第一篇:2012考研英语作文写作要的要点
一年来,甬江街道爱卫会在街道党工委、办事处的正确领导下,深入贯彻落实区委七届八次会议和区委、区政府《关于深入贯彻落实科学发展观扎实推进新一轮全国文明城市创建活动的决定》精神,紧密结合“开展‘三思三创’建设‘三区三城’”主题教育实践活动和文明城市“三连冠”,立足街道实际,开展“城市形象提升”、“城市管理提升”两大行动,对薄弱环节进行专项整治,在各行政村、企业的配合和支持,爱卫工作取得了良好成效,甬江街道的城市形象得到进一步提升,城市管理得到进一步完善,群众整体素质得到进一步提高。具体工作总结如下:
一、加强领导,落实责任
今年年初,街道街道领导班子即召开爱国卫生工作专项会议,研究部署甬江街道2011年爱国卫生工作和第二十三个爱国卫生月活动。会后,街道爱卫会在辖区范围内进行了力量充实,各村、各单位也成立了爱国卫生工作领导小组,由各单位、村分管领导负责,实行层层责任制,一级抓一级,一级促一级。
二、多种渠道宣传爱国知识,注重健康教育内容
(一)多种渠道宣传,形成全民共识
街道爱卫办认真贯彻落实上级指示精神,大力宣传爱国卫生知识、文明城市“三连冠”和第二十三个爱国卫生月活动。街道和各行政村、企事业单位利用横幅、标语、黑板报、宣传栏(窗)、各种图片大力宣传《宁波市爱国卫生条例》,预防和控制病媒生物传播的知识,让群众更多地知道卫生和健康知识,做到家喻户晓,人人皆知。
(二)注重健康教育内容,提高群众健康意识
为加强对街道广大群众健康教育,提高健康水平,改变不卫生行为,增强自我保健意识,让街道群众的卫生观念在潜移默化中升华,进一步激发广大居民积极参与文明创建活动的积极性,我们开展了以下几项工作活动:街道爱卫办认真贯彻落实上级指示精神,大力宣传《宁波市爱国卫生条例》颁布施行三周年的宣传活动,大力宣传《宁波市爱国卫生条例》,预防和控制病媒生物传播的知识,农民健康教育,农民健康教育,中国公民健康66条、健康素养、爱滋病、公共场所禁烟,中国公民健康营养学内容等等,让群众更多地知道卫生和健康知识,力求达到家喻户晓,人人皆知的宣传效果。
三、以爱国卫生月和文明城市“三连冠”为契机,全面推进爱卫工作
(一)加强重点区域整治力度
一、常洪区域专项整治。街道共投入60多万元,对329国道两旁甬江管辖区域内的绿化养护、低洼地、排污设施等进行集中整治,同时协助交警、公安、城管等部门加强对该区域乱停车、乱设摊、跨门占道经营的巡查治理工作。
二、沿路沿线专项整治。街道重点对辖区环城北路、倪家堰路、梅堰路、宁镇公路等重点道路进行乱停车、乱设摊集中整治,共整治马路市场5处,取缔无证摊贩200位,做到定点、定时、统一规范有序的管理,确保了道路行车、行人安全通行。此外,对主要道路两侧、人口聚集区域,全面进行墙面宣传广告的制作,共粉刷墙面广告5万多平方米,广告画200多幅。
三、建设拆迁区域专项整治。重点是做好街道在建安置房建设工地与湾头、北高教园区拆迁区域的建筑垃圾清运工作和圈围工作,累计投入经费20多万元,突击清理偷倒垃圾、渣土、装璜垃圾,共计清理各类垃圾145车800余吨。对拆迁区域主要道路两侧、重点区块修建围墙2000多米,使道路两侧的环境面貌得到了较大变化。同时利用拆迁的有利时机,着重加大对违章建筑的查拆力度,共查处违章建筑24处,拆除建筑面积5519平方米。
四、河道、主道沿线整治。河道砌石670米,疏挖河道2108米,河岸绿化1000平方米。主道沿线两侧绿化350平方米、两侧美化1030平方米。
(二)抓好村庄环境整体提升。街道成立了农村环境整治工作组,充实队伍。原有保洁队伍122人,新增9人,年人均受训次数122次。重点将破烂王、茶水房和乱堆放、乱搭建整治作为难点攻克对象予以整治。共整治和规范破烂王、茶水房58余家,通过专项整治,基本达到了预期目标。清理垃圾乱堆、乱放610处。完成村内明沟改造1906米清除村庄立面乱涂贴2150处,村庄立面美化15750平方米。完成闲杂空地整治18处,整治面积2480平方米。对各行政村的村庄周边、房前屋后,道路两侧、背街小弄等地段的卫生死角,共清理330多处,清运垃圾渣土868吨。完成畜禽养殖整治15家,截至目前,已拆除养鸭户2户,约15000平方米;另外1户8000多只也签订了拆迁协议,还有4户10000以上养殖户正在协商中;孔浦、压赛3户养猪户也在协商阶段中。生活污水集中处理村从原有的8个增加到现在的14个。
(三)加快环卫基础设施建设。街道为了全面改善环境卫生基础设施,配套出台了各项补助政策,对各村道路基础设施进行维修和保养,并按标准规范化落实卫生设施的配备和管理,对村排水、排污系统的改造计划等方面进行补助,调动各村基础设施建设的积极性。今年累计投入150多万元资金,对各村不符合标准要求的公厕、垃圾箱(亭),环卫设施布局不合理的老、旧、破等影响美观的设施进行了重新建造和维修工作。改造维修垃圾房175座,新建垃圾房11座,新购垃圾桶540只;清除露天粪岗4座,改造公厕86座,新建公厕2座;新购电动环保车1辆,垃圾桶500只,改变了原来人力三轮车清运垃圾,实现了垃圾清运机械化。此外,又投入经费20万元,对主要2条道路进行全面修补,累计修补道路2000多米。
(四)完善督察反馈工作机制。成立了综合宣传督查工作组。设立30万元环境整治专项考核基金,与村干部考核奖金挂钩。同时街道强化了环境卫生督察力度,成立三支应急分队,在考核过程中,发现问题随时进行突击性应急处理,预防出现卫生死角,并对重点地段加强人员配备,增加保洁力量,防止网格化管理脱节现象。与此同时,街道对于上级部门曝光的问题建立了快速响应机制,力求在发现问题的当天予以解决。活动开展以来,累计完成各类督办的近200张脏、乱、差曝光地点的整改工作。
(五)做好辖区内“除四害”工作.街道爱卫办全力做好除四害药物的订购和发放工作,累计投入三万多元购买了飞彪缓释剂、安备、塔牌烟炮、环卫箭、奋斗呐、飞彪乳油、捕蝇笼等十多种药物,总重量超过300千克,此外,还准备了灭蟑颗粒剂、灭蟑药水、灭蟑胶饵、灭蟑方便贴、粘蟑纸等各类灭蟑螂药物100多千克,并分发到各片区。同时,对各村除四害专职人员进行技术指导,从四害的生活习性、灭杀药物的功能、杀灭的方法、用药安全等一一进行了详细的讲解说明,进一步提高灭杀队伍的专业水平。除“四害”工作,采取市场化的运作模式,由街道出资40万元聘请宁波康龙专业消杀公司负责全部15个行政村的“四害”消杀工作。该公司组织8名除四害专业人员,对15个村范围内的居民区、办公楼、集贸市场以及150平方米以下五小单位等区域进行灭鼠颗粒毒饵(大隆鼠药及杀它仗)的全面投放,采用一次饱和投药法和残存鼠配制特殊毒饵专门投药相结合的方法,并配以鼠夹、鼠笼,粘鼠板等物理器械灭鼠,防止药物污染。经过各方面努力,街道春、夏、秋三季“除四害”工作取得了良好效果,为辖区群众创造了一个洁净舒适的生活环境。
四、存在的问题和下一步工作展望
今年街道环境整治工作,投入了大量资金、人力、物力,整治力度大、效果好,圆满完成了第二十三个爱国卫生月活动和文明城市“三连冠”工作任务,辖区生活环境进一步优化。虽然一年来街道在环境整治方面做了大量工作,但还是存在一些不足。
一、主要路段乱停车和乱设摊反弹较快。街道辖区主要路段如宁镇公路路林段、梅堰路庙跟段和河东农贸路等都存在这样的问题,集中整治后能够维持一段时间,但是反弹较快。
二、行政村与自然村卫生水平不平衡。一些行政村虽然总体卫生较好,但较偏远自然村卫生状况不佳。三是曝光问题整改力度不够大。部分村干部对环境整治工作重视度不够,对区和街道曝光的环境问题整改的力度不够大、动作不够快。针对这些问题,今后街道爱卫办工作要重点从如下几方面入手。第一,加大重点区域环境整治力度,特别是加强重点部位、重点地段(破烂王、茶水房、养殖场、乱堆放、不符合标准的垃圾房等)的整治。第二,加强网格化管理和督察力度。曝光督查力度不减,将暴露的问题及时反馈到联片领导、联村干部和各行政村。并严格要求在规定时限内整改完毕。第三,完善环境整治资金管理体制。加大环境整治方面的资金投入,提高资金的使用效率,确保专项资金的安全规范运作。
第二篇:2012考研英语作文写作要的四大要点
2012考研英语之写作四大问题导致作文低分
知已知彼,百战不殆。要想再在英语作文方面取得高分,同学们不妨先了解下考研英语作文的题型、评分标准及对高分作文的具体要求。但是今天结合历年考生情况,和同学们讲讲有关考研作文低分的常见四方面问题。
1.文不对题
“文不对题”是考研英语写作中经常出现的问题之一,不少老师在阅卷时都遇到过这样的作文——内容充实,条理清晰,用词准确,却与题目规定的内容大相径庭,最后得分非常低。考研英语写作是非开放性的,不可以随意创作,考生要严格按照题目的要求来展开文章。因此,在写作时认真审题是第一步。审题不仅仅是要仔细读题目,还要准确地理解、提取题目中的信息点和内容,明确题目的要求。由于考试的时间有限,因此要求我们在考场上必须快速、准确地审题。这就需要我们在平时多看一些题目,只有通过练习才能在考试时熟能生巧。
平时我们可以按照下面的步骤进行审题练习:
(1)看题目,划出其中的核心词汇,找出作文内容的要点以及格式要求等。
(2)想一想这道题考的是什么方面的话题,应该从哪方面展开,可以找到什么样的论据。
(3)找到范文,与自己的构思进行对照、检验。对于历年考研英语的作文真题,尤其是近几年的新题,建议大家动手练一练。仅在脑海中对作文题进行构思虽然节省时间,但是很多问题只有通过完整地写作才能发现。
2.无话可说
在写作中考生常常遇到的一大难题就是无话可说,难以下笔。造成这种情况的主要原因是平时积累少。纵观多年考研英语作文试题,我们可以发现,这些题目几乎从未涉及到偏、难、怪的话题,比如:2003年的话题:温室花朵经不起风雨;2005年的话题:养老“足球赛”;2006年的话题:偶像崇拜等等,2011年的话题:环保。只要同学们在日常生活中能多看多想,在考试时就不会无话可说。
我们可以通过看中文的报刊来提升自己思想的深度与广度,作为写作时的论点与素材,也可以看英文文章来丰富语言。有不少人都提倡多背文章,但是背书对很多人来说并不是一件容易的事。其实要起到培养语感、积累语言素材的作用,只要多读多看就可以了。这些文章可以是你感兴趣的小短文,也可以是英文教材中的课文。在此,跨考杨老师还向大家推荐另一类材料,那就是阅读理解的题目,这些题目中的文章内容丰富,用语规范,长短也比较适宜,尤其是历年考研英语真题中的文章。通过反复阅读,不仅有益于作文,也可以帮助我们加深对阅读理解部分出题方式的感受与体会。虽然这些文章不一定要背,但是要记住,我们对文章内容及其表达方式越熟悉,在需要时它就越能为我所用。甚至在考试时,如果我们在阅读中看到好的句子,也可以把它划下来以便在写作文时借用。
3.结构混乱
结构混乱是写作最为忌讳的问题。有话可说是写作最基本的要求,但要写好作文则必须把话说到点子上,把意思表达的清楚明白。要做到条理清楚,就要求文章的结构合理。而只有在写作时理清思路,才能使作文结构清晰,从而方便评卷老师理解文章的层次。
文章不分段或者分段过多都是不合理的。现行的考研英语作文题目中一般会有三条要求,考生可以对应的写三段话进行回应。一篇文章一定要有开头段与结尾段。首段不要太长,要开宗明义,明确表明自己的观点。尾段的主要作用是使文章结构完整,主要为归纳或建议。文章主体部分的每一段都应该围绕一个主题来写,每一段都要有主题句,而且主题句最好是每段的首句,这样更有利于避免一段内出现多个论点,或是出现偏题的现象,同时也可以使全文的逻辑结构更加清楚明了。
良好的文章结构也可以帮助我们有话可说。每篇文章的首段和尾段、每段的首句几乎都是作为文章的结构而存在的,因此它们的内容是相对固定的。并列结构的文章可以用如下几组短语:on the one hand,on the other hand;for one thing,for another thing;in the first place,in the second/following/next place„„in the last place;递进结构的文章可以使用以下这些短语:further/furthermore,mor/moreover,besides/still/also,what is more;转折结构则可以用这样的结构:Il is true„„,But„„,Also,„„对于比较长的段落来说,还可以用一个结尾句来呼应首句的主题,最常用的方法就是同意转述。
4.用词贫乏,句式单一
“用词”和“句式”是反映英语作文水平的重要指标,用词贫乏,句式单一,很容易让作文失去“血肉”。因此,要提高语言的驾驭能力,积累仍然是最重要的。前文提到的多读文章仍然是一个适用的好方法。当然,针对考试作文我们还要有一些提升语言运用能力的技巧。
在词汇方面,建议大家多关注动词、副词以及连词。针对大家常常出现的一个问题:同一个词不断被反复使用,我们可以积累一些重点词汇的同义词。有一个比较简单的方法,就是在word文档中输入一个英文单词,然后点击鼠标右键,在“同义词词库”中就可以看到很多表达相似意思的词汇。要想学会用一个词,就要求我们知道该词的用法与搭配。不仅动词的使用存在搭配问题,副词与连词也一样,比如:although和but不能在同一句话中连用。因此,在记单词时最好是熟悉一些例句。我们不需要花太多时同和精力在偏词、难词上,有一些很简单的小词(如:take、get等)有众多的搭配及不同的用法,如能恰当使用,一样能使文章增色不少。词汇的应用贵在准确,而不在于使用多少高级词汇。在拿不准的情况下,建议大家不要乱用不熟悉的词,以免闹出笑话。
在句式方面表现出的变化其实并没有大家想象的那么难,在有限的备考时间中,我们无法花费太多的时间去学习语法、句法,建议大家能够在复习过程中重点掌握2、3种特殊句式,不过一定要做到运用自如。在学习时,要注意总结它的使用规律,多看多写。比如,定语从句规律性就很强,不难掌握,而且它的应用也很广泛,几乎可以把一句话无限加长、变复杂。另外,向大家推荐一种句式,那就是插入语。插入语用法很多,在句子中的位置比较灵活,也易于学习掌握。比如:I think、I hope、I guess等句子结构;honestly、surely等
副词或副词短语,by the way、in short等介词或介词短语,generally speaking等分词短语以及to tell you the truth、to be honest等不定式短语都可以作为插入语。
最后要提醒大家一点,就是在写作时要使用书面语,不要随意使用口语,更不要写口语形式的简略句。
第三篇:2014考研英语作文写作需掌握哪些要点
2014考研英语作文写作需掌握哪些要点?
考研英语学习想向来是大部分学生的一个瓶颈。很多考生总是会感觉对英语的学习没有头绪,无所适从。即使已经掌握了大量的词汇、语法、句法,对英语整体的理解依旧是学得平淡无味,甚至产生了心理障碍——会有害怕、恐惧甚至厌恶的反应。其实,这都是学习中的正常现象。就像我们哪一门课程学得不好,无论怎么努力就是转不过这个弯,以至于对这门课程的老师都有了一定的心理因素产生,甚至会影响一辈子。那么,如何提高英语作文呢?什么样子的英语作文才能得到阅卷老师的肯定取得较高的分数呢?下面就让考研1号的老师们告诉我们考研英语作文在复习的过程中,需要注意哪些呢?
一、内容切题。内容切题是考研英语作文的一项最基本的要求。我们可以总结160篇的写作从以下几个方面入手:认真审题;注意安排和设计段落;根据文章的中心思想,确定各个段落的主要内容和主题句。同学们在练习中,认为还应注意总结归纳一些常用的句式,形成自己的模板。要求考生切忌将记忆里比较熟悉的句子生拉硬搬,否则会使作文结构松散,意思不明确,甚至会偏离主题,给人胡乱堆砌的感觉。
二、表达清楚。要求考生的文章要做到文字连贯、表达清楚,要做到文字连贯,文章各段落就必须根据提纲所确立的不同主题句进行展开,而且要求各段落的主题句将段落的各个部分紧紧连接在一起,完整而流利地表现出段落所要表现的思想,认为这样使读者能够轻松地理解段落中各部分以及段落之间的联系,进而明白你所要表达的意思。
三,句式有变化。初学写作的同学,由于对英语写作没有信心,通常不敢大胆地使用自己已经掌握的语言基础知识,包括英语句法知识。结果整篇文章都是以主语、谓语、宾语句式为主的简单句子,认为文章也因此显得刻板,毫无生气。实际上,认为和汉语一样,英语的句子结构也是丰富多彩,变化多样的,同样的一个意义可以用多种句子结构来表达。所以建议考生适当的运用一些复合句会给你的文章增色添彩。
四、正确的句子结构和恰当的词汇。句子结构和用词正确要求在写作中使用正确的句子结构,选择恰当的词汇,首先要勤学多练。尤其在练习写作的初始阶段,要勤查语法书和字典,常用词和短语进行背诵记忆,扩大词汇量,拓展知识面。另外,要求考生深刻理解所背词语的内在含义,并了解他们所使用的语言环境。复习备考时,建议考生请务必认真阅读关于写作方面的论述,模仿并熟记一些常用的过渡词和英语句型,以及一些英语范文,并切忌自编自造汉语式的英语句式和词组,认为那样容易养成不良的写作习惯。最后,要求一定要注意使用学习过的,比较熟悉有把握的句式和词汇,这样会提升你的准确率。
五、卷面整洁。特别强调,写作属于主观性测试,阅卷人对答卷印象的好坏会直接影响到考生的分数,而且研究生入学考试英语写作的阅卷采用的是总体评分的方法,阅卷人员就总体印象给出奖励分,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分,因此,建议大家在复习中,也要特别注意卷面的整洁,注意养成良好的写作习惯
以上五个方面是写好任何一篇英语作文的必需。我们不仅要仔细地领会,还要慎重地对待和学习,不能一味地寻找学习英语写作的方法却一味地得不到任何收获。方法和技巧其实是有很多的,而最关键的是要找到最合适自己的,而以上五点无论任何人都得做注意的,这是客观的得分方法,而主观的摄取和舍得就得看个人的态度和复习的进度了。当然,这些要素的具备并不是通过短期的训练就可以具备的。另外,你也可以参照160篇的写作题材进行训练或者模仿。但是大家一定要相信:只要坚持,肯定就会有所收获!
第四篇:考研英语写作
高分范文展示:
The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句写法:把句子拉长→加修饰:
(1)n.+ who/which/that… 加从句
e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.那些把一个人拥有财产的数量当作评判其社会地位的唯一标准的人们,会很重视追逐奢侈品的生活方式。
(2)n./句子结尾 + v.-ed(en)(被动)/ v.-ing(主动)加分词(定语后置)
e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究发现,和十年前的5%相比,现在有近24%的年轻白领表示不清楚自己想要什么。
(3)n.+ with + n.(修饰语)加限定词
e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure
e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.当今,很多有钱人喜欢通过买豪车来显示自己的成功和存在。
→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿:
07 阅读text3最后一段:
From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起来不像是……而更像是……
模仿→05大作文:养老足球赛
From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like like a 依据我们的良知,毫无疑问,大多数这种行为并不能提供合理分配赡养老人义务的机会,相反,它更像是一种加剧中华传统美德“尊老爱幼”走向大规模衰败的危险行为
大作文——开头what、中间why/effect、结尾how
What——虚开头(首段首句)
(1)坊间流传多年的所谓经典套话
As can be seen in the picture given above…
→ Asgiven above…
e.g.悲观乐观 man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.(2)直接描述
e.g.12002年作文:美国女孩穿着中国传统服饰
There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.a Chinese traditional costume.e.g.2 2010年作文:文化“火锅”,既美味又营养
those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文:悲观乐观 What——[描述+宽泛、宏观的点评](首段第二句)
It is aa significant information that 主题has been in the spotlight in current society主题 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.e.g.家庭成员关系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句应该有一定层次感,首段第二句提出一个观点/现象,第二段首句再将其具体化/细节化,直击中心。
Why/Effect——实开头:(主题句)+ 原因/影响(内部:自身 / 外部:社会、媒体)+ 例子
(1)主题句:
Among the topic concerning主题(抽象), as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of主旨中心思想(具体).e.g.家庭关系
Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出国留学人数/考研人数/公务员人数(2)引出原因
Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.e.g.中国传统文化/美德的缺失(3)引出影响
It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences(that)the 现象 gives rise
to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,* 表示导致的短语:Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite
* 表示原因:inducement/incentive
e.g.人人考公务员 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法:Apart from(mentioned above), …(new information)= Besides, … , Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.* 表示归因于:owe/ascribe/attribute… to …
(4)举例子
A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …
e.g.慈善/真正的成功
A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能单独提出,例子前面要有一个论点,或者在例子后面要有一个点评和结论,这样才是一个完整的举例(名人名言也同理)。
How——提出建议(Suggestion):规则、思想、行为
(1)制定规则:
Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼应主题.(敬老)(保护环境)(留学)
(2)改变思想:
Deliver the moderate 主题词 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功观/生活观/物质观/世界观/知识观/能源观
(3)规范行为:
Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主题词 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.(4)补充说明方法:名人名言(适用于最后一段提完建议之后)
万能套话:
As a classic saying goes,千里之行,始于足下
应用:提完建议之后
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主题词, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.养老 Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.奢侈浪费
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.特别讲解:主体段落的展开(第二段)
(1)单向话题:要么褒,要么贬
原因展开:
The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …
e.g.为什么很多年轻人最终会抽烟
The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to(2)双向话题
e.g.中国传统风俗习惯的改变是好还是坏
According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 举例子的时候,要实现从手段到效果的跨越(我们要怎么做来达到什么效果)
小作文——Simplified(简明扼要)字数:100-120
* 大作文的套话和模板不能用在小作文中!
* 小作文写作时必须覆盖每个题目要求的要点
(1)Letter——邮件、信件:生活化/接地气
a)邀请信
学术邀请(充满敬意):
开头:正式邀请(含参会时间和主题)
主体:介绍会议安排
结尾:希望得到正式回复,并确认
Dear Professor ___,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具体时间 in/at 地点,which focuses on the topic of主题
The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主题involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 时间, 另一个安排.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank
account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款
范文:
Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.Li Ming,The Supervisor of XXX
b)申请信
学校组织社团评优,要写申请。你是学校创新社(Innovation Agency)的负责人,请你代表你们社参与评优,写一封申请信。
范文:
Dear Sir or Madame,Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living.building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs..Yours faithfully,Li Ming
c)回复投诉信(对别人投诉的回复和安抚):承担责任,尝试挽回
有人投诉你负责的勤工助学中心某学生表现糟糕,部分原文:
I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.范文:
Dear Sir,temporary administration assistant you received from my organization,.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.Yours faithfully,Li Mingd)销售信(空格处填入产品名)
Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.e)现场笔录证明
You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:
1.The time and place
2.The process of this emergency
Witness on a Crash
It was 时间 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.Signature:Li Ming
(2)Notice——通知、告示
a)失物招领(Lost and Found):信息要有所保留,不能全部透露
Case: You’ve picked up an ED(电子辞典)
1.Time and place
2.The feature of this electronic dictionary(留一个最大特征来核实对方身份)
3.Your information for contact
Lost and Found
On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,Li Ming
第五篇:考研英语写作
1.图画作文
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题),which is ______________(进一步的说明)。He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节)。In my opinion,___________(个人阐述)。
This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race)。Therefore,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在)。One the one hand,we must _________________(建议一)。It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明)。On the other hand,________________(建议二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景)。
2.图表作文
The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题)。The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点)。This means that as __________,_________________(进一步说明)。
We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一)。After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化),the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化)。The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二)。(数据位置,如In the second column),we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述)。
Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论)。The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因)。/ It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议)
各位可爱的同学:
考题为应用文写作,所以要注意:
1.条理清楚,按照下列老师所列每种应用文的格式把内容写完整。
2.可以先用中文把提纲要求包含的信息都写下来,再翻译成英语。这样可以确保不会把应该包括的信息漏掉。
3.不要写错误的单词,宁可用简单易懂的单词代替,注意卷面清洁和工整。预祝大家都考上心仪的学校,制定好复习计划,按部就班,调整好心态好好复习,你的心愿一定能实现,人生该吃苦该拼搏时就要拼搏!各位加油!
一. 祝贺信(Letter of Congratulations):
祝贺信的写作与普通信件没有什么大区别,但应注意:
1.必须包括对收信人的称谓。
2.必须包括对收信人的祝贺。
3.必须包括写信人的姓名。
4.措词真诚、轻松愉快,切忌言过其实。
Sample:
Dear Guojun,I heard that you graduated with high honors from Southeast University last month.I know that all your family must be very proud of you, and as your friend, I feel the same.I wish you greater and more brilliant success in your studies and work in the future.With best wishes.Yours sincerely,Qi Zi
常用祝贺信用语
1.Warm congratulations on your success in passing the entrance examination to … university.热烈祝贺你考上了……大学。
2.Please accept our sincere wishes for your…
请接受我们对您……的衷心祝愿。
3.I extend my best wishes for your success.衷心祝愿你成功。
4.May each new year bring you new hope.愿每个新年都给您带来新的希望。
二、道歉信(Letter of Apology)
Sample:
May 5
Dear Carole,I am very sorry that I missed your phone call yesterday.I shall be at home tomorrow morning.Would you please call me again?
Sincerely yours,Lisa
道歉信常用语句
1.Please accept my sincere apologies.请接受我们诚挚的道歉。
2.Please accept my sincere apologies for the lateness of my birthday greetings.3.
I am sorry I missed your …
对不起,我错过了你的……
4.I’ve to offer you an apology for not coming to your party.未能参加你的庆祝会,我得向你道歉。
5.Please accept my sincere apologies for…
请接受我对……诚挚的歉意。
Ex.就下述内容写一封道歉信:
你的一位朋友昨天来看望你,你正巧外出未遇,对此你写信表示歉意,并约他明天再过来。
May 5
Dear Tom,I am very sorry that I was out when you called on me yesterday.Could you come again tomorrow evening as I have something important to discuss with you?
Sincerely yours,Lisa 更多例子:
1.因未能践约赴宴致歉 Unable to keep one’s promise
Dear [Miss Nancy],Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your [birthday] party [last Saturday], owing to the fact that my [little son] was suddenly taken ill early [that day].Hoping to see you soon.Truly yours,亲爱的[南希小姐]:
[小儿][上周六]突然生病,因此未能应约赴[生日]宴,殊觉抱歉,希原谅,再见。
祝好!
2.因迟复来信致歉 Because of answering one’s letter late
Dear [David]:
I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated [7, December] sooner, but when I have told you the reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable.When your letter arrived, I was just in [Hong Kong].As my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when I took it up.Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to express my deep regret.I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip.I shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when I see you next.Yours,亲爱的[戴维]:
请原谅我收到您[12月7日]的来信后迟迟未复,现将原因告诉您,相信您一定会谅解的。您的来信到来时,我正巧在[香港],家人无法及时转递。你的信一直放在我写字台上,直到我回到才看见,拖至今天才回信,深表歉意。
这次出去旅行饱览了许多美丽景色,下次见到您时,将告诉您一切。
祝好!
3.因未能及时还书致歉 Unable to return borrowed book on time
Dear [Kate]:
Excuse me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest.I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when [my cousin] came to see me.Never having seen the book, [She] was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer.However, I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner.Thanking you again for the loan.Sincerely yours,亲爱的[凯特]:
我迟迟未能归还您的那本《鲁滨逊飘流记》,请原谅。该书我读得津津有味。读完后,正预备归还您时,我的[表妹]来访,见这本书也感兴趣,定要借去一读。为了让别人也能分享您那本书所给予的乐趣,我不能及时归还。我想再延迟些日子奉还,谅您不会介意的。
再次感谢您的慷慨。
祝好!
4.因遗失借书致歉 Because of losing a borrowed book
Dear [Frank]:
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me [last week].I read it [everyday] and intended to finish it [next month].[Last night] when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends.Once lost, they can never be replaced.They are connected with cherished associations which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame.I was so careless with my things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.Yours truly,亲爱的[弗兰克]:
很抱歉,[上星期]您借给我的那本书竟遗失了。我[每天]都在看,准备[下个月]看完。[昨晚]我回到我的卧室,到处也找不到那本书。我将尽力找到它。万一找不到,我只好买一本新的还您。
但是,新书恐怕不能代替那本旧书吧!旧书跟旧友一样,一旦失去就不能再得。旧书与往事相连,这种不可弥补的损失,皆由我起。我对待一切太大意了,这次给我一个警告,叫我以后要小心。
三、慰问信
慰问信应写得真切,注意措辞,对轻病或者小损失,慰问信应写得轻松一些。相反,对严重病情或重大损失,信就应该写得深沉一些。慰问信写时应注意:
1.写给受伤人的信要简短,中肯。信中不必问询事故发生的过程、原因、见证人等。
2.慰问信中应写一些被慰问者喜欢或熟悉的事物,如病人的爱好、兴趣等,以使病人得到宽慰。
1.向朋友问候 A letter of inquiring after someone’s health
Dear [John]:
I am extremely sorry to hear that your illness, which we had thought was clearing up, has become more serious, and that your have had to go into hospital.Let us hope that it will be for only a very short time, and that you will soon be out and about again.Everybody here sends his best wishes to you for a quick recovery.With kind regards,Yours sincerely,亲爱的[约翰]:
听说你病了,我深感不安。原来我们还以为您的病情有所好转,事实上却反而加重,而不得不住进了医院。但愿这是短时间的,很快不会恢复健康。这里每个人都祝愿您早日痊愈。
特此问候
2.问候朋友的母亲 Inquiring after the health of a friend’s mother
Dear [Mr.Wang],I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of [your mother]’s illness, and am anxious to know how [she] is of late.Under a separate cover I am sending [her a box of assorted biscuits] with my best regards.Sincerely yours 亲爱的[王先生]:
听说您的母亲身体欠安,深表忧虑。不知令堂近况如何,实为惦念。随信另寄上[什锦饼干一盒],并致以最良好的问候。
您忠诚的
[吴洋]
3.祝贺朋友病愈 Congratulations on someone’s recovery
Dear [Jane]:
I learn, with very great pleasure, that the illness which has so cruelly caused great anxiety among your relatives and all those who know you has changed for the better and that you are now recovering, for which I therefore desire to congratulate you warmly.I hope that you will soon be completely restored to health.Yours sincerely
亲爱的[简]:
在您患病的这一期间内,亲戚朋友无不为你挂虑,听到你的病已有好转,并已逐渐痊愈,十分快慰,特地向你祝贺。
望你早日完全痊愈。
4.慰问丧偶的朋友 A letter of inquiring to those who lost their husband or wife
Dear [Mrs.Harper],I would like to express my sorrow at the recent death of your [husband].In the long time it was my privilege to enjoy [Professor of Harper]’s friendship.I found [him] a sincere and helpful associate, with whom it was a pleasure [to work].The knowledge that my thoughts are with you at his time will, I hope, be of some comfort to you.Truly yours
亲爱的[哈珀女士]:
获悉你的[丈夫]最近逝世的消息,深表遗憾。
长期以来,能与[哈珀教授]保持友谊是我的荣幸。[哈珀教授]是一位我最乐于与其一道[工作]的忠实而有帮助的朋友。
但愿我此时的问候,能给您带来一些安慰。
四、传真
传真是通过传真机传递的信函,大多为业务信函。企事业单位都有专用的传真纸,纸上面印有现成的传真格式,拟发传真时按格式填写即可。下面为一种常见的传真格式:
发传真人单位名称、地址=电话和传真号码、电子邮件网址
TO:(收传真人单位)
DATE(发送传真日期)
ATTN:(Attention, 收传真部门或个人姓名)
FAX NO:(传真号)
FROM:(发传真部门或个人姓名)
PAGE(S):(所发传真页数)
RE:(Regarding, 传真内容标题)
(传真信函):
称呼语:
信体:
客套结语:
署名:
五、请求信
Example 1.1903 Huashan Road
Shanghai 200030 July 8, 1995
Dear Sirs,I wish to enroll your intensive English program before I attend a university in the fall of 1996.Your sending me application materials at your earliest convenience will be greatly appreciated.Sincerely yours,Wang Xiaoping
Example 2.Wang Xiaoping
1903 Huashan Road
Shanghai 200030
July 6,1998
Dear Sirs,I want to pursue a Master’s degree in Electrical Engineering at your university.My intended date of entrance is Spring, 1999.Would you please send me the application forms for admission?
Sincerely yours
Wang Xiaoping
六、布告(Announcement):布告的写作和便条一样,也比较简单。只要注意以下几点即可:
1.在正文上方的中间位置应该注明布告的性质。2.
正文中简单明了地说明布告的事宜。3.
正文右下方应该注明发布告的单位。4.
发布告的日期可以省略。Sample:
Lost and Found A lady has picked a wrist watch in the shopping center and turned it over to our office.The owner of the wrist watch may come to claim it with his or her identification card.Lost and Found Office
七、(Notice):英文通知的写作也可采用不同形式。有的是采用句子的形式予以陈述,而有的则只做以简单的罗列。一般应注意以下几点: 1.必须包括notice字样,而且每个字母都应采用大写。
2.内容必须包括时间、地点、事宜和通知对象等。表达须准确,措词也要较正式。
3.必须包括写通知的个人或者单位的称谓,而且一般都放在通知的右下脚。
4.必须包括写通知的日期。
Sample:
NOTICE
May 4, 2003 Mr.Wang, the general manager of Shanghai Golden Palm Computer System Limited Company, will give a lecture on Modern Information Management Model at 6:30 p.m.on March 12.The one-and-a-half-hour lecture will be held in the Multi-media Lecture Room.Students of Information Management are invited to attend the lecture.Information Management Department
Example 拟一张请计算机系的学生于10月5号星期三下午1:30到系会议室听关于环境保护报告的通知。
NOTICE
Oct.2, 2004 All students of the Computer Department are requested to meet in the department conference room at 1:30 p.m.on Wednesday, October5, to hear a report on environmental protection.The Computer Department Office
八.便条 基本写作格式
便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素;1)Date:便条日期2)Salutation:称呼3)Body:正文4)Signature:署名
样例
收条:即收到钱物之后,给交钱或送物人写张字据,说明已经收到某物,可留作证据。条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。不得涂改。
Jan.23rd,2003Received from Student, Wang Zihao one hundred yuan only for this months tuition fee.Li ManFor the Finance Office ofForeign Language Institute
欠条;留下字据,表示欠某人某物。条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。不得涂改。
Sept.16th, 2002Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows:A copy of History and Anthology of English Literature by Wu WeirenA copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang YaoxinA copy of World Literature by Jiang Chengen
Wu Zhuo
For the Office of
Social Science Department
留言:用书面留下要说的话。留言涉及的方面很多,包括约会,通知,请求等任何可用便条留下的口信。
TuesdayDear Li,As the Spring Festival is drawing near, Im very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours.Im sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly.Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m.today, to Room 6 of Lijing Hotel?
Yours always, Jiayang
请假条:往往指由于生病或特殊情况不能亲自当面请假,用假条的形式告假。所以,请假条大多是病假条。可以自写,也可请他人代写。写假条最重要的是说明原因和请假的期限。
Jan.10thDear Ms.Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this mornings two periods of English Class due to a bad cold and high fever.Enclosed is a certificate from the doctor who said I must stay in bed for a few days.I will go back to school as soon as I recover.Yours respectfully,Tian Ye
常用句子I shall feel obliged if you will favor me with a call at your earliest convenience.如您方便,请早日来电,我将不胜感激。
Delighted!Will call at 2 p.m.tomorrow.来条收悉,定于明天下午两点拜访。
Encl.: Doctors Certificate of Advice.附;医生证明I shall be bery happy to call at your house at 6:30 this everying.Until then,...我定于今晚6:30去你家,望等候。
Upon receiving this note, please come to my office.见条后,请立即来我办公室。
Mr.Li stands in urgent need of your service.李先生急需你的帮助。
I happen to be in urgent need of 200 yuan.我因有急事,需要200元。
Yours note with an admission ticket enclosed is much appreciated.留言和一张入场券均已收到,不胜感激。
Im very grateful to you for your kind invitation, and Im sure to come to see your concert.承蒙邀请观看你们的音乐会,我一定按时到场。
Please accept this little figt as a small token of my esteen for you.奉上这小小的礼物,以表达我对您的崇高敬意。
结束语I trust my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience.望我的缺席不会给你带来太大的不便。
Please favor me with an early reply.敬请早复。
Hoping that the matter will be dealt with as soon as possible.希望能及早处理此事。
Please give an extension of leave for three days.请准予续假三天为盼。
九、简历(resume)简 历 1 结构要点: 简历是个人经历的书面表达形式,应包含个人信息、教育背景和工作经历。有时还可包含事业目标(objective或career objective)、其他经历(activities)、获奖情况(awards)和特长(special skills)等。举例:Suppose you are going to graduate from the university.Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a job.Do not use your own name, using “Li Mei” instead.Sample:
RESUME Personal Data: Name:Li Mei Sex:Female Address: Room 602, Dormitory Building 12,Wuhan University Wuhan, Hubei, 430021 Date of Birth:June 16, 1983 Place of Birth:Zunyi, Guizhou Telephone:(027)87273548, *** Email:angellimei@gmail.com Hobbies:painting, reading, Internet surfing, dancing Foreign Languages:English Objective: To work as a regional sales representative who is responsible for sales activity and coordination Education:
2002 ~ Present Studying at Wuhan University Bachelor of Arts in finance 1999 ~ 2002 Studying at Zunyi No.1 High School 1996 ~ 1999 Studying at Zunyi No.7 Junior High School Work Experience: None Special Skills and Technical Qualifications:
I am professionally trained in finance and economics.In addition to Mandarin, I can speak, write and read English fluently.I had two parttime jobs in Taiping Company and Zhida company, which helped me gain some sales operation knowledge and sales plan-ning experience
简 历
语言注意点: 简历忌过长或用词空泛,提供的信息应有用、如实,编排须整齐有系统。
举例:Suppose you are Tan Wen, English teacher at Taiyuan Institute of Technology.Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a new job in another city.Sample: Tan Wen Taiyuan Institute of Technology Taiyuan, Shanxi Province telephone:(0351)6523787 Experience 2000 ~ Present Working as a lecturer of English at Taiyuan Institute of Technology Teaching undergraduate(nonEnglish majors)intensive reading, extensive reading, listening, writing Teaching graduate(nonEnglish majors)writing Education 1997 ~ 2000 Studying at Shanghai Teacher's University Master of Arts in American Studies 1993 ~ 1997 Studying at Shanxi University Bachelor of Arts in English Language and Literature 1990 ~ 1993 Studying at Mianyang Senior High School 1987 ~ 1990 Studying at Mianyang No.5 Junior High School Personal Data Sex: Female Date of Birth: June 27, 1976 place of Birth: Mianyang, Sichuan, China Marital Status: Married, without Child Health: Excellent
十、申请信
结构要点申请信是向收信人提出某个请求的信件,包含三个部分: 1. 提出请求; 2. 说明原因; 3. 请求回复并表示感谢。
举例:Write a letter in about 100 words to apply for a scholarship from a foreign university.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I wish to apply for admission to your department as a graduate student.I am writing to ask whether it will be possible for you to grant me a full scholarship.I have just graduated from Shanghai University of Finance and Economics and got my bachelors degree last month.During my four years in the university, I have passed all the compulsory courses of study with high marks.Furthermore, I have chosen a wide range of optional courses such as literary, history and public speaking to widen my horizon and sharpen my mind.My father, a professor of English in Nanjing University, has been teaching me English since I was a child.So I believe I will not have any language difficulties while learning in your country.I would be most grateful if my request receives your favorable consideration.Thank you in advance and look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 语言注意点申请信开篇应点明主题,语言简练。接着说明做此申请的原因,即自己所具备的申请条件,这一部分需重点明确,论述充分。最后请求回复并表示感谢时,应采用礼貌、诚恳的措辞。
举例:Write a letter in about 100 words to apply for a membership in a community service team.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I have heard that a service team which aims to help the old and the handicapped will be organized in our community.I am very interested in it and want to join the team.I now study in Tongji University and my parents live here.It is known to all that it is a virtue to help others in need.As a college student, I am eager to do something for the society.Helping others is meaningful in that we not only bring others convenience and strength but also gain pleasure and satisfaction ourselves.Therefore, please allow me to join the team.I will certainly try my best.Yours sincerely, Li Ming