第一篇:考研英语作文词句提升闪光点的七种武器
考研英语作文词句提升闪光点的七种武器——化腐朽为神奇
这些技巧不难,只是改动一个词或者一个词组就能提升你的语言的地道性。建议每篇文章用35个,可以在文章中增加闪光点。
1、强调名词【very+名词】
有同学说名词的强调直接用 it is…that不就搞定了么?这里介绍的是一个更地道的用法,就是用very+名词的形式。比如:03年温室花朵的范文
The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances.As is shown in the first cartoon, the very flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening lightening and storm.Very一词用的很地道,如此这样的一个花朵,被保护起来。如果这句用强调句it is …that来写,估计你自己把句式结构都弄乱了。有时候要长短句结合,通篇文章全都是复合句老师也会看腻的,要长短句结合,才是最好的有节奏感的文章。
2、强调动词【do/does/did+动词原形】
The picture does state that they will travel extensively from north to south together with their combined legs.有同学问了,你说的这两个强调有什么用。强调句显得你的用词更加地道,让你文章的节奏感更强。庖丁解牛中的一、1也是一个强调动词的用法。
3、强调形容词 副词+形容词
4、定语从句的介词前置提升
5、当用到相同意思的词的时候,先写高级的用法,后写一般的用法。
3~5这三条和在一块说,因为要用到同一个例句。副词+形容词?这个我们都知道啊,还用你金翅告诉我们。这里的副词不是一般的副词,而是和形容词同义的副词。可能说的太抽象,举一个例子,也是超级华丽的一句话,加到你的模板中。
Although live of citizens has been greatly changed,there is no denying the fact that the problem of internet,with which Chinese people are faced,becomes severely serious.随着人们的生活发生了巨大的变化,这个事实是不可否认的:网络问题,中国人民所面对的这个问题,变得非常的严重。
3:这里用severely来强调 serious,因为两者是同义词,一个是副词形式、一个是形容词,强调的效果更强。比becomes very serious效果强的不是一倍两倍。另建议作文中尽量少出现very,因为very是一个很主观的词,你要阐述你的观点,摆事实讲道理,要客观、要有理有据。Very这个词太主观,基本没有说服力。怎么提升文章的说服力,后文有交代,先别着急。
4:with which Chinese people are faced,用得非常地道,把with提前到引导词which前,让句子的结构平衡。如果说which Chinese people are faced with,这样也可以,但是哪个更有技术含量大家一眼也能看出来。
5:这句话中两次出现“人们”这个词,如果你用两个people那你真是傻到家了,让老师感觉你的词穷了,露怯了。所以平时多积累些同义词,到时候尽情的卖弄吧。不要通篇都是I think,哪怕是有一个I believe也好很多。不要在老师面前显得你的词汇很薄弱。这句话中,用了citizen和people,把高级的放前面,一般的放后边,惯用法。
6、谚语的使用
有些意志品质类的文章,如果加入一句相关的谚语会让你的文章大放光彩。但是不能直接写句子。加一个模板句型:An ancient oriental philosopher said,“谚语”.一位古老东方的先哲曾经说过,…有同学说西方的谚语为什么用东方的先哲呢?比如:Where there is a will,there is a way.是西方的谚语,中国也有有志者,事竟成的语句。文化都是相通的,可以放心来用。以下是英语作文中常用的一些谚语。
7、你不得不知道的there be
there be是一个非常有用的句型,不要以为简单句就是低级的。使用 “ there be ” 句型,可以将一个简单句,马上变成一个加入定语从句或者分词的复杂句。通篇的简单句、陈述句,没有句式变换的文章是得不到高分的。如何把一个简单句变成复合句呢?举个例子:
Internet provides us with convenience.网络给我们提供便利。只是一句普通的陈述句,可能不会吸引老师的眼球。如果把它变成there be的结构并且引导一个定语从句那就太给力了。there is the very Internet which provides us with convenience.要善于利用陈述句>>there be+定语从句的结构变化,多练几遍,考试时用一次。
第二篇:词句提升闪光点的七种武器
词句提升闪光点的七种武器——化腐朽为神奇
这些技巧不难,只是改动一个词或者一个词组就能提升你的语言的地道性。建议每篇文章用3~5个,可以在文章中增加闪光点。
1、强调名词【very+名词】
有同学说名词的强调直接用 it is„that不就搞定了么?这里介绍的是一个更地道的用法,就是用very+名词的形式。比如:03年温室花朵的范文
The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances.As is shown in the first cartoon, the very flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening lightening and storm.Very一词用的很地道,如此这样的一个花朵,被保护起来。如果这句用强调句it is „that来写,估计你自己把句式结构都弄乱了。有时候要长短句结合,通篇文章全都是复合句老师也会看腻的,要长短句结合,才是最好的有节奏感的文章。
2、强调动词【do/does/did+动词原形】
The picture does state that they will travel extensively from north to south together with their combined legs.有同学问了,你说的这两个强调有什么用。强调句显得你的用词更加地道,让你文章的节奏感更强。庖丁解牛中的一、1也是一个强调动词的用法。
3、强调形容词 副词+形容词
4、定语从句的介词前置提升
5、当用到相同意思的词的时候,先写高级的用法,后写一般的用法。
3~5这三条和在一块说,因为要用到同一个例句。副词+形容词?这个我们都知道啊,还用你金翅告诉我们。这里的副词不是一般的副词,而是和形容词同义的副词。可能说的太抽象,举一个例子,也是超级华丽的一句话,加到你的模板中。
Although life of citizens has been greatly changed,there is no denying the fact that the problem of internet,with which Chinese people are faced,becomes severely serious.随着人们的生活发生了巨大的变化,这个事实是不可否认的:网络问题,中国人民所面对的这个问题,变得非常的严重。
3:这里用severely来强调 serious,因为两者是同义词,一个是副词形式、一个是形容词,强调的效果更强。比becomes very serious效果强的不是一倍两倍。另建议作文中尽量少出现very,因为very是一个很主观的词,你要阐述你的观点,摆事实讲道理,要客观、要有理有据。Very这个词太主观,基本没有说服力。怎么提升文章的说服力,后文有交代,先别着急。
4:with which Chinese people are faced,用得非常地道,把with提前到引导词which前,让句子的结构平衡。如果说which Chinese people are faced with,这样也可以,但是哪个更有技术含量大家一眼也能看出来。
5:这句话中两次出现“人们”这个词,如果你用两个people那你真是傻到家了,让老师感觉你的词穷了,露怯了。所以平时多积累些同义词,到时候尽情的卖弄吧。不要通篇都是I think,哪怕是有一个I believe也好很多。不要在老师面前显得你的词汇很薄弱。这句话中,用了citizen和people,把高级的放前面,一般的放后边,惯用法。
6、谚语的使用
有些意志品质类的文章,如果加入一句相关的谚语会让你的文章大放光彩。但是不能直接写句子。加一个模板句型:An ancient oriental philosopher said,“谚语”.一位古老东方的先哲曾经说过,„.有同学说西方的谚语为什么用东方的先哲呢?比如:Where there is a will,there is a way.是西方的谚语,中国也有有志者,事竟成的语句。文化都是相通的,可以放心来用。以下是英语作文中常用的一些谚语。
考研英语写作常用谚语100句.doc(40 KB, 下载次数: 4840)
7、你不得不知道的there be there be是一个非常有用的句型,不要以为简单句就是低级的。使用 “ there be ” 句型,可以将一个简单句,马上变成一个加入定语从句或者分词的复杂句。通篇的简单句、陈述句,没有句式变换的文章是得不到高分的。如何把一个简单句变成复合句呢?举个例子:
Internet provides us with convenience.网络给我们提供便利。只是一句普通的陈述句,可能不会吸引老师的眼球。如果把它变成there be的结构并且引导一个定语从句那就太给力了。there is the very Internet which provides us with convenience.要善于利用陈述句>>>there be+定语从句的结构变化,多练几遍,考试时用一次。
五大润色作文密法——洞察细节,克敌先机
1、多使用被动句
因为你要阐述你对图画的观点,你不能总用some people say,others say,这样的句子很没有说服力,你自己写的时候都要怀疑一下。在一些出国类的考试的写作中,这些都是要坚决禁止的。因为这样一来你的文章说服力就差了,一旦文章没有说服力,你这篇文章也就徒有其表了。怎么增强你的文章说服力呢,就是用被动语态,当做一个客观事实来陈述。汉语中用被动句较少,多使用没有人称的的主语或者“大家”“人们”,在英语中多使用被动句。在庖丁解牛中,那个科学统计法就用到了被动句,这里再举个例子。
Computers have been widely used in various fields.这样一个被动句是对事实的陈述,是一个议论文的标准格式。如果你把它改成一个主动句 We find some use of computers in various fields.感觉就很站不住脚。举这个例子是说明,被动句是我们的作文中应该出现的,通篇都是主动句,偶尔出现1~2个被动句会让你的文章增色不少。在你复习作文的时候,每天改写几个被动句,练习一下,不要到考场上现想。台上一分钟,台下十年功。
2、时态要统一
由于议论文是要阐述你的观点,很少涉及动作发生的时间,所以写作中时态的运用很有限。最常使用的是一般现在时,其次是一般将来时和现在完成时,再次是一般过去时和现在进行时,其它时态用的相对不多。我写作的时候习惯是一般现在时,但要注意事态的统一,不要一会一般现在时,一会一般过去时,那样你的作文就彻底没高分了。
3、高级词汇的使用
在上一个帖子中写过一些这方面的东西但是不多,词汇的多变是考试评分标准中的一项,平时多积累一些同义词是大有好处的,这里给大家一个文档,对阅读中常见的同义词进行总结,让大家笑傲考场。
英文翻译写作第一反应词替换表.doc(52 KB, 下载次数: 7251)
4、避免使用口语体得缩略形式
这个是书面英语和口语的一个大区别,大家千万要注意。比如It’s,can’t,what’s more(第二段连接用),CEO(举比尔盖茨的那个例子的时候用的)这些缩略语都是不正式的书面英语,大家在写作中一定要避免,要写成 It is,can not,what is more,Chief Executive Officer,既然往18分冲击就要严格要求自己。
5、书写工整
英语作文评分细则的第一项就是书写工整。如果你的书法不好,那尽量写的整齐,写的像汉语拼音最好,起码清楚,不要龙飞凤舞的。研究生英语课老师点评我们作文的时候就说,有的同学的英语字母y和g那个勾拐得太大了,显得你的单词很乱。和大家共勉,我的书法也不是很好,最近也在练字。
福利来啦——补充万能理由
这个是我在复习GRE的过程中,搜集到好的万能的句子,只把适合考研的一些句子抄了出来,对于一些词汇量较大的句子进行了改写,希望能对大家的万能理由的积累有一些帮助。补充前一篇没有的万能理由。依然是本篇最精华的地方。
积极理由
1、*** offers extensive opportunities for every country in the world.2、The majority of students believe that *** will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信***会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的.【这句话也是五星级的,***可以是part-time job、网络,文化交流等等,思路要开阔】
3、Judging from the social comprehensive factors, we can safely conclude that the Internet will change the lives of an untold number of people forever.根据社会等综合因素,我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论:网络将永远改变无数人的生活。【科学统计法的有一个例子,把Internet换成文化,自信,合作也很OK了,而且用了safely conclude语气非常得体,推荐】
4、By taking a major-related ***, students can not only improve their academic studies, but also gain much experience, which they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩,还可以获得在课本上学不到的经验。【兼职,网络,读书等等之类的话题】
5、For the majority of people, *** has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说,***占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。【适用很多积极类的话题,句式复杂多变,推荐】
消极理由
1、这里的万能理由,重点说一下not only but also这个五星搭配的用法。个人感觉很强大的一个句子,私下里多造几个句子。
主语+ not only results in+*** but also does harm to***since*** **不仅导致**而且对**有危害,因为*** 这个用法给出几个例子
Spending too much time on the games not only results in failure in their study but also does harm to their health since they keep still in front of the computer and watch the computer without blinking the eyes.Heavy burdens of homework not only results in the loss of interest in the study for students but also does harm to the physical and mental health since the children are overworked and have no time for rest or relaxation.2、Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now.历史上,人口过剩的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。【适合一切消极类的话题,人口过剩、环境污染、攻的】
3、There is a growing worldwide awareness of the need for strengthened environmental protection.世界上越来越多的人认识到加强环境保护的必要性。【把加强环境保护可以换成消极类的主题】
4、Greed and a total lack of social consciousness have been cited as major reasons for the ever-increasing pollution.人们认为贪婪和社会意识的彻底缺乏是造成污染持续增加的主要原因。【把pollution换成交通等问题是不是很合适呢?有同学说交通怎么能跟贪婪搭边呢?人要是没有开私家车的欲望,那也不会有这么车,也不会有那么多的交通问题。所谓万能理由能自圆其说就行,不必纠结于细节。另:ever-adj.是一个构词法,译为不断/一直...的,ever-increasing 译为不断增长的,是一个高级用法,希望版友们能学会这个用法】
5、Rapid economic growth may lead to an overextension of resources and lead to an eventual catastrophic meltdown.经济迅速增长可能导致过度使用资源,并引起最终巨大的灾难。【消极类的,比如经济过度增长、能源过度消耗,交通问题增多,都很适用】
解释说明意义
1、With the development of our society, the campus no longer is an “Ivory Tower”.随着社会的进步,大学校园不再是一个象牙塔。【校园类的话题】
2、No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评.【中性类话题适用】
3、An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束.【换成读书,志愿者,弘扬文化之类的积极类话题】
4、A proper part-time job does not occupy student's too much time.In fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.As an old saying goes :All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻.【把part-time job换成网络,运动什么的都很适合】
5、The direct correlation between self-esteem and success also applies to one's ability to achieve.自尊和成功的直接联系也适用于一个人取得成就的能力。【适合意志品质类的文章,self-esteem可以换成自信、合作各种好的意志品质】
第三篇:考研英语作文闪光点创作
考研英语作文闪光点创作
作文是各类英语考试中得分较低的一种题型,究其原因,除了平时缺少练习之外,同学们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板,除此之外,如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定使你的作文如虎添翼。
高分作文标志:
1、是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样、准确、形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾的例子:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作为插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词、助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。举例如下: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中,applicable替换proper;approaches替换ways;implement替换carry out;sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。
下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法,精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)
thrilling 替换 exciting;
sth.exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth;
google 替换 search;
an army of 替换 a lot of。
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;
Coincident with „ 非常地道的句型,表达“与„一致”的意思,替换 With „;
Advancement 替换 development;
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into;
Current(currently)替换 now;
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.;
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people;
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的。(it goes without exaggeration that更好)
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with;
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法;
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动;
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;
Deliver 替换 send。
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型;其次however作为插入语;再次,function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。
Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing);
Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen更好)
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;
Computers do play,使用do 表示强调;
Positive 替换 important / good 等;
A slice of 替换 a part of;
Unfavorable 替换 bad;
Impacts 替换 effects / influences;
We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入语;
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象,merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage);
Facet 替换 aspect。
以下是45个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:
1.individuals,characters, folks替换people ,persons.2.positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good.3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替换bad(如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换。)
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most替换many.注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.5.a slice of, quiet a few 替换some.6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that替换think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)。
7.affair ,business ,matter 替换thing.8.shared 代 common.9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits.10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion.11.Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.)
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything或little or nothing替换hardly.13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful.14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser 替换customer.15.overwhelmingly,exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very.16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替换 unnecessary, avoidable.17.indispensable替换necessary
18.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb.be interested in.19.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.20.facet,demension,sphere代aspect.21.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear.22.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.23.There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth.24.desire 替换want.25.pour attention into 替换pay attention to.26.bear in mind that 替换remember.27.enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)。
28.interaction替换communication.29.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth.30.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance.31.next to / virtually impossible替换nearly / almost impossible.32.regarding/concerning 替换about.33.crucial/paramount 替换important.34.第一(in the first place/the first and foremost);第二(there is one more point ,I should touch on, that„.);第三(the last but not the least).35.assiduous替换hard-working
36.arduous替换difficult
37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged 替换poor(因为poor通常含有贬义)
38.demonstrate /manifest 替换show
39.invariably 替换always
40.perilous/hazardous替换dangerous(写社会类作文时常用,说什么社会现象是不好的,有害的)
41.formidable 替换difficult
42.quintessential 替换typical(举例时常用,例如:a quintessential example should be cited that=for example;for instance)
43.distinguished 替换famous
44.feasible替换possible
45.consequently, accordingly替换so
第四篇:英语考研常用感谢信作文词句汇编
英语考研常用感谢信作文词句汇编
【导语】当你真正想完成一件事时,根本不会在意别人是否看到。备考漫漫长路,东星资源网和你一起默默地走下去。以下是英语考研常用感谢信作文词句,一起来看看吧!
【篇一】英语考研常用感谢信作文词句
Thanks again!
I do appreciate it.I appreciate more than I can say.I must thank you again for your generous help.My true gratitude is beyond the word’s desciption.I feel most obliged to thank you once more.I am most grateful for your selfless donation.Please accept my gratitude as always.Best wishes for your health and every happiness.My thanks to you for your kindness and assistance when I …--and my love for you,always!
【篇二】英语考研常用感谢信作文词句
I am writing to thank you,on behalf of …,for the lovely time we had at your party last night.I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.If it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aid,I fear that the consequence might have been much more serious.It is generally held that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit…
It was nice of you to..Please have no hesitation in writing to me should you want me to do something for you…
It was kind and thoughtful of you to…
【篇三】英语考研常用感谢信作文词句
Thank you very much for…
I am writing this letter to thank you for …
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for …
I feel greatly indebted to you for …
I really do not know how to express my gratitude for your help.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for…
I am writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me…
I don’t know how to thank you for your kindness to me.I warmly appreciate for your hospitality.We are indebted to you for your help.With deepest gratitude I write you’re here few lines.
第五篇:2015考研英语 短语点缀增加作文闪光点
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进入九月份,大家的备考越来越紧张了,考研作文作为一个重要的部分,我们该如何有技巧的备考,给作文带来更多的闪光点呢,下面小编就为大家整理了以下的信息。
1、强调名词【very+名词】
有同学说名词的强调直接用 it is…that不就搞定了么?这里介绍的是一个更地道的用法,就是用very+名词的形式。比如:温室花朵的范文
The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances.As is shown in the first cartoon,the very flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening lightening and storm.Very一词用的很地道,如此这样的一个花朵,被保护起来。如果这句用强调句it is …that来写,估计你自己把句式结构都弄乱了。有时候要长短句结合,通篇文章全都是复合句老师也会看腻的,要长短句结合,才是最好的有节奏感的文章。
2、强调动词【do/does/did+动词原形】
The picture does state that they will travel extensively from north to south together with their combined legs.有同学问了,你说的这两个强调有什么用。强调句显得你的用词更加地道,让你文章的节奏感更强。庖丁解牛中的一、1也是一个强调动词的用法。
3、强调形容词 副词+形容词
4、定语从句的介词前置提升
5、当用到相同意思的词的时候,先写高级的用法,后写一般的用法。
3~5这三条和在一块说,因为要用到同一个例句。副词+形容词?这个我们都知道啊,还用你金翅告诉我们。这里的副词不是一般的副词,而是和形容词同义的副词。可能说的太抽象,举一个例子,也是超级华丽的一句话,加到你的模板中。
Although live of citizens has been greatly changed,there is no denying the fact that the problem of internet,with which Chinese people are faced,becomes severely serious.随着人们的生活发生了巨大的变化,这个事实是不可否认的:网络问题,中国人民所面对的这个问题,变得非常的严重。
3:这里用severely来强调 serious,因为两者是同义词,一个是副词形式、一个是形容词,强调的效果更强。比becomes very serious效果强的不是一倍两倍。另建议作文中尽量
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少出现very,因为very是一个很主观的词,你要阐述你的观点,摆事实讲道理,要客观、要有理有据。Very这个词太主观,基本没有说服力。怎么提升文章的说服力,后文有交代,先别着急。
4:with which Chinese people are faced,用得非常地道,把with提前到引导词which前,让句子的结构平衡。如果说which Chinese people are faced with,这样也可以,但是哪个更有技术含量大家一眼也能看出来。
5:这句话中两次出现“人们”这个词,如果你用两个people那你真是傻到家了,让老师感觉你的词穷了,露怯了。所以平时多积累些同义词,到时候尽情的卖弄吧。不要通篇都是I think,哪怕是有一个I believe也好很多。不要在老师面前显得你的词汇很薄弱。这句话中,用了citizen和people,把高级的放前面,一般的放后边,惯用法。
6、谚语的使用
有些意志品质类的文章,如果加入一句相关的谚语会让你的文章大放光彩。但是不能直接写句子。加一个模板句型:An ancient oriental philosopher said,“谚语”。一位古老东方的先哲曾经说过,…有同学说西方的谚语为什么用东方的先哲呢?比如:Where there is a will,there is a way.是西方的谚语,中国也有有志者,事竟成的语句。文化都是相通的,可以放心来用。以下是英语作文中常用的一些谚语。
7、你不得不知道的there be
there be是一个非常有用的句型,不要以为简单句就是低级的。使用“ there be ”句型,可以将一个简单句,马上变成一个加入定语从句或者分词的复杂句。通篇的简单句、陈述句,没有句式变换的文章是得不到高分的。如何把一个简单句变成复合句呢?举个例子:
Internet provides us with convenience.网络给我们提供便利。只是一句普通的陈述句,可能不会吸引老师的眼球。如果把它变成there be的结构并且引导一个定语从句那就太给力了。there is the very Internet which provides us with convenience.要善于利用陈述句there be+定语从句的结构变化,多练几遍,考试时用一次。
以上就是为大家整理的提升考研英语作文闪光点的几个技巧,希望能够帮助大家更好的备考,祝大家能够取得好成绩!