综合型写作---普林斯顿举例---“面包和啤酒”（★）

第一篇：综合型写作---普林斯顿举例---“面包和啤酒”

综合型写作---普林斯顿范文举例---“面包和啤酒”

大家去参考，但更多的还是仔细体会我给大家补充的支持以及反驳的两个架构。---小宝老师韦晓亮

In the lecture, the professor makes several points about the first wheat product.The professor argues that beer was the first wheat product.This different from the reading, which states that bread came first.However, the teacher cast doubt on the reading with several points.First of all, the teacher says that wheat does not have to be ground.It is easy to people to eat when it sprouts.This is not what the reading states, it says that early people ground wheat into a paste because it is hard to eat.The lecture casts doubt on this by showing another way to eat wheat.Moreover, the talk says that fermenting happens very fast.This fermenting leads to a foam, which people probably tasted as the first beer.In the reading, it is argued that fermenting made people think to bake the bread.The professor doubts this point by stating it is unlikely.Finally, the professor argues that people would not think to bake the wheat.The point is made that early people do not cook things.These points made by the teacher cast doubt on the reading.It seems like beer not bread was the first wheat food.

第二篇：微简历 写作举例

时下几种流行的微简历总结

1平铺直叙型

汽修专业，工作2年，有正在招工的请联系我。电话：13*********。

2.总结提炼型

爱运动，得过院校足球赛冠军，完成了川藏骑行之旅，喜欢有挑战性的工作；爱阅读，喜欢小说、诗歌、传记，希望通过不断的阅读来丰富自我；爱生活，爱旅行，爱交朋友，为人真诚，谦逊，自信。做过班干部，获得过校创业大赛特等奖。我是一个平凡的人，希望你们能发现我的不平凡。

3.诚实可靠型

22，女，大四结课状态中，旅游管理，北京人，喜读百书，愿学百事，脚踏实地中不断地积极进取。有新东方，南方报业等实习经验，相信自己在将自己历练成千里马的路上，期待并无限努力3年内进入500强工作。

4.热情四溢型

爱网球，爱动漫，爱生活。来自长坂坡的坚强男子，毕业于有根叔的华科大，软件与硬件配置还算一般，怀揣不熄的梦想，努力着。现实的社会，茫茫的人群，我希望能有单纯的劳动机会，在劳动中升华，成就自己。这个世界需要几个我这样的人。

5.写实诙谐型

号称就业最难的生物工程专业本科，号称女生不宜的伪网页程序员。身材娇小、体型匀称、腿细长。我爱做发酵实验、也热衷拍写真，我做过台湾交流生、我还喜欢仙剑和古剑奇谭。刚刚毕业这半年我是一个“仪器销售”，专门回校讹诈老师的科研设备经费。“做网页”神马的，我最喜欢了。

6.抒情号召型

有一个女孩她很乖，她热爱一切美好的事物。任何她走过的地方，都会留下她的微笑。她志愿成为一名为护理事业奉献的白衣天使，为此，她已经做好准备了！相信在不久的将来，她会成为一名真正的传播爱的白衣天使！加油！相信自己一定就可以！这个女孩就是陈玉，想了解她，那就来大街网吧！

7.幽默搞笑型

哥是80后的尾巴，90后的老大。武汉小本211，2012才毕业。哥不会打魔兽，没有女朋友，但哥几乎每晚在自习室神游。哥要好好努力，去实现小时候吹过的牛！

8.真诚谦虚型

不谙办公室之道，但熟悉各类办公系统操作流程。不求工资上万，只求有人慧眼识珠。你给我的也许只是一个机会，但我愿回报您所有的努力。

9.明确目标型

双十年华，聪明伶俐；举止温文，呼朋聚友；国标身材，吃苦耐劳；十载寒窗，苦读成才；专心所致，百炼成钢；思前想后，谋求3G；给我平台，尽展我能；与我自由，必成大业；君子诚言，恳求机会。

10.个性表达型

本人1984年5月某日中国制造，长178cm，净重63kg。采用人工智能，各部分零件齐全，运转稳定，经二十多年的运行，属质量信得过产品。该“产品”手续齐全，无限期包退包换，售后服务好

幽默篇举例：

“折取寒花瘦，民女广东人氏，偶从小到大好吃懒做，琴棋书画样样不会，洗衣做饭件件嫌累，偶滴最大滴梦想是成为百万富婆，这天天在研究双色球呢。”

“北京少年郎，曾混迹北航，随性远科研，前途尽迷茫；实习在英才，终择招聘行；曾事五百强，又进大街网；初入互联网，心远梦飞翔；我爱三国杀，也迷郭德纲……”

“大嗓门，急脾气。性豪爽，重情义。读广院，新闻系。喜网络，事招聘。爱美食，迷游戏。常晚睡，不早起。异地恋，嫁老七。养贱猫，土豆妮。金牛座，已婚女。”

“我是一个lady，住在这个city，样子像个baby，经常缺少money，只因自己lazy，不太爱去study,偶尔感到lonely。”（来自网络总结）

第三篇：高考英语考前专题综合训练任务型写作

高考英语任务型写作

话题预测：（供参考）

通过模读写任务的分析和考察，根据题材必须要贴近学生生活的原则，今年可能要考的写作话题有以下几个方面：（1）环境保护：Development and the Environment;Preserving Natural Resources;Saving Our Earth(2)生活见闻：Habits;How to Make Friends;Smoking is Harmful, Honesty(3)教育学习：Success and Failure;No Pains, No Gains;Study Alone or Study With Groups(4)文化科技：Net Bar；Internet;Mobile Phone, Email, QQ Chatting,(5)社会时事：How to Get Along Well with Others;One-child Family;The Cause of Fire;Volunteers;The Danger of Fake Commodities；Honesty;(6)饮食健康：Health Is More Important;The Way to Stay Healthy;Smoking and Health(7)娱乐休闲：Use of Free Time;The Value of Reading Books;Work and Recreation(8)和谐、沟通、情感、心理健康（障碍）、,感恩：True Beauty;On Perseverance;An Ideal Friend, Thanksgiving, Communicating with other, Healthy Psychology，Parents’ love，In memory of old generation., Cleaning the Tombs.读写任务（1）：阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。[阅读材料] Once upon a time some tiny frogs held a competition.The first to reach the top of a very high tower would be the winner.A big crowd gathered around the tower to see the race and cheer them on.The race began.No one in the crowd really believed that any of the tiny frogs would reach the top of tower.“They will never get to the top!They will never succeed!” someone said.One by one, the tiny frogs began to collapse(退下).The crowd kept shouting, “It is too difficult!No frog will make it!”

More tiny frogs got tired and gave up, but one continued climbing, higher and higher.This one wouldn’t give up.In the end, he was the only one left—the only one to get to the top.The other frogs naturally wanted to know: How did the frog make it？

One frog stepped forward to ask the winner.It turned out:„ that the winner was deaf.He had won because he was able to keep his own mind.He was able to keep trying.He couldn’t hear criticism;neither could he hear praise.[写作内容](1)以约30个词概括寓言故事的大意。

(2)然后以120个词就“坚持就会成功”这个主题发表你的看法, 并包括如下要点：

a)叙述着个寓言给你的启示；b)以自己或朋友、家人的经历说明“坚持就会成功”或者不坚持导致失败； c)你自己的感受或思想。[写作要求](1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

(2)标题自定。

[评分标准] 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。

参考范文：

The passage tells us about a competition where only a deaf frog got to the top of tower.He won the race because of his deafness, which made him keep his own mind and keep trying.This story tells us that in our life,work or study, usually only those people who don’t listen to criticism or praise from others will succeed in the end.„„.读写任务2 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

In addition to teaching here, I also teach at a smaller high school 17 miles down the freeway from where I live.One day a few weeks ago I was driving to that school when my car broke down just after I exited the freeway.I was only about a quarter of a mile away from the school so I grabbed my books, and started walking.“ ”As soon as I got there I called a repairman to meet me at my car after class.One of my colleagues asked me what had happened.'This is my lucky day,' I replied, smiling.“ ”Your car breaks down and today is your lucky day?' She was puzzled.'What do you mean?'“ “I live 17 miles from here.' I replied.“My car could have broken down anywhere along the freeway.It didn't.Instead, it broke down in the perfect place: off the freeway, within walking distance of here.I'm still able to teach my class, and I've been able to arrange for the repairman to meet me after class.If my car was meant to break down today, it couldn't have been arranged in a more convenient fashion.”

I once read somewhere before that every morning when you get up, you have a choice about how you want to approach life that day.And this is what I choose---to be cheerful.[写作内容] 最近你感到学习压力很大, 你的外籍老师对你讲述的自己的亲身经历。你准备在今天的日记中表达自己的感受。1．以约30个词概括老师所讲述的这个故事的内涵； 2．以约120个词表达你内心的感受，并包括如下要点：(1)你听完这个故事的感受；

(2)在你成长过程中你自己或他人用积极的态度去面对问题的某个经历；(3)激励你自己正确面对学习压力。[写作要求] 1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。Possible version: Saturday, may.22nd, 2008 Dear diary, Today in class the teacher told us a story, in which he was optimistic and maintained a positive attitude when his car broke down on his way to school.I appreciate the teacher’s optimistic attitude to difficulty, which allowed him to stay positive to perform his job well.If he didn’t do so, this one problem would have turned into many other problems.The story reminded me of waiting in line with Li Hua at the amusement park last summer.There were so many people waiting in line for boating and I felt upset at wasting so much time queuing.But Li Hua said with a smile, “We haven’t seen each other for ages.I have so many wonderful things to tell you.Let’s share this precious chance to chat with each other.” It dawned on me that waiting in line was not a problem but an opportunity.Now I’m determined to always be optimistic when I meet problems.Rather than think of study as a pressure, I should see it as an opportunity to learn more about the world.读写任务3 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay.But three years later, they received different wages.So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times.Jim, who received 500 dollars a months, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself.Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes.George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.[写作内容] 1．概括该故事的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右；

2．就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右。1）你认为是什么导致三兄弟的薪酬差异;2）你从这个故事得到什么启示;3）你对 “态度决定一切”如何理解? 4)举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。[写作要求] 你可以使用实例可其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。参考范文

Three brothers, who worked for the same company , received different wages due to their different attitudes towards their work, which shows right attitude is of great help to one’s life.Their different attitudes towards their work result in their different wages.From the story I can conclude that those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded.Different attitudes lead to different results.Take Xiao Hua as an example.They are both my classmates.Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students.So he has become a top student in our class, even in the grade.With his diligence and concentration, he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university.However, Xiao Li never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games, he turns a deaf ear to the teachers’ advice.As a result, he falls far behind others in his study.In my opinion, attitude is everything.No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail

many times.Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.读写任务4（感谢他人）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。[阅读材料] Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas.I stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend.While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas.I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car.I stopped and wondered what I should do.A car stopped behind me.It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station.They said they would take me to my friend's.We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me.Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them.Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning.In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery was dead.Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealershipwas right next door.I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.“Just how friendly is Friendly Ford?” I asked and explained my trouble.They quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.They would accept no payment, so when I got home, I wrote them a note to say thanks.I received a letter back from one of the salesmen.No one had ever taken the time to write him and say thank you, and it meant a lot, he said.“Thank you”-two powerful words.They're easy to say and mean so much.[写作内容](1)以约30个词概括作者对及时感谢别人的体会。

(2)然后以120个词就“向别人道谢的重要性”这个主题发表你的看法, 并包括如下要点：

a)叙述你为什么向别人道谢的一次真实或虚构的经历； b)你是如何认识到向别人道谢的重要性的； c)向别人道谢对你和对方都带来了什么影响。[写作要求](1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2)标题自定。

[评分标准] 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。

In this passage, the writer got more help and pleasure after he expressed thanks to others for their help, and he realized “thank you” are easy to say and mean so much.I have a similar experience.Once when I was about to go home after school, it was raining so heavily that I had to wait for the rain to stop.But after half an hour it was still raining.Seeing this, the guard at the gate offered to lend me his umbrella.I accepted at once.Thanks to his help, I got home on time without getting wet.The next morning, when I returned the umbrella to the guard, I said thank you to him and left him a note expressing my gratitude sincerely.To my surprise, he said no one had ever written him to say thank you, and it meant a lot to him.So in my opinion, saying thank you to others is not only easy but also meaningful to the person who says it and the receiver!读写任务5（执法的父亲）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Recently a program was shown on CCTV.An old man took his son to the police station to admit all the crime because of killing a neighbour’s son 15 years ago.This old man looked for his son for 15 years and finally found him in a strange place far away from his hometown.What happened on earth? The old man lived in Shanxi and he had a happy family, although they were poor.Two sons were good to him and his wife.But one day, an incident happened.The old man querrelled with the neighbour and was beaten by them.After his old son cam back, he told his son about it.After hearing that, his son rushed to the neighbour’s house and fought with them.Finally he took a knife and killed the neighbour’s son.Then he escaped quickly and secretly without telling the old man.Since that, the old man didn’t see his son any more.After his son disappeared, the old man’s wife killed herself soon.His younger son went to the south for work.Only this old man was left at home.But he determined to find back his lost son.Day by day, he looked around everywhere.Year by year, he looked for his son from one province to another province.One day he came to He Nan province and suddenly he found his son in a village by chance.At that time, his son had got married and has a lovely son.However, the old man’s determination didn’t shake.He persuaded his son to go back to admit his

crime in the police station and accept the punishment of the law again and again.Time and time again, the old man talked with his daughter-in-law.In the end, the old man’s words affected his son and his daughter-in-law.The next day, the old man took his son to the local police station in his hometown.His son was sentenced to prison for 10 years because of the neighbor’s son’s death.The old man cried loudly, meanwhile he felt a big and heavy stone fell to the ground from his brains.看完这篇报导后，全班同学无比激动，深深地为这位老父亲的行为所感动，15年如一日，为了不饶恕儿子的犯罪行为，他四处奔波寻找儿子，最后终于让儿子受到法律的惩罚。请你给这位老人写一封信，谈谈你的感受。信的开头已经写出，不计入总词数。[写作内容] 1.以约30个词总结老人的做法

2.以约120个词发表自己的看法，并包括如下要点：(1)你是否赞同老人的做法及对老人行为的理解(2)老人的行为给社会带来反响；(3)被老人行为感动并祝福老人。[写作要求] 作文中可使用自己的真实打算或虚构的打算，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子;[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Dear Sir, Reading this report, I feel moved by your action„„„„„„„„„„„„„„„..Kind regards!Yours，Peter Dear Poter, It is very moving to read this report about you.You set a good example to all of us.As a girl, you give your love to those who need help in the poor area or in the disaster place.I should learn from you.In this report, you not only do good deeds for the people in difficulty.When Lewis County flood happened, you donated food and clothes, even money to them.Even you drove very far by yourself to help them by yourself.Not only did you do that, but also you affected the people beside you and called on them to contribute love to the people in disaster.In your working unit, many people join you and giving donation.After this donation, you even decided to continue this kind of donation and you set up a website to donate.If some kind people want to donate, they can contact you.That’s a good action, which can solve many problems of the poor people and help them to rebuild their home again.In a word, I admire you for your action and boldness.You are well worth learning from.I hope everybody willl give a hand to those who are in trouble or difficulty.Let people feel love around the world.Meanwhile I hope your career will become wider and wider.Best regards!Yours, Peter.读写任务6 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Everyone has an experience they would rather forget Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson Here is a story of mine Last Sunday I went fishing After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）with bait（钓鱼的饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake But two hours later, I didn’t catch any fish I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked “About four hours,” he answered “Four hours?” I could believe my ears “Yes It’s very important to be patient,” the old man said “ Don’t consider fishing a tiring sport Just enjoy it” Suddenly, I understand what he said I must learn to be patient Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didn’t move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）At last, I caught it This made me very happy In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience ［写作内容］

1）以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2）然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点：

a)叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历； b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的； c)耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。［写作要求］

（1）可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；（2）标题自定。

［评分标准］概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。Possible version: Patience is the secret of success The story is about an unforgettable lesson of the writer from an old man while fishing on the bank of the lake, through which the writer realized patience was very important and that it was the secret of success(39 words)I have a similar experience Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes, no bus came I couldn’t wait any longer and decided to walk to school But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes Only then did I realize the importance of patience Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made Patience also plays an important part in our study and work With it we can achieve greater(110 words)Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, I’ll think of the experience of waiting for a bus(18 words)(167 words)读写任务7 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Years ago in Scotland Clark and his wife worked and saved, making plans for their family to travel to the United States Finally they had saved enough money and gotten passports The entire family were filled with excitement However, before their departure, the youngest son was bitten by a dog The doctor sewed up（缝合）the boy but hung a yellow sheet on the Clarks’ front door Because of the possibility of rabies(狂犬病), they were separated for fourteen days The family’s dream was dashed(破灭)They would not be able to make the trip to America as they planned The father, filled with disappointment and anger, wept bitter tears and cursed（咒骂）both his son and God for their misfortune Five days later, the tragic(悲剧的，悲惨的)news spread throughout Britain—Titanic, which was on her maiden(首次的)voyage on April 14,1912, had sunk, taking hundreds of lives with it The Clark family should have been on that ship, but because the son had been bitten by a dog, they were left behind When Mr Clark heard the news, he hugged his son and thanked him for saving the family He thanked God for turning what he had felt was a tragedy(悲剧，惨剧)into a blessing(赐福，幸事)［写作内容］

1)以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2)然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你或你的朋友因祸得福的一次经历，并包括以下要点：

a)叙述你或你的朋友因祸得福的一次真实或虚构的经历； b)谈谈这次经历对你或你的朋友的影响。［写作要求］

（3）可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；（4）标题自定。

［评分标准］概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

A tragedy turning into a blessing This story is about a tragedy turning into a blessing The Clark family, who were unlucky to miss boarding Titanic because one son was bitten by a dog, were saved fortunately(32words)Mary, my friend, once had a similar experience as the Clark family Last year her family were to make a trip to Beijing Just on the afternoon before their trip, she was knocked down by a car when crossing a road and her leg was seriously hurt She would have to lie in bed for 3 months and their trip had to be cancelled That evening, she couldn’t help crying the moment she saw me I made efforts to comfort her and promised to help her with English I spared her much time When she was recovered, her English improved greatly(101words)Now she often says she is thankful for the accident, which has a great influence on her study and her thought Facing a tragedy, she can keep calm, expecting it to turn into a blessing(29words)

第四篇：朱自清写作特点 及举例 春

朱自清的散文主要是叙事性和抒情性的小品文。其作品的题材可分为三个系列： 一是以写社会生活抨击黑暗现实为主要内容的一组散文，代表作品有《生命价格——七毛钱》《白种人——上帝的骄子》和《执政府大屠杀记》。二是以《背影》《儿女》《悼亡妇》为代表的一组散文，主要描写个人和家庭生活，表现父子、夫妻、朋友间的人伦之情，具有浓厚的人情味。三是以写自然景物为主的一组借景抒情的小品，《绿》《春》《桨声灯影里的秦淮河》《荷塘月色》等，是其代表佳作。后两类散文，是朱自清写得最出色的，其中《背影》《荷塘月色》更是脍炙人口的名篇。其散文素朴缜密、清隽沉郁，以语言洗炼，文笔清丽著称，极富有真情实感。

朱自清的散文《春》

一、于细微处见真情 从表面上看，这篇文章先写春天的一般景色，接着分别从几个方面去描写。第一，春天的草；第二，春天的树；第三，是春天的风；第四，是春天的雨；最后再加以综合赞美春天的美好。很明显，这属于分门别类的写法，是在罗列景观，平铺直叙。但作为读者的我们并没有被花树风雨的单一罗列所厌倦，而是一下子就流连忘返于作者描绘的如画风景中。其实作者主要表现的就是对于春天带来的一切变化，即使看来习以为常的，不起眼的，他都寄托着一种美好的情感，把它们表现得新鲜、可爱、美好，叫人欢欣，令人惊喜。他尤其善于从细微处捕捉敏锐新鲜的感觉，来表现春天生机勃勃的气象，显得格外新颖别致。小草吐芽，他写成“钻”出地面，而且还是“偷偷地”；望见梨花，他陶醉其中，闭了眼，作一浪漫的想象“树上仿佛已经满是桃儿、杏儿、梨儿”；春风吹来，他捕捉到悦耳的笛声；春雨里，“乡下去，小路上，石桥边，”和“地里”，他都视有所及，着意点染„„

二、于绚丽中见单纯 春草、春花、春风、春雨本是春天到来时的寻常景物，但作者却在细致的描写中流露出了单纯的童心、童真和童趣。“桃树、杏树、梨树，你不让我，我不让你，都开满了花赶趟儿。”，“花下成千成百的蜜蜂嗡嗡地闹着”完全是孩童少见多喜的情怀。“野花遍地是：杂样儿，有名字的，没名字的，散在草丛里，像眼睛，像星星，还眨呀眨的。”这些简单的口语完全是对儿童口气的模仿。“像牛毛，像花针，像细丝”表现的是儿童的视觉经验和审美趣味。“树叶儿却绿得发亮，小草也青得逼你的眼。”一个“逼”字，又是口语，通俗而极富表现力。作者以儿童的眼光观察春天，描绘春天，使得春天像“刚落地的娃娃”和“小姑娘”一样，充满活力和趣味。

三、于朴素中见诗韵 现代著名作家郁达夫曾说：“朱自清的散文满贮着一种诗意。”《春》这篇文章语言朴素，通俗易懂，但却造境藏情，饱含诗韵。文章中给我们描绘的五幅图画就是献给春天最优美的赞歌。此外，作者还善于用典，使得古典的诗情画意弥漫在字里行间。有的直接引用，如“吹面不寒杨柳风”和“一年之计在于春”；有的翻出新意，如“花下成千成百的蜜蜂嗡嗡地闹着”，化用古诗“红杏枝头春意闹”，一个“闹”字，不仅有声响，而且隐含了一种喧闹沸腾的景象，再如“牛背上牧童的短笛，这时候也成天在嘹亮地响。”可能出自“牧童遥指杏花村”，也可能出自“短笛无腔信口吹”，“人家屋顶上全笼着一层薄烟”让人想起了“烟笼寒水月笼沙”，“一点点黄晕的光，烘托出一片安静而和平的夜”，“他们的草屋，稀稀疏疏的在雨里静默着。”作者既是在叙述文字，又是在挥毫泼墨，为我们描绘的一幅幅充满古典情韵的水墨画。

四、于散淡中见曲致 大多数同学写春天，也会仿照上述的分门别类的方法，但很多人写出来的文章要么杂乱无章，层次错乱；要么淡而无味，老生常谈，且拼凑之痕严重。这篇文章一方面以一种孩子气的单纯贯穿全文，另一方面，又在努力寻求内在的变化。如文章中注意从视觉到触觉、味觉和听觉的转换；语言形式上，大量运用叠词叠句和对称、排比的短语短句以及精彩生动的排比句、拟人句，增强了语言的表现力。在描写角度上，先宏观勾勒，再细致描绘。在画面的组合上，春草图、春花图、春风图属于动态的热闹的景象，而春雨图是一幅静默的图画，最后在迎春图中又热闹了起来。这样动静结合的有机安排，使得文章内容更加生动，结构更加和谐。

第五篇：采访与写作选题举例

采访与写作选题举例

一、特殊群体

1． 农民工子女及其家庭的生活状况（几个个体）。

2． 冬天了，敬老院老人的生活怎么样？

3． 孤儿院孩子们的生活与学习采访（市福利院有线索）。

4． 环卫工人的故事（市环卫处或局有线索）。

5． 聋哑学校采访（市教育局有线索）。

6． 火葬场工人的故事（市殡葬管理处或局有线索）。

7． 垃圾处理者的事迹（市环保局有线索）。

8． 女交警采访（市交警总队有线索或拦街采访）。

9． “水果老人”采访——钱庄公寓市场。

10． 小学校门前的家长们。

二、先进人物

1．“小安徽”创业史。

2．三十年桃李芬芳——三十年教龄的老师专访（校人事处或市教育局有线索）。

3．文学院博士群体创业故事（文学院院办有线索）。

4．国家奖学金获得者专访（校学生处有线索）。

5．创先争优先进典型采访（组织部有线索）。

6．市十佳记者采访（市记者协会有线索，记者协会办公地址在湖州日报社）。

7．湖州市劳动模范采访（市总工会有线索）。

8．优秀农民工采访（劳动与社会保障局或市总工会有线索）。

9．新生代农民工创业典型采访（劳动与社会保障局或市总工会有线索或直接到企业寻找）。

10．优秀女护士或男护士采访（市卫生局有线索或直接到医院寻找）。

三、事件采访（时效性不一定强）

1． 采访医院门诊部，了解近来流感或多发病情况（采访

急诊、注射室、医生、护士）。

2． 采访医院骨科、外科，了解交通事故情况。

3． 消防故事（采访119）。

4． 湖州小区内夜半炮声扰民采访（采访居民和炮市场）。

5． 湖州“酒驾”现场采访（请交警配合）。

6． 湖州“两节”安全与平安湖州采访（采访市公安局）。

7． 维权事件采访（采访市消费者协会）。

8． 劳动争议采访（采访市劳动仲裁委员会）。

9． 离婚采访（采访市婚姻登记处，街道办事处等相关部

门）。

10． 典型案例采访（采访律师、市法院）。

四、经济新闻类（与经济相关的新闻采访）

1． 物价上涨对城市困难家庭的影响与政府帮助情况（采

访市民政局和困难家庭）。

2． 物价上涨，普通百姓如何应对？（采访市民）

3． 物价上涨，谁是推手？（采访市物价局、师院法商学

院相关教授）

4． 物价上涨，大学生餐桌有何变化？（采访大学生和食

堂）

5． 两节将至，家电市场采访。

6． 年夜饭（采访几个大酒店）。

7． “冷经济”是热还是冷？（采访各大商场中的电热商

品部）

8． 浙北商圈采访（浙北几家大商家采访）。

9． 湖州人的餐桌新变化（采访市民、菜市场）。

10． 农民工融入城市情况（采访农民工和市民，主要采访

双方的态度和主要观点）。

11． 商家打折“方程式”。（揭开商家打折的秘密）

12． 大学生消费新变化（采访大学生）。

五、社会新闻

1． 闹市“骗”阱（暗访闹市区的各种骗人伎俩）。

2． “乞人”追访（采访街头乞丐，主要用暗访的方式）。

3． 特殊志愿者行动采访。（市团委有线索）。

4． 冬天健身采访（采访特色健身）。（社区、居委会有线

索，或在街头社区寻找）

5． 公交车上的文明采访（体验式采访，跟随公交车采访）。

6． “知识经济”在校园（采访各类考试、考证、办班、培训等情况）。

7． 优秀妇女典型采访（市妇联、团委有线索）。

8． 助人为乐典型采访（市文明办有线索）。

9． 助残好心人采访（市残疾人联合会，简称市殘联有线

索）。

10． 爱心事迹采访（市慈善总会、市殘联、市团委有线索）。

11． 中小学课业负担采访（采访家长、学校、老师和教育

行政部门）。

六、企业、农村采访

1． 工厂中的优秀工人采访（找一个工厂采访）。

2． “打工妹”故事采访（到超市或企业寻找）。

3． 企业家专访（湖州老字号董事长或总经理采访）。

4． 厂长创业史（一个搞实业的厂长采访）。

5． “蚁族”故事（一些大学毕业生的生活）。

6． 大学生村官采访（长兴县委宣传部有线索）。

7． 农村特色经济采访（市农村工作办公室有线索）。

8． 新农村建设典型村采访（市农村工作办公室有线索）。

9． 农村优秀经纪人采访（市农业局或市委宣传部有线

索）。

10． 农村创业典型（同9）

11． 湖州城乡一体化进程采访（市农办、市城乡建设局、市委宣传部有线索）。

七、特别策划

1． 湖州师范学院十大院长治院理念与方略专访。

2． 湖州大学什么样——专访院长胡璋剑。

3． 培养什么样的学生——专访副院长方达伟。

4． “寻子启事”的背后——某女士130万寻找优秀男士

生子暗访。

5． “求助8元一顿饭”的背后（暗访街头青年跪地乞讨）。

6． 国家奖学金群英谱（采访国家奖学金获得者，提炼出

独特的观点，采访出感人的事迹）。

7． “车族”之烦恼（采访有车一族人群的烦恼事）。

8． 考驾照的故事。

9． 大学生过生日方式扫描。

10． 我与这个城市——新生代农民工城市认同调查。

11． 农民工子女的教育状况采访。

12． 农民工子弟学校老师的酸苦。

13． 湖州美丽乡村行（选择两三个村子采访，市农办有线

索）。

14． 大学生婚恋观扫描。

15． “素质训练”对大学生有何作用（采访大学生和素质

训练基地）。

16． 教代会热点全聚焦（学校将召开教代会，可进行全面

采访聚焦）。

17． “城管”全接触（采访湖州市城市执法大队，体验或

参与式采访）

18． 湖州如何迎接老年社会（市老龄委有线索、采访湖州

市几个敬老院，采访家有老年人的家庭及其子女，采访有关专家学者）。

新闻采访与写作课程实践实训参考选题。请同学们举一反三，以此为启发，创造自己的高水平选题！

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