广东省高考英语作文

第一篇：广东省高考英语作文

写作(共两节,满分40分)

第一节 基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

假设你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国，你们准备为她举办欢送会。请根据以下内容，给她写一封e-mail：

【写作内容】

1．祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；

2．感谢她帮助你们学习英语；

3．邀请她参加欢送会，并告知欢送会相关事宜。

1）时间：星期六晚六点；

2）地点：阳光俱乐部（The Sun Club）302房间；

3）路线：在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。

*参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；e-mail的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。

【评分标准】

句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。

Dear Jane, Congratulations on your passing all the exams.____________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua

第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

In my last semester in university, we must take the graduation exams.The last exam was the English linguistics.Many of my classmates would cheat in exams.I hadn’t done it before.For this, sometimes my friends were surprised and laughed at me.When I felt it very difficult to remember the phonetics form, I finally gave up reviewing it and decided to try to cheat in this exam.I was too lazy to write it down on smaller paper.Therefore I directly cut the phonetics form away from the handouts.At the very beginning of the exam, I was so sad to find that there were 30–point questions about the phonetics form on the exam paper but suddenly I felt lucky because the phonetics form was just hidden in my pocket.I first finished other questions.To be honest, I was very timid and felt so bad to take out the phonetics form from my pocket.I felt so conflicted.I finally pinched the small paper into my left hand.However, I hadn’t opened the left hand to look at the form till the exam was over.I just guessed the remaining questions to finish the exam.Fortunately, I passed the exams with 75 points.But now I feel good for my failed cheating.[写作内容]

1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；

2．然后以约120个词对学生考试作弊现象进行议论，内容包括：

(1)学生考试作弊的原因；

(2)你对考试作弊的看法；

(3)你认为学校怎样才能杜绝考试作弊现象。

[写作要求]

1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

基础写作（共1小题，每小题15分）Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China.We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English.It’s a pity that you have to go back soon, so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening.We sincerely hope you will come and I’m sure we will have a good time together.By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua

读写任务（共1小题，每小题25分）

Being afraid of failing an English exam and influenced by her classmates, the author decided to cheat.She hid some paper in her pocket but gave up cheating finally, which made her feel good.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among some students.There are various reasons for this.Some students are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.Some want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Others cheat in order to win a scholarship or enter a key school.However, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ habit of study.Those who usually cheat in exams will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard.Those who never cheat in exams will consider it’s unfair for them, thinking studying hard is no more necessary.In order to get rid of the bad effects, the school authority should take effective measures to help the students know how important honesty is.Meanwhile, a strict discipline for exams should be carried out.Whoever cheats should be severely punished.

第二篇：广东省高考英语作文评分标准

广东省高考英语作文评分标准

小作文的批改是看：

1、有没有把题目所提供的信息点都写齐

2、是否按照所规定的用5个句子完成

3、语法的错误

小作文的批改显然不是看关键句的大作文的批改是看：

1、内容要点的概括（这里就要看关键句子了，踩中点子和语法没有什么问题才得分。在内容概括中，我建议你不要超过40字，40字以上也许会扣分）

2、考生所写的内容和所举的例子是否切题）

3、语法是否出现错误

4、是否有闪光点（就是写得特别出众的句子）

你平时的作文大概写多少行字，在高考上面按照平时的习惯写就可以，不用去数字数，一来浪费时间，二来没有这个必要。只要不是通过老师的目测就知道你超出字数的情况下，是不会扣分的老师批改作文的速度虽快，但并不等于他只看关键句。如果你抱着这种想法去写作文的话，是不可取的。毕竟这是作文，而不是主观题，老师不可能在批改作文的时候像按照批改综合科主观题那样，只看关键词然后按点给分。

第三篇：2008年广东省高考英语试卷及其作文评析

2008年广东省高考英语试卷及其作文评析

试题评析：

今年的广东卷英语题充分体现了《普通高中英语课程标准》对高中英语教学的要求，继承了去年高考(Q吧)题的命题意向、题型和结构。与去年的题目相比，语法填空和写作部分比较容易，阅读理解部分解题难度加大。总体而言，今年的题目主要有以下几个特点：

1．强调文化意识：在听力理解、完形填空、语法填空和阅读理解等几个部分都渗透了中国和西方文化的元素。中国的“春节“、”十二生肖“、经典故事“拔苗助长”以及英国的关于“被偷换的小孩”的神话传说和托尔斯泰笔下的拿破仑等内容都被纳入。这对教师和学生重视跨文化知识的学习起着很好的促进作用。

２．时代感强：主要体现在阅读理解和基础写作部分。阅读理解的选材涉及现代父母与孩子间的关系，题材时尚。而基础写作部分与当前世界关注的奥运会有关。

３．贴近学生：在阅读和写作部分皆有体现，尤其是任务型写作。《为大学生活作准备》这个题目对于正对大学生活充满憧憬的高考考生来说不但有话可写，而且能帮助他们为大学生活提前做好心理上的准备。

作文评析：

基础写作：

今年的基础写作命题切中社会热点——奥运，具有强烈的时代感。题目提供的写作内容的排序已成逻辑，不需考生重新安排。写作的难点主要体现在写作内容的组合方式和词句的选择上。其中“1904年中断和1928年中断”两条含有相同内容的信息的意义表达是张显考生思维能力和语言水平考点，考生应采取措施避免表达的重复。而“背景”与“现状”两方面内容的表达则能体现考生使用复合句的功力。

任务型写作：

“Preparing Myself for College Life”这个题目贴近考生的生活，引导材料清楚，考生不易跑题。写作内容的弹性很大，考生有尽情发挥的空间。写作内容符合考生的思维水平和语言表达水平，整体难度不大。

但审题时有几个易错的点，可能会对部分考生造成影响。首先是文体方面。题目要求写一份发言稿，这就对写作的格式和语气有特定的要求。其次是人称方面。应该写自己的感受和打算，而非所有学生的情况。最后是时态方面。写作的基调时态从过去时向现在时和将来时转移，需要考生有扎实的时态知识和较好的语篇能力。

第四篇：2013年广东省高考英语试卷评析

高三文科生必读的学习方法——高考状元的学习感悟

时间一分一秒地过去，青春飞逝，让应该用于学习的分分秒秒都有收益，应该而且必须成为我们每个同学脑海中都绷紧的一根弦。如何让用于学习的分分秒秒都有收获呢，下面这些刘老师摘录的来自几年前全国部分省市区高考状元们的经验也许能给你启迪。这些材料中介绍了许多高中阶段学习的令人难忘和羡慕的场景，希望我们每个同学也来创造属于自己的这种场景。

●每一天都非常宝贵

◇很重要的一点，三年的力气要用匀，千万不能把赌注都押在高三，准备奋力一搏，龙门一跃。想努力的话，从高中第一天就开始，然后平静地走向高考，不必有考前的挑灯夜战，彻夜不眠。高中三年每一天都非常宝贵，任何一天都不能荒废。（张涵冰，河北保定17中，文科663分（116，131，139，267），北京大学）

◇如果你一个小时能看两本书的话，那就不要两个小时看一本书。重视效率就要珍惜时间。如果你想学习好，那么你必须放弃玩，放弃穿戴讲究和美食等，时间对于参加高考的我们来说太重要重要了！并不是我不喜欢美，世界上好象还没有不喜欢美的女孩子吧！（李锦，陕西宝鸡中学，文科645分，北京大学）

◇和别的同学一样，在走过了这一段路后，谁也不愿每天强迫自己做大量的题，没有什么自由，没有什么时间去玩。但我同时认为这一段经历是有价值的。因为我有自己的理想，知道自己为什么而学习，自己今天取得的成绩既是对过去的一个交待，又离自己的目标前进了一步。（史小楠，北京四中，文科646分（127，127，140，252），北京大学光华管理学院金融系）

●学习没有捷径但有方法

◇“做人一定要努力，不一定是第一名，但你要付出努力，因为如果不努力，你永远不能成功更做不了第一名。”爷爷的这句话就像一盏航标灯，指引着我十几年的求学路。学习是没有捷径的，只有方法，而这种方法要靠自己去摸索，如果不适合自己，别人再好的方法也是没有用的。（孔霏，吉林长春外国语学校，文科651分（123，134，139，245），北京大学法学系）

●沟通·交流·讨论·切磋

◇常与老师沟通：小时候我特别喜欢提问题，经常缠着老师问各种各样的问题。这种习惯使我获益非浅，因为老师不但对书本上的知识掌握得比我们丰富，而且在学习方法、学习经验等各个方面都有足够的积累，可以给我们最正确的指导。因此，我的第一个成功秘诀是一定要尊重老师的意见，它可以使我们在学习上事半而功倍。（孔霏，吉林长春外国语学校，文科651分（123，134，139，245），北京大学法学系）

◇我较为内向，不善发问，仅是被动接受老师所教的内容。经过与老师和同学的交谈，我鼓起勇气开始发问。最初所问的问题大多是公理、定理等一些客观公式。但随着时间的推移，所问问题也逐渐转变为主观思辩后所梳理的一些难题，甚至敢于讨论老师在教学过程中出现的些许疏漏。经过不断的锻炼，才使我由被动的学习走向主动的思考，与老师的关系也由传统意义上的师生关系转为朋友关系。在学习过程中放开手脚，多角度全方位地理解问题。记得高中每节课后，我们都逐渐形成一种习惯，每当下课时，许多同学都围在黑板前共同向老师请教问题。即使暂时没有疑问的同学，也认真听取他人的问题，参与讨论。集体的智慧往往能创造出令人满意的成果，能留下刻骨铭心的印象，集思广益无异于借他人的脑袋为自己思考。（史方舟，陕西师大附中，理科704分（142，145，141，276），北京大学金融系）

◇在十几年的求学过程中，朝夕相伴的是同学，所以一定要与同学相互沟通，绝不能故步自封。如今回头看一看，我深深地感激我生活着的那个集体，我一直觉得，如果说我是优秀的，那是因为我和优秀的人在一起，才变得优秀。在长春外国语学校度过的宝贵的六年里，我和我的同学们真诚地相互帮助相互沟通着，我们都深信，只把竞争的眼光放在身边的人身上，是不会真正地成功的，要学会与身边的人相互学习相互促进，只有周围的人都优秀了，自己才是真正的优秀。即便有的同学学习成绩不如我，我也会在他的身上发现其他值得我学习的地方，所谓尺有所短，寸有所长。而正是这样的一种认知使我最终通向了成功。（孔霏，吉林长春外国语学校，文科651分，北京大学法学系）

◇我在学习时，喜欢频繁地与同学进行热烈的讨论与交流，在活跃而融洽的学习气氛中令自己得到进步。学习的时候集中全部精力去投入，要求自己一定要达到高效率。（李滨兵，湖南湘乡一中，文科666分（130，134，133，269），北京大学）

◇我所在的呼和浩特二中高三3班是个学习气氛很浓厚的班集体，同学们自发地成立了许多个学习小组，相互切磋，讨论学习。二中推行“开放式学习”，经常组织同学们对各科的重点、难点进行讨论，大家各抒己见，共同提高。我和 1

同班的另外三名同学组成一个学习组，谁有好的经验，心得，或是搞到了一本习题集，都会和大家一起分享。结果这种学习方法效果出奇的好，高三全市阶段考试，我们四个人包揽了文科六门功课的第一名！

也许是由于我为人比较热情，对于需要帮助的人从来不会拒绝，所以同学们遇到难题总爱向我求助。不少同学都来我家问过题，一呆就是一下午。我从来不觉得被别人占用了这么多时间是种损失，其实帮助别人答疑解难的同时对自己也是种提高。（罗佳媛，内蒙古呼和浩特二中，文科668分（143，125，145，255），北京大学）

◇贤于己者取其长，不如己者戒其短，等于己者重切磋。宇宙无限，人生有涯，个人太渺小，群体才万能，登高能望远，天高地自阔。（史方舟，陕西师大附中，理科704分（142，145，141，276），北京大学金融系）

●全神贯注地投入课堂

◇上课是我最为珍视的环节：不要被动地听老师讲，而是主动地跟上老师的步伐甚至超前一步。全神贯注地投入课堂，揣摩老师的教学步骤与课本内容，常常老师讲出前半句，我便能接上后半句，久而久之达成默契，师生的头脑融为一体，此时的课堂不再是枯燥无味，简直是艺术享受，趣味无穷。我认为，课堂上的45分钟，顶得上课外通宵达旦的复习和补课。夜自习是我收集、整理学习资料的时段，我努力做到当天的知识当天复习，两三天后进行一轮系列复习，并做相关学习资料对知识进行检测。（朱萝伊，浙江象山中学，文科684分（137，134，133，280），北京大学）

◇老师都是智者，学习的关键是抓紧课堂45分钟，顺着老师的方向复习，然后加上自己的理解，融会贯通，举一反三，才能收到好的效果。（刘小溪，天津外国语学院附中，文科654分，北京大学国际贸易专业）

◇不管是文科还是理科，都要重视课堂学习，理解老师讲的每个知识点是关键。在理解的基础上要往深度、广度拓展，并利用联想记忆、表格记忆等多种方法，进行记忆。（刘帆，河南射旗一中，686分（140，144，136，266），清华大学计算机科学与技术专业）

●凡事预则立

◇每天应有每天的计划，每周应有每周的计划，每月也应有每月的计划。而自己则要在日末、周末、月末检查自己的学习情况，以及计划的完成情况。若自己没有完成计划，则应找出自己出现差距的原因，使自己最终能达到计划，甚至超出计划。（史小楠，北京四中，文科646分，北京大学光华管理学院金融系）

◇“凡事预则立，不预则废。”我十分注意学习计划的制定和落实。学习主要靠自己，不能依赖老师和家长督促，要学会自己管自己，制定学习计划。每学期开学时，我都要制定总的学习计划，每月、每周甚至每天都有一个计划，弄清楚自己每月、每周、每天该学什么，怎样去学，学得怎样，总结自己一段时间里计划完成的情况和得失。无论学习任务多么繁重，我都每天坚持写日记。在日记里反省、检讨自己，检查自己学习计划完成得怎么样，剖析自己有那些不足和差距，不时告诫自己和鼓励自己，并不断地进行改正，以取得更大的进步。（刘帆，河南射旗一中，686分（140，144，136，266），清华大学计算机科学与技术专业）

◇两个因素助我成功：“万事靠自己，靠实力说话”是我的人生格言，自立是我取得成功的一个重要因素。

计划性是我获得成功的另一重要因素。做每一件事都应该有计划有步骤地进行，有了计划，那么做事就会有条理性。举个简单的例子，在做饭时要用最短的时间把饭菜做好，到底是先做饭还是先炒菜呢？或者是同时做呢？我想每个人都会给出答案，那就是找到每个环节的空挡，见缝插针地完成必要的程序。这与学习上的用功方法相同。先复习哪一科，哪一科需要复习多长时间，这都是需要计划来支撑的，不然只会忙得一团糟。遇见任何一件事情我都会为这件事安排一个圆满的计划，有时候详细到每一个细节的步骤。比如我们喜欢出去玩，路线怎么走，该带什么东西，遇见下雨或突发情况怎么处理，什么时候到哪个地方，玩多久等都要制定出详细的计划。做事有计划成了我做事的先决条件。（陈健，广州华师附中，复旦大学金融专业）

◇我有一个坚持多年的习惯，做图表。我在学习中比较重视总结，每隔一段时间便要把学过的内容做成图表，将题型归类，对所学知识进行一次梳理。我觉得这是一个非常有效并值得推广的学习方法。（罗佳媛，内蒙古呼和浩特二中，文科668分（143，125，145，255），北京大学）

●“天道酬勤”——投入、执着、专注

◇我没有什么学习秘诀，我只相信一句话：天道酬勤。我读书非常刻苦，每天读书超过16小时，尽管我规定自己一定要在晚上11：40前睡觉，但是很少做到。县中学条件很艰苦，但我对学习几乎到了痴迷的地步，我有时在老师办公室里看书到深夜，困了就趴在桌子上打盹，一觉醒来已经天亮。虽然学校离家仅有一小时路程，但整个高中阶段我只回过4次家（寒假暑假除外）。（杨良松，四川宜宾屏山中学，文科658分（125，136，125，272），北京大学经济系）

◇大量的做题练习，分分秒秒的时间投入，丝丝缕缕精力的倾注，是成功的前提。（史方舟，陕西师大附中，理科

704分（142，145，141，276），北京大学金融系）3

◇我每天早上6点起床开始早自习，晚上11点准时睡觉，中午睡一个小时，每天保持8个小时的充足睡眠，我会每个星期或是每个月给自己制定一个总的目标，并且一定在这个期限内完成计划，具体的每天我会随性安排学习时间，比如做数学题做累了就听听英语，英语听烦了就看看历史，兵没有硬性地要求自己每天要做写什么。（李滨兵，湖南湘乡一中，文科666分，北京大学）

◇学习是一个长期的过程，对于每一个学生来说，最重要的是专心，不在乎学多长时间，而在于每次学习时都能真正学到东西。（周哲宇，云南师大附中，文科637分（121，134，130，252），北京大学文科实验班）

◇三心二意坐一天，不如一心一意干一小时。学习不是空想，不能心猿意马，心游万仞，只有在一定的时间内心无旁骛，专神专注，才有希望得到灵感女神的垂青。（史方舟，陕西师大附中，理科704分（142，145，141，276），北京大学金融系）

◇我的学习方法很普通，只是我比较执着。题目不会，决不放弃，一有空闲就思考它直至解决。这个过程中的艰辛是别人难以想象的，而它带来的喜悦也是外人无法体会的。（许磊，河北涞源一中，理科699分（124，136，142，297），清华大学）

◇无论是考能力还是考素质，请你相信题海战术绝对无可匹敌。大量的练习不仅可以给你解题的思维、速度，还有准确性与题感。但你应该知道的不是答案是什么，而是如何得到这个答案，为什么会得到这个答案。学会举一反三，适当地进行联想改题。（辛颖，黑龙江哈尔滨24中，理科662分（121，142，119，208），北京大学环境科学学院）

◇英语学得很棒，能听懂、看懂原版VCD，今年1月参加大学英语四级考试得了99分，拿到了四级英语证书。同学问她为何英语如此出色，她答复同学说：“你们只看到结果，我晚上一个人在教室里念英语，一念两三个小时，口干舌燥，这个功夫你们可没有看到。”为了达到上清华的人生目标，她做了长达一年的精心准备，给自己制定了精细的复习计划。她平时喜欢运动，开朗活泼，但只要一坐到书桌前就像换了个人一样，变得不苟言笑，神情认真，往往一看书就如同一座蜡像一样，让书本伴她三四个钟头，在这期间她把自己关在小屋里不让任何人打扰。（张璇，江苏常州高级中学，文科685分（120，150，147，268），清华大学）

第五篇：2012年广东省高考冲刺英语作文训练

高三英语作文参考范文

一．

Patience Is The Secret of Success

The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success.I have a similar experience.Once I waited for a bus at the stop for 30 minutes, but no bus came.I couldn‟t wait any longer and decided to walk to school.But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it.If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.Only then did I realize the importance of patience.Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made.Patience also plays an important part in our study and work.With it we can achieve more.Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, I‟ll think of the experience of waiting for a bus.二．To help or not help

The passage mainly tells us that a man was hurt in a car accident, but people around him, including the writer did nothing to help him, which resulted in the injured man‟s death on the street.After reading the passage, I was completely shocked.As far as I‟m concerned，whenever people are in trouble, we should offer them help regardless of the consequences.If I had been on the spot, I would have called an ambulance and the police without hesitation.Once, I was walking in the street when suddenly a man came up to me and robbed me of my watch.Frightened, I called for help loudly.Just then, a young man shouted, “Stop that guy！”.Finally, people around united and caught the robber.To help or not to help shows a man‟s quality.Wherever you are, if you have a chance to show your good qualities, just do it!Remember, your contribution counts!

三．Hold on to one[„s belief

This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didn't give up his dream all the time even though he was discouraged, and eventually he succeeded in owning a horse ranch.For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life.As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Anyone who has strong belief can realize his dream and enjoy a colorful life.Otherwise, he will lose himself on his way of life.Belief is so important that it can change one's fate.As a deaf man, Beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last years of his life, though he was not able to hear his own fine music.Marie Curie, a famous scientist, also set a good example.In 1898, Marie found a new element.In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hard.It was because of their great effort that they saw the dim blue light of new element--radium.Her dream came true at last.From my point of view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to make a great achievement and master his own life.2009高考作文

一． Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities.He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.二．Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can‟t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them.The government is thinking of making the tourists‟ behavior illegal to protect the animals.When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals.Reasons for this are varied.Some people may think that taking photos with animals is fun in contrast with taking photos with other persons.Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me.My life would be greatly affected and I won‟t feel happy at all!I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.However, I don‟t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals.Tourist pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can‟t have a photo with an animal.Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time and during this time, tourists can take photos with animals.It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animas.2012年调考英语作文

读写任务高分作文：

Ashamed of his mother‟s scar, a boy was disappointed at first when his mother attended the teacher-parent meeting.However, he became moved and regretful after knowing his mother had got the scar when protecting him in a fire.The story above reminds me of my experience.When I was a child, I was distinguished for telling lies.At first, people around me was cheated by me easily, and they didn‟t trust me any more.One night, I caught a brothers for help.However, neither of them wanted to send me to the hospital.At that moment, my mother, who had been ill for years, sent me to the hospital immediately.Consequently, I became well but my mother had to stay in hospital for weeks.If my mother hadn‟t sent me to the hospital, she wouldn‟t have been in a worse condition.What the love she gave me.From then on, I realized that I shouldn‟t lie to others any more and I always tried to behave myself.Gradually, I am no longer what I used to be and always praised by neighbors as a trustworthy girl.What a profound influence my mother have on me!

From my perspective, we children should devote ourselves to our parents in return for their love.Never should we ignore their feelings whenever they are in trouble.Besides , what we can do to please them is that we should try our best to study well and never give up in the face of difficulty.A little boy was ashamed of his mother‟s scar.When his mother attended the parent-teacher meeting, he was disappointed.After knowing the cause of his mother‟s scar, the boy felt ashamed of himself and cried, hugging his mother.There was a time when I was very naughty and always made my mother angry.As a result, many relatives didn‟t like me and sometimes even scolded me without any reasons.One day, I got a fever and my mother took care of me all the time, taking me to the hospital and cooking healthy and my favorite food.At that time, I asked her whether she didn‟t like me, she just replied, “You are the only son who can‟t be taken place of in my heart.‟ Hearing that, I burst into tears.What my mother has done for me makes me know that no matter who you are, no matter who you will be, you‟re just the person who will always be accepted and valued by your parents, in spite of your faults and difficulties.They will be always there to give you hope and courage when you‟re confronted with misfortune and hardships.Therefore, be good to your parents and take care of them.In my opinion, only by realizing our dreams and making a better life for our parents can we live up to their expectations and repay their devoted love.基础写作高分作文：

There are 62 students in my class, and two thirds of them used to take a part time job or are taking one now, working in a shop or a library as well as in a restaurant as waiters.The reasons why they take a part time job are different.Around half of them are for the purpose of solving the financial problems in poor families, while others regard it as a good way to apply their knowledge to social practice as well as enrich their social experience.However, still some students don‟t take a part time job because they are under great stress as a senior three student and they don‟t have time.Besides, the low pay and no permission from parents are also the main reasons why don‟t take a part time job.