雅思小作文十个细节

第一篇：雅思小作文十个细节

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雅思小作文十个细节

导学：一般说到雅思小作文，很多考生会不约而同地想到词汇和语法的确，在雅思小作文的四项评分标准中，这两项指标占据了半壁江山！其实雅思小作文还有十个细节是需要注意的。对于前者，考生们往往不敢怠慢，备考过程中的很大一部分时间和精力都是花在词汇积累上的，而对于后者，却因为单调、枯燥而常常被有意无意地忽视。实际上，“磨刀不误砍柴工”，只有把“语法”这把刀磨得亮亮的，才有可能连词成句，连句成段，又快又好地完成雅思小作文写作任务。

今天小编为大家整理了关于雅思小作文备考计划十个细节！

1.熟练掌握小作文三大段框架，即开头介绍段，中间描述段和结尾总结段，这会让你的文

章看起来更具有条理和整洁。

2.尽量把字迹写工整，虽然字迹工整与否并不是评分标准范畴里的，但若你的英文写成了

狂草书，考官也是会抓狂的！

3.雅思小作文不需要用太过于复杂的句式，能避免使用定语从句就不用，记住一句话：用

最精辟的语言表达出最完整的信息！

4.在小作文中放入插入语，伴随状语等形式能让你的文章更显精辟！

5.小作文是客观性作文，所以你的文章中只能使用客观用词，不能出现because等主观性

解释性的语句。

6.雅思小作文写作最好有明确是时间分配，即准备阶段3分钟，写作阶段15分钟。严格

遵循18分钟完成小作文的要求。绝对不能抢大作文的风头！

7.单词重复属于小作文写作中的大忌！在精辟的同时请选用多样化的词汇彰显你的学术范

儿。

8.大作文所占分值更多，所以若遇大作文比较难写，先干掉大作文！

9.不要用一般现在时贯穿首尾，一般情况下雅思小作文主要时态为过去时。此外，将来时

不会出现在小作文中！

10.老外非常注重英文写作时候的逻辑，所以在你的小作文里请分段清楚，那最能体现你清

晰的逻辑思路。

综合以上分析雅思小作文也需要多多注意细节，细节决定成败，无论是从词汇上的运用还是语法的长短句复合应用等，雅思小作文也需要在理解中多多练习，掌握好细节，美联英语祝您在雅思考试的道路上能够更加顺利！

第二篇：雅思小作文十个细节

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今天小编为大家整理了关于雅思小作文备考计划十个细节！

1.熟练掌握小作文三大段框架，即开头介绍段，中间描述段和结尾总结段，这会让你的文章看起来更具有条理和整洁。

2.尽量把字迹写工整，虽然字迹工整与否并不是评分标准范畴里的，但若你的英文写成了狂草书，考官也是会抓狂的！

3.雅思小作文不需要用太过于复杂的句式，能避免使用定语从句就不用，记住一句话：用最精辟的语言表达出最完整的信息！

4.在小作文中放入插入语，伴随状语等形式能让你的文章更显精辟！

5.小作文是客观性作文，所以你的文章中只能使用客观用词，不能出现because等主观性解释性的语句。

6.雅思小作文写作最好有明确是时间分配，即准备阶段3分钟，写作阶段15分钟。严格遵循18分钟完成小作文的要求。绝对不能抢大作文的风头！

7.单词重复属于小作文写作中的大忌！在精辟的同时请选用多样化的词汇彰显你的学术范儿。

8.大作文所占分值更多，所以若遇大作文比较难写，先干掉大作文！

9.不要用一般现在时贯穿首尾，一般情况下雅思小作文主要时态为过去时。此外，将来时不会出现在小作文中！

10.老外非常注重英文写作时候的逻辑，所以在你的小作文里请分段清楚，那最能体现你清晰的逻辑思路。

综合以上分析雅思小作文也需要多多注意细节，细节决定成败，无论是从词汇上的运用还是语法的长短句复合应用等，雅思小作文也需要在理解中多多练习，掌握好细节，美联英语祝您在雅思考试的道路上能够更加顺利！

第三篇：十个细节

十 个 细 节 摘自闽西广播电视报2007年第37期 父母必须让孩子记住的十个细节

1．记住父母的生日

2．离家出门要禀告父母

3．咳嗽时要捂住嘴巴

4．进入公共场所要保持安静

5．与人沟通时要注意对方的眼睛

6．主动帮别人拾起掉下的东西

7．与人相撞要主动说“对不起”

8．习惯说“谢谢”

9．多听长者劝告

10．学会赞赏别人 父母应鼓励孩子做到的十个细节

1．多问为什么

2．自己的事情自己做

3．勇于承认错误

4．乐于与人分享

5．独立思考问题

6．经常幻想

7．想做就去做

8．自己选择

9．与人交往

10．善于表达自己 父母应关注的十个不良细节

1．孩子总说“坐不住”

2．孩子磨磨蹭蹭

3．孩子有不良“口头禅”

4．孩子总“心存侥幸”

5．孩子有“厌学”情绪

6．孩子虚荣心很强

7．孩子嫉妒心旺盛

8．孩子“唯我独尊”

9．孩子“骄傲自满”

10．孩子有“局外人”心理 父母要管好的十个细节

1．管好孩子的“零用钱”

2．管好孩子的“零食”

3．管好孩子的“学习计划”

4．管好孩子的“家务劳动”

5．管好孩子的“交友圈”

6．管好孩子的“收藏珍品”

7．管好孩子的“好胜心”

8．管好孩子的“上网时间”

9．管好孩子的“择校大事”

10．管好孩子的“课外阅读” 父母经常提醒孩子的十个细节

1．健康第一

2．心态积极

3．自我保护

4．惜时如金

5．充满自信

6．充满爱心

7．懂得忍让

8．懂得知足

9．爱护环境

10．与人协作

缓解亲子矛盾的十个细节

1．要看到孩子的优点，不要只看到缺点

2．做朋友，讲义气

3．帮“大耳朵、小嘴巴”的父母

4．以心换心要幽默

5．宽容比处罚更有效

6．该放心的要放心

7．为自己的错误向孩子道歉

8．善待孩子的谎言

9．宽容孩子的偶像崇拜

10．陪孩子一起当“球迷”

优秀父母一定要做到的十个细节

1．细心关爱不唠叨

2．说话算话不打折扣

3．不在孩子面前怨天尤人

4．进孩子房间敲门在先

5．从不偷看孩子日记

6．孩子在场不吵架

7．尊重孩子的朋友

8．让孩子理解自己

9．舍得让孩子“碰钉子”

10．舍得让孩子说“不”

第四篇：雅思小作文

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As shown in the first chart, oil was the world’s main energy source, accounting for 37% of the energy consumption in 2005.Followed by coal and natural gas, constituting 28% and 23% respectively.By comparison, the proportion of nuclear power was small, 6%, equating that of hydro-electricity.Saudi Arabia accounts for the largest proportion of the world’s oil reserves, 20%, well ahead of Canada, the country with the second biggest reserve, 14%.Behind Canada are four Middle East countries, namely Iran(10%), Iraq(9%), Kuwait(8%)and United Arab(8%).By contrast, the reserves of Venezuela, Russia and the united states are relatively small, making up 6%, 5% and 2@ respectively.The remaining 18% is found in other countries.Pic

The three pie charts show how university students in three countries spent their money in the year 2003.In general, students in countries A spent slightly more than those in country B(US$5,000 and US$4,500 respectively).In comparison, student expenditure in country C was considerably lower, at only US$1,500 per year.Accommodation and food were the two biggest items of expenditure.Altogether they constituted around 60% of the total students’ expenditure in all the three countries.The difference is that in country A and B accommodation spending exceeded food spending while the reverse was true for country C.The rest of the students’ spending was divided among leisure, books and others.Leisure spending constituted a larger percentage(around 20%)of student expenditure in both country A and B, while in country C more money was spent on books(12%)than on leisure(12%).Overall, as wealth decreased, the percentage of students’ spending on non-essential items reduced.柱状图Bar

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This bar chart shows the changes in the amount of oil discovered worldwide every 5 years from 1950 to 2005 and the predicted figures from 2010 to 2020.In 1950, the world oil discovery stood at 20 billion barrels a year, which grew dramatically over the next 15 years to reach a peak at approximately 56 billion barrels in 1965.However, from this year onwards, the growth of oil discovery was suddenly replaced by a sharply downward trend, with some ups and downs, to approximately 6 billion barrels a year in 2005, about 1/10of its peak amount in 1965.It is predicted that 7 billion barrels of oil will be discovered worldwide in the year 2010, and this figure is forecast to decline steadily to an all-time low of only 3 billion barrels in 2020.In conclusion, this chart shows that world oil discovery peaked in the 1960s but has been declining for over 40 years, and this trend is expected to continue into the near future.The bar chat shows information about the areas of land damaged by human activities in four major continents of the world.The area of land damaged in Africa and Asia are similar, totalling approximately 1,200 million hectares for each, while in Australia and Europe the numbers are considerably lower, averaging between 300and 400 million.Looking at the causes behind land damages, it can be seen that in African, Europe and especially Australia, breeding is the leading cause of land loss, damaging approximately 500, 100 and 400 million hectares of land respectively.Next comes tree-cutting which takes away slightly larger areas of land than farming in all the three regions.Asia shows a slightly different picture, where tree-cutting activities have led to the largest amount of land loss(450 million hectares).Breeding and farming account for the remaining damage(380 and 420 million hectares respectively).Overall, breeding causes the most pervasive damage to land around the world.折线图 line

Overall, the world population rose sharply from less than 500 million in the 1400s to 6 billion in 2000, a growth of 12 times over 600 years.The increase was more dramatic after 1800 and only in the 1700s was there an obvious decline(1.2 billion to 0.9 billion).The ozone hole was at its smallest size of about 400 thousand square km in 1980, but 20 years later, it was enlarged by 9 times to 3.6 million square km.The only period when there was a reduction in size was in the early 1990s(from 2 to 1.2 million square km).流程图diagram

The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of south America, Africa and Indonesia.The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.Firstly when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry.They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry.After this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.After being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed.This part is not needed for making chocolate.Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.(pic)

The chart describes how water is obtained outdoors.According to the figure, the first step of obtaining water outdoors is to find a hole with green plants on its bottom.Next, remove the green plants in the middle and put a container there.Then, cover the hole with a plastic sheet and place two stones on both ends of it to secure its position.A third stone is laid on the middle of the plastic sheet so that the middle part is also the lowest part.When the sun shines on the green plants in the hole, water evaporates from these plants.The vapour rises up and then cools down to form water drops on the plastic sheet.When there is more and more water, it flows along the sheet to accumulate on the lowest part.Finally, water falls down into the container directly under the middle stone.Thus, water is collected successfully through evaporation from green plants.Pic

In cool climate special attention is given to the use of building materials that have a high thermal mass.Insulation is used on the outside of heavy materials such as concrete, brick or adobe.This kind of material stores heat and slowly releases it while external insulation ensures that all heat absorbed by wall materials is released inside the building.Careful positioning of the building and large windows facing winter sunlight also assist to passively heat the house.The roof has an extreme angle to assist with snow runoff and roof overhang does not interfere with sunlight.Homes in warm climate require the opposite approach.Insulation and reflective roof material aim to keep heat from the sun out.Windows are placed under a wider roof overhang so that they are shaded form direct light in the day and so that cooler night air can move through the house when the windows are open.Map地图

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The three diagrams illustrate what the village of Kelsbey looked like in 1780, 1860, and 2000.In 1780, Kelsbey had only 100 homes, but it had a large expense of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the middle.In the west there was a river running from north to south.The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes but the size of farmland and woods was reduced by half.In the same year, a bridge could be seen over the river and a road was constructed linking the river to the residences.140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and woods completely disappeared.Several school buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential area in the north by a newly-built road.Some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.大作文

Body paragraph A

It is first important to realise that art is the key part of cultural legacy;therefore, it is meaningful to conserve the art for the cultural diversity.For example, painting in different culture has a range of styles, genres, tools and materials.If we did not protect it, a form of art would be disappeared.Besides, some work of art such as graffiti, spark people’s imaginations and provide them a novel perspective to view the world.The arts can develop a culture which people pursue art as a hobby.Furthermore, arts also improved the environment attractive, which is reflected in architecture and gardening design.Body paragraph B

Although arts are very important, we observe public facilities should get more subsidy than arts from government.Citizens are more interested in the availability of public facilities, such as, water and electricity supply, schools, libraries and roads, these facilities have a direct impact on their daily lives.By contrast, for most people, sculptures, paintings or operas are luxury items, which cannot bring any tangible benefit to them.Another reason is that the arts can sometimes yield high returns and therefore succeed in receiving business sponsorship.This is particularly the cause when arts include music, movies, operas and creative arts.Therefore, it is pointless to support the use of public funds for this purpose, if basic facilities are underfunded.

第五篇：雅思小作文

IELTS套句式写作大全

第一部分：TASK1图表写作套句精选

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that...该柱状图展示了...3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding...该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows(that)...该图向我们展示了...5.the pie graph depicts(that)....该圆形图揭示了...6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show(that)...数据（字）表明...8.the tree diagram reveals how...该树型图向我们揭示了如何...9.the data/statistics show(that)...该数据（字）可以这样理解...10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...这些数据资料令我们得出结论...11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...如图所示...12.according to the chart/figures...根据这些表（数字）...13.as is shown in the table...如表格所示...14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in...从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到...16.this is a graph which illustrates...这个图表向我们展示了...17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19.this is a column chart showing...这是个柱型图，描述了...20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of...如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21.over the period from...to...the...remained level.在...至...期间，...基本不变。

22.in the year between...and...在...年到...期间...23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...1995年至1998三年里...24.from then on/from this time onwards...从那时起...25.the number of...remained steady/stable from(month/year)to(month/year)....月(年)至...月（年)...的数量基本不变。

26.the number sharply went up to...数字急剧上升至...27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and......至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year)

...的数目在...月（年）达到顶点，为...29.the percentage remained steady at...比率维持在...30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of......的比例比...的比例略高（低）。

31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and......与...的区别不大。

32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily....逐年减少，而...逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at)of[%]....的情况（局势）到达顶（高）点，为...百分点。

35.the figures/situation bottomed out in...数字（情况）在...达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough.数字（情况）达到底部（低谷）。

37.a is...times as much/many as b.a是b的...倍。

38.a increased by...a增长了...39.a increased to...a增长到...40.high/low/great/small/ percentage.比低高（低）

41.there is an upward trend in the number of......数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to......到...发生急剧上升。

43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down.从...到...，下降速率减慢。

44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the...,reaching a figure of...从这年起，...逐渐下降至...45.be similar to...与...相似

46.be the same as...与...相同

47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and......与...之间有许多相似（不同）之处

48.a has something in common with b

a于b有共同之处。

49.the difference between a and b lies in...a与b之间的差别在于...50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in......年...急剧上升。

第二部分：Task1 写作常识

一、图形种类及概述法：

泛指一份数据图表：a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table

饼图：pie chart

直方图或柱形图：bar chart / histogram

趋势曲线图：line chart / curve diagram

表格图：table

流程图或过程图：flow chart / sequence diagram

程序图：processing/procedures diagram

以下是一些较常用的描述用法

The table/chart diagram/graph shows(that)

According to the table/chart diagram/graph

As(is)shown in the table/chart diagram/graph

As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures,figures/statistics shows(that)...It can be seen from the figures/statistics

We can see from the figures/statistics

It is clear from the figures/statistics

It is apparent from the figures/statistics

table/chart/diagram/graph figures(that)...table/chart/diagram/graph shows/describes/illustrates how

......阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的，因此文章必须逻辑清晰，如果描述得能令人在脑海里勾画出那个data chart，这篇task1无疑会达到8分的水平。开篇的第一句话可以是一句高度概

括性的introduction（当然开门见山直接描述也是一种写法）；这样做不仅使文章更趋于完美，而且可以达到凑字数的目的（但不要照抄题目，除非时间相当紧迫）。接下来另起一段开始进行描述（根据实际情况1-2段），这当中经常要连续使用非限定性定于从句，从而使得描述过程流畅、清晰。最后也可再另起一段进行简短的综述（并非必须）。上述的任何一个步骤都要遵循依据现有data进行客观描述的原则，任何推测性或议论性的内容写得再多、再精彩不仅不会加分，而且还会成为扣分的因素。

二、data的具体表达法

data在某一个时间段固定不变：fixed in time

在一系列的时间段中转变：changes over time

持续变化的data在不同情况下:

增加：increase / raise / rise / go up...减少：decrease / grow down / drop / fall...波动：fluctuate / rebound / undulate / wave...稳定：remain stable / stabilize / level off...最常用的两种表达法：

动词 + 副词形式（Verb+Adverb form）

形容词 + 名词形式（Adjective+Noun form）

1.Verb+Adverb form

The number of XXX

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuate...+insignificantly/significantly/slightly/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steeply/steadily/gradually/slowly...+from(第一时间)to(第二时间)/ between(第一时间)and(第二时间)

2.Adjective+Noun form

There was a(very)sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuation（注意：上述很多词不可用于修饰fluctuation）

+in the number of XXX from(第一时间)to(第二时间)/ between(第一时间)and(第二时间)

描述稳定的data：

The number of XXX remained steady/stable from(第一时间)to(第二时间)/ between(第一时间)and(第二时间)

The number of XXX stayed the same from(第一时间)to(第二时间)/ between(第一时间)and(第二时间)

There was little change / hardly any change / no change in the number of XXX from from(第一时间)to(第二时间)/ between(第一时间)and(第二时间)

描述不同状态的data

Noun form:

steady drop / sharp rise peak / dramatic fall / sharp drop

Verbal form:

(to)bottom out /(to)reach the bottom /(to)increase gradually /(to)reach a plateau /(to)remain steady

描述the highest point以及the lowest point

高点极值：

The monthly profit / The figures / The situation...+peaked in(月份/年)<准确时间点用at XXX> at XXX% / XXX(极点data)

或者reached a peak / a high point at XXX% / XXX(极点data)

低点极值：

XXX bottomed out / reached

+rock / the bottom / a low point

或者hit a trough

此外，在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences，最常用的固定搭配如下：并列： as well as(句首/中), also, as well(句尾), either, neither, too, moreover, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what's more, apart from...举例： for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially

事实： as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as...雷同/近似：similarly, likewise(句首/尾), at the same time, equally...转折： however, whereas, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, although, even though, while, yet, on the contrary, contrarily, in contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlikely, in stead(of), in spite of, despite of...原因与结果

1.cause-suggestion(几乎不常用)

since / now that...;I hope that...because of/on account of/owing to/thanks to +(doing)sth, I hope that...2.cause-effect(较常用)

XXX lead to / bring about / result in/ account for...(一个句子), therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently /(and)so...3.effect-cause(较常用)

XXX be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of...(一个句子), because...it is adj.that...it is unimaginable that...it is undeniable that...it is interesting to discover that...三、其它相关常用词（组）

1.主章开头

图表类型：table;chart;diagram;graph;column chart;pie graph

描述：show;describe;illustrate;can be seen from;clear;apparent;reveal;represent内容：figure;statistic;number;percentage;proportion

2.表示数据

一般：have 10%;at 10%;over 10%

最高（低）点：peaked;reached a peak / high point

bottomed out;reached the bottom

变化：recover 略有回升； increase;jump;rise/rose;climb

decrease;fall/fell;drop;decline;reduce

fluctuate 浮动，摇摆不定

remained steady/stable;stay the same;little/hardly any /no change

变化程度：sudden/suddenly 突然的，意外的rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的significant/significantly 有意义的，重大的，重要的sharp/sharply 锐利的，明显的，急剧的steep/steeply 急剧升降的steady/steadily 稳固的，坚定不移的gradual/gradually 渐进的，逐渐的slow/slowly 缓慢的，不活跃的slight/slightly轻微的、略微地

stable/stably 稳定的表示范围：from XXX to XXX;between XXX and XXX;for XXX to XXX多长时间直到

表示程度：almost adv.几乎，差不多

nearly adv.几乎，密切地

approximately adv.近似的，大约

about adv.附近，大约，转向，左右，周围

just over 刚超过

over adv.结束，越过，从头到尾

exactly adv.正确地，严密地

precisely adv.正好 精确地；清晰地

比例：20 per cent 20%

one in three 1/3

one out of every four 1/4

3.其它在描述中的常用到的词

significant changes 图中一些较大变化

noticeable trend 明显趋势

during the same period 在同一时期

grow/grew 增长

distribute 分布，区别

unequally 不相等地

pronounced 明显的average平均

no doubt 无疑地

corresponding adj.相应的，通讯的represent vt.阐述，表现

overall 总体上讲

except 除外

in the case of adv.在...的情况下

in terms of / in respect of / regarding 在...方面in contrast 相反，大不相同

in conclusion adv.最后，总之

in comparison 相比之下

inversely adv.相反地，倒转地

in general 通常，大体上，一般而言

range from

excessive adj.过多的，过分的，额外lower v.降低，跌落

elapse vi.（时间）过去，消逝

category n.种类

government policy 政府政策

market forces 市场规率

measure n.尺寸，方法，措施 v.估量，调节forecast n.先见，预见 v.预测