各种英语写作 万能例子1 林肯

第一篇：各种英语写作 万能例子1 林肯

万能例子1 林肯

Probably the greatest example of persistence is Abraham Lincoln.If you want to learn about somebody who didn't quit『放弃；认输』, look no further.Born into poverty, Lincoln was faced with defeat throughout his life.He lost eight elections, twice failed in business and suffered a nervous breakdown『精神崩溃；衰弱』.He could have quit many times－but he didn't and because he didn't quit, he became one of the greatest presidents in the history of our country.Lincoln was a champion and he never gave upHere is a sketch『概述；简述』of Lincoln's road to the White House.1816 His family was forced out of their home.He had to work to support them.1818 His mother died.1831 Failed in business.1832 Ran for state legislature－lost.1832 Also lost his job－wanted to go to law school but couldn't get in.1833 Borrowed some money from a friend to begin a business and by the end of the year he was bankrupt『破产』.He spent the next 17 years of his life paying off this debt.1834 Ran for state legislature again－won.1834 Was engaged to be married, sweetheart『心上人；恋人』died and his heart was broken.1836 Had a total nervous breakdown and was in bed for six months.1838 Sought to become speaker of the statelegislature－defeated.1840 Sought to become elector『选举人；选举团成员』－defeated.1843 Ran for Congress－lost.1846 Ran for Congress again―this time he won―went to Washington and did a good job.1848 Ran for re-election to Congress―lost.1849 Sought the job of land officer in his home state―rejected.1854 Ran for Senate of the United Sates―lost.1856 Sought the Vice-Presidential nomination『提名』at his party's national convention got less than 100 votes.1858 Ran for U.S.Senate again―again he lost.1860 Elected president of the United States.The path was worn and slippery.My foot slipped from under me, knowing the other out of the way, but I recovered and said to myself, “It's a slip and not a fall.”

Abraham Lincoln

After losing a senate race

中文对照版：能坚持到底的最佳实例可能就是亚伯拉罕·林肯。如果你想知道有谁从未放弃，那就不必再寻寻觅觅了！

生下来就一贫如洗的林肯，终其一生都在面对挫败，八次选举八次都落败，两次经商失败，甚至还精神崩溃过一次。

好多次，他本可以放弃，但他并没有如此，也正因为他没有放弃，才成为美国历史上最伟大的总统之一。

林肯天下无敌，而且他从不放弃。以下是林肯进驻白宫的历程简述：

1816年 他的家人被赶出了居住的地方，他必须靠工作来养活他们。

1818年 他母亲去世。

1831年 经商失败。

1832年 竞选州议员――但落选了！

1832年 工作也丢了――想就读法学院，但进不去。

1833年 向朋友借一些钱经商，但年底就破产了，接下来他花了17年，才把债还清。

1834年 再次竞选州议员――赢了！

1834年 订婚后就快结婚了，但未婚妻却死了，因此他的心也碎了！

1836年 完全精神崩溃，卧病在床六个月。

1838年 争取成为州议员的发言人――没有成功。

1840年 争取成为选举人――失败了！

1843年 参加国会大选――落选了！

1846年 再次参加国会大选――这次当选了！前往华盛顿特区，表现可圈可点。

1848年 寻求国会议员连任――失败了！

1849年 想在自己的州内担任土地局长的工作――被拒绝了！1854年 竞选美国参议员――落选了！

1856年 在党的全国代表大会上争取副总统的提名――得票不到100张。

1858年 再度竞选美国参议员――又再度落败。

1860年 当选美国总统。

此路破败不堪又容易滑倒。我一只脚滑了一跤，另一只脚也因而站不稳，但我回过气来告诉自己，“这不过是滑一跤，并不是死掉都爬不起来了。”

（亚伯拉罕·林肯）

（在竞选参议员落败后如是说）

Abraham Lincoln(16th)

维护国家统一Lincoln thought secession illegal, and was willing to use force to defend Federal law and the Union.When Confederate batteries fired on Fort Sumter and forced its surrender, he called on the states for 75,000 volunteers.Four more slave states joined the Confederacy but four remained within the Union.The Civil War had begun.As President, he built the Republican Party into a strong national organization.Further, he rallied most of the northern Democrats to the Union cause.On January 1, 1863, he issued the Emancipation Proclamation that declared forever free those slaves within the Confederacy.伟人奋斗As a son of a Kentucky frontiersman, Lincoln had to struggle for a living and for learning.His parents were both born in Virginia, of undistinguished

families--second families.Lincoln made extraordinary efforts to attain knowledge while working on a farm, splitting rails for fences, and keeping store in Illinois.He was a captain in the Black Hawk War, spent eight years in the Illinois legislature, and rode the circuit of courts for many years.His law partner said of him, “His ambition was a little engine that knew no rest.”

Political skill.A consummate politician, Lincoln sought to maintain harmony among the disparate elements of his party by giving them representation in his cabinet.For example, he honored local factions by appointing Simon Cameron of Pennsylvania secretary of war.Although Lincoln was much closer to the radicals and gradually moved toward ever more radical measures, he did not needlessly offend the conservatives and often collaborated with them.His careful handling of the slavery issue is a case in point, as is his appointment of Democratic generals and his deference to the sensibilities of the border states.演讲——感染力+分歧与统一：Lincol’s political influence was enhanced by his great gifts as an orator.Able to stress essentials in simple terms, he effectively appealed to the nation in some classical short speeches and his second inaugural address.Moreover, he was a capable diplomat.Firmly rejecting Seward’s proposal in April 1861 that the country be united by means of a foreign war, he sought to maintain friendly relations with the nations of Europe, used the Emancipation Proclamation to win friends for the Union, and effectively countered Confederate efforts to gain

foreign recognition.师生关系教育地位Plato was a Classical Greek philosopher, who, together with his mentor, Socrates, and his student, Aristotle, helped to lay the foundations of Western philosophy.Plato was also a mathematician, writer of philosophical dialogues, and founder of the Academy in Athens, the first institution of higher learning in the western world.Plato was originally a student of Socrates, and was as much influenced by his thinking as by what he saw as his teacher's unjust death.Plato's sophistication as a writer can be witnessed by reading his Socratic dialogues.The dialogues have since Plato's time been used to teach a range of subjects, mostly including philosophy, logic, rhetoric, mathematics, and other subjects about which he wrote.

第二篇：英语写作西方名人例子

Great Souls

Ø Nelson Mandela

Mandela, the South African black political leader and former president, was awarded 1993 Nobel Peace Prize for his efforts to antiracism and antiapartheid.Nelson Mandela is one of the great moral and political leaders of our time: an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the presidency of his country.Since his triumphant release in 1990 from more than a quarter-century of imprisonment, Mandela has been at the centre of the most compelling and inspiring political drama in the world.As president of the African National Congress and head of South Africa's antiapartheid movement, he was instrumental in moving the nation toward multiracial

government and majority rule.He is revered everywhere as a vital force in the fight for human rights and racial equality.(138)

Ø Gandhi

Mahatma Gandhi was the pre-eminent political and spiritual leader of India during the Indian independence movement.He was the pioneer of the resistance to tyranny through mass civil disobedience, firmly founded upon total non-violence—which led India to independence and has inspired movements for civil rights and freedom across the world.He is officially honored in India as the Father of the Nation.After assuming leadership of the Indian National Congress in 1921, Gandhi led nationwide campaigns to ease poverty, expand women's rights, build religious and ethnic amity, and increase economic self-reliance.Above all, he aimed to achieve the

independence of India from foreign domination.Later he campaigned against the British to Quit India.Gandhi spent a number of years in jail in both South Africa and India.(128)

Additionally, Gandhi influenced important leaders and political movements.Leaders of the civil rights movement in the United States, including Martin Luther King and James Lawson, drew from the writings of Gandhi in the development of their own theories about non-violence.Anti-apartheid activist and former President of South Africa, Nelson Mandela, was inspired by Gandhi.Prior to becoming President of the United States, then-Senator Barack Obama noted that: Throughout my life, I have always looked to Mahatma Gandhi as an inspiration, because he embodies the kind of transformational change that can be made when ordinary people come together to do extraordinary things.That is why his portrait hangs in my Senate office: to remind me that real results will come not just from Washington – they will come from the people.(129)

Martin Luther King

Martin Luther King, Jr.was an American clergyman, activist and prominent leader in the

African-American civil right movement.His main legacy was to secure progress on civil rights in the United States and he is frequently referenced as a human rights icon today.King led the 1955 Montgomery Bus Boycott and helped found the Southern Christian Leadership Conference in 1957, serving as its first president.King's efforts led to the 1963 March on Washington, where King delivered his “I Have a Dream” speech.There, he raised public

consciousness of the civil rights movement and established himself as one of the greatest orators in U.S.history.By the time of his death in 1968, he had refocused his efforts on ending poverty and opposing the VietnamWar, both from a religious perspective.In 1964, King became the youngest person to receive the Nobel Peace Prize for his work to end

racial segregation and racial discrimination through civil disobedience and other non-violent means.He was posthumously awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom in 1977 and Congressional Gold Medal in 2004;Martin Luther King, Jr.Day was established as a U.S.national

holiday in 1986.(192)

Ø Mother Teresa

Mother Teresa was an Albanian Roman Catholic nun with Indian citizenship who founded the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta, India in 1950.For over 45 years she ministered to the poor, sick, orphaned, and dying, while guiding the Missionaries of Charity‗s expansion.Mother Teresa's Missionaries of Charity continued to expand, and at the time of her death it was operating 610 missions in 123 countries, including hospices and homes for people with HIV/AIDS,leprosy and tuberculosis, children's and family counseling programs, and schools.By the 1970s she was internationally famed as a humanitarian and advocated for the poor and helpless.She won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979 and India's highest civilian honor, the Bharat Ratna in 1980 for her humanitarian work.(122)

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Ø Susan B.Anthony

Although I am not a feminist, I admire Susan B.Anthony for her daring to hold on to her view even being mocked cruelly by her contemporaries.A tireless civil rights worker, Anthony devoted her life to the work which has guaranteed women‘s basic right, including suffrage and equal protections under law.She believed that men and women are created equal and persevered unremittingly in opening doors and expanding acceptable modes of behavior for women.In the patriarchy society of her time, people considered her unladylike and ridiculous.However, 19th Amendment to the Constitution gives women‘s rights to vote, which established Susan B.Anthony as a bold revolutionary feminist in history.(111)

Margaret Sanger

Margaret Sanger sparked the birth control movement with the publication of The Woman Rebel, in which she encourages women to view conception as a choice rather than an obligation.In 1923, her tireless efforts resulted in the establishment of America's first legal birth control clinic, which served as a contraceptive dispensary and research facility under the auspices of the American Birth Control League(one of the groups that eventually morphed into Planned Parenthood).The birth control movement has had far-reaching, worldwide implications, from women's rights to population control to the sexual revolution.(92)

l Bright Minds

Ø Newton

Newton‘s aim at Cambridge was a law degree.Instruction at Cambridge was dominated by the philosophy of Aristotle but some freedom of study was allowed in the third year of the course.Newton had a golden opportunity to study an abundance of great minds: the philosophy of Descartes, Gassendi, Hobbes, and in particular Boyle.The mechanics of the Copernican

astronomy of Galileo attracted him and he also studied Kepler‘s Optics.It is a fascinating account of how Newton‘s ideas were formed.He collected all these thoughts and developed his own system by which he successfully explained a wide range of previously unrelated phenomena: the eccentric orbits of comets, the procession of the Earth‘s axis, and motion of the Moon as perturbed by the gravity of the Sun, as well as the three laws of motion that made him an international leader in scientific research and the greatest pilot in human‘s civilization.(157)

Ø Darwin’s Origin of Species

The theory of evolution is one of the great intellectual revolutions of human history.Hundreds of years ago, people were confused with the complexity of different species of the world, and believed that species were created by the mysterious God.However, Darwin did not believe so.After several years' study, he eventually demonstrated that species, however complex seemingly, all evolved by natural selection from simple and preliminary conditions.When Darwin published his famous research results on the Origin of Species by Means of Natural Selection, the book encountered lots of controversies.Members of the religious community, as well as some

scientific peers, were outraged and protested.However, Darwin's idea of evolution eventually defeated the traditional belief and was accepted and acknowledged by some insightful scientists and finally by the society.It is now reverenced as one of the greatest intellectual revolutions of human history.(144)

Nicolaus Copernicus

Nicolaus Copernicus was a Polish mathematician and astronomer who proposed that the sun was stationary in the center of the universe and the earth revolved around it.Disturbed by the failure of Ptolemy's geocentric model of the universe to follow Aristotle's requirement for the uniform circular motion of all celestial bodies, Copernicus decided that he could achieve his goal only through a heliocentric model.He thereby created a concept of a universe in which the distances of the planets from the sun bore a direct relationship to the size of their orbits.At the time

Copernicus's heliocentric idea was very controversial;nevertheless, it was the start of a change in the way the world was viewed, and Copernicus came to be seen as the initiator of the Scientific Revolution.(129)

Ø Galileo Galilei

Galileo Galilei was an Italian physicist, mathematician, astronomer, and philosopher who played a major role in the Scientific Revolution.His achievements include improvements to the

telescope and consequent astronomical observations, and support for Copernicanism.Galileo's observations about four satellites of Jupiter with his new telescope convinced him of the truth of Copernicus's sun-centered or heliocentric theory.Galileo has been called the “father of modern observational astronomy,” the “father of modern physics,” and “the Father of Modern Science.” Stephen Hawking says, “Galileo, perhaps more than any other single person, was responsible for the birth of modern science.”(96)

Ø Christopher Columbus

In 1485, Columbus presented his plans to John II, King of Portugal.He requested he be made “Great Admiral of the Ocean”, appointed governor of any and all lands he discovered, and given

one-tenth of all revenue from those lands.The king submitted the proposal to his experts and rejected it.In 1488 Columbus appealed to the court of Portugal once again, and once again it also proved unsuccessful.Then, Columbus travelled from Portugal to both Genoa and Venice, but he received encouragement from neither.In1486, Columbus presented his plans to Queen Isabella.After the passing of much time, these savants of Spain, like their counterparts in Portugal, pronounced the idea impractical, and advised their Royal Highnesses to pass on the proposed venture.But after endless attempts at establishing a settlement of Hispanism, Catholic Monarchs finally gave him an annual allowance of 12,000 maravedis and furnished him with a letter ordering all cities and towns under their domain to provide him food and lodging with which Columbus successfully initiated widespread contact between Europeans and indigenous Americans and carved out the cross-continental trade market.(183)

Ø John Nash

Before 1950, Adam Smith was respected as ―the father of Game Theory‖, he wrote a famous book named The Wealth of Nations and demonstrated ―perfect competition‖ which was

commonly accepted by people.There is a sentence from the book ―Individual ambition serious the common good‖ which means when each individual pursue his own interests, the benefits of the group will be improved most effectively.However, John Nash, a normal mathematician in Princeton University, created a theory ―Nash Equilibrium‖ which laid the foundation of Game Theory in 1950.He doubted the statement from Adam Smith, and he succeeded.John Nash wrote a 28 pages dissertation to argue a new theory.Due to the fact that personal benefits

conflict each other, the interest of a group will be harmed.To ensure the interests of whole group, individuals should find equilibrium between the personal and group interests.Consequently, John Nash received the Nobel Prize in economics and fundamentally reformed the arena of economics.(160)

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Alfred Bernhard Nobel-1

Alfred Bernhard Nobel was a Swedish chemist, engineer, innovator, armaments manufacturer and the inventor of dynamite.To be able to detonate the dynamite rods he also invented a detonator which could be ignited by lighting a fuse.The market for dynamite and detonating caps grew very rapidly and Alfred Nobel also proved himself to be a very skillful entrepreneur and businessman.He later produced ballistite, one of the first smokeless powders.At the time of his death, his will provide his enormous fortune of the major portion of $9 million estate to

institute the Nobel Prize, a yearly prize for merit in physics, chemistry, medicine and physiology, literature, and world peace.The synthetic element nobelium was named after him.(119)

Ø Thomas Edison

In 19th century, people could only get light from candles, but it suffered from several

disadvantages, including exorbitantly high price and in adequate lightness.Thomas Edison, one of the most prominent inventors in the 20th century, overcame 1500 failure and suitable filament for electric light bulb which were affordable for all people to buy and use.He tried numerous

materials such as iron, copper, aluminum, silver, hair, even his colleague‘s brown beard, but he fails all times.Nevertheless he did not give up and dedicated himself in finding the best material.The belief held by him was that ―we will make the electricity so cheap that only the rich will burn

candles.‖ He had the first successful experiment in 1879, finding that carbon filament can last over 40 hours, but he and his team were not satisfied for that.Through hundreds of tough trying, they finally found carbonized bamboo filament which could last over 1200 hours.Furthermore, the light bulbs invented by Edison with the most suitable filament have not only lighted up the world, but influenced people‘s lives all over the world until now.(185)

第三篇：英语例子

821.I saw him playing football on the playground.我看见他在操场上踢足球。822.It is tomorrow that they will have a meeting.就在明天(而不是在别的某一天)他们要开会。

823.Let me tell you some details about clearance.让我告诉你一些通关的细节。824.The brain needs a continuous supply of blood.大脑需要连续不断地供血。825.The doctor's words made him feel comfortable.医生的话让他感觉很舒服。826.The truth is quite other than what you think.事实真相和你所想的完全不同。827.They stopped talking when their boss came in.当老板进来的时候；他们停止了交谈。

828.They were glad of the examination being over.他们为考试结束了而高兴。829.This i*y far the largest cake in the world.这是目前世界上最大的蛋糕了。830.Whichever you choose, you won't be satisfied.不论你选择哪一个，你都不会满意。

831.Will you connect this wire to the television ?你把这根电线和电视机连上好吗?832.His words are strongly impressed on my memory.他的话深深地铭记在我的心头。

833.Is this the fight bus for the Capital Library?这辆车到首都图书馆吗?

834.One third of this area is covered with forest.这一地区三分之一的地方都是森林。

835.They are arguing over who should pay the bill.他们为谁应该付款而争论不休。836.Wait a moment, I'll be with you in an instant.等一下，我立刻就来。837.You'll save time not waiting for the elevator.你可以节省等电梯的时间。838.A clear conscience laughs at false accusation.只要问心无愧，无端的指责可以一笑置之。

839.I have a headache, and she has a stomachache.我头疼，她胃疼。

840.He glared at Bill, ready to teach him a lesson.他怒视着比尔，准备教训他一顿。

841.I assure you that you will feel no pain at all.我保证你根本不会觉得疼的。

842.I can't afford to go to a restaurant every day.每天都去餐馆吃饭，我真是支付不起。

843.I left at 6:00 so that I could catch the train.我六点钟出门，以便赶上火车。844.I'm afraid I have some rather bad news for you.我恐怕有些很坏的消息要告诉你。

845.Learn to say the fight thing at the fight time.学会在适当的时候说适当的话。846.No wonder you can't sleep when you eat so much.你吃这么多难怪睡不着。847.Please ask her to call me back when she'*ack.她回来时请让她给我回个电话。

848.There are a lot of people in the swimming pool.游泳池里挤满了人。

849.They have to work hard to support their family.他们必须努力工作来支持他们的家。

850.This way, he can kill two birds with one stone.这样他就能两全其美。851.We are all taking medicine against the disease.我们都服药治疗疾病。

852.Would you please go to a dancing party with me?请你跟我一起去参加一个舞会好吗?

853.He usually drops in at my place on his way home.他常常在回家的路上顺便来看看我。

854.His vanity was hurt by their talking so frankly.他们坦率的谈话伤害了他的虚荣心。

855.How would you go to Beijing, by air or by train?你怎样去北京，是乘飞机还是坐火车?

856.I cannot express how glad I am to hear from him.我无法表达我接到他的信时有多高兴。

857.If Tom cannot keep his promise, he'll lose face.如果汤姆不能信守诺言，他就会丢面子。

858.I'll still love her even if she doesn't love me.即使她不爱我，我还仍然爱她。859.I received an invitation, but I did not accept it.我收到-份请帖，但没有接受。

860.If I were you, I would not be bothered by English.如果我是你，就不会为英语烦恼了。

861.If you don't work, you will fail to pass the exam.如果你不学习，你考试就会不及格。

862.I'm thinking of hanging the lamp from the ceiling.我打算把灯吊在天花板上。863.It is more important to be healthy than bony slim.健康永远比皮包骨头好。864.Long ago, people believed that the world was flat.很久以前人们相信地球是平的。

865.Old tunes are sweetest and old friends are surest.老调最甜美，老友最可靠。866.She makes it clear that she doesn't like swimming.她明确地表示她不喜欢游泳。

867.The constitution guards the liberty of the people.宪法保护人民的自由。868.The doctor examined the soldier's wound carefully.大夫仔细检查了战士的伤口。

869.The harder I study, the better my English will be.我越努力，我的英语就会越好。

870.The sun was shining and the sky was crystal clear.阳光闪烁，天空湛蓝。871.This cellar room is very damp in the rainy season.这间地下室在雨季非常潮湿。

872.Computers are becoming a part of our everyday life.电子计算机正渐渐成为我们日常生活的一部分。

873.Every man is fool sometimes, but none at all times.每个人都有愚蠢的时候，但是没有一个人永远愚蠢。

874.He dreamed of traveling to remote South Sea Islands.他曾梦想到遥远的南海诸岛去旅游。

875.How can I climb up that wall!I wish I were a bird!我怎么能够爬得上那堵墙?我要是一只鸟就好了!

876.However, Susan has not really made up her mind yet.然而，苏珊却还没有决

定。

877.I really think a little exercise would do you good.我真的觉得做点运动对你有好处。

878.I will never forget the days that I spent with you.我永远都不会忘记和你一起度过的日子。

879.we got a bad headache, and my nose is running.我头痛得厉害，还流鼻涕。880.Many young girls dream of being a fashion model.许多年轻女孩梦想成为时装模特儿。

881.Most of the earth's surface is covered by water.大部分的地球表面被水覆盖着。

882.Somebody's knocking at the door.I'll answer it.有人在敲门，我去开。883.The number 13 bus will take you to the hospital.13路车会带你去医院。

884.They celebrated hi*irthday with a dance party.也们举办舞会来祝贺他的生日。885.They misplaced thi*ook under other categories.他们把它错放到另一个类别去了。

886.They played a shameful part in the whole affair.他们在这一事件中扮演了可耻的角色。

887.As a matter of fact, he was pretending to be ill.实际上，他是在装病。

888.I will speak against anything I know to be wrong.我会对所有我认为不对的事情直言不讳。

889.In spite of the heavy rain, she went to the shop.尽管下着大雨，她还是去了商店。

890.No matter what happened, he would not say a word.不管发生什么事，他也不会说一句话。

891.No one knows the location of the hidden treasure.谁也不知道藏宝地点在哪里。

892.The old lady enjoys a quiet life with her family.老太太和她的家人安享宁静的生活。

893.The population of the city is close to a million.这个城市的人口接近一百万。894.We are prohibited from smoking on school grounds.我们被禁止在校园内抽烟。

895.Growth, however, brings new problems and concerns.不过，发展也带来了新的问题和顾虑。

896.He appears to be your friend but I doubt if he is.他看上去像是你的朋友，但我怀疑他是否是真心的。

897.I am so full that I would burst with another bite.我吃得如此之饱，我感觉我再吃一口肚子就要胀破了。

898.I have two cats.One is white, the other i*lack.我有两只猫，一只是白猫，另一只是黑猫。

899.I'm sorry, these 2 books are 3 days overdue.小姐，对不起，这两本书已经过期3天了。

900.Jalu has forgotten falling off hi*icycle.詹露早忘掉他从白行车上摔下来这件事了。

第四篇：消息写作例子

按语：消息写作中，一些同学写出了非常优秀的作品，抓住了所给材料的核心，同学们阅读他们的作品可以给你们带来收获，增强你们的消息写作能力。请认真学习他们的写作方法，同时注意避免一些不必要的新闻写作错误。注意语言的简炼和写作的逻辑性。

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本报讯

2011年5月6日江苏卫视“非诚勿扰”节目主持人孟非在央视博客上发表文章《我最厌恶的礼数——跪拜礼》，文章发表后，引起读者广泛议论。

2011年5月4日青年节，广东实验中学首创“青年礼”。“青年礼”采取“跪父母、接家书”的形式进行。对此，孟非发表自己的态度——特别反感跪拜礼。孟非认为，跪拜与奴性就像孪生兄弟。尊敬父母有很多种方式，不一定要下跪，而且，他还论述了传统文化在跪拜问题上的矛盾。孟非还根据青年报在“冰点时评”发表评论《“跪父母”的青年礼有悖于五四精神》发表自己的见解；中国的跪文化有违五四精神，下跪是臣服的代名词，而五四是让国民成为国的主人，成为家的主人，而这首先要实现人人平等。下跪正是有违人人平等这个观念。由此孟非又对这些年学校组织的“感恩教育”活动发表看法，对于弘扬中华传统美德，不应搞那些纯粹形而上学的仪式表演，中华民族的伟大复兴使命也非奴才能完成。

文章最后，孟非提出自己的担忧：如此的教育者能否让受教育者树立民主、平等的理念，培养他们成为具有独立人格的现代公民。“成不成人才或许没那么重要，重要的是千万别成奴才。”孟非说。

【评语】这则新闻，为一类作文优秀。语言简练，逻辑性强，抓住了所给材料的核心内容和精神实质。导语，开门见山给出新闻来源：2011年5月6日央视博客文章《我最厌恶的礼数——跪拜礼》；主体，逻辑层次清晰，严格按照文章内容的先后顺序，以新闻眼的方式给出自己的概括和评论：先是‚青年礼‛信息，继而是孟非对此事的态度，再是孟非对中青报文章的引用和评论，最后是孟非对当下‚感恩教育‛形式化的批驳；结尾，抓住孟非的一句话‚我真的很担心‛，概括出‚孟非提出自己的担忧‛，并引用孟非的话‚成不成人才或许没那么重要，重要的是千万别成奴才。‛结束新闻，抓住了孟非这篇社会评论的思想精髓。

主持人孟非博客抨击跪拜礼

本报讯 江苏卫视“非诚勿扰”节目主持人孟非于5月6日上午在央视博客上发表文章，就五四青年节一日广东实验中学首创“跪父母，接家书”的“青年礼”一事，表示强烈反感。

据5月5日的《新快报》报道，广东实验中学决定“青年礼”以“跪父母，接家书”的形式进行，是经老师和家长委员会的讨论得出的结果，而其理由是“跪是中国的最高礼节”。孟非在博客中表示：“在咱们的传统礼数中我是特别反对跪拜的，我觉得跪拜和奴性就像孪生兄弟一般，不管是跪天跪地，还是跪皇帝跪父母都是一样。我们应该尊敬父母，甚至应该对天地怀有敬畏，但为什么一定要下跪呢?”孟非引用了中青报上的一篇评论《“跪父母”的青年礼有悖五四精神》。强调无论出于什么目的，诱导学生下跪都违背了现代教育的宗旨，有违五四精神。“五四”先贤高举反封建大旗，目的之一就是要让匍匐于权利脚下的中国人站立起来。而要让国民成为国的主人，前提是成为家的主人，首先实现家庭成员之间的平等。

孟非在央视博客发表的这篇文章中还提到了近年来有些学校热衷于搞“给父母洗脚”之类的感恩教育，同样表示不解：“感恩父母的方式很多，为什么非要洗脚？”文章最后很辛辣而又深意：“有些人热衷于弘扬传统文化，这是好事”，但“靠这些不伦不类的小玩意儿无法弘扬我们优秀的传统文化”，“在五四这一天行跪拜礼我总觉得，成不成才或许没有那么重要，重要的是千万别成奴才。”

【评语】这则新闻，为一类作文优秀。语言简练，逻辑性强，抓住了所给材料的核心内容和精神实质。与第一则新闻在写法上有异曲同工之效。不同的是，本则新闻采用了多处引语式进行新闻报道，让读者更多的看到博文的原貌。

孟非批中学“青年礼”行跪拜是培养奴性

本台消息，本台记者汪善霆报道：

“成不成才或许没那么重要，重要的是千万别成奴才。”5月6日，一向备受关注的江苏卫视“非诚勿扰”节目主持人孟非撰文这样批评中学“青年礼”上行跪拜礼。

5月4日，广东实验中学首创“青年礼”.用“跪拜礼，接家书”的形式感谢父母。校方给出的理由是“跪是中国的最高礼节”。孟非对此在其央视博客上进行批评。博客言辞激烈，大肆批驳行跪拜礼是奴性的表现。他说“跪拜和奴性就像兄弟一般”。博文中他指出，把跪当成崇高礼仪，跪成习惯，也就养成屈服权贵的心理。他还援引中青报5月6日“冰点时评”文章《“跪父母”的青年礼有悖五四精神》，说明感恩父母的方式不在跪拜，不应培养学生“臣服”的性格。

孟非还就近年来“给父母洗脚”等活动提出了质疑。他说这样形式化的作业，冠以“感恩教育”的名号，没有任何的实质意义。弘扬传统文化是好事，但是不要让传统文化的糟粕沉渣泛起，也不要搞纯粹形而上学的仪式表演。最后他表示了对教育者培养学生民主、平等、独立能力的担忧。

据悉，孟非在“非诚勿扰”节目以其搞笑的风格而受到广泛关注，曾多次在自己的博客中撰文谈论某些现象，受到网民的火热追捧。

【评语】这则新闻，为一类作文优秀。语言精练，层次分明，抓住了博文的主要精神实质。作者将孟非博文的主旨作为新闻的标题；开头则引用孟非的主旨话语（引语式），揭示了新闻的主题，与新闻标题形成了呼应；导语介绍了本新闻的写作由头；主体分为两个部分，第一部分报道介绍孟非撰文批驳‚青年礼‚及其奴性的表现，第二部分则介绍孟非在博文中联系现实批驳‚感恩教育‛形式化的问题，抓住了孟非对教育者培养学生民主、平等、独立能力的担忧；新闻以背景资料的方式结尾，将新闻事件主要人物孟非撰文谈论某些现象受到网民火热追捧的新闻事实，再一次表明了作者对新闻的把握能力。

跪拜易与奴性起共鸣

孟非历反行“跪拜礼”

本报讯： 针对5月5日《新快报》所报道的，五四青年节这天广东实验中学首创“青年礼”这一事件，孟非表示不满，并严厉反对行跪拜礼。

5月5日《新快报》报道，五四青年节这天广东实验中学首创“青年礼”。孟非在央视博客上发表一篇文章，针对这一事件写出自己的观点。孟非表示在传统礼数中特别反感跪拜。孟非认为“跪拜和奴性就像过孪生兄弟一般，不管是跪天跪地，还是跪皇上跪父母都一样。我们应该尊敬父母，甚至应该对天地怀有敬畏，但为什么一定要下跪呢？”另外孟非引用了中青报在“冰点时评”发表评论《“跪父母”的青年礼有悖五四精神》的一段话，表明诱导学生下跪违背现代教育的宗旨，有违五四精神。孟非由行“跪拜礼”这事又联想了学校这些年搞的“给父母洗脚”之类的活动，来表明要选择正确的方式来弘扬传统文化。靠那些不伦不类的小儿科的玩意无法弘扬我们优秀的传统文化。中华民族的伟大复兴的使命也非奴才才能够完成的。

孟非表示很担心某些教育者如何让受教育者树立民主，平等的理念。培养他们成为具有独立人格的现代公民。并表示，成不成人才没那么重要，重要的是千万别成奴才。

【评语】这则新闻，为二类作文。与第一则新闻内容、结构上极为相似，也写出了博客文章的主要内容和精神实质。但语言不及上文精辟，未表达孟非民主、平等的思想。在标点符号的使用上也略有瑕疵。

跪拜礼成为“青年礼”引起社会争议

本报讯 五四青年节这天，广东实验中学首创“青年礼”，形式是“跪父母，接家书”。此举引发社会广泛争议。

据5月5日《新快报》报道，广东实验中学首创“青年礼”，即在五四青年节这天“跪父母，接家书”此事一经报道，引起社会广泛关注。对于此举，社会评论众说纷纭。据了解，江苏卫视“非诚勿扰”主持人孟非对此曾在央视博客上发表一篇文章《我最厌恶的礼数——跪拜礼》，在文章中指出，跪拜礼是传统文化中的糟粕，不能让这类糟粕沉滓泛起，同时，中华民族的伟大复兴也不能靠这些形而上学的仪式表演。5月6日的中青报在“冰点时评”也发表评论《“跪父母”的青年礼有悖五四精神》，文章说，诱导学生下跪是违背现代教育的宗旨，有违五四精神。但对于此举，也有人赞同，认为这是恢复传统文华的“礼教”，“跪是中的最高礼节”，跪拜礼表达了我们对父母的尊敬，同时也有利于继承和弘扬传统文化。

跪拜礼成为“青年礼”一事，引起了社会的广泛争议，也引起我们思考。【评语】这则新闻，为二类作文。从一个完全第三方的视角，将孟非博文中的所有信息进行整理，一一例举。以报道‚跪拜礼成为‘青年礼’引起社会争议‛这样一个新闻事实为主要内容，抛弃了主要新闻人物孟非以及他的主要思想和主张，仅仅将孟非当成一个背景资料，一笔带过，这是这则新闻写作最大的失误。虽不比肯定语气的新闻来得差，但也没能将博文的精神实质反映出来。

跪父母等于尊敬父母吗？

本报讯 2011 年5月6日上午，江苏卫视著名主持人孟非在央视博客上发表了一篇名为《我最厌恶的礼数—跪拜礼》的文章，把矛头直指广东实验中学在五四青年节首创的“青年礼”。

广东实验中学首创的“青年礼”采取“跪父母，接家书”的形式进行，这引起了社会大众的广泛争议，而著名主持人孟非则在博文中旗帜鲜明的亮出了自己的观点：在咱们的传统礼数中他是特别反感跪拜的。在孟非看来“跪拜和奴性就像孪生兄弟一般”。而选择在五四青年节这天进行“青年礼”：对父母进行跪拜，不但有作秀之嫌，而且有违五四先贤的意志，甚至有悖于五四反封建的精神。

孟非在博文中进一步指出:“这些年有些学校热衷于搞什么‘给父母洗脚’之类的活动，除了让一些父母感动的涕泪长流，大多数孩子恐怕是没有任何知觉的。”感恩父母的方式有很多种，为什么要选择下跪？也许这些人热衷于弘扬传统文化，但孟非一针见血的指出：“靠这些不伦不类的小儿科的玩意儿无法弘扬我们优秀的传统文化，中华民族伟大复兴的使命也并非奴性才能够完成的。”

在文章的最后，孟非又发掘到了五四“青年礼”背后的深层问题，即某些教育者自身的觉悟不够，他们的教育理念和方法是有悖于培养独立人格的现代公民的。在孟非看来：在‘五四’这一天又见跪拜礼，很有一点讽刺意味。”

在一定程度上说，跪父母并不等于尊敬父母。近年来社会上掀起的诸如给父母洗脚的热潮，也许是当今社会浮躁情绪的反映。教育者应从实际出发，制定良好的教育方式培养学生孝敬父母的意识和弘扬中华优秀传统文化的最好方法。正如孟非所说：“成不成才或许没那么重要，重要的是千万别成奴才。”

【评语】这则新闻，为二类作文。标题以问句形式出现，批驳气势不足；导语直接写出了孟非博文针对的问题；主体部分是针对孟非博文的主要内容进行的归纳总结；结尾段，写出了作者的主张，即‚跪父母不等于尊敬父母‛，回答了标题的问题，起到了题文照应的作用，并以引语式结尾，强调了孟非博文的核心思想。

弘扬传统文学

感恩父母 广东实验中学首创“青年礼”

本台消息：为迎接月5月5日青年节广东实验中学首创“青年礼”。众多学子和家长参加，“青年礼”如火如荼地举行。

今年5月5日，广东实验中学首创“青年礼”为了迎接五四青年节的到来。众多学子和家长积极响应参加，场面之大，历来少有。

据了解，本次“青年礼”经老师和家长委员会的讨论，采取“跪父母，接家书”的形式进行，理由是他们认为“跪”是中国的最高礼节。只有行跪拜礼才能让孩子弘扬传统文化，感恩父母，充实人生，实现自我。

记者通过走访了解，对于行跪拜礼，有人赞同，他们认为这是恢复传统文化的“礼教”能够让孩子知书达礼，建立健全人格道德情操，也有人反对，他们认为行跪拜礼让他们反感。一位年轻人说：“我们应该尊敬父母，甚至应该对天地怀有敬畏，但为什么一定要下跪呢？我们的传统文化在跪拜的问题多少有些矛盾。看来对于广大实验中学实行的青年礼中的跪拜礼人们还是有分歧的。

据悉，每年都有些学校热衷于搞什么“给父母洗脚”之类的活动，并名由感恩教育，还把“给父母洗脚”当做寒假作业或暑假作业布置下去。这些感恩教育与“跪拜礼”本质上并没有多大的区别。目的是让孩子养成回归传统文化的习惯，感恩父母罢了。

无论是行跪拜礼，还是行洗脚礼，都是教育者为了让受教育者树立民主平等的理念，培养他们成为独立人格的现代公民。或许成不成才并没有那么重要，别让孩子成为奴才。

【评语】这则新闻，属于三类作文。主要原因一：新闻以‚弘扬传统文化 感恩父母——广东实验中学首创青年礼‛为标题，字里行间没有孟非博客文章的批驳意味，反倒具有肯定的意味，这与孟非博文的内在含义差距甚远。此文仅仅写出了孟非写博客评论的动机，即评论的由头(新闻来源)。原因二：在新闻时间上出现严重错误，五四青年节，显而易见，应该是5月4日，而非‚5月5日‛，文章误将5月5日新快报的报道日期理解为五四青年节的日子，这种失误在新闻报道中是很忌讳的。原因三：新闻要求依照孟非博文来写，但这则新闻出现了‚记者通过走访了解……‛字眼，显然是在杜撰，又是新闻写作的一大忌讳。（当然，还有其他瑕疵，请大家查找。）

第五篇：英语演讲稿-林肯

Emily/Canon 2012.12.26

An inspiring person to me(about five minutes)

Ladies and gentlemen:

Good morning!Abraham Lincoln, the sixteenth president of America, possessed a legendary life and exerted a tremendous inspiration on me.It is his story that motivated me and encouraged me when adversities come to me.From him, I come to realize that if one can do something by persistence, then he or she will be extraordinary and succeed sooner or later.Now please allow me to briefly tell you about him.At the age of 22, he suffered a lot from his business, which made him awfully disappointed.Then he turned his mind into being a politician.Unfortunately, without enough economic funding and reputation, he failed again.Defeated twice in one year, he was undoubtedly painful.Subsequently, he decided to run for the election of state legislator for the second time, this time, he succeeded.From then on, he grew a hope that maybe he would rapidly go up in the world.Sadly, another misfortune fell on him after several years, his wife, as well as his spiritual support, passed away because of illness.This might be an extreme shock to him and he was next to collapsed.In 1843, he lost again in his election of American representatives.However, instead of being despair, Abraham Lincoln overcame his depression and turned it into a motivation which eventually led him to become arguably one of the greatest presidents in America.Moreover, he got over constant ridicule during the Civil War even when he was a president.But he never became dejected because of it.Actually, Abraham Lincoln could have given up every time he suffered.But, he faced up to all the difficulties with a brave heart anda strong will.He was one of those who not only looked adversity in an optimistic way but also learned valuable lessons on overcoming difficult circumstances and were able to move ahead.It inspires me a lot.As we all know, 800-meter-race is the necessary item to be tested in every semester, lacking adequate exercise, I always can’t finish the whole race.Since I learned more about Lincoln, every time I want to give up half way, his deeds will linger in my mind, this always supports me to achieve my goals.Never give up and everything is promising.No quitting, so winning.It is the perseverance that keeps bright the key to the door of achievement so we have no reason but to persist in everything we are doing.As Abraham Lincoln himself said, “I am a slow walker, but I never walk backwards.” Facing up difficulties, he didn’t hang back or run away, but hold on and fight for it instead.He had never thought how he should do if he failed again, but just kept on.There is no doubt that Abraham Lincoln is so great that he could inspire us all our life.No matter what time, no matter what may happen, I will never allow myself to give up.This spirit, will become my lifelong navigation.Thank you for your attention.