十天突破 小作文经典

第一篇：十天突破 小作文经典

剑六Test4小作文(十天突破 雅思写作 P217)

范文：

The first bar chart shows data about American marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 while the second bar chart describes information about the married status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.According to the first bar chart, the marriage rate was consistently higher than the divorce rate over the thirty-year period.More precisely, in 1970 the number of marriages stood at 2.5 millions whilst the number of divorces was 1 million.Then, the number of marriages remained stable at this level over the next decade whereas the number of divorces increased to 1.1 millions over the same period.After that, the number of marriages gradually declined to 2 millions in the next twenty years.The number of divorces also experienced a downward trend(1.4 millions and 1 million in 1990 and 2000, respectively).The second bar clearly shows that married people accounted for the greatest proportion of the adult American population in both 1970 and 2000(70% and 59%, respectively).As for other categories, the percentage of American adults who were never married was 14% in 1970 and 20% in 2000.By contrast, people who were widowed represented 8% of the population in 1970 and 6% in 2000.Divorced couples constituted only 2% of the entire population in 1970 but in 2000, this figure amounted to 9%.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the charts that the USA marriage rates were substantially higher than the divorce rates over the three decades and married population made up the largest proportion of the whole population in both 1970 and 2000.

第二篇：十天突破口语雅思口语单词总结

十天突破口语雅思口语单词总结

一、有用的短语

work out= exercise 锻炼

To keep fit, I work out in the gym for an hour every day.let someone down = disappoint sb.让某人失望

I'm studying hard because I don't want to let my parents down.stand for 表示，代表

DIY stands for do it yourself.piles up 堆积，变多

The work piles up but I will keep at it.live up 使快乐，使活跃

We played games to live up the party.polish up 改善

I need to polish up my English before I go to Australia.crack up 逗乐

Steven Chow's comedies never fail to crack me up.hand down from 传承

It was hand down from my grandmother.wind down 放松

Reading helps me wind down.bring down 唤起

These old photos bring back memories of my childhood.二、常用的小词

stuff 东西，口语中=things，不可以加复数 The stuff in that store is very pricey(贵的）

Pretty=副词 very

My new pad is pretty fun.fun=interesting There's lots of fun things to do in the classroom.adore 非常喜欢 I adore that singer.shortly= soon I'll get these things done shortly.spot 1看见=see

I spotted some squirrels and woodpeckers in Stanley park.地方=place It looks like a nice spot for a picnic.eye-opening 是地道的英文，让人大开眼界的 Trips to other countries can be really eye-opening.decent=quite good 不错的，挺好的

This job offers a decent salary and an impressive set of benefits.hang out=玩儿，可以代替play,但是不能接宾语

I often hang out in bars at weekend.I often hang out with them at the park.kind of=sort of 有点……，=somewhat My boss is kind of hard to get along with.like 比如说，像是，差不多是

I bought lots of stuff, like carrots ,beef and salmon.That program is like,...boring.in a row=one after another 连续地出现或发生

Jeremy Lin led New York Knicks to seven wins in a row.Patricia passed four exams in a row last week.a trade-off 有得就有失

There is a trade-off between the benefits of the medicine and the risk of side effects.Gracie had to make a trade-off between her job and her family.entire=whole/complete Daniel ate the entire cake and made no apology for that.Our situation is entirely different from theirs.Jessica is not entirely sure if she can get a nice job after graduation.......as well 也 =.....too Beijing is exciting for its nightlife.And it's culturally attractive as well.....is a piece of cake=...is a snap=...is a breeze 小菜一碟

The IELTS speaking test is just a breeze if you know all the tricks about it.during 在...的时候

We go hiking and camping during holidays.Know...inside out=know...backwards and forwards 精通 He knows computers backwards and forwards.I'm all for 我完全支持某事物

I've got nothing against change-I'm all for it.is no picnic=is a pain in the neck 很折磨人

Getting the homework done everyday is no picnic....really bothers me./...is getting on my nerves 让我很烦

The noise really bothers me./ The noise is getting on my nerves.kick back and relax=let one's hair down 放松 At parties, we just kick back and relax.a couple of 几个

I stayed in France for a couple of weeks.a bunch of=some 一些

I went there with a bunch of new friends.dozens of 几十

I just bought dozens of gifts online.loads of=piles of=tons of=a multitude of 很多= lots of I've got loads of works to get through before tomorrow.make sense 合理= be reasonable The plot（剧情）of that movie didn't make any sense...., you name it=and the list goes on and on 应有尽有

Beijing has traditions, modern lifestyles, tasty food, exciting night-life, beautiful people...you name it.by doing that, I kill two birds with one stone 一举两得

When i travel around, i take photos and then sell them online.So you see, I just kill two birds with one stone....is the best+名词，hands down.....绝对是最....的 The new IPad is the best tablet I've ever seen, hands dow....would be the last thing I want to do....是我人生最不想做的 Doing the dishes would be the last thing I want to do.that's the way the ball bounces.命中注定就是这样了

Lots of people got fired.Too bad.But that's the way the ball bounces in a recession.get the hang of 基本了解了怎样做某事

“I've never used a word processor before.”“Don't worry-you'll get the hang of it shortly.”

get...down pat 完全掌握了

If you just memorize all the answers, even if you get all the answers down pat, there may still questions you haven't thought of during the test.So,....What a shame!太可惜了

They lost that match.What a shame!

...is nonexistent 压根就不存在

Some scientist believe global warming is non-existent.Some of them even argue that the earth is actually getting colder.end up verb+ing 常用来描述某人或某事物最终处于某种状态 I ended up having to do all the work myself.suit someone well/ suit someone's needs 适合 The bustling city life suits Jeremy better.

第三篇：十天突破雅思写作36个基本论据

前进类（用来论证advantage好的方面）

1． 从......当中获益

2． 对……投资

3． 促进……的发展

4． 提高效率/生产率

5． 在……中起关键作用

6． 丰富……的社会的/学术的/职业的经历

7． 保持社会稳定

8． 有责任做…….9． 让人放松身心

10． 基于……

11． 创造就业机会

12． 省钱又省时间

13． 减轻某人的学业/经济/心理负担

14． 发挥某人的潜能

15． 为（发展、交流等）消除障碍

16． 促进……和……之间的文化交流与活动

17． 控制（犯罪、污染、媒体的有害内容等）的扩散

18． 提高人们的某种意识

19． 有某方面的内在优势

倒退类（用来论证disadvantange负面的方面）

1.生活在贫困/困苦/沮丧/焦虑中

2.导致犯罪率上升

3.竞争越来越激烈

4.为了避免….人们应该……

5.加大A与B之间的差距

6.起源于…..7.对……构成威胁

8.扼杀创造力/想象力

9.发现某事物很单调无聊而且无法给人动力

10.减少人们休闲的时间

11.A和B之间有密切的联系

12.失去控制

13.在……和……之间产生紧张和冲突

14.对某事过度依赖

15.对……有负面影响

16.人口在激增

17.与……明显不协调

第四篇：告诉你慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作到底有没有用

【雅思书评】告诉你慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作到底有没有用

目前市面上有各种各样的雅思备考书籍，考生们最关心的问题就是这些书到底怎么样，适不适合自己，最常提到的书就是慎小嶷的十天突破系列了，那么接下来点课台老师先帮大家详细分析一下这本书，告诉大家它的内容如何，适合什么样的学生，然后你再去决定你要不要买。

首先，大多数人买这本书可能都是因为发现它销量真的很高，而且周围好多刷雅思的同学都用，甚至我们办公室的书架上也摆着慎小嶷的十天突破写作。从内容上来看，它涵盖了大作文小作文的写作常识，词汇，语法，结构和写作方法。我们以十天突破写作剑八版为例，从好处方面来说，它可以在“国内考生无法回答的十个问题”中让对雅思写作一无所知的考生快速知道写作考试是怎么一回事，和需要注意的细节，在“多大的词汇量算大”中给出了很多高频雅思词汇，很容易将其运用到不同Topic的作文中去;给出的模板句，对于那些致力于6分以下的同学来说，看这本书已经足够了。然而好处也就这些了，这本书的硬伤就是它不适合那些英语水平较高或者已经考过雅思托福并且分数还不错的考生们。原因很明显，首先模板书非常畅销的后果就是几乎所有考生写得作文都是一样的，本来能考4分的考生他们把模板死记硬背下来考试的时候写出一个只有模板内容空洞的文章，运气好一点拿个5分不成问题;但是对于那些英语水平非常好的学生，他们虽然思想内容上表达得更加丰富，但是却不停地冒出模板句来充字数，给考官的感觉肯定不会眼前一亮，而依然是千篇一律。所以这就是为什么总有学生来问我，老师我考了很多次雅思，但每次其它科目都能考到7分以上只有写作一直保持在6分，这到底是为什么！我说你赶快扔掉慎小嶷我再告诉你。大家知道模板句有多害人了吗?其次，有很多同学喜欢慎小嶷的书是因为趣味性。不得不承认，作者为了与时俱进，把冰冰和思聪都写到书里也是蛮拼的。很多学生在翻开书的时候甚至都感觉不到压力，但是这在我看来也恰恰是它的缺点。大家需要明白一个道理，就是你备考的时候不是在新东方的课堂，不会有老师承担着评分的压力而千方百计地取悦你，讲个黄段子或者感人故事，没有这个必要。大家的目标就是在有限的备考时间里得到更多的干货，迅速掌握考试技巧，而无需以劳逸结合的名义让你不断地从复习中分心。要是学累了想休息直接休息就行了，完全可以自己规划放松时间嘛。然后，从内容上说，有些内容太过简单粗暴。比如说到小作文的段落结构，作者给出的建议是开头段，主体段1„.主体段N，结尾段。大家如果真得拜读过雅思考官的满分范文和备考建议的话，就不难看出他给出的结构有多混乱。第一，小作文正常就写四段，开头段改写主题，第二段综述全图，三四段分别为两个主体段，依次描述各个图形的具体信息即可，既不需要N个主体段，也不需要结尾。书中像这样的逻辑混乱简单粗暴的地方有很多，难怪有很多学生看完表示全书杂乱无章，仍然是一头雾水。

总之呢，慎小嶷的十天突破写作肯定是标题党了，它的畅销和大众普遍喜欢捷径的心理密不可分。真正诚实的写作书会告诉大家写作是要在大量练习、大量被批改之后方能进步。点课台老师本着为大家负责的态度，建议就是如果你的目标是6分以下或者想快速了解一些雅思写作的常识，那不妨一看；否则还是算了吧。

第五篇：十天军训心得体会

十天军训心得体会

孩提时，脑海里充满了对军人的崇敬和军旅生活的各种向往；学生时，军训因种种原因与自己擦肩而过；然而，心中的橄榄绿一直不曾褪色。在百花争艳的五月里，组织给了我们这次机会，不但圆了我幼时的军营梦，填补多年的遗憾，还使我的人生路上多了一份淡定和从容。

这十天，我们体验着部队生活的五味斋：酸的是刻板的训练和不可商榷的时间表。早起，走队列，站军姿，集合吃饭，跑步锻炼，统一熄灯&&我们一次又一次体验着疲惫和酸痛。甜的是集体生活的互助友爱和树荫下不经意的笑声。同学们的一句累了吧，还行吗？象兴奋剂一样赶走了一身的疲惫；班长有所保留的眼神象抓住偷吃奶糖的孩子一样抓住了一时的走神；偶尔一句你实在太有才了不时地从树荫下传来阵阵欢笑&&我们一次又一次体验着友爱和欢乐。苦的是每天的早起和越来越久的定型。五点半哨声一起，眯着眼睛、拖着鞋子，迅速到齐；远望小值离去，我等郁闷把型定，一分二分，慢吞吞；吱吱嗡嗡，肚咕噜&&我们一次又一次体验着痛苦和困倦。辣的是格斗术的威武和射击的刺激。尽管我们的格斗术多少有些花拳绣腿，但一声ha顿时感觉自己就是除暴安良的豪杰和保疆卫家的英雄。尽管天公不作美，没来得及练习射击就直接考核，但莫名其妙中靶的感觉却让人兴奋不已&&我们一次又一次体验着火辣和激情。涩的是别离时的不舍和军营生活的永诀。班长训练时严厉的教导和生活中细心的关照，司务长充满疑惑又可爱又稚气的表情，炊事班小弟们每天勤劳默默地为我们烧水煮饭&&成了脑海中永不褪色的底片，闲暇时我们会一次又一次地拿出来放映和回味。

十天的部队生活象梦一样地飞逝，然而早晨的口哨声，行军中的口号依然在脑中回荡，在夕阳柔美洒落下的这个美丽军营我带不走，但它却给了我太多的感想、感悟和感动：

一是令行禁止，整齐划一。只有有令行禁止的意识，才有整齐划一的高标准。军营的第一堂课就使我们明白两者的深刻意义。令行禁止才能使我们在生活、工作中保持良好的秩序与纪律。整齐划一才能让我们认准同一个目标，齐心协力完成各项任务，充分体现自我价值。

二是快速反应，永争第一。服从是军人的天职，快速反应则是军人必备的素质。这次军营生活，我们经常需要接受真正军人一样的快速反应训练，这将使我们在未来竞争中抢占先机，领先一步，站立国际竞争的潮头。

三是团结协作，共同前进。每天齐步走，跑步走&&不断重复，尽管是自己做好了也无法达到排面整齐，班长让我们不断练习，这曾让我们困惑不已。但细想一下，其实练齐步跑步是在培养我们的团结协作精神，要把简单的齐步走和跑步走走好，不但要每个人不出错，还要保证大家协调统一。这将使我们在今后的工作中更加注重团队精神和相互间的配合。

四是增进感情，加强沟通。集体生活让我们有了更多的时间和机会沟通和交流，一起分享生活乐趣，一起交流工作经验，探讨工作中遇到的难题，摸索人生旅途的坎坷，让我们不再觉得是沙漠中的苦行者，不再感到孤独和寂寞。

十天的军训给了我太多宝贵的东西，应该感谢的人太多了。怀着一颗感恩的心，我将更有勇气用狮子般的力量工作，用菩萨般的心肠待人。

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