aajnswi雅_思写作大作文高分制胜战略（精选多篇）

第一篇：aajnswi雅_思写作大作文高分制胜战略

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!_ 一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了..古往今来，杰出的军事家不胜枚举，然可谓之“战略家”者，凤毛麟角。诸葛孔明“未出茅庐，已定三分天下”；主席润之在世界上最小最简陋的作战室里却指挥了世界空前的人民解放战争。孙子曰：“不谋万世者，不足谋一时；不谋全局者，不足谋一域。”

其实，雅思作文写作也是如此。曾经有学生前来咨询“老师，我上次作文写得可好了，我用了很多复杂的句型和罕见的词汇。文章洋洋洒洒300来字，当时看得我自己都激动了，可是成绩出来后只给了5分，当时简直就是晴天霹雳，把我雷得外酥里嫩的……”于是让学生将上次写作进行回忆。如下：

题目：Some people think that the increase of cheap air travel has brought about many benefits while others argue that this development has nothing good but its drawbacks to the world’s environment and resources。

Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion。

首段：The merits and drawbacks of the cheap air travel is a frequent topic of discussion when people are submerged by the attractive and beckoning information relating to the discounted air tickets online。

中间段1：有些人说便宜机票好。第一，对乘客好，比如说……；第二，对航空公司好，比如说……；第三，对目的地好，比如说……

中间段2：另一些人说便宜机票多了不好。第一，对航空公司不好……第二，污染了环境……

结尾：根据上面分析，我觉得便宜机票还是挺好的。

这篇文章看上去几乎是天衣无缝，有理有据，不卑不亢……但是，仔细看看本文的中间论证段和结尾段，就不难发现，怎么自认为“便宜机票好”，却又在中间段分析“便宜机票不好”的段落里说得头头是道呢？以子之矛攻子之盾？

在这种体型上往往大家的作文思路宏观把握，也就是所谓的“谋篇”出现了问题。我们一起来分析一下这篇文章。首先咱们一起来看看题目的问题方式：Discuss these two views and give your opinion。然后思考一下两个问题：

1.讨论的两者观点是哪两者观点，存在在哪呢？ 2.要谁来讨论呢？

同学肯定能轻而易举的给出这两个问题的回答： 1.这两者观点当然就是题目中所说的两个观点啦。2.当然是要求“烤鸭”本人来讨论这两个观点啰。

可是同学有没有想过，既然是要我来讨论这两者观点(往往是矛盾的两个观点)，那么我是以一种客观的态度来讨论这两者观点呢还是应该以一种带有主观的自我感情色彩的方式来讨论这两者观点呢？

当然，既然要“我”来讨论这两者观点，肯定“我”是一定带着自己主观色彩来评析这两者观点的。就像两个人吵架，吵得不可开交，天旋地转，但是谁也说服不了谁，于是两人相约找“我”评理。这就是传说中的(You)Discuss the two views的来源。

因此上面这位同学的文章就出现了这样的问题：既然最后给出的自己观点是“便宜机票好”，那为什么在分析第二这观点“有些人说便宜机票不好只会给环境和资源带来消极影响”的时候还要对其进行支持呢？逻辑不就有误了吗？

因此这篇文章的结构应该如此：

首段：The merits and drawbacks of the cheap air travel is a frequent topic of discussion when people are submerged by the attractive and beckoning information relating to the discounted air tickets online。(这句话写得还挺不错的)

中间段1：便宜机票能带来很多的好处(topic sentence)+一方面给出行者带来了好处，节省了钱财……另一方面给相关的产业经济也带来了好处，比如说……

中间段2：但是另外一些人却不这么想，他们认为便宜机票没啥好处，反而加剧了环境污染，还破坏了环境。的确偶尔在极个别地区是存在这么点问题，但是总体来看，他们这样想是很傻很天真的。事实上……

结尾段：根据上面的分析，我认为这个便宜机票真的是太好了。

请同学们注意，根据上面的分析我们可以得出这样的结论： 要“我”对题目两个观点A, B加以讨论，那么自己对此事的态度决定着讨论题目两者观点的方式！如果自己觉得观点A正确，就把它加以立论的写作；而往往与之相矛盾的B观点，就只能采用驳论的方式加以论证。反之亦然。当然在某些情况下(题目中两者观点不互相矛盾)，也有可能是觉得两者观点都挺对的。则中间两段直接用立论的写作方式将两个观点进行支持的论证。如剑7 Test 1 的大作文。

谋篇到位，文章的框架就能容易搭建起来。议论文的目的是让人看完之后感觉言之有物，论之有理。老生常谈Task2写作结构总分总；须铭记这个所谓的“分”应源自于首段的“总”；又推出末段的“总”。这条宏观上的文章主线必须贯穿全文，否则论证只能是大而无当，漏洞百出。在缜密的文章框架搭建好的前提下，剩下的只是在这样的结构中添加进去适当的句子就大功告成了。

第二篇：aawdffy雅_思作文75分

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!_ 一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了..雅思作文7.5分，就说说作文好了~~心得+好句，哈~ 来源： ☃张小艺☃的日志

我用的雅思材料（供参考）:1 听力：（8分）1 剑4—7：我把真题的听力听写了两遍。第一遍是全部听写，一开始要听好几遍才能写下来一句话，而且词的单复数也好多不对，一套题就要听写好长时间。由于雅思听力很多填空，单词的准确性极为重要，尤其是单复数很难听准确，所以这样的听写有利于找到听力中的漏洞，找到一些自以为会但写不对的单词，而且单复数听也会比较准确，连读也会听的比较清楚。第一遍听下来我就写了好几本白纸了，很厚一沓~~第二遍主要听写了一下主要意思，写的也比较快。

听力每天都要听，精听和泛听配合，我们老师让我每星期5个BBC或VOA的听（2分多钟的），每篇都写下来，然后找他对原文，找那个地方错了。如果写的困难，可以用ＶＯＡ慢速。泛听挑零碎时间听，最好不要晚上睡觉在床上听，听的睡着的话以后一听见英文就犯困。囧~~2 王陆807 听力词汇（黄皮）全部都是要写会的单词噢~ 3 卢峭梅讲雅思听力机经http://search.dangdang.com/search_pub.php?key=%D1%C5%CB%BC%CC%FD%C1%A6%BB%FA%BE%AD&SearchFromTop=1&catalog=01

2阅读1剑4--7 有的同学只全部做了一遍，做多了多少会记住答案，但如果阅读不是很好，最好还是做三遍。第一遍：成套做一遍，注意做错的题，必须找到做错的原因（注意不要留下深的印记）同时尽量控制做题时间在50分钟。把真题里不会的单词总结并背会。第二遍：分8大题型做，如把leadings的题目都找出来，集中做一遍，把错题搞明白。8大题型其实都是在找关键词，集中练习有利于快速准确确定关键词并在文章中找到关键词。其中最难的应该是判断false 与not given的题目，需要多练习。8大题型有4个有顺序，4个没顺序。Leadings题型做题时一般取每个段落的前两句的大意，如果段落里有but however等转折词，就取最后一句的意思，而不取第一二句意思。第三遍：成套再做一遍。2刘洪波的阅读真经（1—4）http://search.dangdang.com/search_pub.php?key=%D1%C5%CB%BC%D4%C4%B6%C1%D5%E6%BE%AD&SearchFromTop=1&catalog=01 这个书上的文章跟雅思文章相似度很高，题出的不好，可以用来联系卡时间，文章有时间要精读。写作

雅思写作机经题源大全

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这个蓝的 还有十天突破雅思写作 4 口语 十天突破雅思口语

写作7.5分心得：

大作文的写作最重要，但是小作文也很重要，不能一直放的小作文不看，因为小作文如果写的不流畅，老是思考，不能在20分钟内写完，就会严重影响大作文的质量。写作文一定要知道换说法，一个意思同样的说法最好不要出现第二遍，这当然需要积累不同的句型和短语，比如文章后面给的写好处的句子要记得换的用哦~~~老师说大作文要得高分，倒装句、插入语、强调句、复合句和同位语至少各用一次！一开始，我每篇作文都五种句型刻意出现一遍，到后来就用的比较熟

1把《雅思写作机经题源大全 》看了三遍，主要是记了上面的论据。上面的文章按类型分类，可以总结一下某一方面常用的搭配和句型。

我的写作老师让我把新概念3的文章背了，这不是要命么。不过我把新3上的文章都看了一遍，把觉得好的句子总结在了一个本上，然后背，尤其是快考试那几天每天背一遍，弄得很熟，所以用起来也很熟。大家一定要看啊！！3 关于模板：我觉得模板还是很有用的，但不是已有书上的模板，大家都知道的那些模板和句型最好少用。因为雅思作文一共五大类，我一般练得都是两边倒的作文，自己有准备一个模板，除了问原因解决类的作文外都可以用同一个模板，所以要练得比较熟，一般写作文都要用自己的模板。不过我考试时候还是碰上了问原因类的作文，所以最好是总结两个模板就万无一失啦~~。

当时老师让我基本上一天看一篇《经济学人》的文章，总结不会的单词、短语和句型，因为上面的文章都是老外写的，所以文章非常地道，好句子很多~~~ 上强化课前看过一遍十天突破雅思写作，觉得还是很不错的，对雅思写作有了比较全面的了解。但是上面的句型和模板最好不要用了~~

关于写作文：我一共写了十篇左右的大作文，小作文要每种至少练一篇吧，快考试前一个星期我用专门的雅思考试写作纸卡时间，大小作文一起一起写，写了4套。我觉得大作文不在于要练的很多，但是要刻意的改进。写完一篇文章后要自己改一遍，把看的出来的语法和单词错误改了，还要看论据合不合理，再把看过的好的句型刻意套进去，然后如果有条件找个老师给改改。第一篇作文我写了一个半小时才写完，当时真是把所有能用的上的好句子和词组都尽量往里套。老师说第一篇要是半小时之内写完就是混的没好好写。尽快把能用的上的写作资料背熟，这样写作时间自然会减少，小作文必须20分钟搞定，如果你的模板和句子用的熟，大作文也会很流畅。我的雅思考试作文写了满满的2页考试纸后，又要了一张写了一半，还把小作文检查了一遍（真的检查出一个错~哈）。7 除此之外，我还总结了四种句型，开头句型，写好处的句型，写坏处的句型和解决问题类句型。因为所有的雅思议论文题目基本上都是要讨论一个问题的好 的方面和坏的方面，所以这样的句式要准备几个（不用太多），而且确定自己背的很熟，最好是每篇文章都换的多用，达到用的灵活自如。

好句总结： 多用such替换the ,a.例：Admittedly, such issue ,to some extent,has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.（模板的第3段开头）开头句型：（放在文章中间也很好的句子）

As a result of constant media attention , A(A指题目话题), once largely ignored,has come to be seen as especially valuable/significant.2(The right of the media to do this)is rarely disputed, but(the way in which it does this)often comes under withering critism.(括号里可以换)

As our lives are saturated with the flood of(advertisements),no one can avoid being influenced by ads.(ads 错的，不能用简写哦~)

4(Bad traffic and increasing pollution)are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe.（in the globe全世界）

The issue of A is a complex and sensitive one.What lies behind …..?(问原因类)

After years in the wilderness , the term “ A ” seems posied to make a comeback.(和第一句意思比较像)好处句型！Nothing can be compared with sb/sth ~~(新3的哦，推荐)2 A exert a positive impact on ….A can an effective way to(help)……(简单但好用)Few things can be more（impressive）than ….that…(新3的哦，推荐)5 play a pivotal role in … benefit from../ profit from…一般 7 promot the development of..8 A is the cornerstone of … 9 remove the barrier for..raise one’s awareness of …常用 11 enable sb to do … sb is the ultimate beneficiary（sb是。的最终受益者，社会问题类说人们应该自己也承担责任用）consolidates its status as the..14 get a clear perspective of..15 give a boost to..A is an indispensable part of B 17 A is irreplaceable tp B The signigicant of A to B can never be ingored 19 A is the key ingredient to B~~ 20 A made it possibe for sb to… A exert a peculiar fascination on a great many people.(新3的哦，推荐)

find it impossible to resist the temptation to do ….Needless to say / Indeed ,……（可以放在任一句开头，很好用哦~）23 develop an unshakable faith in … 24 have a reputation of..Nothing can catch them for … make a contribution to(也可作写坏处的句子 the city make its own contribution to noise)build bridges between 28 特别的

Improve one’s physical and psychological wellbeing /soundness 身体心理健康

optimise people’s living standards 提高人们生活水平

eradicate poverty 消除贫困

It’s not A that are important ,but B

Satisfy basic(human)needs 满足要求

Ease the tension and conflicts between alleviate the problem of 消除冲突和紧张

Be fully aware of the consequences

The impact of（sporting activities）goes far beyond the bounds of(leisure and recreation.)坏处的句型 drive up the crime rate..2 widen the gap between A 3 pose a(direct)threat to … 4 stifle creativity diminish individual’s leisure time… 6 spin out of control cause(creat)tension and conflicts between… exert(have)detrimental/negative/adverse influence（impact）upon/on 9 is markly incompatible with…与。不协调 10 be afflicted with … 11 deprive one of sth sth is the root cause of … 13 be saturated with sth 14 at the expense of ….15 be confronted with sth 16 run contrary to … erode the national identity 18 pose a dilemma for 19 is an vicious circle hamper(scientific)progress there is a yawning gap between 22 pose a devastating problem the reputation is ruined 24 A is a complete failure Things can go wrong on a big scale sth is always faced with a difficult task /problem 27 It is impossible to have(little)difficulties in doing 29pay the price for(fame)(pollution)is the price we pay for(overpopulated ,over industrialized planet)

people seem to fail to take into account the fact that ….好句！32 lead to some unfavorable results 33 sacrifice ….for …

There is a major concern over t he world about ….35 give rise to a bunch of familiar questions 36This is compounded by the fact that …

the problem of(information overloaded)exacerbated by(the growth …)38 The problem , however , is complicated by the existence of dozens of..and by the fact that…..解决问题类

小模板：（经济学人）

1Evidence suggests that a key step is to develop a policy on ….,saying clearly(that..).2Other policies(such as。)can be taken to back up the policy.One helpful step is to … ,Another possibility is to improve …., so that ….It should be an addtion to the policy work ,not a substitute.The more effort put in and wider(the whole school)involvement ,the substantial the results are likely to be.give priority to sth shoulder the responsibility to 3 comply with impose restrictions on..take …into account /consideration should be increasingly focus on…rather than … what will make the most difference is …..The new study makes this point even more starkly There are ways of dealing with the topic through …, ….and …..Three factors are involved in this change.新概念3+剑桥好句： Apparently,there is a good deal of truth in this idea./There is an element of truth in both agreements

2More importantly/significantly,there is still good evidence that …

3This is compounded by the fact that …由于。的事实，使。变得更糟 4Women,it is obvious, are freer than in the past.插入语 5 has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.6 It’s not A that are important ,but B Providing more parking area, in the long run ,has proved to be a practical way out in many large cities in the world.插入语 Not only had the poor man been arrested ,but he had been sent to prison ,as well It has been estimated that …据估计 Considering the amount she paid ,he was dear in more ways than one.非谓语

Fearing that she would never see Ratus again use fewer materia resources and ,therefore,be much compatible with protecting the environment avoid squandering money on 避免浪费钱在。上 shoulder important responsibilities on major global issues

14These regions are fragile not just in terms of their ecology,but also in terms of the culture of their inhabitants.Climate change ,whatever its causes,is a direct threat to their way of life.插入语 Cinema might, for example , have become pimarily a documentay form.for example放中间，好！But what happened was that it became ,overwhelmingly, a medium for tekking stories.插入语

28Unfortunately, they are the ones the organisation can least afford to lose.29 There is an abundance of evidence to support the motivational benefits that result from carefully matching people to jobs.an abundance of 大量的，好！Managers, must be sure ,therefore, that employees feel confident that their efforts can lead to performance goals.插入语 31To varying degree, we all have secrets which……

Instead of becoming a doctor , however ,he became a successful writer of detective stories.33 It seemed certain that

广告Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste,we are no longer free to choose the things we want ,for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us.35 In time ,it became an accepted fact that …

第三篇：小升初英语作文写作高分技巧

小升初英语作文写作高分技巧

备战小升初的小考生们想要获得一个好的成绩，就应该先提高学习的方法与技巧，并且要科学的进行复习。下面内容是有关如何提高小升初英文写作的高分技巧。

通常英小升初英语作文有以下几个特点：紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求;以有指导的写作为主，便于考生在短时间内构思成文;突出试题的交际性，考查考生在特定的情景中运用语言的能力;增强试题的实用性，所选话题贴近学生学习生活，为学生所熟悉;看图作文主要考查考生运用所学知识解决实际问题的能力。

小升初英语作文注意两点

一、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。

二、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：

１.认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。２.理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

最后一个月如何训练小升初英语作文

１.在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练。

练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。

２.重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一。

目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用(ontheotherhand，however，furthermore)、作者的表达方式(词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用)、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。

小升初英语作文“四步走”

由于时间限制，考试时必须在所限定的时间内完成英语作文。英语作文步骤如下：

１)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

２)写完后一定要再细看一遍。

３)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。

４)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。

主要体裁作文写作技巧

(一)看图作文应考虑的几点：

１.看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。

２.确定短文须用的时态和该用的人称。

３.确定体裁(说明文还是记叙文)，接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。

４.根据图片或图表大意议论。

(二)写提示议论文应考虑的几点：

１.文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句(topic)阐明观点或看法。２.会使用连接词分层次说明理由、缘由(supportingsentences)。

３.归纳总结，首尾呼应。

第四篇：写作高分策略、预测作文

四级写作高分策略

新四级考试并没有改变对写作的测试标准和要求，但在出题顺序上却做了明显的调整：写作作为第一项考查的内容，被提到新四级试卷的最开头，这令许多考生感觉不适应。其实，提高写作能力虽然较难，但考生如果坚持做到如下几点，就不难在规定的时间内写出一篇成功的英语作文。1．了解英语写作的测试目的，准确把握题目的要求

英语写作测试，其实主要还是要考查学生组织英语语言的能力，和用英语表达思想的能力，体裁不外乎议论文，说明文和应用文，主题也是在大学生熟知话题基础上的翻新或扩展。综观历年的四级作文真题，变化趋势是从三段论的议论文向实用性更强的应用文体，尤其是书信写作方面倾斜。考生平时应有意识地就他们感兴趣的一些话题进行思考和拓展，争取在实践中磨练敏锐的审题能力。

2．迅速梳理写作的思路，列出并借助提纲进行写作

到了大学阶段，学生还是非常善于思考的，他们不仅想象力非常丰富，而且各有独特的思维和写作思路。但是，如何将千头万绪的思路梳理清楚，学生则必须有真工夫。为此，在进行四级写作时，考生一定要首先形成自己的观点，之后合理运用一些手段，如常用的有四种：陈述理由、举例说明、提供数据、下定义等，之后充分就此展开论说。这样通过高效思考，严密组织，再辅以提纲形式的文章架构，考生一定会写出较符合规范的文章。

3．扩展写作提纲，草拟文稿

在利用提纲展示个人写作思路的基础上，学生还应充分利用现有的英语水平，按照一定的逻辑思路，充分表达个人的观点。写作之初，学生不必字斟句酌，只要脉络清楚，具备轮廓就可以了。草拟文章的过程实际是把思维结果外在化的过程，学生应力争使文章具有连贯性和流畅性。草拟过程的顺利与否，在很大程度上取决于平时训练所达到的水平。许多考生畏惧作文，经常懒于动笔；还有一些考生认为写作很难提高，干脆放弃平时的训练。这些想法都是错误的。为真正提高写作水平，就应有针对性地分体裁、分话题、分阶段地进行实战模拟，强迫自己一气呵成将文章写完。只要坚持多写、多练，平时注意扩大阅读，写作的水平自然就会提高。4．在反复揣摩的基础上，完善文章的草稿

自己修改作文是个好习惯，从训练之初就应注重在这个方面下功夫。修改作文必须从下面几个方面把握：注意句式结构的变化（要背诵一定的经典句型，而且要能够注意套改这样的优美句型）。例如：Not because I love Caesar less, but because I love Rome more（不是我不爱凯撒，而是我更爱罗马）。需要指出的是，虽然习作中应注意使用优美或地道的句子，但不可简单地堆砌；句子长短也要错落有致，应包含一些相对复杂的句式，同时避免犯一些基础性的语言错误。另外，学生还要注意文中运用的英语表达必须是简单且地道的（即easy but right English）。实际上，所谓这类的表达法界于词汇与句子之间，可称为语汇（英语中可用chunk来表达）。为了提高书面语言表达的地道性，学生应经常记忆这样的语汇，如an effective system for environmental protection和an effective system to protect the environment等。至于如何做到语言表达地道，笔者认为只有一种办法，那就是大量阅读，分类摘抄，在具体的语境中有针对性地体验英语表达。5.正确把握遣词造句的原则

正确选择词汇非常重要，考生切不可盲目地追求大词、生词。其实，四级作文要求考生选词范围尽可能灵活宽泛，但非常忌讳以辞害义，如果能够用decrease，就别用plummet（也是下降的意思）。那么考生到底怎样才能利用有限的词汇资源，写出比较鲜活的英语作文呢？笔者在此推荐如下使用词汇技巧：

（１）尽量使用同义词避免简单重复：如“增加”可用 increase, rise, grow, climb, go up, soar等；“重要”可用 important, critical, vital, significant, crucial等。

（２）尽量使用词性变化来丰富自己的表达手段：和汉语一样，变化词性也是丰富英语表达的重要途径，是学习者提高英语水平的重要标志。英语学习者如果能够用to voice some different opinions 来替代to give/express some different opinions;或to double/triple 来表示翻倍或增加三倍则会使文章在表达上更为形象而生动。

（３）尽量使用派生形式来点缀文章亮点：英语的构词特点就是使用前缀、后缀来完成灵活多变的语言特色。例如，it is of great importance／help/use/significance 来替代 it is very important/significant/helpful/useful 本身就是英语水平的一个综合展示。另外，考生作文如果能够出现not unnecessary/not unimportant 来表达非常重要或者必要，则更能显示考生的英语功底。

6.灵活运用句式变化的规则

前面也提过，四级作文长度要求不少于120个词，按考生作文句子的平均长度11个词估算，一般需要10—12 个句子。在四级作文评分标准里，对于句子长度虽然没有具体描述和量化给分，但是阅卷老师一般都会给文章里使用正确的长句子加上印象分，也会给错落有致的句式变化以奖励分数，如果考生能够在作文中恰当地使用一定难度的复杂句子，1 / 14 则更能起到锦上添花的作用。在写作训练中，考生其实可以欣赏范文，摘录名句，改装结构，模仿使用，直到熟练运用。笔者认为只要努力，下面的策略可以帮助立志争取作文高分的学生可以通过下面的几个措施来提高作文水平。

（1）欣赏范文，但不要囫囵吞枣式地整篇背诵。准备一个写作专用的笔记本，从范文欣赏中摘抄自己喜欢的、老师讲评的、值得推荐的句式结构。比如：I love you not because who you are, but because who I am when I am with you.（我爱你，并不是因为你是谁，而是因为我跟你在一起时的感觉。）Few People today, if any at all, would risk their lives swimming across the river dominated by flesh-eating crocodiles.（今天已经很少有人，如果还有的话，愿意冒生命危险游过那条鳄鱼出没的河流。）, If you fail to plan, you plan to fail.（如果你没能做计划，你就是计划着去失败。）

（2）模仿名句，但不要生搬硬套。准备足够的草稿纸，把自己摘抄来的名句，（如有不懂，应当向明白人求教）拆卸八块，然后重新组合，如是反复数次，直到熟练，甚至于可以自如组装，灵活运用。比如：上面的句子学生就可以在熟练掌握的基础上分别演绎出：I suggest that you choose English as your major not because it is easier to learn, but because it is promising when you take better prospect of employment into account.（我建议你选择英语专业，并不是因为她学起来更容易，而是因为她更有前景，如果你考虑到更好的就业机会。）；Most of the students, if not all, are likely to be absorbed in PC games such as counterstrike, which is more frequently known as CS（大多数学生，如果不是所有的学生，很可能被诸如反击这样的电脑游戏所吸引，这种游戏经常被更多的人叫做CS。）.（3）巧用心思，套用经典句型。鼓起勇气，说出自己想说的话，如果是母语，可能还好办，换成英语，大家最怕的是出错，出错扣分当然不好。但是利用经典句型组装一些长句子、靓句子和复杂句子对作文高分非常有帮助。比如作文开头常用句型：It is undoubted that …;there is no doubt that…;undoubtedly, there is…;It is beyond doubt that ….（4）写作是学生英语运用水平的具体体现，写作的功夫又是通过阅读、欣赏、模仿等具体手段训练出来的。写作过程中间很多实用技巧，需要读者舍得花时间、花精力、花心思去挖掘、去发现，相信你一定会收获N多的惊喜。

经典写作模版

1、对比观点型

(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为…… 2.另一些人认为……

3.我的看法……

The topic of ①________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦____________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.2、不同观点列举型(选择型)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.3、阐述主题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2.分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb ________(名言或谚语)reminds us that ________(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(举例说明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(举例说明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).2 / 14

In my opinion, ________(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying — A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you‟ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.4、解决方法型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1.问题现状 2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face the problem — A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(说明A的现状).Second, ________(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解决方法一).For another ________(解决方法二).Finally, ________(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解决方法).Consequently, I‟m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(带来的好处).5、说明利弊型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状 2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3.你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的优点之一).Besides ____________(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(对前景的预测

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____ 缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.6、答题型

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英语四级英译汉的目的,要求和评分

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.7、谚语警句型

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.3 / 14

经典句型背诵

1、… the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known / heard / had / read, etc)… the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known / heard / had / read, etc)例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.2、Nothing is + ~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V 例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.3、… cannot emphasize the importance of … too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.4、There is no denying that...(不可否认的...)例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.5、It is universally acknowledged that …(全世界都知道...)例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.6、There is no doubt that …(毫无疑问的...)例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.7、An advantage of …is that …(...的优点是...)例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won‟t create(produce)any pollution.8、The reason why … is that …(...的原因是...)

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.9、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that …(如此...以致于...)例句：So precious is time that we can‟t afford to waste it.10、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V…(虽然...)例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.11、The + ~er + S + V, the + ~er + S + V

The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V(愈...愈...)例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.The more books we read, the more learned we become.12、By +Ving, … can …(借着...，..能够..)例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.13、… enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(..使..能够..)例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.14、On no account can we + V…(我们绝对不能...)例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.15、It is time + S + 过去式(该是...的时候了)例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.16、Those who...(...的人...)例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.17、There is no one but…(没有人不...)例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.18、...be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不...)例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.19、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)

It is obvious that + 句子(明显的)

It is apparent that + 句子(显然的)例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.20、That is the reason why...(那就是...的原因)4 / 14 例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don‟t like it.21、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来，...一直...)例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.22、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式

例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.23、It pays to do...(...是值得的。)例句：It pays to help others.24、Spare no effort to do...(不遗余力的)例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.25、bring home to + 人 + 事(让...明白...事)例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.26、Due to / Owing to / Thanks to + N/Ving,...(因为...)例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.27、What a + Adj + N + S + V!

= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!

How important a thing it is to keep our promise!

28、Leave much to be desired(令人不满意)

例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.29、Pose a great threat to...(对...造成一大威胁)例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.30、do one‟s utmost to do...= do one‟s best to do...(尽全力去...)例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.31.According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.32.The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.33.No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.34.People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.35.An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.36.When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.37.Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person„s physical fitness.38.Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.39.An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city.However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.40.Many city residents complain that there are so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.41.There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.42.An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.43.A proper part-time job does not occupy students‟ too much time.In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.44.Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.45.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.46.In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.47.The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal 5 / 14 skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.48.It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.49.Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.50.No one can deny the fact that a person„s education is the most important aspect of his life.51.People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.52.In the last few decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.53.In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.54.People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.55.The information I‟ve collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.56.This is a matter of life and death — a matter no country can afford to ignore.57.For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons: 58.Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.59.This view is now being questioned by more and more people.60.Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out.The information I‟ve collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.61.Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.62.In view of such serious situation, environment-friendly tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.63.Using bicycle contributes greatly to people‟s physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.64.Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problems.65.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.66.There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes.One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.67.This issue has caused wide public concern.范文欣赏

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1)现在有一些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡 2)但有人认为网络游戏并不是一无是处 3)你对此的看法是……

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出对于某问题的一种反面看法，提纲第2点指出对于该问题的正面看法，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该问题的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生沉迷于网络游戏的问题，阐述家长和老师对该问题的否定态度和他们的担忧;指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度，并阐述网络游戏的好处;表明“我”对网络游戏的看法。Online Games

As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students.Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games.But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected.This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful.They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly.Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science.More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way.When they interfere 6 / 14 too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once.But if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.预测作文2

1)现在诸多的电子辞典及相关翻译软件被开发出来，人们不再需要翻阅厚重的字典 2)有人认为以后机器翻译会完全取代人工翻译 3)你是否同意这种观点，为什么? 【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一种有争议的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”是否同意这种观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述电子辞典和翻译软件的使用现状，引出机器翻译会代替人工翻译的观点;表明“我”对这一观点的态度并说明理由;总结“我”的观点，提出建议。

Machine Translation and Human Translation

In recent years, all kinds of electronic dictionaries and translation software have been developed.With the development of technology, these electronic dictionaries and software can help us translate not only words and phrases but even sentences and paragraphs.So some people come to the conclusion that machine translation will replace traditional human translation.However, I couldn‟t agree with this argument.Admittedly, translation machines and software bring much convenience for our study and our work.With them, we needn‟t bother to leaf through the heavy dictionaries.However, machine translation has its disadvantages.First, generally speaking, translation software only can give direct translation, which is sometimes not in accordance with the original articles in logic and meaning.Second, some people depend on electronic dictionaries and software too much, which is unfavorable to their improvement in language ability.Considering the above-mentioned, I think that machine translation cannot replace human translation, but it is a good complementary to human translation.Therefore, we should combine machine translation with human translation efficiently.预测作文3

1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热” 2)产生这一现象的原因 3)你的看法

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。Certificate Craze on Campus

In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students.Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.Why does this craze appear?

There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates.With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe.Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person‟s ability.In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove one‟s ability.Being crazy in getting certificates blindly is nothing but wasting time.To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.预测作文4

1)据调查显示，现在大学生每月的花销越来越高，很多大学生花钱如流水，根本没有节俭的概念 2)分析产生这一现象的原因 3)我的看法

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出校园内的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大 7 / 14 学生花钱没有节制的现象;分析导致大学生这种消费习惯的原因;阐述“我”对大学生消费观的看法。Extravagant Spending on College Campus

According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise.Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their mind.They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society.This extravagant spending is mainly caused by the following factors.First of all, nowadays most of students are the only children of their families.They are the apple in their family‟s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money.Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children.Thirdly, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tends to need more money.Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices.The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.预测作文5

1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动 2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处 3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处，提纲第3点要求指出注意事项，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践活动给大学生带来的好处;指出大学生参加社会实践时应该注意些什么。Social Practice of College Students

Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities.During the holidays, more and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike.It‟s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China‟s college education.Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus.Moreover, in social practice activities, students can apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems.So their practical skills are improved greatly.Besides, social practice helps strengthen students‟ sense of social responsibility.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.However, social practice may bring some problems.For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study.Therefore, we should try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.预测作文6

1)大学里逃课现象时有发生 2)分析学生逃课的原因 3)如何减少逃课现象

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生的逃课现象;分析大学生逃课的主要原因;说明应该如何减少逃课现象。Skipping Classes on College Campus

In colleges and universities, the phenomenon of students‟ skipping classes is not unusual.There are often some students who skip those classes for feeling unwell or other private reasons.Besides, still some students don‟t go to class without any reason but for they don‟t want to.There are two main reasons for college students‟ skipping classes.First, compared with in middle school, students have more freedom in college.It depends more on one student‟s consciousness whether he will attend the class.So those students lacking self-discipline begin to skip classes.Second, some teachers‟ lectures could not attract students‟ interests so that some students would rather skip classes to study what they are interested in.For whatever reasons, skipping classes does bring negative effects on students‟ study.Therefore, it is necessary to take some effective measures to reduce this phenomenon.On the one hand, the school and teachers should make students realize the negative 8 / 14 effects of skipping classes and enhance their consciousness of attending the class.On the other hand, teachers have to improve their teaching quality to attract students‟ interests in the courses.Only in this way can the phenomenon of skipping classes be reduced as soon as possible.预测作文7

1992—2007年参加继续教育的人数情况

1)上图为某城市1992—2007年参加继续教育的人数情况，请描述其中的变化 2)分析导致该变化的原因 3)谈谈你对继续教育的看法

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述图表中反应的变化，提纲第2点要求分析该变化产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：根据图表中的数据描述1992—2007年继续教育参加人数增加的现象;分析导致参加继续教育的人数增加的原因;阐述“我”对继续教育的看法。

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 1992 to 2007 in X city.In 1992 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing education, but in 1995 the number grew to 60 thousand, and in 2000 140, and by 2007, the number has reached 210 thousand.It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity.The following reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education.Firstly, during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough.So they turn to continuing education to gain more knowledge and skills.Moreover, as the science and technology in China are developing very fast, adults after graduation have to refresh themselves.In addition, in modern society, those without bachelor‟s degrees or above are less competitive.As far as I am concerned, the boom in continuing education is a necessity.It provides those on-the-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge.As our society develops, more and more people will receive continuing education in the future.预测作文8

1)参考书泛滥已成为师生共同关注的问题 2)参考书泛滥带来了哪些影响

3)作为大学生，应该如何正确选择和使用参考书

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题带来的影响，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述参考书泛滥的现象;分析参考书泛滥带来的不良影响;从大学生的角度说明应该如何正确选择和使用参考书。How to Make Full Use of Reference Books

Nowadays reference books have become a problem of great concern for both teachers and students.There are many kinds of reference books available in the book market.A smarter use of these books is certainly beneficial, but the misuse and overuse of them may cause a lot of problems.9 / 14

First of all, teaching reference books might make the students less attentive in class.Armed with reference books, many students may think that they know what the teacher is going to talk about.So they may not listen to the teacher in class at all.Secondly, some students rely on the reference books too much, which is unfavorable to the improvement of their ability to work out the solutions for themselves.Thirdly, there are some reference books with many mistakes, which might mislead students.Considering the above-mentioned, we should be careful in selecting and using references books.Firstly, we should check the contents of the book carefully but not only pay attention to the brand of publishing house.In addition, we can turn to the recommendation of teachers and students around us.Besides, reference books are just an assistant, so we shouldn‟t rely on them too much.Only in this way can we make full use of reference books.预测作文9

1)网络课堂教学的兴起，使传统的课堂教学受到了前所未有的挑战 2)网络课堂教学模式会完全取代传统课堂教学模式吗? 3)你的看法，理由是……

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一个有争议的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述网络课堂对传统课堂的挑战;提出关于网络课堂是否会取代传统课堂的两种不同观点并说明理由;表明“我”的态度并说明理由。

Will Network Classrooms Replace Traditional Classrooms?

With the popularization of the Internet, network classrooms are gaining more and more popularity.As a new teaching pattern, network classrooms have become an effective complement to traditional classrooms.So some people propose one question: will network classrooms replace traditional classrooms?

As to this question, the opinions vary from one to another.Some people think it quite possible for network classrooms to take the place of traditional classrooms.First, network classrooms needn‟t have face-to-face communication and are not limited by time and place, which facilitate both teachers and students.Secondly, network classrooms release teachers from repeating the same contents since the video or audio material can be played time and again.However, many people have opposite standpoints.They say that with online courses, students lack direct communications with teachers and their confusion cannot be solved instantly.In addition, the computer system cannot be guaranteed to work stably all the time.Personally, both network classrooms and traditional classrooms are necessary for students.If traditional teaching patterns and the modern ones like network classrooms can be combined together, more fruitful education is sure to be realized.预测作文10

1)描述你在公共场所目睹的一次扒窃事件 2)谴责这种不文明的现象

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述一次事件的经过，提纲第2点要求对事件进行评论，由此可判断本文应为记叙文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：交待事件背景;描述扒窃事件的经过和最后结果;谴责这种不文明的现象，提出解决建议。A Witness of a Theft Incident

Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home.The thief was so rampant that it left me a very deep impression.It was in the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station.A woman took her purse out and paid for the ticket.Then she put her purse back into her bag and turned to leave, when a mid-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”.She didn‟t feel unusual and went into the station.Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man.To our surprise, the thief seems not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down.Maybe he was searching for the next target.At that time some persons, including me, witnessed the process.But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman.This incident makes me ashamed and leaves me a deep thought.The pickpocket has posed a great threat to residents‟ and visitors‟ property safety.Undoubtedly, it is an urgent thing to take action to prevent pickpocket.However, it cannot depend on the police only.Instead, it needs our common efforts.We can not shut our eyes and mouths to the pickpocket any more.It should be kept in our minds that our forces are far beyond those thieves.预测作文11

1)近年来越来越多的人移居到国外

/ 14 2)分析其原因 3)“我”的看法

【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述近年来社会上出现的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析出现这种现象的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近年来越来越多的人移居到国外的现象;分析其产生的原因;阐述“我”的观点。Why People Migrate to Another Country?

Many people choose to live in a foreign country, which has aroused great concern.Nowadays, more and more people, especially plenty of intellectuals, migrate to some developed countries, such as America, England and Canada.In addition, there are still many people studying and working in foreign countries struggling for “green cards”.There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.Among all these factors, pursuing high-quality life plays a critical role.Moreover, most of them migrate to some foreign countries with a view to making their children receive good education there.Besides, some people just want to experience a different culture they like.All these above factors contribute to their choice to migrate to another country.As far as I am concerned, though I enjoy various cultures all over the world, I won‟t migrate to another country.For one thing, I don‟t like to live far from my friends and relatives.For another, I can‟t bear to speak and listen to a foreign language from day to night.In a word, everyone has his right to decide where to live, and everyone‟s choice should be respected.预测作文12

1)中国有很多学生无法用英语进行交流，由此出现“哑巴英语”的现象 2)造成“哑巴英语”的原因 3)提供一些可行的解决方法

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前学生遇到的一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明原因，提纲第3点要求提供解决方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：阐述中国大多数学生口语很差的现状;造成“哑巴英语”的原因;提供一些可行的解决办法。“Mute English” among Chinese Students

Nowadays, oral English is quite a serious problem among Chinese students.Most of the students have studied English for a long time, but they can‟t communicate well with other people in English.In addition, there are still many other students who can understand every word of a article, but fail to read them out fluently and correctly.Many reasons contribute to this problem.Among these reasons, examination-oriented education system plays a vital role.What‟s more, most of the students are too shy and nervous to speak in public.I think it is high time that we paid more attention to this “Mute English”.Above all, students should read after the tape recorder or MP3 to practise the pronunciation.Moreover, they should talk as much as possible with the foreigners and not be afraid of losing face.In addition, students should enrich vocabulary and pay attention to the differences between spoken language and written language.Only through these ways can Chinese students avoid “Mute English” and speak a fluent English.预测作文13

1)大学生应对挫折的能力差，学校应当加强挫折教育 2)开展挫折教育刻不容缓

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述一种观点，提纲第2点要求进一步论证这个观点，由此可判断本文应为观点论证型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：根据目前大学生应对挫折能力差的现象提出观点：学校应当加强挫折教育;举例论证开展挫折教育的重要性;重申观点，总结全文。Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students

College students should be guided correctly to face frustrations in life, which has been generally accepted.Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities.The truth of it is deep and profound.Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration.This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay.For another example, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations.Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons.11 / 14

Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students.But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education.To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.预测作文14

1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注 2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题，提纲第2点要求提供解决办法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题，校园安全问题备受关注的现状;我们应当采取哪些措施来应对;总结全文。Campus Security

Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously.Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away.A surrounding with stealing, mugging can‟t be worse for studying.In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness.Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately.On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible.Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus.In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus.Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.预测作文15

1)流行病在我们的生活中随处可见 2)流行病会带来哪些危害 3)对此我们应采取哪些措施

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述目前社会上出现的一种问题，提纲第2点要求说明这一问题会带来哪些危害，提纲第3点则要求提供解决方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述流行病在我们的生活中随处可见的现象;阐述流行病会带来哪些危害;说明我们对此应该采取哪些措施。Epidemics

Epidemics are rampant throughout the whole human history, and they have caused the most devastating impacts on us.Each year, numerous epidemics break out on earth and they have such characteristics as fast spreading and infectious.Epidemics are harmful in many ways.For one thing, it will make people and animals seriously ill or dead, which is a great loss to the country.For example, the outbreak of SARS once killed lots of people and brought great economic loss to the whole country.For another, there is no cure for many kinds of epidemic diseases.Once we are infected by one of them, it is difficult to be cured.To avoid the outbreak of some kind of epidemics as possible as we can, we should first change some unhealthy habits or customs.For example, meals served individually should be encouraged, which would reduce the possibility of the spread of germs.On the other hand, the government should learn how to deal with emergencies when an epidemic broke out.I believe as long as we treat and prevent epidemics in the right way, we will finally conquer them.预测作文16

1)如今人们之间的交流方式越来越多(如：写信，MSN，手机等)，你个人认为面对面交流是否优于这些交流方式 2)论证你的观点

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述一种观点，提纲第2点要求论证这个观点，由此可判断本文应为观点论证型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：关于面对面交流是否优于如写信和打电话等其他交流方式给出你的观点;通过举例论证此观点;重申观点，总结全文。

Is Face to Face Communication Better than Other Types of Communication?

Nowadays, with the development of technology, many modern forms of communication, such as phone calls and email, have stepped into our life.Facing with these, the traditional way of communication — face-to-face communication, seems to be left behind the times.But in fact, this is not actually true.For me, noting can parallel with face-to-face communication.The following reasons can account for my opinion.12 / 14

For one thing, face-to-face communication allows us to make an interactive conversation.For example, we can clear away the misunderstanding in time.Because a person‟s tone of voice or facial expression often reflects his mood, while in other kinds of communication it‟s hard for us to perceive the subtle changes of one‟s emotion.For another, face-to-face communication can deepen the interpersonal relationship.For instance, trust and respect between businesses partners can be established even with a firm handshake.In a word, face-to-face communication improves the relationship among people and it is the best kind of communication.All the other types are merely the complement of it.预测作文17

在过去几年中，我们已经目睹了人类活动引起的各种灾害。作为一位大学生，请写一封倡议书，呼吁大家关注这些自然灾害并保护环境，内容应包括： 1)举出人类活动引发的灾害的实例 2)指出一些必要的防范措施 3)号召大家行动起来拯救地球

【思路点拨】本题要求写一封倡议书。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：点明写信的目的：呼吁大家关注人类活动对地球造成的危害，陈述灾害的具体表现；为了拯救地球，我们应当采取哪些措施;号召大家行动起来拯救地球。

June 13, 2008 Dear friends，I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay attention to the present disasters caused by human activities.As some of you may know, over the past years, floods, droughts, landslides, and dust storms have frequented our planet.Not long ago, tsunami swept the Southeast Asia, which caused enormous damage.All these have sounded an alarm to human beings.So it is high time that we join efforts to save our planet.Above all, a task of top priority for us is to plant trees as many as possible, especially in the arid areas.At the same time, we should stop deforesting in large amount.And we can save our planet through many other ways, such as saving water and using recycled paper.So don‟t hesitate to act out these measures.Even a small action is meaningful to our planet.Please join us in the action of protecting our planet.If you are willing to do something to save our planet, please start from the little thing right around you.Thank you!

Sincerely yours，Li Ming 预测作文18

1)公共场合是否应该禁止吸烟，说出你的观点 2)论证你的观点

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述一种观点，提纲第2点要求论证这个观点，由此可判断本文应为观点论证型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：关于公共场合是否应该吸烟给出你的观点;通过举例论证此观点;重申观点，总结全文。

Should Smoking in Public Places be Banned?

Nowadays many countries in the world have passed laws to ban smoking in public places.Some smokers claim that their rights are infringed if smoking is forbidden in public places.However, most non-smokers regard the ban as good news.As far as I‟m concerned, smoking should be banned in all the public places such as restaurants, theaters and public squares.On the one hand, smoking is harmful both for smokers themselves and others.It is reported that every year smoking causes millions of death around the world.On the other hand, smoking pollutes the air.Just imagine that you sit in a restaurant full of smoke, how can you enjoy your meal there? Besides, smoking is bad for the elevation of a country‟s image in the world.I believe if smoking is banned in all the public places, most of us will breathe in more fresh and clean air.And the health condition of all the people will be greatly improved.预测作文19

1)近年来校园音乐逐渐走向商业化，由企业发起主办的大学生音乐节、校园歌手大赛层出不穷 2)导致这种现象的原因是什么

/ 14 3)这种现象可能带来的影响

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析导致这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求说明该现象可能带来的影响，由此可推知本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近年来企业热衷于举办大学生音乐节、校园歌手大赛的现象;分析导致这种现象的原因;说明该现象可能带来的影响。Commercialization of Campus Music

In recent years, campus music has been commercialized gradually.More and more enterprises are interested in being the sponsors of college music festivals or award competitions of campus singers.Campus singers and songs are not confined to college campus any more but being pushed to the market gradually.The following factors can account for this phenomenon.On the one hand, some enterprises‟ paying more attention to campus music is out of their sense of commitment to the society.They want to set healthy enterprise images before the public.On the other hand, nowadays entertainment marketing is very popular.Enterprises want to utilize entertainment activities to improve their notability and influence.College students, as the focus of the whole society, are a good choice for these enterprises.Of course, these musical activities have brought more chances for campus singers to show their talents to the public.Besides, campus songs have gotten more wide spreading.However, commercialization of campus music to some extent reduces its uniqueness.Induced by fame and wealth, some campus singers try to cater to the tastes of the public and lost their own styles gradually.Therefore, in order to make campus music develop more healthily, both the sponsors of music activities and our campus singers should pay more attention on music itself but not profits.预测作文20

1)很多大学里“占座”现象十分普遍 2)这种现象会带来哪些影响 3)你对此的看法

【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的影响，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生在教室和图书馆“占座”的现象;说明这种现象带来的不良影响;阐述“我”对“占座”现象的看法。Reserving a Seat

We often see there is a table cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating the seat is taken.This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities.Strangely enough, most of students seem to take this for granted, and few will protest it.Though most of students‟ taking seats in advance is for better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects.On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students‟ interests.Sometimes even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.On the other hand, reserving a seat violates the rule of fairness.No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you even though many others are eager for that seat.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.14 / 14

第五篇：2012小升初英语作文写作高分技巧

2012小升初英语作文写作高分技巧

小升初对于学生而言是人生的第一次大考，所以很多家长和老师都对于即将来临的考试异常紧张。备战小升初的小考生们想要获得一个好的成绩，在学习方法的提高上是必不可少的过程。下面内容是有关如何提高小升初英文写作的高分技巧。

通常英小升初英语作文有以下几个特点：紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求;以有指导的写作为主，便于考生在短时间内构思成文;突出试题的交际性，考查考生在特定的情景中运用语言的能力;增强试题的实用性，所选话题贴近学生学习生活，为学生所熟悉;看图作文主要考查考生运用所学知识解决实际问题的能力。

小升初英语作文注意两点

一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：

1.认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。

2.理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。

从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。

最后一个月如何训练小升初英语作文

1.重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一。

目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用(ontheotherhand，however，furthermore)、作者的表达方式(词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用)、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。

2.在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练。

练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。

小升初英语作文“四步走”

由于时间限制，考试时必须在所限定的时间内完成英语作文。英语作文步骤如下：

1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。

3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。

4)写完后一定要再细看一遍。

主要体裁作文写作技巧

(一)写提示议论文应考虑的几点：

1.文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句(topic)阐明观点或看法。

2.会使用连接词分层次说明理由、缘由(supportingsentences)。

3.归纳总结，首尾呼应。

(二)看图作文应考虑的几点：

1.看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。

2.确定短文须用的时态和该用的人称。

3.确定体裁(说明文还是记叙文)，接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。

4.根据图片或图表大意议论。

小升初英语如何快速提高听力

在听力训练中，注重形式的多样性，材料的趣味性，紧紧“抓住”学生的耳朵。儿童与游戏有着天然的联系。以下内容详细介绍了提高小升初英语听力的两种方法：兴趣训练法和任务型训练法。

小升初英语听力提高法一：兴趣训练法

现代心理学之父皮亚杰说:“所有智力方面的工作都要依赖于兴趣”。有研究表明:“小学阶段正是情感性学习的关键时期。”这阶段儿童的学习活动带有很大程度的情绪化倾向，当儿童对学习有浓厚的兴趣、好奇心和强烈的求知欲望时，不仅能产生情感迁移，而且会使注意力特别集中和持久。在听力训练中，注重形式的多样性，材料的趣味性，紧紧“抓住”学生的耳朵。儿童与游戏有着天然的联系，形式多样的游戏是激发学生学习兴趣行之有效的方法，听力训练中游戏的采用适合小学生爱玩的天性，寓教于乐。

1.听词面，猜词语

课前，教师将写有所猜单词的词面交给值日学生，该生回去自己读熟，第二天读给全班同学听，让大家猜。例如:it’s an animal.it’s white.it likes carrots.大部分学生能够猜出是单词rabbit.2.演双簧

让两组学生分别准备对话，一组学生在前面表演动作和口型，另一组在后面配音。其他学生通过看和听来理解他们的对话内容。

3.看录像学配音

选取难度合适的录像让学生看，先视听，再反复听，让学生听懂，然后关掉声音，让学生尝试配音。

4.听录音作动作

可以由老师或请一位学生当小老师来发指令，其他同学来做动作。例如:open your mouths.touch the desk.close the windows.stand in front of li ming, please等。一种游戏可有多种练习内容，一个内容也可有多种游戏形式，但教师应注意几点：其一，游戏能激发学生的兴趣，并使课堂教学多样化；

其二，游戏形式为学习内容服务，切实达到在玩中学、在活动中练的目的；

其三，游戏应快速进行，做法与规则应交待清楚，并给予示范；其四，竞赛性的游戏，应对获胜者给予不同形式的表扬。

小升初英语听力提高法二：任务型训练法

该方法要求学生在听懂的基础上，利用输入语言信息去完成一项或多项任务，这些任务是教师围绕听力材料所提供的语言情景和语言信息预先设计的，通过任务的完成和此后的评价来检验学生的理解程度。

听录音，画图

听录音画图的方法事通过训练培养学生空间定位能力和想象能力，关于指路的对话和短文等比较适合用此方法。例如:

a:excuse me.which is the way to the bookstore?

b:walk down the street and the turn left.go straight and the bookstore is on your right.