第一篇:先锋小学生作文网阅读问卷
《爷爷一定有办法》阅读测试卷(满分|合格:100分|60分)
1、题型:单选题 分值:10 爷爷看到小约瑟的背心坏了,就动手把它改成了
选项1: 领带√
选项2: 手帕
选项3: 纽扣
2、题型:单选题 分值:10 爷爷看到小约瑟的领带坏了,就动手把它改成了
选项1: 背心
选项2: 手帕√
选项3: 纽扣
3、题型:单选题 分值:10 爷爷看到小约瑟的手帕坏了,就动手把它改成了
选项1: 领带
选项2: 背心
选项3: 纽扣√
4、题型:单选题 分值:10 《爷爷一定有办法》是中文的书名,原来的英文名是
选项1: 《无中生有》√
选项2: 《犹太人的节日》
选项3: 《好人》
5、题型:单选题 分值:10 爷爷亲手做的毯子坏了,他就动手把它改成了
选项1: 领带
选项2: 背心
选项3: 外套√
6、题型:判断题 分值:10 小约瑟的爷爷很聪明。
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7、题型:判断题 分值:10 毯子坏了,爷爷把它改成了一粒纽扣。
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8、题型:判断题 分值:10 小约瑟很爱自己的爷爷。
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9、题型:判断题 分值:10 《爷爷一定有办法》是菲比吉尔曼写的。
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10、题型:判断题 分值:10 约瑟的背心坏了,妈妈就帮他改成了手帕。正确
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《小猪唏哩呼噜》阅读测试卷(满分|合格:分|60分)
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1、题型:单选题 分值:10 1.小猪唏哩呼噜原来的名字是(1)。
选项1: 小十二
选项2: 小呱唧
选项3: 小白猪
选项4: 小八
2、题型:单选题 分值:10 2.小猪唏哩呼噜拱出蚯蚓给三个小家伙吃,原来这些小家伙是(4)的孩子。
选项1: 乌鸦
选项2: 月牙熊
选项3: 驴先生
选项4: 大狼
3、题型:单选题 分值:10 3.小猪把鸭蛋安全地送到城里,(1)送给他一担子的大香蕉。
选项1: 鸭太太的姐姐
选项2: 鸭太太的先生
选项3: 小鸭子们
选项4: 马太太
4、题型:单选题 分值:10 4.小猪开设了(2),赚了钱,终于给自己买了一辆自行车。
选项1: 电子游戏室
选项2: 技术咨询所
选项3: 蛋糕店
选项4: 游乐园
5、题型:单选题 分值:10 5.小猪替狐狸掌柜运垃圾,狐狸掌柜最后送小猪(3)。
选项1: 一 块大蛋糕
选项2: 两个大“心里美”萝卜
选项3: 一个大鸡蛋 选项4: 一大筐橘子
6、题型:判断题 分值:10 6.上册中,讲的五个故事的顺序是唏哩呼噜历险记、小猪当保镖、小猪的生日礼物、小猪和蛇、小猪和橘子。(1)
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7、题型:判断题 分值:10 7.小猪呼哩呼噜用喊救命的办法吓跑了大狼。(2)
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8、题型:判断题 分值:10 8.唏哩呼噜的第一怕的是困,第二怕的是饿。(1)
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9、题型:判断题 分值:10 9.唏哩呼噜帮助鸭太太捉鬼。(2)正确
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10、题型:判断题 分值:10 10.在唏哩呼噜的梦里,他被一个极大的蛋糕扣在脸上,惊醒了。(1)
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《字的童话》阅读测试卷(满分|合格:100分|60分)窗体顶端
1、题型:单选题 分值:10 1.《字的童话》第二本叫做(2)。
选项1: 《英雄小野狼》
选项2: 《信精灵》
选项3: 《巴巴国王变变变》
选项4: 《十二声笑》
2、题型:单选题 分值:10 2.飞蛾和驼鸟做变字游戏,分别变成了(3)。
选项1: 蛇和鸡
选项2: 鸡和虫
选项3: 蛇和鹅
选项4: 蛇和虫
3、题型:单选题 分值:10 3.火鸡去找人类改名,遇到很多姓“火”的亲戚,不包括(4)。
选项1: 火车
选项2: 火箭
选项3: 火柴
选项4: 火腿
4、题型:单选题 分值:10 4.公主为了让王子来救她,写了求救信,第一次的信中,没有出现的词是(1)。
选项1: 爱吃
选项2: 睡觉
选项3: 好吃
选项4: 香蕉
5、题型:单选题 分值:10 5.按《小熊学算术》中的方法,四面八方+一步登天=(3)花八门。
选项1: 三
选项2: 四
选项3: 五
选项4: 六
6、题型:判断题 分值:10 6.小不点到点心店,没有吃到甜点,是因为企鹅故意装作听不懂她的话。(1)
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7、题型:判断题 分值:10 7.王子没有救公主,第一次是因为公主的信中把最关键的词句省略掉了,第二次是关键的词句被雨淋湿了。(1)
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8、题型:判断题 分值:10 8.《福尔摩斯新探案》中,被偷的新品种在台湾的莲花展出。(2)
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9、题型:判断题 分值:10 9.《小巫婆的心情夹心糖》里,给王子的是爱心、同情心和天下父母心。(1)
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10、题型:判断题 分值:10 10.《企鹅爸爸,父亲节快乐!》中,企鹅爸爸最喜欢的礼物是扇子。(2)
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《一年级的美羊羊》阅读测试卷(满分|合格:100分|60分)窗体顶端
1、题型:单选题 分值:10 1.运动会上,我参加了(1)运动项目。
选项1: 计算跑
选项2: 滑板车
选项3: 转呼啦圈
2、题型:单选题 分值:10 2.妈妈变成会在(3)变成“狮子”。
选项1: 放学时
选项2: 考试后
选项3: 钢琴练不好或是作业写不好时
3、题型:单选题 分值:10 3.哥哥姐姐来献爱心,他们教我(3)。选项1: 写字
选项2: 擦窗户
选项3: 折幸运星
4、题型:单选题 分值:10 4.妈妈给我准备的水果和小点心不见了,(1)。
选项1: 我告诉了和老师
选项2: 我找出了吃我东西的小朋友
选项3: 爸爸妈妈教我写一张小纸条放在书包里,上面写道“谁悄悄吃,谁是小狗狗”
5、题型:单选题 分值:10 5.我喜欢做小粉人,是因为(3)
选项1: 我喜欢穿粉色的衣服
选项2: 我喜欢粉色的文具
选项3: 我喜欢用粉色笔记下纪律表现好的小朋友
6、题型:判断题 分值:10 6.我在托管班交了一位好朋友,她叫石景琪。(1)
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7、题型:判断题 分值:10 7.姑姑说我的发音很准,于是我自告奋勇和英语老师说,我想当英语课代表。(1)
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8、题型:判断题 分值:10 8.我上学都是走前门,可崔佳扬喜欢走后门,我坚决反对。(1)
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9、题型:判断题 分值:10 9.刘海洋说以后听我的,那是因为在我值日当天他纪律不错,还将他的名字记在黑板右侧,和老师表扬了他。(1)
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10、题型:判断题 分值:10 10.新年联欢会上,我给大家讲了故事——《咬不动的豆腐》。(1)
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《小熊温尼•菩》阅读检测卷(满分|合格:100分|60分)窗体顶端
1、题型:单选题 分值:10 1.我第一次听到温尼•菩的名字时,我以为他是(1)。
选项1: 男孩
选项2: 女孩
选项3: 小熊
2、题型:单选题 分值:10 2.温尼外出散步时,坐在(2)脚下,把脑袋埋在手掌间,开始了思考。
选项1: 蜂窝
选项2: 橡树
选项3: 气球
3、题型:单选题 分值:10 3.温尼想用气球得到(3)。
选项1: 友谊
选项2: 罐子
选项3: 蜂蜜
4、题型:单选题 分值:10 5.小猪送给伊呦的生日礼物是(1)。
选项1: 红色气球
选项2: 有用的罐子
选项3: 画画的颜料
5、题型:单选题 分值:10 4.温尼总喜欢在早上(3)点钟吃东西。
选项1: 9 选项2: 10 选项3: 11
6、题型:判断题 分值:10 1.克里斯托弗•罗宾是森林里唯一会写字的人。(1)
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7、题型:判断题 分值:10 2.袋鼠妈妈把温尼当成了自己的孩子,还给他洗了澡。(2)
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8、题型:判断题 分值:10 3.温尼和他的朋友们去南极探险了。(2)
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9、题型:判断题 分值:10 4.伊呦救出了被困在洪水中的小猪。(2)
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10、题型:判断题 分值:10 5.克里斯托弗•罗宾送给温尼的铅笔上刻着B,表示熊(Bear)。(1)
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《猜猜我有多爱你》阅读测试卷(满分|合格:100分|60分)
1、题型:单选题 分值:10 1.故事里有(1)位小主人。
选项1: 2 选项2: 3 选项3: 4 选项4: 1
2、题型:单选题 分值:10 2.睡觉时小兔子让大兔子猜(3)。选项1: 明天我们到哪里玩
选项2: 明天我们到姥姥家
选项3: 猜猜我有多爱你
3、题型:单选题 分值:10 3.第一次小兔子用(3)动作表示他多爱妈妈。
选项1: 说话
选项2: 跳高
选项3: 把手臂张开,开得不能再开。
4、题型:单选题 分值:10 4.第二次小兔子说:“(2),我就有多爱你。”
选项1: 跳高
选项2: 我的手举得有多高
选项3: 跑步
5、题型:单选题 分值:10 5.第三次小兔子(3)说:“我爱你一直爱到我的脚指头。”
选项1: 跑步
选项2: 跳高
选项3: 倒立起来,把脚撑在树干上
6、题型:判断题 分值:10 6.小兔子说:“我爱你一直到太阳那里。(2)
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7、题型:判断题 分值:10 7.大兔子把小兔子放到用棉布铺成的床上,低下头亲了亲小兔子,对他说晚安。(2)
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8、题型:判断题 分值:10 8.大兔子躺在小兔子身边说:“我爱你一直到月亮那里,再从月亮上回到这里来。”(1)
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9、题型:判断题 分值:10 9.小兔子通过各种动作表达他非常非常爱大兔子。(1)
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10、题型:判断题 分值:10 10.读了故事我觉得大兔子爱小兔子更多一些。(1)
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《青蛙弗洛格的成长故事》阅读测试卷(满分|合格:100分|60分)窗体顶端
1、题型:单选题 分值:10 1.弗洛格和伙伴们在空地上发现了一只黑鸟,黑鸟(2)了。
选项1: 睡觉
选项2: 死
选项3: 生病
2、题型:单选题 分值:10 2.弗洛格觉得自己很幸运,认为这世上最好的事情就是做一只(1)。
选项1: 青蛙
选项2: 野兔
选项3: 小熊
3、题型:单选题 分值:10 3.弗洛格和(3)去旅行了。
选项1: 小猪
选项2: 小鸭
选项3: 小老鼠
4、题型:单选题 分值:10 4.小熊为什么想离开?(3)
选项1: 想出去冒险
选项2: 想认识更多的朋友 选项3: 想回到他原来的地方
5、题型:单选题 分值:10 5.弗洛格和小熊困在洞里时,他们喜欢(1)。
选项1: 唱歌
选项2: 跳舞
选项3: 讲故事
6、题型:判断题 分值:10 6.朋友为弗洛格做了很多事,最后弗洛格感到很开心。(1)
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7、题型:判断题 分值:10 7.弗洛格忘记了自己的生日,可是他的朋友们没有忘记。(1)
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8、题型:判断题 分值:10 8.弗洛格为了让大家有食物吃,做船到老鼠家拿食物。(2)
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9、题型:判断题 分值:10 9.弗洛格吓坏了,他和小鸭最后逃到了小猪家。(1)
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10、题型:判断题 分值:10 10.弗洛格最终没有找到宝藏。(2)
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第二篇:小学生作文网引发真实性质疑
小学生作文网引发真实性质疑
【编者按】近日相继有考生来电询问,小学生作文网的情况,我们从相关单位获悉小学生作文网的相关消息。
南都讯记者卓奇文幼儿园不能教拼写汉字,那么一年级能写作文不?南城阳光二小作文网是东莞首个小学生作文网,网上刊登出该校不少一年级学生的作文,充满童趣不乏生动的作文引来了好评,但也有网友质疑这些作文真实性。该校校长李敏称,作文不仅能训练小孩的书写能力,也能训练表达能力,“一年级小孩可能识字不多,但可以讲述给家长让家长代劳记录传到网上。”而作文网的建立,也让孩子们从小远离“小明捡钱包、扶老人过马路的套文。”
一年级作文不乏文采
据了解,东莞南城阳光第二小学官方网站是一个纯粹的小学生作文网,作文按照每个年级不同而归类分成了六类,据悉,这也是东莞首个小学生作文网。
南都记者在网上看到,单是一年级学生发表在网上的作文就有上百篇,每篇作文字数约在100字—300字,语言充满了童趣,且不乏生动和文采。比如一篇来自一年级四班廖子涵的《炎热的夏天》:今天是夏天里最热的一天,太阳像个大火球,天上一片云也没有,大地被晒得直冒烟,风吹到脸上,感觉像火烤一样。闷热难忍,绿油油的树叶被太阳晒了,无精打采挂在树上,像生了一场重病,大人们大汗淋漓,摇着扇子站在大树下乘凉,孩子们在河里游泳,小狗伸出舌头喘着粗气,把头紧紧贴在地上,好像在说:太热了,老天!夏天真是折磨人啊!避免“小明式”套文
这些一年级作文很快就引来了网友的好评,但也有网友指出“我不相信一年级能写作文,写得这么好。”而在本月初,市教育局转发省教育厅通知指出,禁止学前教育出现“小学化”教育,不得选取书写拼音和汉字等内容进行教学等。在幼儿园阶段不能教拼音和汉字,那上到一年级能否写作文?对于网友的疑问,该校校长李敏在接受南都记者采访时表示,建立这个作文网,就是给孩子们提供一个自由发挥的平台,孩子们可以将自己每天所见所闻以及想法记录下来,作文要求的不仅仅是书写能力,还要求表达能力,“一年级可能识字不多,但不妨碍孩子们的表达能力。发在网上那些作文,有些可能是由孩子讲述由父母代劳记录下来的。” 李敏还介绍,这个作文网还有激励机制,写得好的写得勤快的会被推 荐,作者也会当上“每月一星”,学校还会从网上挑选一些优秀习作送往一些杂志报纸投稿。“作文网营造了一个热爱作文的氛围,让学生从小就自然地表达自己的想法,避免出现千篇一律的套文,如小明上学捡到钱包交给警察叔叔,小明扶老人过马路等这类虚假的套文从未出现在我们学校作文网上。”
炎热的夏天
今天是夏天里最热的一天,太阳像个大火球,天上一片云也没有,大地被晒得直冒烟,风吹到脸上,感觉像火烤一样。闷热难忍,绿油油的树叶被太阳晒了,无精打采挂在树上,像生了一场重病,大人们大汗淋漓,摇着扇子站在大树下乘凉,孩子们在河里游泳,小狗伸出舌头,喘着粗气,把头紧紧贴在地上,好像在说:太热了,老天!夏天真是折磨人啊!
第三篇:优秀小学生作文网爷爷家变了
写写帮文秘助手(www.xiexiebang.com)之优秀小学生作文网:爷
爷家变了
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爷爷家真的变了。变得有钱,有房、有车了。
我的爷爷是一个老农民,以前的生活条件很差,住的是茅草房,吃的是窝窝头,冬天的时候非常冷,就连盖在身上的被子都很薄。爷爷奶奶的手脚都冻裂了,可他们还是忍着疼痛,冒着风雪去干活,他们这样全家都是为了自己的孩子能吃饱,爷爷奶奶为了孩子们能吃饱,宁愿自己饿着,也不让孩子受半点儿苦,有时,还一天不吃饭,去给孩子们弄吃的,有好吃的也会留给自己的孩子。那时,的饭才是窝窝头,吃的菜是地里的野菜。就连过年也很少见到饭桌上有荤菜,就是杀一只家里的老母鸡,也要斩成两半,一半过年吃,一半等来了客人再吃,就别说钱了连几十元钱都拿不出手,日子当然不好过了。
如今,可不一样了,人们的腰包鼓起来了,住的是楼房,吃的是山珍海味,要什么有什么,不愁吃不愁喝,也不像以前那样顶着风,冒着雪去下地干活了,生活过得很舒服,这样美好的日子都是祖国改革开放政策带来的好处,也不像以前那样饿一顿,饱一顿了,现在他们的儿女也已经长大成人了,也出去工作了,家里面,就只有爷爷奶奶和婶婶了,以前,还有我陪着他们,现在,我也已经到大城市里来了,我想他们的时候,就用电话或手机来跟他们对话。我还有时坐火车回去看他们。
有了钱就是不一样,爷爷有时想吃些什么好吃的,只要让婶婶带点钱到超市买一下就行了。
我爷爷的女儿,也就是我的姑姑,他们家小轿车,家里有几十万的存款,还开了一家饭店呢!有不少人到里面去吃饭。也算得上一个富翁吧!姑姑也经常开车到爷爷家给爷爷送吃的,喝的。如:甜点心,核桃酥,蜂蜜,牛奶等。当然,爷爷也很开心,因为家庭变好了,生活变好了,家里有钱了,那是不用说,当然拿得出手了,现在有钱也有势,日子真是过得太好了。
生活变得这么好,全都要归功于党的政策好,现在我没有理由不好好学习,我要好好学习,学好科学知识,长大后报答祖国。
第四篇:小学生写人作文指导-开心作文网
小学生写人作文指导
写熟悉的人。以写人为主的记叙文主要是通过对人物外貌、语言、动作、心理活动的描写和典型事例的叙述来反映人物的思想、性格、品质、作风等特点。适当周围的环境,进行渲染烘托。
写人的作文,就是以人物描写为主的文章,人物可以是一个人,也可以是群体。写人文章不同于一般的记事文章,记事文侧重于写一件具体的事,落脚于事情发生的详细过程,人物不是主要的描写内容;写人的文章则着眼于描写人物的言行举止、心理动态等,人物是主要描写的对象,事是为突出人物的性格特点、思想品质服务的。
小学生怎样写好写人作文?以写人为主的记叙文主要是通过对人物外貌、语言、动作、心理活动的描写和典型事例的叙述来反映人物的思想、性格、品质、作风等特点。要写好写人为主的记叙文,应当从以下几方面入手:
(一)、写好人物的形象。
人物的形象,一般指人物的外貌、语言、动作、心理活动等。人物的外貌,就是人物的外形特征,包括容貌、衣着、姿态、神情等等。外貌描写首先必须从文章中心思想的需要出发,要求抓住人物的本质特征,有选择、有重点地描写。人物的语言包括人物的独白,对话,交谈以及语气。“言为心声”。人物的语言是人物内心世界的直接表现。因此成功的语言描写能恰当地表现人物的身份、年龄、思想、品质、作风和个性特点。描写人物语言时,要注意符合人物的身份,表现人物的思想感情,反映人物相互间的关系。描写人物的动作时,不仅要写出人物“做什么”,还要写出“怎么做”。心理活动是无声的语言,是直接表现人物精神面貌,思想活动的手段。描写人物的心理活动时,要注意把心理活动产生的原因叙述清楚,还要注意与外貌、动作、语言描写结合起来。外貌、语言、动作、心理活动写好了,人物的形象就突出、鲜明了。
详细分解:
A语言描写:在记叙文写作中,进行人物语言的描写是不可缺少的。进行人物语言的描写,不是随心所欲的,想怎样写就怎样写,而应该像鲁迅先生指出的那样:“人物语言的描写,能使读者由说话看出人来。”这就是说从人物语言的描写中看出人物的鲜明特点。那么,怎样才能达到这种境界呢?
一、人物语言的描写要符合人物的年龄、经历、身份、文化教养等特点。
二、人物语言的描写,力求反映人物的特征。成功的对话描写,不仅要符合人物的身份、年龄、职业等特点,而且也要能反映出人物的思想感情,表现人物的性格特征。
三、人物语言要力求简洁,避免有话必录和拖泥带水的现象。
四、具有鲜明个性的人物语言描写,并不是垂手可得,而要通过艰辛的努力才能获得。同学们为自己笔下的人物设计语言,更应该如此。
B、心理描写:是对人物内心活动的描写。深入描写人物的内心活动,是展示人物形象的重要手段。事出有因。任何心理活动的引起是有原因的,把心理活动的起因写清楚,对于展示人物形象是必不可少的。通过心理描写来展示人物形象,一定要把心理活动的过程展现出来。不然,人物的形象无论如何都会显得苍白无力。
心理活动的展现和其它事物的发展一样,都是有层次的。我们把人物心理活动的层次逐渐写出来,人物形象的展示也会越来越具体。写心理活动时,有一点要特别注意:用第一人称写人时,可以写“我”的心理活动,但不能写别人的心理活动。因为别人心里是怎样想的,“我”是无法知道的呀!
在现实生活中,不同人物之间的性格特征,或同一人物在不同环境下内在性格的变化,常常处在不协调的矛盾状态之中。为了显示人物性格的差异,写作文就必须通过对比加以表现,将他们面对相同的事物作出不同的反应抖落出来,从而突出人物的形象。
C、外貌描写:描写人物的外貌就是指对人物的容貌、身材、衣着和表情的描写,叫做外貌描写。我们有的同学一写到以记人为主的作文时,往往是作这样的描写:高高的个子,大大的眼睛,目光炯炯有神„„好像天下的人都是一个模样。其实,世界上的人有千千万万,没有完全相同的外貌。关键的问题是没有根据表达的需要,去描写人物的外貌。
怎样根据表达的需要去描写人物的外貌呢?
第一、根据表达的需要,描写人物的外在特征。
每个人物都有他(她)自己的特有外貌,总是在一定的程序上表现出内在状态。由于人们的出身、经历、素养、社会环境的影响,同时自己鲜明的个性,这些在他(她)的表情、姿态、服饰等方面都能流露出来。
第二、根据表达的需要,有重点地描写外貌。
有的同学他们不分主次,不根据中心思想的需要,面面俱到地进行描写。“眉毛胡子一把抓。”可是效果呢?罗里罗嗦,让人看半天也不会知道特征在哪里。
第三、根据表达的需要,安排好外貌描写的顺序。
对于一个人的外貌,作者往往是从多方面进行的.这些方方面面,哪些先写,哪些后写,应该遵循一定的顺序。但是,有时为了表达的需要,或者观察角度的变化,外貌描写的顺序也会有变化。
总之,外貌描写要有利于文章的中心思想的表达,有利于人物内心世界的展示,只有这样,才可以说文章的外貌描写是成功的。
(二)、抓住人物的特点。
每个人都有自己的特点,这个特点可以从人物的年龄、外貌、语言、动作、兴趣、个性、生活习惯等诸方面去考虑。一个人的特点是多方面的,作文时,我们应根据中心思想有所选择地写。
(三)、选用典型事例。
人与事是分不开的。一个人做的事很多,在作文时我们应选择那些最能表现人物思想、性格和文章中心思想的典型事件。
(四)、运用细节描写。
细节描写就是对能充分表现文章中心思想的人物外貌,语言、动作、表情等细小环节作具体、细致的描写。
小学阶段以写人为主的记叙文,一般分为三种类型;写一个人、写两个人、写几个人。其中应以写一个人为主。
一、写一个人。
记一个人的写人记叙文,大致有以下三种情况:
(1)通过写一件事写一个人。有的文章写人只写了一件事,写这一类的作文要注意以下几点:
1、要选择有代表性的生动事例画写。反映一个人的精神面貌的事例是很多的,通过一件事写人就要选取最有代表性的生动事例来写。
2、要写出事情的发展过程,使人物的形象逐步完整。
3、要把事情写具体。用一个典型事例记叙一个人,应该把这一事例写具体,这样人物形象才能丰满。
4、为了使读者对人物了解得更全面,使重点记叙的这件事有充分的依据和坚实的思想基础,使人物的形象更加丰富,文章的开头可以对人物作简要的介绍。
(2)通过几件事写一个人。
我们在生活中会接触到各种各样的人,有时使用一件事来反映一个人就显得比较单簿,不足以充分反映人物的特点及其品质,因此,必须用两三件事才可能说的明白,再现得充分。
通过几件事写一个人,要注意以下几点:
1、几件事不能相互矛盾,人物的性格在几件事中要和谐、统一。
2、概括交代和具体描写相结合。在一篇简短的作文中要用几件事写一个人,不可能将每一件事详细叙述,因此一般可以交代和具体描写相结合的方法。即先概括交代一些事例,再具体记叙一两件事。
3、通过对比的方法写一个人。
通过对比方法写一个人,一般有三种:第一种是同一个人前后相比,说明这个人变化;
第二种是对一个人的认识前后相比,说明这个人的品质;第三种是一个人同另一个人比,突出歌颂其中一个人。
通过对比描写来突出人物形象,要注意几点:
运用对比描写,不应该勉强凑合,主要看作文的材料是否适合采用对比的写法。如果材料本身需要用对比的写法,那么作者才可以通过对比来写人,完成自己的写作意图。如果材料的本身不适合采用对比的手段,那么也不要人为的牵强附会,为对比而对比。
两个人进行对比,不能割裂开来先写一个,后写一个,互不相干,而是围绕中心事件叙述,刻画两个人不同的思想性格。写人,如果从一个侧面去描写,人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写,人物形象就容易丰满。多侧面地描写人物形象,这个“侧面”的选择不是随心所欲的,而是从众多的材料中选择整理出各具代表性的若干侧面,分工而又合作地表现人物形象。通过多侧面描写来丰满人物形象,我们可以称它是“众星拱月”。“月”就是人物,“星”就是侧面,“拱”就是多侧面展示人物形象的过程。不过应该看到,“众星拱月”的“众星”也不是平分秋色的,它们之间也有主次、详略的区别。所以在写“众星”的时候,是没有必要平均使用力量的。
二、写两个人
写两个人,一般是写《我和**》,**应包括亲人、同学、朋友、老师等熟悉的人,要写好这一类型的作文必须注意:
(1)要写好人物之间的联系。《我和**》,题目中突出了一个“和”字,这就要求从双方写起,通过具体的事例,写出“我”和**之间的联系。在叙事过程中,要写出彼此之间都想了些什么,说了些什么,做了些什么。只有从双方落笔,才能把握住题目要求写的重点。
(2)用对话展开情节。写《我和**》作文时,由于要写出两个人之间的关系,所以一定要写好两个人之间的对话。要用对话展开情节,用对话表现文章的中心。
三、写一群人。
写一群人,比写一个人、两个人难一些,难就难在要通过一定的材料组织,巧妙地将一群人凝聚在一起,从而反映各自的思想、性格、面貌。那么,怎样组织材料才能把一群人凝聚在一起呢?应该抓住贯串各个人物之间的线索。写人物群像,是不是每个人在文章中所占据的位置都一样呢?不是的。在一群人中,有的在文章中担任“主角”,有的在文章中担任“配角”,谁主谁次,是根据表现文章中心思想的需要来决定的。
人体是靠骨架支撑的,文章也是一样的道理。如果把文章的中心思想比作“灵魂”,材料比作“血肉”,那么,结构就是灵魂和血肉的“骨架”。因此,同学们在有了写人的材料以后,就应该进一步考虑它的结构。
写人的结构方式主要有以下两种:
第一种,总分总式。
这是最常见最朴素的写人结构。它的特点是有一个点明题意的开头(A),简洁醒目,作为文章的总起部分。主干部(B、C、D)也可以说是文章的分述部分,它的几段互相独立,从不同的角度表达中心,在编排先后的次序上还需要有一定的斟酌。结尾E是文章的总结部分,它不仅是D的自然过渡,而且常常是对B、C、D的归纳小结,又是对A的照应。
第二种,逐层进入式。
这种结构方式适用于用一件事写人。它的特点是:第一层次A,写事情的起因;第二层次B,写事情的发展;第三层次C,写事情的高潮;第四层次D,写事情的结局。文章的二三层次是全文的灵魂和力量所在。这两个层次写得好,常常可以使文章内容丰富起来。
例文:母亲的笑容
母亲爱轻轻地笑,那是一种包容一切的笑容。
从我有记忆起,母亲总是忙忙碌碌的,家里的,家外的,都在她那一双满是茧子的手里变美丽„„噢!母亲也是美丽的,只是她常忽略,不爱打扮。我翻过母亲的珍藏,除了结婚时的一个银戒指,抽屉里空空如也,简单到连个卡片没有。母亲,从来没要求过任何东西。
小学六年级,在老师的授课中,我知道了母亲节的存在。在那个明媚的5月,我站在依然在厨房里忙碌的母亲身旁,鼓足了勇气,从背后拿出我弄了好几天的卡片(一张自己亲手做的卡片:在一颗大大的爱心里,一棵小树正茁壮成长。卡后面,是我苦想了一晚的话语。)母亲在我的一声:“母亲节快乐”中停下了手中的活,抬起头看着满脸通红的我,眼神充满了疑惑。“今天是母亲节,是妈妈您的节日,城里面的人都很重视的,这是我做的,给!”母亲在听完我的解释后,轻轻地笑了,擦了擦手上的水,摸着我的头说:“我们农村那里有讲究这些啊,傻孩子!”然后拿着卡片,看了看,放到一边,又继续干活了。我心里面很不是滋味,做得那么辛苦的卡片,母亲就只看那么一眼就算了,早知道„„唉!
之后,每年的母亲节,我都不再送礼物了。只是跟着妈妈忙前忙后,总把她手中的活抢过来干,以减轻妈妈的负担,晚上空闲时,就揉着妈的肩膀说说话。长大了,出来工作了,除了平时的问候外,每到母亲节,我都会尽量回家,实在没空,就打电话回去,倾听妈妈那慈爱的声音。在妈妈身边,我最爱搂着她的腰,轻轻地靠着,妈说我:“都这么大了,还这样子。”脸上却是幸福的笑容。是的,我就爱这样黏着母亲,我不爱长大。
在我将要出嫁的一个日子里,因为要找一些必须的东西,我再一次打开了母亲那上了锁的抽屉。„„啊„„我呆住了,脑袋什么也思考不了!抽屉里面放着的——居然是我十几年前送给母亲的卡片,她还将卡片过了朔,那心,依然那么的鲜艳,那树,还是十几年前那么青翠„„我捂着嘴巴,一任眼泪尽情地奔泻„„
妈妈,我的母亲啊!为什么你总是什么都不说啊!!
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现在,我也是个孩子的母亲了。母亲,多好的一个词语啊!对着孩子,我也常笑。我知
道,这笑容,是和母亲展开的笑容是同一个码的。
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第五篇:英语作文网
英语四级作文范文
时间:2009-05-07 14:00作者: 点击:
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写作的重要性 6分最低限,只要结构不出错,得分应该为9分。评判作文
四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。
内容不跑题即可,注意:1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。结构上牢记总分总:先写主题句(Topic Sentence),再写分论点,最后写总结句(Conclusion)。
语言最重要,往往使评分产生重大差异,语言要模仿和包装。基本表达
人们认为:it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越来越:be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 万能理由(Omnipotence)
1.方便:convenient/ convenience 2.效率:efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3.节省和浪费:save time/ money/ space;economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space;costly, lavish 4.人的心理健康:independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance;selfish, isolated, conserative 5.人的身体健康:health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6.娱乐:colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lonely 7.环境:environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8.安全和危险:safe, danger, risk 9.经验:experience, social experience, enter the society 10.人际:humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 写完之后修改注意:(内容方面尽量不要修改)
1、字母大小写
2、怪符号
3、单词拼写
4、主谓一致
5、动词时态
6、名词单复数 实例一
题目:Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提纲:(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及(2)和汽车的比较(3)自行车在中国的前途 Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China.The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese.The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage.They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive.So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on.The other reason is the large population of China.All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it.It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car.This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land.It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it.It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion.All of these are the good needs compared to the car.In the future, bicycle will be widely used.And it will be in good demand.People will produce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China.Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles.During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people--man and woman, old and young--ride their bicycles to work and study.That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.注:1.第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。2.During the rush hour 分词结构开头。3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。
Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways.First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride.Second, riding bicycle is good for health.Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution.Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive.They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air.Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car.Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.注:1.Compared with cars 分词结构开头。
2.be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于
3.thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感,信号词 4.cheap 便宜,最好用inexpensive 5.be good for health 对健康有好处(万能理由)6.Moreover 表示递进
In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions.It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注:promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in today’s China.Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives.Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注:第一句应该用there be结构
Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.It is more suitable for China as a developing country.And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has.On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run.Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved.I、对比观点选择题:1.有人认为„„; 2.另外一些人认为„„; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)实例二 99年6月真题
Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(启)Paragraph I:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;(2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。Score: 14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启)
注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(承)Paragraph II:(1)提出一种观点或优点;(2)本段的支持性分论点;(3)本段总结(可以省略)。
Some people think we should read selectively.They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.It is impossible for us to read all the books.What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them.Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.(承)注:1.本段总分总结构
2.they argue that = they think that 3.with the development of...随着„„的发展 4.what's more 递进关系,moreover 5.bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(转)Paragraph III:(1)承上启下的过渡句;(2)提出另一种观点或缺点;(3)本段的支持性分论点(4)本段总(可以省略)。
But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless.Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.(转)注:1.But 转折词(信号词)
2.they emphasize that = they think that 3.today's society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4.许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge;
获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge 5.knows nothing→little;he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(合)Paragraph IV:(1)平衡两种看法;(2)给出自己的观点。
Who’s right? I think both of them have something right.But I think we should read extensively first.We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.(合)Score: 11分
When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.注:结构非常好,可以套用。
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books.Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.注:1.“people, who...,”应去掉逗号,改为限制性定语从句。2.as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones 3.lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb.astray 4.they suggest that = they think that 5.touch 碰(闪光点词汇:如教材P7:shouldering the responsibility of doing sth.肩负起责任)
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.Even the best book only contains one field of information.So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”.So they believe that reading extensively is better.注:1.hold 认为 同样表示“think”的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold 2.the best book 在西方国家是“圣经”的意思 3.to know more, to read more 错误,中式英语
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.范文22.Is Television a Blessing or a Curse? Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people’s lives.But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.注:it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为
As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating.The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room.注:1.As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that 2.“使„„”不用make,而用keep, allow, offer However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing.They argue that it has brought about many serious problems.The major one is its effects on young people.They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.Even worse than that, vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes, distort their viewpoints towards human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted.In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.范文5.Travelling People who like travelling have their reasons.They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning.They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have.注:geographical and historical 押尾韵,如:押头韵 clear & clean Those who dislike travelling have their reasons.They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy.For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.In practice, travelling does more good than harm.If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time.It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.注:1.in practice = I think 2.does more good than harm 好处比坏处多,其他表达方法:be superior to/ inferior to 比如:the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3.enable 使 范文1.Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test(CET).Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker.Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely.A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.使句子具有表现力的手段:
1、用形容词修饰名词;
2、副词修饰动词、副词修饰形容词
On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners.To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework.Another required test will only add to their burden.Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck.In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm.Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society.Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.范文21.Should smoking be banned? Should smoking be banned? Answers to this question vary greatly.Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking.They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed.And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship.Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go.注:1.vary greatly 许多种2.be in favor of = agree/ be of the opinion that 3.get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed 使人神清气爽 4.Giving and being given 给与被给。主、被动关系在英文中用现在、过去分词表达。
But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health.They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second.And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack.In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents.Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property.注:1.They have heard the official reports that...官方报告表明..2.be more likely to 更有可能,更容易3.chance 可能
There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else.If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注:1.outweigh 比„„重要,同样的表达:be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2.最后用两句反问句结尾,非常精妙。课后作业 Private Cars 写成4段的首段写法:
In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China.People's attitude toward private cars varies widely.② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car.Yet, people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply.③ In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight.People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely.写成3段的首段写法:
With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard, more and more people can own private cars.cars are entering ordinary families.the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言)支持段的主题句:
Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car.There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely.支持段的分论点:
① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation.② 舒适 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm.③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career.否定段的主题句:① However(Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects ④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought.They complain that......⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.否定段的分论点: ① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.③ 污染环境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.注意:所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的,就是比较superordinate的词;而下义词就是具体的东西,即subordinate的东西。第四段(总结段)的写法:
① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages.As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.选择题型变体逻辑结构(My View on Sth.)选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构:
Paragraph I:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;(2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Paragraph II:(1)提出作者观点(本文主题句);
(2)举例加以论证。
Paragraph III:(1)总结全文(再次强调作者观点)范文17.My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate.Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.注:1.consensus 相同意见
2.第一句话可以套用,如范文18:There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.3.while 轻微转折和对比,强转折用词but, however 4.master 主人 As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion.There is a saying, “Everyone is the architect of his own future.” Which means one’s fate is decided in his own hands.In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life.Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just can’t realize how much inner strength and ability they have.We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.注:1.第一句as far as与I agree重复,把后半句改为the latter opinion seems more reasonable。
2.architect 建筑师,archor 弓箭手
3.In fact 前后是转折关系,之前从正面阐述,之后从反面阐述 范文17.My View on Fate(续)
Let’s take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example.When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf.Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the President’s Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless.This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.注:1.本段开始举例
2.Let's take„„for example 中间是插入语,表示强调,举例不宜太长。
In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard.We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”
注:bear sth.in mind:把„„牢记在心 范文13.The Way to Success 第二段:Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构
Paragraph 1:(1)概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general);(2)具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。
Paragraph 2:(1)作者对该现象货问题的基本看法,即文章的论点句;(2)支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);(3)本段总结(可以省略)。
Paragraph 3:(1)总结全文,定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。四级作文试题2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education.You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。2.哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。How I Finance My College Education How I Finance My College Education 第一段:首先,应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点:
Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before.How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.第二段:有多种的方法,例如:1.向父母;2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱 第二段主题句:There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.第二段分写:
In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.第三段:我所赞同的方法(阐述原因,为何不选其他的方法)。Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.Therefore /So /Hence,.....使文章富有表现力的手段:
1、使用有难度的词汇;
2、使用形容词修饰名词,用副词修饰动词或整个句子;
3、使用被动语态;
4、使用倒装句;(not only...but also...;only...)
5、尽可能地使用名词,而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。绿化我们的城市 第一段:
近年来,随着工商业的迅猛发展,许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐,但是,认识到绿化城市也同样重要。普通版
Recently, with the development of businesses and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities.We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees.But, it is important to realize to make our cities green.润色版
In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experienced a(n)rapid/ fast/ amazing/ marked/ fantastic development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined/ decreased/ reduced sharply/ dramatically.Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.注:区分industry 和 industrial 绿化我们的城市(续)第二段:
绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一,绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二,它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木,我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后,绿化城市能够带来大量木材,这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。普通版
There are many advantages in making cities greener.First, it makes our air clean.Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption.Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities.With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature.Finally, it will bring us a lot of timber.And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.润色版 What benefits can the program of making cities greener bring to us? First, the air will be cleaner.Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by producing a lot of oxygen.This will improve the quality of the urban environment.Second, our cities will look more beautiful.Just imagine the city which is full of trees and flowers.What an attractive garden it is!What’s more, by making cities greener, we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.绿化我们的城市(续)第三段:
绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力,人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献,还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。普通版
Making cities greener requires people’s efforts all over the country.And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business.润色版
Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness;it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers.(Making cities greener requires the whole nation’s efforts.And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.)句型变化 A.(1)We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.(2)There are many trees along the streets.(3)There is a clean river in the city.(4)There are many fishes in the river.(5)There are willow trees on the one side.(6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.(7)There are many flowers on them.B.(1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener.(2)Green trees line the streets.(3)A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound.(4)On the one side stand rows of willow trees.(5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.1.There be...1)a.There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.b.Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.2)a.There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.b.Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.2.If 1)a.If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.b.Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.2)a.If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.b.The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.3)a.If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.b.Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.3.In order to 1)a.In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.b.An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.2)a.In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.b.New efforts will bring...4.More and more 1)a.More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.b.People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.2)a.More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.b.The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.3)a.More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.b.Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.4)a.More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.b.There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.5)a.More and more trees have disappeared in the city.b.There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.社会热点话题
写作练习:Jobs for Graduates 1)大学生难找工作 2)原因很多 3)解决的办法 With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education(高等教育).As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.范文23:Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job.Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter.According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000.Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs? 第二段细节论证 分析原因:
1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to...3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in...mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors...Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand.Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country.Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as...国家制定法律法规 个人接受教育
III、图表题(table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph)图表题的写作逻辑结构:
Paragraph I:(1)概括描述图表:趋势描写;
(2)具体描述图表:必要数据支持(细节性)。Paragraph II:(1)提出自己理由和观点(本段主题句);
(2)细节性分论点(主要是原因,用于支持自己的观点,至少两点)。
Paragraph III:(1)预测未来和提出解决方法;
(2)总结全文和表达作者自己观点 【标题】Changes in People’s Diet
Directions: Write a three-paragraph composition to: 1.State the changes in people’s diet in the past five years.2.Give possible reasons for the changes.3.Draw your own conclusion.You should quote as few figures as possible.【短文】Changes in People’s Diet
In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role, while the proportion of some high-energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased.What has caused these changes? I think there are two reasons.First, people now have more money.The price of meat and milk is much higher than that of grain, so in the old days people couldn’t afford them.Now they have enough money to buy both meat and milk.Second, people nowadays pay more attention to the elements of their diet.They look for a well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.In short, there have been changes in people’s diet in the past five years because of financial and health reasons, and there will be further changes in the future 【修改版】
As can be seen from the table, the past five years has witnessed dramatic changes in people’s diet.Grain, as the staple food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important role in their diet, while the consumption of high quality food such as meat, milk and fruit has greatly increased.There are two factors leading to the change.For one thing, people now enjoy a higher standard of living.In the old days few families could afford meat and milk every day, which often meant a big chunk of the family income.But now people have enough money to taste a rich verity of foods.For another, people of today attach more attention to nutrition.They are not merely content to fill the stomach.They are seeking the most reasonable diet which will do good to their health.In a word, with people’s standard of living getting higher and higher, changes in their diet will be more obvious and greater.图表题的适用句型:
1.As we can see from the chart/ graph/ table/ diagram,...2.The chart/ graph shows/ displays that...3.As can be shown in the table..., 4.The figures/ statistics in the chart reflect/ show/ reveal that..., 5.It is clear/ apparent from the chart/ table that...V、谚语格言题逻辑结构
Paragraph I:(1)点明要阐释的谚语或名言(general);
(2)用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思,有时有正反两面的逻(specific)。
Paragraph II:(1)作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度,即文章的论点句;
(2)支持性的细节分论点,举例子论证(至少两点,有时有正反两面的逻辑);
Paragraph III:总结全文,定下结论(通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义)。Practice Makes Perfect Practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.It is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something perfectly without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.【改写为】An English proverb says/ One of the greatest men once remarked/ Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb: “Practice makes perfect”.It means that/ In other words, it is practice alone which enables us to build up speed and efficiency.When we accomplish something without wasting effort, this is the result of long practice.Practice Makes Perfect(续)Take the study of English for example.Only practice can enable us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar.And it is only through practice that we can become fluent in speaking and writing, there is no other way.Another good example is sports.Practice is the only way to become stronger and run faster.Besides, in team games practice is what improves our sense of cooperation and helps the team to win.【改写为】History/ Our society abounds with the examples of “Practice makes perfect”.......(正反两方面都举例子)On the other hand/ On the contrary, no practice will only lead us to failure.There is hardly/ scarcely a man who can achieve success without practice.All evidence points to/ justifies/ lends supports to the fact that practice is the key to success in all fields of activity.举例一般为:英语学习;体育锻炼
To sum up, there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice.【改写为】For us college students, the saying/ proverb has a profound and realistic significance: there can be no achievement which is not based on a solid foundation of practice 课后复习(self-study Program)
1、课堂讲解内容:体会用词艺术和丰富的句式
2、写作练习:2002年6月真题(Student Use of Computers)
3、记忆写作万能理由和基本表达
4、完型填空练习:完成Passage 1--Passage 3 做题步骤:
(1)通读全文,了解文章大意;
(2)初选答案(排除法、优选法);
(3)寻找线索;
(4)回头补缺;
(5)核实答案。图表题:2002年6月考题
Topic: Student Use of Computers(at least 150 words)
1、上图所示为1990、1995、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述其变化;
2、请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明);
3、你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。2002年6月的图表题作文: As is shown by the bar graph, the average number of hours a student in a certain university spends on the computer per week increased dramatically over the period from 1990 to 2000.In 1990, it was less than two hours.And in 1995, it hit/ reach four hours.And in 2000, the number soared to(飞速上升)nearly twenty hours, which is over ten times than that of 1990.注:soared to/ boom/ shoot up/ rocket/ jump 飞速上升 climb 上升很慢 shrink 下降,缩水
第一段还有一种写法:„„In 1990, the number was less than 2 hours, while the figure hit 4 hours(或者这样写:while in 1995,)as compared with that of 1990, it had almost doubled.And what impress us most is that the figure soared to..., which„
Obviously computers are becoming increasingly popular for males and for females.A multitude of factors could account for the rise.In the first place, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.Also, the rapid development of the internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We can easily contact friends in remote places through the internet.In the second place, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enable more students to purchase them.However, there still exist some problems, such as, poor quality, out-of-date designs and so on.And how to balance the time between using computers an studying is also a serious problem.Anyhow, we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.IV、书信题的写作方法:
(一)信封格式:
名字、信箱、地域范围由小到大,写在右下角(与我们相反)。
(二)信纸格式:
日期:背月份的缩写
称呼(后面的标点是逗号):Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, 正文:空4个字节或者顶格写,段与段之间空行)
签名:sincerely yours 书信写作的五点要求:
1、开门见山说意图
2、咨询/ 建议1、2、3、3、不同内容可分段
4、感谢客气不可少
5、期待回信成老套
(三)开头段:
1、告知对方你的身份(假如对方不认识你)Dear Sir/ Mr.Prometheus, I was a student at your college, enrolled in Philosophy Department./ I am a„ at your„
/ I am a „ at your college, enrolled in the„ course./ My name is„, I am„
2、问候收信人(假如他/她是你的朋友)Dear Prometheus, Hello / Hi.How are you? / I hope everything is fine./ How are things going with you? / How are you getting on in / getting along with„..?
3、解释写信的原因(1)致谢:
I deeply appreciate your courtesy and I hope to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises./ I am greatly indebted to you for(the double)you have gone to on my behalf./ Thank you for your letter about studying in Canada./ I am writing to tell you how grateful I am for„ / I would like to thank you most sincerely for„(2)抱怨:
I am writing to complain about the poor service at your dining-room./ I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with / at„ / I wish to make a complaint about„
/ I am writing to draw your attention to„./ I am afraid I have got a complaint about„.(3)致歉:
I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding the following aspects./ I am writing to you because I am unable to„./ I an terribly sorry that„./ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to„.(4)询问:
I would like to obtain /request/seek/inquire about some information about„
/ I am writing to ask if you can do me a favor./ I would like some detailed information on/about„.(四)结尾段:
1、发出请求
(1)Please give this matter your immediate attention.(2)I would very much appreciate it if„„as soon as possible.(3)Please render me some valuable advice which is conductive to my final decision.2、提供帮助
(1)I hope these„„will be helpful, and please feel free to contact me for more information.(2)„„will be taking responsibility for you and if you should need any assistance, she/he will be pleased to help you
3、再次表示歉意或感激
(1)Thank you for your kind assistance.(2)Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude, now and always.(3)I am sorry that I cannot„„, and trust that you will understand.(4)In addition, let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.(5)I shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.(6)Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4、期盼回信:R.S.V.P.(1)I look forward to your prompt response.(2)Looking forward to a prompt reply,(3)I expect to hear from you very soon.(4)I hope to receive your reply shortly.(5)I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter.书信题范文:2001.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1. 表示欢迎
2.提出度假安排的建议 3.提醒应注意的事项
A Letter to a Schoolmate June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang Example I: Dear Xiao Wang, I am very happy to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you like swimming.A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner.We can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain about two miles away from here is beautiful and it is worth touring.We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful birds eye view of the whole village.Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.I’ll prepare everything for you.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours, Zhang Yin 公文信函: 2002.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President, Li Ming freshman 大一 sophomore 大二 junior 大三 senior 大四 Example II: Dear Mr.Prometheus, I am a student at your TOEFL class and I am writing to explain my absence from classes since March 11, 2001.On March 10, 2001, I was involved in a serious motor vehicle accident.I was transported to the hospital in an ambulance, where I was treated for a broken ankle, fractured collarbone, and 3 bruised ribs.My doctor advised complete bed rest for 6 weeks, and as a result, I have been unable to attend classes since March 11, 2001.I am concerned about keeping up with my studies, and have been doing the required readings, as assigned by you.My biggest concern is whether I will be able to participate the final class.Would you please advise me regarding my courses, specifically if there will be any special consideration given to me in light of my current situation? Thank you for your kind assistance.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely, Janet, Student No„ 题型总结:
对比观点选择题:4段 社会热点话题:3段 图表题: 书信题: 格言题:
描写叙述题: 完型填空 做题技巧
(一)Prep Tips for Cloze I.做题步骤:
1、通读全文,了解文章大意;文章两种模式:总分、对比;
2、初选答案(排除法、优选法);
3、寻找线索;
4、回头补缺;
5、核实答案。II.出题重点: 1.词语的辨析:
1)同义词; 2)反义词; 3)形近词;
形近词举例:Test 2...or down frightening hillsides to towns __87__ in deep valleys.87.A)lying B)laying C)laid D)lied 注:说谎:lie lied lied lying 躺:lie lay lain lying 放置,下蛋:lay laid laid laying 2.逻辑关系:
1)列举/种属关系:
such„as;especially;in particular;specifically;for example;for instance;likely;2)因果关系: because(for);due to;owing to;thanks to;since;for;as;for the reason that;seeing that;3)并列/递进:
besides;likewise;moreover;also;too;what’s more;apart from;except;furthermore;not noly„but also„.;in addition;4)转折/让步关系:
however;but;never the less;nonetheless;whereas;still;though;although;anyhow;anyway;in any case;yet;5)对比关系:
by contrast;in contrast;by comparison;like;as„as;on the contrary;conversely;oppositely;„.than„.;逻辑关系举例1:Test 4 Sometimes homework is returned 76 brief written comments but without a grade.76.A)by B)in C)for D)with 逻辑关系举例2:Test 2 The United States is well-known for its network of major highways designed to help a driver get from one place to another in the shortest possible time.__71__ these wide modern roads are generally __72__ and well maintained, with __73__ sharp curves and many straight __74__, a direct route is not always the most _ 75__ one.71.A)Although B)Since C)Because D)Therefore 72.A)stable B)splendid C)smooth D)complicated 73.A)little B)few C)much D)many 74.A)selections B)separations C)series D)sections 75.A)terrible B)possible C)enjoyable D)profitable 3.固定结构的识别:提高阅读的速度、对于内容有合理的预期、有利于总体把握文章:
either„or„;neither„nor„;too„to„;so„that„;not„until„;hardly„when„;no sooner„than„;not only„but also„ 固定结构举例:Test 3 76 geography books focus on a small area 77 a town or city.Others deal with a state, a region, a nation.Or an 78 continent.Many geography books deal with the whole earth.Another 79 to divide the study of 80 is to distinguish between physical geography and cultural geography.The former focuses on the natural world;the 81 starts with human beings and 82 how human beings and their environment act 83 each other.but when geography is considered as a single subject, 84 branch can neglect the other.76.A)Some B)Many C)Most D)Few 77.A)outside B)except C)as D)like 81.A)second B)later C)next D)latter 2. 搭配:
例如:a.+ n.;ad.+ v.;take advantage of„.;make use of„.等; 3. 动词用法:
1)主谓一致; 2)时态; 3)语态; 4)非谓语动词; 4. 介词用法:
1)介词与名词; 2)介词与动词; 3)介词与形容词; 顶一下(62)68.9% 踩一下(28)31.1% 2010上海世博会相关英语作文大全范文 World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as-2010上海世博会相关英语作文大全范文 关于2010世博会英语作文
How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)
Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now.As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit.First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful.Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others.Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.The World Expo in 2010(世博会)英文作文
The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会)
The World Expo in 2010
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.our government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.From Joozone.com.世博会英语作文
Right from its establishment in 1992, Shanghai International Exhibition Center has provided much needed new potential for the exhibition industry in Shanghai , becoming the birthplace of many industry definitive exhibitions in Shanghai and making acclaimed contributions to the development of Shanghai exhibition industry.With its quality exhibition facilities and excellent services,it has been the first international exhibition center in China.As a member of the exhibition industry, Shanghai International Exhibition Center is committed to perfecting its hall services to exceed customers expectations, establishing exhibition brands, enhancing our capabilities of customer service and making contributions to the development of the exhibition industry in Shanghai and China as well!作文地带提供,这些简单概括就是说 :上海世博会对上海的新发展奠定了基础,发挥了作用。要是作为上海世博会的一名成员的话,应该在力所能及的范围内去帮助世博会拥有更多项超越顾客所期待的服务,让上海世博会越发展越好.What should we do Ladies and gentlemen the World Expo is coming.What should we do as a student of Shanghai.The first ,study English hard.Millions of foreigners will visit Shanghai during 2010 World Expo.So we must study the international language harder.The second,be polite,be civilized.Do it from little things.Like do not spit sputum in rude.When you do somethings ,remember ladies first.In all,be a kind and polite man.Welcome World Expo!A time to make friends.Thanks you very much.本文来自作文地带:http:// 世博会英语作文
World Expositions are galleries of human inspirations and thoughts.Since 1851 when the Great Exhibition of Industries of All Nations was held in London, the World Expositions have attained increasing prominence as grand events for economic, scientific, technological and cultural exchanges, serving as an important platform for displaying historical experience, exchanging innovative ideas, demonstrating esprit de corps and looking to the future.世界博览会是人类文明的驿站。从1851年伦敦的“万国工业博览会”至今,世博会正日益成为全球经济、科技和文化领域的盛会,成为各国人民总结历史经验、交流聪明才智、体现合作精神、展望未来发展的重要舞台.作文地带(www.xiexiebang.com)有翻译的英语作文网
With a long civilization, China favors international exchange and loves world peace.China owes its successful bid for the World Exposition in 2010 to the support for and confidence of the international community in its reform and opening up.The Exposition will be the first registered World Exposition to be held in a developing country, which gives expression to the expectations the world’s people place on China’s future development.具有悠久东方文明的中国,是一个热爱国际交往、崇尚世界和平的国度。中国取得了2010年世博会的举办权,这将是注册类世界博览会首次在发展中国家举行,体现了国际社会对中国改革开放道路的支持和信任,也体现了世界人民对中国未来发展的瞩目和期盼。另外一篇世博会英语作文,本文是关于世博会自愿者的英语作文
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best one.And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly.As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.First, I’ll say something about World Expo History.As we know, the very first World Expo, the Great Exhibition of 1851, took place in the Crystal Palace in London.UK.Ever since then, the goals of World Expos have been both high-minded as well as commercial.Visitors are able to explore the world outside of their everyday experience—outside cultures, new scientific advancements, and new inventions.World Expos have excited and inspired more and more people in the world.上海世博会范文:
On December3, 2002, the Bureau of International Expositions(or call it BIE)announced that Shanghai will host Expo2010.the BIE had received bids from five cities to host Expo2010.Among the 5 nice cities, the BIE chose Shanghai at last!It’s really an exciting news for not only Shanghainese, but also all of Chinese people.Here are some details about it.世博会logo(会徽)介绍:
Look at this profile carefully.The title is “The 2010 World Exposition ,Shanghai, China ”.this is the logo.And the theme is “better city., better life”.OK, let’s guess who is the image representative? Yeah, you’re right, Yao Ming!
Shanghai Expo is the first comprehensive World Expo held in a developing country.And it is also the first one that takes “the city” as its theme, hoping that it can push forward the city development and help bring about a better urban living environment, just like the theme: better city, better life.I think, as a student in Shanghai, we should learn to be a gentle person and keep good manners from now on.And try to practice English more in order to communicate with foreigners fluently in the near future.Because, we’re a part of Shanghai!世博会相关的词组:
中国上海2010年世博会:Eopo 2010 Shanghai China 世博会会徽: the Expo emblem 世博会会徽看起来像三个人手挽着手。The Expo emblem looks like three people holding hands.世博会将持续半年。The Expo will last six months.世博会的主题: the theme of Expo 城市,让生活更美好。Better city, better life.世博园区: the Expo Site 沿黄浦江两岸:along both sides of the Huangpu River 主题馆: the theme pavilions 中国馆:China's pavilion 东方之冠:The Crown of the East 中国成功申办2010年世博会英语作文
On December, 2002, China won the bid to hosting Expo 2010.This is the first General Exhibition hosted by a developing country;However, China has a long-standing relationship with World Expo.Chinese people have participated in World Expo since its first presence.After wining its liberation, the People’s Republic of China has taken part in 12 world expositions.Chinese exhibits won many prizes in previous world expositions.The Yisheng Wine was awarded with the gold medal at Expo 1906 Milan Italy;many others like the embroidery of the Portrait of Jesus, Gold Prize Brandy , and Mao-Tai Chiew were among the highlights at the Panama-Pacific International Exposition—San Francisco 1915.