四字型英语书面表达教案

第一篇：四字型英语书面表达教案

四字短语型中考书面表达教案

Teaching aims: 1.To learn to write compositions with the four-word Chinese phrases.2.To learn to use some writing rules and skills to better the composition Teaching contents: 1.Feeling the four-word Chinese phrases 2.Understanding main structure of these phrases 3.Writing about a survey

Teaching difficulties and important points: How to write an article with the four-word Chinese phrases.Teaching procedures: Task One：Feeling the four-word Chinese phrases 1．How are you feeling when you see this？

2．Listing the words about your feelings.Task Two：Understanding the main structure of these phrases 1.Listing the main structure of these phrases 2.Brainstorm:Teenagers’ colorful life.Task Three：Writing about a survey

1.Is going outing(春游)a good way to relax for Grade 9 students? Why? 2.Exchange the composition.Task Four：Homework.1.Senior high school entrance examination proposition direction 2.Choose an artcle to write.

第二篇：英语书面表达

寒假作业Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic

We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基础写作：

上周六下午，你们宿舍几个同学去森林公园野炊，回来途中淋了雨。晚上李华头疼得厉害。你给她量体温，发现她发高烧。你马上带她去看医生。医生说她得了重感冒，要卧床休息三天。请你代她给刘老师写一张请假条说明情况，并帮她请假两天（周一、周二），因此她不能参加周二的羽毛球比赛了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任务型写作

总结：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你认为制订目标很重要吗？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你认为制订目标后怎样才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.举例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基础写作

社会实践是学校教育的一个重要组成部分；书本知识有限；社会实践有诸多好处，能用所学的知识解决实际问题，获取经验，了解社会，端正学习态度，激励学习。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任务型写作

总结：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你对童年生活的认识 我认为从某种意义上来说，艰苦的环境可以激发一个人的潜能，为他的成功铺平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一个人在经历了磨难之后可以变得坚强，勇敢和忠实可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.总而言之，我认为温室里的花朵经受不起风暴的洗礼，艰苦的生活对孩子来说是有好处的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午

热爱社会工作，性格乐观，富有爱心和责任心；英语口语流利，具有相关的教学经验；工作时间：周六和周日，按每小时5元付费；这份工作给自己在经济和人际关系方面的好处；:表达自己做好工作的决心：把快乐和舒适带给自己工作的对象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就学校取消高三音乐课这一事件给校长写一封信

Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同学们对学校取消音乐课意见不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你对此决定赞成或反对？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons

汕头一模

1.为何与人合作：现代社会必备；可省时间和精力；更多互相学习的机会

2.与谁合作：A与喜欢的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B与不喜欢的人合作：学会容忍，学会挖

掘其优点

3.你的看法：倾听别人意见，不把你的观点强加给别人，有礼貌地指出别人的错误

Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!

失败是件坏事吗？

概括短文要点Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失败并非坏事，但从失败中站起来并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失败对胜利者是必修课，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你对失败的看法和态度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.广州一模

基础写作简介学校的植物园

1.概况：位于校园西南角，面积1000平方米 2.历史：20年的历史，2008年重建 3.特色：各种花卉、树木、药用植物 4.功能：美化校园、研究植物场所、休闲之地 5.其他：观赏至少许一小时

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.读写任务就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评

(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要点：校长的做法、想法、结果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持该校长的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假设你是校长，你会如何处理违纪学生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模写一篇短文介绍大豆的生长过程

1.发芽的条件：水分充足，温度适宜，种子就开始发芽了 2.第一步：出现幼根，并朝下生长 3.第二步：幼苗出现，并朝上生长，直至变成绿色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝叶出现 5.第四步：数月后开花结果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.经济危机，大学生就业难

概括材料主要内容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.现状：经济危机影响全球，就业机会少，工人工资低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建议：树立正确的择业观，降低预期工资，先就业再择业，自己创业，开公司，展示自己的才华Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各种优惠政策，免除各种税费，提供一定数量的无息贷款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.

第三篇：英语书面表达

2014年济宁市中考英语书面表达

假设你是李华，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营，根据夏令营之活动安排，你需要准备一份关于英语夏令营英语阅读方面的发言稿，具体要求如下：

1.对英语阅读重要性的认识；

2.个人开展英语阅读的情况（1-2点具体做法）及感悟；

3.将来的打算。

参考词汇：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.词数，100词左右；（开头已给出，不计入总词数；）

2.可根据具体要求及参考词汇适当发挥；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名。

Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for your listening.

第四篇：英语书面表达

Dear Andy,I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely, Li hua [名师点评]

本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。

第五篇：中考英语书面表达训练教案

一． 教学课题：

中考英语书面表达训练教案

二． 教案背景：

外研版、九年级、中考专项复习-书面表达训练。

英语书面表达题是学生比较头疼的题型。学生表达思想时往往写成了汉语式。错误多，不连贯。近几年的中考作文失分很大，有的学生还养成了抄前面阅读理解的习惯。三． 教材分析：

外研版教材每个模块后都设计了针对模块内容writing。这对于学生习作有一定的帮助，但由于题型设计与中考作文要求有差别，加之英语课时较少，有时仅用几分钟时间说说而已，甚至是放弃。缺少系统的练习，学生对作文有畏惧心理，写作方面的障碍自然就多了。

四．教学方法：

本节课针对学生作文练习少，对作文有恐惧心理的特点，设计了低层次，小梯度练习。从句子结构、动词的时态、常用作文的开头、结尾，到作文实战练习，中考作文评析、作文修改。采用自主练习、小组互评、范文共赏的形式调动学生写作的积极性。五． 教学过程： 导入：

Step1：同学们，今天我们针对书面表达题进行专项复习。书面表达题就是要求同学们针对题目的要求用英语写作文，我们在日常作文

中主要出现的错误有： 1.句子结构错误。

eg.I very like music.→I like music very much.I am want to be a doctor.→ I want to be a doctor.2.动词时态、语态使用不当。

eg.He goes to the hospital last Sunday.→

He went to the hospital last Sunday.She chose to give a speech at the party.→ She was chosen to give a speech at the party.3.词汇运用错误。名词、动词、形容词、副词/连词等，也包含短语、不定式使用不当。

eg.They had to work very hardly when they were young.→

They had to work very hardly when they were young.Discuss:小组讨论一下，平时自己在作文过程中常出现的错误。Step2:师：怎样减少出错呢？首先让我们看一下常用的句子结构。句子成分可分为主语,谓语,宾语,表语,定语,状语,同位语。但我们常用的简单句的结构有： 主语 + 谓语(及物动词)+ 宾语 People enjoy music.主语 + 谓语(不及物动词)He often swims in a river.主语 + 系动词 + 表语 You look lovely.I’m impressed.所以我们下笔时要分清句中的主语、谓语、宾语、表语，注意他们的位置。

小组活动：请同学们翻译下列句子。

1.她母亲是一位教师。（Her mother is a teacher.）

2.昨天汤姆去了网球俱乐部。（Tom went to a table tennis club.）Step3：师：接下来让我们讨论一下怎样减少动词时态或语态错误。

生：关键是确定文章的要求，是记叙过去的事还是描写现在或将来的事。

师：很对，2009年潍坊市初中学业水平考试考试书面表达题的要求是：丰富多彩的初中生活即将结束，有哪件事情让你至今印象深刻，甚至难以忘怀？请以An unforgettable experience为题，写一篇英语短文。你们觉得应该用什么时态来写呢？

生：多用动词的一般过去时态。

师：很好。

Step4: 当然文章写作自然有一些常用的开头、结尾可以借鉴。那么常用的开头有： 1.时间开头法：

eg.Today is Thursday,----------

It is 7 o’clock , my father is reading newspaper.2.天气开头法： eg.It was rainy today.It happened on a wet day of July.3.开门见山：

eg.Last weekends we went out for a walk.4.名言引人：

eg.When in Rome, do as the Romans do.------------------常用的结尾有： 1.总结法

eg.Tough we were tired, we felt very tired.2.发出号召或倡议

eg.I’m proud of what I’ve learned.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting our environment , our world will become much more beautiful.3.表达祝愿

eg.I hope you will have a wonderful time.师：当然常用的开头结尾还有不少，希望同学们多总结学习。Step5最后，作文的关键还在于审题：一定要读懂要求。如要求写得体裁、字数、必须包含的内容、书写等等。我们就以2010年潍坊市中考英语试题为例：大家热热身：

某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；心理压力大，不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此，他们发起了题为How Io Keep Fit的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇 80词左右的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。（文中不要出现作者

本人的真实信息）

小组活动：把写好的作文在小组之内交流，选出写得较好的在班内展示。

（小组优秀者到讲台读自己文章）Step6.Sum-up

这节课我们学习了书面表达题的一些解题技巧，当然在实际学习中还需要不断的总结练习，如养成记笔记的习惯。学生个人总结自己学习体会。Step7.Homework:

我们以2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试作文题为作业：

假设你是某文杂志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister）, Helen, 请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信。要求：1.80词左右；2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。

Dear Helen, Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park.I wanted to take some photos.My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling him.Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill.It didn’t work at all.I put it back quietly after I returned home.And I haven’t told him till now.when I face to my father, I feel terrible.What should I do?

Yours, David

Dear David ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes，Helen

六．教学反思：

本节课我从学生习作易出现的错误入手，分析出错的原因，进行及时的练习。开头结尾进行了适当的总结，小组之内交流合作。以潍坊市近三年中考作文为题例，让学生感受中考作文的要求、难度。不足之处是学生练习时间相对少一些。

七．教学资源

2010年山东省潍坊市初中学业水平考试写作答案（满分15分）One possible version: How to Keep Fit

As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food.Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks.Secondly, it's good for us to take more exercise, such as running, walking, ball games and so on.At last, we should learn to relax ourselves.We can listen to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep.To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.评分标准：词数在70—100之间；如果少于70词，应酌情扣分。1．内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）：

2．较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3．基本要点写出，有稍多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4．篇幅不足，错误较多，语句小通顺（3—5分）； 5．双写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。

2011年潍坊市初中学业水平考试英 语 试 题 写作答案及评分标准： One possible version: Dear David, First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately.It you tell him the truth, he'll be angry with you.But at least you'll prove how honest you are.Then I think you should offer to pay.But you shouldn't use your pocket money.Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't afford it.If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Best wishes, Helen 评分标准：词数在60—100之间；如果少于60词，应酌情扣分。

1.内容充实、语言流畅，能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用法等，语法、拼写错误极少（13—15分）；

2.较通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误（10—12分）； 3.基本要点写出，有较多语法、拼写错误（6—9分）； 4.篇幅不足，错误较多，语句吧通顺（3—5分）； 5.只写了个别句子或单词（0—2分）。