第一篇：bec写作部分总结
作文总结： 语法错误：
1.单词拼写，如“installment 分期付款的摊付金，(经常被误用)“installation 安装，设置，军事设备”；”available“误写成availble 2.介词或短语但配用错，多见于固定搭配的介词用错，如”be satisfied with“，有的同学掉动词be,有的人介词搭配错误。“report on…”,“proposal for…”, 3.介词后面接名词或动名词，而不是不定时或动词原形。如“for to do(x)for do(x)” 应为“for doing“；“aim at doing sth.”,“aim to do sth.”“due to+名词”“because +从句”“because of（owing to）()名词”等。
4.句型冗杂，注意从句不要漏了先行词“that”“which”“where”等。例：“I have heard about there was a.....“(x)应为” I have heard about that there was a...“ 5.单词词义和词性变化。”produce“ ”product“ ”production“的区别等。6.主谓一致问题。
7.时态一致。如“last year.....”有明确表明过去时，用一般过去时，而不是用完成时或现在时；recently, already, since等词经常和完成时搭配。格式错误：
1.信函称呼后用逗号，用冒号或不加标点都是错误的。2.信函写完一定记得署名。
3.写report 或proposal时一定要记得左对齐，每一个部分写完要空一格。写作内容：
1.不要漏些信息点，这样扣分很严重！
2.条理要清晰，不要东一句西一句。一般情况下采用“总-分”的形式；每段的第一句是中心句，表明自己的观点，立场，或想法，然后根据中心句展开。内容太多可分成几段，如果是report 或proposal，必要时用序列号罗列，但不可千篇一律都罗列。3.写作中要写明具体事件，理由和实例，不要用“something“ ”somebody“ ”some problems“的含糊不清字眼。（实例和实践可以多参考范文）。
4.句子简洁明了，句型多变，不要整篇文章下来只有一个句型:“I have...” “I think....” “I do...” 5.写report和 proposal时尽量用客观的语气，多用数据，实例说话，主语非人主语。6.多用范文中的句型，如 “It is...“ ”The reasons are as follows"“it is advisable(recommended, suggested)that…”等。
第二篇：BEC写作
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Reference To: Mr.R.Harrison Date: 5 April, 2008From: Tina Sub: The transferring of the Photocopy RoomBecause the complex is being decorated, the photocopy room needs moving to some other building before this Friday for a four-week period of time.Please let me know where you think to be a properly temporal site for it by 8:30 tomorrow morning.To: Sally Date：4 May, 2008From: Jim Sub: the meetingThe monthly sales staff meeting is to be held at 9:30 Thursday(7 May).Mr.Scott is making a presentation at the meeting.Please see to that the overhead projector and computer are ready in the meeting room before the meeting starts.If you have any problem in your arrangement, plslet me know.To: Mr.Braun Date：3 March, 2008From: JesicaSub: New system is working.The Training Dept.is collecting the feedback of he operation of the new system.Plssend them the report on:1.How long the system has been working in your Dept.2.What jobs it is used for.3.How it is working.The report is expected by 4 p.m.this Friday(7 March).
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第三篇：BEC高级第六部分改错题总结
For each sentence, find the unnecessary word.If there is no mistake in the sentence, write correct.They use their time more productively and are less stressed.Correct Even though it is not yet clear how big the contract will be, but it is expected to grow steadily as more and more management training is gradually outsourced.英语中以even though（虽然）引导表示让步的状语从句，主句不再加but。Staying with a host family gives participant even more of exposure to the target language and 4 helps them to make immediate use of the language they have learned.Correct
形容词more后面直接跟名词。Even more exposure to „It also provides an opportunity for them to make network with their counterparts.Network 在此不作“网络”解。该词在现代商务英语中可作动词，意为“建立人际网或关系网”。其名词为networking(人际网，关系网)With a reference to your letter dated 13 November…
With reference to(就„., 关于„.)是固定搭配，不可随意添加冠词。This can help them to achieve their learning objectives.Correct
Help sb.to do something It was also found that inflexible working hours are a certain major grievance among staff at all levels.Certain作定语表示“某个，某种”，在文中与前后词缺乏语义上的贯通。此句意为“在各级员工中最主要的不满是死板的工作时间。” Octacon suspects that a disgruntled employee who has been leaking crucial details to their competitor.这里has been leaking充当suspect后面宾语从句的谓语，不存在定语从句关系。This would be illegal, of course, but without a proof there is little Octacon can do.Proof 作“证据”，总称为不可数名词。This is how done by “scanning”, passing each item over a device reads the bar-code on it and automatically registers it down in the till.文中的意思是“扫描之后自动登录”，在这里“register”是及物动词，后面不需要加副词down.They provide bags, often help to pack purchases, and change paper till rolls as being necessary.句中“as necessary” 是“as it is necessary”的省略形式，一般使用过程中只需用“as necessary” 可以表达相同的意思，所以“being”是多余的。Working overseas can offer you a once in a lifetime opportunity to live.Correct Working overseas can build the friendships in a very different environment.多余词为the, 表示特指或后面带有后置定语是加定冠词the, 而这里的relationships不属于这两种情况，所以不加the.In addition to being resourceful, and you must be able to show sensitivity to cultural differences.介词短语in addition to „作状语，不能与后面的主句形成并列关系，所以不能用表示并列的连词连接。We will provide you a comprehensive package which includes free travel.通常provide 的固定搭配是：provide sb.with something,或 provide something to sb.而不能说provide sb.something.Goods sold by seller have to be delivered to the potential buyer abroad.Correct The delivery of goods is made possible by shipping to service.As basically, some 98% of world trade is having conveyed by sea transport.Ordering is easy and delivery fast.Correct We will inform you immediately should any items be out of stock.Correct Dawkin being strong in London and other big cities, and unlike Highway concentrates its efforts outside the major population centers.Customer service is included every employee’s responsibility.It has become so relatively complex and inclusive.Rising costs of sugar or cocoa may be force Hershey to raise its prices.Many companies prefer to buy multiple sources to avoid being depending from a single supplier.
第四篇：BEC写作QUESTION1
BEC写作范文QUESTION1
HEADLINE
Below is a report on the changes in turnover for three kinds of outlet,owed by one company, over a three-year period.The charts below shows sth given by customers in sth
Performance Report 2011-2012
Introduction
The aim of this report is to describe the company’s performance in the years 2011-2012
This report outlines the development of profits in three plants, in London… and describe the staffing situation in each plant.Article
The highest overall sth of number pounds was obtained/reached , on the other hand, the smallest turnover was made in sth.注意按顺序写，否则就是没逻辑
Plummeted to about 1000 in 2012
Almost maintain this position throughout /remained almost unchanged Turnover rose steadily from 2000
-reaching it’s peak in 2012 with 1000(reach a low at 7.5 million)(peaked in the second quarter with earning exceeding the 4 million level.)
A slight increase of 100 in 2012
In conclusion, 把前面的总结一遍
不出数字者死。
Whereas
Said something negative/positive 想不出就用这个
结构上要变换： asked about… looking into… sth is… people say that总之不能一样 否则就是BAND2 OR BAND3
连续下降不需要写所有数据 Bristol employed 600 people and reached profits of 12 million in the first quarter.The profits plummeted steadily to 9 million in the last quarter.Are likely to maintain
换段之后可以直接出现名词，例如：
TV sets, on the other hand
Increase during the time from xx to xx.再次上升soar once again to xx during xx.有波动： are likely to fluctuate starting off at 5000, sakes will increase to 10000 during the time, only to decrease to 5000 during the time.比例： ratio is xx to xx in a time, the first representing the number of women and the latter-men.In the group 44 to 49 the split is slight(29 male to 28 female)
The difference reaches 20 in range 50 to 59, with 39 male directors and 19 female.women hold the position in comparison to 21 men.Ending at 最后一个数据
背诵 higher4 test3
Regarding the passenger revenue during 2005 it started around 280 in the first quarter, and increased slowly to around 300 in the third quarter.Then it fell to around 290 at the end of the year.In 2006 the revenue increased steadily to 330 during the second quarter before falling rapidly to around 230 in the 3rd quarter ending at 225 at the end of the year.The percentage of trains arriving on time stayed stable at around 88% during the 1st and 2nd quarter in 2005 and then decreased to 85% in the 3rd quarter before recovering at around 87% at the end of 2005.Till the 2nd quarter in 2006 the percentage decreased steadily to 85% before falling rapidly to 68%(3rd quarter)and recovering to 75% at the end of 2006.Conclusion
It was concluded that sth will be the company’s core product area in the following year.
第五篇：BEC商务英语写作
BEC商务英语写作范文（1）
NOTICE OF OPPOSITION TO ZONING REQUEST
An application has been filed by [name of applicant] for a [variance，exception，special use permit] to permit [purpose for zoning request] at[address]in the City of[city]，County of [county]，State of[state]
The property in question is presently zoned for[zoning]，and the adjacent property is
[zoning]
As property owners in the area，the undersigned do hereby request that the pending application mentioned herein be denied by the [name of commission]on the following grounds：
[grounds for petition]
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