谈如何指导高中生提高英语书面表达

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谈如何指导高中生提高英语书面表达

谈如何指导高中生提高英语书面表达

编辑: admin|作者:平和一中:曾素美|发布日期: 2008-10-23 7:09:24

全国高考统考英语试题首先于1988年采用了书面表达题型，至今已连续采用了17个年头，其分值也经历了三个阶段：88年至93年计分为15分，占全卷分数的15%；94年至95年计分为25分，占全卷分数的16.7%；96年到2000年计分为30分，占全卷分数的20%。且2001—2005年高考书面表达，分值为25分。由此可见，书面表达的分值比重大，它是英语高考的重要组成部分。

《全日制高级中学英语教学大纲》明确地规定：“高级中学英语教学的目的，是在义务教育初中英语教学的基础上，巩固扩大学生的基础知识，发展听、说、读、写的基本技能，培养学生在口头上和书面上初步运用英语进行交际能力，……”书面表达就是在卷面上体现语言交际能力的一种重要形式。因此，在高中一年级就应该开展书面表达训练，而不是为了应付高考，在高三时才开展书面表达训练，到那时会有一种“为时太晚，力不从心”的感觉了。

新编高中教材编写的体系帮助我们摆脱了以往的困境，大大有利于全面培养学生听、说、读、写英语的四种技能。新教材从第一册开始就编排了大量的书面表达训练，这些训练由浅入深分层次推进，形成了一种“由易到难，由简到繁，循序渐进”的训练模式。但是由于高中新教材内容多，难度大，抽象概念增多，形象思维载体减少，语法现象复杂，这给刚迈进高中校门的学生又带来了一定的困难。这就要求教师要帮助学生了解高中教材的特点，指导学生掌握学习方法，培养学生归纳概括与逻辑思维能力，加强训练，使学生顺利完成初中、高中衔接的过渡。

然而在英语教学中，培养学生听、说、读、写的能力是相辅相成的，经常练习写作可以巩固和发展听说能力，还可以促进阅读能力的提高。写作还能促进学生勤复习、多思考，对一词一句反复推敲，因而有利于提高使用语言的准确性，同时有助于培养学生的英语思维能力。因而我从高一就开始采用以下几种方法指导学生写作：

一、用英语解释生词，为学生打好写作基础。

在教每课的单词和词组时，尽量用学生学过的单词、词组进行解释。例如：

continue —go on(doing)

artist —a person who draws, paints or takes photos

heat —make something warm or hot

刚开始时，是由我用英语解释生词，后来让学生看着汉语意思用自己学过的单词、词组来解释英语生词。这样，经过一段时间的训练，学生的英语思维能有所提高，为英语写作打下一定的基础。而且有的学生在英语写作中遇到写不来的单词时，能用这个单词的英语释义代替它，使英语写作更为顺利。例如：有的学生在写作中不知道“裁缝”英语怎么说，就用“a person who makes clothes”来代替“tailor”。

当然，这种说法是不符合英语语言习惯的，但对初学者来说，还是值得鼓励的。

二、通过改写对话。以第一人称或第三人称的口气讲述并写下每单元第一课的对话内容。例如：SEFC B Ⅰ A Lesson 13Jane and Betty are going on holidays in a few day’s time.Betty is going off to Guangzhou by plane next Thursday evening.She is staying with her friend Kate Klarke.Jane is going to Xi’an.She’s leaving on Friday.She’s going with her parents.She’s going by plane, too.在这篇改写的短文里，只要在理解原对话的基础上，给主要句子换上一个主语即可。随着学习知识内容的增加和循序渐进的写作训练，理解主题，抓住要点的阅读能力就会逐渐增强，词语、句型的运用能力也会大大提高。

三、通过缩写课文，培养学生的英语概括能力。

新教材所选的课文题材广泛、体裁丰富，我们要好好利用这些有利的因素与条件进行写作训练。具体做法：先对课文做好充分预习并根据关键词来复述课文，最后把复述的内容写下来。

例如：BⅠB Lesson 82

Karl Marx was born in Germany.German was his native language.When he was young, he was force to leave his homeland for political reasons.He had to move from one country to another.In 1949, he went to England and lived there.Then he started working hard to improve his English.Before long, he could write articles in English for an American newspaper.Later, he was able to write the book 《The civil war in France》in English.Marx began to learn Russian in his fifties.At the end of six months, he had learned enough Russian to read articles and reports in Russian.Marx set us a good example in learning foreign languages.有的课文是短剧，如高一Unit 18 Lesson 70 “The necklace”，我就让学生在班上表演，然后再把课文改为故事。

四、用命题方式让学生写自己熟悉、易于表达的题材

谈如何指导高中生提高英语书面表达

经过一段时间的缩写和改定的笔头训练之后，学生对写作有一定的基础和兴趣，我就开始让他们写一些自己熟悉、易于表达的题材。如：“My family”，“My school”，“A letter to a friend”，etc.五、通过讲评帮助学生逐步掌握写作要领。

每次作文批阅后，我都抽时间在班上讲评，把写得好的作文念给学生听，并分析学生中常出现的典型错误。许多学生受汉语的影响，作文常出现中国式的英语，对这种错误应及时纠正。例如有一位学生在作文中写道：

She shook her head and then said “No”.我将此句写在黑板上，指出错在哪里，怎样纠正，使学生从中学会正确的表达方法。

经过一年多的书面表达训练，大多数学生都能在规定的时间内写出比较通顺的英语作文。事实证明：只要正确认识，指导得法，持之以恒，加强训练，提高高一年起始年级学生写作能力，从而三年后达到高考要求是完全可能的。多年的高中英语教学实践中，现就如何切实提高学生的书面表达能力，探索解题对策，减少失误，提高学生的应变能力等有以下两方面的做法：一是从高一起抓好扎实的同步训练；二是高考总复习阶段加强书面表达题的指导和强化训练。

综上所述，英语书面表达能力的提高与学生的词汇、句型、语法等基本知识密切相关，更有赖于平时通过全方位的训练将学生的知识转化为能力，在学生已基本掌握行文技巧的基础上，教师还必须认真对待高考总复习中对书面表达的应考指导，重点在以下几个方面：

（一）审题。审题要抓住两个要素：一是内容，二是形式。既要通过题目所提供的信息找出书面表达的内容要点，又要根据题目的要求确定表达的形式。按照高考书面表达题评分要求，要点不能遗漏，格式不符合要求（如书信格式）也会失分。下面以93年高考书面表达题（看图作文）为例指导学生。通过仔细观察所给的六幅图画，启发学生找出以下要点：①父母住在农村②家里有一条狗，名叫“阿福”③父母去田间劳动，带上妹妹和阿福④妹妹去河边，阿福跟随⑤妹妹摘花，不慎落水⑥阿福边叫边跳下河⑦父母跑过来，看见阿福救妹妹⑧妹妹得救，阿福受到称赞。完成看图搜寻内容要点之后，让学生装按以上要点写出自己的书面表达，最后把试题答案发给学生对照，教师收取部分学生的答案进行分析、讲评，肯定成绩，找出差距，必要时选取学生中的优秀短文作为示范，鼓励学生互相学习，继续努力。

（二）指导学生学会列提纲。经过审题，明确了书面表达要涵盖的内容要点之后，必须先以各个要点为基础，拟出提纲，告诫学生不在拟出提纲之前就急于动笔，否则会影响短文的质量。提纲是文章的支架，有了它文章写起来即紧扣主题又层次分明，要点不会遗漏。

（三）重视“行文连贯”。行文连贯是书面表达评分最高要求的一项重要内容。因此，队了依据提纲进行表达、文句不出语言形式错误外，还必须注重行文的连贯性。为此，可告诉学生视不同情况，分别采用以下几种方法：

1、依照内容提示中提供的时间先后顺序写出文章。这种方法写出的文章平铺直叙，过程清楚，明白易懂。它常涉及以下表示时间的单词和词组。如：after, before long, afterwards, earlier, in the beginning, at last, in the end, …etc..2、按照空间位置（上下、内外或前后）的变换顺序写出文章。帮助学生归纳出以下表示空间位置的词或词组：above、in the middle of、beside、next to、between、off、towards、under、beyond、on the right（left）、outside、inside、over、behind，…etc.。

3、按照事物的重要性为序进行表达。可先轻后重，亦可先重后轻，均可取得良好效果。已学过有关常用词和词组有：best of all、worst of all、more important、most important、above all、moreover、in the first place（首先），etc.。

4、用比较对照法写出书面表达.例如A与B进行比较对照,可将A、B的情况特征分述比较，也可将A与B的情况分项交叉进行对照。对比、衬托能突出表现某一事物的优劣、高低或强弱等品质，强化描述效果。这种方法常用到以下单词和词组：and、both、in the same way、the same、similar、similarly、dissmilar、different.（四）带领学生共同研究高考评分标准。高考书店面表达题按七个档次评分的做法及要求已经数年稳定不变，其中第七档要求是：能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。这是最高要求，达到者得20—24分。这些要求指明了师生努力的方向。强化训练过程中务必提醒学生：抓住内容要点是书面表达的基础，不使用自己没有把握的词汇和句型可避免出现语言错误，但为了“行文连贯”就不能一味强调“尽量使用简单句”，必要时使用复合句会使得文章得体、通顺，同时显示出答题者较高的遣词造句能力和较深厚的功底。提醒学生在书面表达写完之后，要反复阅读几遍，查看内容、语言、语体三者是否都得到兼顾，是否把问题说清楚了。

（五）高考总复习中向学生提供一定数量按题材分类的常用典型的书面表达句式作为语言素材，让学生学习并加以记忆，以进一步丰富他们的语言素材和表达方式。

事实证明，围绕书面表达所进行的各项教学工作和活动，有效地提高了学生们的语言总体水平和能力。

第二篇：泰州中考英语书面表达指导

中考英语“书面表达”指导

中考英语“书面表达”通常含有四个方面的要求：内容、语言、形式和自己的观点。内容是按照题目的要点和指令去写，不得遗漏任何一个要点；不能随意发挥去写一些与主题无关的话。语言的要求是正确、恰当、清楚、连贯，最好要有几个复杂句句式。在形式上首先要体裁格式正确，单词的大小写正确、标点符号正确以及词数在100个词左右。自己的观点要符合题目要求，要与学习和生活实际相符。

中考英语作文是考查学生综合运用英语能力的一种重要形式，中考英语作文在中考英语试卷中占据20分，在中考英语中起着举足轻重的作用。作文质量的好与差，得分悬殊很大，将对考生中考总成绩带来很大影响。应对策略：2步思路、再加3步骤 思路： 1.审好题

仔细审查所给的内容提示(包括文字和图表等)，明确要写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。

2.看要点，写片段

对于易于表达的内容要点，一次成句；对于一时难于表达的内容要点，写出词组。此时，既注意不遗漏内容要点，也不要随意添加任何内容。步骤：

1.定句型，连词成句

这个环节是成文的关键，一定要注意做到：

(1)选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了„„”时，可用in order to do 或 so as to do.也可用so that引导目的状语从句。(2)写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。

(3)表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到“All roads lead to Rome.”这句话，用变通的方法，以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话，表达起来似乎很难，但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来：His cousin looks strong but in fact ,he is rather weak.(4)尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”，不可写成：She slept very late.应该写成：She went to bed very late.因为“sleep late”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”，不可写成：He is not a little worried about his English.实际上意思完全相反，表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是：He is not a bit worried about his English.或：He is not worried about his English at all.2.连词成句，添减相宜

单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。

即：文章的开头(Introduction)、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中，还要注意以下几点：

(1)句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻辑思维方面的问题，这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点，你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。

(2)为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but ,however ,otherwise等，表达递进可用and ,also ,besides ,What’s more等，表达因果so ,therefore ,as a result等，表达对比可用at the same time ,meanwhile，while等，表达让步可用though ,although ,even if等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。

(3)仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套，给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要，与整个文章浑然一体。尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句。3.检查，修改，定稿，誊写

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：(1)内容要点有无遗漏或误词，必须一一对应检查。(2)体裁格式对不对。

(3)句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。

(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。经典题例

下面以一作文为例，谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。原题介绍

目前，泰州正在创建(create)全国文明城市(National Civilization City)。作为一个中学生，我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢？我们又如何为这个活动作贡献(make contribution to)呢？请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。

Nowadays, ______________________________________________________________ 解题步骤

第一步：认真审题，明确写作体裁、提示要点、文章的时态、人称和词数。分析：

这篇作文的体裁是倡议书。文章主要有5大提示要点，考生可以用笔将这些要点圈出来。1.泰州正在创建全国文明城市。2.作为一个中学生在学校怎么做才能称得上是一个文明的人？3.作为一个中学生在家怎么做？4.作为一个中学生在公共场所怎么做？5.我们又如何为这个活动作贡献呢？

这篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。人称用第一人称。词数100个左右。第二步：分析提示要点,用简明的英语写出要点。

分析：五大提示要点只有第一要点是限定的，考生可以直接翻译。其余四大要点都是半限定的、半开放性的。考生需要根据文章主题的需要联系实际生活进行适当发挥。不同的考生会有不同的答案。这部分既是写作的重点也是难点。考生可用简明的英语写出要点。如: At school: keep the classroom clean and tidy.At home : help parents do some housework.In public places: obey the traffic rules，don’t make too much noise.make a contribution to this event: give out leaflets to make people understand the importance of this activity.第三步：列出写作提纲，并将要点扩展成句。

开头(Introduction)：Taizhou is creating a National Civilization City.As middle school students ,we should try our best to become civilized persons.正文(Mainbody):

At school, we should keep our classroom clean and tidy every day.We shouldn’t throw about rubbish.At home, we should help our parents do some housework.In public places, we shouldn’t make much noise in public places.We mustn’t cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.We can make a contribution to this event by giving out leaflets to the citizens to make them understand the importance of this event and take part in it.结尾(conclusion):I am sure Taizhou will become a National Civilization City soon.第四步：组句成文。

分析：根据文章内容和要求，可以适当调整以上句子的先后顺序。为了使文章连贯自然，表达准确，适当加一些表达并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词，然后组成文章，这时如果发现文章词数不够，可把短语变成句子，也可增添一些与表达内容有关的短语或句子。如：表达“在家”,不用“at home”.而用“When we are at home.”如果发现文章词数超过要求，可以将句子变成短语或两句并一句。第五步：计划时间，认真检查、修改。分析：

中考英语作文一般要求在20分钟内完成。因此，考试时间有限，必须合理安排。成文后必须认真检查修改。特别注意以下几点：

1．内容是否符合要求，要点有无遗漏或误解。2．句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确。

3．是否有语法错误。特别是冠词、名词的复数、代词、主谓一致、时态、语态等方面。4．是否有拼写错误。

5．书写是否有不清楚或不易辨认之处。6．大小写和标点符号是否使用得当。7．词数是否符合要求。第六步：认真誊写。

分析：注意书写清楚、规范，卷面整洁。中考20分作文，有两分卷面整洁分。下面是修改过的作文:

Taizhou is creating a National Civilization City.As middle school students, we should try our best to become civilized persons.First, when we are at school, we should keep our classroom clean and tidy.And we shouldn’t throw about rubbish.Second , we should help our parents do some housework At home.Third , we shouldn’t make much noise in public places.Besides ,we mustn’t cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.What’s more , we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order to make them understand the importance of this event and take part in it.If everyone makes a contribution to this event ,Taizhou will become a National Civilization City soon.

第三篇：英语书面表达

寒假作业Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic

We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基础写作：

上周六下午，你们宿舍几个同学去森林公园野炊，回来途中淋了雨。晚上李华头疼得厉害。你给她量体温，发现她发高烧。你马上带她去看医生。医生说她得了重感冒，要卧床休息三天。请你代她给刘老师写一张请假条说明情况，并帮她请假两天（周一、周二），因此她不能参加周二的羽毛球比赛了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任务型写作

总结：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你认为制订目标很重要吗？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你认为制订目标后怎样才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.举例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基础写作

社会实践是学校教育的一个重要组成部分；书本知识有限；社会实践有诸多好处，能用所学的知识解决实际问题，获取经验，了解社会，端正学习态度，激励学习。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任务型写作

总结：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你对童年生活的认识 我认为从某种意义上来说，艰苦的环境可以激发一个人的潜能，为他的成功铺平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一个人在经历了磨难之后可以变得坚强，勇敢和忠实可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.总而言之，我认为温室里的花朵经受不起风暴的洗礼，艰苦的生活对孩子来说是有好处的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午

热爱社会工作，性格乐观，富有爱心和责任心；英语口语流利，具有相关的教学经验；工作时间：周六和周日，按每小时5元付费；这份工作给自己在经济和人际关系方面的好处；:表达自己做好工作的决心：把快乐和舒适带给自己工作的对象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就学校取消高三音乐课这一事件给校长写一封信

Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同学们对学校取消音乐课意见不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你对此决定赞成或反对？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons

汕头一模

1.为何与人合作：现代社会必备；可省时间和精力；更多互相学习的机会

2.与谁合作：A与喜欢的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B与不喜欢的人合作：学会容忍，学会挖

掘其优点

3.你的看法：倾听别人意见，不把你的观点强加给别人，有礼貌地指出别人的错误

Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!

失败是件坏事吗？

概括短文要点Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失败并非坏事，但从失败中站起来并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失败对胜利者是必修课，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你对失败的看法和态度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.广州一模

基础写作简介学校的植物园

1.概况：位于校园西南角，面积1000平方米 2.历史：20年的历史，2008年重建 3.特色：各种花卉、树木、药用植物 4.功能：美化校园、研究植物场所、休闲之地 5.其他：观赏至少许一小时

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.读写任务就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评

(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要点：校长的做法、想法、结果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持该校长的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假设你是校长，你会如何处理违纪学生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模写一篇短文介绍大豆的生长过程

1.发芽的条件：水分充足，温度适宜，种子就开始发芽了 2.第一步：出现幼根，并朝下生长 3.第二步：幼苗出现，并朝上生长，直至变成绿色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝叶出现 5.第四步：数月后开花结果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.经济危机，大学生就业难

概括材料主要内容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.现状：经济危机影响全球，就业机会少，工人工资低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建议：树立正确的择业观，降低预期工资，先就业再择业，自己创业，开公司，展示自己的才华Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各种优惠政策，免除各种税费，提供一定数量的无息贷款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.

第四篇：英语书面表达

2014年济宁市中考英语书面表达

假设你是李华，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营，根据夏令营之活动安排，你需要准备一份关于英语夏令营英语阅读方面的发言稿，具体要求如下：

1.对英语阅读重要性的认识；

2.个人开展英语阅读的情况（1-2点具体做法）及感悟；

3.将来的打算。

参考词汇：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.词数，100词左右；（开头已给出，不计入总词数；）

2.可根据具体要求及参考词汇适当发挥；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名。

Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Thanks for your listening.

第五篇：英语书面表达

Dear Andy,I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely, Li hua [名师点评]

本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。