第一篇:中考首字母填词训练
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Robot Vogel is a p officer in New York.One Morning, he was drinking coffee in a restaurant.Suddenly a man ran in and shouted, “Officer!A car is going down the Officer Vogel ran out of the restaurant and saw a car going at about 25 miles an hour.He jumped intoit.When he was behind it, he turned on his red light and siren(警笛of the road and stopped.Officer Vogel got out of his police car and looked inside.The driver was a littleseat was his littlechildren were crying.”I want my mommy!“ Rocco cried.”But she can't get here, I have the car.“ Then he had an idea ”Just a minute,“ he told Officer Vogel.”I can drive.I will go to get her.“ ”No!“ Officer Vogel said.“You stay with me.”
Officer Vogel drove Rocco and his sister to the police station.Then he called theirfrom thehis father was at work and his mother was sleeping.about Rocco, and a lot of reporters went to his house.One reporter asked Rocco, “What do you want to be when you grow up?” Rocco smiled “I want to be a truck driver,” he said.B
One day a man put an ad in most of the newspapers in England.He said that he himself was a young man of m.He’d like toa girl to be his wife, and the girl must be like the one in books wby Somerest Maugham.This ad was at once k by thousands of parents and young girls.Parents went to shops to look for the books written by Maugham.They bought those books for their daughters as p.Girls tried to get those books to read.They wanted to know what kind of girl the rich and wise young man wfor.Before long all the books written by Maugham were sout and the writer was known all over the country.Who was the rich man? It was Somerest Maugham who put an ad in the newspapers!The ad s, too!
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up my first job as a teacher.The students in my class were about sixteen or seventeen years old, only several years than me.In fact, some of them looked older and seemed more like grownups.And some of them even didn’t listen to me c___3__ in class.The classroom was on the second floor and it was directly above the street.One day, I was writing on the blackboard w____4____ I heard a sudden change in the noise behind me.There was a man standing in the room with half an apple in his hand.He lookeda____5____
“Who threw this?”he shouted, looking around the class.“I beg your pardon?”I said.“s___6_____ threw this apple out of the window.” he said,“It landed on my car.”
“Who threw an apple out of the window?”I shouted to the class.There was no a_____7___.“I want the one who threw this.” said the man, “I will be waiting outside for you.”And then he left, slamming(摔)the door.There was silence and I went on w____8____the lesson.At the end of every lesson, as the bell rang, usually the class were all gone before it finished r___9___, leaving me saying “That's all for today, ”to an empty room.This time, when the bell went for the end of the lesson, no one m___10____.“That's all for today,”I said, “You go first, sir.”said one of the boys.It made a nice change, being first out.D
Life is not always.So you should learn to enjoy your life.Try to stay and longer.Here are some ways to help you live your life more happily.Write down all the good things.These can make you happier.And as for the bad thinking of them.Do not try to with others.They might have a bigger house or a more in your life.Your life may be very busy,you don’t have to do what o7ask you to do each time.Remember to tell your family and friends that you love them.Take activities.You can go hiking in the mountains to breathair.It can make you relaxed.You can also go to the beach to enjoy beach volleyball.Learn new things.There’s always s__10___ new to learn.Read a book or learn on a computer, they can open your mind to the world.Give a helping hand to others.It is also helpful for yourselves and others.You make them happier, and you will be the happiest of all.E
Everybody has one of those days when everything goes wrong.This is what h__1__ to Harry.One morning, he got up very late because his clock stopped.He t__2__ to shave(刮脸)quickly and cut himself.When he got dressed, he got blood all over his shirt,so he had to find a__3_ one.The only other shirt that was clean n_4__ ironing(熨).While he was ironing it, there was a knock at the door.It was the man to collect money for water.After he paid the water b_5__ and showed the man out, he found the iron had burnt a hole in his shirt.So he had to wear the one with the blood on it after all.By this time it was very late, so he t_6__ he couldn’t go to work by bus.He c_7__ for a taxi to take him to work.In another part of the town, a man had killed a woman with a knife and was s_8__ to run away in a taxi.When Harry’s taxi stopped outside his office, a policeman happened to be s_9__ there.He saw the blood on Harry’s shirt, and took him to the police station.He was k__10_ till 3 o’clock p.m.before the police found out that he was not the man they wanted.When he finally arrived at the office at about 4 p.m., his boss took a look at him and told him to find another job.KEYS
A1.police2.driving3.slowly4.followed5.side
6.back7.Both8.key9.while10.heard
B1.millions2.knowledge3.choose4.written5.known
6.presents7.wished8.sold9.saved10.famous
C1.took2.younger3.carefully4.when5.angrily
6.someone7.answer8.with9.ringing10.moved
D1.perfect2.healthier3.keep4.compare5.compare
6.cares7.parts8.others9.fresh10.something
E1.happened2.tried3.another4.needed5.bill
6.thought7.called8.seen9.standing10.kept
第二篇:第二周首字母训练2篇
Have you ever had a day w__1__ everything seemed to go wrong, and nothing seemed to go right? Not too long ago I was having one of those days.I was disappointed and sad.I told it to my mother, h__2__ for some pity.Instead, she said, “I heard Jamie was having a difficult day too.Why don’t you make her some cookies and we’ll take t__3__ to her this afternoon?”
I didn’t r__4__ want to, but I decided that I didn’t want to go back to my other problems just yet.I made the cookies and put it on a little plate.Then I made a card with a sunflower on it and wrote a small note.That afternoon we c__5__ at my friend’s house.I went to the door and rang the bell.Soon, Jamie came to the door and looked at me in surprise for the u__6__ visit.Before she could say anything, I rushed, “I heard you were having a h__7__ day and decided to bring you something.I hope your day goes better.” The look that came over Jamie’s face was one that I could n__8__ put into words.It was as if a darkened sky was suddenly lit up with the golden rays of the sun;because of that small act, her day was brightened.I got back into the car and for some amazing r__9__, I felt a lot better myself.That day I e__9__ the truth that James Barrie attempted to describe, “Those who bring sunshine to the lives of others cannot keep it from themselves.”
People are not perfect, as a matter of fact, we human beings are far from perfect.Everyone makes m__1__ in their lives.Things happen and most of the time, there usually isn’t much time l__2__ for you to consider what to do with this.E__3__ you are given a lot of time, your judgment can still be wrong.After all, you may not have all the n information to make a right __4__decision.Are you ever trying to make up for a silly choice you’ve made? Anyone is s__5__ to make up for his mistakes.Examine your past life choices, you might see w__6__ you went wrong, or come to realize that you should have taken a different way.You might wonder how you could have done such a thing.There are two important things in deciding w__7__ you can actually make up for your mistakes.The first one is to be honest.Do you really feel bad for your fault? Do you t__8__ know that you should have made a different choice?
If that is the case, the second factor lies in the hands of the person, who needs to f__9__ you.Have a chat with him or her.Tell him or her you’re sorry, go on to explain that you sincerely want to make things right.If you can do that, you might find that the unpleasant experiences tend to disappear.What’s more, mistakes can be valuable by learning from them and passing on advice to others.We are not about to p__10__ each other for our mistakes, and we can’t always make up for past mistakes, but we can learn from them, taking the lessons with us as we journey to a brighter tomorrow.
第三篇:2014年上海中考英语改革解析首字母
2014年上海中考英语改革解析——首字母
★字母SECTION 解题秘籍
▲答题步骤:
– 阅读全文(粗读和细读)
– 判断所缺单词词性
– 填出使文章完整通顺的单词
– 检查所填单词的数和时态
▲解题重点:
– 词性(尤其是长句);
– 上下文;
– 固定搭配
– 积累高频词汇;复查语法
▲注意事项: 会判断词性,具备分析句子的结构和成分能力 2 关注细节(时态,语态,人称,名词单复数,形容词副词的级)
3一般全文中5-6个单词相对比较简单,可顺利填出 要学会猜测单词,不留空格 不要在一时拿不定主意的词上纠缠
▲解题难点:
考纲词汇生僻或冷门词汇;
一词多义的词;
实战秘籍揭示:
1.关注特征题目
I.具特征:L_____, H_____, S______, B______,A____........,……....或T___......,…...(前后半句有反意的信息)果断填写
(13普陀)It was quite difficult, and I had to study very hard.L 88 , I got a good mark in the exam in the end.(13浦东一模)H __90__ , Ross Anderson, a computer security engineer at the University of Cambridge, thinks the i_ _91__ could put Microsoft in big trouble.(13浦东二模)It’s not easy for us to forgive(原谅)someone who has ever hurt you or made you disappointed.H 86 , several new studies say that it could be good for your health.(11上海)B____96____, you need to make up a story.(13长宁)A___87___ he had not seen it for more than 20 years, he recognized it immediately.(13奉贤)A____89____ the Internet has made our world better in many ways, in some ways it can be a bad influence.II.具特征much/even______ … than… 加形容词比较级
(13奉贤)The Internet makes it much e____86____ for people to search for information.(13松江)“Goods online are often much c _ 88_.It also saves me a lot of time.(13杨浦)Some pop groups find that m 86 people listen to their songs on their mobile phones than they do on CDs.So many people have mobile phones that sometimes you don’t know when your phone rings.(13杨浦二模)When there is only one parent, of course the responsibilities of looking after the children are much h____89____ for him or her.III.具特征w______ doing i______ of doing(13崇明)You will be able to review your teacher’s lecture w___92___ even getting online again.(崇明二模)One family in the UK went “back in time” to see what life was like w 96 having all the modern inventions.IV.具特征w______ A or B e______ A or B(中考模拟)In this way, they could find out w_______ the stranger was a friend or an enemy.(13闸北二模)In all, 50% of Wayview students get to school in a vehicle, e 88 the bus or a car.V.关注转折词 in fact, but, however 一般前后意思相反
(崇明二模)“Life is speeding up.Everyone is becoming unwell.” This may sound like something someone would say t 92.But in fact, an unknown person who lived in Rome in AD 53 wrote it.VI.具颠覆整句句意的词:h____, s_____, r_____(中考模拟)80% British people who take part in the survey feel that their neighbours h_____ pay attention to others’ feelings.(12徐汇)“I don’t see what’s so interesting about these hutongs.The streets are too narrow---I could h___91___ drive my car down them.(12静安)At home, girls learned washing, cooking, dancing, and the basics of taking care of a household.Poor children s 91 attended school.(13虹口二模)I like driving, just out of pleasure.It’s lucky that I s________ drive without a passenger.So I can earn three or four thousand yuan a month easily.VII.具修饰整句子的副词: r_____, e_____(中考模拟)But have all these developments r 93 improved the quality of our lives?(12浦东)Nobody knows e 88 how many Hutongs there are in nowadays Beijing.2.注意平行结构
A and B 特点 1词性相同 II意思相近or 相反
变式:逗号, or, but, better than, rather than, from A to B(13普陀)I got on the plane with ten other passengers.We took off from the runway and c 90 higher and higher.(13奉贤)But remember to use the Internet p____92____ and wisely.(13崇明)In an online classroom your teacher’s lecture is written rather than s___88_____.(12上海)Cycling with a large guided group is better than r____92 ____ alone.(12 黄浦)Later, I knew an exam was a kind of competition.In competitions, there are always w 90 and losers.(13浦东一模)Microsoft is developing a new software that could accurately guess your name, your age, your s 87 and possibly even your location.(11杨浦)“Don’t throw out your o 93 running shoes.They are better than modern ones,” the study suggests.(13浦东二模)They also have fewer headaches, l 90 blood pressure(血压), and fewer problems on sleeping.(12宝山)It has one hundred and three levels and six thousand five hundred windows.Visitors can ride in one of seventy-three elevators that take them from the b__87__ to very near the top of the building.Some of these elevators are very fast, reaching the eightieth floor in only forty-five seconds.3.合理判断词性(动词注意时态,名词注意单复数)★名词
(12浦东)But if we connected all the Hutongs together, their total l 89 would even be longerthan the famous Great Wall, which is about 4,000 miles.(13静安二模)You can even look on the Internet at sites such as E-bay.Or you can have an e 92 of things you have for something else that you would like to have.★形容词
(13普陀)My parents visited space last year, but I was too y 86 to go with them.I admit that for a few seconds I felt a little n 91 when I sat in the space shuttle.(12静安)In the Renaissance Period(文艺复兴时期)(1500-1650), people became interested in higher education.They wanted to learn the a 86 languages such as Greek and Latin – languages that were used in the old times, and study mathematics, science, and so on.Many universities were set up during the 16th century.(11静安)Don’t feel worried.It’s not your fault(过错)!Being bullied can make you feel very l 93___ and angry, but you are not alone.(13闵行二模)In the Northeast and Middle West, it is very hot at some times and very cold at other times.People in these states have more heart trouble because of the c____86____ weather in February or March.(13闵行二模)Low air pressure(压力)may make people f____91____.People leave more bags on buses and in shops on low air pressure days.(12徐汇)“It’s really s___87___---we’re in the middle of one of the biggest cities in the world, but in these hutongs it feels as if we are in a village in the countryside.★动词原形OR一.过
(13松江一模)“Middle school students should pay more attention to their study.Searching for things w 92 their time.”
(13闸北一模)Many online stores o 87 abig discount(打折)and free delivery service.(13浦东二模)On the other hand, studies p 87 that something like anger can change you(12静安二模)University education was a privilege(特权)of the rich.Girls were not allowed to attend and poor people could not a 87 to go.★动词过去分词(被动语态)特征:be动词+V(P.P)+(by)(13松江二模)Beyond supermarkets, barcodes are n 89 everywhere: for renting cars, for luggage checks on a plane, for parcels you send;(13闵行二模)Are you feeling sad, tired, unhappy or hard to remember things today? If you have one of the above feelings, it may be c____92____ by weather because weather influences people’s health, intelligence and feelings.(12黄浦二模)In Africa, when an antelope(羚羊)wakes up every morning, the first thing it thinks about is, “I must be able to run faster than the fastest lion, or I will be k 86.”(12静安二模)He might study at different universities and since(既然)the teaching was all d 88 inLatin, it didn’t matter(v.= be important)which country he studied in.(13长宁二模)In many countries, oral storytelling is still important, but in most countries now, stories are written down and p 88 in books.★副词
(13长宁)The package consisted of a long, narrow box, c___86___wrapped(包装)in brown paper.(13闸北)Young students are e 91 attracted by advertisements on the Internet and buy things they don’t need.★疑问词
(13闸北)“I like eating duck neck very much and I often buy it on Taobao from shops in Wuhan.It’s much more delicious than w 90 our local stores sell.”
(13杨浦)Now you can have a different sound for every person you know.Your address book is used to find out w 91 is calling.(12松江)Now speaking the foreign language is w 87 most people want.4.注意固定搭配
pay a_____ to 关注 f_______ on an interesting person 关注一个有趣的人
a_____ wine to the recipe 把红酒加入菜谱
by h______用手写 be on s_____ 大甩卖 to my s_______ 让我吃惊的是
be so d_____ from 与…如此不同 be the s______ as 与…相同
It o us good opportunities to meet people from other countries, learn about their c_____ and c_______.它给我们提供和其他国家人见面,学习他们的文化和习俗的好机会
in p_____ 在公众场合 financially i________ 经济独立
have no i______ in following fashion 对追逐时尚不感兴趣—> show great i_____ in…
be l_____ / c_____ to … 连接到。。B____,= In a_____, 除此之外 b_____ A and B 在两者之间 l______ traffic 交通通畅
be n_____ about 对。。紧张 he feels so f______ 感到如此惊恐
be p_____ with 对。。耐心 be c_____ with 对。。小心(13杨浦)
make their teachers feel w_______ 使他们的老师感到担忧
think about c_____ for help 想到求助他人
be more l______ to do 更有可能做 keep his p______ 信守诺言
a_____ the world= t_______ the world 整个世界
share many life e_________ 分享很多生活经历
get into the h______ 养成习惯 sth.you are f______ with 你所熟悉的。。
do r______ on the Internet 在网上做调查 be f______ for 以… 而著名
be f_____ of =be k_____ on喜爱 be a_____ with sb.对… 生气 be m____ up of 由…组成
be l_____ in/on 坐落于… be p____/s______ with 对…满意
have a s _ of public manners 有公共道德的意识 do something in e_______ 做些事作为交换
to my s_______ 让我感到惊奇的是
travel for s_______ 观光旅行
search for the a_____/k______ to the mysteries of space 寻找太空秘密的答案
第四篇:剑网填词
【填词】百恋歌之饮水江湖·剑侠情缘
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百恋歌之饮水江湖·剑侠情缘
【1】【花阳花】浣雪辞 曲:Aqua(改)【2】【天策】剑侠名士录·天策 曲:天道云踪 【3】【策藏】离殇 曲:一夕海棠·离殇 【4】【花羊花】万水千山 曲:BALLAD 【5】清明 曲:雲流れ·东方)【6】【五毒】 曲:色彩の砂 【7】御剑行歌 曲:风运道舞 【8】青门旧事 曲:一舞倾城 【9】饮水志 曲:凤求凰
【10】【花羊花】花犯 曲:火宵の月·テ-マ~ピアノソロ~ 【11】【恶人谷】为心·心外无世 曲:千本樱 【12】一梦江湖 曲:千年破晓 【13】【策藏】饮霜华 曲:夕星 【14】【策藏】逐空 曲:alan-我的月光 【15】策马天涯 曲:剑仙决 【16】剑侠名仕录 曲:季曲(改)
[剑网三]浣雪辞(我也搞不清是花羊还是羊花了 …就让他们互攻吧…)浣雪辞
原曲:Aqua(改)编曲:六道碧落 作词:六道碧落
空谷幽然,谁将落花衔,江湖子弟江湖流连,江湖度百年,惊鸿一瞥,初见谁眉眼,明月天涯怅惘轻弹,相思五十弦,谁轻叹,俯看千江共一月,仰首天弦不见轮回溯转,浣旧雪,已度经年,长亭前,看雪落上你的睫,暮色苍茫看不清谁的脸,任凭风雪漫延,白了一肩,数流年,尝悲欢,梦里不知韶华迁,醉笑一晌贪欢,蓦然谁管,数悲欢,怅流年,指尖温存一笔一画谁脚下,一场纯阳雪。
遥望不知踪,问山水几重,我欲乘风回首怎奈,脚下太匆匆,小楼烛红,你为谁剪灯,万水千山枉然只道,我懂你未曾,我驻足,八方风雨江湖路,一夕天涯两相思作尘烟,可惜冬驻春无见,我仗剑,策马扬鞭为再见,一染杏色一回首的容颜,道再见,应无言,参商了却,看雪落,我指间,无意错抚宫商角,拂了月白满阶,暗浣飞雪,还记旧约?饱墨写,你在天涯赏永年芳菲漫天,唤不见飞雪。
承君诺,又奈何去之蹉跎,谁笛音奏尽了千秋月色,笑言将悠然空惹,欲抚弦,奈何知音苍云别,只问可再复停雪的那夜? 你走远,谁阖眼,尝斩痴念,登高楼,楼角月,怅它常阴晴圆缺,唱过相思长嗟,一场夙劫,把酒盏,泪痕沾,徜了青锋再偿那人世苦甜,拟花落为雪…
若再见,将雪浣,请樽一盏道离别,又见你的掌间,琼碎玉裂,花开谢,又一年
谁在那幡舞楼阁前等一夜,看万花初雪。_完_ 剑侠名士录·天策 曲:天道云踪 词:六道碧落
迢递寒声 望遥京 觅云踪 心若飘蓬 逐征鸿 西风凛
画角连营 一生兵戎 醉卧杀场 苍鹰擎 且御长风醉里挑灯 流云换月岁几程 抬眼万里无疆空蒙 控马扬尘战旗旌 淡生死 家国重
提长枪 满长弓 揽千账 百营
御青骢 舞我长枪唤雷动
饮 血色残阳映(血色孤影映)肃孤城 五十弦翻边塞风 我 金戈静听(静听金戈声)
江湖行 得知己狭路相逢(知己相逢)战 枪烈直指长空
我掌间 看交错掌纹纵横(不怜白发生)立马山河为证(忠义心 江山由我正)凌 云青 越 山万重 征 万里行 路 长冗 乘 北邙之风
问 可有谁唤珍重?......完
【剑网三/策藏】离殇 曲:一夕海棠·离殇 词:六道碧落
曲水环廊 清莲幽香 谁人 弹剑 踏千岗 临帖几行 引墨色点苍 无言对望 风轻微凉
青石巷 你转身 肃长枪 我转身 背斜阳 我回眸 剑上青穗长
思华年 我不言 可悲伤 我不叹 望千里江山万里 苍茫
剑浣花尘拟风雅半场 过客百年踏东水一江 同路江湖 殊途天涯 共闯 当时明月光
春花秋月年复花开花谢都只作梦一场
曲岸浮廊 悬铃回响 流水浮灯 你身旁 角声遥唱 血色染杀场 折戟黄沙 将谁人葬
酒一壶 挥长剑 断痴妄 舞青锋 为君狂 应笑我 声哑犹自唱
念昔时 不曾忘 不敢忘 再回首 无可奈何单影不 成双
梦里不知红尘过客妄 还酹江月望 忘尽应犹在西子浩渺烟波岁堤上 你撑伞缓步 回首轻笑唤一别无恙 完
[剑三/花羊花]万水千山 曲:BALLAD 词:六道碧落
负剑拥长风,山水几重,长安别卿,再见期冥冥,今对盏半盅,东风几程,望你眼中,又几岁枯荣,天微雪倚寒潭 闲鹤何踪。寒剑在手砌乱雪 落一身空蒙,清商抚邀弦歌 故辞几声,一弦一柱入千碧江南梦。伴花落朝暮谁永夜燃灯,白马寒江孤影,才叹物是人空,笑生死醉梦浮生去匆匆,不知今昔何年穷,几时明月中… 挥墨洗天青,花间恣情,一身霜雪,随我迢迢乘,未及先言恐,玉宇楼琼,独望千里,斜月为谁明。人走茶凉换壶 青梅酒澄,江湖夜雨任阶前 点滴到天明,相约始相见终 相思无声,寥阔长天万里怅惘孤鸿… 昔狂吹尽也 昔尘欲沾襟,恍何似在人间,年华换两度新,青山白头叹 你心寂苍穹,他日不遥终相别,无须你相送… 一笑一叹将寒调入素弦,才觉华胥梦还,曲罢人已散,明月星华淡不知清宵半,犹思再见事违愿,又恐路漫漫… 堪岁月长流 勒辔挥剑书,薄雪遥寄花谷,化雨你可逐,看取苍翠老 天涯人驻足,晚步仰首天欲雪,可饮一杯无。难载冰雪温度,一场痴妄逐… 完
[剑三]清明 曲:雲流れ·东方 词:六道碧落
梦里,谁在水中月旁静听 一夜清明雨,桃花浅绽指伞底,惊了谁噫语,谁踏水墨江南来,正值清明再逢君,沽酒饮,一壶江湖两盏尽… 西子湖忆,一别经年去,再觅江湖无知己,俯案凝笔,笔笔相思意,字字珠玑,指剑青天祭。
谁在高楼亭台长殿舞袖 霓裳羽衣曲,回眸,已不见曾惊鸿 一瞥意,谁静听,谁人月华满身御风吹笛,相见,却是两两茫茫相对无语;一盏莲灯一手持两笑间 流光逐年去,掌间,尚存谁人温度可不去? 枕霜雪,江湖旧事谁人得以诉尽,宛尔,挥袖相别经年不减默契。
谁将年华轻付执念,贪恋庄周画蝶笔,谁举杯邀旧时月,轻笑痴人语,为谁剑狂千杯尽,为谁血染浸白衣,谁轻抚,三千念凝指间曲…
寂寞千山路,谁共与,扬鞭逐尘去,只叹江湖**聚,阖目难弃国疮痍,不解已是晓春雨,不减霜华满身袭,寒千山,山回路转已无君… Ha~无言天地寂,青梅可怜枝头依,君子如玉,既再见无期,清明寄雨…
THE END
五毒·
曲:色彩の砂 词:六道碧落
额间谁那远山黛色掩藏银铃响,广都郡南幽涧虫鸣盖熙熙攘攘,百草衔,蛊毒密练,流传的篇章,绝壁花,绽放千年的遗香,舞骨杖,轻吟唱,展翅膀,飞翔,飞花飞莹飞南疆,云雾山下黔灵望,点苍玉龙隔无量,奇藤怪壁灵药长,抬首望江湖苍茫,谁共比肩共扺掌,巴山夜雨猿鸣唱,漂泊天涯,任四海流浪; 谁将骨笛轻奏婉转千里唱悠扬,眼角朱砂微敛奇药诡术布一方,望辽阔,朝升日落,交替的沧桑,越尸潭,脚下绽蝶踏幽篁,御凤凰,手擎苍,天地闯,俯仰,黛山戏水青云朗,扁舟乘风不需桨,少年子弟江湖狂,八千岁月风雨荒,也曾齐辔天下翔,也曾比肩山河望,握紧手中的骨杖,共千里明月倒映千江。
舞骨杖,轻吟唱,展翅膀,飞翔,飞花飞莹飞南疆,云雾山下黔灵望,点苍玉龙隔无量,奇藤怪壁灵药长,抬首望江湖苍茫,谁共比肩共扺掌,巴山夜雨猿鸣唱,漂泊天涯,任四海流浪。-完-剑网三·御剑行歌 曲:风运道舞 词:六道碧落
男:风起,白衣激涟漪,青锋系,弹剑啸歌扁舟立,沐雨,江雾氤氲江山洗,记,豪饮江湖忆,女:望楼宇,长安外山河邻,独夜寂,谁人月下吹笛,打马去,酒阑棋罢月悬星凄,归路万花迷;
合:御剑行,岁月扶摇尽去,抹寒琴,天涯一曲,故人离,乎回首花舞天地,绝响赠知己;
男:此身寄,蜉蝣飘萍何依,今日别,叹嗟再见无期,曾悲欢,几重山水再见无期,女:曾悲欢,几重山水断弦共听,烫酒温寒心;
合:昆仑西,一襟霜雪欲尽,南坪帆,江风引雨,江湖忆,一梦梅落几季,御剑行歌万里——-完-
注(古词):
青门:旧时长安之称 瞿唐:瞿塘峡 怅悢:悲伤 午桥:洛阳名桥 罹:患,遭受 剑网三·青门旧事 曲:一舞倾城 词:六道碧落
但见天微抹云,天尽水长,竹浸酒樽凉,风吹客衣捋襟望,孤楼凭栏,青门旧怅—— 笔墨山河,文人骚客,寻仙问道,须弥纯阳,兰州汀坊,一曲霓裳,青山古刹,半柱长生香,西子崇光,剑予心藏,长策北邙,天高我仰,(敢诩风华)异域南疆,天席地床,曲戏虫蛊骨笛响,(天下无双)袖里乾坤,千手难防,百里灯引幽魂往;
青门梦,悲欢离合严重,青门行,爱恨情仇谁赠,青门空,问谁人还仍记,当年当时景,一叶落尽千山雪,遥送,身后抛,楼台歌舞声声,谁与共,江湖风雨重重,玉虚冯,勾弦撩人羁绪,应笑我多情,莫问弦歌思迢送,几程;
有沽酒处便为家,明日乘风行天下,白龙水接瞿唐月,游巫峡,烟花三旬西子恋,落水红叶渡枫华,龙门西望昆仑雪,一霎下,醉别江楼宦游客,江风引雨赏无暇,剑歌行路归来去,荡天涯;
重阁登,追旧梦,千帆尽,皆难醒,叹怎生,消夜永?古今事,多少恸,(青门梦、青门行、青门空、青门恸)抹寒云,炉上酒熟微醺,残雪纷,谁予知己共饮,(叹怎生、消夜永?古今事、多少恸)袷衣浅,蒹葭外暝色深,愿望尘,苍茫旅浮游身;
青门雪,落掩步痕几阶,青门雪,轻触了谁的睫,青门雪,曾葬过几春秋,落花几岁节,难折青柳赠东风,长嗟,百里华灯明碍月,藕花翠云千千叠,清酒相携就轻舟,青门夜,谁家玉笛声唱断,散入青门更漏远,来去知音各向远,怅悢感;
望四海,天地远何漫漫,荣华东流水,万事付之波澜,半生浪迹间,未免轻狂年少,足下九州宦,可邀共听焦尾弦,赠忘年,诉情缘,谁可无碍无怨,叹变迁,走马山河仗剑,此心对谁言,折柳别青门犹念,故友颜,向楼兰,千里回寄锦书叹,勿相念,谁引花谷淡雨靡,绯雪,立场战,无关正恶之辨,跋涉挑千川,沧海沉浮江湖饮,一盏;
添花佐酒幽谷栖(落素筝斜鸿阵里),宣上添墨勾几笔(勒笔轻描寻仙迹),逍遥辞递,风月无际,西楼淡月楚萧寄,挥袖相别叹轻易,从此明月共千里,别时犹记,皓月千里,从此碧落无相续,江湖催少年子弟,能几度策马快意,盛世青门,一城繁靡,半日京华皆赏尽,记,一笑论文轻狂曲(清狂顾曲),弹剑天祭,旧时不羁,任上酒痕沾衣,怀,忆昔午桥驻马倚,西,望青门枫华覆罹朱雨,青门旧忆,载,几度春风秋雨系......-完-
注(古词):
一漏天:四川多雨,仿若天漏,故有此称; 蘅皋:沼泽湿地等处的水岸; 迤逦:缓慢地; 一成:任随; 夙昔:往昔; 流易:消逝;
顿辔嵩倚:驻马倚望高山,嵩:不指少林嵩山,而是高的意思; 夕息:傍晚时分; 当体:应当用; 临川:水边; 蟾宫:月亮;
剑网三·饮水志 曲:凤求凰 词:六道碧落
(持来碧血染青锋,酒旗斜矗背西风)打马乘,似水好风,弹剑,九霄听,幽篁动,雨中笙,沽酒,剑侠行; 夜凉吹笛深谷传,谁人鸣琴续玉弦,君子如风剑华似月,男儿似铁枪立如阙,双刃舞扇桃花落伞,问断发便断三千念? 万里上都一漏天,银笛戏虫声唱远; 扬州翠千山,昆仑砌雪乱,晚来红泥火炉暖,酒熟饮正酣,长河扁舟衔,远山孤云簪,两汪清池望五岳,一醅凝露照流年,也曾罹雨绊,勒辔停几栈,行尽千里过江南,一夜花落伴,青骢御比肩,百步杨柳穿,会心相视一笑间,江湖再见;
轻鸿欲下征篷卷,回望兮矣寄长安,三万里,驰疆远,昔水犹寒,丹青不渝笔下佚卷,柳营传,数声笳叹,问谁人可定聚散,觅归踪,落雪满,覆了千山,融雪洗刃拭剑,山路转,君已无见; 登高楼兮望泊江舟,风习习兮天地悠悠,飞云冉冉蘅皋雨后,清纹弄皱青蜓碧藕,无限潇湘沧波信流,马嘶人起迤逦缓走,前度刘郎六州歌头,我亦多情一成消忧; 心知情字无长久,不信有白头,人声得意且尽酒,快意行九州,马上长歌遗一喉,望落日楼头,遥岑远目疆无际,饮水世间恣情游,青云千仞疏风微,送下弈白黑,剪烛巴山待夜雨,知己事几时归,咏史犹怀四方志,执纸拓笔挥,陌上枯荣一岁岁。谁共我江湖一醉; 眼前一杯怀夙昔,楚歌南风谱一曲,天未晓,听寒更,微风动裾,落花入领风流揖,黄河西北冲云去,多叹衔我千里心,冬夏歇,寒暑谢,荏苒流易,振衣起,月华披,烟波如遇,顿辔嵩倚,江上棹歌伴人行,(夕息不曾抱影怜,岁暮云一天地换)一阕声长听不尽,(当体七弦寄知己,临川沽酒蟾宫倚)恣情酬,一壶饮,短轴轻楫,(奋袂攘襟素弦勾,记一霎蝶梦庄周)半坞云,一径壁,纷花舞江无人迹。-完-
【花羊花】花犯 曲:火宵の月·テ-マ~ピアノソロ~ 词:六道碧落
梦里不知流连,旋看飞坠阑珊,谁守花谷向远,回首间,一声游吟传,缓马琴声渐远,暂陪暮阳待月,灯似有心千结,今夜雪,覆在谁掌间,承谁一诺谁笑侃,天涯仗剑谁已倦,谁家柳遮亭敝驿,不隔江水去又返,何人念经历山水,流落无几有谁叹,难算,年复他年,谁孤华山颠,遥看; 纯阳霜雪漫天,一剑素白飘散,不解万花阻雪,提笔写,皓月冷千山,谁倚三星望月,月华佐酒畅酣,纵将江湖望穿,谁仍叹,殊途难相见,千载黄粱付笑谈,呓山径寻仙,五更寒,凋零碧树白衫,一世悠然,一时妄言,一朝付流年,听断弦,相逢晚,今昔何年? 回首拾旧阶,才方察是,花犯。完
【恶人谷】为心·心外无世 曲:千本樱 词:六道碧落
跋涉四海广垣,蹄踏九州峰巅,热血烫我心间,满襟豪念,快人快语,快刀快剑,凭心所欲,何为荒诞?
何谓悲怜,何谓侠剑,何谓圣贤,评定正邪,不过立场变,我自快意,信他恶名传,江湖风云,抉择一念间,鹤舞云衔,一剑冲天;
舞我剑戟刀枪,慵眼抬向残阳,三千里昆仑广,九万尺碧落望,世醒独醉何妨,自比独醒欢畅,浮生不过百年,得意处且欢唱,自古败寇成王,怎信青史留长,侯爵帝王将相,无非埃土埋葬,弹指宦世一场,今朝有醉且尝,笑傲天地信闯,谁共与我狂!拨弦金戈清鸣,挥袖青云长空,喜怒随心而定,随世人评,假仁假义,阿谀奉承,虚以委蛇,逐利追名,劳繁世故,不若由心,恣意恣情,人心易变,从来信无用,善恶谁能,真正分辨清,嗔妄痴怨,三千世界中,溯世而观,随波飘萍;
岂知人生之初,其性皆本为恶,虚诩自拟侠路,谁定谁辨谁步,总我罪孽满途,世上几人无辜? 无需神佛救赎,我命由我渡; 何为罪无可恕,其罪谁定与吾? 何谓恶人之路,其恶凭何加诸? 不屑世俗凡夫,枉自定规设谱,江湖自在无束,唯我恶人谷!评定正邪,不过立场变,我自快意,信他恶名传,江湖风云,抉择一念间,鹤舞云衔,一剑冲天; 岂知人生之初,其性皆本为恶,虚诩自拟侠路,谁定谁辨谁步,总我罪孽满途,世上几人无辜? 无需神佛救赎,我命由我渡; 何为罪无可恕,其罪谁定与吾? 何谓恶人之路,其恶凭何加诸? 不屑世俗凡夫,枉自定规设谱,江湖自在无束,唯我恶人谷!
完 【剑网三】一梦江湖 曲:千年破晓 词:六道碧落
一喉长歌记笑谈,浮生去匆匆,天涯人漂泊沉浮似梦;
凄凄芳草千里,拥素云黄鹤去,寒柳遮亭蔽驿,不隔江水离,铸剑歆慕情义,戎装负悠然弃,仗酒祓(fu)酒倾愁饮,寒宵,知己相惜,听画舫舟头歌一曲,戒凡身素心落碧溪,同处天涯倦旅,一壶豪情,闲云鹤谭空山寂,晴昼万花幽谷栖,谁引巴蜀风雨,江湖酣畅一场淋漓。
泛舟临江长揖,自歌谁答我意,谁为千古知己,一笑付千里,残毡拥雪温酒,谁共我一盏尽,逢来夜寒风细,静听,江湖夜雨,闻龙沙夜饮鸣笳凄,望离人曾湿西湖雨,三月烟花扬州,青门犹记,(青门:长安)昆仑踏雪迹无觅,南屏长河一帆行,几度物换星移,晚卷西山一帘风清; 几万里孤云洗长空,窥云外山河叠几重,驻马斜照孤影,归期冥冥,一喉长歌叹匆匆,剑侠漂泊共几程,几度物换星移,江湖沉浮一世如梦。END 【策藏】饮霜华 曲:夕星 词:六道碧落 西子东风 飞花流萤 载花载酒 双影挑灯 月底霜下 月白几成 营马遥闻 四起笳声 伴人一霎 栏杆长 谁将剑藏
青门朱雀 三军将 剑指长枪
意气年少流光葬 葬过他乡
挥袖长拨弦音长 一曲北邙 怀此恨寄残醉 望不尽江山路 长结西湖烟柳负 霜华来扑
暗数十年江湖路 能有几度狂如初 当年醉死差无苦 明灭残烛
流翠江南 桃开半面 谁踏飞花 一地阑珊 霜华鬓染 楼台怅看 桃花酌墨 一纸嫣然 提剑跋涉又一川 纵醉无欢
暮雨朝云去又还 天长梦短
万里云帆断千山 游子客倦
与君共醉霜华夜 风月无关 重刃负漫徒然 望不尽青山远 拭剑霜枕锋寒 天高水远
暗数几度霜华月 折戟归来匣中剑 此别袅袅天涯恨 天涯无边
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【逐空】一词源自九重绯樱大人文,璎珞编绘的一篇龙剑同人漫《逐空》。文案:
少年子弟江湖行,念知己,幸逢知会焦尾意,挽雕弓,联飞鞚,渺神京; 叹好景别时轻易,踏扬州十里路,天地无言,今来古往,此别天涯难见,从来别后月最圆,莫轻叹,古难全;
沽酒亭榭,君遗千钟万古愁,酿雪笑饮,不劝君莫行,自叹吾莫醒; 记江湖比肩,青骢逐蹄人并辔,相濡江湖,几度风流;
送君此去,焦尾拨弦,山回路千转,马行人行曲相形; 黄沙葬剑,横戟沙场,谁闻角声遥唱,旧乡;
再未见,清影黄衫; 皓首两地各不知,且共蟾宫千江月,两处回首,不见双影。
——你我追逐一场,终为空。【剑网三-策藏】逐空 选曲:alan-我的月光 文案/词:六道碧落
青骢会意,扬鞭随,感几朝旧事,度几岁,如东水,宦行走马饮,沽了江湖一杯,断续残阳追,岁晚江空坠,转蓬渡回,俯仰天下一醉,纵怀此闲情,为谁仍唱《式微》? 清光刃携,挽剑书写,携壶结客当时月,谁舞翩跹,花落英谢,浅叠—— 扬州十里,无言谁解,阊门一笑天涯别,(阊门:扬州西门)谁遗千钟雪,独饮一夜,三千埃土葬一培,鲜血—— 高山之意,几人省(xing)
相见两心知,立谈中,死生同,(立谈中:须臾而谈即意气相投;)渺云叠千重层,暮雪千山望空,描梦里丹青,白羽接雕弓,驰射九重,尘世快意感逢,回首千百度,一夜阑珊看尽;
君子如风,何系流景,(流景:流年)人生如寄须酩酊,几度风流,狂歌痛饮,逐空——
剑吼西风,且联飞鞚,(联飞鞚:联辔并驰之意)百岁江湖一梦醒,手寄七弦桐,孤鸿目送,(七弦桐:桐木所造的琴,或五或七弦;)驿寄桃花拟赠春,且行—— 蹄踏纷土,一声唱入,离歌一阕长亭暮,往事后期,今怀昔度,虚无—— 流景铭书,一笑刻骨,血染长戟御马驻,回望天地路,狂笑迟暮,白发谁家客醉歌,空逐—— 一饮千钟,谁共狂,灯火已昏黄,披一身半月光,换了旧年章,无尽今来古往,埃土埋葬...完
[剑网三]策马天涯 曲:剑仙决 词:六道碧落
逢君相携,武陵年少陌上约,长啸歌祭青天,逐去青鸾,足踏也万水千山,风流犹拍人肩。点墨七艺遨弦,身隐花谷心悠然,冷眼枯荣变迁,冯虚御风凌霄汉,青川,禅音钟鸣以平牵尘念,指端芳菲染流年,楼台佾舞无双剑,慕剑惜剑铸剑,恋剑痴剑心藏剑,戎马护我河山,大漠长河孤烟伴,南疆,一去万里回首路遥远,幽篁深风瑟寒箪,诡罗寒剑谁可辨。忘却营营,倚马听江声,对花对酒,长醉不愿醒。
侠路相见,高山流水焦尾弦,与君同共仗剑,执我长剑,策马长啸江湖歌,仰首饮清酒洌,沽酒一壶,携去任疏狂踏遍,望天地染暮雪,千山暮雪,江湖一梦笑谈间,可还记初衷言。明月长圆,平生总稀见,故人长别,无言,千江共月,平生几回见,回身万里,故人长绝…
正气浩然,长策御宇青云看,不愧于吾心间,侠骨义身,剑饮飞雪长指天,洗青锋旧事浣,狂笑三千,何去管那恶名传,天地大我恣然,百岁一梦,青丝绾鬓白苍颜,无需惜白头叹。拭刃剑上角逐,我狂饮一壶,望尽天涯路,谁管百年付,梅花开落一梦,寂寞冢英雄墓,望长空极目,怀剑伴红尘度,意气行涉江湖,目断千山阻,万里帆行何处,谁和我唱今古!驰射风袖扬鞭,齐辔纵马比气岸,倾去前尘再还,犹在西湖波底月,荒寒,风吹散素约几片归人言,归去仍怀初时豪情,纵身化土亦无憾。
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[剑网三]剑侠名仕录 曲:季曲 词:六道碧落
[合] 我辈皆出俊秀,仗剑天下远游,乱世风凉雨凄,风云迭起**不休,道也我意风流,叹也恣情难酬,回望江山千古,剑侠之路情缘难留。[天策] 沙场醉卧策马征戎,横枪望江流,[藏剑] 重刃无锋大巧不工,指剑凌九洲,[万花] 几代风雅百草烹茶,点墨河山,笔下千秋,[纯阳] 纷雪如晤落掩来路,御风诩天穹。[七秀] 昔时佳人剑气一舞,今朝风雨独步,快意江湖情仇,何妨红妆锦绣,[少林] 钟鼓禅音空幽,空山新雨之后,清眉浩眸淡看权谋,出尘入世看透。[合] 天涯倦旅厌否,莫叹伊人白头,犹记经行故处,少年意气刀剑似梦,耳畔纷争声犹,再逢多事之秋,回首身畔点检,谁人共我半生荣忧![唐门] 弩破长空,血划墨钩,[五毒] 魅惑众生,蛊毒覆手,[唐毒] 武林看我巴蜀儿女新起波澜再涌,一代豪雄,岂是中原独生有。
[唐毒] 暴雨梨花,环扣千手,[五毒] 银铃摇响,乌笛轻奏,[少林] 灵犀一点,院扉缓扣,[七秀] 浅披罗裳,独上兰舟,[纯阳] 掌化乾坤,阴阳万生,[万花] 侠路萍逢,青梅煮酒,[藏剑] 铸剑藏楼,玉箪更漏,[天策] 封狼居胥,风华依旧,HA… [五毒] 能善诡术去留,避世巫疆百秋,御蛊衔毒只手,冷眼世间明棋暗斗,[唐门] 暗破流月长沟,道是至钢亦柔,难觅形迹诡踪,翼划天迹我敌任狩,[策藏] 我自狷狂,[花阳] 搠蔑王候,[僧秀] 御风满袖,[唐毒] 寄愿无忧,[天策] 江湖子弟百代英豪过眼即幻空,[合] 萧瑟春秋,愿伴,剑侠一(之)路游!
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第五篇:填词知识集锦
填词知识集锦
一
从历代词话中所涉及的欣赏问题的一些材料来看,对于词作的欣赏,主要是指对于作品澄心息虑的静观默想及揣摩玩味。角度上则有意、境、调、格、声、色、味、神、骨、体、趣诸端。而对于词作之色、味、神等问题,特别是在清代词话,可以来看一看。
论色。沉谦(论词杂说):「白描不可近俗,修饰不得太文,生香真色,在离即之间,不特难知,亦难言。」
王士禛(花草蒙拾):「花间字法,最着意设色。」
先着(词洁)评晏几道(南乡子):「小词之妙,如汉魏五言诗,其风骨兴象,迥乎不同。茍徒求之色泽字句间,斯末矣。然入崇、宣以后,虽情事较新,而体气已薄,亦风气为之,要不可以强也。」
吴衡照(莲子居词话):「飞卿(菩萨蛮)云:『江上柳如烟,雁飞残月天。』(更漏子)云:『银蠋背,绣帘垂。梦长君不知。』(酒泉子)云:『月孤明,风又起,杏花稀。』作小令,若不“似”此着色取致,便觉寡味。」
谢章廷:「设色,词家所不废也。今试取温尉与梦窗较之,便知仙凡别矣。盖所争在风骨,在神韵。温尉生香活色,梦窗所谓七宝楼台,所折不成片段。又其甚者,则浮艳耳。阮亭揣摩花间,沾沾于『?』、『苣』一二字义,是犹见其表而遗其里欤。须知『檀峦金碧,婀娜蓬莱』未必便低便俗于『宝函钿雀,画屏鹧鸪』,亦视驱遣者造诣何如耳。」
沈祥龙(论词随笔):「词不宜过于设色,亦不宜过于白描。设色则无骨,白描则无采。如粲女试妆,不假珠翠而自然浓丽,不洗铅华而自然淡雅,得之矣。」
论味。毛大可(鹤门词序):「大抵词必有意有调有声有色人人知之。若别有气味,在声色之外,则人罕知者。」
孙麟趾(词迳):「学问到至高境界,无可言说。词之高妙,在气味,不在字句也。
论神。田同之(西圃词说):「词以神气为主。取韵者,次也;缕金错采,其末耳。」
沈祥龙(论词随笔):「词韶丽处,不在涂脂抹粉也,诵东坡『冰肌玉骨,自清凉无汗,水殿风来暗香满』句,自觉口吻俱香;悲慨处,不在叹逝伤离也,诵耆卿『渐霜风凄紧,关河冷落,残照当楼』句,自觉神魂欲断。盖皆神不在迹也。」
二
李渔(窥词管见):「曲宜耐唱,词宜耐读。耐唱与耐读有相同处,有绝不相同处。盖同一字也,读是此音,而唱入曲中,全与此音不合者,故不得不为歌儿体贴,宁使读时碍口,以图歌时利吻。词则全为吟诵而设,止求便读而已。便读之法,首忌韵杂,次忌音连,三忌字涩。」
徐渭曰:「读词如冷水浇背,陡然一惊,便是兴观群怨,应是为佣言借貌一流人说法。夫温柔敦厚,诗教也;陡然一惊,固是词中佳境。」
其次,对于诵读的目的、功能、意义,有了比较深刻的认识。谢元淮(填词浅说):「四声平仄、呼吸抑扬,均有自然之妙。即平素不习工尺者,能于照谱填成之后,反复吟哦,自有会心惬意处。大略阴平宜搭上声,阳平宜搭去声,不必拘泥死法。昔人谓孟浩然诗,讽咏之久,有金石宫商之声。诗尚如此,词可忽哉!」
读词的主要目的,不但是为了欣赏前人词作,而且也是为了指导自己创作。陈廷焯(白雨斋词话):「熟读温、韦词,则意境自厚;熟读周、秦词,则韵味自深;熟读苏、辛词,则才气自旺;熟读姜、张词,则格调自高;熟读碧山词,则本原自正,规模自远。本是以求风雅,何必遽让古人。」
蒋兆兰(词说):「作词当以读词为权舆。声音之道,本乎天籁,协乎人心。词本名乐府,可被管弦。今虽音律失传,而善读者,辄能锵洋和韵,抑扬高下,极声调之美。其浏亮谐顺之调固然,即拗涩难读者,亦无不然。及至声调极熟,操管自为,即声响随文字流出,自然合拍!」
再次,比较全面地论述诵读词作的方式方法。孙麟趾(词迳):「阅词者不独赏其词意,尤须审其节奏。节奏与词意俱佳,是为上品。」
(华雨庵词话):「读词之法,心细如发。先屏去一切闲思杂虑,然后心向之,目注之,谛审而咀味之,方见古人用心处。若全不体会,随口唱去,何异老僧诵经,乞儿丐食。」
况周颐(蕙风词话):「读词之法,取前人名句、意境绝佳中,而涵泳玩索之。吾性灵与相浃而俱化,乃真实为吾有,而外物不能夺。三十年前,以此法为日课,养成不入时之性情,不遑恤也。」又云:「学填词,先学读词。抑扬顿挫,心领神会。日久,胸次郁勃,信手拈来,自然丰神谐怀矣。」
夏敬观(蕙风词话诠评):「读词不成腔,不能知腔调音节之要处,故必得读之诀而后可。韵味在表者,见词之字句可知;韵味在内者,非读不悟也。音节要处,在平仄及四声,在句豆,如一领二、二领一、一领三等等。又凡文义二字相连者,不可离而为二;一领二,不可连而为三,诸如此类是也。平上去入四声,自有分别,音须分清。此非谓填词必墨守成规四声也,但填词时必须四声不混耳。」
最后,对于阅读词作所引发的美感享受,有了初步的认识。刘存仁(赌棋山庄词话序):「取竹垞(词综)读之,曼声绰态,啭玉圆珠,使人荡气回肠魂销而不能已。」
蒋敦复(芬陀利室词话):「尝谓词之感人甚于诗,王梦楼太守序(穆堂词)云:访余于京口快雨堂,录所作词数首见示,余适有所感,读之忽至泣下。余皈依空门十馀年,神情寂寞,而穆堂之词,能动余若此,其所诣可知已。然词能动人若此,彼诗之不能动人者,其所诣不愈可知耶。」
三
对于词的创作技巧,历代词话通常采取三言两语点到为止的方式,要言不繁,同时列举大量作品和创作实例,给人以亲切的体会,不但有助于创作,也有助于对词作的欣赏和理解。其中要诀和禁忌的记载论述,虽偶有故弄玄虚之弊,代大体上还是可以参考的,更有价值的是,这些记叙描述了词作家创作的人文环境,对于理解历代词作,有非常重要的意义。
创作,首先是主体的一种有意识活动。刘熙载(艺概.词曲概):「词当合其人之境地以观之。」所谓知人论世,所谓「血管中出来的都是血」,都是说,主体的素质、境地、习性、地位、遭遇等等,对于创作活动有非常密切的关系。
过去词话对于主体的素质性情天分等因素和创作的关系,有非常深入的论述。首先,词话家们认为,创作主体的天赋,是影响创作活动的一个重要因素。(灵芬馆词话):「余尝谓词在难易之间,茍性所不近,虽竭尽心力为之而不工,亦有偶然学之即合者。」陈廷焯(白雨斋词话):「故知东坡、白石具有天授,非人力所可到。」
但是天生的词人毕竟是少数,主要是在后天所形成的素质、性情、性格、气质等因素,对创作也有很大的影响。王士祯曾仿汉扬雄「诗人之赋、词人之赋」旧说,提出了创作主体间的差异:「有诗人之词有词人之词。诗人之词,自然胜引,托寄高旷,如虞山、曲周、吉水、兰阳、新建、益都诸公是也。词人之词,缠绵荡往,穷纤极隐,则凝父、遐周、莼僧、去矜、诸君而外。此理正难简会。」邹祇谟引况周颐(蓼园词选序):「词之为道,贵乎有性情,有襟期,涉世少,读书多。」究其实,作词并非易事,既须天分,也须性情、襟期、学问。
周济(宋四家词选目录序论)评陈允平(八宝装):「西麓和平婉丽,最合世好。但无健举之笔,沉挚之思,学之必使生气汨丧。」
主体的性格、情怀影响词的创作,从创作中也能看出主体性格,而创作活动也可以影响乃至改变主体的气质。田同之(西圃词说)(疑为引述他人之语):「填词亦各见其性情。性情豪放者,强作婉约语,毕竟豪气未除。性情婉约者,强作豪放语不觉婉态自露。」谢章铤(赌棋山庄词话)续编三认为:「余谓此秋珊言,以写其不平耳。夫人文合一,理所固然,究之人自有人之性,文自有文之体,凡秋珊所言者,其故在不深于情耳。深于情,则刚无不柔,直无不曲,当于性中求情之用,若徒求柔求曲,则词格未工,而心术或先病矣。」
但主体的性情、气质等因素的形成,又无不与其生活遭遇有关。因而,创作主要地还是决定于主体的生活遭遇。曾丰(知嫁翁词集序):「歌则杂出于无赖不羁之士,率情性而发耳。礼仪归欤否也,不计也。」虽然曾丰是想批评这些歌词不合道德的,但他却讲出了主体与创作间某种相关关系的普遍规律。词为儒者馀事,作词不能当饭吃,故只有赖无聊或无事的闲人畸人高人才有心情和时间精益求精地去作词。田同之(西圃词说自序)则以自己为例,具体地说明了这一规律:「忽忽数十年,沉困于制举艺,不暇兼及.....今老矣,卧病岩间,无所事事,复流连于宋之六十家中,勉强效颦,以寄情性。」
发愤而作不平则鸣文章憎命达,前代的诗文论中,对于主体的不幸遭遇或坎坷经历与创作的关系,早有论述。历代词话继承了这一观点,并有所深化及发展。明许孚远(升庵长短句序):「天生异材,投之闲寂,困之厄穷,达观造化之理,探索经史之蕴,经纶满腹,无所发泄于致主匡时之略,而仅着为文词。其纵横变化,穷极绮丽,有以也。然则尚论先生者,当先知其人品与其学术,而后可以读其文词。长短句,文之末流也,先生盖出其馀力为之,而非所以先也。」杨慎被放逐到云南,「致主匡时」当然谈不上了,于是退而求其次,弄起文词来。中国文人总有一种修齐治平情结,文学被看成是第二位的东西,被作为发牢骚的工具。于是有了「发愤着书」说。小词原为遣兴娱宾的轻松玩艺儿,现在却成了「厄穷」的产物。
冯金伯(词苑萃编)引陈子龙云:「宋人欢愉愁苦之致,动于中而不能抑者,类发于诗馀,故其所造独工。」把欢愉也包括进来,比较全面。浙西派后学吴锡麒(张渌卿露华词序)说:「昔欧阳公序圣俞诗,谓穷而后工,而吾谓唯词尤甚。盖其萧寥孤奇之旨,幽琼独造之音,必与麈事罕交,冷趣相恰,而后托ㄠ弦而徐引,激寒吹以自鸣,天籁一通,奇弄乃发。若夫大酒肥鱼之社,眼花耳热之娱,又岂能习其铿锵,谐诸节奏?」太平发福之人,优游卒岁,那里还会写什幺词?穷而后工,是诗词的共同规律。李佳(左庵词话):「韩子云:『欢笑之词难工,艰苦之言易好。』诗文皆然,词亦何莫不然。统观诸作,凡泛泛应酬,空空写景,半属平平。若骚客劳人,俯仰古今,溯洄身世,自罔不情味隽永,令读者百回不厌。」就是说,欢乐之词即使写了,也属平平,没什幺意思。
当然,这种人生遭遇,还必须通过主体的心境才能起作用。这就是所谓「词心」。冯煦(蒿庵论词):「少游以绝尘之才,早与胜流,不可一世,而一谪南荒,遽丧灵宝。故所为词,寄慨身世,闲雅有情思,酒边花下,一往而深,而怨悱不乱,悄乎得小雅之遗,后主而后,一人而已。昔张天如论相如之赋云:『他人之赋,赋才也。长卿,赋心也。』予于少游词亦云:『他人之词,词才也。少游,词心也。』得之于内,不可以传,虽子瞻之明隽,耆卿之幽秀,犹若有瞠乎后者,况其下邪。」况周诒(蕙风词话):「吾听风雨,吾览江山,常觉风雨江山外有万不得已者在。此万不得已者,由吾心酝酿而出,即吾词之真也,非可强为,亦无庸强求。视吾心之酝酿何如耳。吾心为主,而书卷辅也。书卷多,吾言尤易出耳。」
「词心」这一问题的提出,是对于创作主体的更深一步的分析。如果说,所谓「赋家之心」,主要是指作者的怀抱,那幺,「词家之心」,则是主体生命的体现。如果说,宋代以来的诗歌,更多地承担了应酬或应景的任务,那幺宋代以来的词作,则更
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