大学英语四六级写作讲稿

第一篇：大学英语四六级写作讲稿

大学英语四六级写作讲稿

一.四六级作文测试基本要求及分析 1． 四级考试写作要求：

《大学英语教学大纲》和《大学英语课程教学基本要求》都对培养学生的英语写作能力做了明确规定，即学生能在半小时内完成120字左右的短文，包括书信等应用问题写作，要求文理基本通顺，表达思想清楚，无重大语法错误。通过分析历年的真题，我们不难发现：英语作文考查的类型基本包括议论文(一般为三段论式的论说文字)，说明文(目前侧重于这方面的写作训练)，图表作文(要求描述性的语言要贴近图表信息，真实反映语言水平)和应用文写作(包括书信、便条、通知、海报

等)。2．近年四级写作改革变化追踪 2005．6

In Honour of Teachers on the Occasion of Teacher’s Day（演讲致辞型）2005．12

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?（议论文）

2006．6

An announcement for a voluntary program（应用文）

2006．1CCTV Spring Festival Gala（议论文）

2007．6

Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?（议论文）2007．12

Elective courses to choose（议论文）

2008．6

Recreational activities（议论文）

从上面的题目变化趋势看，描述现象、分析原因、个人看法仍是四、六级考试写作部分主要考查的重点，在今后相当长的时间内，英语写作教学和辅导的主要突破口应集中在说明文、议论文和应用文上

此外，仔细研究06年6月24日以后的四级试卷，我们还可发现，新四级的写作题目与校园生活密切相关，学生普遍感觉亲切，体裁包括两篇议论文，一篇应用文。不仅如此，新四级写作题中提供的文章框架清晰，思路比较明确，绝大多数考生都能利用“经典句型”或“万能模板”写出及格的作文。尽管新四级前两次都考查了议论文，但这并不能说明写作的重心有任何偏移。根据考试改革方案和课程教学要求的相关规定，应用文写作、说明文和议论文仍将是新四级作文的主

攻方向。3．时间配置：

30分钟

1）审题（3分钟）： 2）写作（25分钟）： 3）检查（2分钟）：语法（时态、冠词、主谓一致）、拼写、标点

4．具体要求：

1）语言第一位：表达通顺、无重大语言错误

（1）基础一般：简单原则、安全

第一（“平淡如水”、“简洁就是美”、“绚烂之极，归于平淡“，“与其写一个错误的复杂句，不

如写一个正确的简单句。”（2）基础较好：句子结构词多变 2）结构第二位：（1）逻辑性：

A.并列：and/or/but B.因果：because/in that, since/as, for C.转折：but/however（2）关联词：

3）内容第三位

二．四级写作高分策略

新四级考试并没有改变对写作的测试标准和要求，但在出题顺序上却做了明显的调整：写作作为第一项考查的内容，被提到新四级试卷的最开头，这令许多考生感觉不适应，部分网友甚至认为这是在折腾考生。其实，提高写作能力虽然较难，但写作教学却是一片大有可为的沃土。在过去十多年的英语写作辅导中，笔者坚持认为：考生如果坚持做到如下几点，就不难在规定的时间内写出一篇成功的英语作文。1．制造语言亮点

A.尝试使用中高级词汇替代低级词汇（主要是形容词和副词）

Good results-----favorable results Bad effects-------negative effects Big changes------great changes;

(Data)show that-----indicate;demonstrate Important--------significant;crucial;vital More and more(problems等名词)-------an increasing number of(problems)

More and more(important等形容词或副词)-------increasingly(important)All kinds of--------a variety of Many-----------a number of Deal with-------tackle

Possible--------likely(可用人或讨论的问题做主语)B．英语四六级考试写作30个最经典替换词 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替换most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter替换thing 8: shared代 common 9.reap huge fruits替换get many benefits)10:for my part ,from my own perspective替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything,或little or nothing替换hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely替换very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in 18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替换cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth替换..reasons for sth 23.desire替换want.24.pour attention into替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that替换remember 26.enjoy, possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27.interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30.next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible C.几个不能随意使用的词

“good”,”bad”,”terrible”,”something”这几个词在学生作文中反复出现。这几个词本身并没有问题，是英语常用词，但是，很多情况下，应该使用意义更准确的词。学生使用这几个词是因为懒惰，词汇量贫乏或者是缺乏修改。

四、六级作文要求的字数很少，一个意思只能用一个句子表达，句子里的关键词就要力求准确。good 原稿： Sports are definitely good for mental health.改后稿： Sports are beneficial to one’s mental health.原稿： Travelers can meet with people form other parts of the world and may develop a good relationship.改后稿： Travelers are able to make friends with people all over the world.bad 原稿：Some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people's health.改后稿： Fake goods can be dangerous to one’s health.terrible

原稿：Nowadays, the city has a lot of problems, terrible traffic, polluted air, too much noises, etc.改后稿： Today, many cities suffer from traffic congestion and air and noise pollution.something 原稿： There is something more important and that money can’t buy, for example, love.改后稿： There are more important things than money such as love.原稿：It means that people can master something perfectly by practicing it.改后稿：The meaning is that with constant practice, you can master what you set out to.2.捕获闪光词

基本表达(Basic Elements of English Writing)：

越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that 许多问题：a host of/a number of problems 引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意识到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb.to the fact/danger 适应新的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change 接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems 接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society 获得成功：achieve/accomplish success 提出观点/建议：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions 作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)影响学习/工作：interfere with studies/work 产生影响：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on 较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of one's life 剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity 取代旧的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way 采取措施：take effective steps/measures to 控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment 躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge 满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of 补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage 解释某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon 对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on.provide/gain an insight into 把某因素考虑进去：take sth.Into account(consideration), give much thought to 品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth 培养对……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in 经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience 表现出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image 生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice 追求学习/职业：pursue one's academic interest/professional career 学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill 被看作学习的……榜样：be held up as a good example 交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge 发挥/起到重要作用：play an(important/active/great)role/part 逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture 知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience 确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard 到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective 克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty 面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty 阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth 阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of 持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom 发表看法：voice/express one's opinion 持相反/合理的观点：take the opposite/fresh view 揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of 求得帮助：enlist one's support/help 缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf(between city and country)把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to 对……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to 施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on 重视：assign/attach much importance/significance to 强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on 把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon 提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住机会：grab/seize/take the opportunity 得到机会：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information 有可能：there is(little/much)possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that 展开竞争：compete against/with sb.for the prize/position/control/the mastery of 开展运动：conduct(carry on/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a(vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising)campaign(for/against)对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me 带来无穷的幸福/满足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint 献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career 大不（没什么）两样：make much(little/no)difference 真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …

改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life 建立在大量的学习/实践上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice 进行调查/执行任务：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment 辞去工作/学习：leave/quit one's job/work/school 参加考试/竞赛等：enter(for)the examination/contest, race 参加活动/讨论：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion 影响思想/态度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude 进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals 实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)减轻压力/紧张：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension 提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership 提高技术/能力：sharpen(increase/improve/enhance/boost)one's skill/ability 加快/促进发展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of 随着生活节奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society 开阔眼界/兴趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge)one's mental horizons 有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of 有助于解决问题：go a long way to(towards)solving the problem 迷恋名利/分数：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune 把时间花/浪费在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用机会/技术：make(full/better)use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent 把知识/经验运用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use 取得进步：make much progress/strides/gains in 充分发挥潜力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability 充满激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion fo

第二篇：大学英语四六级短文写作

大学英语四六级短文写作

（一）对立观点型

Should Firecrackers Be Banned?

（1）

setting off firecrackersit festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerless.suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.be done by banning firecrackers from public places.In addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.(2)

setting off firecrackers an ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved.They also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.Without firecrackers, festivals would become cold and cheerless.banned.They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders.Besides, they maintain that firecrackers lead to a waste of money and resources.firecrackers

（二）解决问题型

3.My View on Fake Commodities quality and the like.’ rights, wasting their money and threatening their health and even lives.the production and sale of fake goods cause serious losses on the part of honest and lawful producers.the destruction of fake commodities means a grievous waste of the nation’s resources.the identifying and refusing sub-standard commodities.（三）谚语警句型

4.Haste Makes Waste “Haste makes waste”by step.Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process.One should make full preparations before beginning any task.Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way.Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good compositions.(或fable goes that a farm tried to help the shoots grow by pulling them upward, only to find that they ’s and 1960’s.At that time, the Chinese people were so eager to develop their economy that they took some improper measures, only to hinder the expansion of economy.)

(或the age of 11 or 12, I began to learn to ride.Eager to ride as well as others, I started by sitting on the saddle at the very beginning.Predictably, I often fell from over the bike.Lots of time had been wasted before I realized that I should do it step by step.I tried to slide by standing on one pedal.Then I began to ride the bike from under the cross bar.Finally, I succeeded.)and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step.And remember, Rome was not built in a day.（四）图表图画型

5.Changes in the Ownership of Houses in China

1950’s to 20% in 1990’s, that of private houses has from 30% to 80% during the same period of time.purchased houses in their own favor.（五）应用写作型

6.A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus

January 12th, 2002 the canteen on campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen.First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same.Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them.Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new.Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students' supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students.It may affect their academic performance.Therefore,Li Ming

以上是经典范文，下面是通句，完全可以背下来直接用，写作时可以节省很多时间

1）先背3个句子Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性)The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday life.On the one hand …, But on the other hand.（讲影响）

3To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.（结尾段）

Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句，根据不同模板自由组合。

2）模板（2个模板）开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲不好的地方。

中间段：措施

结尾段：先来个小转折再进入总结

开头段Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more…..are commonly and widely used in everyday life.However, what worries most of us is that…… 中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……

结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life.However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.开头段：先讲重要性，然后转讲争论

中间段：转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)

结尾段：直接进入总结（即你的观点）

开头段：It is accepted that ….Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of…..However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.中间段：On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..On the other hand, a great many people insist that….结尾段：From my perspective, however….(你的观点).Therefore, it’s time that(措施之类的)

6级作文万能句子（补充在”…..”里面的万能句子，自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合）重点背：1）5）6）7）句子，最好全部都被过一遍，自己琢磨怎么用。

1）Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.....能让我们的生活更美好，也就是说，....可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩

2）For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives

and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说，学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。

3）......, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.......占据了某人大部分时间，使得某人没空想东想西（充实了某人生活）

4）What's more, living in school can save them a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work.住校为学生省去了不少时间，这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上

5）Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.一点一滴，这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野

6）For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge.Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说，抽空学习一门新技术很重要

7）The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧，这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力

8）By taking a major-related part-time job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, which they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验

9）Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.10）1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way.什么东西可带来好影响 2Sth may bring about negative impacts on …什么东西可带来不好的影响

11）sth is a queer thing.It brings you great gifts with one hand, but it stabs you at the backwith the other.(将两方面的利弊转折句，相当喜欢这句啊！呵呵）

第三篇：大学英语四六级写作(辩论式)

大学英语四六级写作模板——辩论式议论文

模版1

Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.模版2

People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.Last but not the least, 论据3.To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.模版3

There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 论据1。

Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

第四篇：大学英语四六级写作：图表式作文

大学英语四六级写作模板：图表式作文

It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all, …(第一个原因).More importantly, …(第二个原因).Most important of all, …(第三个原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).（范文参见《四级考试作文题型及范文》）

第五篇：大学英语四六级作文

一、2010上海世博会

The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.二、如何做一个可爱的上海人

How To Be A Lovely Citizen Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.三、考证热

1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热” 2)产生这一现象的原因

3)你的看法 【行文思路】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。

Certificate Craze on Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?

[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates.With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe.Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability.In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability.Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time.To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.【亮点点评】

[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。

[2]限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。

[3]that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。

[4]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。

[5]强调句型，此处是强调主语。

[6]which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。

[7]用于引出“我”的观点。

[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。

[9]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。

[10]“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。

【佳句临摩】

1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.临摩：我认为，对于我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。

四、追求名牌

1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌

2)产生这种现象的原因是什么

3)你如何看待这一现象

【行文思路】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。

Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands.From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well.This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.They expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮点点评】

[1]“有…倾向”。

[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。

[3] follow表示“跟随，追求(趋势或时尚)”

[4]用于引出原因。

[5]which引导非限制性定语从句。

[6] it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语。

[7]“远远超出他们的消费能力”。beyond表示“超出…范围”。

[8]强调句型，此处是强调主语。not…but连接并列成分。

[9]“而不是”。

【佳句临摹】

1.佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.临摹：对大学生来说，了解校园以外的世界是非常必要的。

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2.佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.临摹：在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博

像赌博的那么有害和危险了，它经常会导致一个人破产，还会玷污人的心灵。

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3.佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.临摹：很多同学经常玩电脑游戏，这是浪费时间，而不是一种有益的放松方式。

五、助学贷款申请信 1)简单介绍个人情况

2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额

3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心

【行文思路】

本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自己的情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心，最后表示感谢。

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008

To whom it may concern，I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics.I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours，Song Xue 【亮点点评】

[1]“主修…”，现在分词作伴随状语。

[2]“超出…的能力范围”。

[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。

[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。

[6]“我保证…”，that引导同位语从句。

[7]“不遗余力”。

【佳句临摩】

1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.临摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.临摩：由于周围交通不便利，人们只得步行回家。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.临摩：全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举办奥运会。