TPO1 独立写作

第一篇：TPO1 独立写作

TPO-1 Independent writing task

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Some people claim that universities and colleges should not spend a great deal of money on sports and social activities, as their budgets should prioritize classes and libraries.However, as educational institutions, universities and colleges have an obligation to provide a wide range of knowledge to their students to help them develop academically and socially.More and more businesses require people who are not only specialists in their fields, but also skilled in social interaction.In the rapidly changing environments of science and the economy, no task can be done by a single person.Given the need for collaboration, social skills and team spirit are necessary qualities for any successful person.Clearly, sports and social activities in universities and colleges provide students with the perfect settings to practice their social skills.By playing football on a team or joining in a protest, for instance, students can develop a sense of belonging and experience team spirit, both of which may prove very important in building a career.Aside from fostering social skills and team spirit, sports and social activities can greatly improve students’ efficiency.Students need not play sports or participate in social activities at the expense of their academic study.Indeed, for some students, playing sports and joining in social activities are good stress reducers.Even the most enthusiastic people feel tired if they concentrate on one thing for too long.Frustrated and tired people can do nothing well if they do not recover from their bad situations.Students who have been frustrated in their academic work would be well-advised to play some sports or join in social activities.Academic education will always be at the heart of a university.In universities, sports and social activities should by no means take the place of a focus on academic study.What I believe is that universities and colleges should spend adequate money on academics as well as sports and social activities.For instance, in the United States, almost all famous universities have plenty of sports teams and social groups, and universities provide adequate financial support with these events.None of these universities have weakened their academic standards because of social movements or sports.For these reasons, I maintain that universities and colleges should spend enough money on academic education and social movements to prepare students for their future development.playing computer games can expand a child’s outlook.Some computer games that can be played on the Internet were devised by foreign companies.Playing these games gives children an excellent opportunity to communicate with “game friends” from all over the world, allowing them to learn about other countries and cultures.____________________________________________________________________________

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Some people claim that universities and colleges are not supposed to spend much money on sports and social activities and their budgets should be focus on classes and libraries.But in fact, as educational institutions, universities and colleges do have the obligation to provide wide range of knowledge to their students, both academically and socially.It’s not uncommon today that more and more business require talents who are specialists in both their fields and social lives because with the amazing race of development of science and economy, no task could be done by a single one.Therefore, social skills and team spirit are necessary qualities for a successful man.Clearly, sports and social activities in universities and colleges provide students with a perfect environment to practice their social skills.By playing football with a team or joining in a protest parade, students could feel the sense of belonging and share the team spirits, which are very important in their future career.Aside from social skills and team spirit, sports and social activities could greatly improve study efficiency of students.Playing sports or joining in some social activities does not mean students would do this at the expense of their academic study.Quite the opposite, to some students, playing sports or joining in the social activities is a good stress reducer for their tension of study.Even though the most enthusiastic people would feel tired if he concentrated on one thing for a very long time.Frustrated and tired people would do nothing well if they do not recover from the bad situation.As a result, students who have been frustrated by academic study would be well-advised to play some sports or joining in some social activities in order to improve their study efficiency.Meanwhile, academic education lied at the heart of the universities.The emphasis on sports and social activities in universities could, by no means, take place of the focus on academic study.What I insist is universities and colleges should spend enough money on both academy and sports or social activities.For instance, in the U.S, almost all famous universities have plenty of sports teams and social groups, and universities provide adequately financial support with these events.None of these universities weaken their academic education because of social movements or sports.For those reasons, I would like to say that universities and colleges should spend enough money on academic education and social movements in order to prepare students for their future development.

第二篇：TPO独立写作题目

1.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.2.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.3.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.4.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.5.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.6.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.7.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.8.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children(aged two to five)should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.9.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.10.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time.Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.11.Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.Others think access too much information creates problems.Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.12.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.13.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family(grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles)is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.14.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.15.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.16.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.17.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.18.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.19.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.20.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.21.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.22.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.23.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.24.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

第三篇：TPO 独立写作题目

1.At the universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes

and libraries and should receive equal financial support.2.Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between

people.3.It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.4.In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.5.People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things like to do—rather

than doing things they should do.6.Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were

children.7.It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to

learn facts.8.Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two to five)should not be

allowed.9.Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.10.Playing computer games is a waste of time.Children should not be allowed to play them.11.Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.Others

think access to so much information creates problems.Which view do you agree with?

12.It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one

specific subject.13.The extended family(grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles)is less important now than it

was in the past.14.People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign

countries.15.In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own

money at a young age.16.The best way to travel is in a group led by a your guide.17.Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.18.Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.19.In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news

sources.20.Successful people try new things and take risks rather than doing what they already know

how to do well.21.For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than

studying hard in school.22.Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.23.In today's world, it's more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work

slowly and make sure that everything is correct.24.One of the best way that parents can help their teenage children prepare for their adult life

to encourage them to take a part-time job.

第四篇：tpo综合写作26

综合写作26

Reading

The zebra mussel, a freshwater shellfish native to Eastern Europe, has long been spreading out from its original habitats and has now reached parts of North America.There are reasons to believe that this invasion cannot be stopped and that it poses a serious threat to freshwater fish populations in all of North America.First, the history of the zebra mussels’ spread suggests that the invasion might be unstoppable.It is a prime example of an invasion made possible by human transportation.From the zebra mussel’s original habitats in Eastern Europe, ships helped spread it out along new canals built to connect Europe’s waterways.The mussel can attach itself to a ship’s bottom or can survive in the water—called “ballast water“—that the ship needs to take on to properly balance its cargo.By the early nineteenth century, the mussel had spread to the whole of Europe.It was later carried to the east coast of North America in the ballast water of ships traveling from Europe.The way ships have spread the zebra mussel in the past strongly suggests that the species will soon colonize all of North America.Moreover, once zebra mussels are carried to a new habitat, they can dominate it.They are a hardy species that does well under a variety of conditions, and they have a high rate of reproduction.Most important, however, zebra mussels often have no predators in their new habitats, and species without natural predators are likely to dominate their habitats.Finally, zebra mussels are likely to cause a decline in the overall fish population in habitats where they become dominant.The mussels are plankton eaters, which mean that they compete for food with many freshwater fish species.Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they support/contradict specific points made in the reading passage.Listening

Narrator

Now listen to part of a lecture on the topic you just read about.Professor

Contrary to what you just read, there are ways to control the zebra mussels’ spread.What's more, it is not so clear that the mussel is a serious threat to fish populations.True, the spread of zebra mussels couldn't be controlled in the past, but that's because people didn't have enough knowledge.In fact, there are effective ways to stop ships from carrying the mussels to new locations.Here's an

example.The way zebra mussels usually travel across the ocean is that a ship takes on some fresh ”ballast water" in Europe and then empties that water into American waterways when it arrives.Full of zebra mussels, but the ship can be required to empty out the freshwater and refill with ocean water while still out in the ocean.Saltwater will kill the mussels.Second, it's true that zebra mussels often don't have predators in their new habitats, but that's only in the beginning.What's been happening in Europe is that local aquatic birds sooner or later notice there's a new food source around and change their habits to exploit it.They switch from whatever they were eating before to eating zebra mussels.And birds can eat a lot of mussels.So zebra mussels aren't so likely to dominate their new habitats after all.Finally, even in habitats where zebra mussels become dominant, is the overall fish population likely to decrease.It's true that zebra mussels may have a negative impact on fish that eat plankton.But on other fish, they can have a positive impact.For example, the mussels generate nutrients that are eaten by fish that feed near the bottom of the lake or river.So bottom-feeding fish populations may increase, even if plankton-eating fish population decrease.一、阅读听力要点概括

Reading Passage

Main points: The invasion of zebra mussel to North America is unstoppable and puts a threat to freshwater fish.Sub point 1: History suggests invasion might be unstoppable.Sub point 2: Mussels can dominate their new habitat.Sub point 3: Mussel threats fish population after they dominate the area.Lecture

Attitude: Contrary.Unsure mussels’ threat to fish population.Sub Point 1: There are effective ways to stop mussels in today’s knowledge.(Salt water)

Sub Point 2: Birds can be predators and eat mussels.Sub Point 3: Bottom-feeding fish may increase while plankton-eating fish decrease but overall fish population only likely to decrease.Answers

二、范文逐段赏析

Paragraph 1

Contrary to what is argued in the passage, the lecture demonstrates how zebra mussels are not likely to become an imperative threat to freshwater fish populations in North America.此段功能：

(Listening passage后文提到用L代替)

(Reading passage后文用R代替)

以L的观点为主要观点，mussels不会对淡水鱼群造成危害。首段一句话即确定全文逻辑为相反，contrary。

此段结构：

作者用一句话总结了全文讨论的问题，并告诉大家全文逻辑为相反。极其单刀直入。大家发现论点很简明时大可不必费心凑两句话再起下一段。

Paragraph 2

First of all, recently uncovered knowledge of zebra mussel has shed light on new ways to prevent their invasion.Even though people in the past have not been able to stop the spread of zebra mussels, knowledge and technology may help abate their spread in the future.For example, although a large amount of zebra mussels spread to America by staying in the ballast water that is emptied halfway on the journey across the Atlantic and replenished with sea water, the zebra mussels can be exterminated as soon as they are directly exposed to salt water.此段功能：

以L的观点起头，谈sub topic 1，说明现代科技相比旧时代科技有机会阻止mussels spreading.随后举听力中的具体例子为证明。

此段结构：

此段为总分结构。第一句陈述L的观点(可以阻止spreading)，第二句陈述R中的事实(过去的人确实未能阻止mussel spreading)，第三句呈现L中的事实(咸水可以消灭mussels)反驳R中的事实。

Paragraph 3

Furthermore, zebra mussels do not often dominate a new habitat for a long period of time.The lecture agrees that although zebra mussels may have no predators and reproduce rapidly in the beginning, it would not be long before predators take notice of this new source of food, and develop a taste for it, thus preventing its domination.此段功能：

还是以L观点出发，谈sub topic 2, 说明mussels不会经常统治它的栖息地。L中同意短时期内mussels没有天敌，但没过多久掠食者就会发现这些新的美味从而结束mussels的统治。

此段结构：

总分结构。第一句总结L观点说明mussels完全统治是不成立的。第二句陈列L中同意R的证据。第三句陈列L反驳R的补充理由证据。

Paragraph 4

Finally, zebra mussels alone would not cause the decline of overall fish populations.Although zebra mussels may perhaps cause the decline of plankton eaters, as the passage suggests, they would also provide nutrients for bottom-feeding fish and ultimately cause the population of those fish to increase.此段功能：

讨论sub topic 3, 说明mussels不会造成总体鱼群数量的下降。L说虽然他同意R的观点(mussels造成plankton eaters下降)，但是伴随而来的bottom-feeding fish的数量上升从而导致总体鱼群数量上身。

此段结构：

总分结构。第一句总结L观点。第二句依然是陈列L同意R部分的证据。随后第三句陈列L中补充的证据来反驳R的观点。

三、范文全篇总评

1、逻辑结构

全文遵从总分结构，开头段直接一句话总结+逻辑，展开全文反驳基调。随后三段依照3个分论点依次展开。在分论点的论证中，作者阐明了L的态度，先小幅度同意R的观点，随即立刻补充新证据，反驳R的观点。作者利用R的证据，补充新证据后证明了R原来观点的片面性，从而达到一一驳倒的效果。

2、语言表达

全文十分紧凑，并启用了一些新词语赋予色彩。

其中值得借鉴的词语和句式有：

1.Recently uncovered knowledge of zebra mussel has shed light on new ways to prevent their invasion

Recently uncovered:最近新发现的

/Newly discovered/ It is recently found out/

Shed light on: 给与了希望

/Shown/ Given/ Illuminated

2.The lecture agrees although………….(R的观点)………..，….…(L的观点会抵消R的观点)….。

3.Ultimately：最终的，终极的

/Finally/ At last/ In the end/ After all/

Ultimately, the success of his company depends on good marketing.

第五篇：独立写作模版（范文）

This new century has witnessed the explosive growth of science and technology, which____.When it comes to____, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last decade.The statement claims that __________./It is commonly accepted that_大众观点___.From my perspective, I agree/disagree with the statement and there are several reasons and instances as follows supporting my view./From my perspective, I prefer A rather than B and there are several reasons and instances as follows supporting my view.让步段 Unquestionably,让步词

However, say XXX is an overstatement, for one thing..加2到3个支持句

For another thing…加两到三个支持句

In conclusion, if there is anyone out there who still doubts if … who still wonders if … who still questions if … this essay is my answer.