修改版作文英语七年级

第一篇：修改版作文英语七年级

一、描写朋友、自己或家人的喜好

1、Dear friend,My name is Sally.I am from China.I want a pen pal in Australia.I am 14 years old.I have no brothers or sisters in my family.MY favorite subject in school is science, because I think it’s very interesting.I like playing the piano and playing basketball on weekends.How about you? Can you write

and tell me something about yourself?

Yours,Sally2、My name is Wang Lin.Now I live in Yunnan , China.I want to find a pen pal in England.I’m now 14 years old.I speak Chinese.And I can speak a little English.I like sports ,swimming is my favorite.I also like playing the computer games.My favorite subject in school is math.I like to go to

movies with my friends.My favorite movie is the shaolin temple.Now I live with my parents.Can you write to me soon ?

Wang Lin3、I have a good friend, his name is Da bao.He is from Chuxiong.Now he lives in Chuxiong city with his parents.He is 14 years old and his birthday is in October.He speaks Chinese and he can speak a little English.He has lots of friends in Kunming.He often plays soccer after school with them.It’s his favorite sport.He likes Chinese action movies very much.He thinks they are interesting.He favorite actor

is Jet Li.4、XiaolLi is an Chinese girl.She is 13 years old.She is very tall and a little thin.She has long black straight hair.She is a good-looking girl.She likes wearing a red T-shirt and blue pant.She likes singing and dancing.Her favorite singer is Zhou Hua jian.She thinks he is great.Look!XiaolLi is coming.She is not wearing a red T-shirt today.She is wearing a red dress.5、My favorite animal is a cat.I have a cat in my family.Her name is Mimi, I think she is from China.She is two years old now.She likes to eat fish every day.She is kind of lazy, but she is very cute.I like to

palsy with it after school.6、Lin Tao usually goes to the zoo with his parents.He likes to see animals.In his room there are many toys.Most of them are nice animals.All kinds of animals in his room are his good friend.Every day he plays with them.Sometimes he asks his friends to his home to play.On vacation or weekends he like

to see the monkeys and elephants in the zoo, and the dolphin show is his favorite.7、XiaoBao likes Yunnan food because it’s delicious.He can’t stand Sichuan food because it’s very hot(辣).He likes Guangdong food.He doesn’t mind Beijing food and he sometimes eat it.He

doesn’t like Human food because it doesn’t agree with him(它不合他的口味)。

8、I like playing basketball.It’s very interesting.I often play it with my friends.It’s a team work..Everyone has to work together with others.(每个人都需要和别人合作).I can also make many new friends in the game.My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming.He is very tall and plays basketball very

well.I want to play in NBA one day like him.9、This is a popular person.Most(大多数)people like him.He’s not young ,about 50 years old.But he looks kind of funny.He has a round face(脸)with round eyes , a big mouth and short black hair.He likes telling jokes and makes people laugh(笑).Do youknow who he is ? He is Mr.Bean10、Tom, Nancy , Lily and Jack are my good friends.They all love to watch different TV shows.Tom likes sports, so he likes sports shows.Nancy watches comedies and she loves sitcoms.But Lily can’t stand them.She just likes game shows.Jack doesn’t like sitcoms either.He enjoys talk shows.So

you know they are all TV shows fans.(他们都是电视迷)

二、描写方位的短文

My home is on Center Street.On Center Street, there is a restaurant,gym and a library.The gym is between the library and the restaurant.Across from the gym is a pay phone.A bank is next to the pay

phone.The supermarket is on Fifth Avenue.A hotel is in front of the supermarket.三、用进行时态描写的各种短文

1、It is Sunday.The Turners are free and they are staying at home.They are doing different kinds of things.Mr Turner is mending his car.Mrs Turener is sitting at the table.She is drinking.Bob is talking on the phone.Nancy is sitting near the pool.She is watching the dog swimming.They are having a good

time.2、It is a fine Sunday.There are many people in the park.They are playing happily(高兴地).Some are playing beach volleyball on the beach.A man is lying on the chair.A manis swimming.He can swim very well.A man is talking with him.He is learning from him(向他学习游泳).Everyone is having

a good time.3、Look at the picture.There are some boys in the picture.They are playing basketball.Near them under the tree, two girls are reading a book.Who are working near the house ? Two boys and a girl.Can you see the birds in the tree? I think they are singing.They are having a good time.4、It is New Year’s Day.The weather is sunny but cold.Lucy’s family are all at home.Lucy is talking to Scott on the phone.Her father is playing basketball outside.Her mother is busycooking.Her sister, ,Mary , is watching TV, and her brother , Jeff, is playing computer games.They are all having a

good time.5、It’s Sunday morning.My mother and I are gong to the park.There are a lot of people in the park.Some children are running.A dog is running after them.Four women are sitting there They are talking.Two girls are playing with a big bal near them..Three old men are standing under a big tree.They are watching the children.There is a river there.Many young people are dancing near it.There is a boat on the river.And an old man is sitting in the goat.He is dishing.Everyone in the park is having a good

time.We are having a good time, too.四、天气预报的短文

Good morning!Here’s the weather report for some big cities in the world.Beijing is cloudy.It’s very cold, so wear warm clothes when you go out.In Hong Kong there’s beautiful sunshine.(阳光灿烂).People will feel cool in the daytime.It is sunny in New York , but there’s a strong wind(大风)in the afternoon.It will be rainy in Sydney but very hot.The day after tomorrow(后天)will be sunny.That’s the

weather report for today.Thank you for listening.(谢谢收听)

五、描写人物的短文

There are three people in Jim’s family.Mr.Green is his father.He is fat and he has short

straighthair.Hewearsglasses.He is watching TV.His mother is Mrs.Green.She is a woman of medium height.She has curly hair.She is cleaning the room.Jim is very thin.He is playing with the ball.They are all happy.六、用过去时态描写假日或周末的短文、日记

1、Jenny had a busy weekend.Last Saturday morning, she did her homework and practiced speaking English at home.She watched TV and played tennis on Saturday afternoon.That night, she went to the movies.On Sunday morning , she cleaned her room and went to the beach..On Sunday

afternoon, she visited her friends and went shopping.She had a party last night.What a busy but happy weekend she had!

2、Thursday, August 1st（注意日记的时间格式，星期—月份—日期）

Today I went to the Palace Museum.It was cool.Then I went to the Great Wall.It was fantastic.There were many people there.In the afternon, I visited Tian’an Men Square.There were many beautiful

flowers.It was really great.I went to a Beijing Hutung.It was really fun.I enjoyed myself very much.3、Last summer I went to the beach.My vacation was pretty good.I went there bybus and my bus trip was relaxing.The beach was very beautiful.It was sunny, cool and humid.the people were

friendly and the food was delicious.I enjoyed my vacation very much and I hope to go there again.4、We went to a summer camp today.The weather was great.The mountains were really beautiful.We had great fun singing and dancing there.We had a lot of food and drinks with us.So we had a big lunch.I ate two hamburgers and some orange juice.my friends all enjoyed their lunch very much.It was

so nice eating in the open air(在户外)。I was really tired but I had a good time.5、Last weekend Tony was busy but happy.He did a lot of housework..He cleaned the room and washed the clothes.Because his mother had to work last Saturday.He did most of the housework

for her.His sister had to study for the geography test.They were really busy.七、描写各类规则的短文

1、Hello, Mary。Welcome to our class.Here are our class rules.You must read it carefully.As a middle school student we can’t arrive late for class on weekdays.We must wear clean clothes every day.We must stand up when a teacher goes into the classroom.When you have nay questionsin class, please put up your hands.We have to eat and drink in the dining room We have to clean our classroom

every day.Don’t leave school if you are not allowed（允许）.I wish you can obey（遵守）theserules.Thanks!

2、I am Sally.EverydayI am very busy.I have too many rules in my house.I have to get up at six o’clock every morning.I must have my breakfast at 7:00 o’clock.I can’t meet my friends after school because I have to walk my dog.（.溜狗）I can’t watch TV on school nights.And I have to be in bed by 10:00 o’clock.On weekends, I haveto make my bed and clean my room.Then I have to wash the dishes.Later I have to go to the Children’s Palace to learn the guitar.I love music.But I can’t listen to

music at home.I never have any fun.My life is so boring.What can I do ?

3、Tom has many rules.He has to get up at 6:30 every morning.He can’t watch TV or play computer games on school night.He has to finish his homework every day.He must be in bed by ten

o’clock.He can’t eat outside.He has to be back home by 6:00 in the afternoon.

第二篇：英语作文修改

A Trip to the Zoo孩子的原稿：

Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo.I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos.That’s a interesting trip.I’ll never forget it.That’smy trip.修改后：

It was a sunny SundayAfter a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus.This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone.Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!

As soon as I got there,I was attracted at once.Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily.Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands.How naughty they were!What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers.They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy.Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world.we are family.I t came to my mind immiediatly.Anyway, I had an interesting trip today.It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.My favourite season

孩子的原稿：

There are four seasons in a year.And my favourite season is summer.Although it’s very hot.I still love it.Because I can swim in the sea.And lie in sun.That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer.That’svery intersting.So I love summer.That’s my favourite season.修改后

My favourite season

As is all know , there are four seasons.Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach… How comfortable!More importantlyI can eat delicious Icecream.Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside.And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father.In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness.

第三篇：英语作文-修改

The Changes In My Life

Since I entered junior middle school, I became hastier, because I am afraid to be surpassed by others.I am under stress every day.I did not only feel very tired,but also did not achieve what I have ever expected.I felt very confused and thought nobody could help me.Until one day, my head teacher asked me “What do you see out of the window?”.“Many students,” I answered with a little curiocity.“Yes, you are right.But do not you see flowers?”she asked with a smile.“You should slow your pace and enjoy every moment”, she turned away after saying these words, just giving me an expressive smile.I stood there seeming to understand something.Yeah, she is right.I often crossed the school in a hurry and hardly ever noticed the flowers which was blooming in the corner.Maybe I really need to slow my pace, and slow my heart.Now, I am in Grade Nine, the most important year during my junior middle school, but I do not feel very nevious and anxious.This is just because I can enjoy my life, enjoy every step I have taken.This is the biggest change in my life!

Na.2013.10.02

一些基础的表达要注意，尤其是词性和拼写。

另外，文章时态的处理请注意，记叙过去事件和描述现在情况要在时态上有所体现。

第四篇：七年级英语作文

My Good Friend

My good friend is Tom.He is a boy.He is my classmate.He is thirteen years old.Tom is tall and thin.He has two big eyes and long hair.He likes wearing jeans and sports shoes.We have same interests.We like playing basketball after school.He likes sports very much.He is a good student.He is good at math.He always helps me learn math.He can speak a little English.His favorite animals are pandas.Sometimes he goes to school on foot.He is my best friend forever.My day

Hello, everyone!I get up early at six thirty.Then I have breakfast and go to school.In the morning we have four lessons, they’re two English lessons, one Chinese lesson and one history lesson.I like English best.At noon we have lunch at school, we have rice and vegetables, but we don’t like them very much.In the afternoon we have two math lessons and one music lesson.Math is difficult, but I study hard.And we sing a beautiful song.We finish school at a five to five.I play basketball with my friends after school.It’s fun!Then I go home and do my homework, next I have dinner with my parents and watch TV.I go to bed at nine o’clock.My pet-----I have a pet cat.Her name is Ding ding.She is cute and clever.She has short hair.She is my good friend.I often feed water and meals after school.We often play with together.I often take her a walk to go out.Sometimes we sit on the sofa to watch TV.But now I am very busy.I don’t have too much time to play with her.I have to do too much homework every day.All in all.I love her all the time.My family I have a happy family.There are five people in my family.Hear is a photo of my family.My grandmother is old and kind.She often tells old jokes.My father is hard-working man.He works from morning to night.He is tall and thin.He is strict with me.But he loves me a lot.My mother is kind.She is of medium height.He gets up early to make breakfast for us.He looks after us everyday life.My brother and I are students.But we aren’t same grade.He is grade nine.He likes playing basketball very much ,I like playing basketball, too.We often play basketball on weekends.My family is full of love.I love my family very much.My weekend I have happy and interesting weekend.On Saturday morning, I ate breakfast.Then I did my homework.It was a little hard for me.But I studied hard.In the afternoon, I played basketball with my friends in the park.In the evening, I watched talk show with family.It’s interesting.On the Sunday morning, I helped my mother cook.My mother taught me to make soup.Then we had breakfast and fed my cat.Next, I watched TV.In the afternoon, I went to school.In the evening I took classes.I went to bed at a quarter to ten.My favorite subject is math

My favorite subject is math.Some people think it’s difficult.I think it’s intereting.I like my math teacher.He is funny.He often tells jokes in the class.Sometimes it’s hard, but I study hard.I want to be a math teacher.

第五篇：七年级英语作文

七年级学生所积累的词汇、语法、句型等基本语言材料都极有限，在写作练习中，还谈不上什么发挥和创新，因此对课文的依赖性很大，不仅会模仿课文的体裁，而且会模仿其思路和内容。那么在学习课文时，老师不仅要帮助学生理解其中的语言知识和句型句式，还要引导学生分析课文的写作思路及内容。例如：七年级下学期Unit lO中有两篇旅游日记，其写作思路及内容是：(1)天气情况。

(2)去了某地。(3)听到了什么、看到了什么、做了什么。(4)作者的体会和感受。对范文进行分析之后，让学生模仿这两篇范文写一篇自己的旅游日记，就不会有太大的难度。学生通过对课文写作思路及内容的模仿，会慢慢掌握审题、列提纲等写作技巧，为今后的写作打下良好的基础。常言道，熟能生巧。只要学生的模仿写作达到纯熟的地步，自然水到渠成，就能灵活运用英语去描述新事物，表达自己的观点和思想。“熟读唐诗三百首，不会写诗也会吟”正是这个道理。俗话说“万事开头难”，如何开好写作教学这个头，走好第一步，还是很值得老师们动动脑筋的。如果起点太低，就达不到写作训练的效果；如果起点太高、难度太大，会使学生感到写作是一件高不可攀的事，从而失去信心和兴趣，结果会更糟糕。因此，教师应根据自己学生的实际情况，分析教材内容，找准切入点，把好难度关。七年级学生已经有了三、四年的英语学习经历，有了一定的口语会话能力，因此，从会话人手来指导学生完成由“说”到“写”的自然过渡是一种较合适的方法。下面以七年级第一堂写作课为例，谈谈具体的做法。