第一篇:2012年12月大学英语六级写作经验谈[转载](最终版)
2012年12月大学英语六级写作经验谈
距离2012年12月四六级考试越来越近,现在正是四六级考生复习冲刺的黄金时期。为了助大家取得好成绩,易教网北京家教中心老师为考生网罗了四六级辅导名师,整合了各题型备考资料,给你一站式学习体验。
一、英语六级长短句原则。
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: as a creature, i eat;as a man, i read.although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
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二、英语六级主题句原则。
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!to begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly
三、英语六级 一二三原则。
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点...如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、英语六级短语优先原则。
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点-精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: i cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:i cannot put up with it.i want it.可以用短语表达:i am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、英语六级多实少虚原则。
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting,smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如: 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、英语六级多变句式原则。
1)加法(串联)都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: i enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
the car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.the coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友..。可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!the snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语: then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。举例:this is what i can do.whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: when to go, why he goes away..。
5)附加(多此一举)如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。the man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.i don’t enjoy that book you are reading.mr liu, our oral english teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句-借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in london for you.nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.we have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、英语六级挑战极限原则
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: the weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the western hills.africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of china.如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
第二篇:大学英语六级写作
模版1some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.but other people take an opposite side.they firmly believe that 观点2.as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea.there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.first of all, 论据1.more importantly, 论据2.most important of all, 论据3.in summary, 总结观点.as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版2people hold different views about x.some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.for one thing, 论据1.for another, 论据2.last but not the least, 论据3.to conclude, 总结观点.as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.模版3there is no consensus of opinions among people about x(争论的焦点)。some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.the reasons are obvious.first of all, 论据1。furthermore, 论据2。among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.that is, 论据3。a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或 from above, we can predict that 预测.1)We should take some effective measures.2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties.3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.11.表示结论1)In short,it can be said that...2)It may be briefly summed up as follows.3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that...12.套语1)It’s well known to us that...2)As is known to us,...3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about.4)From the graph(table,chart)listed above,it can be seen that...5)As aproverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.)开篇1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6)Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7)Faced with..., quite a few people argue that...8)According to a recent survey,...9)With the rapid development of...,...八)结尾1)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4)In conclusion, it is imperative that...5)There is no easy method, but...might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must...7)In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10)Taking all these into account, we...11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...二、用于描写图表和数据
1.It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.2.There is an increase of 20% in total this year.3.It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995.4.It would be expected to increase 5 times.5.The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.6.It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.7.The total number was lowered by 10%.8.It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year.9.Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent.10.The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.11.It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with…
三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文
1.Everybody knows that…
2.It can be easily proved that…
3.It is true that…
4.No one can deny that
5.One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…
6.The chief reason is that…
7.We must recognize that…
8.There is on doubt that…
9.I am of the opinion that…
10.This can be expressed as follows;
11.To take …for an example…
12.We have reason to believe that
13.Now that we know that…
14.Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned…
15.The change in …largely results from the fact that
16.There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…
17.A number of factors could account for the development in…
18.Perhaps the primary reason is…
19.It is chiefly responsible of…
20.The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact…
21.Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that…
22.Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…
23.It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…
24.Different people observes it in different ways.四、用于文章的开头
1.As the proverb says…
2.It goes without saying tan…
3.Generally speaking…
4.It is quite clear than because…
5.It is often said that …
6.Many people often ask such question:“…?”
7.More and more people have come to realize…
8.There is no doubt that…
9.Some people believe that…
10.These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?
11.One great man said that…
12.Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention.13.In the past several years there has been…
14.Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…
15.Currently there is a widespread concern that…
16.Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…
17.There is a general discussion today about the issue of …
18.Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.五、用于文章的结尾
1.from this point of view…
2.in a word…
3.in conclusion…
4.on account of this we can find that…
5.the result is dependent on…
6.therefore, these findings reveal the following information:
7.thus, this is the reason why we must…
8.to sum up …
9.as far as…be concerned, I believe that…
10.It is obvious that…
11.There is little doubt that…
12.There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful
13.None of the solutions is quite satisfactory.The problem should be examined in a new way.14.It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on…
15.Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclustion that…
●过渡性句型:
1)this is true that...2)This is true, no doubt, but...3)...also...4)It is one thing to...;it is another to...●描写图表和数据的句型
1)...rank first(both)in...2)...in proportion to...3)A is by far the largest...4)As many as....5)The number is...times as much as that of...6)The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year.7)It accounts for 35% of...8)By comparison with..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to...9)...rise rapidly(slowly)10)...remain level...11)...reach...12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise/increase demand./income./population./prices./production./decrease/decline/reduction/fall/drop in
13)be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline(……在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降)
●图表作文中的过渡、概括句型:
1)As can be indicated in the table,...2)As we could find out later,...3)As is revealed in the table,...4)As the survey results show,...5)This table provides several important points of comparison
between,...6)The two graphs depict the same thing in...7)The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows:8)According to the figures given in the table,...9)This chart shows that...10)As is shown by the graph,...
第三篇:2014年大学英语六级写作(1)
My View on Fake Commodities
1.假冒伪劣商品的危害。
2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。
My View on Fake Commodities
Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market.Wherever you are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them.In other words, it is highly probable that you have bought some of those fake goods or products of inferior quality。Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society.On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market.On the other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality.As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people’s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust。
Then, what should be done to do away with fake commodities? To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies.Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of their intellectual property right.Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones.In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake commodities.
第四篇:2014年大学英语六级写作(5)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write acomposition on the topic Buying Lottery Tickets.You should write atleast 150 words and you should base your composition on the outlinegiven below:
1.有些人赞成买彩票
2.有些人反对买彩票
3.你的观点
Buying Lottery Tickets
There is no denying the fact that buying lottery tickets is ahotly debated topic in China today.There is no denying the fact thatbuying lottery tickets is becoming popular in China today.Some peoplebelieve that it is beneficial in many ways.In the first place, ithelps raise money for such groups as the poor and the disabled as wellas for such causes as sports.(Thus, the heavy financial burden on thegovernment will be relieved or even removed.)In the second place,lottery games provide people with a means of entertainment or pastime.(Without lottery games, many people might find nothing interesting todo.Last but not least, by buying lottery tickets, one may make afortune overnight.)
Others, however, hold the opposite view.They say that buyinglottery tickets is actually a kind of gambling.People are encouragedto earn money through guessing instead of down-to-earth labor.As aresult, some people are tempted to commit crimes.A case in point isthe two bank clerks in Heibei who stole millions of money from the bankto buy lottery tickets.Weighing the arguments of both sides, I am inclined to agree withthe former.Lottery games can serve as a good means to raise funds.Butthe ticket buyers should keep in mind the original purpose of suchgames, that is, to help the underprivileged or to contribute to publicwelfare.If they happen to win the prizes, it’s nothing but a returnfor their kindness.(Personally, I think that both sides have something right.Actually, lottery games should be viewed as a two-edged sword, whichpresents us with both benefits and troubles.But we should not give upeating for fear of choking.The best policy, as I see it, is tomaximize their advantages and eliminate their unhealthy side-effects.Or in other words, we should further develop lottery games and exertproper supervision over them so that they can benefit us in a betterway.)
第五篇:2014年大学英语六级写作(6)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Keeping Pets.You should write at least 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:
1.有些人赞成养宠物
2.有些人反对养宠物
3.你的观点
Keeping Pets
There is no denying the fact that keeping pets is a hotly debated topic today.Some people claim that keeping pets is a good thing to do.They believe that pets, like cats and dogs, can help relieve the loneliness suffered by senior citizens and other social members who are confined to their homes for this reason or that.They also argue that keeping pets helps mankind understand animals’ world and develop positive feelings toward them.Others, however, hold the opposite view.They regard keeping pets as a useless but harmful thing to do.First, pets can transmit diseases.Secondly, the noises and dung of pets are sources of pollution.Last but not least, as many rare birds and animals are kept as pets, they will surely be hunted on a large scale, which means a threat to the balance of the ecosystem.Weighing the arguments of both sides, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Anyway, we can lessen our loneliness and express our love toward animals in other ways.And it is my belief that only by placing man and other species on an equal basis can we expect to have a lively and colorful world.