第一篇：英语六级考试综合改错题训练(十三)
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九、句子结构的错误
在英语中按句型来说可以分为陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句四种，从结构上来说又可以分为简单句、并列句和复合句三种。句子的结构错误是构成句子完整结构的某一成分用错或者缺少，或者使用了多于成分而造成句意不清的错误类型。由于英语语法和汉语语法特点在结构上表现得十分明显，主、谓、宾结构在数、格、人称上的一致、连接手段的正确使用以及词序安排等，都与汉语有着相当大的差异，因此在改错中也是一大难点。句子结构错误类型包括：句子类型使用错误、句子成分短缺、平行结构错误以及词组搭配使用错误。
例 1 Computer analyzed marketing reports can help deciding which products to emphasize now, which to develop for the future, and which to be dropped.1.__________
本句中三个平行成分 which products to emphasize now, which to develop for the future, and which to be dropped 结构模式应该一致，均采用不定式主动语态，因而 to be dropped 应改为 to drop。
例 2 When we consider the comfortable circumstances of a working family today, the life of the workingman in 1882 seems miserable indeed.But earlier it had been ever hard.1.__________
根据上文中“ earlier ”可知，原句显然是将 1882 年以前的生活与 1882 年时的生活作比较，所以此处 hard 应该改为 harder。
例 3 At the beginning of the nineteenth century working hours were from sunrise to sunset, pay was awful, and working conditions being poor and dangerous.1.__________
在该句中，working hours were from sunrise to sunset, pay was awful, and working conditions being poor and dangerous 三个小分句为并列结构关系，因此必须保持成分和结构上的一致性，故应该将 being 改为 were。
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例 4 However, a second person thought that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good
1.__________ manners.“ more„than„ ”是固定搭配用法，在此句中表示“与其„不如„”的意思，而不是“比„多”的意思；没有“ more„as„ ”的搭配用法，故应该将 as 改为 than。
练习题On the contrary, the intimate atmosphere of the small college allows the student four years of structural living in which to expect and preparing for the real world.1.__________ In making his choice among educational institutions the student must, therefore, consider a great many factors.Going to school is part of the socialization process, and so going to the movies.2.__________ The next morning the sun rose like a red ball on the eastern horizon.But somehow after breakfast it hid itself behind patches of clouds but it seemed a rain was
3.__________ apparent.But luckily, no sooner had we entered the car when it
4.__________ suddenly began to rain.That is worthy of note about these two groups is that
5.__________ among the 40 people there are only two women.Women members are so less than members that we
6.__________ again think of the outdated prejudice that women are inferior in intelligence.The best way to avoid using dictionaries when you are reading English books is to try to remember many
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7.__________ words as you can.It is just on that day when I bumped into Miss Helen
8.__________ on my way to work.It is in the cinema not on the street where he lost his
9.__________ wallet which contained ＄ 1,000 in it.In the future passengers ships will be built to travel undersea, and special underwater ships will be designed for mining, fishing, and to exploring unknown areas.10.__________
答案解析：
1.preparing→prepare。属于平行结构中的动词错误。在并列连词and前后显然要有形式一致的动词，但前面没有与preparing呼应的现在分词（注：同行中的living是in which中which的先行词，故一定是名词，而不是现在分词——这是词形表面上的干扰），故只能改动preparing使之与前面的动词不定式expect一致，这里也有考生将preparing改为prepares，用意是与句中谓语动词allows一致，但要注意，句中不定式expect是及物动词，它的宾语是“the real world”，必须与prepare for共享。
2.so后面加is。该句是一个并列句，第一个分词结构是完整的，主语由动名词“going to school”担当，第二个分词表语部分与前面相同。为避免重复，而使用代词so，但是谓语不能省略，必须加上is才是完整的结构。
3.but→and。
4.when→than。“no sooner„than„”和“hardly„when„”是固顶结构，相互之间不能交换使用。
5.that→what。该句结构比较复杂，前面整个句子作为主语，但是that不能作为主语从句的主语成分，因此改成what。
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6.less→fewer。
7.many前加as。
8.when→that。因为该句是一个强调句，所强调成分的代词除了在所强调成分为“人”时使用who或者that的情况外，一律使用that。
9.where→that。
10.删除to。
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第二篇：英语六级考试综合改错题训练(五)
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总结前三期。分别是1.逻辑表达错误 2.介词使用错误 3.代词使用错误3种错误类型 共30个错误。希望对大家对改错的提高有帮助。1.逻辑表达错误This is supposed to be an enlightened age, but you wouldn’t think so if you could hear what average man thinks of the average woman.Women won their independence years ago.Before a long, bitter
1.__________ struggle, they now enjoy the different educational
2.__________ opportunities as men in most parts of the world.People are earning higher wages and salaries.This leads to the changes in the way of life.As income goes down, people may not want more food to eat or
3.__________ more clothes to wear.But may want more and better care from doctors, dentists and hospitals.They are likely to travel more and want more education.Nevertheless, many more jobs are available
4.__________ in these services.A knowledge of several languages is essential to other majors’ study because without them one can
5.__________ read books only in translation.If he was present because of sickness, there was
6.__________ often no job for him when he returned.Under this pressure their whole way of life, even if their bodies, became radically changed.7.__________ Science in itself is harmless, more or less.But as soon as it can provide technology, it is not necessarily harmful.免费？宅在家学英语？怎么报名？
8.__________ Then, about ten thousand years ago, when this
9.__________ immensely long formative period of hunting for food, they became farmers.Can we be so bold as to suggest that we may be able to colonize other planet within the not-too-
10.__________ distant future?
2.介词使用错误The year 1728 saw friction among the coffee-house
1.__________ keepers and the publishers of newspapers.The traditional nuclear family came into being a couple of hundred years ago with the result of social
2.__________ pressure during the shift from feudalism to industrialism.Most part-time workers are women, and most part-time women choose this work because that their domestic
3.__________ responsibility.Quality defines the difference in tone color between a note played by different instruments or sung by
4.__________ different voices.English, which when the Anglo-Saxons first conquered England at the fifth and sixth centuries was almost a
5.__________ “pure” or “unmixed” language.Gram soon wrote to Watson and Crick, introducing him and presenting the first fruits of his thoughts about
6.__________ the coding problem.Man a million years ago was a little more than an
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animal;but early man had several advantages to the
7.__________ animals in that he had a large brain and an upright body.Despite of the great difficulties they had, they
8.__________ continued the work without any complaint.We are fully aware of that something must be
9.__________ done to put an end to this situation.We are the same opinion that he is fit for this position.10.__________
3.代词使用错误We must find out the customs of other races, so that it will not think us ill-mannered.1.__________ But the people all over the world agree that being well-mannered really means being kind.Please remember this, and then he will not go very far.2.__________ Scientist are discovering that sea water can be very valuable.It has been suggested that their
3.__________ currents can be used to make electricity.While technology makes this possible for four
4.__________ even six billion of us to exist, it also eliminates our job opportunities.Traditionally, work determines our way of life.But if 98 percent of us don’t need to work, what are we going to do with oneself?
5.__________ A break in their employment, or a decision to work part-time, will slow its raises and promotions
6.__________
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as it would for men.The conscience of the nation is appeased, while the population continues to puff their way
7.__________ to smoke, cancerous death.There are many such differences and we shall take up only that involving language, omitting those that do not.8.__________ A wise and experienced administrator will assign a job to whomever is best qualified.9.__________ unconsciously, we copy these we are close to or
10.__________ love or admire.答案解析：
1.Before→After。根据前文含义，可知妇女是在经过了长期而艰苦的斗争之后方才获得了和男性同样的教育机会。因此此处应该改为After。
2.different→same。理由同上。
3.down→up。前文已说人们赚钱越来越多，因此此处应该是收入增加而不是减少。
4.Nevertheless→Therefore/Consequently。由上下文可至此处应该为因果关系而不是转折关系，即正因为人们的薪水增长了，对于食物与衣物的需求减少，而对医疗服务、旅游以及教育的需要增加了，所以在这些服务行业可以找到更多的工作机会。
5.them→it。本句中without them指的是没有几门语言的知识，此处them错指a knowledge of several languages，然而knowledge是主语的中心词，所以要把them改为it。
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6.present→absent。根据常识可知，该句应该是“如果他因为生病而缺席，当他回来时通常就会失去工作”，present不符合逻辑。
7.删去if。该句中的if是误用，even if后面接从句，而该句后面只有their bodies，是半句话，意思为“即使他们的身体”，不符合语法逻辑规则，故应该把if删除，即even their bodies，意为“就连他们的身体”这样才可以与前边的短语构成符合主语表示他们的生活方式和身体状态都得以发生巨变。
8.harmful→harmless。从上文的承接和语义关系看，该段所表达的意思是：科学是无害的，但是一但它能提供技术的时候，那就不一定无害了。因此应该使用harmless。
9.when→after。when表示“当„„时”，after表示“„„之后”。本句中ten thousand years ago指距今一万多年前，是在长期的原始狩猎时期之后，故应把when改为介词after。
10.planet→planets。从逻辑上来讲，人类探索其他星体，不止一个两个，除了移民约球外，兴许还有水星木星等，故应将other后的可数名词变成复数形式，而the other后的可数名词则不为复数形式。
1.among→between。among指两个以上的人或物体之间的关系，between则专指两个人或者物体之间的关系，而文中指两者关系的摩擦，故应该使用between。
2.with→as。“as the result of „ ”意为“作为„„的结果”，在剧中表明“传统小家庭是社会压力从封建社会向工业社会过渡的过程中形成的”。“with the result of „ ”无此用法。
3.that→of。“because that”后面必须接从句，而文中后面所接为名词短语，因此应该使用“because of”，它同样表示原因，但时候却直接接名词短语。
4.by→on。“played by”表示“由„„表演或演奏”，文中所表达意思是在乐器上演奏，故此时应该使用介词on。
5.at→in。当表示在某个世纪时，century前的介词应该为in而不是at。
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6.him→himself。这里误将人称代词宾格代替了反身代词使用，从而引起句子歧义或者意义含糊不清，改为himself之后则和主语Gram正好对应。
7.to→over。表示“对„„优势”使用短语“advantage over sth.”的形式。
8.删去of。“despite”有两种用法：一种是后面直接接名词作为宾语，另外一种是接从句，结构为“despite that„”。根据文中情况，应该为第一种，故将of删掉。
9.删去of。“aware”与“despite”相似，也有两种用法，既可以在后面加介词of，然后接名词作宾语，也可以直接接从句。文中情况为第二种，故将of删去。
10.are后面加of。介词of后面接名词或者名词短语是一种特定用法，表示前面事物的性质特点和意义。原文意为：我们都认为他很适合这个职位。若不加介词，则原文语句不通。
1.it→they。句中“it”所指代的是前面的“other races”，故必须对应用复数形式they。
2.he→you。这里必须特别注意，在这种祈使句中，一般使用第二人称代词you。
3.their→its。由于“their”所指代的是前面的“sea water”，因此必须使用单数形式its，并且根据文意此处应该为所有格，相当于“sea water’s”。
4.this→it。根据句意可知该处“this”作为形式宾语指代“for four or even six billion of us to exist”，然而this不能作为形式宾语。
5.oneself→ourselves。为保持和前面人称“98 percent of us”以及“we”在数方面的一致性，必须将oneself改为ourselves。
6.its→their。根据前文中“their”以及后文中“men”可知此处的“raises and promotions”是指“women’s raises and promotions”，故必须使用复数形式的所有格their。
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7.their→its。由于此处指代对象为population，而population是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将their改为its。
8.that→those。根据句意此处“that”指代对象为“differences”，所以必须使用复数形式的所有格those，以保持数上的一致性。
9.whomever→whoever。因为whomever为宾格形式，不能作为“is best qualified”的主语，所以必须使用主格形式的whoever。
10.these→those。these和this均可表示确指，that和those均可表示不定指。
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第三篇：综合改错题
（一）综合改错练习题
1、（8处）太阳下山后，傍晚时分。我和姐姐来到一坐大山脚下。我们开始向上攀登。爬着爬着，我们看见周围开着一朵朵白花，真是五颜六色。攀到山腰，红花渐渐多起来了，它们红得那么鲜艳，灿烂、漂亮，艳丽极了。你看，这一族还是争奇斗艳，那一族已是真相盛开了。
2、（10处）上课铃响了。我们全体每个同学都赶快走进教室，立刻安静下来。李老师已经笑容满面的微笑着走近了教室的门。她不但有病，可课还是上的那样代劲……她在黑板上写字，可还是那样工整。每个同学都十分钻研地听她讲。
3、（8处）亲爱的外公，你好：
我是您的外生冬冬，我离开老家出来已经差不多大概有五年整了。非常想你。现在我已经上六年级了，还有一学期即将就要小学毕业。我现在学习目的态度明确，我要好好学习，争取被评为“三好学生”的光荣称号。
亲爱的外公，今年寒假我不回来了等我明年考上初中以后，我和爸爸、妈妈一起回来看您和外婆。祝您身体健康！
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4、（8处）有一次，作完语文作业，我把本子一推。就要出去玩。爸爸问我“作业捡察过了吗”？我漫无边际地回答“不用捡察，保证没措”！爸爸庄严对我说，“不要那么自信。细心一点好，学习可不能有一点马虎！”
5、（8处）在实践活动课上，老师请张小华到前面讲“阿凡提巧斗财主”地故事。因为张小华嗓子有些嘶哑，可是讲得很认真。同学们也认真听得很精神，教室里雅雀无声。他正讲完，老师首先是第一个鼓掌，同学们也跟着爆炸出热烈的掌声。
6、（8处）有人以为鱼不会发出声音，真是这样吗。虽然你来到海边，戴上一幅特制的耳机，把耳机的一头接到水中，便能听到稀奇古怪的声音：“呼噜呼噜”，这是鲅鱼的声音。“吧嗒吧嗒”，这是气鼓鱼再说话。成群沙丁鱼喧闹起来就象是夜间的海浪冲击着海岸。水中歌手„„赛音鱼发出的声响，如同柔和悦耳的歌声一样。
7、（8处）我们班长的李晓明是德、智、体全面发展。他不仅关心集体，克苦学习。还注意锻炼身体，因为，他被评为三好学生。语文对他特别感兴趣，经长给“语文报”投稿。
（二）四大名著练习题
1．按要求写出人物形象或文学作品：
（1）《水浒传》中“倒拔垂杨柳”的人物是（）。（2）《三国演义》中“煮酒论英雄”的主要人物是（）。
2．请结合《三国演义》，说出诸葛亮与周瑜联手指挥的一场著名的以少胜多的战 役，是（）；再说出诸葛亮挥泪斩马谡是因为（）一事。
3．在《水浒传》中，绰号为“智多星”的人是（），也被称为“赛诸葛”。
4．《三国演义》中塑造了一位过五关斩六将、千里走单骑的英雄形象，这个英雄是().这部书中有关这个英雄的传奇故事还有很多，请用最简洁的语言写出 一个故事的名称及内容：
5．诸葛亮是《三国演义》中的重要人物，请说出小说中有关诸葛亮的两个故事 名称。例：舌战群儒。____________、____________。
6．下面是四大名著中的人物与情节，其中搭配不当的一项是（）
（1）鲁智深——倒拔垂杨柳（2）诸葛亮——三顾茅庐
（3）孙悟空——大闹天空（4）刘姥姥——三进大观园 7．古典名著《西游记》中，孙悟空最具有反抗精神的故事情节是（）。《水浒传》中一百零八将个个都有一段精彩的故事，人人都有一个特征鲜明 的外号。请用一句话写出《水浒传》中你最熟悉的故事：
8．“天下三分”是指天下分裂为______、_______、_______三国。9．《西游记》中的“大闹五庄观、推倒人参树”的是（）。10．成语“万事俱备，只欠东风”出自四大名著（）中。11．写出四大名著中含“三”的故事。
12．四大名著的名称及作者：
第四篇：GMAT考试改错题（模版）
对一许多GMAT考生来说，GMAT改错题都是一个让人头疼的问题。按理来说，改错题考的是GMAT语法，而中国学生向来是不怵语法的，但为什么到GMAT这儿就不是了呢?究其原因，一是因为GMAT除了考语法知识外，更强调表达的有效性和简洁性。
360教育集团说ETS经常对同一句愿用两到三个语法 上正确但表达上有差异的选项来干扰你。而更让人难以忍受的是，GMAT考题并不完全遵循我们通常所学的、甚至一些专业语法书上明确规定的规则，而有
举例来说，我们在中学曾学过“which可指代前面整个句子”的语法现象，如She worked he re for several years, which contributed to her later success.此句which即指代前面整个句子，许多语法书上也提到过一点，但GMAT却并不买帐，坚持认为这句话是错的。又如，我们在中学时学过that引导宾语从句时，that是可以省略的，但GMAT却说，那怎么行呢 ?这是不允许的。如果你由此而对前学过的语法产生怀疑，而求助于更厚、更全、更权威的 语法书的话，你会发现你的怀疑是毫不道理的。如果你要考GMAT，那没有办法，你只有好好熟悉GMAT
具体说来，GMAT
1.(1)which(或代词it)绝对不可指代前面的整个句子;
(2)because不可引导名词性从句;
(3)宾语从句中引导词that一般不能省略;
(4)if绝不可以引导名词性从句，如要表示“是否”，只能用whether引导;
(5)对不作为介词宾语的事物作限定性修饰，只用that而不用which。而which仅用于引导对 介宾进
2.在require、demand等表“建议、命令”意义的词之后的that从句，要求用虚拟语气动词，即动词原形，不加should
3.绝对不可以单独使用that指代前面的单数或不可数名词，而一般是用that of+n.结构指代 或换用
4.绝不可以单独使用this、these来指代前面出现的单数或复数名词，而绝对要通过换用其 他人称代词，或重复前面出现的名词或者改变句子结构来避免这样非正式且模糊的指代。如 sth.of this kind, like this /these等模糊表达均要用such+n.(n.即重复this、these所 指代的对象)来取代，意为“这些„„”。另外，在“such„„that”结构中，such只修饰 具体名词，而不修饰抽象名词(如 rapidity、severity等)
5.在我们通常使用的there be
(1)there could be done sth.;
(2)there be sth.done;
(3)there being+
(4)there was sth.(抽象的表动作的名词)，如说there was a transmisscion万万不可。呈般来说，GMAT中there be 仅用于“某处有某物”，而此物是指一具体名词，如knife，star，wolf等，而非抽象名词conversion, relation
6.表示某人有某种能力做某事，最佳答案的选择依据是can do >be able to do >has(hav e)ability to do>has(have)a capability of doing„在选择时，有can do 就不用含be able to do 的选项，依次
7.当我们需要举例时，一律用such as结构，而不用like
8.在GMAT改错题中，ETS倾向于用主动语态而非被动语态，当用主动或被动语态的选项在语法和句意
9.在GMAT中，关于being
(1)being+n.(2)being+adj.(3)as being+n./adj./v.-ving.;
GMAT认为在以上表达中，being
10.当我们对一动宾结构进行替代时，不用do it, 一律用do so.;
11.介词短语：on account of, because of, despite(in spite of), as a result of之后只跟简单的各词短语。若其后跟的是动名词或名词所有格+动名词短语，或名词短语之后用一复杂的现在分词来修饰时，应改为与其相同意义的连词because, although等引导的从
12.(1)n.that is(are)adj.必然要换为ad.+n.的名词短语结构，如a man who is poor的选项必错，而应选含有a poor man
(2)当表示谓语部分，尤其是表示实义动词的含义时，就直接用其动词形式表示，而不要用名词形式或形容词形式，如：be a cause就一定会被cause(动词)替代;be suggestive of 一定会被 suggest替代。
(3)一些常见词的替换方式：not any 一定会被no替代;that which一定会被what替代;hav ing been done会被 done(限定词)
13.平行结构的最后一个成立之前必定有一个连词 and, or, neither, nor或as well as, 否则嘴并列结构必存在问题。如：to do A.do B, do 的表达就必死无疑，正确表达应该是 to do A, do B, and do C 或 to do A, to do B, and to do C。;
14.在平行结构中，对于“不是„„而是”的结构，ETS更喜欢用rather than,而很少用inst ead of。实践中，若5个选项中存在这两个词的互换，直接在含rather than的选项中找答案，除非含rather than的结构有语法或逻辑错误，才可考虑 instead of
15.若在题中的划线部分(即A选项)中发现情态动词，那么在最后的正确答案中必须有些情态动词或类似语气的词出现。实践中，此原则可转化为：不含此情态动词或类似语气词的选项均为错误选项，立即排除
对于GMAT的“家规”，也不必过于担心，熟悉之后，在实践中逐步巩固即可。对于GMAT“家 规”您可放心的是，GMAT“家规”训练出来的表达完全适用于其他语法书的“国法”，反之则不然，或者说，GMAT的语法更苛刻些。不管如何苛刻，想考GMAT的话，您就必须得遵守，否则您就等着“家法侍侯”吧!
第五篇：英语六级作文训练
一、1 目前很多人报考研究生
我认为形成这股热潮的原因是„„ 3 自拟标题 题目分析：
研究生，作为找到一份好工作的有力筹码，更是处于经济危机水深火热中毕业生们的一个热门选择，因此本文可围绕考研的种种好处以及结合经济危机进行讨论。
引用
参考例文：
The Post-graduate Craze
Each year, millions of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination.More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education.What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma? First, it is the demand of the time.In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society.Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever.That is why many students will further their studies.Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to succeed.Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training.A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce.One way to gain some advantage over others is to have a higher degree.No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.样文点评：
post-graduate entrance examination 研究生入学考试 入学考试有很多 如高考;college(or university)entrance examination
pursue vt 追求 名词格式 pursuit 有部电影不就叫 The Pursuit of Happyness
当幸福来敲门
indispensable
adj.必不可少的, 必需的，在讨论某种积极事物时候都可以用到!
account for
说明〔解释〕„原因
an age of knowledge updating and information explosion 一个知识不断更新和信息爆炸的时代 同样，也可作为套语使用。
preferential treatment 优惠待遇
No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.文章点睛之笔，别嫌老土，实用拿分才是王道啊~~
从文章结构看，首先阐明考研热现象，然后分析考研热并罗列三点原因，尾巴点睛!
注意套语的熟练使用，此类文章层次感极为重要，要让改卷老师对你的文章结构一目了然~
二、Relationship Between Major and Future Job 现在很多人工作的具体内容和其在大学所学的专业知识相关性并不大。
出现这种现象的原因。
我的看法
题目分析：
被迫学习自己不喜欢的专业绝对是种痛苦，Chance对此略有体会。写作可先从所学专业和未来工作之间关系开始讨论，接着罗列出现该现象的原因，如盲目报考热门专业，未真正找到自身兴趣所在等等。最后，给出自己观点，本文最好采用正面观点：尽管专业不对口，自己也要适应。
引用
参考例文：
Relationship Between Major and Future Job
It’s a striking fact that there isn’t necesary relationship between one’s major and specific job duties for majority of people.Many people condemn this on outdated education system an some even complain that textbooks are useless.This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First of all , it’s a common sense that there alwasys exists a gap between theory and practice.This gap needs to be bridged by continuous exporation of similarities and differences between these two factors and accordingly corresponding modification.Secondly, due to the rapid development of technology, the knowledge from textbooks becomes behind the times soon.And it will lead to the disassociation between what one acquired in college education and what he does at work.From my point of view, when faced with the disassociation, one should adapt himself to working environment as soon as possible by adjusting his own information system.What’s more important, life-long learing is essential to one’s career success.Even after one reached the required levels from college education curriculum, pursuit of knowledge should never be ceased.Last but not the least, we should bear this firmly in mind that one’s ability is valued much more than one’s academic degree.三、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students.You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题
2)分析导致该问题的原因
3)大学生应该如何应对该问题
Employment Pressure Facing College Students ______________________________________________________________
【行文思路】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。
【优秀范文】
Employment Pressure Facing College Students
[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation.[1]But now, things are different.Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs.They often complain that graduation means joblessness.[2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?
[3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand.This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job.[3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience.[3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the college.After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.[6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation.[3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies.[3]What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience.[3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.【作文点评】
[1]过去和现在进行对比。
[2]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。
[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[4]“大学生供过于求”。
[5]“倾向，趋于”。
[6]“面对日趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。
[7]“用心学习”。
[8]“积累相关的实际经验”。
[9]“更加关注”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation.临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。
2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary
临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。
【KEY】
1.Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.2.Obviously, we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree.四、Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Unhealthy Habits of College Students.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯，例如：晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏。。
2.这种不健康生活习惯的危害
3.如何纠正
写作思路依然是上课反复强调的功能段落的写作思路：首段为负面现象描述(即提出问题)，二段为问题分析(危害)，尾段为建议措施。
It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among young people, especially college students.Typical examples include staying up late, being addicted to games, consuming in an inappropriate way.Thus, due attention should be paid to students’ daily habits.Apparently, these bad habits may generate negative impacts.To begin with, they may impair students’ physical health and psychological fitness.In addition, what worries many teachers is that they may also exert negative influences on students’ academic performance.To conclude, never can we turn a blind eye to these phenomena.In view of the seriousness of this issue, it is time that we took effective measure.Firstly, it is suggested that universities or colleges should cultivate students’ awareness of healthy living.Secondly, students themselves are well-advised to learn to regulate and control their own life appropriately.Only by doing so, can we hope to see the ideal scenes in which students enjoy their colorful and healthy life in Ivory Tower.五、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力
2)大学生缓解压力的方式有„
3)你一般都是如何排解压力的?
How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。
高分范文
How Should College Students Relieve Pressure?
Today’s college students face many pressures, mainly from parents’ expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition.[1]Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence.[2]More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.[3]Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure.[2]First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves [4]so as to [5]make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages.[2]Second, we should [6]set a clear aim of a struggle.The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active.[2]Third, [7]attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure.[2]Finally, if you find pressure is nearly [8]beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.[2]As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment.[4]In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection.[2]So my employment pressure was relieved greatly.Now I become confident in my future, and I [9]do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation.【亮点点评】
[1]although引导让步状语从句。
[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[3]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。
[4]表示目的。
[5]“扬长避短”。
[6]“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。
[7]动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。
[8]“超出„范围或能力”。
[9]强调动词believe。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。
2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve
临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。
3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages
临摹： 为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。
【KEY】
1.Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it.2.Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society.3.In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities in an all-around way.
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