【英语口语学习】四、六级考试作文是怎么评分的

第一篇：【英语口语学习】四、六级考试作文是怎么评分的

【英语口语学习】

四、六级考试作文是怎么评分的一、评分强调一致性

大学英语四、六级考试的作文部分不是自由作文，而是有规定命题的作文。对考生写什么内容有比较明确的要求，用各种明确的方式如提纲、图表、关键词等加以限制，但提纲常用中文给出，以避免考生将提纲中的文字直接抄录进作文。采用有控制的作文也有利于提高评分的一致性。

对作文评分影响最大的是评分过程。同一篇作文，不同的阅卷员可能给出不同的分数。只有保证评分的一致性，才能提高作文阅卷的信度。这个一致性包括阅卷员本人的一致性、阅卷员之间的一致性和阅卷点之间的一致性，要采取一定的质量控制措施，尽量减少和滤除阅卷员评分的主观性对分数客观性的影响。

二、作文题的评分通常有两种方法

一种是综合法，一种是分析法。分析法是把一篇作文分解为若干要点，如内容、结构、文章连贯性、语法、词汇等，不同的要点也可作不同的加权处理，各要点得分的总和即为全篇得分。综合法是凭阅卷员通读一遍的总体印象打分。综合法的优点是能从总体上把握全文，评卷速度比较快，效率高。

此外，为了提高阅卷的信度也有采用“两读”的方法，即每篇作文由两名阅卷员各自独立评分，若分数差两档以上，由第三名阅卷员重判。考虑到大学英语四、六级考试规模太大，不可能进行两读，因此，通常采用综合法和“一读”的评分方法，然后根据考生的客观题得分进行调整，尽量减少系统误差。

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第二篇：六级考试作文评分原则和评分标准

六级考试作文部分要求考生在30分钟之内写出一篇不少于120词的短文（四级为100词）。从近几年实考看，四、六级均采用同样的作文题，题型多为提纲式作文，即给出一个英文标题下面用汉语给出三段（或两段）的提纲，即要求写的中心内容。今天育路教育网就为考生详细解读一下六级作文的评分原则和评分标准。

六级考试作文评分原则和评分标准

（一）评分原则

１、CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。

２、大学英语六级作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

３、从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

４、避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该低分的给低分，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。

（二）评分标准

1、本题满分为15分。

2、阅卷标准共五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。

3、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优劣于该分数，则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。

4、评分标准：2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重的错误。

11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺。连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。［注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分］

5、字数不足的应酌情扣分：累计字数CET4〖〗CET6扣分99~99〖〗110~119〖〗180~89〖〗100~109〖〗270~79〖〗90~99〖〗360~69〖〗80~89〖〗550~59〖〗70~79〖〗7＜49〖〗＜69〖〗9

［注：（1）如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数。

（2）只写一段者：0～4分；只写两段者： 0～9分。（指规定三段的作文）］

6、为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准。现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称分率。其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。作文分〖〗15〖〗14〖〗13〖〗12〖〗11〖〗10〖〗9〖〗8〖〗7〖〗6〖〗5〖〗4〖〗3〖〗2〖〗1得分率〖〗１００〖〗94〖〗87〖〗80〖〗74〖〗67〖〗60〖〗54〖〗47〖〗40〖〗34〖〗27〖〗20〖〗14〖〗7

（三）关于作文最低分的有关规定

1、作文分最低分定为6分。

2、考生作文分为0分时，若总分高于60分，一律按59分报道；若总分低于60分，则按“总分－6分”报道。

3、考生作文分大于0分，小于6分时，则按下列公式报道成绩：最后报道分＝原计算总分－6分+实得作文分。

转自:育路英语六级考试网

第三篇：六级作文训练(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培养自我保护意识

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多关于性侵的事件媒体揭露和报道。我认为人们应该从这些事件中得到一些启示，比如，提高和加强自我保护意识教育，特别是对于儿童和学生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因这类事件伤害最大的是儿童和学生。因此，提高和加强自我保护意识是必须的。此外，加强防范危险的意识也是很重要的。如果他们能在事情发生前意识到某人或某事的潜在危险，他们就可以做一些准备来以避免和减少受伤率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我认为父母应该帮助他们的孩子从出生开始就培养自我保护意识，比如，设计一些情况来让他们应付。父母还应该教导孩子认识危险，如何避免和减少来自外界的危险。此外，孩子也需要培养优秀的观察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.总之，保护儿童需要家长和孩子他们自己的努力。

第四篇：四、六级作文心得

四、六级作文心得

慎用套词！现在很多老师都建议学生在临考前背一些范文、重点句式，几乎所有的作文参考书上也罗列了一大堆此类范文、重点句式。在应试作文中，这些句式“放之四海而皆准”，曾经让无数考生从中尝到了甜头。但是请大家注意了，时光已经走到了公元2004年，阅卷老师的观念也正在“与时俱进”。现在那些阅卷老师普遍对那些套词恨之入骨。这也不奇怪，虽然有的句子很好，但是如果用的人多了，也就失去了新鲜，甚至会遭到反感。如果一篇图表或图画作文，一上来就是：“Simple as the picture(table/photo/cartoon/drawing/)is，the symbolic meaning it conveys is deep and profound。”很好的句子，不知是哪位传授的，但其影响之大，受众之广，让阅卷老师始料不及。阅卷老师一看就知道是套词，所有的看图作文都能用，于是就当考生没写这句话。再看到这句话，开始反感，觉得考生水平不高，就会用别人的话，反而会留下不好的印象，自然不会给高分；换了份卷子，怎么还是这句话？！直接就给你打入冷宫。这也不奇怪，就算是满汉全席也有吃厌的时候，更何况一个十分钟能见八回的句子？这样出彩的句子尚且如此，更别提那些俗上加俗、倒人胃口的套词了：how interesting the picture is！As can be seen from the picture等等。最让人深恶痛绝的一句是as far as I am concerned…撇开其用法不确切不说，你读一下，算算用了几秒？[a：] [e:] 都是长音，老师在一个段落上不会耗费超过3秒的时间，你想让他看些什么呢？如果你觉得I think 太俗，可以选些不太常用但是语法上毫无错误的表达方法来发表观点。如：I`m convinced that，I strongly believe that，总之，既然你想发表观点，就直接说明，让老师尽快了解，让他1秒钟之内就能判断出你没有跑题就是最成功之处！切记：慎用套词！

长度适中！要求150字左右(四级120字)，不要写太短，免得字数不够，降两档处理。我估计字数大家都不会成问题，我在这里要强调的是：字数可千万别写太多了。要知道，应试作文，按照要求去做是最实惠的，人家要求150字，你为什么偏要奔着200去呢？记住：写得越多，错的必然也就越多！老师阅卷的过程，不就是一个给你作文挑错的过程么？既然如此，何必自讨苦吃呢？

第五篇：2010六级考试预测作文

大学英语六级考试预测作文（2010.6）

预测作文

（一）Global Shortage of Fresh Water

1.人们以为淡水是取之不尽的（提示：雨水、河水、井水„„）

2.实际上淡水是非常紧缺的（提示：人口增长、工业用水增加、污染„„）

3.我们应该怎么办

【范文】

At present, many people take it for granted that fresh water will never be used up because we can find it not only from the rain, but also in the rivers, lakes and wells.Consequently, it is not necessary for us to worry about global shortage of fresh water.In fact, the situation has become so serious that everyone should be aware of it and take immediate actions.With the world population increasing rapidly year after year, water resources are being consumed at an appalling speed.What's more, with the development of science and technology, modern industry needs much more water than before.Thirdly, pollution is also a worrying problem—water in rivers and wells becomes undrinkable because of industrial wastes.We should take urgent measures to protect fresh water resources.The government should increase the efficiency of water usage by such methods as water recycling and purification of sea water.The people, on the other hand, should form the habit of cherishing every drop of water.Last but not least, pollution must be effectively controlled, if we ever want to improve the quality of life.【点评】

本篇范文的最大特色是将批驳类与办法类结合，首段指出一些人的错误认识；第二段从三方面进行批驳；第三段指出我们的做法。

范文首先指出，一些人认为淡水是取之不尽的，然后在第二段中进行批驳。首先，水资源正在被以惊人的速度消费。其次，现代工业需要更多的水资源。另外，因为工业污染，有些水已经不适宜饮用了。第三段阐述正确做法，即政府提高水资源的利用率、人人养成节约用水的习惯以及有效地控制水污染。

第一段第一句中的take it for granted表示“想当然”，be used up表示“用完，耗尽”。第三段第一点中的efficiency，recycling和purification分别指“效率”、“再循环”和“净化”。

预测作文

（二）Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?

1.近年来越来越多的民工涌入大城市 2.产生这一社会现象的原因

【范文】

For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who flood into big cities.Many men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city dwellers.Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.First and foremost, the limited land can no longer produce enough crops for an ever-increasing rural population.In the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard work.Last but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good education.I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.【点评】

本题谈论的是一种社会现象。第一段首句引入某一现象，第二句举例说明，第三句是个过渡句，引起下面解释原因段落的第二段；第三段是简洁的结束语，其中的宾语从句嵌套一个状语从句。

范文首先指出大量农民工涌入大城市这一现象，并引出第二段所阐述的三个原因。首先，农村有限的土地不能满足日益增长的人口消费。其次，大城市有更多的工作机会。最后，农民工向往大城市的生活，想永远居住在大城市。末段总结指出，如果创造一个健康的社会环境，农民工就可以为国家做出更大的贡献。

第一段第二句中的construction site表示“建筑工地”，babysitter表示“帮人看孩子的人”。第二段第一点中的rural指“农村的”；第三点中的permanently和admire分别指“永久地”和“羡慕”，receive education指“接受教育”。

预测作文

（三）Silence Is Gold 1.许多场合中“沉默是金”是正确的 2.但也有例外的情形 3.结论

【范文】

When we talk of the famous proverb “Silence is Gold”, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.This proverb is especially true under several situations.First, if we have made a promise not to let out a secret, we should always keep silent.Second, we should avoid talking over facts or statistics of which we are not sure.Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions.If we find out a flaw in other's speaking or writing, we should not hesitate a moment to point it out.And to friends or acquaintances seeking advice, we should feel free to help them.In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases “silence is gold”, but in certain circumstances, talking is the right choice.【点评】

本文的特色在于其并未完全肯定或完全否定所提到的谚语，而是从正、反两个方面去分析，即第二段指出其正确性，第三段谈例外情况；末段总结，呼应全文。

范文首先提出所要讨论的谚语“沉默是金”。第二段分三个方面阐述其正确性，即发誓保守秘密，对于不确定的事情要保持沉默，而在表达自己的思想时，力求简洁。第三段指出例外，为别人指出错误或为朋友等提建议时，不要坚持“沉默是金”。末段总结，呼应第二、三段。

第一段中的label...as...表示“将„„看作„„”，而explore...in depth表示“深入探究„„”。第二段第一点中的make a promise表示“允诺”，let out a secret表示“泄露秘密”，keep silent表示“保持沉默”；第三点中的brevity is the soul of wit也是个谚语，表示“言贵简洁”。第三段第二点中的acquaintance指“熟人”。

预测作文

（四）A Letter of Application

1.表达自己对该工作的渴求态度 2.尽量展示自己的技能和经历 3.信中应包括自己的联系方式

【范文】

January , 2010

Dear Sirs，I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday's China Daily for, as is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallel your requirement.I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry.I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due to my hard work.I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market.Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities.In the due process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company.Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 64543575 for further information.Thank you for your favorable consideration.Best wishes.Yours sincerely，Jenny Green

【点评】

这篇文章是一篇非常成功的求职信。首段表明了自己对经理助理这一职位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知这一职位的，而后说明自己的条件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，说明自己在专业上是个尖子生，并指出对于其他课程自己做得同样出色，为将来的工作奠定了坚实的基础；后两句说明自己参加了各种学校活动，培养了多方面的能力。第三段首句说明自己非常希望能早日获得面试的机会；次句说如果对方太忙，可以打电话联系；末句对对方表示感谢，是一句客套话。

首段中的keen表示“热切的”，parallel这里做动词，表示“与„„相当，比得上”。第二段首句中的specialized area表示“专业领域”；第二句中的excel是不及物动词，表示“突出，超常，胜过他人”；第三句中的edge表示“优势”；第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多种多样的”；第五句中的teamwork spirit表示“团队精神”，interpersonal skills表示“人际交往的能力”。

预测作文

（五）People's Use of the Internet

1.上图所示为2001年7月、2002年7月、2003年1月我国上网用户总人数，请描述其变化；

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因；

3．你认为目前用户在因特网使用中有什么困难或问题。

【范文】

From the chart we can see clearly that the number of Internet surfers in our country has increased from 26.5 million in July 2001 to 45.8 million in July 2002, and then to 59.1 million in January 2003.In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows.First, the Internet can help us accomplish many tasks, including both work and play—searching for information has become more convenient than ever, and safe online business is no longer a dream.Besides, surfing the Internet is becoming cheaper and cheaper—more and more people can afford it.The negative effects of the Internet are also clear.To begin with, sitting too long before the computers is harmful to our body, especially our eyes.Second, more and more people become indulged in playing video games or chatting online, which are time-consuming.All in all, I should say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to enhance both work and study.【点评】

首段叙述从2001年至2003年我国上网用户总人数的变化趋势。第二段分两方面给出其中的原因：首先是因特网方便快捷、作用巨大；其次是费用降低。第三段分两个方面指出面临的困难和问题：首先是上网时间过长有害健康；其次是有些人上网玩游戏、聊天，这都是不好的习惯。第四段做总结：第一句指出利大于弊；第二句说关键在于好好利用因特网。第二段首句中的in my mind意思是“依我看，在我看来”；第三段中的be harmful to意为“对……有伤害”，become indulged in意思是“沉迷于”，time-consuming是“浪费时间”的意思；最后一段首句中的outweigh意为“比……重要”。热点一：国庆60周年

新中国成立60周年来，我国发生了翻天覆地的变化，请你据此写一篇120字的英语作文，谈谈自己的感想。

要求:

1.列出生活中反映一两件家乡变化的事, 如购新车、住新房等。

2.列出最近发生的一两件国家大事，如成功举办奥运、“神舟七号” 顺利升空等。

3.要表达出你的喜悦和自豪之情，并谈谈你的感想。

Great changes have taken place since our country was founded 60 years ago.In the past we lived in the small and old houses and now we move into new broad ones which are more than one hundred square meters.At the same time, many families have own their new cars.Besides, our country hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully in 2008 and we took the first place in winning gold medals.Another inspiring event was that the Shenzhou Ⅶ was sent into space smoothly, which shows our scientific research get great achievements.We are very happy and proud of all these achievements.I am sure our country will become even stronger and richer.I love our motherland very much.Let’s work hard to make contribution to our country in the future.热点二：甲型流感：(1)

假如你是李华，你学校内有人得了猪流感，正在接受治疗，你校学生非常害怕，请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感?

1.平时外出戴口罩，少去人群集中的公共场所, 避免接触病人等。

2.勤洗手，保证充足睡眠，多锻炼多运动等。

3.词数: 120字左右

4.文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

参考词汇: 猪流感swine flu;口罩 face mask.Swine flu has come to our School!However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus.How do we protect us from it?

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Swine flu has come to our School!However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus.How do we protect us from it?

We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out.We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu.On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep.At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.热点三：甲型流感：(2)

不同人都有着不同的习惯，个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求，写一篇120字的英语短文，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

1.介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。

2.习惯与卫生的关系：习惯是卫生基础;不好的习惯，会导致一些传染疾病传播，如AIDS，SARS，H1N1流感等。

3.你的看法……。

It is generally believed that different people have different habits.Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health.On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can’t be guaranteed.On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like

AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health.If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.热点四：上海世博会

2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动，志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子阅读、算术，或打扫公园与街道，或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society.We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble.Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others.What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable.More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.热点五：金融危机下大学生就业

当今我国大学生就业成功率很低，除了全球性的金融危机影响外，还有就是大学生对工作的选择。有的人认为应该优先选择自己喜欢的工作，而不是自己擅长的;另一部分人相反。你班学生就此事进行讨论，请客观地介绍情况并谈谈你的看法。

观点 理由

一部分人 喜欢比擅长重要。兴趣是最好的老师，精通与擅长的可能性会大大增加等。

另一部分 擅长比喜欢重要。擅长更容易成功，后天努力培养兴趣。

你 …………

注意：1.短文须包括所有要点, 可适度发挥。

2.开头已为你写好, 但不计人总词数。

3.词数:120左右。

Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graduates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?___________________________________________

Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graduates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?

Some agree that the love of job is very important because interest is the best teacher.People are often willing to do what they like doing.If you are not good at it in the beginning, you can work hard and gradually improve your skills to make you good at it.Others hold their view that if you are good at it, you have more chances to achieve success very soon.While you work, you can do all you can to gain the interest in it little by little.From my point of view, I think we should make full use of our strengths to change them each other regardless of the fact that you like it or you are good at it.热点六：“快乐女声” 等选秀热

2009年 “快乐女声” 的火爆已无需渲染。你对此现象进行简单的调查，结果如下: 有些人认为 “平民平等参与，有机会一夜成名等”。也有些人认为 “快女” 中还存在一些不尽人意的地方, 如 “浪费时间和精力，影响学习，产生一夜成名的不良志向(bad ambition)等”。请根据以上情况为 “无为论坛” 写一篇报告并发表自己的观点。

注意: 1.包括以上全部要点可适当 发挥，使上下文连贯。

2.词数: 100-120。

3.文章的格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

To: Wuwei Forum

From : Li Hua

Date: June 20, 2009

Subject: Super Girl

Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing.We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently._________________________________________________.To: Wuwei Forum

From : Li Hua

Date: June 20, 2009

Subject: Super Girl

Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing.We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say Super Girl is their favorite.They hold their view that Super Girl can offer a stage for ordinary people to take part in it equally and have the chance of becoming famous overnight.While others think that Super Girl makes the girls waste time and energy so that it can have some bad effects on their study.In addition, it can cause some teenagers to have bad ambition about becoming famous overnight.From my point of view, it is wrong of young people to admire Super Girl too much, because they may mislead young people.I think to learn more and work hard is the real way to success.热点七：低碳经济下的环境保护(1)

“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念，最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来：创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态，是指在不影响经济发展的前提下，通过技术创新和制度创新，降低能源和资源消耗，尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放，实现减缓气候变化的目标，促进人类的可持续发展。

Protection of Environment

1.目前环保还存在着许多问题。

2.为了保护环境，3.各国政府做了大量的工作。

4.我的看法。

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years.One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil.the polluted air does great harm to people’s health.The polluted water causes diseases and death.What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot.Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution.Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures.First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education.Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution.Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished.We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.热点八：低碳经济下的环境保护(2)

根据题目《师父被熏晕过去了》的漫画和下面要求写一篇关于河水污染的感想。

1.情况。2.原因。3.后果。4.措施。

词数 100~120。

One day Sun Wukong together with his master and brothers was walking across a river.Suddenly his master fell off the horse by the bad smell of river water.They found the water so dirty that they could hardly breathe.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.热点九：低碳经济下的环境保护(3)

全世界的环境问题在变得越来越严重。请你根据漫画内容和下面要求给China Daily写一封信反映这一情况，并提出保护环境的建议。

注意：1.信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计算在总词数内。

2.字数要求: 120左右。

人口膨胀population expansion;过度开发overdevelopment。

Dear editor，Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world._________________________________________________________

Yours truly

Li Hua

Dear editor，Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas.Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less.Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing.Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems.We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.Yours truly Li Hua

On the Celebrity Spokesperson

Currently, we could hardly live a single day without seeing a celebrity spokesperson promoting a product or a social campaign on TV, net or other media.This is an intensely popular trend that we cannot fail to notice.There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.A host of celebrity spokespersons, however, have emerged as the marketing tool of some companies, even companies producing and selling fake and inferior items.This kind of behavior has produced negative impacts on consumers and whole society, which should be severely criticized and penalized.Of course, as is known to all, everything has both bright and dark sides.Some stars’ endorsement of social activities and public campaigns raises public awareness, giving rise to changes in public behavior.In this case, they serve as positive role models of the general public.To name only one case: Pu CX, a household figure, acting as the celebrity spokesman of the China AIDS Foundation, contributes greatly to the cause of AIDS prevention and cure in China.关于选秀节目

Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth.This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.There are a couple of reasons behind the tide.To start with, young folks need role models to learn from.So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs.This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences.Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves.Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.This is a divisive topic.On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains.As college students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies.食品安全问题

On the Food Security Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button across society.The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide.First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem.More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never.Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend.The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.社会不文明现象

On Uncivilized Behaviors We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth.All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of.Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves.We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them.There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend.To name only one: the lack of moral education.The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives.As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.感恩

On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere.I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache.As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause.Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude.This kind of world is doomed to failure.Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart.Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one.My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.大学生使用信用卡现象

On Credit Card At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders.Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests.Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides.On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments.On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents