MBA MPA考试联考英语小作文大作文万能

第一篇：MBA MPA考试联考英语小作文大作文万能

一、建议信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 处境现状（严重）。S2 有建议。S3 建议1。S4 建议2。（S5 建议3。）Para3 S1 感谢。S2 期待。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions to improve the service of our library.【P2S1】Although our library functions positively(积极的)in enriching the students’ campus life, its service goes far from being desired.【P2S2】In my eyes, the following measures need to be taken as soon as possible.【P2S3】In the first place, why not arrange an inquiry desk at the circulation hall? 【P2S4】In addition, the students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines.(【P2S5】Lastly, you should(/ had)better maintain strict order at the reading room.)

【P3S1】Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter(/I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜)(/I am looking forward to seeing some new changes in the service).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

二、感谢信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的（感谢）

Para2 S1 原因1。S2 原因2。S3 感谢方式（邀请对方）。Para3 S1 再次感谢。S2 祝福对方。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my sincere thanks(/gratitude)to you for your warm reception(/hospitality)while I was in America(/While I participated(参加，参与)in the exchange program in America).【P2S1】Your generous(慷慨的, 大方的,慷慨给予的)help made it possible that I had a pleasant stay and a chance to know America culture better.【P2S2】Besides, I consider it an honor for me to made friends with you and I will cherish(珍爱, 珍视, 爱护，钟爱)the goodwill(友谊)you showed to me wherever I go.【P2S3】I do(/genuinely /sincerely)hope that you would(/will)visit China in due course(适当的时候)so that I could enjoy the opportunity to repay yours kinds and refresh our friendship(加深友谊).【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt gratitude(由衷感谢).【P3S2】Wish you all the best.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

三、祝贺信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的 Para2 S1 艰辛（你）。S2 激动（你）。S3 值得（你）。S4 鼓舞（我）。S5 骄傲（我）。

Para3 S1 再次祝贺。S2 期待更大成功。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my warmest congratulations on your graduation from the Graduate School(/your promotion to general manager of the company(荣升公司总经理)).【P2S1】I know how hard you have worked to attain(（通常经过努力）实现, 达到, 获得，得到)this goal.【P2S2】Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition(after all these years of painstaking efforts(艰苦努力)).【P2S3】Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you.【P2S4】On the other hand, for me, it will be a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded(看到你的能力得到回报).【P2S5】In short, I take great pride in your current achievements.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt(/sincere/genuine)congratulations on your success.【P3S2】I wish you will farther success(更大的成功).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

四、推荐信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1（其）现状。S2（其）目的。S3（其）困难。S4（其）愿望。S5（己）期待。

Para3 S1 感谢。S2 期待（套语）。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing(/recommending)to you Li Ming, one of my best friends(/colleagues/students/classmates).【P2S1】Presently(/At present)he(/she)is studying at Sichuan University.【P2S2】He(/She)will go to Harvard University in your place for farther study.【P2S3】As it will be the first time for him to study abroad, he will most likely encounter（碰到）a variety of problems(通用句).【P2S4】He(/She)hopes to obtain your guidance in many ways.【P2S5】I would be grateful if you could can kindly offer help(通用句).【P3S1】Thank you for your due attention to this letter(/Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

五、辞职信

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Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 有因。S2 原因（工作性质）1。S3 原因2。S4 强调目的（辞职）。Para3 S1 感谢（曾经提供机会）。S2 期待批准。（S3 致歉损失。）

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Mr.Wang，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of informing you of my decision to(通用句)resign(/resigning)from my current position.【P2S1】After two months of work, I find it inappropriate(不合适的)for me to take the position as an editor for the following reasons.【P2S2】Firstly(/In the first place / First and foremost), I ever expected the job to be challenging and rewarding(挑战与回报), which has turned out to be the opposite.【P2S3】Besides, the salary has proved to be much lower than you originally promised and I have a large family to spport.【P2S4】Therefore I have made up my mind quit after much deliberation(深思熟虑;研究).【P3S1】Thanks(/Thank you)for having offered me the splendid(/golden)opportunity to work with the outstanding staff(优秀员工)here.【P3S2】I genuinely(/sincerely)do hope that you will approve of my resignation.(【P3S3】I am genuinely sorry for any inconvenience caused.)

Yours faithfully(忠实地), Zhang Wei

六、求职信

1、模板：

Para1（S1 自我介绍。）S2 写信目的。Para2 S1 有资质（条件）。S2 条件1（教育背景）。S3 条件2（工作经验）。（S4 条件3（自身素质）。）S4 其它详细见简历。

Para3 S1 感谢。S2 期待。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position as advertised in China Daily(/the local newspaper / on TV).【P1S2】I am an undergraduate from Sichuan University.【P2S1】My qualifications are as follows(/My qualification, I believe, amply meet your requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, my specialty(/specialty / major), English education(/marking), ensures(/guarantees(保证;商品保证))that my educational background is right(/perfectly)in line with(跟„一致)this job.【P2S3】In second, my previous experience as a middle school English teacher(/a sales manager(„/assistant))has helped lay a solid foundation(坚实的基础)for the work here.(【P2S4】In the third, I a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.)【P2S5】Please refer to my attached my resume for more details.【P3S1】I would appreciate it very much if you could schedule an interview.【P3S2】Looking(/I am looking)forward to your reply(to hear from you)at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

七、邀请信（公函）

1、模板：

Para1 S1 自我介绍。S2 目的。

Para2 S1 活动1。S2（套语）邀请。S3 活动2。S4（套语）邀请。Para3 S1 再次邀请。S2 期待（回复/来否）。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam，【P1S1】I am head(/director)of the Household Electric Appliance Plant, which is a leading manufacturer of high-quality recording equipment.【P1S2】I am writing this letter for the purpose of inviting you to an exclusive(发布会)presentation of our new models of Digital Recorders.【P2S1】The occasion(活动)(/presentation)will take place at Noble Hotel on the third of January.【P2S2】I would feel it a great honor if you could come.【P2S3】There will also be a reception at two P.M.【P2S4】I hope you will attend too.【P3S1】Since your presence(参加)is so important to this presentation, I do(/sincerely / sincerely)hope you can make it(由衷希望您想法设法前来参加).【P3S2】We are looking forward to seeing on the day.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

八、道歉信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 致歉（具体原因）。S2 深深歉意。S3 解决办法1。S4 问题解决。Para3 S1 再次歉意。S2 期待谅解。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Bob，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making an apology to you for my carelessness(粗心大意)(/expressing / conveying / extending my sincere apologies to you for my carelessness).【P2S1】When I arrived(/returned)home, I found(that)I had forgotten to return the music CD that you were so kind to lend me.【P2S2】I feel badly(/awfully)sorry for it.【P2S3】As I understand this CD is one of your favorites, I’ll try my best to send it back as soon as possible.【P2S4】According to the regulations concerned, it will take almost a week to reach Canada.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt apology.【P3S2】I sincerely hope that we can keep corresponding with each other.(/ 【P3S1】Once again, I am sorry to my inconvenience caused.【P3S2】I sincerely hope you can accept my apology.)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

九、投诉信（complaint）

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的 Para2 S1 原因（总述）。S2 原因1。S3 原因2。S4 处境。Para3 S1 要求。S2 期待解决。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

To whom if may concern(/ To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making a complain about the laptop I bought last week.【P2S1】The reason for my dissatisfaction(/complaint)is that a few problems occurred in the use.【P2S2】To begin with, the system often broke down for no reason and some important data were lost.【P2S3】More over(/ in addition), the color of the screen was abnormal, and could not be adjusted.【P2S4】Considering these(鉴于以上原因), I find it difficult to go on with my work.【P3S1】I believe that you will take this matter into serious consideration and gibe a satisfactory reply.【P3S2】At the same time(/In the meantime / meanwhile), I sincerely hope to see improvement in your products(/service / management).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十、请求信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 写信目的Para2 S1 有要求。S2 要求1。S3 要求2。S4 要求3。S5 我的计划。Para3 S1 再次请求。S2 感谢/期待。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of finding a child in a remote area to offer financial aid(/contributing to “Project Hope” by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area).【P2S1】My requirement are as follows(/The candidate should amply meet the following requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, he must be very poor and truly in need of help.【P2S3】Besides, he must be self-motivated and eager to learn.【P2S4】Last but not the least, he must be willing to return to his home town after graduation from university.(【P2S5】And I would send him a certain sum of money each semester term from this year on until he finishes his higher education.【P3S1】I would be most grateful if you could help me in this matter.【P3S2】Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.(通用句)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十一、通知

1、模板：

Para1 S1 缘由。S2 主题。S3 要求（总述）。S4 要求1。S5 要求2。S6时间/地点。S7希望/欢迎。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Notice 【P1S1】To improve the student’ ability and enrich campus life(/extracurricular activities(课外活动)), the Postgraduates’ Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization.【P1S2】The qualifications for the applicants are as follows.【P1S3】To begin with, the candidates should have outstanding skills at English.【P1S4】In addition, they must have a strong professional sprit, cheerful personality and be aged under 35.【P1S5】Last but not the least, the students with relevant working experience are preferred.【P1S6】Those who are interested in this activity may sign up with the monitor of their classes before February 1,2011.【P1S7】Everybody is welcome to join in it.【署通知单位】Postgraduates’ Association

【通知时间】January 15, 2011

十二、备忘录

1、模板：

Para1 S1 缘由+主题。S2 内容（有）。S3 要求1。S4 要求2。S5 报名时间地点。S6期望。(时间+收发人+事由)

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

Data: January 15, 2011

To: All students of the English Department From: Class Monitor, Zhang Wei Subject: Spring Excursion(正文Message:)

【P1S1】As spring arrives and the weather turns to be agreeable(怡人的)，the department has decided to organize a spring excursion in a suburban county(Huairou District).【P1S2】The activities include mountain-climbing and picnic(爬山和野餐).【P1S3】All the students of the English Department anr encouraged to participate.【P1S4】We remind(提醒)you of the necessity(必要)of bringing some food and water as well as wearing comfortable shoes.【P1S5】Those who are interested in this activity(/excursion)may sign up with the monitor of their classed before April 1, 2011.【P1S6】Everybody is welcome to join in it.十三、报告

1、模板：

Para1 S1 目的Para2 S1 主要活动（总述）。S2 活动1。S3 活动2。S4 活动3。Para3 S1 接下来。S2 期望/展望。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：

To: Professor Barbara From: James Green Data: January 15, 2011

Subject: First progress report on graduation thesis(毕业论文)(正文Message:)略。

十四、大作文

1、模板：【4|5|2阵型】

Para1 【己点】S1 有现象+具体现象。S2 有不同“点”。S3 正点+反点。S4 己点。

Para2 【己据】S1 有据（总）。S2 据1。S3 例1。S4 据2。S5 据3（换句话说To put it in another way）。

Para3 【己据】S1 强化己点。S2 预测（评论）。

2、说明：（„）部分可省略；（/„）部分可以替换；【„】部分是提示实际不要。

3、范文：【2010年1月MBA 作文】

【P1S1】In this chart, it can be seen that the subscription number of mobile phones in developed countries had a steady but slight increase from 2000 to 2007 and has remained constant since then.【P1S2】Meanwhile, the subscriptions in developing countries have witnessed a dramatic increase, especially from 2004 to 2008.【P2S1】It’s no difficult job to come up with some possible factors to account for this phenomenon.【P2S2】At the top of the list is the recent huge improvement of people’s living standards in developing countries.【P2S3】It is reported that, with the rapid economic growth of these counties, mobile phones have become a life necessity overnight rather than a luxury.【P2S4】Besides we must admit that developing countries have a far larger population and accordingly a larger demand for mobile phone services than developed countries.【P2S5】Finally, what is responsible for the situation is that the mobile phone service in developing countries has been increasingly cheaper these years.【P2S6】In developed countries, however, the speed of the mobile phone service had been more efficient and therefore the market was soon saturated.【P3S1】As discussed above, it is no surprise to see this difference..【P3S2】And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.========================

【P1S1】These days, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public which concerns the phenomenon that a growing number of college students are willing to work as a nurse after graduation.【P1S2】Whenever it comes to this issue, there will spring up a wide variety of voices.【P1S3】Some people view it as beneficial, while still some others consider that it is not suitable or acceptable for a developing country like China.【P1S4】So far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the former view.【P2S1】It is of no difficulty for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.【P2S2】At the top of the list, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and the steady improvement of living standard, there is an increasing demand for high quality nurses.【P2S3】Based upon a recent Internet survey, about 56% of Chinese families in big cities are in need of this kind of highly educated workforce.【P2S4】What’s more, we must admit that there is a fierce competition in the current Chinese employment market.【P2S5】Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that, in the long run, as an emerging profession in China, highly educated nurses will be widely recognized and respected.【P3S1】There is no denying the fact that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the foregoing discussions.【P3S2】Therefore, I believe, the current trend should be encouraged rather than discouraged or even banned.

第二篇：MBA联考英语作文

投诉信

日期 Dear sir,(第一段)I am sorry to inform you that I am unhappy about__________________，so I regret to have to complain _____________（提出投诉，表示遗憾）(第二段)There are ________________(问题1)，______________(造成的影响)；___________________(问题2)，_________________(造成的影响)；（该段主要用于陈述不满的原因）。（第三段）

I would appreciate it very much if your company could look into the matter and arrange for a replacement of the faulty goods promptly.So I propose that you___________________________________________, I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（该段主要提出补救的建议）

Sincerely yours XXX

常见词和关键词：late delivery，cause，fulfill order，on checking the goods receive(当验货时)，I found that, since the late delivery has caused dissatisfaction among our customers, I considering, discount, I suggest that, I propose that, recently, refuse, as you known, after-sales service, breakdown, immediate, shipment, delay，道歉信

日期 Dear sir，（第一段）

Thank you for your letter of ______（时间）.I am very sorry to hear about your problems with my faulty.I had no idea that you were in any way dissatisfied.(感谢对方告知实情，并表示道歉)（第二段）

If you had let me know earlier, I could have investigated this immediately.Please allow

me

to

explain

what happened.__________________________________(解释原因)； ————————————（提出解决方案）；if you experience any difficulties, please call me or fax me at once and I will take immediate action.（该段用于解释原因并提出解决方案）（第三段）

Please let me apologize to express how sorry I am.I will make efforts to prevent a recurrence.(我们将尽力防止此事再次发生)

Sincerely yours XXX

常见词和关键词：excellent,apologize

感谢信

日期 Dear Sir,（第一段）

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for your warm reception while I ______________________。（告之感谢对方什么）（第二段）

Your sincerity was most impressive.Without your help, things would not have gone so smoothly.___________;_____________;______________(l列举对方如何帮助我们)。It is hard to imagine what my life have been like without your care and help.（恭维对方，描述如何帮助我们）（第三段）

I am anticipating further cooperation.In return for your hospitality, I would like to invite you to ____________（邀请来做什么），I am looking forward to seeing you again at that time.（对未来关系展望）

Sincerely yours XXX

常见词和关键词：hospitality，warm reception,heartfelt thanks,colleagues

邀请函

日期 Dear XXX，（第一段）

I am delighted to invite you and your delegation of 10 people to pay a working visit to china for a week in September or October 2011.the propose of visit is_____________________(邀请来做什么事情)；（第二段）

I highly appreciate our undergoing the discussion on_____________(在什么地方的讨论)，and expect a have fruitful meeting with you in China.By the way, your group’s board,lodging and all other expenses will be coverd by us.Should you have some questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.Very truly yours XXX

图表作文

（第一段）

The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________（图表主题）。The first thing we notice is that_____________（图表最大特点）/the changes in the number of _____over the period from______to_____.This means that as ___________________（进一步描述）。(该段描述图表的性质，简单阐述其特点)

（第二段）

As can see from the above chart, _____________（图表细节一）。After ving_________（细节一的变化），the ____________（紧跟着的变化）。The figures also tells us that___________________图表细节二）。In the secondary，we can see that ______________accounts for _________（进一步描述）。

A number of factors may have contributed to this situation.Above all,________________（原因1）,second,_________________(原因2),A major reason is that_________________________（原因3）。（该段对图表的数据进行说明，并阐述原因）

（第三段）

Judging from this chart，we can draw the conclusion that___________（结论）。It is high time that we ______________（发出倡议）。/there is every reason to believe that the trend will continue in the foreseeable future.总结 关键词汇：

increase,decrease,fell,decline,sharply,dramatically,significantly,rapidly,steadily,slightly,remained unchanged, rise gradually, peaked at, low level, reached the peak, three-fold increase, A increase gradually while B decrease, A and B are closely related, table，对比观点型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a heated debate over the relative importance of _________versus_______.Whereas some people hold that __________is more important than _________, others argue that the reverse is true.(对全文进行概述)（第二段）

Those who take the first view assume that ___________(对观点进行介绍),in contrast, the second opinion is based on the assumption that_________________(对观点进行介绍).（第三段）

As for me, I advocate the first view point.The reasons are as follows: Firstly, _____________________________________________________ Secondly, ___________________________________________________ Finally, _________________________(阐述自己选择的观点的理由)In my opinion, it does not make sense to generalize about which is more important, ___________ or ____________.Their relative importance depends on specific contexts.So the debate is essentially a chicken-and egg problem.关键词：nowadays, for example，问题解决型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a lot of debate over____________（问题）/ scandal was disclosed, people and government and international communities were shocked.It is reported that________________(写一个报道内容)，this situation calls for close attention from the general public.(该段对问题进行描述)（第二段）

A number of factors have contributed to the emergence of this problem.Firstly, _________________________________________________ Secondly, ________________________________________________ Thirdly, ________________________________________________ Another factors worth mentioning is that_____________________(该段要写问题产生的原因或者影响)（第三段）

To solve the problem, several measures can be taken.Premerily, ____________________________________________ Secondly,_________________________________________ The most significant measure is___________________________(该段要写解决问题的方法)关键词汇：positive effect , negative effect, to reduce the negative effect, A large number of ,the situation is associated with several factors, incident，accident, is likely to harm the reputation of , address, issue, It is necessary to, domestic-brand, distributor, fundamental，对立观点型

（第一段）

Across the world throughout history, it often happens that different people perceive the same objective thing differently.For example, two typical points of view have been expressed concerning_____________________(引出文章讨论的对象)(第二段)Some people think that ________________, they cite the following as major reasons: firstly, ______________,secondly,__________________.（介绍第一种观点，并解释原因）(第三段)Others argue that _________________.they base this argument mainly on The following grounds: first, _______________.second,_____________.（介绍第二种观点，并解释原因）

For my point, I advocate the first viewpoint.My reasons are as follow: First,_______________.second,______________.third,____________.(发表自己的观点并说明原因)或者都不同意，自己提出新观点：

I do not agree with other of the view.In my opinion,_______________, The reason why_______________________________________ 关键词汇：disagreement, whereas, different people have different view, thereby，独立观点型

(第一段)In recent years, more and more people tend to______________________ /there has been a growing trend among___________________________ /with the development of economic globalization, more and more people___________________。This phenomenon is receiving more and more attention from the general public.(该段要求对事实进行描述)（第二段）

I think we should take a positive/negative attitude towards it.The reasons are as follows.First, _________________, second,_________________.Finally,_______________.(该段表明自己的观点，并说明原因)（第三段）

From the above analysis, we can see that _____________________.there is every reasons that this trend will continue and even grow stronger in the future, because_____________________./I firmly believe that_____________________(该段总结展望)关键词汇：

opportunity, personally, oppose, convinction, rethink, strategy, owing to, appeal, on the practical side, as well as, benefit from this sort of, not only…but also, obviously,

第三篇：2014年1月MBAMPA联考数学真题(完整版)

2014年1月MBA/MPA/MPAcc联考数学真题（完整版）

（天学考研）

一、问题求解：第1～15小题，每小题3分，共45分。下列每题给出的A、B、C、D、E

五个选项中，有一项是符合试题要求的。请在答题卡上将所选项的字母涂黑。

1.某部门在一次联欢活动中共设了26个奖，奖品均价为280元，其中一等奖单价为400元，其他奖品均价为270元，一等奖的个数为

（A）6（B）5（C）4（D）3（E）2

2.某单位进行办公室装修，若甲、乙两个装修公司合做，需10周完成，工时费为100万元；

甲公司单独做6周后由乙公司接着做18周完成，工时费为96万元.甲公司每周的工时费为

（A）7.5万元（B）7万元（C）6.5万元（D）6万元（E）5.5万元

3.如图1，已知AE=3AB，BF=2BC.若ΔABC的面积是2，则ΔAEF的面积为

（A）14（B）12（C）10（D）8（E）6

4.某公司投资一个项目.已知上半年完成了预算的，下半年完成了剩余部分的，此时还有8

千万元投资未完成，则该项目的预算为

（A）3亿元（B）3.6亿元（C）3.9亿元（D）4.5亿元（E）5.1亿元

5.如图2，圆A与圆B的半径均为1，则阴影部分的面积为

（A）2π/3（B）√3/2（C）π/3-√3/4（D）2π/3-√3/4（E）2π/3-√3/2

6.某容器中装满了浓度为90%的酒精，倒出1升后用水后又倒出1升，再用水将容器注满，已知此时的酒精浓度为40%，则该容器的容积是

（A）2.5升（B）3升（C）3.5升（D）4升（E）4.5升

7.已知为等差数列，且，则

（A）27（B）45（C）54（D）81（E）162

8.甲、乙两人上午8：00分别自A,B出发相向而行，9：00第一次相遇，之后速度均提高了

1.5公里/小时，甲到B，乙到A后都立刻沿原路返回.若两人在10：30第二次相遇，则A,B

两地的距离为

（A）5.6公里（B）7公里（C）8公里（D）9公里（E）9.5公里

9.掷一枚均匀的硬币若干次，当正面向上次数大于反面向上次数时停止，则在4次之内停止的概率为

（A）1/8（B）3/8（C）5/8（D）3/16（E）5/16

10.若几个质数（素数）的乘积为770，则它们的和为

（A）85（B）84（C）28（D）26（E）25

11.已知直线l是圆x2+y2=5在点（1，2）处的切线，则l在y轴上的截距为

(A)2/5(B)2/3(C)3/2(D)5/2(E)5

12.如图3，正方体ABCD-A′B′C′D′的棱长为2, F是棱C′D′的中点，则AF的长为

(A)3(B)5(C)√5(D)2√2(E)2√3

13.某项活动中，将3男3女6名志愿者随机地分成甲、乙、丙三组，每组2人，则每组志

愿者都是异性的概率为

（A）1/90（B）1/15（C）1/10

（D）1/5（E）2/5

14.某工厂在半径为5cm的球形工艺品上镀一层装饰金属，厚度为0.01cm.已知装饰金属的原材料是棱长为20cm的正方体锭子，则加工10 000个该工艺品需要的锭子数最少为（不考虑加工损耗，）

（A）2（B）3（C）4（D）5（E）20

15.某单位决定对4个部门的经理进行轮岗，要求每位经理必须轮换到4个部门中的其他部门任职，则不同的轮岗方案有

（A）3种（B）6种（C）8种（D）9种（E）10种

二、条件充分性判断：第16~25小题，每小题3分，共30分。要求判断每题给出的条件（1）和条件（2）能否充分支持题干所陈述的结论。A、B、C、D、E五个选项为判断结果，请选择一项符合试题要求的判断，在答题卡上将所选项的字母涂黑。

（A）条件（1）充分，但条件（2）不充分.（B）条件（2）充分，但条件（1）不充分.（C）条件（1）和（2）单独都不充分，但条件（1）和条件（2）联合起来充分.（D）条件（1）充分，条件（2）也不充分.（E）条件（1）和（2）单独都不充分，条件（1）和条件（2）联合起来也不充分.16.已知曲线l:y=a+bx-6x2+x3.则(a+b-5)(a-b-5)=0.（1）曲线l过点（1，0）.（2）曲线l过点（-1，0）.17.不等式|x2+2x+a|≤1的解集为空集.（1）a<0.（2）a>2.18.甲、乙、丙三人的年龄相同.（1）甲、乙、丙的年龄成等差数列.（2）甲、乙、丙的年龄成等比数列.19.设x是非零实数.则x3+=18.（1）x+=3.（2）x2+=7.20.如图4,O是半圆的圆心，C是半圆上的一点，OD⊥AC,则能确定OD的长.（1）已知BC的长.（2）已知AO的长.21.方程x2+2(a+b)x+c2=0有实根.（1）a,b,c是一个三角形的三边长.（2）实数a,c,b成等差数列.22.已知二次函数f(x)=ax2+bx+c.则能确定a,b,c的值.（1）曲线y=f(x)经过点(0,0)和点(1,1).（2）曲线y=f(x)与直线y=a+b相切.23.已知袋中装有红、黑、白三种颜色的球若干个.则红球最多.（1）随机取出的一球是白球的概率为.（2）随机取出的两球中至少有一个黑球的概率小于.24.已知M={a,b,c,d,e}是一个整数集合.则能确定集合M.（1）a,b,c,d,e的平均值为10.（2）a,b,c,d,e的方差为2.25.已知x,y为实数.则x2+y2≥1.（1）4y-3x≥5.（2）(x-1)2+(y-1)2≥5.（天学网整理）

第四篇：考试英语作文

Dear Mary,I hope you would come to visit China soon.The differences between good manners in China and in the West are sometimes great.Chinese people attach importance to good manners.There is no doubt that you should absorb some Chinese culture and know something about good manners in China.The first I want to tell you is greeting.When you meet someone,you are supposed to stop and nod your head.You must shake your hands and smile all the time.There are some differences between tipping systems in China and in the West.It’s unnecessary to pay tips in China.You don't need to get confused.Talking of table manners,you should say thanks if the host and hostess invite you to the dinners.Becouse of their hospitality,you had better tell them you really can’t eat more when you are full.In my point of view,if you show your understand and respect,everyone will treat you as their old friends!

Yours,Li Ming

第五篇：英语小作文

1、A Happy Day

2、A Little Wish

3、A Pen and a Pencil

4、Fly Kites

5、Four Seasons

6、Have a fun holiday

7、I Like My Village

8、My Bedroom

9、My Best Friend

10、My Best Friends

11、My Dog

12、My Dream

13、My English Teacher

14、My Family 1

15、My Family 2

16、My Family 3

17、My Favourite Sport

18、My Favourite stamp

19、My Good Friend 1 20、My Good Friend 2

21、My Grandfather's Garden

22、My Hometown.23、My Little Cat

24、My Lovely Home

25、My School

26、My Uncle

27、My Winter Holiday

28、Myself

29、Spring

A Happy Day The weather is getting hotter and hotter.The summer holiday is coming.What a happy day!Birds are singing in the trees.Butterflies are dancing in the garden.Children are playing in the park.Some boys are playing on the slide(滑梯).Some boys are listening to music.Other boys are reading under the big tree.Some girls are drawing pictures.Other girls are playing on the swings(秋千).I like roller-skating(滑旱冰)in the square.And my classmates are playing football.We are very happy!

点评台：这篇文章描写了同学们和自己在假期里快乐的一天，表达了他们对假期的喜爱以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。读后有种很想加入他们当中，与他们分享快乐的愿望。整篇文章用词准确，语言生动，中心明确、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章级别：A。

A Little Wish Look!What's that? It is our homeland's spaceship.The spaceship is as bright as the stars.It can move.I am proud of our astronaut because I have a wish.I want to be an astronaut.In space, there are many materials.If I were an astronaut, I will be able to know more about space.I think the scene will be very great.On the one hand, I am going to enjoy the scene of the earth.On the other hand, I am going to see some stars.This is my wish.I hope my wish will come true!

点评中心：文章题材新颖，标新立意，让我们了解到虽然只是一个小小的愿望但却包含了对探索宇宙的好奇及对我们地球家园的热爱，同时也感受到小作者立志成为一名宇航员的伟大理想。最后希望小作者能够再接再励，写出更多、更优秀的小文章，同时也祝愿你梦想成真！

A Pen and a Pencil

I have a pen and a pencil.The pen is very nice, but the pencil is so dirty.One day, the pen met the pencil.The pen said to the pencil:“ What a dirty pencil!” The pencil said :“Yes.I'm dirty.But I can write words.” “I can write words，too.Now,let's see who can write more words.”

They began to write.They wrote and wrote.The pen wrote lots of words on the paper.The pencil wrote lots of words on the paper, too.After a long time ,the pen hadn't any ink(钢笔水)left(剩下).The pencil became short, but he could still write.At last ,the pencil won.The pencil said :“Ha ha...ha ha...Who won, you or me ?”The pen drooped(低下)his head.Then he said to the pencil :“I shouldn't laught at(嘲笑)you.You are good, too.”

点评台：这是一篇很成功的文章。文章不仅立意新颖，更重要的是寓意深刻。同时，也能看出小作者有着丰富的想象力。希望在今后的学习中充分发挥自己的想象，写出更多、更好的文章。文章级别：A。

Fly Kites Today is a shining day, the sky is blue, the wind is strong.My grandfather and I are going to the park to fly kites.My grandfather takes me to the People's Park.We fly my “Rocket”.“The wind is too strong, the kite can't fly!” I say.My grandfather looks and says, “Let me try!” “Sure!” So my grandfather catches the string and I hold the kite.“Follow me, one, two, three, run!” I run with my grandfather quickly.Oh!It's so wonderful!The kite is flying up with the wind.I am so happy and ask my grandfather, “Why can't I fly it up, but you can?” My grandfather says with a smile on his face, “Because you fly the kite against the wind.” “Oh, I see.” I nod my head happily.We play in the park until late.We enjoy ourselves.点评中心：小作者用平实的语言描述了风筝从飞不上天到飞上天的过程，特别生动、形象，同时又结合小作者与爷爷的对话，让人看完以后有种身临其境的感觉，仿佛放风筝的活动历历在目。

Four Seasons

Spring is green.Do you know why? It is because when spring is here, the plants and the trees sprout new leaves and turn green.The flowers start to blossom.It is so beautiful and green everywhere.Summer is bright.Can you guess the reason? It is because when summer arrives, the sun is shining.For the very strong sunlight, everything is bright.How beautiful and bright it is!Autumn is golden.Why is this? It's because when autumn comes, the wind blows through the golden trees and carries the golden leaves away, flowing slowly down to the ground one after another and thickly covering the ground.It is golden everywhere.Winter is white.Why? It's because when winter reaches us, the white snowflakes fly slowly down, so pure and white.The wide fields and the great high mountains all wear white coats.Oh!The four seasons are all beautiful and charming.I like spring, summer, autumn and winter, but spring, the best!For spring is full of life.点评中心:小作者以“四季”为题目,开篇直接切入四个季节,以阐述四季的不同为主线,分别进行描述.文章用词准确,语言丰富、生动,语法基本正确.希望继续努力,成为未来的作家。

Have a fun holiday!Come to Shenzhen and have a fun holiday.Shenzhen is a new and modern city.The weather here is very pleasant.The trees and grass are green every season.In spring, the weather is warm.You can go hiking.In summer, the weather is hot, but you can go to the beautiful beach.You can swim there.You can make a sandcastle(沙堆城堡), too.In autumn.the weather is cool, but not dry.You can fly kites in the parks.In winter, it's not cold.You don't need to put on more clothes.You can play sports then.There is lots of delicious food here.You can drink morning tea and afternoon tea.You can eat seafood(海鲜), too.In Shenzhen there are many famous places.You can go to the Window of the World.You can go to Happy Valley, too.Don't wait.Come to Shenzhen and have fun, fun and fun!点评中心:通过对深圳四季的描写,给我们展现出了一幅四季如春的美丽画面。在深圳,可以到海边堆沙堡, 可以吃海鲜, 还可以去美丽的世界之窗游玩…… 所有这些都深深地吸引着小读者们,不愧为一篇成功的小作文。

I Like My Village Hello,dear friends!Welcome to my village.It's big and beautiful!I like it very much.Look!There are many houses in the village.They are small.There are many high and beautiful mountains near the houses.There is a big forest behind the houses.There are many big trees in it.There are many rivers in front of the houses.The water is clean.There are many fish in the rivers.There are many bridges over the rivers.There are many big trees on the river banks.And there is grass and flowers on it.The grass is green.The flowers are colourful and beautiful.There is a lake in the village.There are many ducks in the lake.The sky is blue.The rivers flow.The air is fresh and clean.My village is very beautiful!I like it very much!

点评中心：I Like My Village。本篇文章采用生动、细致的描写方法，勾勒出一幅美丽、和谐的乡村图画。文章在用词方面比较准确，多处采用There be句型。但有些地方可用连词连接，无需再重复使用There be句型。

My Bedroom My name is Mike.I have a comfortable bedroom.There is a desk, a bookshelf and a bed in my bedroom.I do my homework in my bedroom every evening.The desk is in front of the bookshelf.There are many textbooks, English books and story books on the shelf.My bed is near the windows.There are some flowers on the windowsill.The curtain and the sheets of my bedroom are blue.Because my favourite colour is blue, too.Dear friend, do you like my bedroom? 点评中心：My Bedroom针对自己卧室里的几件物品进行了介绍，为同学们展示了一个干净舒适的小天地，值得一提的是文中使用了一些生词，使文章增色不少。在这里建议其他同学学习，努力多掌握些单词，从而写出更加精彩的英语作文。“Very Good!”。

My Best Friend Ma Qi is my best friend.She is a girl.she is ten years old.She has short black hair and big eyes.she likes to sing.Ma Qi and I are in the same class.We always study, draw pictures and play ping-pong together.After the school, we often go to the park.We often play a game of Hide And Seek there.We have a good time.点评台: My Best Friend语言流畅，叙述清楚，描述了自己与好朋友一起学习、生活的快乐时光，如果小作者能够运用已学过的知识再对好朋友的外貌特征和衣着作一番细致地描写的话，相信文章内容就会更加充实。“Good!”。千万不要骄傲呀，还要继续练习写作，使自己能够写出更好的文章。

My Best Friends

Jim and Kim are my best friends.Jim is short, thin and quiet.But Kim is tall and strong ,but not fat.After class, Jim is different from Kim and I.Kim and I like to play soccer.We often kick the ball on the playground.But Jim doesn't play with us.He likes to read books in the library.Sometimes he likes to listen to music.In the evening, Jim often helps Kim and me with our English.We talk a lot and laugh a lot.We are best friends.点评台：向大家介绍了自己的两个好朋友。语言流畅，用词准确，没有语法错误，字里行间能体会到小作者与两位好朋友之间的深厚友情。另外，从整篇文章中也可以看出小作者的英语基础知识掌握得很牢。希望今后的学习中写出更多，更好的文章。文章级别：A。

My Dog Hello, everyone!I am Wang Ze.My English name is Mike.I have a cat and a dog.I like my cat, but I like my dog better than my cat.My dog is two years old.It has two black eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.Its body is white.It is as white as snow.My dog is very lovely.I like my dog very much.点评台：文章My Dog首先向读者问候，并简单介绍了自己，随后通过简略的描写使一只可爱的小狗形象跃然纸上，能够吸引读者的注意力。对于初学者而言，能写出这样的习作确实不容易，值得大家学习。“Good！”，继续加油啊！

My Dream I am a handsome boyl.My name is Mike.I like drawing.My dream is to have a white house with a white wall, a white roof, a white floor.I can draw a red car on the wall, and I can drive the car around the world.I can draw a plane on the roof, and I want to take the plane to the sky.i can draw a sailing-boat on the floor, and I want to take the sailing-boat across the sea.点评台:这篇作文“My Dream”，形式新颖，风格独特，用词得当，语句通顺。此文章充分地体现了小作者丰富的想象力和较强的写作能力，是一篇成功的文章。同时，希望张灿小朋友能坚持练习英文写作，相信你一定会写出更好的英语作文。“Very good!”。

My English Teacher Miss Shan is my English teacher.She has two big eyes.She is thin and short.Her hair is very long.She is very beautiful.Her English is very good.She always play games with us in English class.So her class is very interesting and shi is kind to us.She like us and we like her too.I like my English teacher.How about you? 点评中心: 文章写得比较简单,词语使用准确, 语言朴实无华,字里行间表达了小作者对英语老师的喜爱之情, 但不够具体, 如果能指出老师的爱好、习惯等，文章会更加充实，希望你继续努力,写出更加优秀的文章来。

My Family I have a happy family.There are six people in my family.They are grandpa, grandma, father, mother, elder sister and I.My name is Yang Yuan.I am a pupil, I'm in Grade 5.I like English very much, I read them every morning.I often listen to the English tape.My grandpa is an accountant(会计).He is very busy.My grandma is a farmer.She does the housework.My mother is a farmer, too.She cooks every day.My father is a worker.In the evening he likes watching TV.While he is watching TV, he often tells us not to talk.My elder sister is a middle school student, she isn't good at English, but she likes maths very much.All of them love me, and I love them, too.I have a happy family.I love my family.点评中心:这篇文章主要描写了家庭成员的职业，My Family更适合做这篇文章的标题，整篇文章条理清楚，语言简练，用词准确，没有语法错误，可见小作者的英语语言基本功很好，希望杨园同学在今后的学习中继续发扬这个优点，不要骄傲，写出更多的好文章。文章级别:B。

My Family Hello, everyone!Today I am going to talk about my family.My name is Mike.I am in Class 1, Grade 4.l like English very much.I like hamburgers.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.Look, this is my father.He has two brown eyes, a big nose and a small mouth.He is an engineer.He is very handsome.Look, that is my mother.She has two big eyes.She is an engineer too.She is very pretty and kind.My family is not big, but we have many friends.We are happy.I love them very much and they love me too.讲评中心：文章写得比较简炼，词语使用准确，语言生动，字里行间表达了小作者对家人的爱。但不要骄傲，继续努力啊！文章级别：A。

My Family There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.My father is a driver.He is 37 years old.He like eating oranges.My mother is a worker.She like eating apples.My name is Mike.I am 9 years old.I am in Class 3, Grade 3.l like eating hamburgers.I am good at English.I study hard every day.点评中心：My Family 语言流畅，描写得当，用平实的语言向读者介绍了家庭中的每一位成员的基本情况，美中不足之处就是缺乏对家人之间和睦关系的描述，使文章略显平淡了一些。“Good！”,还要继续努力啊

My Favourite Sport My favourite sport is swimming.I often swim in the pool.I swim twice a week.When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy.I look like a lovely fish in the pond.I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy.It can also bring me a lot of happiness.Of course, I like watching this sport.I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.点评中心:这篇小文章语言精炼、准确,短短几句便勾画出了一幅生动、活泼的画面。

My Favourite stamp I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.Look, there is a chick in this stamp.The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail.Its feathers are yellow and brown.This stamp is very beautiful.I like this stamp very much.Miss Wang点评台集邮不仅可以增长我们的见识，同时也可以陶冶我们的情操。本文的小作者就是一个集邮爱好者，看小作者所描述的小鸡邮票多么可爱呀！感兴趣的小朋友可以试着收集邮票啊！Miss Wang要奖给姚晗小朋友一个“Very Good!”,继续加油啊！

My Good Friend Hello!My name is Maggie.I have a good friend.Her Chinese name is Wang Qi.Her English name is Mary.She likes fruit very much.Her favourite color is blue.She is very beautiful.She has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses.She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse.She is very tall.She likes swimming and playing football.She is a good student.We are in the same school and the same class.But we are not in the same row.I like her very much.We always play together.讲评中心：文章比较详尽、完整地描述了她的好朋友的特征，包括了好朋友的外貌、喜好等，文章词语使用准确、语法正确、主题突出，“Good!”，不要骄傲，继续努力啊！

My Good Friend I have a good friend.Her name is Zhang Hong.She is 9 years old.She is a pretty girl.She has long hair and big beautiful eyes.They look like stars.Her favourite colour is pink.Her favourite animals are cats and rabbits.She likes to play badminton very much.Her favourite class is English.She studies very hard.She is a good student.I love her very much.I will learn from her.本文围绕My Good Friend这一主题，运用所学英语知识，针对好朋友的外貌、爱好进行介绍，为读者展示了一个活泼、可爱的小女孩形象。Miss Wang要奖给孟婷婷同学一个“Very Good！”。同时，孟婷婷同学也要继续努力练习英文写作呀！My Grandfather's Garden

My grandfather has a small garden.There are many flowers in it.I think all the flowers are beautiful.My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning.First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers.Then, he waters them.When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy.My sister and I like the garden very much.We often play in it.Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.One day, my brother picked a flower.My grandfather was very angry and sad.He said to my brother, “My child, don't pick the flowers.That's not a good deed(行为).” My brother felt very sorry for that.And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now.I like my grandfather's garden.点评台：向大家描写了爷爷的花园，虽没有太多华丽的词语，但能使读者感受到花园的美丽和花儿的芳香。通过描写爷爷对花园的精心料理以及对弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不仅仅是写爷爷的花园，也从字里行间中看出了小作者对爷爷的敬佩之情。文章条理清楚、意思连贯，没有语法错误，是一篇很成功的文章，希望再接再励！文章级别：A。

My Hometown My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city.It is located(座落)in the southwest(西南)part of Guangdong Province(省).My hometown is famous for Diaolous.Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous(Please look at the picture.).It was built in 1923.The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡垒).It is tall and magnificent(雄伟的).People praise(赞扬)it for “the No.1 Tower” of Kaiping.I like my hometown.点评台：小作者的My Hometown主要描写了家乡著名的碉楼，其中重点向大家介绍了“开平第一楼”--瑞石楼，抒发了自己对家乡的热爱之情。整篇文章语句连贯，没有语法错误。文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者继续发扬这个好习惯，并写出更多的好文章与大家分享。文章级别：A。

My Little Cat Hello!I'm Becky.This is my little cat.I like it very much.Its name is Do Re Mi.It's very beautiful.It's gray.It has triangular(三角形的)ears, round eyes,a black nose and a small mouth.My mother calls it “Little Baby”.When I'm at home,it often follows me in and out.My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.It's very fat,but it's nimble(机敏的).One day,I saw it run fast in the sitting room.I thought it might find a mouse.It was running after the mouse.They looked like playing hide-and-seek.About three minutes later,it brought me the mouse.I was happy.So I touched it with a smile.“You have done a good job,Little Baby.” I said.Then it jumped up and down and ran away.Do you like my little cat?Tell me, please.点评中心:向大家介绍了小猫的外貌，还主要描写了小猫在某一天捉老鼠的情景。整篇文章主次分明，语言简炼、生动，没有语法错误。同时，字里行间能使读者感受到小作者对小猫的喜爱之情。

My Lovely Home I live in a small village named Fengyi.I live in an old building.It was built in 1999.It has three floors.On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom.On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms.One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me.On the third floor, there is an attic.It's my study, it's quiet.I like to study there.When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony.There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy.My parents clean it every day.I can also do some housework.My friends, do you love my home?

点评中心：My Lovely Home开篇直接切入本文主题，首先从房子的结构开始介绍，句子简洁、通顺，接着又重点描述了与自己有关的几个房间，语言生动、贴切，最后又抒发了自己对家的热爱。

My School Hello, friends!Welcome to my school.My school is beautiful and very big.There are many rooms in the school building.My classroom is on the sixth floor.There are sixty-nine students in my class.You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher's desk.My seat is near the door.The computer room is on the third floor.There are many computers in it.I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂)is on the first floor.We have lunch there.Look!This is the playground.We often play games on it.There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow...I have a good time every day in my school.I like my school very much.点评台：文章向大家描述了他学校的教室，食堂，微机室以及操场，其中重点描写了自己的班级，主次分明，层次清晰，正确地运用了There be句型和一般现在时时态，是一篇很成功的文章，文章级别：A。

My Uncle My uncle is a professor.His name is Chen Hao.He teaches Chinese in a university.He is tall and thin.He wears a pair of glasses.He likes reading.He has a big study at home.It's very bright.There are many books in his study.He often reads and writes in his study.He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much.He is very kind to me, too.He often sends me books.I like him, too.点评中心：本篇小文章描写的是小作者的叔叔，首先从她叔叔的职业、外貌开始描写，接着又描写了她叔叔的爱好--读书与写作。表达了小作者对其叔叔的崇拜与敬仰之情。文章条理清晰，用词准确，无语法错误，是一篇较优秀的文章。

My Winter Holiday This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family.Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think.The sky is blue and the air is clean.You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere.The weather there is great.It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it “Spring City”.Kunming is surrounded(围绕)by beautiful scenery.And one of the most famous views is “The Stone Forest”.It is really scenic(自然风景的).We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.点评中心：寒假虽然已经过去一个多月了，但是在这个假期所发生的事大家是否还都铭记在心呢？作者就把她的这份心情用笔记录了下来。小作者通过在寒假期间去美丽的春城--昆明游玩，抒发了对美好自然风光的热爱。文章生动、形象，用词准确。

Myself Look at this photo.A little boy is climbing a tree.Who is the boy? Guess, please!Yes, it's me.My name is Zhu Shaoyu.I'm ten years old.I'm very naughty and smart.I have big eyes and short black hair.I'm thin and tall.I'm a student.I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City.I'm in Class One, Grade Five.My favourite subject is English.I study English very hard.I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it.Now I can speak English well.I obtained the First Award in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students.I will study harder in future.My favourite master of ceremonies is Li Yong, because he is very funny.My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge.It makes me learn English better.My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious.I like its taste.Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me?

点评台：几乎每个人都很了解自己，所以要是介绍自己，可写的内容很多。但小作者并没有平均分配笔墨，而是重点描写了自己的几个“最喜欢”。整篇文章条理清楚、重点突出、语言流畅、用词准确，可以说写得很成功。希望同学们向朱劭宇同学学习，写出一篇篇精彩的文章与大家共同分享。文章级别：A。

Spring I like spring because spring is beautiful.Many flowers are very lovely.Some grass and trees turn green.Look!A little girl is flying a kite with her father.She likes to fly kites.Her father is smiling.It's very warm today.So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky.They're playing together.They look very happy.A breeze is blowing over the land.The sunlight is soft.A clear river is flowing.How beautiful the spring is!点评台:这篇文章篇幅虽短却写出了春天的生机与活力.特别是小作者着重描写了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明确.用词准确、生动,没有语法错误也是这篇文章的另一优点.文章级别:A.29