第一篇:12中间段写作-思路拓展
图画作文中间段的思路拓展
除了论证手法之外,在大作文写作的过程中,论证的思路拓展也是必不可少的复习环节,这一点针对的就是写作中无从下手,不知从何说起论证素材的棘手问题的解决方案,总体的思路拓展就是下面的口诀,这一讲主要针对拓展的口诀的思路进行有效地词汇扩充,让考生能够做到有词可用,有话可说。
方法一:万能理由法
口诀:教科文组织应该以人为本,注意环保与经济发展
教育:
辍学drop-out学术氛围academic atmosphere剽窃plagiarism
减轻学生负担relieve the burden on students教育理念notion of education教书育人impart knowledge and educate people网络教育 online education
培养创新精神cultivate spirit of innovation激发学生潜能stimulate students' potential促进性格养成facilitate development of personality传授知识impart knowledge
学位degree 文凭diploma 证书certification 资格证qualification 素质教育quality education 应试教育 exam-oriented education毕业典礼 commencement
以学生为中心的教学 student-centered education 职业教育 vocational education 以老师为中心的教学teacher-centered education 毕业旅行 after-graduation trip 托儿所 nursery 幼儿园kindergarten 义务教育compulsory education
小学 primary school 中等教育 secondary school 高等教育 higher education科技:
科技创新innovation of technology造福人类benefit human beings
提高效率improve efficiency 网络的普及popularity of internet
有限网络cable 太阳能 solar energy 新能源new energy
在高科技时代in the era of high-tech发明创造invention and creation
信息技术information technology 尖端科技cutting-edge technology
高科技在医疗方面的应用 application of high-tech in medical treatment
文化:
文化冲撞culture shock思维方式way of thinking价值观value
求异思维divergent thinking习俗custom/convention文化融合culture blending
增进了解enhance understanding文化多样性culture diversity
全球一体化globalization文明civilization文化遗产culture heritage
文化交流culture communication文化底蕴:the rich cultural deposit
国学 national study 刮痧 skin scraping 拔火罐 cupping 针灸 acupuncture 书法 calligraph 组织:
制定具体措施 work out concrete solutions
颁布相关法规 enact related laws and regulations食品安全 food security
加强strengthen-enhance-foster-consolidateinfrastructure基础设施
社会不稳定social instability-social disorder/chaos,合作去解决这个问题 collaborate on this issue
向公众呼吁做某事 appeal to the public to do sth
假冒伪劣产品 fake and inferior product
以人为本:(安全——交往——认可——自我实现)
来自同辈的压力peer pressure情深意重的兄弟姐妹loving siblings
老龄化社会aging society退休金pension晚年twilight year
感谢父母be indebted to parents含辛茹苦的父母nurturing parents
逃避赡养老人的责任shun the responsibility of taking care of the elder
害怕承担责任:be afraid of taking responsibility
见义勇为never hesitate to do what is right传统美德time-honored virtue
帮助弱势群体 offer aid to the underprivileged
慈善事业 cause of charity义工 voluntary work
势利的snobbish冷漠indifferent/ unconcerned缺乏道德:be devoid of morality 廉租房low rent housing经适房 affordable housing房奴车奴 mortgage slave 环保:
可持续发展 sustainable development生态旅游 ecotourism
degradation恶化=deterioration: environmental degradation环境恶化
一次性产品disposable products垃圾 litter臭氧层Ozone layer
交通堵塞 traffic congestion机动车 motorized vehicle
不懈努力 unremitting efforts多方努力 joint effort/endeavor
深入人心 be embedded in one's heart
经济:
经济衰退economic recession经济恶化 economic deterioration
通货膨胀inflation通货紧缩deflation物价飞涨 the price is soaring
升值 appreciation贬值 depreciation/ devaluation增加收入augment income
合同contract 企业enterprise个人所得税 income tax国家税收 revenue
关税 tariff / duty进口 import出口 export日用品 daily commodity
巨大的利益exorbitant/enormous profits
城乡收入差距:income gap between urban and rural areas
遏制恶化的现状 curb the deteriorating situation
发展:
利大于弊 advantages exceed disadvantages不择手段 do things by hook and crook对...有威慑的影响have a deterring effect on起辅助作用play an auxiliary role in相互排斥的mutually exclusive利益冲突conflict of interest
下层社会的,贫穷的underprivileged/poor逆境unfavorable circumstance
兼容的be compatible with
Can economic development be compatible with environmental protection?
方法二:宏观-微观两分法
总体说来,该方法是结合方法一和上一讲中的写作手法来综合运用的,以上的万能理由都可以从个人和国家两个层面分别思考论述,考研英语大作文其写作精华就是“以小见大,联系自身”的过程,其结果必然是“微观-宏观-微观”的回归型思路体现。
三、中间段写作高分作文赏析
【环境保护】
Conceived in this cartoon is a motto that no one can shrug off: “to take care of our environment is to tend ourselves and our descendants”.In other words, as natural resources are actually limited, we are supposed to exploit sensibly / reasonably for our long-term benefit.However, acts against this principle are prevailing.It is not unfamiliar that some folks shoot wild animals for fun, cook them for food, and sell them for profit.It is also not uncommon to see
some guys over-mining with geographic disasters recurring.Therefore, the common sense should be born in mind by us that never sacrifice long term benefit for temporary satisfaction.What does this cartoon convey? Obviously, it renders us with the notion that what we do with the nature is to be answered for.Any examples? Haven’t you ever met some folks over-hunting for huge profit, with some species endangered? Haven’t you ever found some enterprises letting out polluted water, threatening the fishery industry and eco-balance along rivers, lakes and even oceans? Where have their insight gone? Where have their wisdom gone? Where have their senses of social responsibility gone?
【个人品质】
{互助}
What does this cartoon imply? Obviously, it renders us with the notion that a harmonious family, community, society, or world requires mutual assistance among individuals.Any examples? Haven’t you ever met a warm-hearted neighbor keeping taking care of a paralyzed granny next door? Haven’t you ever found most citizens donating part of their incomes for charity? Why are they so generous? Why are they so unselfish? Why are they so warm-hearted? Aren’t they motivated by the idea that every of us may ask for help from time to time, so has the duty to offer assistance when necessary?
This motto is born in every mind of us, “labor shapes human, while mutual assistance shapes human life.” Or, put another way, anyone, without support from others, cannot lead a normal life.Will there be any other cases more convincing than the following ones to illustrate this point? It is not unfamiliar that only with mutual assistance and cooperation did primitive men survive thousands of disasters and deliver their descendants, leaving our ancestors to develop their life of descent quality with mutual assistance and exchange, and eventually urging us to build a better world with combined effort.Indeed, we all have the awareness that mutual support is the basis of the normal life and a path towards happiness and harmony.Traditionally, people are considered to be selfish.But is that the truth in current world? Cases to criticize this mis-belief are abundant.It is not surprising to see a seat-lender in a bus helping a blind lady or an elder-tender in a hospital treating a paralyzed granny.It is also not uncommon that the amount of charity funds has doubled during last 6 months, according to a report in China Daily.Obviously, an increasing number of citizens, motivated by the notion that a harmonious world requires mutual help, are willing to assist others.{犹豫}
This motto is born in every mind of us, “better trying than crying” Or, put another way, hesitation, or indecisiveness, is the largest barrier in one’s overall development.Will there be any other cases more convincing than the following ones to illustrate this point? It is not unfamiliar that some students always ponder, after graduation, to hunt a job or to further his education.It is also not uncommon that some white-collars, even if not satisfied with their current, endlessly hesitate, daring not step toward a new one.Indeed, they all should have the awareness that they should not be so pessimistic that count choices – largely opportunities – as predicaments.{诚实}
It is accepted by most average people that no other groups can be more honest than college students.But is that the case anymore? Cases to criticize this improper view are within easy reach.From the point of college examinations alone, haven’t you ever seen some candidates delivering notes or making gestures during the exams? Or, haven’t you ever noticed that some of them take advantage of cell phones to forward keys? Obviously, an increasing number of youngsters, either for fierce competition or because of their own laziness, no longer cherish the virtue of honesty.{诚信}
The extended meaning echoed by this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: never easily let go of the basic rights of consumers, and any personnel in any industry should never shrug off his duty in face of financial rewards.Although this doctrine is
accepted by most of us, conducts against this principle are prevailing.It is not unfamiliar that, for their own benefit, bank clerks persuade customers into buying unnecessary money management services, to say nothing of misdeeds among other public services.They are so profit-oriented that can sacrifice the benefits and rights of a consumer, exerting heavy financial pressure and discomfort on him, for their own temporary rewards.
第二篇:雅思写作:如何拓展中间段(写写帮推荐)
如何写开头段
Sentence 1 Background(general statement)Sentence 2 Rephrase the topic(thesis statement)Sentence 3 personal opinion or brief description of main body 如何写背景句
确定题目讨论哪个方面的问题,然后以这个问题为中心,写一句介绍性的话。例题1:
Some people who have been successful in the society don’t attribute their success to the theoretical knowledge they learned from their university.Do you agree or disagree?
People have long been interested in identifying the forces that contribute to personal achievement.The importance of theoretical knowledge to one’s success is a matter for debate.例题2.The advertising is discouraging people from being different individuals and makes people to be or seem to be the same.Do you agree or disagree?
The influence of advertising on our buying behaviours is a subject matter.In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to the influence of advertising on our buying behaviors.如何改写题目 1.不要抄袭题目 2.句子不要过长
例题1.Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or job training? Sentence1 The treatment of criminals has been open to debate in recent years.Sentence2.1)加上常用句型:There is much controversy over whether to send criminals to jails or to let them receive education or job training.2)改变句子成分的顺序:Some people think that to send criminals to jails is better than to let them receive education or job training.3)改变句子成分:Some people think that imprisonment is better than education or job training in treating criminals.例题2.Police in Britain do not carry guns.Some people believe that it will make citizens unprotected, but some suggest that it would reduce violence in society.Discuss those two views.Sentence 1.In some countries, such as Britain, it is a convention that police do not carry guns.Sentence 2.1)加常用句型:There is a perception that it will make citizens unprotected, while a counter-argument is that it would reduce violence in society.2)改变句子成分的顺序:Some people think that citizens would be unprotected, while some suggest that violence could be reduced.3)改变句子成分:Some people think that it fails to protect citizens while some suggest that it would minimize violence in society.如何写第三句话:
1.一种是阐明自己的立场
2.一种是不阐明自己的立场,只是简单的说文章会讨论些什么内容。
例题1.Children in secondary school study international news as a subject, but some think that’s a waste of time.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Sentence 1 International news represents one of the main sources of information from which we discover what is happening around the world.Sentence 2 However, when it comes to including it in the curriculum at secondary school, there is an ongoing debate.Sentence 3 1)阐明立场法
支持:My personal view is that studying international news is of benefits to students.反对:I am not convinced that it is necessary.2)不明确表示自己支持哪一方面,而是指明文章会讨论一个事物的两个方面 There are some points in both sides.例题2.Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and use up the world’s resources.Do you agree or disagree Sentence 1 There is little room for doubt about the convenience brought by air travel.Sentence 2 However, when it comes to its impact on the environment, no conclusion has been arrived at.Sentence 3 1)表明立场
支持:As far as I know, its benefits are far more overt than its down sides.反对:My personal view is that its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects.2)不标明立场
This essay will compare and contrast its benefits and downsides.问题类题目的开头段
例题1.What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity of water resource?
Sentence 1 Water shortage is one of the most challenging issues to address in many countries.Sentence 2.(不要说有人争议水资源缺乏的问题,而是直接关注它的原因)There are some factors leading to this problem.Sentence 3(说清楚文章要讨论的内容)Some of the most factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsible solutions.例题2.There is a gap between living in the city and living in the countryside.What are the reasons in your country and how can the difference be reduced?
如何拓展中间段
Topic sentence(one sentence only): highlight the central point of this paragraph, serve to support an argument.Supporting sentences: sentences for the extension, explanation and justification of the topic sentence(3 sentences if the main body is composed of 3 paragraphs, and 4to 5 sentences if 2paragraphs)
例题1 Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects? A 社会类题目
1.经济角度:社会的经济利益,经济发展,发展经济的契机等
2.科技角度:科技发展带来的机遇和危机,工业生产,高科技设备,媒体,电脑,自动化,数字化等
3.社会角度:社会的整体良性发展,环境问题,社区安全,执法系统,卫生情况,医疗建设,公共设施,文化艺术,旅游观光,城市风貌
4.公众角度:公共利益,个人的利益和便利(衣食住行)
B 教育类题目
1.社会能力和工作能力:年轻人在社会上的生存能力,交际能力,交流能力,实践能力,工作能力
2.学校表现和学习能力:学生在理论知识方面的掌握和学习能力的提高,学校的课程安排,设施配置,教学方法和社会要求的接轨,重视理论还是实践,教学质量,课堂气氛,教师素质,教学方法的革新
3.性格和感情的健康:学生是否有健康的业余爱好和课后活动,性格是否开朗和积极,行为是否端正,中小学生在社会上遇到的问题,暴力,色情,媒体,社区安全,犯罪率的上升,家庭背景,父母教育,对儿女行为的约束,家庭暴力,家庭问题,单身家庭,家庭的贫困问题,父母行为对子女的影响。
4.身体健康:学生是否参与体育活动,养成好的生活习惯,常见的问题是青少年过分使用电脑,不注意体育锻炼,生活习惯不好。
经济角度: 广告宣传产品,促进消费,推动经济
公众角度1:广告让消费者了解商品信息,比较商品优缺点,购买到比较适合自己的产品。公众角度2:广告有时会夸大其词,误导消费者,让消费者购买自己并不需要的产品。
注意:1.最有说服力的观点应该放在第一段,第二段的观点次之,第三点的观点最弱
2.观点不要标新立异,最常见的观点往往是最安全的和最有说服力的
1.One of the main functions of advertising is to assist consumers to find and buy suitable products.2.Meanwhile, advertising serves to stimulate consumption and contributes to economic development.3.Despite its importance, there is no denying that every now and then, advertising leads consumers into an impulsive purchase, thereby causing wasteful spending.支持句的写法
Explanation: 解释和说明中心句的意思或原因
Extension: 将中心句或将解释中心句的句子拓展一下,阐述它的影响 Example:
在需要的时候,举例说明,有助于更加形象地描述事情 Sorting:
当一个中心句有几个分论点支持时,可以将论点分类说明 Contrasting: 描述相反的情形,在无法落笔的时候特别有用。
1.1.One of the main functions of advertising is to assist consumers to find and buy suitable products.1)Common knowledge is that advertising refers to presenting information, relating to a product or service by a variety of media, such as television, radio, newspapers, magazines, brochures and so forth.2)With the presence of advertising, a consumer is able to acquire the latest information in the market, such as properties of a product or service, and thereby make a wiser buying decision.3)By contrast, without advertising, a consumer is at the risk of purchasing, a product that fails to meet all of his or her needs, because of lack of knowledge of better alternatives in the market.2.Meanwhile, advertising serves to stimulate consumption and contributes to economic development.1)As said before, advertising is responsible to introduce a product, but in reality, it does more than that.2)Advertising describes a product in such an impressive way and with adding so many visual appeals that it always succeeds in attracting the eye of the audience and driving them into a final purchase.3)Besides, advertising reminds intended customers of their existing needs or creates fresh needs, keeping them aware that only by purchasing a product can their needs be met.4)By these two approaches, advertising encourages spending and contributes to economic development.3.Despite its importance, there is no denying that every now and then, advertising leads consumers into an impulsive purchase, thereby causing wasteful spending.1)It is a shared convention in the advertising industry that some properties of a product are highlighted while the others are simplified.2)A product, when prompted well, will be highly desired by many, as customers are misguided to ignore the products’ downsides.3)It accounts for why many shoppers regret their buying decisions before long, observing that what they have brought is not what they actually need or fails to live up to their expectations.4)Cosmetics and dietary supplements are among those standard examples, costing individual buyers a lot but not achieving desirable outcomes.如何写结论段
1.重新总结主体部分讨论过的要点 2.重新阐述你的立场和观点
3.不要加入新的内容,尤其是主体部分没有讨论过的内容。
In conclusion, advertising plays an essential role in society, not only making consumers well-informed buyers but also fostering economic development.However, consumers should beware of the misleading nature of advertising.注意事项:
1.不要用不熟悉的词 2.避免过度使用从句 3.少用名言 4.杜绝中国谚语
5.少用第一或第二人称 6.避免口语化的词语
7.尽量避免使用问号和感叹号 8.不要用所写 9.不要用比喻
10.不要少于规定数字
第三篇:托福写作中间段怎么写
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托福写作中间段怎么写?
托福写作中间段怎么写?如何打造托福写作的中间环节呢?在托福作文的中间部分,应该如何安排内容已达到整体的作文效果。下面,小编给大家一些建议,供广大同学们参考。
技巧
一、.Q:一定需要三大段论点理由展开来证明开头观点吗?
A:No.中间段可以有一个论点展开,也可以拿到满分。同学们可以参看ETS的第三版p202页的官方范文5分和4分赏析。
技巧
二、Q: 托福写作备考中的独立写作中间段结构是什么?
A: 论点Main point Sentence+论据Details.尽量不要突兀地写for example,需要指明例子之前的论点句。
技巧
三、Q: 怎么展开一个中间段落才能做到评分标准5分要求呢?
A: 其实有很多方法将论点展开Details,比如:我强化班会重点介绍的几种:Specific personal example 少而精;General example 多而简;compare& contrast对比反差;Study &Survey 调查数据;Famous people权威名人;Quotation名言谚语;等。
技巧
四、Q: 以上是不是每种方法都要在独立写作中间段用上?
A: 这几种方法都是平行关系,可以挑选一种方法即可展开一个论点句。当然,也可以挑选其中两三种方法使得一个段落展开地非常细致。
技巧
五、Q: 独立写作是不是中间段字数越多越好?
A: 展开的Details的语言部分非常重要,比如由电脑自动评分E-rater主要评判Grammar,Usage,Style,lexical complexity等方面。
技巧
六、Q: 独立写作的中间段是不是一定需要所谓的“辨证式/反证式/让步式”写法?
A: 有这种辩证式思路文章会写得更全面,但是这不是必要的。因为ETS的官方指南和评分标准告诉大家: 托福写作考的并不是该同学对一个观点分析有多么深刻,主要是语言的表达和内容的清晰。
第四篇:托福写作思路拓展训练
托福写作是中国考生在托福考试中的弱项之一,其中语法、用词以及逻辑思维是写作的问题所在,只有在日常生活中多读些范文,了解托福写作中应该具备的的逻辑思维,从哪方面考虑问题更容易写,各种问题都要先想好再开始写。下面我们一起来看下这些托福写作话题的写作思路,看看与你想的是否一样。
1、同意上大学好.(1)为未来工作进行准备
(2)交更多的朋友,学习他们的思维方式
(3)系统的学习知识
2、同意父母是最好的老师
(1)父母从小就和我们在一起,给我们很多的知识
(2)父母和我们最为亲密,在任何时候,都会毫无保留地给我们知识
(3)父母最了解我们,所以他们给我们的建议和意见都是最有针对性的3、食品容易保存将改变人们的生活习惯
(1)食品容易准备,节省了大量的时间,使人们可以做其他事情
(2)食品容易准备,为人们提供了更多的花样。
(3)食品容易准备,为人们的健康带来了很多好处
4、首先进行比较,然后说书是最重要的来源
(1)读书能够节省很多时间
(2)书是有系统性的,能够让人以很科学的方式迅速获得知识
(3)读书相对比较便宜和容易,而在寻找经验则比较昂贵和困难
5、先说明优势和劣势,让后说同意建一个工厂
(1)工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业,对地方的经济有很大的贡献
(2)建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展,例如小商店,药店等等,这可以大大方便附近的居民
(3)建造工厂,赢利后,就可以向当地政府贡献税收,政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务
6、一个重要的改变就是改变环境,让它变的更好
(1)环境好能改善人的身体健康,很多人因为环境而生病
(2)环境好了,吸引更多的游客来旅游
(3)环境好能够促进经济发展,吸引更多的商人来投资
7、电影和电视影响人的行为
(1)电影和电视能够让人们迅速了解整个国家和世界,丰富人的知识,让人们更加乐观
(2)电影和电视让人变的懒惰,不愿意和人接触
(3)电影和电视让人变的violent8、电影和电视没有破坏朋友和家人的交流
(1)电影和电视的很多内容正是朋友和家人聊天的重要内容。没有电影和电视,似乎聊天就缺了很多内容。
(2)我们在很多时候是和朋友和家人一起欣赏电影和电视的,这促进了交流
(3)电影和电视现在的设计很多是让家人朋友一起参与,这实际上也促进了交流
9、选择在大城市生活
(1)大城市工作机会更多一些
(2)大城市生活相对方便,有很好的商店,交通等等
(3)大城市的娱乐也更多,如电影院,博物馆等等。
10、不同意,实际上运气在人成功的过程中也很重要
(1)先肯定努力是成功不可或缺的一部分。
(2)在找工作的过程中,同样优秀的人在申请工作的时候不一定就都会被接受,而两个人的人生道路就非常不同。或者从申请签证的角度来说也可以。
(3)别人帮助可以根本不费努力而成功
11、同意,对体育进行投入
(1)体育活动对于学生学习和健康非常有利
(2)体育活动有助于培养学生的团队精神和人生态度
(3)体育活动对于学校的名声是非常重要的。好的运动队能够提高学校的名气
12、人们到一个新的地方,为什么首先喜欢参观当地的博物馆?
(1)人们访问博物馆,是博物馆反映了一个国家的文化和历史
(2)访问时间比较短,访问博物馆可以最大程度了解一个地方
(4)非常珍贵的东西,只有在博物观才能看到
13、选择在饭馆吃饭
(1)节省时间,自己做饭很麻烦
(2)能够品尝各种各样的美食
(3)能够促进和朋友的感情
14、应当要求学生上课
(1)学生上课能够和教师更好的交流,学习会更好
(2)学生上课能够和同学互相学习,学习他们的思维方式,团队精神有所提高
(3)学生上课是责任和纪律要求,如果学生想上课就上课,那么学校将无法管理
15、邻居的素质
(1)尊重理解自己。
(2)尊重别人的隐私,不到处去传闲话
(3)当自己有难处的时候,能够尽可能的帮助自己
16、同意新饭馆建立
(1)增加就业
(2)提供一个好的休闲娱乐场所
(3)贡献税收,改进社区
17、应当和老师一起学习
(1)教师受过培训,他们了解学生的问题,所以在进行辅导的时候系统有重点
(2)教师和学生进行交流,使学生能够迅速掌握知识
(3)教师提供了学习的方法,这在未来学生学习其他知识的时候都很有帮助一个好的上级应当是
(1)尊重下级,有礼貌,(2)有高超的专业知识
(3)在自己工作遇到困难的时候,能够尽自己的努力帮助自己
19、应当改善交通
(1)大多数人都需要并没有私人汽车,他们需要公共交通,所以要符合大多数人的需要
(2)公共交通能够保护环境,改善公共交通能够吸引更多人坐工车,对环境有保护作用
(3)公共交通能够带来更多人的就业,能够更好的促进经济的发展
20、不同意,儿童应当长在大城市
(1)大城市能让儿童受到良好的教育
(2)大城市能够让儿童开阔视野,接触到很多东西。
(3)大城市的娱乐更多,儿童更喜欢
(4)大城市的医疗设备比较好,儿童得病可以得到迅速治疗
21、人们寿命延长的原因在于
(1)医学发展,很多病能够得到及时的治疗,人们的寿命延长
(2)世界和平,没有大型的战争
(3)人们更加注意健康,积极参加体育活动,饮食也比以前合理。
22、一个好的同事的标准是
(1)尊重你,对你有礼貌
(2)尊重你的隐私
(3)在你有困难的时候,帮助你
23、学习期间打工是一个好主意
(1)能够从工作中学习实际的经验,将书本的东西用到工作中
(2)挣了钱,能够减轻父母的财政压力
(3)学习更加合理的管理时间
24、假设此城市是个大城市喜欢的(1)更多的工作机会的收入
(2)更多的娱乐
(3)生活方便
不喜欢的可以写:(1)环境污染(2)人比较冷漠
25、同意建一个大型的购物中心
(1)增加就业
(2)提供休闲的方便地方
(3)贡献税收,服务社区
26、同意人们有时候要做自己不喜欢作的事情
(1)谋生的需要,很多农民到城市来打工,自己不喜欢,但是必须这样做
(2)个人发展的需要,比如说学习数学,物理等等,虽然不喜欢,但是这和未来个人发展很有帮助
(3)在紧急时刻,必须要做自己不喜欢作的事情,比如说好友得了癌症,自己不能告诉他
28、同意电视等媒体过分注重公众人物的报道
(1)媒体为了满足大众的好奇心(SATISFY THE CURIOSITY),所以过分注重公众人物的报道。比如说,名人的食品和生活方式等等。
(2)媒体为了赚钱的需要,集中在公共人物的报道。
(3)媒体为了监督公众人物。所以经常报道他们的私生活。
29、不同意人们的活动将世界变成了一个更好的地方
(1)地球的自然资源消失的很快
(2)环境污染问题
(3)人类发动战争。人口、古迹、土地都受到了损失
30、同意建立高中
(1)吸收就业
(2)让孩子能够就近接受教育
(3)学校的一些商业活动可以象当地政府贡献税收
以上30个托福写作的题目写作思路你看好了吗?托福写作需要从哪方面分析问题,还要多看多学多思考,写作题一部分是考的用词用句,还有很大一部分考验的是写作思路与逻辑思维,要多方面思考,才能写出最优,最有想法的文章。
第五篇:赛达考试如何拓展写作思路
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SAT考试如何拓展写作思路
在SAT题目的主题中,有一类是专门考察个人和群体之间的对比关系,比如:是否大众的观点往往是错误的?个人要不要创新而不去遵循社会的主要潮流?为了整个集体的成功要不要牺牲个人的利益?„„其实,对于这类题目,能够呈现观点的例子在历史中比比皆是:
①个人创新观点胜过社会主流观点
写出《物种起源》的Darwin;
反对“地心说”提出“日心说”的Nicolas Copernicus;
质疑Adam Smith的观点并创立《博弈论》从而获得1993年诺贝尔经济学奖的John Nash;反对奴隶制,并通过《解放黑奴宣言》给予黑人自由和平等的Abraham Lincoln等等。
②个人为了群体而放弃自己的利益
为了美国长远发展,忍辱负重签署《杰伊条约》的George Washington;
创立护士学并恢复护士光荣指责的Nightingale;
为南非争取和平和世界关注而献身的Nelson Mandela等等。
通过以上对例子的总结方法,我们面对SAT作文真题时,便可快速选出最适宜的立场并用例子给予支持。
以2005年3月考题为例:
Is the opinion of the majority-in government or in any other circumstances-a poor guide?
【大部分人的意见是不是一个不好的导向?】 该题目让考生对群体意见的优劣性给出看法,考生如果有自由的看法固然很好,但是在考场中有限的时间内给出精彩的自由回答是不容易的。假如这时候我们从以上的分类去看,必然能够得出群体意见不好的观点,再经过正反的延伸,就可把上题解读成“好的导向是个人的意见,而大众的观点往往具有误导性”。林肯时代,他所反对的是来自于奴隶主及大部分人白人的意见;约翰·纳什反对整个经济学术界对于亚当斯密的信仰;达尔文反对生物学界对于生命起源的看法;哥白尼则挑战了罗马天主教会对于大众思想的控制。由此,我们通过定位题目的类型,将对于这道题目的回答和例子全部推理出来。这样就极大简化了后半部分的写作过程。由于篇幅有限,这里建议考生可使用此方法来分析解答其他类似题目。(小马过河国际教育)