第一篇：七年级下作文例文
Unit 1
Dear friend,My name is Li Lei.I’m 14 years old.I’m from China.I live in Beijing.And I’m in Class 9 Grade 1.I want a pen pal in Australia.I speak Chinese and a little English.I like basketball.It’s fun.My favorite subject is English.I have no brothers or sisters.Please tell me something about yourself.Can you write to me soon?
Best wishes to you!
Yours,Li Lei Unit2
My home is on Center Street.On Center Street, there is a restaurant, a KFC and a library.The KFC is between the library and the restaurant.Across from the KFC is a pay phone.A bank is next to the pay phone.The supermarket is on Fifth Avenue.A hotel is in front of the supermarket.Unit 3
I like koalas very much because they are kind of shy and quiet.Koalas are very small.They live in Australia.They often sleep in the day.Leaves are their favorite food.They live in the trees.Do you like them? Unit 4
Wanted: Do you like children? Do you like to work in a school? Do you like to work hard? Can you sing and dance? Can you speak English? If your answer is “Yes”, then we have a job for you as an English teacher.Please call Mr Wang at ***.Unit 5
Dear Mary,Thanks for your letter and photos.This is one of my photos.In this photo, I’m doing my homework.My father is talking with my grandfather.My grandmother and my mother are watching TV.My brother is playing computer games.And my sister is playing with the cat.We are all very happy.Can you write to me soon?
Yours,Jenny Unit 7My friend
I have a good friend.She comes from China.She is very beautiful.She is of medium build.She is a little bit short.And she has long black hair.She has big eyes and a small mouth.She likes wearing shorts and a T-shirt.Sometimes she wears a pair of sunglasses.She can speak a little English and Japanese.She likes small animals.We are in the same class.We are good friends.I love her.Unit 8
House of Noodles
Welcome to the House of Noodles.Do you like noodles? We have three specials.Special 1 has beef and tomato.Special 2 has mutton and potatos.Special 3 has eggs and carrots.It is only 10 RMB for a large bowl.It is 8 RMB for a medium bowl.It is just 5 RMB for a small bowl.We also have some drinks.Green tea is only 2 RMB.Orange juice is 3 RMB.Unit 9My Busy Day
I spent a very busy day last Sunday.On Sunday morning, I got up at 6 o’clock.I cleaned my room.And then I helped my mother wash the clothes.On Sunday afternoon, I did my homework.After that, I went to a movie with my friends.On Sunday evening, I watched TV with my family.Then I went to bed at 10:00.I was really busy that day.My Last Weekend
Last weekend, I had a good time.On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room.On Saturday afternoon, I played basketball with my friends.On Saturday evening, I watched TV with my family.On Sunday morning, I did my homework.On Sunday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.On Sunday evening, I practiced the piano.I was busy, but happy.Unit 10
Monday, July 4th
It was sunny today.I got up early.In the morning, I had 4 classes, Chinese, English, math and history.I had lunch in the dining hall of my school.In the afternoon, I played tennis with my classmates.We had a lot of fun.After school, I went home and did my homework.Then I watched TV.I went to bed at 10:00.Unit 11
I like talk shows.Because they are very interesting.I like the host.But my mother doesn’t like them.She likes soap operas.My father doesn’t mind it.He likes sitcomes.My sister can’t stand them.She thinks they are boring.Unit 12Rules of the Library 1.Don’t talk.2.Don’t listen to music.3.Don’t eat in the library.4.Return the books on time.5.Keep the books clean.My School Rules
There are many rules in our school.We have to wear school uniforms every day.We have to bring our school ID cards with us.We can’t talk loudly at anytime.We can’t run or jump in the hallways.We can’t listen to music in the classroom.We can’t eat snacks at school.We can’t eat in the classroom.We have to eat in the dining hall.My Family Rules
Tom has many rules.He has to get up at 6:30 every morning.He can’t watch TV or play computer games on school night.He has to finish his homework every day.He must be in bed by ten o’clock.He can’t eat outside.He has to be back home by 6:00 in the afternoon.
第二篇：七年级作文下教案
第四次习作训练 怎样选材
习作目的：
1.明白作文选材的内容:“我”的真实生活,“我”的真切体验。2.掌握作文选材的方法:小角度、围绕中心、真实新意。
3.在课堂实践中变“学得”为“习得” ,增强写作信心,提高作文的兴趣和选材的能力。习作要求：
1.根据学生在选材中出现的常见问题有针对性地指导。2.通过对作文的选材训练,提升学生作文选材的能力。
文章是由材料组成的,没有材料,就等于没有砌墙的泥沙。大家平时写作后,老师常常会评论同学们的文章说:“立意不高”“偏题了”“材料与中心不符”等。同学们拿到一个作文题,也常感到不知该确定什么中心,选择什么材料。今天,我们就来共同学习一下“怎样选材”的问题。
以《我的一天》为题,写一篇作文。不少于600字。1.立意与选材的含义及关系。(1)何谓立意? 人们常说“文以意为主”“文以载道”,这一“意”或“道”就是文章中心。立意就是确立文章的中心思想。这是写好文章的关键。凡是好文章,无一不是在立意上下功夫的。因为文章的中心思想,就如文章的灵魂,它统领全文,贯串首尾。
(2)何谓选材? 选材,就是选择典型材料来表现中心。
文章是通过材料来立意的,材料要为中心服务。如果所选材料不能表现中心,也就是立意不正确,不管它如何精彩,写成的文章最终只能是一篇各种材料的大杂烩。
(3)两者关系。
立意,是文章的灵魂,而材料则是构成文章的骨肉。两者是灵魂与骨肉的关系,互相依存,密不可分。2.引导学生掌握作文对“选材”的具体要求,引起学生对选材的高度重视。俗话说:“巧妇难为无米之炊。”一篇文章,如果没有材料去体现,也是镜中月,水中花,是虚的。(1)生活中的材料很多,要围绕中心进行选择,确定好详略。根据教材98页《阿长与<山海经>》的内容,判断详略及其好处。
(2)还要注意材料的真实和新颖。
学生结合自己选材的实际,分析选材失误的原因,然后同桌交流,最后请学生小结。
选材失误主要有以下三个方面:一是司空见惯。表现在材料陈旧,无法吸引读者。二是毫无新意。有的材料用的人多了,也失去了原有的光彩。三是简单模仿。一味模仿,进入抄袭的误区。
我的一天
盼望着,盼望着,期盼已久的暑假终于到来啦。(运用反复的修辞,表现了对暑假的急切盼望之情。)我心中满怀着对暑期的美好憧憬,展开了一连串的遐想:在家补习?去旅游?学习家务?待在小窝里写作业,看看书?不管怎样,我都感觉这样的假期生活很充实。(一系列的设想真实自然,语言简洁,客观地反映了学生的心理。)已经是放假的第8天啦,要是就这样待在家里,没病都会憋出病来,妈妈说再不出去呼吸下外面的空气,恐怕都不知道外面变成什么样啦。可是我想:出去有什么好玩的呢?正当我一筹莫展的时候,妈妈说了句:“有空也该到爷爷奶奶家逛逛,知道不?”听了妈妈的话,于是乎,我马上整理好东西,带上作业,去了爷爷奶奶家。坐了几个小时的车,头晕乎乎的,有种想睡觉的欲望,但一想到爷爷奶奶正等着我呢,便立马振作精神,下了车,背上书包,奔向我的目的地。
到了爷爷奶奶家,奶奶看见我心花怒放,问这问那,让我应接不暇。(略写,为引出下文田里的爷爷做铺垫。)我发现爷爷竟然不在,便问奶奶:“奶奶,爷爷呢?”奶奶笑着回答道:“哦,他啊,田里种菜呢,要不你去看看?”听此言,我便跑到爷爷的田里,站在田垄边上看见爷爷正在田里除草、施肥。在这么炎热的天气下,爷爷戴着一顶大草帽,在田里辛勤耕耘。看着那高瘦却不壮实的背影,我心中泛起一层酸涩涟漪。我大喊了一声:“爷爷!”爷爷似乎没听见,于是我走到他的身旁。爷爷看见我,吓了一跳,和蔼地说道:“乖孙女,怎么想来看爷爷了?”我说:“想你们啦!”说着说着,便在爷爷的田里嬉闹起来:捉蝴蝶,抓青蛙,玩蝌蚪„„仿佛又回到了小时候。爷爷看着我的目光漾满了慈爱。愉快的时光总是消逝得如此快,一天就这样结束了。(此处详写,突出了两代人在一起享受的无可比拟的快乐。)真想赖在爷爷奶奶家不回去啦,虽然今天的作业没动一个字。最终爸爸还是要接我回去,拗不过爸爸,我只好依依不舍地跟爷爷奶奶告别了。(略写恋恋不舍地离开,突出了和亲人团聚的快乐之短暂。)这是多么快乐幸福的一天啊,至少在我心中是如此美好。这一天的一切将化为一颗闪亮的星定格在我的记忆长河中。(点明主题,运用比喻抒发了对这一天的难忘之情。)
讲 评
第五次习作训练 文从字顺
习作目的：
1.学会准确用词、造句,写作时做到文从字顺。2.语言通顺优美,有条不紊地表情达意,学会扩写。3.学习写景状物的方法。习作要求：
1.在文从字顺的基础上力求语言优美。
2.平时多读书,丰富自己的词汇,养成文从字顺的表达习惯。
一、联系实际,引入课题
同学们,我们平时作文,不少同学在语言运用方面,或用词重复啰唆,或语句不通顺,或语序不当,致使自己的思想感情不能得到准确的表达。今天,我们一起来进行作文训练。这次作文训练的侧重点是文从字顺,有条不紊地表情达意。
二、阅读教材,抓住要点
文从字顺是写作的一项基本功,需要我们在写作中反复磨炼,不断提高。那么,要做到文从字顺,要注意些什么呢? 〔明确〕 材料一:“我们无论描写什么事物,要表现它,唯有一个名词;要赋予它运动,唯有一个动词;要得到它的性质,唯有一个形容词。我们必须继续不断地苦心思索,非发现这个唯一的名词、动词与形容词不可。仅仅发现与这些名词、动词或形容词相类似的词语是不行的,不能因为思索困难而去用类似的词语敷衍了事。”--法国作家福楼拜
准确,是作文用语最起码的标准。故事链接: 前苏联卫国战争进入大反攻时,一位将军向斯大林报告说:“敌人撤退了!斯大林立即纠正道:“不是敌人撤退了,而是敌人在逃跑!”斯大林把“撤退”换成“逃跑”,准确地点明了战况。
材料二:妈妈是一个勤劳的人。有一次,我的数学考了95分,妈妈就给我耐心地讲错在哪里,讲得非常仔细,我听得明明白白。妈妈把家务活全都承担下来,让我一丝不苟地学习。她对我要求很严格,我的学习里面有你的心血。
围绕中心说话,意思要连贯,人称要清楚。
人们在向别人陈述一个问题时,都会注意话与话之间该怎样衔接别人听了才会明白,这就是语言的连贯性。例如,上下两句话的安排要合乎事物发展变化的过程或人们观察认识问题的顺序;一段话要围绕一个话题说,说完一个意思再说另一个意思,而不能东一句西一句,前言不搭后语;讲完一个意思再讲另一个意思时,衔接处要有过渡词语。写作时注意这个问题,也有利于把文章写得通畅。
材料三:有个自负的棋手,与别人较量,连输了三局。后来,人们问他:“你与某人赛了几局棋啊?”棋手说“三局。”人们又问:“胜负如何?”棋手说道:“第一局我不曾赢,第二局他不曾输,第三局我要和,他不肯,罢了。”
在上述话中,这位棋手挖空心思回避“输棋”二字,可谓口头表达的妙例。能掌握好用语的“分寸”,是语言运用能力强的表现。材料四:唐朝年轻的诗人贾岛去长安参加考试。他骑着驴,在大街上一边走一想着他的诗句。突然,他想到了两句好诗:“鸟宿池边树,僧推月下门。”又一想,觉得“推”字改“敲”字更好一些,他想得正入神时,只听得对面喊了一声:“干什么的?”还没弄清楚是怎么回事,便被拉下驴,带到韩愈面前。原来,他冲撞了大文学家韩愈的仪仗,等贾岛把事情说了一遍后,不但没有受罚,反倒引起了韩愈对诗句的兴趣,韩愈想了一会说:“还是敲字好。静静的夜晚,在月光下,一个僧人敲门,这个情景是很美的。”于是“推”字改为“敲”字。后来,“推敲”便成为人们反复考虑的意思。
好文章不是写出来的,而是改出来的。故事链接: 相传,有一次苏东坡与他的妹妹苏小妹及诗友黄山谷一起论诗,互相题试。小妹说出“轻风细柳”和“淡月梅花”后,要哥哥从中各加一字,说出诗眼。苏东坡当即道:前者加“摇”,后句加“映”,即成为“轻风摇细柳,淡月映梅花”。不料苏小妹却评之为“下品”。苏东坡认真思索后,得意地说:“轻风舞细柳,淡月隐梅花。”小妹微笑道:”好是好了,但仍不属上品。”一旁的黄山谷忍不住了,问道:“依小妹的高见呢?”苏小妹便念了起来:“轻风扶细柳,淡月失梅花。”苏东坡、黄山谷吟诵着、玩味着,不禁抚掌称妙。
这样一改究竟妙在何处?我们不妨也来玩味一番。“轻风”徐来,“细柳”动态不显,怎能配得上“摇”“舞”这类较露的动词呢?唯有“扶”字才恰到好处,与“轻”“细”相宜,显得和谐,并且又把风人格化了,形象地描绘出了轻风徐来,柳枝拂然的柔态,给人以一种柔美之感。下句中添“映”“隐”也欠贴切。试想,恬静的月亮已经辉满大地,梅花自然没有白天那么显眼。在月光照映下,也就黯然失色了。这样,一个“失”字,就勾画了月色和梅花相互交融的情景,增强了这一首诗的感染力,真是一字生辉啊!
三、提出问题,组织讨论
1.“文从字顺”是写作的基本要求,那么“文从字顺”包含了哪些方面的意思呢? 同桌讨论,举手回答,教师归纳:“文从字顺”包含了两个方面的意思:一是用词恰当、妥帖地表达作者的所思所感;二是语句通顺畅达、有条不紊地表达作者的思想感情,无任何含混、错乱和别扭之处。
2.作文时如何才能做到“文从字顺”呢?(同桌讨论,举手回答,教师归纳)首先,要培养自己良好的语感。“语感,即人们对语言的一种敏锐的感觉。”它包括语言的通顺感、连贯感、分寸感、韵律感等。这种“感觉”的形成,一是要平时养成多读书的习惯,对一些优秀的文章能熟读成诵;二是要“多听”,强化读的效果;三是要尽量丰富自己的词汇,准确掌握词语的含义,且懂一点语法。只要向这个方向努力,做到文从字顺就不难。其次,要养成修改作文的习惯。作文写完后,先反复读几遍,在读的过程中去检验通顺感、连贯感、分寸感、韵律感;然后分析词语的运用是否恰当,语言的组织形式是否合理,并进行针对性修改,使文章词句运用有分寸、讲逻辑。除此之外,还要注意标点的规范运用,使行款格式正确,不至于因此而影响意思的正确表达。
四、例文示范,启发引导
选择你最喜欢的景或物,写一个片段,想好再动笔,把语句写得连贯、顺畅。不少于200字。
温馨提示:(1)注意观察景和物的细节(形状、色彩等),抓住其总体特点。(2)借鉴《紫藤萝瀑布》和《一棵小桃树》描写景物的方法。
例一:从未见过开得这样盛的藤萝,只见一片辉煌的淡紫色,像一条瀑布,从空中垂下,不见其发端,也不见其终极。只是深深浅浅的紫,仿佛在流动,在欢笑,在不停地生长。紫色的大条幅上,泛着点点银光,就像迸溅的水花。仔细看时,才知道那是每一朵紫花中最浅淡的部分,在和阳光互相挑逗。
这里春红已谢,没有赏花的人群,也没有蜂围蝶阵。有的就是这一树闪光的、盛开的藤萝。花朵儿一串挨着一串,一朵接着一朵,彼此推着挤着,好不活泼热闹!《紫藤萝瀑布》
例二:我深深闭了柴门,伫窗坐下,看我的小桃树在风雨里哆嗦。纤纤的生灵,枝条已经慌乱,桃花一片一片地落了,大半陷在泥里,三点两点地在黄水里打着旋儿。啊,它已经老了许多呢,瘦了许多吧,昨日楚楚的容颜全然褪尽了。可怜它年纪太小了,可怜它才开了第一次花儿!《一棵小桃树》
〔明确〕 两段文字都抓住了景物的特点,运用了生动的修辞,语句连贯顺畅,表达了作者强烈的思想感情。
佳作范文:写向日葵的精彩语段
它们是一个不再低头的集体。当你再次凝视它们的时候,你发现那偌大一片向日葵林子的边边角角,竟然没有一株,哪怕是一株瘦弱或是低矮的向日葵,悄悄地迎着阳光凑上脸去。它们始终保持这样挺拔的站姿,一直到明天太阳再度升起,一直到它们的帽檐纷纷干枯飘落,一直到最后被镰刀砍倒。
当它们的后脑勺终于沉重坠地,那是花盘里的葵花籽真正熟透的日子。
五、作修改,完成文章
选择全班有代表的一个片段,按提示要求集体创作。教师注意指导学生扩展成写景抒情或托物言志的作文的方法。
温馨提示:(1)扩展写作时,可以借鉴《春》的写法,想好写哪几个方面,写出景物哪方面的特点。(2)想好表达怎样的思想感情。(纯写景的文章是难以打动别人的)(3)多改两遍,力求达到文从字顺。
【原作】 小 草 赞
“没有花香,没有树高,我是一棵无人知道的小草。”每当想起这首歌,我就想起了到处都可以看到的平凡而又顽强的小草。
春天,冰雪刚刚融化,许多娇贵的花还躲在温室里不敢出来,而小草却像一群活泼可爱的孩子,从大地母亲的怀抱里调皮地伸出一个个嫩绿的小脑袋,那么细弱,那么娇小,但它们不畏春寒,在微风的吹拂下轻轻地唱歌跳舞,第一个给人们带来春的信息。
夏天,暴风雨来了,许多庄稼、花儿,就连小树也被风吹得东倒西歪,而小草竟然昂着头,挺着胸,任凭风吹雨打,而经过暴风雨洗礼的它,长得更加粗壮,更加翠绿,像一条碧绿的毯子覆盖在大地上。
深秋,小草的叶子枯黄了,它脱去一身衣服,毫不吝惜地献给大地,使大地更有力地养育万物。“离离原上草,一岁一枯荣。野火烧不尽,春风吹又生”白居易的这首诗,不正是对小草顽强生命力的讴歌吗?我们平常经常看到只要有土壤的地方,甚至在墙缝、高山、坚硬的石缝中都有它翠绿的身影,而且它不需要任何人来给它浇水、施肥,却以惊人的生命力破土而出,野火虽然可以给小草带来毁灭性的灾难,但是只要一旦春风吹过,它又翻山越岭,漂洋过海,到需要自己的地方安家落户。
小草的确平凡得不能再平凡了,它不像大树那样傲然屹立,更不似鲜花那样婀娜多姿,但它却具有极旺盛的生命力。我赞美小草,更赞美那些具有小草精神,意志坚强,不择环境,具有顽强生命力的人。【简评】本文思路清晰,结构严谨,条理分明地写出了小草的特征,进而挖掘出了小草的象征意义。文章语言简练流畅,显示了一定的语言功底。
美中不足:有些语句可以更准确生动一些。修改稿: 小 草 赞
“没有花香,没有树高,我是一棵无人知道的小草。”每当唱起这首歌,我就想起了那平凡而又顽强的小草。
春天,冰雪刚刚融化,许多娇贵的花还躲在温室里不敢出来,而小草却像一群活泼可爱的孩子,从大地母亲的怀抱里调皮地探出了一个个嫩绿的小脑袋,那么细弱,那么娇小,它们不畏春寒,在微风的吹拂下轻轻地唱歌跳舞,第一个给人们带来春的信息。
夏天,暴风雨来了,许多庄稼、花儿,就连小树也被风吹得东倒西歪,而小草竟然昂着头,挺着胸,任凭风吹雨打。经过暴风雨洗礼的它,长得更加茁壮,更加翠绿,像一条条碧绿的毯子覆盖在大地上。
深秋,小草的叶子枯黄了,它脱去一身衣服,毫不吝惜地献给大地,使大地更有力地养育万物。“离离原上草,一岁一枯荣。野火烧不尽,春风吹又生。”白居易的这首诗,不正是对小草顽强生命力的讴歌吗?我们经常看到,只要有土壤的地方,甚至在墙缝、坚硬的石缝中都会有它翠绿的身影,而且它不需要任何人来给它浇水、施肥,它却以惊人的生命力破土而出。野火虽然可以给小草带来毁灭性的灾难,但是只要春风吹过,它又会破土而出,展露出蓬勃的生命力。
小草的确平凡得不能再平凡了,它不像大树那样傲然屹立,更不似鲜花那样婀娜多姿,但它却具有极顽强的生命力。
我赞美小草,更赞美那些具有小草精神,意志坚强,不择环境,具有顽强生命力的人。
六、自主创作
“古人不见今时月,今月曾经照古人。”古往今来,月亮一直是人们吟咏的对象,寄托了人们无尽的情思。请以《月亮》为题,写一篇作文。不少于500字。
例文: 有一种思念,叫月亮
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今夜,心绪烦躁。窗外皎洁的月光射入书房,一片宁静与祥和。我决定去散步,平静如波涛汹涌般翻腾的心绪。
走在泛着月光的青石路上,周围雾气缭绕,为这人间仙境增添了一份神秘与安详。月光照在我的脸上,我抬头望向那玉盘明月。月亮却不尽如人意,躲在云雾里不肯见我,我心中难免有些落寞。月光似水,充斥在林间。我不可遏制地想到:也许,广寒宫里的嫦娥或许也在思念吧,思念着后羿,思念着那些消逝的美好,那些不可复得的美好。看着那轮高悬的明月,眼前的一切变得朦胧,我的思绪不知不觉飞走了,飞到了遥远的童年时代。
儿时生活,日日悠闲快乐,无忧无虑,与小伙伴尽情嬉闹而不知疲倦,老师总是慈祥地对我笑,回忆儿时,一切似乎都是那么美好与温馨,一切都是那么值得怀念与思恋。泪水浸湿了我的眼眶,最后还是从面庞流下。现在,故友都已离我而去,各奔东西,老师也一面难见,曾经所拥有的一切似乎都伴随着小学生涯的结束而消失了。每每想到这里,我总是痛彻心扉,心绪更加波涛汹涌,无法平静,“剪不断,理还乱。”天空中的明月像一个巨大的漩涡,把我吸入那无尽的痛苦、惆怅与思念的深渊中,让我无法自拔!明月啊明月!你为什么要带给我无尽的思念啊!古人咏月来抒发思念,我又何尝不是呢?我过去的美好哪里去了?“晴天,雨天,落幕犹在思念;回忆过去,流星划过云烟。”耳畔又想起了童年时的歌曲,它曾经是那么熟悉,可我又觉得有些莫名的陌生感,心中更添了几分痛楚与无可奈何。
人们啊!在拥有时不懂得珍惜,却又在失去时欲哭无泪,可这又有什么用呢?难道思念后就会失而复得吗?过去的美好,一去不复还啊!珍惜现在所拥有的一切珍惜你的青春,珍惜你的时间珍惜你的生命。更要珍惜你心中倒映的那轮明月。不要在看到高悬明月时,只能发出一声充斥着悲伤与怀恋却又于事无补的哀叹!明月,寄托着我的忧思,同时它也寄托着古往今来无数人的忧思!月,就是思念的载体啊。有一种思念,叫月亮。
讲 评
第六次习作训练 语言简明
习作目的：
1.把握考点内涵和特点。
2.掌握使“语言简明”的基本方法,并运用于语言实践。习作要求：
掌握语言简明的方法,并运用于写作实践。本部分1课时。
听故事找毛病:小红给在外地工作的妈妈写信:“亲爱的妈妈,好久不见了,真是‘一日不见,如隔三秋’啊!现在我的成绩是日新月异,老师对我的关怀是无所不至。祝你健康快乐,永垂不朽!”你觉得哪些词语用得不当找出来。
那么,我们该如何正确地使用语言呢?今天,我们一起来学学语言表达方面的问题:语言简明(板书)。
将教材中的这段文字的毛病指出来: 还有一种立体的书,也很吸引人。很多人围上去看。它的插图都是立体的。当你把书打开的时候,书里的人和动物会马上站起来,“跃然纸上”,栩栩如生。
分析:这段文字说明的意思是,有一种立体的书能够活动。但是语言不够简明。“立体的”出现两次,字面重复;“吸引人”和“很多人围上去看”,意思重复;“当你把书打开的时候”,不够简洁。
它可以修改如下: 还有一种书,插图是立体的,也很吸引人。打开书,书里的人和动物会站起来,“跃然纸上”,栩栩如生。
修改后的文字,语言简洁,意思也很明确。
(一)语言简明的本质要求是:用最经济的语言材料传送最大的信息量,达到最高的准确性和可理解性,取得最佳的表达效果。
简,即简要、简洁。明,即明白,清楚。
内容:简--①删除多余词语(指重复、啰唆的内容)②排除冗余信息(指文中游离于主旨或话题之外的内容)。明--①消除歧义
②避免费解(使人难以领会或理解的内容)。(二)怎样做到语言表达简明?(阅读教材内容和实例后,再总结巩固练习)教材举例解答: 1.她说她在等候上车的时候,她心里一直在后悔。(词语重复)改:她说在等车的时候,她心里一直在后悔。
2.接着是整座城市被火山熔岩淹没,直到1709年才被一些考古学家将这座城市发掘出来。改:接着是整座城市被火山熔岩淹没,直到1709年才被一些考古学家发掘出来。3.小伙子天天锻炼,身体显得很健壮结实、强壮有力、敦实健硕。(词语堆砌)改:小伙子天天锻炼,身体显得很健壮结实。
4.战胜了挫折,出现在我们面前的将是无限光辉灿烂的无比光明的美好前景。改:战胜了挫折,出现在我们面前的将是无限光辉灿烂的前景。师生共同归纳要点,巩固练习:(1)围绕中心,抓住要点,不旁生枝节。
要做到语言简明,首先是每一句话都要围绕既定中心,不要节外生枝。不过仅仅围绕中心还是不够的,还应该抓住要点。俗话说“简明扼要”,从表达上说,只有扼住“要”,才能做到简明。21教育网
例1:这种笨重的汉书使用起来是极不方便的。据说,秦始皇每天批阅的简牍文书有120斤重。西汉的时候,东方朔给汉武帝写了一篇文章,用了3000片竹简,是由两名身强力壮的武士抬到宫廷里面去的。汉武帝把竹简一片一片地解下来看,足足用了两个月的时间才看完。
解析:这段文字主要说明简牍文书“笨重”使用“不方便”。首句提出看法,接下去两句用两个事例说明这一看法。文字较简洁,意思很明确。
(2)善于概括,巧用指代。
无论是书面表达还是口头表达,都不能总是具体叙述而不作必要的概括。只有把必要的叙述和概括结合起来,表达才能简明。再者,运用必要的复指成分,也是表达中不可少的。不用复指成分,就会啰唆。
(3)避免重复,删除多余。
鲁迅在谈到自己的写作经验时曾说:写完后至少看两遍,竭力将可有可无的字,句,段删去,毫不可惜。”(《答北斗杂志社问--创作要怎样才会好?》)要想写出简洁明了的文章,我们应该不断地修改、锤炼。这是确保表达简明的又一方法。
例2:读下面的一则报道,本着语言文字要简明的原则,完成文后两题。
科学院举行①超对称性和超引力学术讨论会为加强基础理论工作和准备参加国际性粒子物理会议,中国科学院最近在郑州举行全国②超对称性和超引力问题学术讨论会。③对超对称性和超引力的问题进行研究和探讨。④“超对称性”和“超引力”是70年代在国际上才引入物理学中的新概念。在这次会上,介绍了当前国内外⑤对于超对称性和超引力问题研究的情况,展开了热烈、自由的⑥学术讨论,⑦在某些问题上提出了一些新见解。
(1)应删除的两处语句是(写画线处的序号):(2)应简略的一处语句是(写画线处的“序号”)
,这句可改为
。解析:这是一则完整的报道,有标题,有导语,有主体。一般说来,标题应是导语内容的概括,导语应是主体部分内容的概括。据此,这篇报道的标题概括地叙述了举办单位、会议内容、会议性质,因而①是必须有的,不能删除。导语共有两句话。第一句概括叙述了会议的目的、举办单位及时间、会议的内容和性质,因而②不是可有可无的。但是,因为第一句已经表达了导语该有的内容,再来一句说明会议的内容,便同前一句重复,所以②是必须删除的,否则就显得啰唆、累赘,而不简明。主体部分首句交代“超对称性”和“超引力”问题的由来,因而④是不能删除的。因为标题、导语都已经说明会议是“学术”讨论会,所以⑥的“学术”是与上文重复的,可有可无的,应当删除。再看主体部分的⑤,因为上句已经出现了“超对称性”和“超引力”这两个概念,⑤处再一次出现,读来显得重复累赘,但又不能删除。倘若删除,是介绍国内外的什么情况又不明确,因此应该改用指代性词语作复指,如改为“对于这两个问题”,就会既“简”又“明”。
有同学认为⑦应该删除,这是不对的。因为它是对这次学术讨论会所取得成绩的评价,没有最后这一分句,报道的主体部分便不完整。
这道题比较集中地反映出要做到语言表达简明应从三个方面努力:一是围绕中心,抓住要点;二是巧用复指,善于概括;三是避免重复,删除多余。
(三)怎样避免表意不明? 表意不明,令人误解或费解,是常见的语病,也是与“简明”的要求相违背的。怎样避免呢? ①少用单音节词,多用双音节词。
有些单音节的多义词,一不小心,就会造成歧义。如“县里通知赵乡长15日前去汇报”一句中,“前”是多义词,可以理解为“15日之前”去汇报,也可以理解为“15日前往”县里去汇报工作。如果要表达的是前一个意思,应改用“之前”;如果要表达后一种意思,就改用“前往”,并删除“去”。
②调整语序,交代明确。
语序不当,交代不明,也会造成歧义。如“他背着总经理和副总经理偷偷地把这笔钱分别存入了两家银行”一句可以作多种理解,如果只是“背着总经理”,可以改为“他背着总经理,偷偷地和副总经理一道,把这些钱存入了两家银行”。如果是“背着总经理和副总经理”,可以改为“他背着总经理和副总经理,把这笔钱偷偷地存入两家银行”。还有其他理解、其他改法,这里不一一分析。
③交代清楚,如实直说。
句中停顿的位置是否恰当,指代是否清楚,也影响着句意的表达。譬如:“这个精致的灯笼将作为今天得分最高嘉宾的礼品赠送给他。”这一句表达得很不清楚。“作为嘉宾的礼品”,既可以理解为送给嘉宾的礼品,也可以理解为嘉宾送人的礼品;句中的“他”指代也不明,作为前一义项时,可以理解为“嘉宾”,作为后一义项时,可以理解为“别人”。这个句子可以这样改:这个作为礼品的精致的灯笼,将送给今天得分最高的嘉宾。也可以改为:这个精致的灯笼是嘉宾准备的礼品,今天谁得分最高将送给谁。这样的修改,意思都是明确的。
这个例子让我们知道,为“简”而简,有时会事与愿违,表意反而不清楚。(一)常规作文的修改内容。
下面这段话不够简明,请加以修改。
篮球比赛结束后,比赛完的队友们一个个都坐上大巴走了。大巴是学校的车,学校有好几辆大巴和小轿车。我没有上车,而是一个人默默地走回家。我在回家的途中,紧锁着眉头,无奈地叹息,我心里很难受,不禁为比赛的失利感到难过。那个余晖满天的黄昏,我一个人站在家门口,独自伫立在暮色之中。
提示: 1.抓住叙事的主题,去掉偏离中心的语句。2.删掉语义重复的词语,使表达更加简明。
解析:文段主要表达的意思是篮球比赛失利后的难过心理,所以对于“大巴和小汽车”的交代没有必要,“那个余晖满天的黄昏”,“独自伫立在暮色之中”这类的语句没有时间上的衔接,也不搭配。所以,偏离中心的语句是“大巴是学校的车,学校有好几辆大巴和小轿车。”和“那个余晖满天的黄昏,我一个人站在家门口,独自伫立在暮色之中。”而在词语的使用上一方面是词语重复,“比赛结束后”和“比赛完的”意思重复,“走回家”和“在回家的途中”字面重复,另一方面是词语堆砌,“紧锁着眉头,无奈地叹息,我心里很难受”和“为比赛的失利感到难过”几个词语意思相近,放在一起词语堆砌。
修改:篮球比赛结束后,队友们一个个都坐上大巴走了。我没有上车,而是一个人默默地走回家。途中,我不禁为比赛的失利感到难过。
(二)用简明的语言概括《带上她的眼睛》或《河中石兽》的主要内容,不超过150字,写完后小组内交流。
提示: 1.概括主要内容,要在立足原文的基础上,把握中心和要点,删减旁枝末节的部分。
2.概括的文字既要简明,也要保持连贯通畅,避免因过度追求简明而造成字面意思跳跃。
示例:《带上她的眼睛》文中的“我”带上了一位因事故而被困在地底深处无法返回地面的女宇航员的“传感眼镜”--相当于用她的眼睛去四处游玩。“我”带着她的眼睛完成了她的最后一次地面探索。在结束任务的同时,女宇航员也永远留在了地底下。小说表达了“珍惜目前能看到的,就是幸福”这一观点。
《河中石兽》讲述的是一个庙门口的石兽,倒塌到河里,十几年后,人们找石兽的事。寺僧到下游找没有找着;讲学家认为石兽埋在沙里只能越埋越深;老河兵讲解应当去上游找的理由,按照他的话果然找到了石兽。由事到理,告诉我们遇事不能主观推论的道理。
航天、生物、计算机、新能源„„你对哪个领域的科学技术最感兴趣?请搜集相关资料,加深对这种科学技术的理解。在此基础上,展开想象,写一篇作文。不少于500字。
提示: 1.可以想象科学技术在未来的发展情况,及其对社会生活的影响。这种影响可能是有益的,也可能带来潜在的威胁和灾难。
2.要有一定的故事情节。如果能像《带上她的眼睛》那样,设置一些悬念和伏笔,那就更好了。3.写完后多读几遍,根据语言简明的要求,做进一步的修改。智能翅膀
“外婆,我们出发吧。”宁宁又一次催促我。(开门见山,语言简洁,直接进入故事的叙述)“好的,让我先给你装上翅膀吧。”我边说着边打开身旁的一个小皮箱,从里面取出折叠成伞形的两对翅膀。翅膀光滑平整,银灰色的面料看上去一尘不染。(介绍了翅膀的形状、质地和颜色,很有生活)我将小的那对装在宁宁背部衣服的插槽上,将安全带系到宁宁的胸部和腹部,再将翅膀上的四条感应线分别贴在宁宁的太阳穴和脖子上。“嘀”的一声,感应器进入工作状态。我叫宁宁试着扇动一下翅膀,宁宁双脚蹬地,拍打着翅膀轻松地飞了起来。(感应线的设置和安放位置合情合理)我连忙给自己也装上了翅膀,并将小皮箱真空压缩后装在口袋里,然后拉着宁宁的手从三十二层的窗户飞了出去。
外面阳光明媚,翅膀上的太阳能聚能板用甜美的声音告诉我们:“现在是公元2060年4月20日上午8点12分,户外光线充足,可以高速飞行。”(联系上了飞行的天气状况的影响,思维缜密)宁宁在学校里刚刚通过飞行考试,昨天才拿到飞行证,所以对飞行充满着新鲜感。她时而在空中盘旋,时而做一些垂直俯冲的动作,时而又像孙悟空一样翻几个筋斗,一边飞行一边嘴里还不停地喊叫着:“爽!爽极了!”(飞行的动作描述精准,源于对科学的热爱)回过头来她又很不放心地问我:“外婆,要是翅膀真的出了故障,上面的安全降落伞真的会自动弹出来吗?”“那当然,自从翅膀问世以来,到现在已经二十年了,成千上万的翅膀没有出过一次事故。再说我们用的是‘飞驰’公司的产品,质量更是可靠,你就一万个放心吧!”我笑着对宁宁说。(安全降落也有啊,情节紧紧相扣。)这时,一只小鸟从我们身边飞过,调皮的宁宁抓住小鸟的尾巴。我连忙阻止她的行为,告诫她说:“不可干扰动物!没有鸟儿,我们根本就造不出今天这样的仿生智能翅膀,再说你这样做是违反天空交通法规的。”宁宁连忙松了手,还笑嘻嘻地对小鸟说了声“对不起”。(介绍了仿生智能翅膀的原理,还对读者进行了热爱动物,遵守交通法规的教育,主题深刻)简评:这篇文章的小作者将科学与幻想结合起来,构思巧妙,使作文的内容合情合理,行文流畅、简洁,充分发挥了自己的想象力,表达了人类终有一天会像鸟儿一样自由飞翔的梦想。而且文中将飞行的天气影响、飞行证,安全系数、制作原理等内容想得非常全面,可见小作者善于观察生活,使想象有一定的生活积累。这种想象似乎未来还能够实现,小作者在表述时语言简明,词语凝练,没有一点啰唆,值得学习。
如何使文章简洁? 郑板桥在一幅画中题诗:“四十年来画竹枝,日间挥笔夜间思。冗繁削尽留清瘦,画到生时是熟时。”意思是要使绘画不同凡响,只有去掉繁杂提炼精髓。
契诃夫以简洁的文笔著称,他认为:学会简练是一种才华。他甚至说:写得有才华就是写得短。作家梁实秋认为写作须忍痛“割爱”,要将那些不扼要的描写,不恰当的字词,大刀阔斧地加以削删。芟除枝蔓之后,显得简单而有力量。美国著名作家海明威,他经常用一只脚站着写作,以迫使自己尽可能简洁地表达思想。所以他的文章惜墨如金,被人称为“电报式语言”。
当然简洁并不等于简单,更不意味着肤浅。简洁应是言简而意丰,言近而旨远,给读者一个想象的空间。海明威曾提出一个“冰山原则”,即作品好像海上的冰山,露出水面的只有1/8,其余7/8需要读者去想象。柯灵的散文素以简洁老成著称,他对简洁的理解更为全面:“文字的简洁,不能光从数字着眼。如果没有多少意蕴,文字尽管简洁,顶多也不过简洁而已。”
如何使语言简洁呢? 讲究意合,流然。著文需随物赋形,笔随意转,句与句间流然,少用“虽然„„但是”之类的关联词。如“枯藤老树昏鸭,小桥流水人家,古道西风瘦马。夕阳西下,断肠人在天涯”一连串名词浑然天成产生了多么奇妙的意境!学会白描,不加渲染。白描本是国画的一种画法,即纯用线条勾勒,不加彩色渲染。顾恺之画人物,几笔勾勒,特征突出,形神毕肖。一次,在为朋友裴楷画像,着重画了裴楷面颊上的三根髭须,观者顿觉画中人“神明殊佳”。
鲁迅说:“写文章要去粉饰,有真意,勿卖弄。” 他刻画人物肖像,多用白描,文字简练单纯,不加渲染烘托。如描绘孔乙己的长衫:“孔乙己是站着喝酒而穿长衫的唯一的人。他身材很高大;青白脸色,皱纹间时常夹些伤痕;一部乱蓬蓬的花白的胡子。穿的虽然是长衫,可是又脏又破,似乎十多年没有补,也没有洗。”通过破长衫的白描,把孔乙己的社会地位、病态心理、思想性格和所受的教育揭示得入木三分。
多用短句,轻盈活泼。英国著名的哲学家罗素,曾把如何写议论性散文拟成几条“简单的准则”,其中一条是:能用短词的时候决不用长词。因为长词或长句过多,冗长枯燥,甚至有晦涩之弊,令人难以卒读。而短句轻盈活泼,有跳跃感。如朱自清的《春》大量使用对称或排比的短语或短句,既流畅又整齐,既简洁又活泼。
少用修饰,流畅鲜明。罗素认为文章中要尽量少用附加语,因为附加语往往会影响文气的流畅。契诃夫认为过多的形容和修饰,会分散读者的注意力,有损鲜明性。他说:“如果我写‘这个人坐在草地上’,这就容易懂,因为它清清楚楚,不妨碍注意力。要是我写‘一个高高的、窄胸脯的、身量中等的、留着棕色胡子的人坐在绿色的、已经被行人用脚踏过的草地上,一声不响地、心虚地、战战兢兢在往四下里看’,那就相反,这句话变得不好懂,使脑筋感到吃力。它不能一下子印进人的脑筋。小说必须一下子,在一秒钟里,印进人的脑筋。”
提炼语言,以少写多。古时候,有一则《制鼓歌诀》原来二十个字:“紧紧蒙张皮,密密钉上钉,天晴和落雨,打起一样音。”后来改为十二个字:“紧紧蒙,密密钉,晴和雨,一样音。”最后只剩八个字:“紧蒙密钉,晴雨同音。” 提炼语言,以少写多,藏而不露,以给读者留下开阔的艺术空白。鲁迅的杂文《死》中有这么一条:“五,孩子长大,倘无才能,可寻点小事情过活,万不可去做空头文学家或美术家。”其中的“空头”一词,原稿中没有,是后来同冯雪峰增添的。它好就好在极简明形象地揭示了那类不学无术、却拉文艺大旗的冒牌文人的特征。要语言简明,不但是外语言的问题,而且是内语言的问题。只有对事物分析深刻透辟,才能抓住问题的症结,把复杂的事物写得简洁明确。
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第三篇：七年级下 英语作文
七年级下 英语作文
Unit 1
Dear friend,My name is Wang Ping I come from China.My first name is Ping and last name is Wang.I'm 14 years old.I can speak Chinese and a little English.I like playing volleyball.I like going to the movies.My favorite movie is Rush Hour because I like Cheng Long very much.I have a brother, Wang Qiang and a sister, Wang Li.They like going to the cinema, too.Unit 2
Dear mike,I know you're arriving next Sunday.Let me tell you the way to my house.Take a taxi from the airport.You pass a bank on your right and then go down the Street.You go through Sixth Avenue and Seventh Avenue.Then you see a big supermarket, turn left at new park.then go down and my house is on your right.Unit 3
There is a new zoo in our city.The zoo is really interesting because there are all kinds of animals in it.People all like them very much.I like going there on Sundays.I like koalas very much because there’re very cute.But they're kind of lazy.They sleep during the day and get up at night.They’re also very friendly to us.Unit 4
I’m a student now and I study in no.19 middle school.I like study.I study every day.I think it's very interesting.In the future, I want to be a reporter.I think it's an exciting job.I like talking to people.I like going to many different places.I like meeting lots of interesting people.But sometimes it's a little dangerous.I like exciting work.Unit 5
Look!This is a happy family.This is Bruce’s family.Bruce is playing computer games.He likes it very much.his grandmother is watering the flowers.His father is reading a
book.His mother is watching TV.She likes the TV show very much.His sister Mary is doing her homework.Everyone is having a good time.Unit 6
Dear frank,I’m a middle school student in XingTai.It’s a beautiful city, and I like the weather here.It’s warm in spring.It’s a little windy so we can fly kites in the park.It’s hot in summer.People like swimming in this season.It’s cool in autumn.People like playing sports outside.In winter, it's very cold and it often snows.People like wearing scarves and go skiing.People have a good time all the year.Yours,Mike
Unit 7
Dear mike
We have a new English teacher this term.Her name is Julia.She’s very good-looking.She is tall and of medium build.Her hair is long and curly.She likes teaching English very much.Her class is very interesting.she often plays games with us.She likes reading very much.She always goes to the library on weekends.She’s really friendly.We all like her and her class
Yours,Peter
Unit 8
My name’s Ma Tianqi.I’m a Chinese boy I like dumplings best, because they’re our Chinese traditional food.I’d like dumplings on some festivals.I like dumplings with beef best.I usually have porridge and an egg for breakfast.For lunch, I usually have rice, vegetables and pork.I like noodles and fish for my supper.I eat fruit every day.I’m very healthy.Unit 9
Mike is my good friend.He had a busy weekend because he did lots of things on Saturday and on Sunday.Let me tell you what
he did.On Saturday morning, he did homework.He studied hard.In the afternoon, he cleaned the room.In the evening, he helped his parents wash the dishes.On Sunday morning, he was very happy.In the evening, he studied for the English test.He liked English very much.Mike had a busy but interesting weekend.unit10
Last Saturday, tom got up at 6 o'clock, and then he walked in the park.And he did exercise.At noon, he ate in KFC with his parents.He enjoyed the food very much.In the afternoon, he played soccer with his classmates on the school playground.They played from 2 pm to 4 pm.tom had a really fun day.Unit 11
Peter and Liam are talking about some TV shows.Peter loves talk shows and he thinks they're really interesting.Liam likes them, too.Liam loves sports shows very much, because he likes sports.Peter likes them, too.Peter doesn't like soap operas because he thinks they're too boring, but Liam doesn't mind them.Peter doesn't mind game shows but Liam doesn't like them.Unit 12
My school rules
There are many rules in our school.We have to wear school uniforms every day.We have to boring our school id cards with us.We can't talk loudly at anytime.We can't run or jump in the hallways.We can't listen to music in the classroom.We can't eat snacks at school.We can't eat in the classroom.We have to eat in the dining hall.无错！！！！
第四篇：七年级下英语作文
一、描写朋友、自己或家人的喜好
1、Dear friend,My name is Sally.I am from China.I want a pen pal in Australia.I am 14 years old.I have no brothers or sisters in my family.MY favorite subject in school is science, because I think it’s very interesting.I like playing the piano and playing basketball on weekends.How about you? Can you write and tell me something about yourself?
Yours,Sally2、My name is Wang Lin.Now I live in Hangzhou , China.I want to find a pen pal in England.I’m now 14 years old.I speak Chinese.And I can speak a little English.I like sports ,swimming is my favorite.I also like playing the computer games.My favorite subject in school is math.I like to go to movies with my friends.My favorite movie is Beauty and Beast.Now I live with my parents.Can you write to me soon ?
Wang Lin3、I have a good friend, his name is Bill.He is from Sydney, Australia.Now he lives in Beijing with his parents.He is 14 years old and his birthday is in October.He speaks English and he can speak a little Chinese.He has lots of friends in Beijing.He often plays soccer after school with them.It’s his favorite sport.He likes Chinese action movies very much.He thinks they are interesting.He favorite actor is Jet Li.4、Jenny is an American girl She is 13 years old.She is very tall and a little thin.She has long black straight hair.She is a good-looking girl.She likes wearing a red T-shirt and blue pant.She likes singing and dancing.Her favorite singer is Gloria Green.She thinks Gloria is great.Look!Jenny is coming.She is not wearing a red T-shirt today.She is wearing a red dress.5、My favorite animal is a cat.I have a cat in my family.Her name is Mimi, I think she is from China.She is two years old now.She likes to eat fish every day.She is kind of lazy, but she is very cute.I like to palsy with it after school.6、Lin Tao usually goes to the zoo with his parents.He likes to see animals.In his room there are many toys.Most of them are boy animals.All kinds of animals in his room are his good friend.Every day he plays with them.Sometimes he asks his friends to his home to play.On vacation or weekends he like to see the monkeys and elephants in the zoo, and the dolphin show is his favorite.7、Jim likes Zhejiang food because it’s delicious.He can’t stand Sichuan food because it’s very hot(辣).He likes Guangdong food.He doesn’t mind Beijing food and he sometimes eat it.He doesn’t like Human food because it doesn’t agree with him(它不合他的口味)。
8、I like playing basketball.It’s very interesting.I often play it with my friends.It’s a team work..Everyone needs to work together with others.(每个人都需要和别人合作).I can also make many new friends in the game.My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming.He is very tall and plays basketball very well.I want to play in NBA one day like him.9、This is a popular person.Most(大多数)people like him.He’s not young ,about 50 years old.But he looks kind of funny.He has a round face(脸)with round eyes , a big mouth and short black hair.He likes telling jokes and makes people laugh(笑).Do youknow who he is ? He is Mr.Bean10、Tom, Nancy , Lily and Jack are my good friends.They all love to watch different TV shows.Tom likes sports, so he likes sports shows.Nancy watches comedies and she loves sitcoms.But Lily can’t stand them.She just likes game shows.Jack doesn’t like sitcoms either.He enjoys talk shows.So you know they are all TV shows fans.(他们都是电视迷)
二、描写方位的短文
My home is on Center Street.On Center Street, there is a restaurant, a KFC and a library.The KFC is between the library and the restaurant.Across from the KFC is a pay phone.A bank is next to the pay phone.The supermarket is on Fifth Avenue.A hotel is in front of the supermarket.三、用进行时态描写的各种短文
1、It is Sunday.The Turners are free and they are staying at home.They are doing different kinds of things.Mr Turner is mending his car.Mrs Turener is sitting at the table.She is drinking.Bob is talking on the phone.Nancy is sitting near the pool.She is watching the dog swimming.They are having a good time.2、It is a fine Sunday.There are many people in the park.They are playing happily(高兴地).Some are playing beach volleyball on the beach.A man is lying on the chair.A manis swimming.He can swim very well.A man is talking with him.He is learning from him(向他学习游泳).Everyone is having a good time.3、Look at the picture.There are some boys in the picture.They are playing basketball.Near them under the tree, two girls are reading a book.Who are working near the house ? Two boys and a girl.Can you see the birds in the tree? I think they are singing.They are having a good
time.4、It is New Year’s Day.The weather is sunny but cold.Lucy’s family are all at home.Lucy is talking to Scott on the phone.Her father is playing basketball outside.Her mother is busycooking.Her sister, ,Mary , is watching TV, and her brother , Jeff, is playing computer games.They are all having a good time.5、It’s Sunday morning.My mother and I are gong to the park.There are a lot of people in the park.Some children are running.A dog is running after them.Four women are sitting there They are talking.Two girls are playing with a big bal near them..Three old men are standing under a big tree.They are watching the children.There is a river there.Many young people are dancing near it.There is a boat on the river.And an old man is sitting in the goat.He is dishing.Everyone in the park is having a good time.We are having a good time, too.四、天气预报的短文
Good morning!Here’s the weather report for some big cities in the world.Beijing is cloudy.It’s very cold, so wear warm clothes when you go out.In Hong Kong there’s beautiful sunshine.(阳光灿烂).People will feel cool in the daytime.It is sunny in New York , but there’s a strong wind(大风)in the afternoon.It will be rainy in Sydney but very hot.The day after tomorrow(后天)will be sunny.That’s the weather report for today.Thank you for listening.(谢谢收听)
五、描写人物的短文
There are three people in Jim’s family.Mr.Green is his father.He is fat and he has short straighthair.Hewearsglasses.He is watching TV.His mother is Mrs.Green.She is a woman of medium height.She has curly hair.She is cleaning the room.Jim is very thin.He is playing with the ball.They are all happy.
第五篇：七年级下英语作文
七下英语范文
班级： 姓名：
一、自我介绍竞选班长（can+V原）
Hello，everyone.I，m Li Wei.I，d like to be the class monitor.I am very healthy.I like sports.I often play basketball with my friends at the weekend.I，m in the school dance team and I like singing and dancing.I can dance very well.I can get on well with everyone.I work hard and I，m good at all subjects.I can also speak English well.I promise to help you.So choose me as your class monitor，please！
二、心目中的好同学（注意三单的变化）
Tom is my good classmate.He gets on well with everyone.He is kind and he is always ready to help others.He likes sports and he is really good at football and basketball.He usually plays ballgames in the playground between lessons.He works very hard and he does well at school.He is a good student in our class.三、假期计划（be going to+ V原）
Dear David，I，m happy the May Day holiday is coming.This is my holiday plan.On Monday morning，I，m going to get up at eight o，clock.At nine o，clock，I，m going to go over lessons.In the afternoon，I，m going to see a film with my parents，and then，I，m going shopping in the supermarket.On Tuesday morning，I，m going to have a picnic with my friends and collect litter.In the afternoon，I，m going to visit a museum with a lot of famous paintings with my parents.And on the last day，I，m going to do my homework，and help my mother do some cleaning at home I，m looking forword to the May Day holiday.Yours，Li Lin
四、将来的生活（will+ V原）
In the future，I will be a doctor.And I will help people all over the world.Children won，t go to school.They will study at home with the robots.We won，t need money any more，because everything will be free.We will have lots of time to travel.Every family will have a plane.Everyone can go into space.Life in the future will be interesting.五、网购的利弊
Nowadays（现在），many people shop online.It，s a new way of shopping.Some students also like shopping online.Online shopping has some advantages.First，you can buy almost everything at any time.The shops are always open.Second，online shopping can save a lot of time.You only need a computer and a mouse！You can also compare the prices of the same product，so it can save money.But online shopping has some disadvantages too.If you buy things online，you can，t see the product or try the clothes on.Also，paying over the Internet isn，t always safe.Online shopping is changing our way of life.It makes our life easy and convenient（便利的）.六、指路
Hi，Millie.I，d like to invite you to go to the movies at 7:00 p.m.on Saturday.You are new here.So I，m going to tell you the way.After you come out of your hotel，turn right.Walk straight on until you see a bridge.Cross the bridge and turn right.Then go straight on and turn left at the second crossing.You can see a shop on your left.The cinema is just next to the shop.You won，t miss it.Hope to see you there.Wang Ming
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