第一篇:写作满分经验
1、注重写好文章的框架
我曾经问过我的外教老师,外国人看文章最注重的是什么,他告诉我说是文章的framework.即一篇文章好不好,首先看的不是他的句型,词汇,或是论点等。而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚,我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头,经过,结尾。我们可以多用用连接词,例如:first of all, moreover, secondly, lastly等,另外可以多分自然段,给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章,看看他们的写作模式,我当初写文章的时候,用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式,我觉得可以套用,我最后介绍给大家。
2、句型的多样化
如果一篇文章,从头到尾,永远用的只有一种句型,那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分,我们可以适当的改换一下句型,我给大家一定建议,希望给大家有点帮助。
3、基本句型包括Ⅰ.主谓句;Ⅱ.There be;Ⅲ.主系表结构的句子;Ⅳ.被动语态(我看到一张帖字说,不要用被动,我不这样认为,国外的文章,用被动的也比比皆是。)
4、复杂句型 包括Ⅰ.并列句;Ⅱ.从句(定语,状语,名词性,非谓语)
5.词汇 的Variety
说实话做到这点真的很难,首先你要有庞大的 词汇 量,第二你要用的恰当,不出错误。我自认做不到这点,所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇,例如:激烈的竞争fierce competition等
6、多举EXAMPLE(重要)
大家不要小看这点,我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说,这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理,你有这么多话要说吗?而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友,可以说她的 英语 基础很差,但她的文章也拿了6分,我问她怎么写的,她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过我的外教老师,他曾是IELTS的考官,他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。
7、建议:
1)、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误,不然就前功尽弃了。
2)例如我积累的句子:
Cultivate independence
Develop a strong sense of responsibility
Enhance social awareness
Build up one’s confidence and offer one’s a sense of achievement—realize ones value
and capacity
Widen one’s horizon and sharp one’s character
这些句子比较常用,而且在口语 考试 中也可以派上用处。最后给大家介绍一种写作模式,我觉得很不错:
With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die.On one side of the debate are those who say that......On the other side is the view that......In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later.There is no denying that......has many positive effects.To begin with,......Secondly,......Finally,......However, every coin has its two sides.......is no exception.Many opponents say that......To conclude,....
第二篇:托福写作两次满分一点经验
小生是在3月24日和4月28日考的托,其他的都太水,不过两次写作都考的不错,都是满分。所以在这里和大家分享下自己的经验。
首先,小生是考过G的,答过AW的人都知道打字速度是很重要的,而且小生的个人经验看来,T的写作也是要拼字数的,两次的独立写作都写够了600,综合都写到了400.所以大家练习打字是很重要的,在最后小生给大家留有一个练习打字的小软件,可以帮助大家提高打字速度。
然后,怎么把字数写到那么多? 就独立写作来说,就一句正反两方面说,写到600字,除了天才,没准备的人很难做到,这里如果大家考过AW,那么事情就会简单些,按照Issue的反正正或正反反方式去说加上开头结尾五大段,最后再加上一个建议端。即按以下的公式: 开头+让步(支持一小下你不赞同的那面)+转折+递进+总结+建议,大家不要觉得用Issue的方法写托福作文会不会不好,一开始我也是这么想的,很多XDF的老师都说,G考逻辑,T考语言,实际上小生认为T也是考逻辑的,因为任何文章没有逻辑都无法写出。而且我以我的亲身经历告诉大家,文章写的很有逻辑至少是没有害的,而且我认为会有好处。想想考官在看了那么神散形也散的文章后,看到了一篇结构清晰的文章,即使语言稍差,也应该是倍感轻松。
然后就是建议段最好要有,我觉得很重要,而且可以凑字数。
之后有了框架之后就是中间内容的填写,最好用例子,这里的例子就没有G里的例子那么严格,小生觉得形式也不用那么教条,即使是你排比比喻或瞎编,只要切题就可以。但是例子一定要新,新例子从哪里找,我觉得在十天的那本书说的就很好。
例子是要准备的,考前可以根据机经适当准备一些。
之后就是词汇替换,我觉得词汇替换很很总要,还是那个道理托福考官看了那么多篇文章全是一样的词,然后看你的文章里也充斥着那么多一样的词,你说他得有多烦。所以要学会把一样话两样说,小生也准备了一些词类替换,最后传给大家。
另外,一些小细节就是名言的运用,和开头,我认为开头很重要,开头写好了,对后面也很关键。所以我的建议是开头用名言和复合句,然后正文多用短句,因为开头不是说理,不用写的太短,所以可以拽下文采。
此外,减少语法和拼写错误也是很重要,即使你写的再好,拼写错误太多,考官也不会好评你的文章。所以写到一定程度后不要贪多,一定要留下时间检查错误,这又是对打字速度的要求。
对于综合写作,我认为模板的作用很重要,听力也是很重要的一部分,这个有点像AW中Argument,很多Argument中的套话也可以用在模板中,这里我觉得需要指出的一点是结尾段一定要写,一是凑字数,二是起一个总结补充的作用,可以让逻辑更清楚。另外,就是拼写错误的问题,也是留出时间检查的。
第三篇:赛达写作满分经验
SAT写作满分经验
1.建议大家多学习范文,大家练习的时候不妨先看题目,然后在25分钟之内完成一篇文章,完成后和范文比较,这样可以明显发现自己的弱点和可以改进的地方,得到提高.2.一定要提高速度.这是至关重要的!考试的时候一共才25分钟,一般情况下只能用90秒左右的时间进行构思,写作的时候不要停顿,不要在意单词拼写错误.SAT对单词拼写并不重视,一篇文章里有两三个拼写错误是不要紧的.不要太注重书写,只要写的字容易辨认就行了.小马过河教材上有许多满分作文影印版本,上面绝大多数的外国人的书写比你们所见过的最烂的书写还要差.但是不要涂改,卷面整洁还是有必要的.最后一段一定要写完,写的不好没关系,这样文章才是完整的.写好之后检不检查无所谓,本人当时就只用10秒中浏览了一下,当然不可能有任何效果.3.建议大家写的结构是 综述--举例--举例--总结 的形式, 这是SAT 与托福的不同点.SAT 一般只要分析一个层次,但一定要分析透彻.光用议论语句是行不通的,一定要举例子.例子要是英美文化中熟悉的,如果大家平时对美国文化接触比较少,对历史人物不了解的话,可以从范文中积累.另外,平时生活中熟悉的例子一定不要放过,一些名著比如gone with the wind, lord of the ring, harry potter中的故事都可以用.例子不要写多,一篇文章一般要2-3个就可以了,但每个例子必须要详尽论述,扣住论点.如果实在想不出其他例子,可以说一说自己生活中的经历.4.最后一点是要练习.写作文没有捷径可言,多练习才能多长进.本人考前两周练习了10篇作文,不是很多,但是平时有写英文日记的习惯,所以遣词造句上不算生疏.(小马过河国际教育)
第四篇:写作经验
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考作文分数(60分)在高考(微博)总分中所占40%的比重,比例份额较大。本报开通“高考作文预测热线”以来,受到了大家的广泛关注,很多老师、大学生和市民,都积极地参与高考作文预测,说出了自己心中高考作文的考试方向。
倾向对成败的思辨
“我认为今年高考作文会趋向理智与激情、信心和冷静。考察考生对成败的思辨,考察考生积极向上的思想和选择正确方向的能力。要求考生能站在民族和国家的高度,看待周围的生活和人事。考题的形式可能会和以往一样趋向于材料作文。”市民高女士说。
高女士建议考生,作文一旦选好体裁,就要规范,千万不要弄成“四不像”。同时也可以引用一些名言名句等,增加自己文章的底蕴。
多关注人文关怀类作文
在出版社工作的吴先生认为,“从近几年的高考题目看,很多都是有关人文内涵的主题,今年有可能继续保持对人文的关怀,因此考生准备今年高考作文时,建议考生多关注文化素养、人文关怀方面的文章。”
吴先生建议,考生可以把自己以前写过的作文中优秀的篇目或段落梳理总结一下,也可以关注历年来的高考范文,学习人家的思路。(记者 郭美佳 实习生 贺珊珊)
第五篇:雅思写作满分
题目: 题目: Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by
wealthy parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文: 范文: Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to
deal with difficulties posed by the ‘real world’ when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties.The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination.(58words)点评: 1+ 1 ’ 模式,最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊,它的确否定了前 面所提到的观点,从而表达出了自己的观点,此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句: but in fact require closer examination,感觉是在抛砖引玉。
The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when
times get tough in adulthood.Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood.They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility.This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education.(100words)点评: 1 ’ +3 模式,第 1 句是主题句。请注意,从此段的内容来看,这是个让步段(即 分析自己并不赞成的观点)。虽然 4 段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论,但是本人还是喜欢
这样的写作,即主体段的观点还是有侧重的,把让步段放在前面,最后 1 句话引出下一段,这样过度地很自然,而且自己的观点也比较明确!
The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that children of the poor know this, and those of the wealthy do not.
Who though, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money;someone skilled in earning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor
children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal, or in the school of hard knocks.Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education.(101words)点评:这段的内容感觉写得不够直接,还是在分析对方观点的漏洞!请注意,前面让步段已 经这么写过了,那么这一段最好是正面地论证自己的观点,这样从内容上来说更 convincing 一点!此外,需要说明的是,大家发现作者的内容还是有一定深度,但是这是 要有一定的英语功底才行的!如果英语功底不行的话,建议内容不要
写太深,因为那样容易 造成考官看不懂你在说什么!
A poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth.A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management;the key to developing this skill is education.点评:最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法,即 education.它没有像传统的结尾 段那样简单的重申自己的观点。
总结之总结:全文的观点有待揣摩,作者很明显是不赞成题目的说法,即 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.
但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢,还是富人家的孩子呢?!根据文章来看,作者是中 立,他所看重的是他们所接受的教育。In other words,整篇文章又是一次中立的写法。在雅思考试中,这种写法经常使用,还是非常实用的,大家可以学习一下。此外,文章中有 很多好词好句,特别是长句,值得模仿一下 七分作文 题目: 题目: Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success.Others argue that happiness depends on completely other factors.Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.
范文: 范文: In recent years, the discussion of whether personal happiness is directly associated to economic success has become a controversial toward it differ widely from person to person.issue.Notions
Some people believe that happiness is related to economic success because only money can make people’s life more enjoyable.When it comes to economic success, the majority of people believe that money means a luxurious life.
To begin with, if someone owns great success on economic, that means he can spend more money on whatever he likes and spend more time on his hobbies.Emotionally, money can buy happiness at least to some extent.That is to say, you can buy things that you like in order to fulfill your needs and vanities
and this makes you feel happier.You can also enjoy the best education and social welfare.Thirdly, economic success implies high social class and status, which can make people feel happy and respectable.(51ielts.com)
Opponents, however, hold the view that happiness does not depend on economic success but completely other factors.First of all, numerous studies show that happy individuals are successful across multiple life domains ,
including marriage, income, work performance and health.The happiness exists not only because economic success makes people happy, but also because positive affect engenders happiness.What’s more, It is indisputable that
there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure, but some of them sill lead a happy life because they keep the happy spirit.Last but not least, mo
money can not buy everything, such as friendship, true love and health.You can buy things corporeal , but you can never spend money to ask for more time.
In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations
.However, if
asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter.I firmly believe that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to other factors which are much more significant.