第一篇:英语四级考试的写作策略
英语四级考试的写作策略
新题型英语四级考试要求学生在30分钟内写出120—150词的短文或者日常应用文(如信函、简历等)。笔者根据近几年的大学英语四级考试的考纲和评分标准认为,学生的英语写作是有规律可循的,采用正确的训练教学策略,能够帮助学生解决所遇到的问题,提高他们的写作技能水平。这就要求教师能够以“文章切题,条理清楚,语言准确”等作为训练的依据,激活学生写作的内驱动力。
1.学生英语写作中存在的不足
1.1文章缺少一定的整体连贯思维。
大学英语写作一般都提供一些引导句和核心提示点。对此,很多学生认为这就是写作的关键句,只要照着这样的提示进行直译式的写作就一定能够得到较好的分数。其实这样的写法只是语句的翻译拼凑,缺少一定的内部思维,也就难以凸显文章应有的连贯性了。
1.2文章内容平淡。
“文似看山不喜平”,英语更是如此,文章内容除了来自写作的核心提示外,还应该穿插一些与此相关的名言警句和俗语俚语。这样的写作方式,不仅能够体现西方人语言幽默的特点,还能够比较直观地展示作者的写作知识素养。学生往往在这方面的能力有所欠缺。
1.3文章句式变换不够灵活。
英语写作需要一定的时态、从句、虚拟语气等众多句式组合而成。学生在写作过程中受自身的知识和时间等方面的影响,在句式变化上未能深入地思考,以致出现行文呆板、不够灵活等特征,难以真正达到四级考试写作方面的标准要求。
2.解决上述问题的策略
2.1审题列提纲,注意理清文章的脉络。
在英语四级考试中,审题是核心。一般在四级考试中,作文都给出了简短的中文提纲,写作时一定要按提纲的要求写,提纲叫怎么写,就怎么写。我们要把提纲看成是几个简答题,一个题目用一个段落来回答,这样,作文就会段落清楚,有明显的开头、主体和结论部分。写的过程中也不会为分段大伤脑筋,更不会像记流水帐一样一段到底,从而给阅卷老师留下很好的印象。同时在文章写作过程中,一定要学会使用一些句子之间,以及引起和结束文章时候的连接词,这样可以使文章更自然、流畅。
例如,我们以2006年12月试题为例讲述如何审题和列提纲。Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to writea short essay entitled Spring Festival Gala on CCTV.You shouldwrite at least 120 words following the outline given below:许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节晚会;有些人提出取消春节晚会;我的看法。上述材料信息告诉我们,在审题时一定要抓住“春晚”这个文眼,认真地进行谋篇布局。同时,在列提纲时,应该列出喜欢看春晚的理由、取消的原因,以及自己的观点。特别是作者的观点应该体现出全面性和独特性,这是获得高分的关键之处。
2.2制造语言亮点,彰显文章特色。
我们在阅读经典文章时发现,一篇优秀的文章往往离不开一些语言亮点的支撑。这些语言亮点其实就是文章的血液,突出了文章的亮点,也就是展现了作者的写作基本功。
笔者以为,可按照文章类型制造语言亮点。四级作文一般有下面三种结构:说明文、议论文和应用文写作。说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型、利弊类型、原因结果类型、解决问题类型及谚语说明类型;议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的;应用文写作主要包括演讲词、求职求学信、邀请信、感谢信和投诉信等。在每一种类型中写上一两句亮点语言,定会有意想不到的收获。
2.3背诵一些写作套路句,以便应急。
很多的考试专家在总结考试的经验时,往往将一些现成的别人的经验作为应付考试的一种方法。笔者在教学实践中也认为这样的方法有可借鉴之处,一方面,能够减少因思考不充分而带来的“虎头蛇尾”的尴尬结局,另一方面,能够节省写作时间。
这些写作套路主要有: ①观点句:Some people take it forgranted that...However,others hold that...As for as I am concerned,that I am in favor for the second view.②优缺点句:Generally,the advantages can be listed as follows.Firstly...Besides...Mostimportant of all...But every coin has tow sides.The negative aspectsare else apparent.③开头句: Recently,the problem of...hasaroused people’s concern.It is commonly believed that.../It is acommon belief that...④结尾句:Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...3.英语写作的几点思考
3.1注意平时词汇的积累。
在学习的过程中,一定要养成记忆单词的良好习惯。记单词不能光记它的表面意思,而应深入了解它的适用语境、常用搭配、习惯用法等,这样才算真正掌握了一个词。
3.2注意背诵一些精彩的名言名句。
笔者以为,对一些精彩的句子应摘抄下来,熟读成诵,并有意识地将它们应用到自己的习作中,以体现自身的英语知识素养。
3.3注意一些修辞的恰当运用。
在写作过程中,运用一些像比喻、夸张等修辞手法,不仅能够使文章倍感生动形象,还能够体现出“中西合璧”的特色。综上所言,在英语四级考试中,按照考纲的写作要求,注意写作过程和方法的训练,围绕写作重点,掌握规律性,突出规范性,强化长期性,就一定能够帮助学生提高写作的技能。
第二篇:英语四级考试写作指导
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参考范文
Last night I was driving home from work.I had an accident.I was following behind a truck,driving at about 30 kilometers an hour.I was watching the traffic carefully because it was getting dark.Suddenly a small girl ran onto the road from the left.She was chasing a dog and she wasn’t paying any attention to the traffic.I immediately applied the brakes and turned the steering wheel quickly to the right.The girl jumped towards the side of the road as soon as she saw my car.Fortunately I did not hit her,but I hit a car coming in the other direction.Luckily I was not driving very fast so the damage was not serious.It is better to damage a car than to injure a young child,I thought to myself.B: 以第一人称写一篇记叙文,讲述在旅行中经历的一件小事。
参考范文
Go on a Mediterranean Journey
My wife and I have always enjoyed traveling by sea,and last year we decided to go on a Mediterranean journey.Although our holiday was rather expensive we thought that the high standard of accommodation,the first-class food and the many interesting places we saw were well worth the price we paid.We found that most of the other passengers were friendly and interesting,but there was one man,a Mr.James,who irritated and annoyed us.Whatever subject we talked about,it seemed that he was an expert at it.He had,apparently,read more books,visited more countries and studied more languages,than anyone else had.After a few days,we ate our meals in silence,because nobody wanted to begin a conversation that would soon be taken over by this man.Then my wife had an idea.She suggested that we might think of an unusual subject,look it up in an encyclopedia and then talk about it at dinner.If it were an unusual subject,Mr.James could not possibly know anything about it.The subject we chose was “English Agriculture in the Eleventh Century.” At dinner that night we
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discussed this subject with great enthusiasm.Mr.历年四级考试中的“How I Overcome Difficulties in Learning English”、“My Ideal Job”以及图表作文的第一段都属于说明文的范畴,如,2002年6月的根据坐标图写题为“Students Use of Computers”的作文。
说明文必须按一定的顺序进行说明:时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序或认识顺序,选择具体的特点和细节来说明。
所以,说明文的思路要围绕说明顺序、事物的特点和细节展开。例如:
范文点评
A Famous Clock
When you visit London,one of the first things you will see is Big Ben,the famous clock which can be heard all over the world on the B.B.C.If the Houses of Parliament had not been burned down in 1834,the great clock would never have been erected.Big Ben takes its name from Sir Benjamin Hall who was responsible for the making of the clock when the new Houses of Parliament were being built.It is not only of immense size,but is extremely accurate as well.Officials from Greenwich Observatory have the clock checked twice a day.On the B.B.C.you can hear the clock when it is actually striking because microphones are connected to the clock tower.Big Ben has rarely gone wrong.Once,however,it failed to give the correct time.A painter who had been working on the tower hung a pot of paint on one of the hands and slowed it down!
【点评】这是《新概念英语》中的一篇经典说明文,介绍了世界著名的“大本钟”。文章开篇指明该钟位于英国伦敦,且全世界的人们通过BBC就能够听到钟声。接下来讲述了“大本钟”的由来,特点——不仅外型巨大,而且走时准确,在结尾处讲了“大本钟”的一个幽默的小插曲——油漆工把油漆桶挂在指针上,把钟弄慢了。细读这篇文章,我们不难发现,区区159个单词就把“大本钟”的光辉形象牢牢地刻在读者的脑海里,为什么?本文基于事实,分析了主题的来龙去脉,语言简洁又不失生动贴切,作者态度客观又充满幽默,使读者既“明白了事理”,又对事物有较完整明晰的了解认识,此乃说明文之真谛也。
以“Goals”为题打开一篇说明文的思路。
参考思路
1)目标的分类:(可根据时间顺序,空间顺序、逻辑顺序或认识顺序,任选一个进行分类和排列)
2)各个类别的特点和细节:
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3)组织成文:
范文点评
Goals
Everyone has goals.Many people do not reach their goals for lack of planning.These three sets of goals should be developed: lifetime,intermediate and short term.Lifetime goals should be written out.These goals should be clear and reasonable.For instance,the goal to win a research prize is clear and measurable.Other lifetime goals might include publishing a certain number of influential books or articles,earning a departmental chairmanship at a major university,successfully competing for a grant from the National Science Foundation or securing a consultantship with a big corporation.Intermediate goals relate to outcomes during the next few years.For the beginning doctoral student,intermediate goals may include completion of course work and preparation of a doctoral research proposal.Like lifetime goals,these are measurable and clearly stated.Short-term goals involve outcomes expected during the next 12 months.These goals are more performance oriented,and they help with achievement of intermediate goals.Examples of short-term goals are earning an A in a course,learning how to program a computer or performing an experiment.【点评】本文介绍了人生的三种目标:终生的、长期的和短期的目标。在文中采用了说明文常用的方法:定义、举例、分类和比较等。
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第三篇:大学英语新四级考试写作要求及高分策略
大学英语新四级考试写作要求及高分策略
大学英语新四级考试写作
一.四级考试对写作的要求
《大学英语教学大纲》和《大学英语课程教学基本要求》都对培养学生的英语写作能力做了明确规定,即学生能在半小时内完成120字左右的短文,包括书信等应用问题写作,要求文理基本通顺,表达思想清楚,无重大语法错误。通过分析历年的真题,我们不难发现:英语作文考查的类型基本包括议论文(一般为三段论式的论说文字),说明文(目前侧重于这方面的写作训练),图表作文(要求描述性的语言要贴近图表信息,真实反映语言水平)和应用文写作(包括书信、便条、通知、海报等)。
二.四级改革和写作变化
2005年1月的作文题目是要求学生以导游的身份写一篇演讲稿,不仅包含欢迎辞(表态)行程安排,(说明),而且包含安排的理由(说理)。2005年6月作文题目是校园文化旅游,要求学生就此阐述不同的观点。2006年1月是个竞选演说,如果我当选学生会主席,我会给大家做点什么事情(说明)。2006年6月17日的四级考试则是一个海报,要求考生构想一个招募志愿者的海报,其中包括应聘人必备的资历和应准备的材料等(说明)。2006年6月24日新题型的作文是传统的议论文形式,讨论大学生选择任课老师相关的问题。2007年1月作文也是传统的议论文形式,探讨对春节晚会所持的不同观点。2007年6月份是欢迎同学加入俱乐部的海报(应用文)。
从上面的题目变化趋势看,描述现象、分析原因、个人看法仍是四、六级考试写作部分主要考查的重点,在今后相当长的时间内,英语写作教学和辅导的主要突破口应集中在说明文、议论文和应用文上。
此外,仔细研究06年6月24日以后的四级试卷,我们还可发现,新四级的写作题目与校园生活密切相关,学生普遍感觉亲切,体裁包括两篇议论文,一篇应用文。不仅如此,新四级写作题中提供的文章框架清晰,思路比较明确,绝大多数考生都能利用“经典句型”或“万能模板”写出及格的作文。尽管新四级前两次都考查了议论文,但这并不能说明写作的重心有任何偏移。根据考试改革方案和课程教学要求的相关规定,应用文写作、说明文和议论文仍将是新四级作文的主攻方向。
三.四级写作高分策略
新四级考试并没有改变对写作的测试标准和要求,但在出题顺序上却做了明显的调整:写作作为第一项考查的内容,被提到新四级试卷的最开头,这令许多考生感觉不适应,部分网友甚至认为这是在折腾考生。其实,提高写作能力虽然较难,但写作教学却是一片大有可为的沃土。在过去十多年的英语写作辅导中,笔者坚持认为:考生如果坚持做到如下几点,就不难在规定的时间内写出一篇成功的英语作文。
1.了解英语写作的测试目的,准确把握题目的要求
英语写作测试,其实主要还是要考查学生组织英语语言的能力,和用英语表达思想的能力,体裁不外乎议论文,说明文和应用文,主题也是在大学生熟知话题基础上的翻新或扩展。综观历年的四级作文真题,变化趋势是从三段论的议论文向实用性更强的应用文体,尤其是书信写作方面倾斜。考生平时应有意识地就他们感兴趣的一些话题进行思考和拓展,争取在实践中磨练敏锐的审题能力。
2.迅速梳理写作的思路,列出并借助提纲进行写作
到了大学阶段,学生还是非常善于思考的,他们不仅想象力非常丰富,晚上做梦,还经常daydream, 各有独特的思维和写作思路。但是,如何将千头万绪的思路梳理清楚,学生则必须有真工夫。为此,在进行四级写作时,考生一定要首先形成自己的观点,之后合理运用一些手段,如常用的有四种:陈述理由、举例说明、提供数据、下定义等,之后充分就此展开论说。这样通过高效思考,严密组织,再辅以提纲形式的文章架构,考生一定会写出较符合规范的文章。
3.扩展写作提纲,草拟文稿,表述主要观点
在利用提纲展示个人写作思路的基础上,学生还应充分利用现有的英语水平,按照一定的逻辑思路,充分表达个人的观点。写作之初,学生不必字斟句酌,只要脉络清楚,具备轮廓就可以了。草拟文章的过程实际是把思维结果外在化的过程,学生应力争使文章具有连贯性和流畅性。草拟过程的顺利与否,在很大程度上取决于平时训练所达到的水平。许多考生畏惧作文,经常懒于动笔;还有一些考生认为写作很难提高,干脆放弃平时的训练。这些想法都是错误的。为真正提高写作水平,笔者建议大家从开始准备四级的那天起,就应有针对性地分体裁、分话题、分阶段地进行实战模拟,强迫自己一气呵成将文章写完,不必追求完美,不必在乎自己的文稿到底语言有多么不地道或出现多少语法错误。熟能生巧。只要坚持多写、多练,平时注意扩大阅读,写作的水平自然就会提高。
4.在反复揣摩的基础上,完善文章的草稿
自己修改作文是个好习惯,从训练之初就应注重在这个方面下功夫。修改作文必须从下面几个方面把握:注意句式结构的变化(要背诵一定的经典句型,而且要能够注意套改这样的优美句型)。例如:Not because I love Caesar less, but because I love Rome more(不是我不爱凯撒,而是我更爱罗马)。需要指出的是,虽然习作中应注意使用优美或地道的句子,但不可简单地堆砌;句子长短也要错落有致,应包含一些相对复杂的句式,同时避免犯一些基础性的语言错误。
另外,学生还要注意文中运用的英语表达必须是简单且地道的(即easy but right
English)。实际上,所谓这类的表达法界于词汇与句子之间,可称为语汇(英语中可用chunk来表达)。为了提高书面语言表达的地道性,学生应经常记忆这样的语汇,如an effective
system for environmental protection和an effective system to protect the
environment等。笔者在此处提出这个概念,且希望同学们加强这方面语汇的记忆,是因为太多的中国考生经常使用汉语的语法、英语的单词来组合一些中式(chinglish)表达。例如:高手(high hand)地道的英语表达是master hand;老手(old hand)地道的英语表达则是
seasoned hand;能手(can hand)的地道表达则是skillful hand, 以及you go me go, you no go me no go 等。
至于如何做到语言表达地道,笔者认为只有一种办法,那就是大量阅读,分类摘抄,在具体的语境中有针对性地体验英语表达。
5.正确把握遣词造句的原则
正确选择词汇非常重要,考生切不可盲目地追求大词、生词。其实,四级作文要求考生选词范围尽可能灵活宽泛,但非常忌讳以辞害义,如果能够用decrease,就别用plummet(也是下降的意思)。那么考生到底怎样才能利用有限的词汇资源,写出比较鲜活的英语作文呢?笔者在此推荐如下使用词汇技巧:
(1)尽量使用同义词避免简单重复
如“增加”可用 increase, rise, grow, climb, go up, soar等;“重要”可用 important, critical, vital, significant, crucial等。
(2)尽量使用词性变化来丰富自己的表达手段
和汉语一样,变化词性也是丰富英语表达的重要途径,是学习者提高英语水平的重要标志。英语学习者如果能够用to voice some different opinions 来替代to give/express some different opinions;或to double/triple 来表示翻倍或增加三倍则会使文章在表达上更为形象而生动。
(3)尽量使用派生形式来点缀文章亮点
英语的构词特点就是使用前缀、后缀来完成灵活多变的语言特色。例如,it is of great importance/help/use/significance 来替代 it is very
important/significant/helpful/useful 本身就是英语水平的一个综合展示。另外,考生作文如果能够出现not unnecessary/not unimportant 来表达非常重要或者必要,则更能显示考生的英语功底。
6.灵活运用句式变化的规则
前面也提过,四级作文长度要求不少于120个词,按考生作文句子的平均长度11个词估算,一般需要10—12 个句子。在四级作文评分标准里,对于句子长度虽然没有具体描述和量化给分,但是阅卷老师一般都会给文章里使用正确的长句子加上印象分,也会给错落有致的句式变化以奖励分数,如果考生能够在作文中恰当地使用一定难度的复杂句子,则更能起到锦上添花的作用。在写作训练中,考生其实可以欣赏范文,摘录名句,改装结构,模仿使用,直到熟练运用。笔者认为只要努力,下面的策略可以帮助立志争取作文高分的学生可以通过下面的几个措施来提高作文水平。
(1)欣赏范文,但不要囫囵吞枣式地整篇背诵。准备一个写作专用的笔记本,从范文欣赏中摘抄自己喜欢的、老师讲评的、值得推荐的句式结构。比如:I love you not because who you are, but because who I am when I am with you.(我爱你,并不是因为你是谁,而是因为我跟你在一起时的感觉。)Few People today, if any at all, would risk their lives
swimming across the river dominated by flesh-eating crocodiles.(今天已经很少有人,如果还有的话,愿意冒生命危险游过那条鳄鱼出没的河流。), If you fail to plan, you plan to fail.(如果你没能做计划,你就是计划着去失败。)
(2)模仿名句,但不要生搬硬套。准备足够的草稿纸,把自己摘抄来的名句,(如有不懂,应当向明白人求教)拆卸八块,然后重新组合,如是反复数次,直到熟练,甚至于可以自如组装,灵活运用。比如:上面的句子学生就可以在熟练掌握的基础上分别演绎出:I suggest that you choose English as your major not because it is easier to learn, but because it is promising when you take better prospect of employment into account.(我建议你选择英语专业,并不是因为她学起来更容易,而是因为她更有前景,如果你考虑到更好的就业机会。);Most of the students, if not all, are likely to be absorbed in PC games such as counterstrike, which is more frequently known as CS(大多数学生,如果不是所有的学生,很可能被诸如反击这样的电脑游戏所吸引,这种游戏经常被更多的人叫做CS。).(3)巧用心思,套用经典句型。鼓起勇气,说出自己想说的话,如果是母语,可能还好办,换成英语,大家最怕的是出错,出错扣分当然不好。但是利用经典句型组装一些长句子、靓句子和复杂句子对作文高分非常有帮助。比如作文开头常用句型:It is undoubted that …;there is no doubt that…;undoubtedly, there is…;It is beyond doubt that ….(4)写作是学生英语运用水平的具体体现,写作的功夫又是通过阅读、欣赏、模仿等具体手段训练出来的。写作过程中间很多实用技巧,需要读者舍得花时间、花精力、花心思去挖掘、去发现,只要你定期阅读我们的辅导专栏,相信你一定会收获N多的惊喜。
第四篇:英语四级写作万能
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1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______.It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.【外语教育&网】
4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while.Obviously,______,but why? 新东方英语四级:http://edu.21cn.com/kcnet1820/ 英语四级一对一咨询qq:1613508081
第五篇:四级英语写作
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(一)Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注释:
1、XX的第一个优点
2、支持XX的做法来源:恒星英语学习网
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二个优点
5、举例证明优点二
相应作文:The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).说明原因型模板
(二)In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).相应作文: The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.说明原因型模板
(三)For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The
significance for(6).Therefore,(7).注释:
1、人们针对XX的态度和举措
2、归纳现状
3、第一个原因
4、第二个原因
5、第三个原因
6、重申造成现状的最重要原因
相应作文:Pollution Most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason, I think, is(the reason of harmful substances into environment.for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however, they pollute air, water and land).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in the world.everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment).The significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.Therefore,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).说明原因型模块
(四)These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since
(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注释:
1、提出论题
2、说明现状
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解决方法
相应作文:Pollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more, since(the industrial revolution),it is natural that(a great number of factories have been
springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth.We should do something such as(planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.图表式作文写作模板
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of……(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are……(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,……(第一个原因).More importantly,……(第二个原因).Most important of all,……(第三个原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).提纲式作文写作模板
1、对立观点式
A.有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么?
B.有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2、批驳观点式
A.一个错误观点。
B.我不同意。Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3、社会问题(现象)式
A.一个社会问题或者现象
B.产生的原因
C.对社会和我们生活的影响
D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E.前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论
文的写法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
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(一)Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that
观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that
观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,论据1.More importantly,论据2.Most important of all,论据3.In summary, 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
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(二)People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that
观点1.While others point out that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,论据1.For another,论据2.Last but not the least,论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或From above, we can predict that 预测。
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(三)There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that
观点1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,论据1.Furthermore,来源:恒星英语学习网
论据2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is,论据3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 总结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
展现问题篇
问题的常用词:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes
have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很
大改变。
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide
concern in the public.近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种观点都其可取之处。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.对于这种极具争议的话题,我们很难作出绝对的回答。People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗话说:不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认为______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则认为_________。There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue hat...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。Some people are of the opinion that..有些人认为_____________。Many people claim that...很多人认为_____________。A majority of 绝大多数 A large number of 很多人 Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages)有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。Those who argue for...say that...economic development of the cities.觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。Some people advocate that....有些人在坚持认为_________。They hold that...他们认为_________。People, who advocate that..., have their sound reasons(grounds)坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖。Those who strongly approve of...have cogent reasons for it.强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...有人会认为___________。来源:恒星英语学习网 People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。But others hold the view that...但是,另外一些人则认为_______。观点的用词:Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take, have, come up with,set orth, put forward等。But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。But people who are..., on the other hand , maintain that...不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。
综合篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up
with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....随着社会的发展,人们开始关注.....来源:恒星英语学习网
People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite
natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不
同的观点。
In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid
economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们
带来了很多问题。
......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the
present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“
_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题,这是无可厚非的。不过,问题是:”我们该如何抉择?"
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。