Thank you again.Jenny
3.A note of apologies Mrs.Katy，I'm terribly sorry I wasn't present on time in your class yesterday morning.I met with the traffic jam on my way to school so that I spent thirty minutes longer than before.I know you are a little angry, anyhow it's my fault, so 1 wish you can forgive me.Later I will try to avoid such accident.Thanks.Tony
4.A Note of Appointment Dear Betty，I wonder if I could see you in your office tomorrow, at 10:15.I have many problems to talk over with you on my current work.It makes me very puzzled.So I hope you could give me some good advice.Please give me a phone call and let me know whether it is ok, or when you are convenient.Rain
5.A Note of Congratulations Dear Jacky, I am so glad to hear that you won the first place in the National English Debating Contest.Congratulations!How great you are!You set a good example for us.All of our class are proud of you excellent performance.Later I want to share your joy.You can talk with me in details.Let's call a day.See you.Henry
6.A Note of Application Dear Professor Wang, It is said you need a part-time teacher from newspaper.I am interested in teaching English in your training center.I am a second-year student of English major.I am qualified to teach reading, writing and speaking.In the past I had ever worked as a teacher in a school.I firmly believe I am competent in this job.I am looking forward to your reply.Henry
历年专四试题――便条
2000 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING
Write on answer sheet one a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You've read on the notice board that the university library is looking for a par t-time library assistant who can work at weekends.You think that your classmate, George, is a suitable person for this vacancy.Write him a note, telling him what you know about the vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for an interview.2001 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING
Write on answer sheet one a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Profess or Wang.Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting.You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.2002 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING
Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman.Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.2003 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING
Write on answer sheet one a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Your friend Clare has invited you to her house-warming party this weekend.However, you will be away then.Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to her.2004 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING
Write on answer sheet one a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Your friend, Jane, has failed in the final exam, and is feeling very unhappy about it.Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.2005 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING
Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra.Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.2006 SECTION B NOTE-WRITING Write on answer sheet two a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: you have got to know that you classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class.And you are thinking of joining the trip, write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and asking for information on two details related to the excursion.历年短文写作真题
1992 My View on Reading Extensively 1993 My Idea of Becoming a Teaching in the Future 1994 TV: a good thing or a bad thing? 1995 Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.1996 Every college student would agree that life in college is not the same as it was in the middle school.Now，you have been asked by the Student's Union to write a passage entitled： The Main Difference Between My College Life And My Middle School Life 1997 Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students.You either agree or disagree with them：More pressure from academic studies does（does not）good to us 1998 It is now generally accepted that vehicles（cars，trucks，etc.）are a major source of air pollution in cities.You are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem.One way to solve the problem 1999 We see advertisements on television everyday.Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits，but others don't think so.What is your opinion？A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television 2000 College life should be varied and colorful.And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it.However，at present，there is much room for improvement in this regard.Write an article to the university radio entitled：The importance of extracurricular activities 2001 Travel has become part of our life.And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience：Travel broadens the mind 2002 Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.And they have different ways to stay healthy.For example，some exercise every day； others try to keep a balanced diet.What do you think is the best way to stay healthy？The Best Way to Stay Healthy 2003
People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family.So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.Write on answer sheet one a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of Keeping A Good Mood 2004
Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other.So, some say that phones will kill letter writing.What is your opinion? Write on answer sheet one a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? 2005
The students' Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.Write on answer sheet two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Idea of A University Arts Festival 2006 Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, xi 'an, Chengdu , shanghai , Wuhan, nanjing ,and Shenyang.The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better, what do you think? Write on answer sheet two a compositions of about 200 words.You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what you opinion is In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate detail.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.VI.SECTION A Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.SECTION B NOTE-WRITING Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the university's swimming club.He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport.Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.Marks will be awarder for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Benefits of Volunteering
You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.SECTION B NOTE-WRITING [10 MIN] Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:
Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper.And you would like to recommend one to her.Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.转自[英美者]-英语专业网站：http:///TEM/Test4/4057187062_5.html 专四短文写作范例
2010年Should College Students Hire Cleaners Buying or Borrowing Books?
Books are close friends of humanity.They can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life.Through books we can obtain skills and techniques for survival and development.Through books we can enlighten our spirits and live a fuller life.There are generally two ways in which we can access to books: borrowing or buying.While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest enjoyment.Admittedly, there are a few merits for borrowing books.For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money.And of course, with the money saved we can do other more worthy things.And also, as we borrow books from the library and friends, we normally have deadline to finish them, and consequently we can read more books in a limited time.And we can, above all, better our efficiency of our reading, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”
However, some advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling.One of them, definitely not shared by the choice of borrowing books, is the abundance of freedom that buying books can offer us.Since we can keep the books as long as we wish, we can read as much as we want.Another strength of owing books is that we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books.And finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun that borrowing books can by no means offer.While borrowing books can, to some extent, quench our thirst for knowledge, buying books gives us greater pleasure of selecting and keeping the best of the world treasure.Can we think of any thing else more delightful and rewarding?
第三篇：四级真题写作1
No happiness without contributing first
In fact, almost of people need happiness in their life.Happiness is an important part of our daily life.And different people have different opinions on happiness.In my view, l think contribution can make our happy.For example, if you contribute some money for the relief of the poor, you will feel happy and satisfied from the bottom of your heart.Also, you will leave a good impression on their heart.They must appreciate for it.So we all know that there is easy for us to own happiness as long as you can contribute firstly.Certainly, everyone has their own happiness.We are children in our family.When we do some housework, our parents will own the sense of happiness.Because they think you grew up.Then we will find that their happiness from our contributions.Apparently, we also gain happiness from our families.In a word, if you want to gain happiness, you should contribute something firstly.
第四篇：2013年12月四级写作真题
2013年12月四级写作真题解析之“手机过度使用”
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2013年四级作文解析 分类： 四六级写作
这篇与本人考前所给备考冲刺作文不只神似，语言大部分可以直接使用。不知道你是否看过它：http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_41858d880102eqok.html
真题如下：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture above.You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people’s life and then explain the consequence of overusing it.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.(图片来源：网络；题目中英文内容：People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see)解析：
传统的作文归类方式，如观点对比、问题解决或按图画、图表或名言警句类划分的方式正逐渐退出历史舞台。相反，按照题目要求写相应的“功能段落”和表达是答题的永恒方式，永远不会因为出题方式的改变而失效。
显然，试题未要求考生给作文命题，更没有要求考生抄写题目，所以不写题目丝毫不影响成绩。题目写对了当然也不会加分，但题目写错了得分必受影响。
本篇作文体裁明确，话题清晰，内容要求具体，即：简要解释手机的过度使用并分析其可能产生的后果。
可以看出，题目明确要求写的“现象”、“危害”，此外可写的是“建议”。
首段：图画解释描述（改写）
Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: a host of people are crossing the street;to our great shock, they focus all their eyesight on cell phones rather than the road, and in order to see, they rely on their walking sticks.Such a picture can be naturally associated with people’s overuse of mobile phones: if we intend to enjoy a harmonious and safe life, it is advisable for us to reject negative impacts of cell phones.In contemporary society, it has become a trend for people to purchase, own and use cell phones in daily life.Meanwhile, an increasing of individuals find that mobiles phones are overused.Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like scene in the picture: students concentrate on cell phones in class;youngsters concentrate on cell phones in family.It is overuse of cell phones that enables us to ignore people around us and even to put us in danger.As a matter fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative impacts of cell phones.As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to refuse to be the slave of cell phones.Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to spend more time communicating with others face to face.Do bear in mind: cell phones are just our tool.(总字数：232词，可以将中间段砍掉开头两句或尾段砍掉最后两句)思路简析： 首段图画描述，改写图片提示信息即可。
二段首句点明主题并对主题简评，二句概述图片所指现象，三句相关人感受，四句排法举例，五句万能表达（强调句式）指出其危害，六句总结。
尾段首句表述自己观点，二句提出号召建议，尾句展望未来。
2013年12月作文解析之“网络对教育的影响”(2013-12-16 16:48:02)转载▼标签： 2013年四级作文解析 分类： 四六级写作
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education does not simply mean learning to obtain information.（图片来源：网络；图片中文字信息：“Once I learn how to use Google, isn’t that all the education I really need?”）
简析：
今年试题英文部分的内容比较诡异，细看题目确实未要求描述图片信息，而是要求“作文基于图片信息，且以解释‘网络对教育的影响开篇，阐述为什么教育不仅仅意味着学会如何获取信息。”
功能段落解析范文：
This picture can be naturally associated with the impact of Internet on learning: the young guy expresses his understanding/ conception / perception of education, “Once I learn how to use Google, isn’t that all the education I really need?” Obviously, in the youngster’s eyes, education equals getting information.In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of people to surf the Internet for diverse information.Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it rather convenient, comfortable and efficient to gain knowledge or information they need.Taking a look around, we can notice a great many students and their favorite websites: Google, Baidu and Yahoo.However, it is Internet that does not enable some learners to build up their correct perception of education.A case in point is the boy in the picture.As a college student, I am convinced that education means not only obtaining information, but also acquiring other important qualities, like scientific methods, optimistic attitudes for life, a strong will and so on.Accordingly, teachers should educate, advocate and encourage their students to cultivate comprehensive quality.（181words）
译文：
这幅图能自然而然的联想到网络对学习的影响：年轻人表达了自己对于教育的理解“一旦我学会了如何使用谷歌，难道不意味着我就得到我要的教育吗？”显然，在这位年轻人看来，教育就等于获取信息。
当今社会，很多人上网获取各种信息已成为一种普遍趋势。同时，越来越多人感受到通过网络获取所需知识信息的方便、舒适和高效。生活中，我们能够注意到很多这样的学生和他们喜爱的网站：。。然而，正是网络使得很多学习者未能建立起对教学的正确理解。图片中的小男孩就是一个例子。
作为大学生，我坚信教育不仅意味着获取知识，还意味着学习其他素质，比如科学的方法，乐观的态度和坚强意志力等等。因此，教师应教育、倡导和鼓励学生去培养综合素质。
第五篇：2009年12月四级写作真题及参考
2009年12月四级写作真题及参考范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Creating a Green Campus.You should write at least 120 words following the outline below in Chinese。
1.绿色校园的重要性，2.什么样的校园是绿色的？
3.我们应该怎么做。
Creating a Green Campus
In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus.We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use;food is wasted just because of its poor taste;clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion.As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus。
There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus.On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account.On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels。
Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps.For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on.For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves。
从总体写作来看，这篇作文总的可以分为三段：
第一段：着重写“绿色校园”的概念，从其概念引出“绿色校园”的重要地位。
第二段：此段的重点就是“绿色校园”的重要性，它能够促进学生们积极地参与到实际的环境问题中去，而且还能树立学生们的环境保护意识，对社会做出重大的贡献。
第三段：鉴于“绿色校园”的重要性，我们应当采取什么措施来建设“绿色校园”，把“绿色校园”的作用发挥到最大。
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