第一篇：自己整理的六级作文-我当时就是靠的这个!!!
第一部分、四六级作文：正反观点题型作文diy 写作步骤
要求考生从正反两个方面来论证某一观点，如2000年6月四级作文、1996年6月四六级作文、1996年1月英语四六级作文。对这类题型，通常分为四个步骤来写：
第一段、文章开头，简单一下事件
第二段、阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明：
主题句＋理由/举例1+理由/举例2+理由/举例3
第三段、阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明：
主题句＋理由/举例1+理由/举例2+理由/举例3
第四段、表明自己的观点结束全文 在结尾的时候，一定要表明自己的观点。
第二部分、正反观点题型作文diy写作范文练习［实战演练］
directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic china jointing wto.you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:
1、加入wto给我们带来的好处；
2、加入wto给我们带来的不利方面；
3、我们该如何做。
［diy写作模板：架构阶段］
第一段：文章的开头
开篇句句：________finally succeeded in _____ after many's efforts.扩展句：_____ will influence _____ greatly.第二段：表达正面观点
主题句：____ brings ____ many benefits and opportunities.扩展句：
1、as _____ , ______ can ______.2、what's more, __________.第三段：表达反面观点
主题句：every thing has two aspects.扩展句：
1、___ can also bring us some challenges.for example, ______.2、in addition, it will be more difficult for _____ to _____, as ____.第四段：结尾，表明自己看法
结尾句：however, ____ does more good than harm to ____.扩展句：what we should do is to ______.［diy写作模板：填充阶段］
第一段：文章的开头
开篇句句：china finally succeeded in jointing the wto after many's efforts.扩展句：this event will influence the economy in china greatly
第二段：表达正面观点
主题句：jointing the wto brings china many benefits and opportunities.扩展句：
1、as a member coutry, china can enjoy many rights that can boost the development of the economy in china.2、what's more, the chinese people can buy productd of high quality with less pay.第三段：表达反面观点
主题句：every thing has two aspects.扩展句：
1、joining the wto can also bring us some challenges.for example, some producers may be wiped out because of the intense competition.2、in addition, it will be more difficult for us to get a job, as the requirement for the employees will become higher.第四段：结尾，表明自己看法
结尾句：however, this great event does more good than harm to us.扩展句：what we should do is to improve ourselves to become qualified for certain positions and live a better life.第三部分、范文
china finally succeeded in jointing the wto after many's efforts.this event will influence the economy in china greatly.jointing the wto brings china many benefits and opportunities.as a member coutry, china can enjoy many rights that can boost the development of the economy in china.what's more, the chinese people can buy productd of high quality with less pay.every thing has two aspects.joining the wto can also bring us some challenges.for example, some producers may be wiped out because of the intense competition.in addition, it will be more difficult for us to get a job, as the requirement for the employees will become higher.however, this great event does more good than harm to us.what we should do is to improve ourselves to become qualified for certain positions and live a better life.第二部分、英文信函题型作文diy写作范文练习［实战演练］
directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus.you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:
假如你是李明，请你就本学校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应包括：食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评建议，也可以都有。［diy写作模板：架构阶段］ 第一段：称呼
dear mr.president，第二段：引出写信的目的
主题句： this letter comes to you from ____.扩展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon
第三段：对学校食堂正面的看法
主题句：as you know, _____.but unfortunately, ______.扩展句：
1、___.(举例)as a result, _____.2、besides, ______.3、and what's more, _____.第四段：对学校食堂负面的看法
主题句：some people may argue that ____.扩展句：
1、for instance, ____ and ____.2、but in my opinon, ______.第五段：结尾，表明自己看法
结尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.2
扩展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.thanks.li ming ［diy写作模板：填充阶段］
第一段：称呼
dear mr.president，第二段：引出写信的目的
主题句： this letter comes to you from one of your students.扩展句： in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon
第三段：对学校食堂的看法
主题句：as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen.but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.扩展句：
1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be.(举例)as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.3、and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.第四段：别人对食堂看法
主题句：some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.扩展句：
1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.第五段：结尾，表明自己看法
结尾句：to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions，扩展句：i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.thanks.第三部分、范文 dear mr.president，this letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen.but unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be.as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.百变句子开头使你的句型多变
1.以同位语作为句子的开头。
The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party.2.以单个修饰语作为句子的开头。
这个修饰语可以是形容词、分词或副词。
Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.Secretly, the girl entered the room.With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.3.以短语修饰语作为句子的开头。
短语修饰语可以是介词短语、不定式短语、分词短语以及独立主格结构。
In front of me stood a beautiful girl.To pass the exam, the students worked hard.Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.Your homework finished, you may go home.4.用从句作为句子的开始。
If I am free, I will attend your lecture.Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.英语四六级作文套句总结 开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.Nowadays,(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that… 人们一般认为…
Many people insist that… 很多人坚持认为…
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that … 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
A lot of people seem to think that… 很多人似乎认为…
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that … 考虑所有这些因素, 我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that… 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.4 引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person.Some hold that….However, others believe that….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．
People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.Attitudes towards(drugs)vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.There are different opinions among people as to… 关于….人们的观点大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of … 该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously,….If we want to do something… , it is essential that… 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we…
只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that… 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言, 我站在…的一边.I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why… 给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, … 这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三,…
Why did… ? For one thing… For another….Perhaps the primary reason is… 为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是…或许其主要原因是….I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.The best way to solve the troubles is…
解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, ….就某事而言,…
It was obvious that…
很显然,….It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that…
可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that… 认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
过渡词
强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列举
for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except(for), to illustrate.时间
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during,nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺序
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能
presumably, probably, perhaps.解释
in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.让步
although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on theother hand, unfortunately.whereas 原因
for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.结果
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.总结
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他
Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case 图表作文常用句型
As is shown in the graph…
如图所示…
The graph shows that…
图表显示…
As can be seen from the table, …
从表格中可以看出…
From the chart, we know that…
从这张表中,我们可知… All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…
The increase of ….in the city has reached to 20%.这个城市的….增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.(一)原因1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to(lead to)(account for)the phenomenon(problem).2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4.The factors that contribute to this situation include...5.The change in...largely results from the fact that...6.We may blame...,but the real causes are...7.Part of the explanations for it is that...One of the most common factors(causes.is that...Another contributing factor(cause.is...Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that(二)比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that...but it would be foolish to claim that...5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblancest o B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think..., but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is, it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A..., but the chief faults(obvious defects)are...(三)批驳
1.It is true that..., but one vital point is being left out.2.There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3.Some people say..., but it does not hold water.4.Many of us have been under the illusion that...5.A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6.It makes no sense to argue for...7.Too much stress placed on...may lead to...8.Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that...9.Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that...(四)后果
1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is...3.It will exercise a profound influence upon...4.Its consequence can be so great that...(五)举例
1.A good case in point is...2.As an illustration, we may take...3.Such examples might be given easily.4....is often cited as an example.(六)证明
1.No one can deny the fact that...2.The idea is hardly supported by facts.3.Unfortunately, none of the available data shows...4.Recent studies indicate that...5.There is sufficient evidence to show that...6.According to statistics proved by..., it can be seen that...(七)开篇
1.Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2.Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3.Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4.Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5.Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6.Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7.Faced with..., quite a few people argue that...8.According to a recent survey,...9.With the rapid development of...,...(八)结尾
1.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...2.It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3.It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4.In conclusion, it is imperative that...5.There is no easy method, but...might be of some help.6.To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must...7.In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9.We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10.Taking all these into account, we...11.Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...一． 上升增长
1．…add up to… 增加了eg.The total amount of … added up to 14 billion pounds(14%)in 1994.2． to jump to / to soar to…… 一跃达到/ 猛增到…
eg.The total working days lost soared to 10 million in 1979.3．…an increase of about…percent as compared with…… 与…相比大约增加了…
eg.In August as many as 39 car accidents were reported, indicating an increase of about 79% as compared with the number of January.4．…to experience an increase/incline …有了增长
eg.Tobacco consumption is experiencing an incline.二． 下降，减少
1．…to sink/drop/reduce to… 减少到…
eg.The rate of strikes sank/dropped to the lowest point in 1979.2．…to experience a decrease/decline …有了减少
eg.Tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease.注意：
修饰上升/减少的副词有：
rapidly slowly dramatically respectively 表达上升/减少的最后状态的词有：
the highest peak the lowest point 10 million 10%
三． 起伏
1．…to go up and down …起伏不定
eg.The strike rate went up and down during the period from 1952 to 1967.2．There be ups and downs …有起有伏
eg.Between 1972 and 1979, there were several ups and downs in（某方面）.四． 稳定
1．…to remain steady/level/unchanged …保持稳定，几乎不变
eg.The rate of …remained steady(fairly level/almost unchanged)during the four years from 1963 to 1967.2．…to level off(vi.)
eg.After a steady decline for a whole decade, the …rate shows signs of leveling off.注意：
修饰起伏或稳定状态的副词有：
almost fairly 可以用于表达起伏，稳定状态的句子中的词组或句型：
the general situation was not worsening
show indications of improvement
it can be predicted that…
eg.The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,and it can be predicted that the general situation was not worsening.eg.The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,showing signs of improvement in …
五． 成正比，反比
1．…be in direct /inverse ratio to/with 与…成正比/反比
eg.Male illustrations are in direct ratio to /with the advancement of grades, while female illustrations are in inverse ratio.六． 占百分之几，几分之几
1….to form/comprise/make up/constitute ….percent …占百分之…
eg.Women comprise more than 50% of the U.S.population.eg.Females make up only 24% of the illustrations whereas males constitute 76%.2．…to form/comprise/constitute a half/third/fourth of……占…的1/2,1/3,1/4
eg.Female illustrions form less than a fourth of the total.3．…account for…percent 占百分之几
eg.……, accounting for approximately 20 percent of…
七． 倍数
1．A be …times as much/many as B
eg.The annual rainfall of Hunan is 5 times as much as that of Sichuan.2．A doubles/is half/triples B A是B的两倍，一半，三倍
eg.The annual rainfall of Jidda doubles that of Janta, but is only half the amount of rain Kuwait receives each year.附一 圆盘比例型图表 例： 一个圆盘显示了大学生在food, books, transportations, entertainment, clothes, unknown中的开销，它们各自占的比例依次是60%,3%,5%,10%,10%,12%，要求你描叙这个圆盘图。
描述:
The above pie chart consists of 6 segments, the largest one representing food, which accounts for 60% of the total.Clothes and entertainment each takes up 10%.5% goes to transportation and 3% books.All the rest expenses, 12% of all ,is spend on unknown items.总结写作模式：
…pie chart consists of…segments, the largest one representing…,which accounts for …of the total.…each takes up….…goes to….All the rest…, …of all,……..八.原因结果
1….(结果)…, owing to(原因)[owing to 为分词结构]
2….(结果)…, attributable to（原因）[attributable to为形容词短语]
3….(结果)lie in the fact that（原因）[ 同位语从句 ]
4….（结果）result from（原因）[句型一般]
5.It is precisely because（原因）…that（导致结果）… [强调结构]
6.…, as a result, …（导致结果）… [as a result做插入语] 10
7.（原因）be responsible for（结果）[常见句型]
8.（原因），which in turn（结果）
eg.They give rise to unfair competition, which in turn throws original businesses into a commercial panic.九．采取措施，提出建议
1.My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows.In the first place,….Secondly,….Finally,… [常见句型]
2.If we let the situation go as it is, ….By that time, ….如果让这种情况继续发展下去，那么……。
到那个时候，……。[比较好的句型]
3.More and more people are realizing the importance of…[进行时态，more and more比many好]
4.Great efforts/More measures/Due attention must be taken/paid to do …[ 被动语态，due attention 和be paid to 搭配]
5.If……, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果（我们怎么怎么做），那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。[条件句，反问句]
6.It is important/necessary/urgent/desirable(希望)/advisable(明智)for sb.to do sth.[It is …for …to do…句型]
7.enhance the awareness of people that…
8.The first nut for us to crack is… 我们首先要解决的是……。[比The first thing we should do is … 句型 高级的多，精彩的多，生动的多]
9.……as soon as possible [常见句型]
10.sth.be of the utmost importance [ be of n.结构，比sth.be much important好]
十．方式，比较
1.(Just)as …, so… 正如… [ 比较句型 ]
eg.Just as water is the most important of liquids, so air is the most important of gases.2.in much the same way/manner that… 正如…, 和…一样
eg.The Americans spend Christmas Day in much the same way that the Europeans do.十一.让步
1.now that …… 既然…… [让步从句]
eg.Now that the decision has been made, we must try our best to carry it out.2.unless…not… [ 让步从句]
eg.It is a vicious cycle and unless you consider these social, economic and environmental problems in one context, you are not serious about meeting the challenges.[注意例句中的consider sth.in one context句型:把什么事情放在一起加以综合考虑]
十二.强调句
1.only [既是强调句,又是倒装句]
eg.Only in this way can you hope to improve the present situation.2.It is …that…
eg.It is because he was too careless that he failed in the exam.3.nothing but 只不过；只有…
eg.If what we have been striving for is nothing but pleasure-seeking, our nation will be deprived of the right to rise.(这里nothing but 可以去掉,不影响句意,但有了nothing but,就强调了后面的名词)11
十三.假设
1.Supposing……, it is likely that….假设…, 那么很可能… [假设, 虚拟语态]
eg.Supposing you wanted to buy a washing machine, it is more than likely you would obtain details regarding performance, price, etc.from an advertisement.十四.反问
1.What else can …? …………还能做什么呢?
eg.What else can the poor parents do but obey? 这些可怜的家长除了听从外还能做什么呢?
2.How could ……? 怎能….eg.How could I put the English books aside to read pastime books?
十五.比较
1.A is to B what X is to Y.A对于B 就象X对于Y
eg.Food is to man what oil is to machines.2.……more…, less…
eg.The closer to Christmas, the crazier they get;they become more agitated, less patient.十六.否定
1.双重否定
not uncommon = common平常的,普通的 not unusual = usual平常的，通常的 not inevitable=evitable 可以避免的
(尽量把要强调的普通的形容词改成双重否定, 为文章多增加亮点)
2.by no means 并没有;当然不
3.no longer/more 不再
eg.I am no longer that ignorant girl.十七.程度
1.all the more 更加
eg.That makes London all the more fascinating, doesn't it?
eg.It is all the more surprising therefore that…
2.more than 做副词, 意为 “多过…”, “比…以上”, “比…更”
eg.I am more than happy to hear from you.3.more than you can… 远超过你…
eg.The situation is very abominable more than you can stand.环境非常恶劣,你无法忍受.十八.论相互关系
1.A have much(nothing)to do with B
2.A be closely related to B
3.A be directly bound up with B
4.a definite link between …and…
十九.直陈观点
1.more than…can 简直不,无法,难以…
eg.The beauty of the city is more than I can describe.2.beyond description 无法描述
eg.The beauty of the city is beyond description.3.There is no point(use)in doing… …是没有任何意义的.4.The first nut for us to crack is … 我们首先要解决的问题是…
5.short-sighted policy 眼光短浅的政策
6.while ……with one hand, ……with the other.当(我们)一方面…., 而另一方面…
eg.While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.7.far from 远离,远远不,非但不
eg.Far from taking exception(take exception:反对), no one is even mildly surprised.8.be bound to
eg.Any discussion of this topic is bound to question the aims of education.9.(or)vice-versa 反之亦然
10.sth.be measured in terms of … sth.用…来衡量
eg.“success” is measured in terms of freedom from insecurity.11….(现象)…, upon which views vary from person to person.12.A be more essential to B.对B来说, A是尤为关键重要的.13.Distinguished scientific accomplishment is a matter of opportunity and of continuous and concentrated effort over long years.(很优美的句子,值得借鉴)
14.from the …point of view 从…角度来看
eg.From the health point of view 从健康的角度来看
15.……must be rooted out in order to ….…必须根除以…
eg.Moral corruption must be rooted out in order to preserve the integrity of the state.为了使国家健康发展,必须根除腐败.16.…represent only the tip of the iceberg.…….只是冰山一角
eg.The most famous stars represent only the tip of the iceberg.17.The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity.科技的快速发展带给世界生产力和人类经济和社会的发展一个强劲的推动力(2001年****的七.一讲话).18.….stand tall and aim far, broaden one's vision and give full play to one's intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of reform, opening-up and the modernization drive.站的高看的远,开扩自己的视野,在改革开放和现代化建设的大舞台上充分发挥个人才智(2001年****的七.一讲话).(句中很多的词组都是作文中可以运用到的,比如改革开放:reform(and)opening-up等)
19….demonstrate the value of one's life and work hard to achieve feats that will live up to the expectations of the people and the times.证实自己的人生价值,努力的工作取得成就,而不辜负人民和时代的期望.(出处同上)
20.When asked about…, the overwhelming majority of people say that ….But other people think of … as…./ But I think quite differently.(对报刊上某一问题(已有不同的人发表了不同的观点)发表自己的观点)
21.It is generally believed/accepted/held that… 通常认为….It is no denying the fact that….无可否认…
23……… , so…that…
eg.The river is very clear, so clear that you can see the fishes coming and going in it.eg.Everything is covered with a thick layer of dust, so poisonous that all the grass, trees, vegetables and flowers gradually die.二十.辨证分析
1.Just as the popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.From one side,….from the 13 other side,….正如一个谚语所说的, “每个硬币都有两面(事物都是一分为二的)”.从一方面看……… 从另一方面来看………
二十一.比喻,拟人
1.They are taken prisoners by fame and their achievements turn into a bar to further advance.2.True and deep love of life is the spring from which flow courage, confidence and power.二十二.副词
1.admittedly 应当承认:
Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 简而言之:
The answer is simply money.3.discreetly 小心谨慎地:
point out discreetly that…
4.conceivably 可以想象地:
Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.5.surely 肯定地:
This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.6.eagerly 渴望地
7.increasingly 不断增长地
While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.8.honestly: 诚实地:
the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心实意地关心它的人民的福利
9.certainly: 当然地
As individuals we are certainly weak, but if …作为个人,我们当然是弱小的,但是如果…
第二篇：小学教育心理学小结,我靠这个过了84分
1.学习动机的激发（创设问题情境，实施启发式教学。根据作业难度，恰当控制动机水平。充分利用反馈信息，妥善进行奖惩。正确指导结果归因，促使学生继续努力。2.知识直观的类型（实物直观、模像直观、言语直观）
3.如何提高知识直观的效果（灵活运用各种直观形式，运用感知规律，突出直观对象的特点。培养学生的观察能力。让学生充分参与直观过程。）16.影响迁移的主要因素（相似性、原有认知结构、学习的心向与定势）
4.提高问题解决能力的教学提高学生知识储备的数量与质量（帮助学生牢固地记忆知识。提供多种变式，促进知识的概括。重视知识间的联系，建立网络化结构。）教授与徐连解决问题的方法和策略（结合具体学科，教授思维方法。外化思路，进行显示性教学）提供多种练习的机会。培养思考问题的习惯（鼓励学生主动发现问题/鼓励学生多角度提出假设。鼓励自我评价与反思）8.影响问题解决的主要因素（问题得特征。已有的知识经验、定势与功能固着）
5.小学品德发展的基本特征逐步形成和谐的道德,认识能力道德言行从比较协调到逐步分化,明显地表现出自纪律的形成）6.教学目标的分类布卢姆（认知目标：知识、领会、应用、分析、综合、评价。情感目标：接受、反应、形成价值观念。动作技能目标：知觉、模仿、操作、准确、连贯、习惯化。)
7.促进知识保持的方法（深度加工材料，有效运用记忆术、进行组块化编码、适当过度学习、合理进行复习）
9.如何培养创造性（创设有利于创造性产生的环境：创设宽松的心理环境，给学生留有充分选择的余地，改革考试制度与考试内容。注重创造性个性的塑造：保护好奇心、解除个体对答错问题的恐惧心理、鼓励独立性和创新精神、重视非逻辑思维能力。创设培养创造性的课程，教授创造性思维策略：发散思维训练、推测与假设训练、自我设计训练、头脑风暴训练）10.皮亚杰的道德发展阶段论（自我中心阶段、权威阶段、可逆性阶段、公正阶段）
11.良好品德的培养（有效的说服、树立良好的榜样、利用群体约定、结余恰当的奖励与惩罚）
12.影响课堂管理的因素（教师的领导风格、班级规模、班级的性质、对教师的期望）
13.教育心理学的作用帮助教师准确地了解问题、为实际教学提供科学的理论指导、帮助教师预测并干预学生、帮助教师结合实际教学进行研究）14.学生心理发展的四个基本特征（连续性与阶段性、定向性与顺序性、不平衡性、差异性）
15.自我意识对人格发展的影响（自我意识的水平制约着个人对自己的人格形成和发展进行调节的能力、自我评价的性质决定人格发展的方向、自我调控能力制约着人格的发展）
17迁移的作用（迁移对于提高解决问题的能力具有直接的促进作用、迁移是习得的经验得以概括化、系统化的有效途径、是能力与品德形成的关键环节、迁移规律对于学习者、教育工作者一级有关的培训人员具有重要的指导作用。）18促进迁移的教学（精选教材、合理编排教学内容、合理安排教学程序、教授学习策略，提高迁移意识）
19.知识学习的作用（只是的学习和掌握是学校教学的主要任务之
一、知识的学习和掌握是学生各种技能形成和能力发展的重要基础、只是学习是创造性产生的必要前提。）20.遗忘的理论解释（痕迹衰退说、干扰说、动机说）
21.如何有效地进行知识的概括（配合运用正例和反例、提供变式、科学地进行比较、启发学生进行自觉概括）
22.操作技能的培训要求（准确地示范与讲解、必要而适当的学习、充分而有效的反馈、建立稳定清晰的动觉）
23.资源管理策略（学习时间管理、学习环境的设置、学习努力和心境管理）
24.学习策略训练的原则（主体性原则、内化性原则、特定性原则、生成性原则、有效的监控原则）
25、学习策略训练的方法（指导教学模式、程序化训练模式、完形训练模式、交互式教学模式、合作学习模式）
26.高创造性者的个性特征（具有幽默感、有抱负和强烈的动机、能够容忍模糊与错误、喜欢幻想、具有强烈的好奇心、有独立性）27.态度与品德学习的一般过程（依从、认同、内化）
28.影响态度与品德学习的一般条件（外部条件：家庭教养方式、社会风气、同伴群体、内部条件：认知失调、态度定势、道德认识水平）39.合作学习的五个特征（分工合作、密切配合、各自尽力、社会互动、团体历程）
30.小学生中易产生的心理障碍（儿童多动综合征、学习困难综合征、儿童过度焦虑反应、儿童厌学症。儿童强迫行为）
31.心理健康的教育意义（预防精神疾病、保障学生心理健康的需要。提高学生心理素质，促进其人格及安全发展的需要。对学校日常教育教学工作的配合与补充）36有效自编测验的特征（信度、效度、区分度）
32.行为改变的基本方法（强化法、代币奖励法、行为塑造法、示范法、暂时隔离发、自我控制法）
33.学校教育中，教师常用的教学方法（讲解法、演绎法、课题问答、练习、游戏）
34.课堂纪律的类型（教师促成的纪律、集体促成的纪律、任务促成的纪律、自我促成的纪律）
35.教学评价的分类（形成性评价和总结性评价、常模参照评价和标准参照评价、配置型评价和诊断性评价、正式评价和非正式评价）.37.教师成长的历程（关注生存阶段、关注情境阶段、关注学生阶段）
38.教师的特征与职业成就之间的关系（教师的认知特征与成就之间的关系：思维的条理性、口头表达能力、组织教学活动的能力。教师的人格特征与职业成就之间的关系：教师的热心和同情心、教师富有激励和想象的倾向性）
39.专家与新教师的差异：（课时计划的差异。课堂教学过程的差异：课堂规则的制定与执行、吸引学生的注意、教材的呈现、课堂练习、家庭作业的检查、教学策略的运用。课后评价的差异）
40.新教师成长与发展的基本途径（观摩和分析优秀教师的教学活动、微格教学、对教学经验的反思）
第三篇：这个历史挺靠谱2
这个历史挺靠谱
————读后感
《这个历史挺靠谱》的作者袁腾飞是中国通俗讲史界领军人物，百万级畅销书作家，引领一代讲史新风，善于以幽默犀利、灵活多变的语言风格，讲述海量的历史知识。这本书是从混乱的中世纪世界开始写的，在这几百年的历史中，作者不仅把著名的大事件描述了下来，还把一些国家的政权动荡也写了进去。它的内容很全，但不深奥，每件事的起因、经过、结果都描述得很精简，不像其他历史书，堆砌了一大堆东西，读来如同咬蜡。这本书能让我们从最简短的语言中学到最多的历史，完全不让人心烦。可见作者其知识的渊博，让读者读来更有趣味性。
袁腾飞老师语言浅显直白，通俗易懂、诙谐幽默却不失严谨，那些发生在几百年前的事与人物，似乎就在我们眼前；相比太多照本宣科式的教学，整本书充满着幽默、诙谐。看完这一整本书后，我已经开怀大笑了好几次，内容实在太风趣了，里面不时还有些流行语言，让我们有不少亲切感，难怪学生都那么喜欢听他讲历史。
袁腾飞讲的历史就是为今天作为参考，所以你看他时常都会联系到当下的现实。他的语言风格也是完全当代化的，轻松诙谐，但又不显得轻浮。现在很多追求轻松文风的往往都失于为调侃而调侃，不幽默而故作幽默，其结果就是飘在天上。而之所以会画虎不成反类犬就是因为文化底蕴不够，袁腾飞这一点尚可圈可点。他的行文是IT语言和古诗一色，英语和文言齐飞，不拘一格游刃有余。
总的来说，袁腾飞的《历史》确实很“靠谱”，而我们也应该多读读历史，因为真正的历史，会都会我们很多东西。
第四篇：精选六级作文
The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以这样理解：城市史人创造的，它不断地演进、演化和成长为一个有机系统。人是这个有机系统中最具活力和最富有创新能力的细胞。人的生活与城市的形态和发展密切互动。随着城市化进程的加速，城市的有机系统与地球大生物圈和资源体系之间相互作用也日益加深和扩大。人、城市和地球三个有机系统环环相扣，这种关系贯穿了城市发展的历程，三者也将日益融合成为一个不可分割的整体。
For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.为了更好地理解“城市，让生活更美好”，上海世博会还设有五个副主题分别是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市经济的繁荣”、“城市科技的创新”、“城市社区的重塑”、“城市和乡村的互动”。
Creating a Green Campus
Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避错指导
本次作文在题材上，虽然仍然延续了我们所熟悉的校园类话题，但与社会背景有很大关系。刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会使环保减排这个主题成为焦点，在全世界都提倡可持续发展、和谐发展这一背景下的“绿色校园”，同时也是一个社会热点话题，这是我们审题时所必须考虑的。另外开篇时，切忌拖泥带水，应直截了当，使阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。
【生动的用词】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound长远的;sustainable可持续的;recyclable可循环的。
【丰富的短语】bring benefit to带来利益;play a crucial role in发挥关键作用;under the burden of在„„重负下;come true实现;call for要求。
【同义词转换】
作文表达除了准确，还要做到句式多变，词汇灵活多样。
1.realize → be aware of 意识到
We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我们最好意识到周围污染的严峻性。
2.keep → preserve 保持
It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育学生意识到保护环境的重要性。
3.lead → conduct 引导
This will help conduct the activities of the college students.这有助于引导大学生的行为。
【话题备考锦囊】
6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“绿色校园”绝不仅仅是一个绿色环境。
7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建设“绿色校园”将会极大激励学生参与环境保护。
8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.为全面实施“绿色校园”，必须采取有效措施。
9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校园建设不仅对学生的身体发展很重要，而且对他们的心理健康也很重要。
10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫无疑问，对于绿色校园应该给与更多的思考。
【话题词汇拓展】
devastation n.毁坏
disastrous a.损失惨重的 doom v.厄运，毁灭
existence n.存在，生活
healthful a.健康的
messy a.肮脏的，凌乱的 participation n.分享，参与
preserve v.保存，保护
preventive a.预防性的 purify v.澄清，净化
stimulation n.激励，鼓舞
arouse consciousness 唤起意识 1.上图所示为某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年参加成人教育(或继续教育)的人数情况，请描述其变化;
2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从社会发展及竞争能力方面加以说明)
3.请预测我国成人教育(继续教育)的前景
A Boom in Continuing Education
From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中国传统节日受到冷遇，西方节日日益升温已成为趋势
2.形成这种现象的原因
3.你对这种现象的态度
【范文】
The Prevalence of Western Holidays
It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.据统计，在网上聊天交友、玩网络游戏是目前我国大学生上网的主要活动内容
2.专家认为，那些沉迷于聊天和游戏的大学生，不仅耗费了金钱、时间和精力，还影响了正常的学业和人际交往
3.我们应当如何看待大学生上网的问题
【范文】
What are College Students doing on the Internet?
Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的选择
A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校园“考证族”的队伍不断壮大，很多学生忙于考区各种资格证书 大学生忙考证的利弊 你的观点
On Qualification-obtaining Fever
Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好词佳句]
好词佳句总结：
fever 狂热可用指某种现象
vocational qualification 职业证照
work-related 与工作有关
credentials 学历资历等的资格
at the expense of以„„为牺牲
同学们注意下范文最后一句，使用该句式又稳妥，又能拿个不错的分数。
From my point of view, what matters most is„ not„
1)道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损 2)分析道路事故发生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故发生率
行文思路：
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。
高分范文：
Road Accidents
Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英语六级作文预测范文第二篇
1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前
2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题
3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做？
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状；指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法；从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。
【参考范文】
Cyber Crimes
With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。
However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。
As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。
1)有些人会选择收入高但工作时间长的工作；有些人则宁愿选择收入低但工作时间却相对较短的工作
2)如果让你选择，你会选择哪种工作？理由是„
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的工作选择，提纲第2点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对工作的两种不同选择倾向：一些人即使需要工作更长的时间也会选择收入高的工作，一些人则宁愿拿低工资也会选择工作时间较短的工作；表明“我”会选择什么类型的工作，说明“我”这样选择的理由。
【参考范文】
My Choice for Job
A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。
However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。
As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。
1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人
2)为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起了许多关注
3)你怎么看？为什么？
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议的现象，提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述年轻人热衷选秀节目的现象，引出对其的争议；表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法，并说明“我”的理由。
【参考范文】
Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People
Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。
It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。
In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象
2)产生这一现象的原因
3)如何解决这一问题
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象，指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。
【参考范文】
College Students’Job Hunting
Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。
Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。
Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。
In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠远的汽笛声中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和泪水交汇。这是挥别的一刻：向母亲、父亲、儿子、女儿、妻子、丈夫、恋人、老师、学生、朋友、同事、邻居„„；向5月12日14时28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、忧愁、欢喜„„那些美丽的温馨日子。
今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暂的告别。生命，并非仅仅是呼吸和心跳。生离死别，不是生命的边界。亲人们没有离去，一切都将延续。在废墟上嘹亮的婴儿啼哭声里，一个叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。
May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，让我们所有中华儿女永远记住这一天吧，我们的“国难日”，中华民族的历史本上，铭刻了太多的灾难，但这永远也难掩我们民族的辉煌，一次次的灾难，一次次的负重前行，那么就让我们掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干净所有的废墟，在曾经是家园的土地上，重建我们的家园，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。
Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往会变得相当脆弱，灾后重建，坚强就变得尤其重要，三分钟过后，我们要擦干眼泪，我们不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因为亲人会在天堂看着我们，痛不欲生、伤心欲绝不是他们想看到的，好地地活下去，是他们对我们的期望，想一想，那废墟中以已命换子命的母亲，“亲爱的宝贝，如果你能活下去，要记住，妈妈爱你”；想一想那为了救四个孩子而牺牲了的老师，我们的走了的这些亲人，用自己的生命给我们争来了活的机会，为了他们，我们也要活的更好。
We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。
对于我们所有中国人来说，都是一个终生难忘记的日子，因为今天，是我们的“国难日”，悲情汶川，举国志哀，我们用这样一种方式，来纪念那些在地震中逝去的亲人，我们用这样的一种方式，为他们招魂，在奔向天国的路上，希望他们能够一路走好，当他们回头遥望故土大地时，会看见成千上万的他们的同胞手足，在仰望苍穹为他们祈祷，所以他们不会孤独、不会寂寞。
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。
1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。
___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。
___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。
___________________________________________________________________________.【KEY】
1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大学生自主创业已经很普遍
2.大学生自主创业的好处
3.我的看法
范文：
Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)
第五篇：六级作文
话题：Open Courses
1.现在网络公开课很盛行;2.网络公开课有不少好处，也存在一些问题;3.我对此的建议。
范文：
Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.题目：On Blind-date Show
1、目前电视相亲节目很流行
2、出现这种现象的原因是：
3、我对此的看法
范文：
Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.题目：Self-help Traveling
1、越来越多的大学生选择“自助游”
2、也会带来一些问题
3、我的看法
范文：
Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.题目：On Adversity
1、每个人都会碰到逆境
2、人们对逆境的看法不一
3、我的看法
范文：
Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats，which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad
In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.话题：树立目标
1.树立目标很重要2.原因是„„3.如何设立和达到目标
The Importance of Goal
There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi话题：How to Enhance
the Sense of Happiness
1.人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面，也指„„
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The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects.Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love.Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness.It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness.To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.1.当今社会，社交网站很流行 2.各人对此看法不同 3.我的看法
话题：Social Network Sites
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Social Network Sites
In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people.Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games.Those sites have become a part of their life.The public hold different views on this phenomenon.Some are in favor of those sites for they provide many opportunities to know other people and to know what’s happening in the world.Besides, they’re very convenient to access.One can use a computer or cell phone to log on at home, in a restaurant, or even in the subway.But some people don’t approve of the social network sites.They say that people are wasting too much time on the sites.Some even get addicted to them and abandon their real life.After all, they don’t live in the virtual world.In my opinion, the social network sites can be very helpful when we want to keep in touch with friends, but we must remember that the real world is the most important in our life.1.有人相信知识能改变命运2.有人则认为当今社会光靠知识已经很难改变命运3.我认为„„
Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?
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Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?
Some people have always believed that knowledge can change their destiny.Most of them are those from undeveloped areas, and by knowledge they usually mean diploma.They believe that if they send the kids in the family to college and that the kids get a diploma, they can change the kids’ destiny from doing farm work to enjoy a modern and advanced life in the city.However, some hold a different view.They say that in today’s society, knowledge alone is not enough to change destiny.To succeed in this complicated age, one needs not only knowledge, but also good communicating skills and a wide horizon, which cannot be easily learned in class.Knowledge itself is also more complicated than before.With technologies constantly advancing, one needs good learning ability to keep up with the time.In my opinion, knowledge is essential, but it is not everything.To change the destiny, one needs to keep learning various skills, to widen his horizons, and to keep pace with the latest trend.
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