高三英语作文训练三步法

第一篇：高三英语作文训练三步法

高三英语作文训练三步法

3月20日 为了培养高三学生能在所学语言范围内口笔头造句；能在有提示词语的条件下，写出100个词左右的短文，我采用英语作文训练三步法，即一例一练、一课一练、一题一练。

1、一例一练 先提供一篇范文作为示例，让学生进行仿写练习，与高中英语课本第三册同时进行，约三个月，每周一课时。在四种常见的文体（说明文、记叙文、议论文、应用文）中重点是应用文体。如书信、便条、日记、海报、请假条、通知、广告等。我将89年高考试卷上的收面表达题的答案作为范文并编了这么一道模仿练习题： 假如你是班长，要向全班同学作一个口头通知。请根据下列内容提示用英文拟一个口头通知。

1、活动内容：去游泳。

2、地点：长江边上的小孤山。

3、时间：下星期日（9月20日）。

4、注意事项：（1）参加者请放学后到讲台登记并交车费10元；（2）上午七时半在校门前集合，八进乘校校车出发；（3）午餐在小孤山附近的一家餐馆吃，下午4：30返回。在练习“对话”写作时，我选了这样一篇语言规范的作文： Don't Ride Too Fast Dick:What's the matter,Bill?Why are you sitting on the ground? Bill:l fell off my bike and hurt my leg.Dick:l'm sorry to hear it.Is there anything I can do for you? Bill:Would you please phone my father and tell him to come at once? Dick:Is he in his office or at home? Bill:In his office and his elephone number is 553246.Dick:553246,I've got it down.Now I'll run to the nearest public phone.Wait for me here.Bill:OK,You can ride my bike.It'll save time.Dick:Thatcls a good idea.I'll be back soon.Bill:Please don't ride too fast.Dick:Don't worry.I won't.说明：杰克和他的弟弟随父母来到中国。在上海某中学上学。丽丽是杰克的同班同学。请根据下面的情景介绍，写出某日杰克与丽丽的一段对话。杰克匆匆忙忙走过来。丽丽问他怎么啦。是不是出了问题。他告诉丽丽，他爸爸和妈妈今晚乘火车到北京去。他们到站时，发现有一张车票忘在书桌上。丽丽问他还需要好帮什么忙。杰克请她告诉他弟弟，他不到10点不会回家。于是他们说了声再见分手了。仿写能减轻畏难情绪，能从范文中找到类似表达语言材料和方法，容易入门。

2、一课一练 第三册课本学完了。进入一课一练。一般每周可安排写两篇作文。这能巩固和加深课内所学的知识，提高学习的效果。在编题时要注意各课文间的特点，选编不同文体的作文。除了练习上述常见的几种文体外，还应练习改写、扩写、缩写、看图说话等不同形式的作文。如复习高中第一册第10课时，选编一道与“长城”有关的题目，写讲话稿。假定你是一名导游，陪同某国际旅游团游览长城，下车前你准备对大家作必要的介绍和交代。请拟一份讲话稿，说明以下几点：

1、简单介绍长城（世界上最长的城墙，2000多年历史，世界奇观之一）。

2、讲话时间是八点半，在长城逗留两个半小时，十一点离开。

3、游览车在入口处等候，记住车号，准时返回。

4、贵重物品随身携带，下车前关上车窗。

5、祝大家玩得愉快。在复习高中第二册第2课The Tallest Grass时，我要求学生根据课文内容写一段对话。题目是这样编的： 某一学生对竹子不甚了解，于是去问生物老师。他就竹子的种属、种类、特征（指生长情况以及高度）和用途等提了几个问题。老师一一给予回答并请他写一段师生之间关于竹子的对话。如有一学生编写出这样一段一段文字通顺的对话：（S-A Strden T-The Teacher）S:What kind of plant is bamboo? T:Bamboo is a kind of grass though it looks more like a tree.S:How many kinds of bamboo are there in the world? T:Altogether there are more than 500 different kinds of bamboo.S:Where does bamboo grow best?Do all of thern grow tall? T:They grow best where it is warm and where it rains often.Not all kind of bamboo grow tall.Some grow no higher than your ankles.S:Is bamboo rery useful? T:Yes,it is widely used.We can make a lot of things out of bamboo,such as flower vases, baskets,mater-pipes.It is also a good building material.It can be made into fine paper.It can also be used as food when young.又如复习高中第二册第14课和第15课时,提示是将《礼物》这篇短篇小说缩写成一篇简短的故事。

3、一题一练 一题一练即命题作文，安排在高考前两个月。题目应接近中学生的生活实际，使学生看到题目就有话可写。这样才能激发学生的兴趣，使他人交通规则写好作文充满信心。这样的题目有： 记叙文：(1)My First English Teacher(2)My Stordy of English(3)My Childhood(4)An Unforgettable Day 描 写：(1)Four S easons(2)My Good Friend(3)The TEACHER I Respect Most 说明文：(1)My Fmily(2)Our School(3)How I Improved My English 议论文：(1)On the Importance of Learning A Forei Language(2)Early Rising(3)Let's Go in for Sports（例文略）英语作文训练三步法，由仿写到改写，再到自由表达，由易到难，循序渐进，确定了作文要求和具体形式，是一种有效方法。89年我所教的一个班级高考人均成绩为82.2分。90年和91年高考英语成绩也较为理想，均在全市重点中学中名前茅。92年一人个班级80%的学生书面表达（15）分题获12分以上的好成绩，其中满分1人，有相当一部分只扣了1~2分。全班89人人均成绩为71分。93年两个班学生参加MET考试，一个班人均76.88 分，另一个班人均73.5分，在全市重点中学中名列第一。

第二篇：作文三步法

“作文三步法”中多维思维训练的操作方法

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“作文三步法”中多维思维训练的操作方法

广东韶关八中作者：阳化冰

多维思维是抽象能力和审美能力的提高而形成的能力，后分想是多维思维的核心。所谓后分想就是从背景中把几样有用的东西分离出来，分别对其进行抽象，然后用中间特征或矛盾、关系把它们联结起来的过程。

在教学中，我按照“以赏析促写作，欣赏、创作两不误”的原则，借助多媒体，用学生喜闻乐见的形式设计教学方案，循序渐进地进行多维思维训练。在教学中具体采用了以下几种方法：

方法一：赏析新闻图片、公益广告及标志性图形。新闻图片反映的往往是新闻事件的核心，痛哭流涕的家属和血迹斑斑的安全帽组成的画面，足以说明矿难的残酷，洪水中手挽手组成人堤的武警官兵的身影，足以说明官兵们的伟大，遍布高原的藏羚羊尸骸，足以说明偷猎者的猖獗。解读新闻图片，引导学生抓住事物关键并提取事件中的核心素材。公益广告则常用一组相关的图象来弘扬某种精神或警示某种现象。如中央电视台那个“帮助他人，快乐自己”的公益广告，选取的就是一个小伙子在晨跑的路上帮助路人推车、拾起垃圾、扶起倒地的自行车等画面来弘扬关爱他人的精神。在解读公益广告的过程中培养学生提取有用的素材并按一定关系组织素材的能力。其次，还可以让学生编写标志性图形的创意说明。在选取标志性图形时我们可以选取国旗、国徽、奥运会会旗，奥运会吉祥物、袖章、图腾„„等，这些图形是人们从生活中提炼出来并赋予了一定内涵的图形，它们除了有生动、形象的外表，还具备某种精神实质，尤其是图腾，它往往包含了人们美好的愿望甚至成为了某种精神的象征。解读这些标志性图形并写出创意说明能帮助学生从“感知事物的形”过渡到“感知事物的神”的新高度。能有效提高学生对事物进行抽象的能力。

方法二：设置情境，编写短信、祝词。每逢节日或特殊的日子，人们都爱发送一两条短信，给朋友及亲人送上自己诚挚的祝福。随着现代通信事业的发展，“短信传情”这种形式已为学生所熟知，在课堂上，可以预设具体的情境，引导学生编写短信、祝词，新年伊始，结合当时的天气，给朋友写上这样一段：“天神把雪花释放，是让你把烦恼遗忘；寒风把窗户关

上，是让你把温馨荡漾，我把问候送上，是让你的来年更顺畅”。也可以指导学生运用各种修辞手法来丰富自己的短信，如朋友生日则说“我用幸运的面粉，幸福的奶油，快乐的水果，为你做了个祝福的大蛋糕，祝你生日快乐”。除此之外，还可设置临别赠言、自我推介、道歉词等情境，让学生学会提取身边的事物，用简明扼要的语言来表达内心真实的情感。

方法三：写出图片背后的故事，简而言之就是看图说话。选取一张或一组图片，让学生仔细观察，把握图片主要内容，分析图片各组成部分间的关系，解读蕴涵在图象背后的故事。在看图写作的训练中，图片只是一个窗口，我们要从图片中读到的信息出发，发挥自己的想象，为所要写的故事设定恰当的主题，并围绕这一主题丰富故事情节。如，根据一张伫立在海边，衣袂飘飘的少女的图片，有的学生写了一个“女儿纪念海难中死去父亲”的故事，有的则写了一个“多情女子等待在国外留学的情人”的故事，有的则赋予了他“盼望台湾亲人回乡，盼望祖国统一”的大主题。又如一组一只小鸟在另一只死去的小鸟旁扑打翅膀的图片，有的学生写两只小鸟是母子关系，母鸟为小鸟寻找食物被车压死，歌颂了崇高的母爱；有的把它们写成恩爱的夫妻；有的把它们写成了不知天高地厚的姐妹淘，真可谓是无奇不有。尤其值得一提的是“四格画”在训练中的运用。“四格画”就是用四幅图画来讲述一个完整的故事，这四幅画分别反映故事的起因、发展、高潮、结局四个阶段，脉络清晰，简明扼要，是不可多得的好训练方式。在看图说话训练中，学生有广阔的发挥空间，老师只要在素材选取、主题的确定、素材的组织等方面进行引导，学生会思维活跃，进步显著。

以上几点是我在“作文三步法的多维思维训练”中采用的一些方法，请各位同仁斧正。

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第三篇：上海高三英语作文训练

作文训练：

《Teenagers》杂志Conversation With Brad 栏目的负责人Brad 收到了李华的一封来信，仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad 用英语写一封回信，给出分析并提出合理建议。

Dear Brad,I am a student from Xinhua Senior High School.I have some difficulty communicating with my parents.Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied.So I feel lonely sometimes.I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.Yours.LiHua

Dear Li Hua,I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.I have to say that you are not _______ when having trouble communicating with your parents.Almost _______can feel it when they are in their adolescence.___________, it is a _________ problem shared by many, whose cause ________what we call “ generation gap”.As for my ________ for you, first, don’t ______ your feelings.You can make it a _______ to ______ your thoughts with your parents.Second, convince them you have tried your best.It is not their ______ to place high ____________ on their child.I believe they will be _________ with you as long as they knew you have tried ______ you can do to live up to their standards.Anyway, ___________ loves you more than your parents in the ______.__________ you do, there will always be there for you.Love them and ______ can heal everything.Yours sincerely,Brad

第四篇：高三能力训练三

高三英语能力训练三

语法填空（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）

Taking a taxi in a certain Eastern European country can be ___1___ shocking experience.It is said ___2___ some taxi drivers have metal wires struck into the passenger seats.And ___3___ a button is pushed, the seat will give you an electric shock.These taxi drivers don’t do this ___4___ fun.They do it to tourists ___5___ argue about the ridiculous（可笑的，荒唐的）fares they charge.Some drivers charge as much ___6___ ten times the legal fare.They have a secret switch which ___7___(make)the meters much faster.If you refuse to pay, you are really in for a shock.In one case, a German woman had no choice but to pay US $120 for a US $20 ride from the airport.She said that she was really ___8___(take)for a ride, but what could she do? Besides the electric shock, she was verbally（口头地）abused and threatened with physical ___9___(violent).She has only one piece of advice for tourists, “Take the bus ___10___ stay at home.”

阅读理解: Betty and Harold have been married for years.But one thing still puzzles old Harold.How is it that he can leave Betty and her friend Joan sitting on the sofa, talking, go out to a ballgame, come back three and a half hours later, and they’re still sitting on the sofa, talking? What in the world, Harold wonders, do they have to talk about? Betty shrugs（耸肩）.Talk? We’re friends.Researching this matter called friendship, psychologists Lillian Rubin spent two years interviewing more than two hundred women and men.No matter what their age, their job, their sex, the results were completely clear: Women have more friendships than men, and the difference in the content and the quality of those friendships is “marked and unmistakable”.More than two-thirds of the single men Rubin interviewed could not name a best friend.Those who could were likely to name a woman.Yet three-quarters of the single women had no problem naming a best friend, and almost always it was a woman.More married men than women named their wife/husband as a best friend, most trusted person, or the one they would turn to in time of emotional distress(感情危机).“Most women,” says Rubin, “identifies(认定)at least one, usually more, trusted friends to whom they could turn in a troubled moment, and they spoke openly about the importance of these relationships in their lives.”

“In general,” writes Rubin in her new book, “women’s friendships with each other rest on shared emotions and support, but men’s relationships are marked by shared activities.” For the most part, Rubin says, interactions between men are emotionally controlled---a good fit with the social requirements of “manly behavior（行为）”.“Even when a man is said to be a best friend,” Rubin writes, “the two share little about their innermost feelings.While a woman’s closest female friend might be the first to tell her to leave a failing marriage, it wasn’t unusual to hear a man say he didn’t know his friend’s marriage was in serious trouble until he appeared one night asking if he could sleep on the sofa.”

61.What old Harold cannot understand or explain is the fact that______.A.he is treated as an outsider rather than a husband

B.women has so much to share

C.women show little interest in ballgames

D.he finds his wife difficult to talk to 62.Rubin’s study shows that for emotional support a married woman is more likely to turn to ___.A.a male friend

B.a female friend

C.her parents

D.her husband 63.According to the text, which type of behavior is NOT expected of a man by society?

A.Many of them do not have a best friend

B.Don’t often share their emotional feelings.C.Complaining about his marriage trouble.D.Going out to ballgames too often.64.Which of the following statements is best supported by the last paragraph?

A.Men keep their innermost feelings to themselves.B.Women are more serious than men about marriage.C.Men often take sudden action to end their marriage.D.Women depend on others in making decisions.65.The research done by psychologist Rubin centers around _____.A.happy and successful marriages

B.friendship of men and women C.emotional problems in marriage D.interactions between men and women

Keys: 语法填空：

1.a

2.that

3.when

4.for

5.who/that 6.as

7.makes

8.taken

9.violence

10.or

阅读理解

61-65 BBCAB

第五篇：初三英语作文训练三

初三英语作文训练三

姓名 ______________学校_______________

俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My Family Rules”为题，写一篇短文。

提示：

1、家里有哪些家规；

2、对家规的感受；

3、对父母的建议。要求：

1、必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；

2、词数：80个左右；

3、文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。

My Family Rules