初中英语《阅读积累与写作》作文课课堂纪实

第一篇：初中英语《阅读积累与写作》作文课课堂纪实

韩建芳老师《阅读积累与写作》课后纪实

----艾佳

经过两周的精心准备，韩建芳老师的《阅读积累与写作》课在今天上午顺利结束。作为英语组下学期活动的最后一位教师，韩建芳老师的课属于压轴出场了，今天他的课堂内容正如标题显示这是一堂有关英语写作方面的训练课。对于英语教师来说这样的课型是比较有难度的，课堂容量要大，理论知识及基本功都要扎实。初四这一年，我在英语教学方面和韩老师学会很多东西，今天主要抱着学习的态度来看待这节写作课，通过英语组各位老师对着唐写作课的点评，我也收获颇多，下面我将把各位老师对这堂课的分析总结如下：

首先，韩老师把在哈尔滨学到的最新的教学方法运用到了这堂课中，他提出学生如果单独学习英语写作则是很枯燥难懂的，不如把相应主题的阅读放在写作前，让学生已阅读段落做切入点，根据问题寻找段落中的理论依据，在学生寻找依据的过程中，就潜移默化的在学生心中植入了。然后让学生继续在段落中找出正反两个观点在课件中填空，这就是在有意识的引导学生进行背诵例句，为写作进行铺垫。再填空之后，要求学生复述课文，再复述课文的时候就是在训练的口头表达能力。接下来老师展示三段式范文的提纲，让学生根据汉语提示进行书写训练。通过这堂课我们可以很清楚直观地了解到从简到难的整个的写作过程，在韩老师的精心准备下，课件，提纲，范文都得到了充分的利用，效果很好。但是课堂教学是一门不完美的艺术，课后经过大家一直讨论，也提出了关于英语写作课一些很有帮助的建议，整理如下：

1.课件制作虽然很精心，但是实际用的时候，容量稍大，字体太小，在后面的同学有些看不清楚。

2.给学生申通的范文是两段式的，要求写作时，是三段式的。应统一范文格式。

3.阅读的片段若能和命题作文的主题衔接更密切一些。学生吸收效果能更好。

4.课堂容量大，所以需要的时间较多，最后没有在幻灯片中展示学生的范文，本堂课的一大亮点没来得及展示，有些可惜。

这堂写作课是我们英语组这学期的最后一次活动，在这个学期，我们英语组开展了很多形式多样的英语活动，在活动中，大家共同研讨，彼此交流经验，心得，这些活动都为我们的教学提供了很多宝贵的想法，为英语组教师提高专业技能起到了重要作用。

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第二篇：初中英语《阅读积累与写作》作文课反思

教 学 反 思

七 星 二 中 韩 建 芳

教 学 反 思

六月六日，我们英语组进行了一次英语课堂教学的初探，由我的一节作文课作为载体，之后大家对于我的这节作文课做出了客观的评价，下面我谈谈我对于这节课的课后反思。

首先，说说这节英语课的优点；应该说这节课的设计理念还是比较先进的，但是由于这两个班级的学生的基础不是很好，所以有点事与愿违了，总体来说，思路清晰，课堂环节紧凑，在本课中，我根据一条龙英语教学环节和教材内容，将阅读单独提出来，设计不同的课堂活动, 引导学生进行阅读方法的总结及训练，并与写作相结合。帮助学生掌握阅读技巧。学生在阅读过程中不是逐字、逐句地去理解，而是结合自己的经验和老师提供的方法，在文章中找出有关的信息。既改变了传统的阅读课教学方式只是把课文作为单纯向学生传授语法及语言知识的载体，也改变了阅读理解提问方式只停留在对所阅读文章的表层理解层次上的问题。从阅读方法的积累，到写作方法的积累，形成了阅读积累的输入到写作的输出，培养学生的写作能力，而且还给学生留出思维想象的空间，启发学生动脑用英语思考,发展学生的创新能力。能够从阅读当中总结阅读方法，并运用阅读策略获取信息。

但是同时这节课也有很多值得改进的地方；

一，我把两个班级的学生放在一起上课，那就可以利用竞争的形式来激发他们的学习积极性，可是我预先没有考虑到这一点，是我的疏忽；

二，课件制作有点失误，背景有些乱，然后字有点小了，导致后面的同学看不清楚；

三，时间调配上有点问题，前面渗透阅读策略的时间有点长，所以导致了后面的写作练习完成的不是很好，以后在这方面要多注意。

通过此次教研活动，我们英语组就作文课这个话题谈论了好多有关作文课该如何去上，很多问题也借此机会一一解决，这次活动给我的最大感受就是大家的智慧是无穷的，所以我觉得，在以后的教学中多举行一些这样的活动是非常有意义的，既可以解决在教学中遇到的一些难题，而且还能使我们大家的智慧得以分享和传递，这对我们英语组的各位老师来说都是积累经验的机会，同时也是让大家快速成长的绝好机会，最后感谢英语组的每位教师不吝赐教。

第三篇：解析初中英语写作课堂教学策略

解析初中英语写作课堂教学策略

福建师范大学第二附属中学

【摘要】英语写作能力是初中生应该掌握的一种重要能力，这就需要教师在实际教学中依据学生特点及写作教学目标，有针对性地选用有效的教学的教学策略，努力激发学生的英语写作兴趣，使得他们都能充分发挥主观能动性学习与探究英语写作方面的知识与技巧，最终逐渐增强自身的英语写作能力。本文就初中英语写作课堂的教学策略，进行了详细的探究。

【关键词】初中英语写作课堂教学策略

随着全球经济文化一体化发展趋势的不断加剧，英语写作在经济与生活中的应用更加频繁，这就使得人们对人才的英语写作能力提出了新的标准。而初中阶段是学生学习英语课程的关键时期，也是培养学生写作能力的重要阶段。因此，初中英语教师在日常的写作教学中，应大胆创新传统的写作教学模式，为学生组织出符合他们学习兴趣及认知规律的写作教学活动，努力提高课堂教学的有效性，以帮助学生快速提高自身的写作能力。那么，如何才能切实提高初中英语写作课堂教学的有效性，是教师急需思考的问题。

一、遵循循序渐进原则

英语写作是一种典型的信息输出活动，只有确保学生积累有丰富写作素材、写作经验及写作技巧，才能使得他们写出高质量的英语作文。而对初中生来将，他们的写作能力还较为低下，难以写出要求过高的英语作文。因此，在初中英语写作教学中，教师应依据学生的英语语言认知规律，恰当安排写作教学流程，一般来讲，初中英?Z写作教学的教学顺序应先从词汇积累开始，逐渐引导学生仿写一些简单的句子，然后激励学生连句成篇。在初中英语写作活动中，“词汇”是写作的基础，也就是原材料；“句子”是桥梁，是写作中的基本单位；“篇章”是写作教学的最终目的。这就需要英语教师在写作教学中严格根据“词不离句，句不离篇”的基本原则组织写作教学活动，从简到繁、从易到难，循序渐进地提高学生的英语写作能力，最终实现教、学及用的和谐统一。在具体的初中英语写作教学中，教师设计写作教学流程时，应做好以下几点：1.引导学生探究巧记单词的方法，借助语境运用、关联词联想、音节拼读等途径帮助学生巩固、识记及理解单词。另一方面，教师在写作教学中，还应将教材中单词的形似词、反义词、近义词、同义词等罗列出来，供学生对比学习，以显著提高学生的词汇量。2.指导学生熟练掌握教材中的常用句型及短语。教师在写作教学中加大单句练习比重，使得学生在大量的训练活动中扎实掌握这些单句句型之后，再慢慢过渡到复杂句型的教学中。为了让学生掌握尽可能多的句型，教师可在教学中为学生布置“一句多译”任务，以逐渐增强学生的造句能力。比如，教师可让学生尝试用两种句型翻译“我最喜欢的运动项目是踢足球。”学生就可用两种句型翻译为“My favorite sport is playing football”及“Playing football is my favorite sport.”

二、密切联系听说训练

学生的英语写作能力与听说能力之间有着很密切的关系，通常来讲，英语听说能力较高的学生，其写作能力也较高。究其原因，是因为书面语言均是在口语的基础上形成与发展的，可见口语是学生书面语形成的基础。在这种情况下，要想有效培养学生的写作水平，就应重视对学生口语能力的培养。因此，在初中英语教学中，教师应依据教材中的听说训练内容，在教学中积极为学生营造出多种生动的口语交际情境，使得学生更加自然、主动地参与到各种英语口语训练活动中，并获得更多的听英语的机会，最终使得学生在阐述观点、小组讨论、表演短剧、伙伴对话、讲述故事、复述课文、看图说话等口语交际活动中逐渐提高英语表达能力与理解能力。在引导学生就教材中的某个话题进行了一定的口语训练之后，教师就可为学生布置一些书面写作任务。教学实践表明，由于有了口语交际训练活动做铺垫，学生已经拥有了英语写作的素材及表达方式，因此将这些口语材料整理成书面内容，也是很容易的，从而可使得学生自信满满、兴致勃勃地参与到英语写作教学中去，并且还可写出质量很高的英语作文。比如，在学习仁爱版初中英语教材九年级上册Unit2《Saving the Earth》这一单元时，教师就可让学生以“I am a little guardian of the earth”为话题进行口语交际训练，引导学生以小组为单位就“What are the behaviors that pollute the earth in our daily life？”及“How to deal with the pollution of the environment？”进行广泛的交流与探讨。然后，让学生将口语交际内容整理成书面语言。最终，笔者发现很多学生都能写出内容丰富的英语作文来。

三、激励学生大量朗读

要想切实提高初中生的英语写作能力，就需要教师在日常教学中重视对学生英语思维能力的培养及应用，只有这样才能颠覆学生的中式英语思维方式，逐渐养成用英语思维设计作文结构、遣词造句及表达思想，最终写出更正宗的英式英语作文。而朗读是培养学生语感及英语思维的主要方法。俗话说“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”，意思是说朗读多了，自然就可写出较高水平的作文。从这里我们可以看出，熟读英语文本对初中生英语写作能力的提高有很大促进作用。另一方面，朗读还可帮助学生积累大量的英语词汇、句型及素材，这都是英语写作中学生所必须具备的一些东西。因此，在初中英语教学中，教师应激励学生大量朗读英语文本，以最大限度培养学生的英语语感、英语思维能力，从而为写作教学质量的大幅提高奠定基础。比如，在学习仁爱版初中英语教材九年级下册Unit5《Knowing About China》这一单元时，教师就可引导学生反复朗读教材文本，以熟练掌握文本中介绍中国文明及名胜的方式是什么，是用什么样的思维组织语言及文章结构的，并且使得学生在反复诵读中增强语言，为写作时更恰当地遣词造句做好准备。在实际教学中，为充分激发学生的朗读兴趣，教师可用分角色朗读的方式组织教学活动，使得可积极参与到朗读教学中，以促进他们英语思维能力的快速发展。

四、有效结合阅读教学

笔者在教学中发现，写作教学与阅读教学之间关系密切，究其原因，是因为阅读是学生写作的基础，是学生习得表达方式、积累写作素材的有效途径。初中生借助阅读英语文本，可以拓展知识面、增强语感、丰富词汇量，从而积累海量的英语语言信息，最终为写作能力的快速提升打下基础。仁爱版初中英语教材中的课文体裁很多，有议论文、说明文、记叙文、诗歌、日记、书信等；涵盖的内容有体育、地理、天文、旅游、友谊等。另一方面，这些文本都具有很高的实用性及代表性，是学生学习英语写作知识的最佳范本与素材。因此，在初中英语写作教学中，教师应引导学生先细致阅读教材内容，然后仿写类似内容与体裁的作文，由于有学习与模仿的对象，学生在亲自写作时就不会觉得无话可写、难以安排结构，就可提高英语写作的自信心与积极性，从而促进他们英语写作能力的明显提升。比如在学习仁爱版初中英语教材九年级下册Unit4 《Amazing Science》这篇阅读文本时，教师就可引导学生重点学习本课的写作结构、主要句型及关键词汇。在此基础上，教师就可为学生设计一节以“My favorite scientific knowledge”为主题的写作课，提醒学生可以模仿教材阅读文本的结构，也可以运用阅读文本中的句型与词汇。教学实践表明，把写作与阅读教学结合在一起，可帮助学生逐渐掌握各种主题及体裁的写作格式及写作方向，使得学生在写作活动中都胸有成竹，有助于他们写作兴趣的提升及??作质量的优化。

总之，写作教学是初中英语教学中的核心内容与难点内容，其教学成效的优劣对学生英语语言应用能力的高低及综合能力的高低有很大影响作用。因此，在实际教学中，英语教师应深度分析写作教学与朗读教学、阅读教学、口语交际教学之间的关系，然后积极将写作教学渗透到其他教学活动中，并始终遵循循序渐进的基本原则组织教学活动，从而不断提高学生的英语思维能力、增强学生的词汇量及语感、丰富学生的写作素材及写作经验，最终真正提高初中英语写作课堂教学质量。

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第四篇：积累与作文写作

浅谈材料积累与作文写作

高一语文组韩晓丽

提起写作文学生就头疼，是因为学生无话可说，东拼西凑，800字写得异常艰难。一般情况下能凑出一篇文章就不错了，更别说材料充足、语言优美等要求了。其实写作文并没有那么艰难，有个很实用的办法那就是天天积累。任何学习都是一个积累的过程，特别是在学生的习作中,要经过再创造,平时的积累是写好作文的基础。怎样积累？接下来我将谈一些我的想法。

一、材料来源于生活

生活是作文素材的最大存储库,因为生活中的作文材料是取之不尽、用之不竭的。每天同学们之间，师生之间，家人之间要发生许许多多事。加上学生现在还可以借助手机、电视等媒体借助不少人不少事。每件事认真推敲和思考都会写出自己的见解，所以学生无话可说是因为他们很少认真观察周围的生活。因此,教师要有目的性、有计划地指导学生。把孩子们的丰富的日常生活和社会百态呈现在作文里。我在每堂课前都安排课前演讲，鼓励学生自己创作就写最近的事，说感受，说看法，同学点评。每次三分钟的演讲都成为师生期盼的必备环节。慢慢地学生演讲的内容丰富了，学生自信了，写起文章来能把身边的事恰当入文了。前几天，学生谈起同学之间打架的事，说到了如何处理同学关系，大家畅所欲言说了不少。老师告诉大家2013年咋们考区的高考作文就是这个，大家完全可以把那些见解写进文章。同学顿时觉得作文离我们真近，高考作文也不例外，不用害怕。

二、材料来源于课本

我们的课本是专家精选的一些优质篇目，所以无论是从手法上还是从思想性上看都是上乘之作。学生学习完就扔在一边了，其实利用起来也是不错的资源。比如写关于“积累”的作文，学生能想起《劝学》里的“积土成山”“积水成渊”。写“反省”的文章，学生可以写到《小狗包弟》里给大家呈现的那个敢于忏悔自己的巴金„„那些闪烁着智慧光芒的语言、事例在笔下静静流淌。学生立刻感到那些圣贤书到今天依然受用。

三、材料来源于资料

现在的作文资源是海量的，各种作文书，美句佳段俯拾皆是。学生可以“占为己有”，这是写美文的捷径。首先把作文话题分成若干话题如乐观、执着、坚韧、思考、踏实等，然后按照话题给材料归类。观点、事例安放在对应话题下，摘抄在美文本上。每天都保证一篇作文800字左右的阅读量，200字左右的摘抄量。一周保证背诵精挑细选的段落200字，每周固定一个早读抽查背诵情况，有好例子、好文章全班分享。每个学期有近二十周，能检查十五次也可背下3000字左右的素材。三年下来资源惊人的多呀，何况一旦学生尝到这种“移花接木”的甜头背诵的量会自己加大。写一篇好文章会在很短的时间内完成。

我们常讲要做生活中的有心人，多看、多思、多记时刻积累就不怕写不出好文章来。这恰如蜜蜂采花酿蜜的过程，蜜蜂不辞辛劳遍尝百花才酿出蜜来，我们写作文也要博采生活之花，才能酿出作文的甘甜之蜜。

第五篇：初中英语写作集锦

初中英语写作范文集锦 [一] 围绕：学校让学生打扫厕所和学校不让学生打扫厕所两种情况。写一不少于80个词的主题为“孩子的独立教育”英语作文。给出词：only child，moral education nowadays in china，many students are the only child in their family.they are the apple of their parents’ eyes or even their granparents’，so they are free of any house work or menial labor.and moral education is no more than some bookish thing.studentsare largely dependent on their parents and teachers.to educate them to be independent，the most effective way is to let them experience on their own.therefore，they are better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room，which can be regarded as part of the moral education.范文：关于国庆节的英语作文 例1 National Day is coming，and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.It’s a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week.We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.We’re visiting Tianya Haijiao，Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think we’ll have a good time there.国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。例2 National Day Holidays I went to my cousin’s house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant；She said she’s worrying about getting fat，but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that he’ll educate his child in a severe way，with a future father’s matureness.I’m happy for them.：）

Yesterday，our research school’s soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half，but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half，so，we lost the gameHalf of the National Day holidays have passed by„„life still goes with good and bad times.范文：中学生该不该上网

最近你们学校要举行一次“中学生该不该上网”的讨论。你是赞成者之一，认为我们不应该因噎废食。请根据下表内容写一篇发言篇。要求：字数100词左右注意：不要逐句翻译。益处

1.看国内外新闻，获取信息。2.发e-mail，打电话。3.上网络学校，阅读各种书籍，自学外语。4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩棋牌等游戏，网上购物，丰富我们的生活。5.提高我们操作电脑的能力 注意事项

1．不要沉湎于（be given to）上网以免影响生活和学习。2．不要上不健康的网站。参考范文：

In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks.As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can.We can send e-mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends.We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet.We can even do shopping on line.Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer.But we should not be given to the Internet，or we'll get our life and study destroyed.Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites.Anyhow，this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend.We can't throw away the apple because of the core，can we？

范文：我的同学 My Classmate 请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文要求：

1、主题明确，语言流畅，思路清晰。

2、字数在100字以内。思路点拨：

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述，所叙述的内容要交代清楚，条理清晰，重点突出，主次分明，详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文，主人公应该用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索，以

一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理，有真实感，叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行，同时加以点评。参考范文 My Classmate Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived，and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.初中英语写作范文集锦 [二] 范文：介绍学生学习情况

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：A piano player What do I want to do when I’m older？ Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when I’m ten years old.Now I’m in grand five.I hope when I’m sixteen years old，I can become grand eight.I’ll be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.范文：my dream place The winter vacation passed quickly.In those days，I have done some things.Playing，doing homework and so on.Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework.She thanked to me.Though，I was proud of myself.I also went over my English learning.I think I have known more than before.In the new term，I will study hard.范文：The thing that I'll never forget How time flies！I’m fifteen years now.During the long time，there was one thing that I will never forget.The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival，people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old，my family took the bus to my grandparents’ to say “Happy New Year” to them.In the bus，I had a good seat.At 7：30，the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time，there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down，but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly，a little boy behind me，stood up and made room for the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled，too.When I told my cousin about it after that，he said “The child is the father of a man.” I’m very ashamed.Why could’t I do the same thing as the little boy did？ From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others，the world will become much more beautiful！

范文：怎样学习英语 How to study English？ 作文一：

Study English，You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English.This isn't easy，since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue.Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership（where English is in use at least some of the time）is，for many people，even better.If nothing like this is accessible，you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.你需要常常和英语教师以外的人士用英语交谈。这当然很不容易，因为与母语相同的人自由交谈时，彼此若用英语交谈总会觉得很不自在。亦可参加英语俱乐部或国际会员的俱乐部（至少有时使用英语沟通），这样对很多人而言更有益。如果没有合适的社团可加入，也不妨考虑任何足以提高英语能力的机会。作文二：

There are four key points to study English：listening，speaking，reading and writing.Firstly，we should be brave to talk with others in English.By doing this，we can improve ore talking and listening skill.Secondly，we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible.In this way，we can gradually improve our pronunciation.Thirdly，we should often read English books.When we come across a new word.We should guess its meaning through the contest first.then look it up in the dictionary to have a check.I thin，it is a good way of reading.Fourthly，we should practice our writing skills.Whenever we have any idea，we should get the pen and write it down at once.It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar.As long as we listen，speak，read and write more，we are sure to make remarkable progress！初中英语写作范文集锦 [三]It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：风 Wind Each season has wind.The warm wind in spring，the hot wind in summer，the gold wind in autumn and cold wind in winter are all called wind，but their tempers are quite different.When spring comes，warm wind wakes up everything；many flowers come out.It can bring us joy.In hot summer，the sweats roll down from our checks.Everything needs wind，but wind often hide and seek with us.Autumn comes.Cool wind blows yellow leaves down.The corn is ripe and all the fields become yellow.The farmers are busy getting in crops.It can bring us the happiness of harvest.In cold winter，cold wind blows so hard that everyone can hardly open his eyes Wind，we welcome you，need you，but sometimes hate you.Will you please obey us and do good things for us.范文：找妈妈 Looking for Mum One day Li Ming caught a little bird.He tied it with a piece of thread and played with it happily.At that time，he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.A policeman saw her，came over and asked her why she was crying and where her house is.When he learned that girl had got lost and she was then looking for her mother，he decided to lead the girl to be back home.Seeing this Li Ming thought the little bird also had its mother and he should set the little bird free so that it could be with its mother again.Then Li Ming untied the thread and returned the little bird to the blue sky.范文：介绍学生学习情况范文：能源 Energy As we all know we need energy in our daily life.There are many kinds of energy.We can get our energy from food.The energy in food comes from sunlight which helps plants grow.Plants store up energy from the sun，much of our food comes from plants.Some of our food comes from animals，but animals depend on plants for food too.范文：英语作文自我介绍 To introduce myself Hello，everyone！

My name is Winnie.I'm a 15 years old girl.I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.I'm an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.I also like sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.I'm kind-hearted.If you need help，please come to me.I hope we can be good friends！OK.This is me.A sunny girl.初中英语写作范文集锦 [四] 范文：给父亲的信

Directions：you have decided to start jogging next month，but you haven't got any suitable shoes to wear.Now you are writing a letter to your father asking him to send you some extra money so that you can but the shoes.in you letter，you will include： * your hard work；

* How you read about jogging in your English textbook； * The advantages ofjogging； * THe need for a pair fo quality shoes； * The price of the shoes you plan to buy； * THe time you need the mon

.Your appreciation for his help Dear dad, I am writing to you for help which I have come to a desperate need.You know I always want to be healthy and in geat shape，so I can pay more attention to teacher's instruction.Yesterday，I went to library and read some books about jogging.I think I need a good jogging shoes for my exercise.I believe a strong body can enhance my study as described by our textbook.I have found a cheap price of a pair of jogging shoes which cost only $500 nearby school.Daddy，you will help me buy this pair，wont' you？ The on sale may not last for long.Please send money as soon as possible，so I can start my jogging right away.I know you will fulfill my dream and expect my endeavor.I promise I will do my best on my study and exercise.Thank you for your consideration.Take care and wish you happiness.Yours beloved son.范文：考试 Examination Someone says examination can help us go over our lessons in time and after the examination we can find how we are getting on with our studies.But we are always having too many examinations and they are also too difficult for us to get through.I find some of us have lost interest in learning lessons.Besides，it is harmful to our health as we hardly have any time to go in for sports.I think the present system of measurement should be improved.范文：什么是成功的秘诀 What Is the Secret of Success My father is an engineer.He works very hard.Once I asked my father what the secret of success was.He didn't say a word，but wrote a few words on a piece of paper and handed it to me.I looked at the paper，it was written：A=X+Y+Z.“What does it mean？”I asked.“A means success，”explained my father.“X means hard，Y means good ways，and Z means you must stop talking and start to work.”

That's right.From then on，I tried my best to be better.范文：通知 Notice The sports meeting which was to take place this Saturday has to be put off because of the heavy rairi these days.All students are required to come to school on Saturday morning as usual，but there will be no class that afternoon.Weather permitting，the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning.Members of the school ping-pong team must come to the Ping-pong Hall at 4：30 this Saturday afternoon.Ping-pong stars from Wuhan will come and give special training and coaching then.Office of Physical Education 10th April，2005 初中英语写作范文集锦 [五] 范文：一次体育课 A PE Lesson 下面是某节体育课的有关情况，请你据此写一篇日记。1．时间：5月28日，星期一，下午。2．天气：阴。3．项目：跳远（jump）。4．过程：（1）打上课铃时就在操场集合；

（2）做准备活动（warming—upexercises）；（3）听老师讲解并示范；（4）我因心情紧张而失败；（5）不灰心，反复练习；（6）终于跳过了3米。5．体会：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。注意：

1．内容必须包括所有要点，但不能逐点翻译。2．日记格式要正确。3．词数100左右。A PE Lesson May 28th Monday Cloudy This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.范文：写给母亲的感谢信 My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again I hope that you have happiness everyday.Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！范文：介绍校内配套设施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.初中英语写作范文集锦 [六] 范文：少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲 A young idler,an old beggar “少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲”，请你谈谈对此的想法并如何行动。

Almost everyone knows the famous Chinese saying：A young idler，an old beggar.Throughout history，we have seen many cases in which this saying has again and again proved to be true.It goes without saying that the youth is the best time of life，during which one's mental and physical states are at their peaks.It takes relatively less time and pains to learn or accept new things in a world full of changes and rapid developments.In addition，one is less likely to be under great pressure from career，family and health problems when young.Therefore，a fresh mind plus enormous energy will ensure success in different aspects of life.Of course，we all know：no pains，no gains.If we don't make every effort to make good use of the advantages youth brings us，it is impossible to achieve any goals.As students，we should now try our best to learn all the subjects well so that we can be well prepared for the challenges that we will face in the future.范文：寒假生活 Wonderful life in winter holiday From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday.I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday.But I didn't.Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.I spend a lot of time on the homework„ Every day in my Winter Holiday，I always got up late.Then I listened to the tape，it was nine o'clock.Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime！I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy！I'm unlucky on the playing too.I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire.I'm careless to kindle the firecracker，so I'm very unlucky.I still unlucky on my friend's party.In the morning，I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10：50.After ten minutes，the party would start！So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home！And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home.My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me！

I'm worried and feel unlucky on my weigh.Last term，I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram！I must to do banting！

But most important，I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium，I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse，the monkey„in the sea.Now I've done it.It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.范文：我家的小狗 My Little Dog Last year，my friend gave me a little dog.I was fond of him very much.I liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever I went.I was very glad that I had a “body guard”。

Last winter I was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.However，no matter how late I went home，my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me.When I passed there，he barked two or three times then ran towards me.It seemed that he was calling me.My dog not only，took good care of me，but also was respoasible at home.When strangers came to my house，he barked at them but not hurt them.What a lovely dog he is！范文：我的储蓄罐 My Collecting-tin I have a lot of little handiwork，but the favorite one is my collecting-tin.It is a little man made of china.He wears a red hat and a pair of big glasses.His blue clothes are very nice.He has a red noseband no big eyes like stars on his face.His big and round body is very funny.Because of this collecting-fin，I have learned how to savemoney.When I was a little boy，I always put coins away，then I dropped them into his round body.Sometimes he can “eat” plenty of coins at a time，He becomes heavier and heavier day after day.初中英语写作范文集锦 [七] 范文：我的外籍老师 Our Foreign Teacher Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher.She comes from America.She is thirty-one years old.She has fair hair，white skin and gray eyes.She is tall and slim.She looks very kind.And in fact，she is kind indeed.Ms Jerry is a good teacher.Although she only comes to our school twice a week，she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students.Once，she was ill，but she went on giving us lessons.When we learned this，we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm：“Each lesson she will bring us new pictures，new stories，new games and new songs.Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.范文：参观博物馆 Going to the Museums During a long vacation，I usually like to go to see the exhibitsMany wonderful things are cared for in museums.There are paintings，potteries，sculptures，costumes，swords，ancient animal bones and plants，stuffed animals，antique steam locomotives，and many others.It is always a good review of history to visit those museums.范文：寄信 Mailing a Letter All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city，and even the smallest village has at least one postal station.You may go to a post office to mail a letter.However，there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes.If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address，he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.范文：神奇的贝壳 The Magic Shell At the beach I found a magic shell，so I brought it home in my pail；and I kept it up on my top bookshelf right under the picture whale.And now，whenever I wish I were back there by the shining sea，I hold the shell up close to my ear，till it brings the beach to me：all the hushing sound and the rushing sound of the seashore winds and waves are caught in my shell that I brought home.范文：旅游事业 Ways to Improve china's tourism 【要求】

要求：旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以Ways to Improve China＇s Tourism为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。（提示：扩大宣传，改善旅游设施，提高服务质量„„）【范文】

Ways to Improve china＇s tourisme，China＇s tourism will definitely be improved.First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists.Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip.Finally，the quality of service should be improved.Don＇t tell people their ideas are bad unless you＇ve got a good one.初中英语写作范文集锦 [八] 范文：模范学生 A Model Student Do you mind being called a bad student？Of course not.So far as I know，everybody intends to be（become）a model student.However，to be a model student is by no means an easy thing.First，he must do his best to obtain knowledge.A man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed.Secondly，he must remember to improve his health.Only a strong man can do great tasks.Thirdly，he should receive moral education.If his conduct is not good，no one will consider making friends with him.范文：通电话 A Phone Call I was tired with preparing for the Joint College Entrance Examination the other evening.And having been alone for several hours，I was eager to have someone to chat with me about anything but examinations.So I telephoned my best friend Mary，who was also busy preparing for the joint entrance examination.On the telephone，I told her that I missed her very much.And I invited her to have a cup of coffee with me in a coffeehouse near her home.But to my surprise，she declined and said that she had to devote all her time to her studies.Hearing this，I could do nothing but hang up after saying “Sorry” to her.Disappointed and discouraged，I turned back to my desk and reluctantly buried myself again in my books.范文：春天来了 Spring is coming on Winter has gone，and spring is coming on.Watching the ice melting，I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter.A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance.It is a feast for our eyes and souls.The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring.Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine，enjoying the beautiful scenery，listening to the wonderful music，drinking the new tea，my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire.Spring is the most fantastic season in the year.It means so much to the other three seasons.范文：一个特殊的女孩 A special girl There is a special girl.Why is she special？Firstly she looks like a boy so her classmates always call her a “hoyden”.Maybe they’re right because she also has the same hobbies as the boys.She likes playing soccer，basketball，table tennis，badminton，computer games and so on.If someone bothers her she will feel annoyed and even fight against him.Secondly she is a lovely girl.She loves life very much.You may see her smiling all the time.She likes making friends with others.She likes making jokes with them，too.She likes singing but she is not good at it.She likes dancing，but she is not good at it，either.Thirdly，she is a sentimental girl.She likes talking to birds and flowers.She likes talking to herself，too.When she’s watching TV，she will cry over a touching scene.Sometimes she is moved to cry all day and all night.Lastly she’s a fantastic girl.She has lots of dreams.She always dreams of her future such as her job when she grows up.She wants to be a scientist because scientists invent things that are helpful for our lives.She wants to be a TV hostess because she has beautiful voice and she also wants to be„

That’s why I said she’s special.Do you want to know her？If you can keep the secret I can tell you who she is.The special girl is me.范文：我的生日 My birthday My birthday is on March 23th，I celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.Every year，I hold a little birthday party and invite my friends.We chat and play a lot of games together.The best part of it is that I love the birthday cake and the gifts I get from my parents and my friends.I also get some money on my birthday.I can buy what I want with the money.I have great fun on my birthdays，but on the other hand，I also understand that I am one year older after each birthday and that means I should be more responsible for myself and I should also my self-aware.I should understand more things and be less ignorant！

Fianlly，I should be thankful for my parents，I know they have done their best in raising me up.范文：成人教育的发展 A Boom in Adult education Directions：For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Adult Education.You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below： 1.现在许多成年人都利用业余时间去大学或夜校读书 2.出现这种成人教育热的原因是„„ 范文： A Boom in Adult Education Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li，my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard day’s work，gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class.Miss Li’s case is not unique，and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.There are a number of reasons for people to go back for their education.Some people，like Miss Li，are doing it to acquire another degree or diploma to impress the society.To them more knowledge，or rather，more credentials means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.Other people，especially those who are laid off or out of employment go to vocational school to prepare to return to the job market.They are eager for new skills so that they can be qualified for the jobs in retail trade，administration，education and other service categories to which they are strange because most of them were blue-collar workers in the factory.There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine，painting，calligraphy and photography.As their working weeks decline people begin to have time to fulfill their old dream of their heart’s desire.Out of necessity or out of interest，people go back to school for the common goal——to improve themselves，and this boom in adult education，in turn，helps to raise the intellectual standard of the whole country.初中英语写作范文集锦 [九] 范文：你喜欢哪种方式的旅行？ Which Mode of Travel Do You like? Directions：For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like？ You should write noless than 150 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below： 1.有的人喜欢参加旅行社旅游（package tours）2.有的人喜欢自己独立行动（travelling on one’s own）3.比较这两种旅游方式，我喜欢的是„„ 范文：

With the general standard of living improvingand the working week becoming shorter，more andmore people are able to make a holiday trip toplaces of interest.While many like to joinpackage tours fro convenience，I prefer to traveln my own.I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom.Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss；and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot.I can always adjust my plan.On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base.At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach.At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals.But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.范文：快乐的家 A Happy Family I have a happy family.Although it’s small，it’s full of love.There are four people in my family，my father，my mother，my elder sister and myself——we all love each other.My father is a doctor.He loves his work.Every day he works from dawn to dark.In his spare time，he likes reading and writing books.My mother is a teacher.She is very strict with her students but kind to them.Every day she goes to work early.She is not only a teacher but also a fiend of the students.My sister is a shopkeeper and she has been married for several years.I’m a middle school students.My wish is to be a university student.And my parents often encourage me to work hard.I will try my best to realize my dream.范文：全家福 A Photo of My Family Look at this photograph of my family.There are five people in it.The tallest one is my father.He is forty-eight years old.My mother is standing beside him.She is not as my father.She is three years younger than my father.Sitting in front of them are my grandparents.My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses.My grandmother is as fat as he.This little one is me.I’m sitting between them.All of us love one anther.I have a happy family.范文：快乐的一天 A Happy Day Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday.Now she is 56.I am very happy.Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy.Someone is doing exercise，someone is singing the nation song.A little girl comes to me and says to me，happy National Day.I know she loves the country，but I love her，too.Today is a happy day.范文：最好的朋友 My Best Friend I have a best friend.She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too.Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice-cream.She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name，too——Angle.初中英语写作范文集锦 [十] 范文讲评：周末 「要求」

周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。

周末对于人们来说意味着什么。每个人都有自己度周末的方式。我是怎样度周末的。「范文」 Weekends Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest.For example，people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way.Within two days，some people can relax themselves by listening to music，reading novels，or watching films.Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball，wimming or dancing.Different people have different relaxations.tudy or borrow some books to gain much knowledge.I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision.An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends.Weekends are always enjoyable for me.「评语」

全文思路清晰，论述充分，语言流畅易懂。用词讲究，注意了词语搭配，没有重复、堆砌之感。

范文讲评：节日出行 「要求」

和外国朋友交谈是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是谈什么话题却要慎重考虑，因为各国风俗习惯不同，谈的东西要关涉到禁忌、兴趣。学校的英语角将要组织一次对外交流活动。请你以书面形式写一些可以作为谈话的材料。「范文」 Holidays and Outings It is common in English to ask people about their holidays.In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this.If the holiday has not yet taken place，then their holiday plans can be talked about.And if it is already over，then where they went，whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed.Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel，either at weekends or during their holiday periods，so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions.They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why，especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.Take vacaticn 看完上文，可知这实际上是一篇讨论英语话题的文章。从这个角度来写“Holidays and Outings”这个题目可谓不无新义。但是在与外国人交往时谈些什么都是一个很现实的问题。本文提供了这一范例。全篇也围这个问题来写，几乎每句话都是紧扣中心的。比如它始终突出了这是一个话题，就反复用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等词。范文讲评：介绍你的学校 「要求」

下周将有一批外宾来校参观，请你给外宾简要介绍你校的情况。内容包括三方面： 校史和成绩。学校规模和主要设施。师生状况（词数100—120）。「范文」 An Introduction Our school was built in 1945 and a great number of students have graduated from it.Now many of them have become scientists，professors and engineers.Many students have also become workers and farmers after graduation.They have achieved great success in the development of modern industry and agriculture.Our school is a key middle school in our province.It has thirty classes with over 130students.Our school has a six-storeyed teaching building，several laboratories and a large playground.Last year，a new library was built and it has more than 1000 copies of books.All the teachers here are trying their best to do their work well.Every students is making full use of his time to train himself to be a qualified student.「评语」 文章简洁得体，结构鲜明，语言流畅，介绍具体。读后让人对学校概貌了然于胸。school 还有学派的意思，另外“一群鱼”叫做a school of fish.and long weekends.Never let vacation time expire.「评语」