大学生英语作文中语法错误的分析

第一篇：大学生英语作文中语法错误的分析

大学生英语作文中语法错误的分析

大学生在特殊疑问句中最常发生语序错误，如用短语代替句子“How to make the living conditionbetter”，或用正常语序代替倒装语序“Why theliving condition in large cities becomes so bad”。这是典型的用汉语思维应用英语的例子。

3．动词使用错误

英语中的大部分动词有固定的用法，如一些使令性和表建议的动词引导的从句要用虚拟语气，一些动词后只能用不定式，一些动词后只能用动名词，一些动词后只能用去掉to的不定式，一些动词是不及物动词，一些动词是及物动词。研究发现，大学生经常使用且容易出错的动词有suggest，make，give，help，cause，afford，need，develop等。如在“I sug—gest we will build more houses to hold them”、“The gap between the city and the rural areasmake many graduates to be reluctant to leave thegood conditions”、“Only rich people can afford”等句子中，这些动词属英语中的常用动词，教师在课堂上都进行了讲解，但仍有学生混淆其用法。

4．搭配错误

将汉语的思维用于英语写作而造成的搭配错误在大学生的作文中比比皆是，其中主谓搭配错误最为突出，在选取的100篇文章中共出现了128次，有的学生在1篇作文中甚至多次出现这样的错误。如在“Nowadays the housing station isn’t optimistic inlarge cities”、“Buying a house needs a lot of money”、“SO the customers are limited”、“When the livingcondition is higher than before,I think there willbe less people leaving their homeland"等句子中，学生将汉语中的一些表达法原封不动地套用在英语中，导致了错误的发生。

三、对教学的启示

通过对大学生英语学习中存在错误的分析，课题组认为可以通过两个方面的努力来帮助学生避免错误的发生。

首先，许多英语语法错误都属于语际迁移错误。Selinker等语言学家认为，第二语言学习者的语言应当被看作一个内在的语言系统，它是介于第一语言和第二语言之间的过渡语，学习者通过语言迁移、语内迁移、训练迁移、外语学习策略、外语交际策略等手段构建自己的中介语结构。中国学生的外语学习过程是一种新知识的学习过程，学习者大多通过课堂活动学习外语，借助教学手段习得该语言的知识和能力，在此过程中建立起来的中介语体系不可能像母语那样完整和自然，当他们不能用目的语知识有效地进行语言活动时，母语的知识就被用来填补这一空白，故而会发生语际迁移。这对大学英语教学有很大的启发。如果教师能把语言对比、错误分析、文化比较与语言习得有机地结合起来，就能帮助学生有效地利用已知知识实现汉语思维向英语思维的正迁移。因此，教师在讲解英语课文时，应更加注重对课文进行语篇分析。如果在最初的2个学期能引入更多的英语与汉语的对比分析，将对学生英语语法知识的巩固及其运用能力的提高起到有效的促进作用。

其次，从学生出现的语内迁移错误中发现，学生并非不了解一些语法规则。因为如果这些语法以选择题的形式出现，大多数学生毫无困难。由此可以推出，问题的本质在于缺乏实际的练习。SharwoodSmith指出，大部分即席语言运用来自练习。他认为，直接集中精力学习过语法并有很多机会在有意义的语境中联系使用语法的学习者，更有可能把语法规则牢牢地储存在长期记忆中并正确使用。大学生的英语语法错误所暴露出的一个教学弱点是，大学英语的语法教学没有足够的练习与之配合。这里所谓的练习并非指教材中常出现的选择、填

空等枯燥的练习，而是指贴近实际的产出性的口语或写作练习。因此，英语教师应在英语语法授课之后，围绕课文中出现的重点语法现象设计一些练习，使学生能够将所学语法进行实际的运用。这样，语法知识必将在学生的脑海里留下更持久的印记。

第二篇：英语作文中名人例子

4008111111 英语作文中名人例子

1.成功 / 英雄 / 困难类（被写的经久不衰！）2.大众观点类：（媒体 / 团体 / 主流）

3.谎言 / 现象本质 / 隐私（这个我也不懂）4.动机类（这个说的优点玄乎）5.改变 / 科技 / 创新类

6.了解自身类 7.选择类

下面就淘选了些经典例子！

1.Bill Gates（比尔盖茨）

When Bill Gates made his decision to drop out from Harvard, he did not care too much of the result.Gates entered Harvard in 1973, and dropped out two years later when he and Allen started the engine of Microsoft.Many people did not understand why Gates gave up such a good opportunity to study in the world’s No.1 University.However, with size comes power, Microsoft dominates the PC market with its operating systems, such as MS-DOS and Windows.Now, Microsoft becomes the biggest software company in the world and Bill Gates becomes the richest man in the world.用于有放弃就会有所得、勇气、懂得把握机会类

2.Thomas Edison（托马斯 爱迪生）

In 1879, after more than 1,000 trials and $40,000, Thomas Edison introduced an inexpensive alternative to candles and gaslight: the incandescent lamp.Using carbonized filaments from cotton thread, his light bulb burned for two days.These bulbs were first installed on the steamship Columbia and have been lighting up the world ever since.用于创造力/科技类、失败是成功之母、努力、成功 / 英雄 / 困难类

3.Mother Teresa（特雷莎修女）

Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India, thus gaining her the name “Saint of the Gutters.” The devotion towards the poor won her respect throughout the world and the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979.She founded an order of nuns called the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta, India dedicated to serving the poor.Almost 50 years later, the Missionaries of Charity have grown from 12 sisters in India to over 3,000 in 517 missions throughout 100 countries worldwide.用于大众观点类/善良、品性/

4.Diana Spencer（戴安娜王妃）

Lady Diana Spencer, Princess of Whales, is remembered and respected by people all over the world more for her beauty, kindness, humanity and charitable activities than for her technical skills.不好意思了，戴安娜王妃，我还真不知怎么用你呢..5.Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela（纳尔逊·罗利赫拉赫拉·曼德拉）

Mandela, the South African black political leader and former president, was awarded 1993 Nobel Peace Prize for his efforts to antiracism and antiapartheid.Nelson Mandela is one of the great moral and political leaders of our time: an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the presidency of his country.Since his triumphant release in 1990 from more than a quarter-century of imprisonment, Mandela has been at the centre of the most compelling and inspiring political drama in the world.As president of the African National Congress and head of South Africa‘s antiapartheid movement, he was instrumental in moving the nation toward multiracial government and majority rule.He is revered everywhere as a vital force in the fight for human rights and racial equality.用于英雄、斗争/大众观点类（非暴力）/

6.Beethoven（贝多芬）

Beethoven, the German Composer, began to lose his hearing in 1801 and was entirely deaf by 1819.However, this obstacle could not keep him from becoming one of the most famous and prolific composers in art history.His music, including 9 symphonies, 5 piano concertos, several senates and so on, formes a transition from classical to romantic composition.用于成功 / 英雄 / 困难类 7.George Bush（乔治 布什）

On January 16, 1991, President Bush ordered the commencement of Operation Desert Storm, a massive U.S.-led military offensive against Iraq in the Persian Gulf.In late 1992, Bush ordered U.S.troops into Somalia, a nation devastated by drought and civil war.The peacekeeping mission would prove the most disastrous since Lebanon, and President Clinton abruptly called it off in 1993.用于成功 / 英雄 / 困难类

8.Jimmy Carter（吉米卡特）

President Carter's policy of placing human rights records at the forefront of America's relationships with other nations contributed to a cooling of Cold War relations in the late 1970s.In 1980, for the first time in seven years, Fidel Castro authorized emigration out of Cuba by the country's citizens.The United States welcomed the Cubans, but later took steps to slow the tide when evidence suggested that Castro was using the refugee flight to empty his prisons.用于成功 / 英雄 / 困难类/斗争、9.Neville Chamberlain（内维尔张伯伦）

In 1938, British Prime Minister Chamberlain signed the Munich Pact with Adolf Hitler, an agreement that gave Czechoslovakia away to Nazi conquest while bringing, as Chamberlain promised, “peace in our time.”

Eleven months after the signing of the Munich Pact, Germany broke the peace in Europe by invading Poland.A solemn Chamberlain had no choice but to declare war, and World War II began in Europe.不喜欢他，不说了...10.Raoul Wallenberg（瓦伦堡）

Raoul Wallenberg was a young Swedish aristocrat.In 1944 he left the safety of his country and entered Budapest.Over the next year he outwitted the Nazis and saved as many as 100,000 Jews(he was not himself Jewish)from the death camps.In 1945 he was arrested by the Russians, charged with spying, and imprisoned in a Russian labor camp.用于道德类/英雄、自救（Conscience is a more powerful motivation than money,fame and power）

11.George Soros--（乔治 索斯洛）the financial crocodile Soros, who at one stage after the fall of the Berlin Wall was providing more assistance to Russia than the US government, believes in practising what he preaches.His Open Society Institute has been pivotal in helping eastern European countries develop democratic societies and market economies.Soros has the advantage of an insider's knowledge of the workings of global capitalism, so his criticism is particularly pointed.Last year, the Soros foundation's network spent nearly half a billion dollars on projects in education, public health and promoting democracy, making it one of the world's largest private donors.用于大众观点类：（媒体 / 团体 / 主流）

12.Paul Revere（保罗）

Our perceptive towards Paul Revere just illustrates this point.According to the romantic legend, he, galloping along of the dark from one farm house to another, alerted the people to the coming British.And of course the story emphasized the courage of one man, made him a hero in our history books.However, his heroism required a matrix of others

who were already well-prepared to mobilize against the oppressor and he was just one part of a pre-arrange plan.Heroes like Revere have no usefulness apart from a society primed to act.用于英雄、斗争/勇敢/合作类Cooperation

13.Henry Ford（亨利 福特）

Henry ford,one of the most influential inventors in the history, was always inattentive in school.Once ,he and a friend took a watch apart to probe the principle behind it.Angry and upset, the teacher punished him both to stay after school.their punishment was to stay until they had fixed the watch.but the teacher did not know young ford’s genius,in ten minutes,this mechanical wizard had repaired the watch and was on this way home.It is imagination that invigorated Ford to make a through inquiry about things he did not know.He once plugged up the spout of a teapot and placed it on the fire.then he waited to see what would happen.the water boiled and, of course, turned to steam.since the steam had no way to escape, the teapot exploded.the explosion cracked a mirror and broke a window.Ford’s year of curiosity and tinkering paid off,when he built his imagination of horseless carriage into reality, the history of transportation was changed forever

用于creativity/curiosity/科技类

15.Alexander Graham Bell（亚历山大 格雷厄姆贝尔）

Not realizing the full impact it would have on society, Alexander Graham Bell introduced the first telephone to an amazed audience at America's Centennial Exposition in Philadelphia in 1876.Within a year, Bell had installed 230 phones and established the Bell Telephone Company, which was later transformed into AT&T.In 1997, 643,000,000,000 calls were made by people in the United States alone.用于英雄/创造、科技/影响力类

考研政治大题答题技巧

普遍适用规则：

在掌握知识量基本相同的情况下，答题技巧的不同可能使总分相差10到20分。政治的考研试卷中大题的分值占百分之六十，而实际上大题也是技巧性最强的题型。下面向大家介绍大题答题四步曲：第一步：仔细审题。找出本题目是关于哪个学科的哪个章节，在草稿纸上写下此章节内所有可能与本题有联系的基本概念及原理。大多数题目是跨章节，甚至跨学科的，要注意思维的发散性。

第二步：解释每一个概念并写出原理的基本内容。如果自己写出的相关概念太多，则视试卷留出的空白捡重要的写，解释概念和原理一般不要超过本题答题空间的二分之一。什么？

太多了？不要怕，答多不扣分。但要注意答题时每个概念和原理要作为一段，字迹要工整清晰。好了，本题目分数的一半你已经拿到了，下面进行第三步。

第三步：联系实际。如果本题是论述题，则根据本题联系实际中的一些现象，给出评价；如果本题是材料题，则材料就是实际，指出材料中的一些问题，也就是将材料用你学过的关于政治的术语再复述一遍。这部分一定要有，而且要作为一个段落，如果字迹工整的话，即使这一段答得驴头不对马嘴，至少也有两分。第四步：总结。这一部分是绝对送分的，但也要有技巧。要将其作为一个段落，如果此题是论述题，则将整个题目再复述一遍，不要忘了在前面加上一个所以；如果此题是材料题，则提倡材料中好的做法，批评材料中坏的做法。

如果答大题时你能熟练地按上面的四步做，大题方面你至少可以比相同水平的其他人多得n分，不信？ 试用历史唯物主义的有关原理说明“以德治国”与“以法治国”的关系及其重要意义(2002年政治重中之重)。首先仔细读题目，题目中已经告诉我们是用马哲中的历史唯物主义的几章的原理，而以法治国和以德治国是邓论中的内容，因此要考虑将两个学科结合起来答题。表面上看题目中有两个基本概念以法治国和以德治国，联系到马哲，以德治国便是是道德问题，是上层建筑；以法治国便是法制问题。如此以来，此题需要答的基本概念和原理有：道德，法制，以德治国，以法治国，上层建筑，道德与法制的关系，以法治国和以德治国的关系。然后联系实际，这一步没关系，只要稍微写两句而且字迹工整便不失大格。最后总结，好像这里把题目重抄一遍不顺口，其实只要稍微一改便行：要把以法治国和以德治国相结合。

下面我们看一下标准答案：

1)历史唯物主义认为道德与法制既有联系又有区别，二者的区别表现在：道德的概念；法制的概念；道德与法制的关系。

2)历史唯物主义又认为，社会的经济基础决定上层建筑的产生、性质和变化；上层建筑反作用于经济基础。社会主义的法律和道德是社会主义上层建筑的重要组成部分，它对经济基础的发展有重大意义。

3)以法治国和以德治国又是相辅相成，不可分割的。以法治国的概念；以德治国的概念；以法治国和以德治国的关系。

4)把以德治国和以法治国紧密的结合起来，是建设有中国特色的社会主义的要求，也是社会主义市场经济的要求。怎么样，是不是感到大题的简单了？上面是我总结的几条关于政治考研的技巧，如果你能真正掌握它，不好意思，你的政治考研分数再也没有希望低于70分了。论述题：

第一步：仔细审题。

建议考生找出本题目是关于哪个科学的哪个章节，在草稿纸上写下此章节内所有可能与本题有联系的基本概念及原理。大多数题目是跨章节，甚至跨学科的，要注意思维的发散性。第二步：解释每一个概念并写出原理的基本内容。如果自己写出的相关概念太多，建议视试卷留出的空白捡重要的写，解释概念和原理一般不要超过本题答题空间的二分之一。什么？太多了？不要怕，答多了不扣分。但考生要注意答题时每个概念和原理要作为一段，字迹要工整清晰。好了，本题目分数的一半你已经拿到了，下面进行第三步。

第三步：联系实际。

如果本题是论述题，建议考生根据本题联系实际中的一些现象，给出评价，如果本题是材料题，则材料就是实际，指出材料中的一些问题，也就是将材料用你学过的关于政治的术语再复述一遍。这部分一定有要有，而且要作为一个段落，字迹工整。

第四步；总结。

这一部分是绝对送分的，但也要有技巧。将其作为一个段落，如果此题是论述题，则将整个题目再复述一遍，不要忘了在前面加上一个所以；如果此题是材料题，则提倡材料中好的做法，批评材料中坏的做法。

上面的四步中好像没有提过辨析题，辨析题就是一个分值较少而且需要判断的论述题，除了判断以外，上面的四步同样适用。但要求考生特别注意的是辨析题的判断，千万不要盲目的说其对错，例如一些题目的前半部分是对的而后半部分产错的，有的题目说的不会面，这些都要指出。材料题：

如何回答政治材料题

一、政治材料分析题的基本特点：

1、提供情境，包含手段和结果，要求从结果的好与坏来判断所运用手段是否合理，并要求提出相应的解决办法。

2、要求规范的答题步骤：先答基本原理，引出配套的方法，进而用方法来分析材料。

3、要求多角度分析所蕴涵的知识。

二、解题的基本思路：

1、从方法入手：先判断材料所持方法（手段）——根据知识体系中原理和方法（手段）的固定搭配得出基本原理。

2、判断方法最主要的依据是材料中的重点语句，对重点语句进行范畴归属判断，进而了解所持手段（方法）。

3、审题时应注意题目的限制性要求，并由此得出知识体系的大范围。

4、应注意材料中的效果，如果效果是积极的，说明所持方法（手段）是正确的；如果效果是消极的，说明所持方法（手段）是错误的。

错误的情况有很多种，最主要有以下几种：（1）与正确方法（手段）相对立；（2）主次颠倒；（3）主次不分；（4）割裂本来存在的联系。

5、应对材料进行层次分析，以便与方法（手段）相对应。找出所包含条件（重点语句），回答时决不能漏掉材料中所包含条件。

三、答题的基本步骤：

1、先回答基本原理

2、其次回答方法（手段）要求

3、把方法细化成几个方面，与材料层次对接，用材料替代原理，一一对应。

四、检查阶段：

1、应注意材料中所包含的条件是否全部用完，如果没有用完，说明前面所述知识点还有缺漏，应补齐。

2、检查重点语句范畴判断是否正确。

3、检查步骤是否完整、规范。是否按照：原理———方法———实践分析的步骤。

五、复习的基本要求：

1、应分层对知识进行整理，分为“是什么”、“为什么”、“怎么办”三部分，其中，“是什么”和“为什么”属于基本原理：“怎么办”属于方法（手段）。

2、“是什么”主要用与范畴判断，用以审题中的思路引入，即材料中重点语句范畴判断，借以得出原理。

3、“为什么”主要指关系、地位和作用、意义等，它是方法（手段）的理论出发点。

4、“怎么办”是掌握知识点的落脚点，也是材料引入的关键。“怎么办”不能停留在课本的水平上，还应与重大时事、党的路线、方针、政策相联系，把党的路线、方针、政策细化、归并入课本的基本点。

5、应对所有知识进行规范化整理，一方面，把所有知识分解为基本原理和基本要求（方法或手段）两大块；另一方面，按大、中、小三个

角度进行整理，“大”指最基本的原理，“中”指课本的具体要求，“小”指党的路线、方针、政策（它是课本具体要求的细化）；第

三、应注意知识之间的内在联系，进行横向整理，以便多角度地思考问题

分析题答题技巧材料分析题在近几年考研政治试卷中所占的分值比较重，需要考生加强训练。

（一）分析题

解答分析题的基本思路和步骤是：

1．仔细审题并抓关键词。大多数分析题是跨章节，甚至跨学科的。答题之前要仔细阅读题干、材料及问题，答题之前要仔细阅读题干、材料及问题，了解题目需要回答什么，为什么要这样回答，怎么回答。要注意思维的发散性。这是做好分析体的第一步，也是最关键的一步。找出本题目是关于哪个学科的哪个章节，在草稿纸上写下此章节内所有可能与本题有联系的基本概念及原理。对跨章节，甚至跨学科的题目，要注意思维的发散性。审题可以运用以下几种方法：

（1）逆向审题法：先搞清楚题目问什么？有几问？然后带着问题阅读材料。这样做可以不必要地重复审题，节省宝贵的考试时间。

（2）寻找关键词：抓关键词语，力求搞清每段材料的中心含义，努力回忆与此相关的课文理论，并注意筛选。

（3）分析层次法：对一大段材料的要分层并弄清每层意思，这种层次性既体现在题干的表述或材料中，也会明确出现在题后的设问中。通过分析，抓住试题的主旨，再按其要求分别回答，这样可以避免遗漏。

2．阅读材料并组织答案。在审清题意的基础上，仔细阅读题干或者材料。阅读时可边阅读边划出材料中带有结论性或倾向性的话语，或者在草稿纸上写下相关信息（注意不要沉溺于细节、事例或者数字），同时搜索、提取大脑中平时储存的相关知识，然后理清思路，组织答案。

3．答题时注意：

（1）凡问现象的问题，首先回答表象，即看到什么，就回答什么，不需太展开，简要回答即可。随后，必须回答现象之后隐含的实质（本质），这才是重点。

（2）凡是“分析”、“评述”的，就需要用原理紧扣材料进行分析。一般的思路是先表述相关原理，然后再联系材料中的现象进行分析、评述，可按是什么、为什么、怎么样的思路组织答案。

（3）回答问题注意层次性，要行文规范，简洁干练，表述准确，答案能紧扣要点，切忌东拉西扯、繁琐冗长。

（二）材料分析题

材料分析在2006年统一归进了分析题中，其形式独特，分值比例大，难度也不小，是考生考研中的一大难点，这里就单独列出再讲述一下其答题技巧。考生在解答材料分析题时要注意两点：一要注重联系实际，材料归纳出来后，用相关的事实理论做依据进行分析。二是结合理论分析问题时，要尽可能全面。材料涉及几个点，答题时就要将这几个点答全，每个点不需要展开太多，但要把基本要点说到。解答材料题时，尤其要注意层次和逻辑，不要自相矛盾，在答案中最好把观点一一罗列出来，便于阅卷教师找到要点。

解答材料式分析题的基本要求：在理论部分，要求准确选择与解题有关的基础知识。这是解

题的主导部分，是命题的出发点、立足点和依据。要准确、简洁地回答出有关理论知识内容。这一部分答好了，就能为下一步解题做好铺垫，使后面的分析论述有理有据。

首先，“掐头取尾”，看题干提示句和题后要求回答的问题。一般的材料题开题就有一句：“下面是一组关于......的材料”，这就给考生在阅读时获取什么样的信息界定了范围，使阅读不再盲目，以获取相关信息为重；然后，再迅速浏览题后问题，问题的要求又进一步缩小了信息取舍的范围，什么是“的”，在这里就确定了。最后，带着问题阅读材料。

其次，仔细而快速地阅读材料。认真研读试题材料，准确把握材料内容，深挖材料内涵。材料分析题的材料灵活多变，无一固定模式。有文字型的、图表型的：文字型的可分为摘自报刊、古籍、文件、人物讲话，也有命题者描述某种现象，提出几种观点的；图表型的有漫画、表格、地图、历史文物图片、函数图等。材料可能是一则，也可能有多则；既有单一类型的，也有文字型、图表型混合的；材料长短也各异，有的十分简短，有的篇幅冗长。不管材料以何种形式出现，认真阅读材料是基础，掌握其中信息是关键。

一般的材料提供信息很多，有主有次，还有重复的，这就提醒考生在做这类试题、阅读材料时，边读边用铅笔将含义相同的归类，并用1、2、3、......标注，对重要的核心句或者关键词，在下面画线，以备答题时直接应用，避免大量的重复阅读，造成无为的浪费。第三，利用获取的信息回答问题。在答题论述时，要求做到观点和材料的统一。这是解题的主体部分，要求考生用选定的基础理论知识，联系题中的材料进行分析论述，把理论与实际、观点与事实结合起来，即做到事理交融，观点统帅材料。要紧扣材料分析，或从材料中提炼出观点，或用观点分析材料，或用材料论证观点。防止就事论事，或就理论谈理论。第四，简短有力地做好小结。在小结部分，要牢牢抓住题意，适可而止。这是答题的结尾部分，是解题的落脚点。在结尾时，或针砭时弊，或点明意义，或联系自身，这些都要从题意出发，恰到好处，总的要求是思路清晰、表述简练、视角丰富，达到用画龙点睛、升华主题的目的就可。

第三篇：英语作文常见典型语法错误归纳

优化英语写作

在表达方面，初学者常见差错中最为典型的是写汉语式英语，即不符合英语表达习惯的句子。出现汉语式英语的原因往往表现在两个方面，一个是把具有某个汉语释义的英语单词用在英语句子中不恰当的地方，即写错某些词语的意思、搭配或位臵；另一个是按汉语思维的顺序去排列英语句子，自造表达方法。

请看下列例句：

1.During the holiday，I learned to wrap dumplings.2.My grandpa sees the gate for a factory.3.She received the first place in the singing competition.4.Under the teacher's help I worked out the difficult problem.5.In the afternoon，I played table-tennis with Xiao Ming and I always won him.6.The man dresses a black coat.7.The policeman caught the thief's arm.8.I very like English.9.He wastes sleep and forgets meals when he studies.10.Our Chinese teacher bites his words and sentences when he speaks.在以上的句子中，例句1至8属于第一种错误。

其中，第1至4例句是把英语单词的一个汉语释义生硬地放在了英语句子中。

1.汉语中的“包饺子”是指从无到有地把饺子做出来，制做过程是“包”；而英语的wrap是指把现有的东西包起来，只有“包”这个意思，没有制做的意思。所以例句1中的wrap应该改为make.2.例句2中“看门”的“看”是“看守”的意思，并不是一直用眼睛盯着看。所以应该把sees改为keeps或guards.3.例句3中的receive是指“得到”具体的物件，不是抽象的名次。获得什么名次要说成get/take/win the……place.4.例句4是要说“在老师的帮助下，我解出了那道难题”，其实前半句是指“借助于老师的帮助”的意思，应该把under改为with.5.例句5是用错了英语单词的搭配。本句中的won只能用运动项目或活动作宾语，不能是人。要说“赢了某人”应该说成beat sb.。

例句6至8不符合英语的表达习惯。

6.第6句中的dress不能在其后直接跟衣服名称，其常见的结构是“dress sb.in+衣服名称”。所以本句应该改为：The man dresses himself in a black coat.英语中要说“抓住某人的胳膊”，句型应该是catch sb.by the arm.7.例句7应该改为：The policeman caught the thief by the arm.需要注意的其他常用动词结构还有cost sb.sth.，hit sb.in the face等。

8.例句8中very是副词，但习惯上只用来修饰形容词或其他副词，不用来修饰动词。修饰动词要用very much，而且常臵于句末。

汉语句子中某些词语出现在某一位臵，在英语句子中表示同一个意思的词语不一定也在那个位臵上。所以一定要注意英汉句子词序的差别。写错词序也是一种典型的错误。再如要说“我对他很熟悉”，英语应该是I know him very well.而不是I very well know him.通过对以上各个例句的分析，不难看出，要学好用英语表达，必须先学好英语单词的确切含义、词语搭配、习惯用法以及英语句子的词序。其中动词是最主要的。另外，还要特别注意英语的代词和冠词的使用。9.例句9、10犯了第二种错误，这两个句子的黑体部分分别要表达汉语成语“废寝忘食”和“咬文嚼字”。两个句子本来应该是：He forgets to eat and sleep when he studies.和Our Chinese teacher pays too much attention to wording when he speaks.但根据汉语硬套英语，结果不伦不类。

初学写短文时，总是跃跃欲试，想什么就打算写什么，这种积极性是好的。但一定要从现有表达能力的实际出发，尽量不去表达复杂的意思。有时不得不表达复杂些的意思时，在不改变原意的前提下，首先要避难就易，绕道而行之，即把复杂的意思用类似的简单意思表达；其次可以化整为零，分解表达，把复杂的意思用几个简单的句子表达出来。初学写作不要使用自己拿不准的词汇，多使用常见的词语，灵活运用已学过的知识，表达明确的意义，从简单句子入手，不写没把握的句子，少写长句子，尽量避免试图表达比较复杂的思想内容。另外，短文不宜写得过长，要从简从短练起。经常训练病句改错题，模仿范文，写英语日记等，都有助于练习英语短文写作。

语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点；当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢？如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。

1.句子成分残缺不全

We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)

We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)

We should read books may be useful to us.(误)

We should read books which may be useful to us.(正)

2.句子成分多余

This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you.(误)

One test ends, but another is waiting for you.(正)

The driver of the red car was died on the spot.(误)

The driver of the red car died on the spot.(正)

3.主谓不一致

Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective.(误)

Some think that reading should be selective.(正)

My sister go to the cinema at least once a week.(误)

My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week.(正)

4.动词时态、语态的误用

I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street.(误)

I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street.(正)

We have little time to read some books which we interest.(误)

We have little time to read some books in which we are interested.(正)

I am a student who has studying in the college for two years.(误)

I have been studying in the college for two years(正)

5.词类混淆

It is my point that reading must be selectively.(误)

In my opinion, reading must be selective.(正)

Honest is so important for everyperson.(误)

Honesty is so important for everyone.(正)

The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.(误)

The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.(正)课题组成员：刘晓燕 聂生荣 石浩 刘雪 聂学伊 宋海 吕艳珍 祁泽昊 马金凤 秦亚萍

指导老师：杜数学

第四篇：英语作文中100个常用短语句子（定稿）

英语作文中100个常用短语句子

1．随着经济的快速发展with the rapid development of economy

2．人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长

the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3．先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4．面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges

5．人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that…

6．社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development

7．引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention

8．不可否认 It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…

9．热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate

10.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue

11．完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

12．一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…

13.就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally，14．就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…

15．有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16．双方的论点 argument on both sides

17．发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…

18．对…必不可少 be indispensable to …

19．正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:

20．…也不例外 …be no exception

21．对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on…

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英语作文中100个常用短语句子

22．利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.23．导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in

24．复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

25．责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement

26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation

27.开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

28．学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29．经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden

30．考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration

31.从另一个角度 from another perspective

32．做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33.对…有益 be beneficial / conducive to…

34．为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society

35．打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…

36．综合素质 comprehensive quality

37．无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach

39．致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…

40.应当承认 Admittedly，41．不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

42.满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…

43．可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44．宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

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英语作文中100个常用短语句子

45．因特网 the Internet（一定要由冠词，字母I 大写）

46．方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47．在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48．环保（的）environmental protection / environmentally friendly

49．社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress

50．科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology

51．对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

52．支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion

53．有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence

54．在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

55.理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice

56.…必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…

57．日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition

58．眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

59．长远利益.interest in the long run

60．…有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

61．扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

62．取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs.63．对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

64．交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

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英语作文中100个常用短语句子

65．跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with

the latest development of …

66．采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth.67．…的健康发展 the healthy development of …

68．有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.No garden without weeds.69．对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person.70．重视 attach great importance to…

71．社会地位 social status

72．把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…

73．扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge

74．身心两方面 both physically and mentally

75．有直接 /间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to…

76.提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal

77.可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that

78．缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden

79．优先考虑/发展… give(top)priority to sth.80．与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with

81.相反 in contrast / on the contrary.82．代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of

83．经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water

84．提供就业机会 offer job opportunities

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英语作文中100个常用短语句子

85.社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress

86．毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…

87．增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding

88．充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of

89．承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure

90．保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society

91．更多地强调 put more emphasis on…

92．适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society

93．实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true

94.主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:

95.首先 First，Firstly，In the first place, To begin with

96．其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place

97.再次 Besides，In addition, Additionally, Moreover, Furthermore

98.最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly，99.总而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word，100．我们还有很长的路要走 We still have a long way to go.5 / 5

第五篇：高考英语作文中的万能句子

2014新东方小编汇总了高考英语作文中的万能句子。

开头:

1，Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern.最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.2，The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has

brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.3，Nowadays,(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.4，It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为…… 5，Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……

6，With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……

7，A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……

引出不同观点:

1，People's views on … vary from person to person.Some hold that ….However, others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……，然而其他人却认为…… 2，People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.3，Attitudes towards(drugs)vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.4，There are different opinions among people as to …关于……，人们的观点大不相同.5，Different people hold different attitudes toward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。

结尾

1，Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……

2，Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that …

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……

3，There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.4，All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.提出建议:

1，It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.2，It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of … 3，There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …

毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.4，Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that …

显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…

5，Only in this way can we … 只有这样，我们才能…… 6，It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……

预示后果:

1，Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

2，No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that …

毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会……

3，It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证

1，From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.2，I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点…… 3，Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边.4，I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信……

5，In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do ….在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智.给出原因:

1，This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, …

这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先，……;第二,，……;第三，…… ,2，Why did …? For one thing …，for another ….Perhaps the primary reason is…

为什么会……?一个原因是……，令一个原因是……;或许其主要原因是……

3，I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即……，其主要原因如下:

列出解决办法:

1，Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.2，The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

3，People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.批判错误观点和做法:

1，As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言，…… 2，It was obvious that …很显然,….3，It may be true that …, but it doesn't mean that …

可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……

4，It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldn't ignore that …

认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……

5，There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……

2014高考英语作文模板：图画/图表描述段

【示例一】

①From the picture(graph, chart, table, pie, bar), we know that ________(图表内容总概括).②On the one hand, the left/first picture tells us that ______(情况一：图一/表一的内容).③On the other hand,(the right/second)picture informs us that ________

(情况二：图二/表二的内容).④It can easily be seen that ________(揭示图画/表寓意).【示例二】

①As is vividly shown/described/depicted in the cartoon/picture, ________(图表内容总概括).②In the first picture, ________(描述图/表一内容：如果是一个表，则可左或上半部分).③As is shown in the second drawing/picture, ________

(描述图/表二内容：如果是一个表，则右或下半部分).④It is safe to draw the conclusion that ________

(提示寓意，或主题句，回应主题但不是主题句的重复).2014高考英语作文模板：意义阐述段

【示例一】

①Judging from the pictures, we can clearly infer that the drawer’s intention is ________(主题句).② ________(扩展句).③For one thing/First of all/Firstly, ________(第一个层面).④For another/Besides/Moreover/In addition/Secondly, ________(第二个层面).⑤Thus/As a result/Therefore/Finally, ________(总结句)

【示例二】

①To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that ________(主题句),yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously.② ________(扩展句)is naturally associated with, to be specific ________(第一个层面).③Besides/Moreover/In addition, ________(第二个层面)。④As a result/Therefore, ________(总结句).2014高考英语作文模板：原因阐释段

【示例一】

① There are many reasons responsible for(accounting for)this phenomenon/case/instance and the following are the typical ones.②The first reason is that ________(理由一).③The second reason is that ________(理由二).④The third reason is that/A case in point is that/The typical example is that ________(理由三)

【示例二】

①There are many reasons to explain/explaining the effect/phenomenon/case/instance.②The most contributing one is/the main reason is no other than ________(理由一).③What is more, ________(理由二).④ ________(理由三)also plays a role in it.2014高考英语作文模板：建议措施段

【示例一】

① Considering all these reasons/this situation/Confronted with such a problem, I think we need to take some positive measures.②On the one hand, ________(方法/建议一).③On the other hand, it is necessary for us to ________(方法/建议二).④Thus/Only in this way, can ________(总结自己的观点/建议/态度).【示例二】

① In order to improve the situation/To sum up the above argument/Confronted with such an issue/problem, we should find several solutions to it/need to take some positive measures.②On the one hand/For one thing, we should ________(方法/建议一).③On the other hand/For another, ________(方法/建议二).④Therefore, /Thus, /Only in this way can we ________(段落总结句).2014高考英语作文模板：趋势预测段

【示例一】

①

Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings.②On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten that _______(主题).③On the other hand, we should be sensible enough to ________(观点/态度).④Only by ________(段落总结句), and only in this way can we have a brilliant future.【示例二】

①The effects of … can be boiled down to two major ones.②First, ________(影响一).③More importantly, ________(影响二).④Hence, I believe that we will see a ________(提出展望)./ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ________(或反面展望).2014高考英语作文模板：举例说明段

【示例一】

① There are many cases/examples to explain ________(主题句).②Take ________ as a typical example./The first example is that ________(阐述例子), ________(可进一步阐述).③The second example is that… /In addition, …/Here is a counter example./Opposite case in point is that/On the contrary ________第二个例子的内容或举一个反面例子).④Therefore,/ Only ________can ________(总结主题句/段落总结句)

【示例二】

① ________(观点句).It can be best/well illustrated in/explained by…(例子).② ________(阐述例子).③________(进一步阐述例子).④Therefore, ________(段落总结句：进一步总结观点句的必要性和重要性).2014高考英语作文模板：观点阐释段

【示例一】

①Nowadays, a heated debate about ________(主题)is under way in China.②A close inspection of this argument would reveal how flimsy(groundless)it is.③As a matter of fact, ________(进一步说明).【示例二】

① While the rhythm/pace/tempo of people’s living is speeding up, one of the topics many city residents are discussing is ________(主题).②

As part of domestic modernization, _____ needs to be developed urgently in china, for __(进

一步

说明).2014高考英语作文模板：现象/现状说明段

【示例一】

①With the rapid advances/ development of _____ in recent years, ____ has _____(引出现象).②However, _____has _____, as ________(提出问题).③As a result, ________(指出影响),which has aroused close social attention from all walks of life.【示例二】

①With the rapid development of science and technology(electronic industry/higher education), more and more people come to realize that ___(引出现象).②It is estimated, over the past decade, that ____________(用具体数据说明现象)

2014高考英语作文模板：利弊说明段

【示例一】

①Recently the issue of whether or not ________(讨论话题)has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.②There are two major arguments that can be made for.③For one thing, ____can bring ___ to____(优点一).④For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________(优点二).⑤But we must not lose sight of/ ignore the fact that there are also drawbacks to ____ , among which are ________(列举缺点).⑥For instance, it can be ____to _____(举例说明).⑦In addition, many people find it ____(形容词)to ____(第二个缺点).【示例二】

① Some people are in favor of the idea of doing ________(主题),(thinking/ believing/arguing…)②They point out the fact that _____(支持的第一个原因).③They also argue that ________(支持的另一个原因).④There might be some truth in these people’s belief.⑤However, other people stand on a different ground.⑥They consider it harmful to do ________.⑦They firmly point out that ________(反对的理由)

2014高考英语作文模板：归纳结论段

【示例一】

①Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that ________(得出结论).②The reason for this, as far as I am concerned, is that ________(给出原因).③It is high time that we ________(发出倡议).【示例二】

①Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ________(结论).②And with the above content, it will show more profound significance in ________(进一步总结).