长沙优速作文辅导中心高考阅读和作文冲刺辅导内容

第一篇：长沙优速作文辅导中心高考阅读和作文冲刺辅导内容

长沙优速作文辅导中心

高考阅读和作文冲刺辅导内容

“培优教育”经过3年时间研发出的优速作文教学法，交叠运用多种审题方法、构思方法、行文方法、修改方法，通过“激活思维”“头脑风暴” “灵光闪耀”等十余种思维训练，迅速提高学生写作水平。

本中心为全国作文奥赛写作辅导站，辅导的学生有几十人在全国作文奥赛中获一、二、三等奖。

1.文言文阅读（2010年高考分值22分）。

2.现代文（论述类、实用类文章）阅读（2010年高考分值12分）。

了解论述类文章与实用类文章（传记、新闻、报告、科普文章等）的文体基本特征和主要表现手法，准确解读文本，筛选、整合信息，分析思想内容、构成要素、语言特色和主要表现手法，评价文本产生的社会功用，探讨文本反映的人生价值和时代精神。

3.现代文（文学类文章）阅读（2010年高考分值22分）。

阅读鉴赏中外文学作品，了解小说、散文、诗歌、戏剧等文学体裁的基本特征及主要表现手法。阅读鉴赏，应注重审美体验，能感受形象，品味语言，领悟内涵，分析艺术表现力；能理解作品反映的社会生活和情感世界，探索作品蕴含的民族心理和人文精神。

4.高考第六大题选做题，2小题，考生任选一题作答（2010年高考分值6分）。本部分为二选一的形式，一是“文化经典”，二是“时文短评”，均为主观题，答案100字左右，5.高考第七大题：写作，60分。

能写论述类、实用类和文学类文章。

表达应用 E

作文考试的要求分为基础等级和发展等级。

1．基础等级

（1）符合题意

（2）符合文体要求

（3）感情真挚，思想健康

（4）内容充实，中心明确

（5）语言通顺，结构完整

（6）标点正确，不写错别字*

2．发展等级

（1）深刻

透过现象深入本质，揭示事物内在的因果关系，观点具有启发作用。

（2）丰富

材料丰富，论据充实，形象丰满，意境深远。

（3）有文采

用词贴切，句式灵活，善于运用修辞手法，文句有表现力。

（4）有创新

见解新颖，材料新鲜，构思新巧，推理想象有独到之处，有个性色彩。

*每一个错别字扣1分。重复的不计分。

以上阅读和作文高考分值共为122分（试卷满分150分）。

第二篇：高考语文作文辅导《痕迹》

同学们，以下文章片断只是供你打开思路之用！仅供参考！

痕迹

雁过留声，人过留名。这声、这名，便是痕迹。其实万物皆如是。

——题记

春蚕死了，却留下了华丽的羽裳；那羽裳便是蚕的痕迹。夏荷残了，却留下了溢清的芬芳；那芬芳便是荷的痕迹。秋菊谢了，却留下了“人比黄花瘦”的感伤；那感伤便是菊的痕迹。冬梅落了，却留下了“玉雪为骨冰为魂”的风骨，这风骨便是梅的痕迹。

当雪花满天飞舞；当空中云卷云舒；当大海潮起潮平；当庭前花开花落；大自然用昼夜四季向我们诠释更替，又让万物都留下它们自身或大或小，或多或少的痕迹。这其中，最醒目的还应数人类的痕迹。

说起人类的痕迹，自然而然地便会想起一连串光辉的名字，一连串辉煌的成就，宛若碧天里的星星，夺目，绚丽。

屈原“怀白壁自投汨罗以死”；那忧愁幽思的《离骚》是他的痕迹。那“举世皆浊而我独清，众人皆醉而我独醒”的愤慨亦是他的痕迹。他文学的痕迹，更是他不与世俗同流合污的高尚品德的痕迹。

杜甫穷死在湘江上的一条小船里，那悲天悯人的呐喊：“安得广厦千万间”是他的痕迹，那推己及人的关照：“堂前扑枣任西邻，无食无儿一妇人”亦是他的痕迹。他诗赋的痕迹，更是他关心人民、忠君爱国的痕迹。

《哈姆雷特》是莎士比亚的痕迹；《红楼梦》是曹雪芹的痕迹；《最后的晚餐》是达·芬奇的痕迹；戈壁中的绿洲是席宝力皋的痕迹„„

高楼大厦是建筑师的痕迹；华冠丽服是服装师的痕迹；救死扶伤是白衣天使的痕迹„„ 不禁要思考，什么才是我的痕迹？与这茫茫大千世界相比，顿感自身甚是渺小、微不足道。但是我相信，我也是有痕迹的，属于我的痕迹。掉下的第一颗牙齿，那是成长的痕迹；第一次在年龄一栏填18岁，那是成人的痕迹；迈出象牙塔的第一步，那是成材的痕迹。当我走上工作岗位，我还会留下新的痕迹。（此处需要详细）

我依然是我，一个渺小的我，于人海中留着我的痕迹，也许没有人察觉，没有人在意，更不会彪炳史册，但他都存在着。

《柳暗花明》写作指导：

“柳暗花明“文题出处是南宋陆游《游山西村》的名句：“山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村。”“柳暗花明”文题的题意隐含在前句“山重水复疑无路”中。诗人在青翠可掬的山峦中漫步，清碧的溪泉在曲折溪流中汩汩穿行，草木愈见浓

茂，蜿蜒山路愈见依稀难认。可正在迷茫之际，突然看见几座农家村落，隐含在柳阴花草间，诗人不胜惊喜。显而易见，陆游在这首诗里蕴含着深刻的理趣，对未来充满希望。

了解文题的出处及诗句的意义，考生可以从两个层面去构思作文：第一层面写景状物，表现出“柳暗花明”的自然美景，人间仙境。第二层面写出“柳暗花明”的哲理意，人生的某些境遇，与诗句描写十分相似，山回路转，扑朔迷离，路在何方？于是顿生茫茫之感。但只要锲而不舍，继续前行，忽然间眼前出现一线亮光，再往前行，豁然开朗，发现一个前所未有的新天地。这就是诗句给人的启发。它已超越自然景色描写的范围，具有很强的艺术生命力。

考生还可联想到毛泽东领导中国革命的发展道路，从秋收起义到井冈山，从井冈山到二万五千里长征，从二万五千里长征到胜利到达陜北，再从陜北到全国革命的胜利，就是在“山重水复”和“柳暗花明”交替变化的发展中前进。考生还可写改革开放三十年成就，中国人走出“文革”阴影到打开国门，从打破计划经济体制到建立市场经济体制，也是从“山重水复”走向“柳暗花明”。

考生还可联想到人们在探讨学问，研究问题时，也往往会有这种境遇。通过层层类比联想，考生的写作思路便会进入到“柳暗花明”的境地。

无论写人生、还是写中国革命方面的内容，在反映世间事物消长变化的哲理主题时，应辩证地看到，事物可能从正方向发展，由“山重水复”到“柳暗花明”，也可向负方向发展，由“柳暗花明”到“山重水复”。审清这方面题意，无论记叙或议论，考生都可在800字的天地里，让自己的才思尽情地翱翔。

第三篇：高考语文作文专题辅导1

高考语文作文专题辅导（1）

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阜宁县明达中学高三语文备课组崔巍嵩

在近年高考作文的影响下，“话题作文”满天飞，似有一统天下的趋势。于是乎，经众多备考专家的探究和倡导，“大散文”（实际上是“大杂文”）的写作形式成了考场上的流行色，议时政、论文化、侃人生、谈生存等，成了文章内容的“座上宾”，其余的似乎难登大雅之堂，因为，在很多人看来，小人物、小事情、小感受很难表达心中的大道理、深思考；自然，“假”、“大”、“空”作为学生作文的典型现象成了中学作文教学中备受抨击的一大“症结”，相应地，传统的文体写作特别是记叙文的写作也就成了作文教学的“真空”。试问，有多少老师在真诚倡导并实践着“以我手写我心”的写作理念？有多少学生真正关注了自己过去和现在的生活点滴？有多少师生真正实践着记叙文的写作？又有多少学生能写出富有真情实感的记叙文？

其实，无论考试作文怎么变，记叙文写作是关键；合格的表达首先从记叙开始。既然如此，怎样才能写好记叙文？成功的记叙文又应具有哪些特质？

一要体现“记叙”性质。

所谓记叙文，即记人或叙事的文章。记人或叙事，二者必居其一，但又不能以此否定另一面，因为人与事往往是交织在一起的：人物形象的刻画和塑造须得以事情为依托，事情的过程又得靠人这一行为主体来推动；当然，人可以是“虚拟化”的人，譬如动物、自然物或想象物等。所以，判断一篇文章是否是（合格的）记叙文，就要看它是否塑造了一个完整的人物或叙述了一个完整的事情。例如下文：

长在水底的眷念

那时，她和几个女生坐在草坪上，聊着家乡，眸子里满是眷念的神采。湖区夏日在她的描述下成了最美的风景，几个女生叽叽喳喳地说，假期要随她去摘莲藕。就连在不远处看书的同班男生磊，也突然插话说他也想去。而她爽快地统统答应。

麻雀女生的承诺，似是刹那花开的美丽。

假期来临，女生们各自飞散，只有磊背着行囊，在她楼下痴痴地等。她下了楼，他鼓起勇气，迎上去道了声“嗨！”她礼貌地回了一声，却在他面前轻快地跳了起来，挥舞着红色旅游帽，眼神闪亮地冲着他身后大喊：“这边！”

磊转过头，看见了她的爱情。同班男生林在他身后。林比他高，比他帅气。磊看着她小鹿一样从他身边跳过去，眼神一点点黯淡。她和林牵了手回她的家乡，去看荷。

翌年仍是。她与林奔向快乐，而另一个男人陷入黑暗。

转眼又是来年。在她楼下的等待竟成空，去找林，却见林正挽着另一个女孩的手。女孩年轻的身体紧挨着林。她嗫嚅着问林去不去看荷？林却冷冷地低声说，那些残荷他已看厌，然后挽着女孩离去。落下她伤心哭泣，仿佛世界变成无底深渊。

“我可以陪你去看荷吗？”一个男孩的声音在耳边响起。她擦了擦眼，看见磊期待的眼神，那样熟悉。

湖还是万顷清波，荷还是连天如碧，只是已错过素手采红莲的季节。她的假期，其实荷花已谢了，莲蓬也难觅。往年还会有快乐，今朝却唯余凄惨。

磊见她神情凄惨，突然跳到没腰的湖水里。她不明白他要做什么，那片残荷里既无芙蓉一瓣，也无莲蓬一朵。磊潜下水底，不久上岸，手里竟有一支白白、嫩嫩、胖胖的莲藕。

磊说，虽然荷花一年年开了又谢，莲藕却一直悄悄地长着。

那一刻，她灿然地笑了。因为她突然明白：属于她的那一份最美的眷恋，原来一直在水底悄悄地生长，并结成果实。

点 评：文章讲述的是一个很美的青春故事，故事情节简单但完整，人物形象叙述简洁但又颇为鲜明，人与事和谐交织，记叙文的特质表现充分。

二要强化“背景”和细节的设置。

记叙文中，人物的活动不是单一的几个动作、几句话语，事情的叙述也不宜直来直去，“一气呵成”，不然，文章就会显得平板、干瘪，行文缺乏波澜。好的记叙文，人物活动、情节展开必然是建立在一定的背景之下，这一“背景”就是呈现人物、事件的舞台。背景，就是我们平时强调的环境；强化“背景”设置，就是强化环境描写。可以说，好的环境描写不仅能渲染人事氛围，增强文字的情感色彩，而且使行文富有曲折的美感。同样，人物活动，情节推进，也离不开细节，尤其是人物的性格思想，往往就是靠几个细节来完成的。因此，强化典型的细节也非常必要。例如下文：

答卷

飞飞扬扬的雪飘了一夜，刺骨的寒风丝毫不给人们驻足的机会，折断的枯枝插进雪中咯吱咯吱作响。山沟里的早晨是如此的冷清、静寂。

村头的路口边开始有人影在晃动了——那是二憨在打扫大路的积雪了。这是全村唯一能够通汽车的路。记得十年前，二憨为了给母亲治病，就是偷了停在这条路上的一辆卡车上的铜线，才被送进那一个人住的阴森森的“大房子”里的；三年前，也正是从“大房子”出来，走在这条路上，二憨听到了母亲过世两年的噩耗，那时，光着头的他跪在了这条路上。

现在，二憨在村中无依无靠，只有每天守着路口，打扫打扫清洁，勉强在村中混得口饭吃，可村里的人总看他不顺眼，见了他或是指指划划，或是“敬”而远之，尤其是村中一有什么不见了，就特别爱怀疑二憨，这让二憨实在是有口难言。

“唰——啪”，二憨把雪堆到路边，雪堆的样子看上去像是一个可爱的小孩，正在注视着这位手脸已冻得通红的小叔。天儿实在太冷了，路上好不容易过来两个人，二憨慢慢地抬起头，朝那边喊了一声：“喂，村里有人进城吗?”那两人却不理会他，反而转身朝山上的小路径直摸去，隐约间，他仿佛看见两人扛了一件什么东西。二憨甚是惊异，这大冷的天，天又蒙蒙亮，谁会朝那雪岭里去？况且山里的野兽饿了一个冬天，正等着美餐送上口来呢!不行，要去帮帮他们，想到这里，二憨向山上追去。不想那二人见有人追来，竟越走越快，二憨感到事情不妙，加快了步伐„„

终于追上了。

“你们干什么，走这么快，把这箱子抬到哪儿去?”

那两人没有说什么，却转过身向他扑了过来。二憨拼命反击。衣服撕裂声在雪中格外地清晰，二憨的鲜血在雪地上格外地殷红，他的呼吸在风中越来越微弱„„

当二憨用最后一口气将箱子抱到村委会门口时，他看见眼前红色的人们，却没有谁来搀扶他，当他在雪地上已不能动弹的时候，二憨的一生就像这一片小小的雪花，在村里的天空飞了起来，在山沟里的天空飞了起来，飘落在路口的雪堆上，化成一个句号，圈在这一段路的末尾„„

点 评：一条山路，演绎了主人公二憨的一生。在这条山路上，十年前的情形、今晨的经历都显得很简单，只需几句话就可叙述清楚；但读后并不觉得文章简单，相反倒是曲折有致，而且韵味十足，这与文中的环境和细节描写分不开。如果把这些背景性和细节性语句删去，结果会如何，读者不妨一试。

三要挖掘典型意义。

记叙文，记人或叙事是基础，但所写的人或事又必须具有一定的典型性，作者总得通过文中的人或事传达某种情感或思考，这就是人事的典型意义。很多记叙文，读后总觉得缺少点什么，更难说打动人心，很大程度上是没有挖掘出人与事中的典型意义。从这一角度讲，缺乏典型意义的人与事是没有写作价值的，不宜进入行文中。例如下文：

妈妈的等待

我回到家，母亲在剥豌豆。“考差了吧！”母亲叫我一起坐。“是啊，又考差了。”“来一起剥豌豆吧，你一碗，我一碗，看谁快！”

剥豆子是我幼时很爱玩的一个游戏，因为每次剥豆子母亲总是让我赢。“妈，算了吧，又不是六七岁的孩子了。”“怎么能说不是孩子呢？”“好，我知道在你眼里我永远是孩子，我玩就是了。”

我不经意地随便剥着，想起了小时候母亲和我剥豆子的情景。每次我总是用小手努力地剥着，却怎么也追不上母亲，母亲看着我便放慢了速度等我，就像百米赛跑时，母亲总是等候在终点线前等我跑过来然后让我跑过终点线自己再跑过去祝我跑了第一。母亲总是这样，等候着我穿衣，我吃饭，我放学。

而现在，突然发现母亲碗里的豆子还没有我的多。母亲老了，不再拥有令人骄傲的青春，除了这个一直让母亲等候的我，她什么都没剩下。我开始放慢速度，就像母亲等我一样，我决定让母亲赢一次，让母亲接受一次我的等待。

“哈哈！看来你要加油啊！还没有我这个老婆子剥得多。”“好啊，我一定要赶上你！”说这话的同时，我的动作更加迟缓了。可是，母亲也更加慢了，她分明是在刻意地等我！我终于明白，母亲不会赢我的，因为在她的心中，我永远是那个需要她等待去照顾的孩子。

最终，我选择了和母亲同时结束这个游戏。母亲笑了，我也笑了。母亲笑是因为我的胜利，我笑却是因为我完成了今生第一次的我的等候。

今生第一次等候，一定不会是最后一次。于是，在那以后，我总是在出门前等候着母亲与我同行；吃饭时总是等候着母亲就座；等候母亲逛街，扶着母亲搀着母亲。我明白，在我和母亲的人生长跑路上，我永远偿还不完母亲，因为母亲给予我的等候实在太多太多，她用了她的一生来等候着我。

朋友，等候你的母亲吧！她们已没有太多时候让你来等候了。记住，给即将滑落的叶子以承诺和行动，不要让它们苦等了一个漫长的冬季。

点评：很明显，作者借与母亲剥豆子比赛这一事，表达了母爱和回报母爱的主题。所叙之事来源生活，让人感到亲切可信；文意突出而且典型，易让读者产生共鸣。

第四篇：2014高考英语辅导：作文万能公式

高考英语辅导：作文范文万能公式

对比观点题型

(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1.有一些人认为...2.另一些人认为...3.我的看法...The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥

------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一).For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2.分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that

----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that

---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1.问题现状

2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明A的现状).Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1.说明事物现状

2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3.你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的优点之一).Besides-------------------(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测).)

议论文的框架

(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一

_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, If irmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文

It is well known to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the

table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily

rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show

________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.实用性写作(申请信)

Your address

Month, Date, year

Receiver's address

Dear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest

convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,X X X

书面表达是主观题中的个性题，它主要考核学生利用书面表述进行交际的能力。书面表达的应对策略可概括为三个步骤和八字方针。

三个步骤指：1.列―――排查信息要点，根据逻辑关系排列信息表述的次序;

2.述――根据信息特点，寻找最地道、自己最熟悉的英文表达结构方式;

3.连――用恰如其分的过渡连接词语将语句连接起来，然后再写到试卷上。

八字方针指：1.式(注重文章的格式，必要时需要特定的格式语言);

2.时(确定文章的主线时态，和辅助时态);

3.字(用自己最有把握的单词，学会避开自己不会表达的单词或转换表达方式);

4.词(固定短语、成语、习语表达必须准确到位，否则宁可简单表述);

5.句(句子结构必须地道、清晰可辨、成分完备，切忌汉语式表达);

6.段(表述要层次分明，顺承逻辑关系，切莫本末倒置，结构混乱);

7.章(文章应整体结构合理，过渡自然，前后呼应);

8.面(誊写字迹规范工整，卷面清洁，具有美感)。

根据八字方针，三个步骤的时间分配可以为3分钟、5分钟、7分钟来进行，当然，如果是英语基础厚实且训练有素的考生，可以在10分钟内完成。此外，一篇成功的英语作文应该有一两个亮点句子―――即恰如其分的复合结构或非谓语动词结构，既不要为写所谓的高级句子而把语言结构搞得混乱不堪，也不要把信息点以简单句方式一一罗列，成了一种形似而神不似的大白话。

首先，可以把考生根据分数划分为两类：一类是英语平均分在90分左右，写作基础较差的，另一类是英语平均分在125分左右，写作基础较好的。

对于第一类考生，首先应该保证自己能够拿到书面表达的平均分。这样的考生在写作的时候可以采用一些写作的套路。每次写作前问自己4个问题：这篇文章的体裁格式怎样?主体时态用什么时态?人称用第几人称?可以分几段，之间用什么过渡词、连接词?带着这4个问题去审题，搞清楚文章的主要内容，然后列出提纲。考生可以记住下面的顺口溜：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏;写日记，同汉语;书信、通知格式要牢记;看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序;完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。对于第二类考生，要想拿到高分甚至是满分，除了要表达正确以外还有一个很重要要求的就是要有能足够展示你英语水平的句子，必须有意识去使用一些较高级地道的句型和词汇。

进入考场之前，考生可先演练好自己总结的十大精品句型，如：定语从句，强调句型，so„„that，„„so that„„，too„„to„„，neither„„nor„„，either„„or„„，the more„„the more„„，not„„until„„，not only„„but also„„同时准备好十大连接词，如：what’s more，furthermore，moreover，however，nevertheless，whereas，therefore，on the other hand，afterwards，in a word等等。考场上有机会用到其中的一两个闪光点，就可能有机会得到加分。

最后一段复习时间，考生可以按照写、改、背的规律有计划地练习英语书面表达。有针对性地写10篇高考英语作文，然后自己或者请老师把这些作文改成满分作文，然后背下来。最后，希望考生记住“优秀是一种习惯”。千万不要认

为练习的时候可以随便写，等考试时再认真去做。练习10篇作文以后，自然可以很自信地迎接考试。

第五篇：冲刺2011年中考英语作文辅导

冲刺2011年中考英语作文辅导

中考英语作文在整个英语考试中有着举足轻重的地位，作文质量的好与差，得分悬殊很大如何写好英语作文给考生带来了很大的困扰。

思路：

审好题

仔细审查所给的内容提示（包括文字和图表等），明确要求写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。

看要点，写片段

对于易于表达的内容，一次成句；对于一时难于表达的内容，写出词组。此时，既注意不遗漏内容要点，也不要随意添加任何内容。

步骤：

定句型，连词成句

这个环节是成文的关键，一定要注意做到：

（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了„„”时，可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。

（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。

（3）表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话，用变通的方法，以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话，表达起来似乎很难，但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来：Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.（4）尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”，不可写成：Shesleptvery late.应该写成：Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”，不可写成：Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反，表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是：Heisnot a bit worried about his English.或：He isnotworried about his English at all.连词成句，添减相宜

单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。

即：文章的开头（Introduction）、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中，还要注意以下几点：

（1）句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻辑思维方面的问题，这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点，你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。

（2）为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等，表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等，表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等，表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile，while等，表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。>

（3）仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套，给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要，与整个文章浑然一体。

尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。

检查，修改，定稿，誊写

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：

（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。

（2）体裁格式对不对。

（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

（4）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。

（5）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。

经典题例

下面以今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例，谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。

原题介绍

目前，扬州正在创建()全国文明城市（NationalCivilizationCity）。作为一个中学生，我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢？我们又如何为这个活动作贡献（makecontributionto）呢？请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。2011年新经典中考英语作文 关注时事

H1N1流感

★ 范文01.根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

世界上已有许多国家发现了新型H1N1流感病毒（H1N1 flu virus）病例。据了解，人感染该病毒后会出现咳嗽、发烧、疲劳等症状。为了加强同学们的预防意识，（21世纪中学生英语报》正在举办征文活动，请你给该报投稿，描述感染该病毒的症状并谈一谈为了预防该病毒我们该怎么做，最后表达我们能战胜病毒的信心。提示词：cough，have a fever，feel tired，prevent，wash，exercise，sleep，believe

Nowadays，many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus.It’s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough，have a fever and feel tired.To prevent the virus，we can do many things.Firstly，we’d better not go to places where there are many people.Secondly，we need to wash our hands often with soap and water，especially after we cough or sneeze.It‘s also a good habit for us to exercise regularly.It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness.And having a good sleep is important，too.People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily.And then，eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong.Last but not least，open the window and keep the air in the room fresh.If we all do these things，we will prevent the virus.So there is no need to be worried.I believe we will win through in the end.上海世博会

★ 范文02.上海世博会对中国的影响

As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai，this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held

该文章转载自无忧考网：http://www.xiexiebang.come more exciting and attractive and that we can enjoy life to the fullest.Organizers expected to attract 70 million visitors from all over the world to attend，at the same time it is also the largest in the history of World Expo.It is a good chance for China to show its achievements in many fields.玉树地震

★ 范文03.玉树地震

The earthquake in Yushu

An earthquake happened on April 14th in the Yushu county of Qinghai province.There are many people died in this earthquake.When we heard the news，we were all shocked and sad.But when I think of Wenchuan，I believe that people in Yushu are not alone，because we，all the Chinese，will be with them.We should try our best to help people in Yushu.I will take actions to help the people，such as donating money and things they need for them.And we should make friends with homeless children and cheer them up.If possible，I want to be a volunteer in Yushu and help them build the new house！I hope that they can overcome the disaster and lead happy lives in their rebuilt home soon.★ 范文04.How to Survive an Earthquake

If earthquake happened，firstly，don’t panic and calm down.Secondly，find some safe place to stay and don‘t run in s uch a hurry.If in the room，one should hide himself/herself under something hard，such as desk，table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard，and never take a lift to go downstairs.If in the open air，find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.Thirdly，we should help each other when we meet trouble.At last，no matter how strong the earthquake is，if only we have the belief to defeat it and never give up，we must be able to overcome any difficulties.2011年中考英语作文预测及范文 保护环境

从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

内容包含：

1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;

2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;

3.离开教室应关灯;

4.最好走路或骑自行车上学;

5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等

注意：

1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。

4.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.___________________________________________________

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

参考作文：

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse(再利用)the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What‟s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities(日常活动)can make a real difference to(对„有影响)the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

5、.环境问题：

今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。

提示：存在问题: 1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾等。

要求：如何改善/保护环境? 至少:3---4个方面，80字左右的。

范文：

How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is pouring(排出)dirty air into the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster , resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People‟s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle(回收), reduce(减少), reuse(再利用)things.Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world will be more an d more beautiful.6、为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。

提示词：

1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;

2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines;

3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;

4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources

参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.(水是生命之源)No water, no life.(没有水，就没有生命)So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we(我们不仅应该„)protect drinking-water(饮用水)and stop polluting it, but also make full use of(充分利用)it.Save electricity.It is crucial(关键的，至关重要的).We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines(电器)when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要。

典型例句：

1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数

One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in

WenChuan.2.It“s our duty to do sth

It‟s our duty to help them.3.As….as possible

We shoud help them as much as possible.4.here be„。.Here are lots of things we can do.5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。

6.make +sb+ 形容词

It makes many people homeless.7.too … to= so … that

They are too young to look after themselves

例文：

1、汶川大地震

2008年5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。

要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右;

词汇参考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感动be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth

参考范文：

On May 12th，a big earthquake happened in Wenchun，Sichuan.Many people lost

their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of

people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them，some people buy

something for them，some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of

soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign

friends also give them a hand.I‟m deeply moved by these people.So I‟ll use my pocket money to buy some

f food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best

to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪灾

2008年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？

As we know，our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival.Everything

was covered with heavy snow.It made the buses，trains and planes stop.Millions

of people couldn”t go home.Many people suffered trouble.There was no food，water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against

heavy snow.As a student，I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study

hard at school.We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland

stronger，better and richer.3.甲型HINI流感

从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu），部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。

要点：

一。询问

1.他的健康状况;

2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）;

3.他们是否还上学。

二。建议

1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;

2.勤洗手;讲卫生

3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜;

4.多吃水果蔬菜。

Dear Mike，From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result.I‟m so worried about you.Are you

alright？ Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school？ Do you still have to school

everyday？

To stay away fr om the disease，you’d better stay at home as much as possible

and not go to places where there are many people.Wash your hands more often to

keep them clean;Open the window to have more fresh air in the room;And eat

more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be.Do be at ease！Take care

and you‟ll be OK.Yours truly，Li Hua

中考英语作文范文：健康问题，健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。

健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。

典型例句：

1.It is very important to keep healthy。

2.How can we keep healthy?

3.We can“t go to sleep too late.We can”t get up too late。

4.We should eat the food healthily。

5.We should do more exercise。

6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。

7.I didn“t feel like eating anything。

8.I decided to see the doctor。

9.In the doctor”s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。

10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。

11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful。

12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。

13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。

例文：

1、根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考答案：

All of us want to be healthy.First，we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don‟t feel well, we should d go to see the doctor at once.2、卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。

(1)保持健康的重要性

(2)保持健康的方法

(3)保持健康的结论

(4)(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯

范文1:

Dear boys and grils :

Here is my advice about how to keep health / fit.As a middle shool student , first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals.Don‟t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn‟t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you,bye!

范文2:

Dear boys and girls:

I’m talking about how to keep health/fit.Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise, eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep.If we wish to keep fit, my advices are as follow:

Firstly, we must keep taking exercises every day , and eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Secondly, try to sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember to “early to bed early to rise”.Finally, stay away from cigarettes / smoking/ drugs毒品.Besides(除此之外), don’t forget to breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用)

有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

范文：

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn‟t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy

something which they like to eat.But I‟m afraid that it‟s bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school, because some of the food they buy isn‟t healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.多彩校园

学校简介

★ 范文13.在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以Proud of My School 请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括学校面貌，你在校的活动，以及你喜欢学校的原因。

提示词：bigsmall，trees，play games，family，be kind to，befeel proud of

Proud of my school

My school is very big with several tall buildings.We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it.There are many flowers everywhere.My busy school life always makes me happy.I have lots of fun at school.I not only have all kinds of classes，but also take part in colorful activities after classes.I play games and do lots of sports，like playing basketball，football and table tennis.I love my school because it‟s like a big family.The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.I„m leaving my school.I‟ll never forget the days I„ve spent here.友情至上

★ 范文14.假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏。请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信。注意：1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；2.信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；提示词语：thank you，at the end of，kind，forget，help„ with，stay in touch

Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term，I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a w week.When I was worrying about the lessons，you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help，I didn’t fall behind others.Since then，we have become very close friends.I think I’ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools，I’ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you success for the future.Yours，Liu Yan

课余活动

★ 范文15.体育锻炼与参加夏令营

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week，some do less than one hour.As for me，most of my sports time is for running.Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me.I think it’s necessary for everyone to go out to do sports because it’s good for our health and study.And I’d love to take part in the summer camp.First we’d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better.Next we can visit some museums，places of interest to open our eyes.Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families.I think it’s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries.I really want to make friends with foreign students because we’re in the same world.At the same time，the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.运动会

★ 范文16.一家英文报社正在举办征文活动，请你积极参加。题目是“一次难忘的运动会”。内容要求：你或你的朋友参加了什么项目，结果怎样，感觉如何？提示词语：year，take part in，field event（relay race，high jump，long jump，shot put，excited，take the first prize.This year，I took part in the relay race，I was running the last lap.It was the final event on sports meet.Everyone was paying attention.All the runners got ready at the starting line.As soon as the race began，everyone was too excited to stop cheering.When it was my turn，I could feel the Class 4’s runner catch up with me.So I try my best to run faster，finally，our class won the first prize in the most exciting event.I was happy that I won another prize for my class.This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.毕业感想

★ 范文17.初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。

提示词供参考。three years，memories，one of，one day，think，happy/ sorry

How time flies！I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years’ life.On of them impressed me very much.I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then，she has kept helping me.Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.