初二(上)作文参观游览散文写作

第一篇：初二(上)作文参观游览散文写作

初二作文教·学案

训 练 点：运用合理的参观角度和顺序写一篇游记 目标要求：

1、写出旅游景区的自然风光和人文景观特点，以及自己的感受等

2、选用合理的参观角度和写景顺序

3、以记叙描写为主，兼有议论抒情

作文题目：

写一篇参观游览的散文

作前指导：

一、激趣导入，亮题明标：

1、当你漫步在某个新建的小区之内，你会被那里的优美的环境所吸引；当你身处某个大型商场之中，你会为那里的繁华景象而激动；当你参观某个爱国主义教育基地之后，你会为那里的独有的氛围所感动；当你游历某个风景名胜之时，你又会为那里的迷人景致而倾倒。这时你往往会产生一种强烈的欲望，要将这参观游览的所见所感写下来。

2、明确本次写作目标要求

写参观游览的游记散文

二、知识点拨，探究课本第151页的《引写》： 1什么是参观游览的文章？为什么要写？

2参观游览文章的内容需要注意什么？

3如何安排参观游览文章的写作顺序？

4参观游览文章的形式和语言有何要求？

三、结合已学课文，启迪构思

1景物是参观游览时描写的主要对象，应把握它的独到之处，从眼前

众多的景象中选出最令你心迷神醉，触发你胸中情思，引发你内心感悟的那一点，并努力发掘景物的外在形态特征和内在蕴涵的精神。如：《与朱元思书》“急湍甚箭，猛浪若奔。”突出富春江水流的湍急。《记承天寺夜游》“庭下如积水空明，水中藻荇交横，盖竹柏影也”突出月光的皎洁空灵

2写作参观游览的文章尤其要注意行文的顺序。就观察点而言，主要有以下三种：一是移步换景，即按照作者的足迹的移动，随着空间位置的转移写出所见景物，如《阿里山纪行》；二是定点观察，即以作者立足的地点作为固定点，或抬头仰望，或低头俯视，或举目眺望，或凝神近视，然后按照远近高下的顺序有条理的写出，如《与朱元思书》；三是定景换点，即针对某一特定景点，或从远处望全景，或从近处察局部，或立足高处俯视，或置身低处仰视，如《老山界》中对夜行景色的观察

3“一切景语皆情语。”游记写景不是为写景而写景，而是或寄情于山水，或阐明某一生活哲理，要有作者的独特的感悟。不渗透作者情念的景物描写，为写景而写景，是没有生命，没有价值的。如何处理景与情，理的关系？首先，情与理要从景中自然得出，即情要在游览中自然产生，理要在游览中真实的感悟。如《与朱元思书》《四月的维也纳》；其次，景的取舍要为情，理服务。在参观游览过程中，那些激发你产生的情，启发你领悟的景就是要作为重点写的景，如：《记承天寺夜游》中的月色，《阿里山纪行》中神木的描述。

4典雅凝练，优美生动的语言可以增加文章的魅力。语言富有文采可借助生动的描写，精当的抒情议论，还可借用多种修辞手法。风格多样，可清朗明丽，可自然淳朴，可凝重典雅。写参观游览的文章，形式自由灵活，可以写成日记，书信，散文诗等；表达方式综合运用，可将记叙，描写，说明，抒情，议论融为一体。

5忌「头重脚轻腰肢细」的毛病：同学们写游记时，材料的取舍、布局应最先注意。很多人在不知不觉中会犯了这样的毛病： Ａ：「头重」：不重要的起头太长，占了太大篇幅。例如：旅游的准备过程，连置装、买零嘴、邀同学讨论，都要大肆记叙一番。Ｂ：「脚轻」：收束快速。

碍于全文已废话连篇、时间不够，便草草收场，或随便发表一些与名胜古迹毫无关系，无关痛痒的心得交代了事。Ｃ：「腰细」：文中主要的中间段正是精华，却写得又短又少。而最关键的应是「到达目的地后的游览经过」，若是三言两语，不痛不痒，容易给读者「行色匆匆，一无所获」的感觉，这样的游记显然是失败之作。

四、范文引路

课文《阿里山纪行》和范文《游九寨沟》

五、交流信息，构思行文

1审清题意

2明确中心

3精心选材

六、作后评改

1、总体得失

（简要介绍本次训练目标达成情况）

2、示范评点

（选取一篇精评，另选几个正反典型语段比较评析）

3、分组评改

4、汇报交流

第二篇：参观游览作文

参观游览作文

学习目标

1、通过多渠道搜寻、了解并介绍美丽的自然景观这一过程，让学生从中感受美，热爱美，从而学会捕捉美!

2、举办自然景观展示会，让学生走进大自然，热爱祖国的山山水水。

3、寻找身边的美丽自然景观，用自己的语言把它表达出来，让大家一起分享!

4、背诵4组句子，并课外搜集积累，了解汉语遣词造句的微妙。课前准备

1、通过各种渠道了解并搜集自然景观的图片、音像资料及文字材料。第一课时

口语交际

1、我们的祖国山水秀丽，美丽的自然风光无处不在。远在天边的天山草原，圣洁的雪山、湛蓝的天空、雪白的羊群、碧绿无垠的草原是那样的令人神往；而近在身边的皇城沙滩，海浪、阳光、礁石也同样让人流连忘返„„美就在我们的身边，需要我们有一双寻找美，善于观察的眼睛。这几天大家一直在搜寻美丽的自然景观，这节课就把你发现的寻找到的美展示给大家。

2、指名一生上台交流。

听众反馈：听了XX的介绍，你有什么不懂的?你感受到美丽了吗?从哪儿感受到的?

教师总结：介绍一处美丽的自然景观，首先要有次序有步骤把一个个画面呈现出来，让大家随着你的视线去观察，还要用优美生动的语言去描述，让大家在你的语言中感受景观之美。

3、自由准备，稍作调整

4、再次指名交流。

a、听众要做到认真倾听，做个小记者，可以向同学介绍提问、建议也可以补充。b．介绍者做到准备充分，随时答“记者”问。

5、四个小组交流，每组评出一名“美的使者”。

6、你经过了搜寻，听取了同学的介绍，你有什么感受?

7、联系“宽带网”。用你搜寻到的图片、文字资料(或自己撰写的资料)，整理成图文并茂的“美景介绍书”。课后分组举办“祖国一日游”风景名胜展示会。

第二、三课时

习作指导(同时学习我的发明，日积月累)

1、学了这一组课文，又听了同学的介绍，我们知道美就在身边，今天来写一写我们寻找到的美景。

2、搜索你的记忆，哪一处自然景观令你印象深刻? a．可以是著名的大型风景区，如黄山、杭州西湖、雁荡山、天河风景区。b．也可以是身边的微型景观，如海边沙滩、公园(校园的)一角。c．也可以是一次偶遇，如海边日出、荷塘月色、都市夜景。

3、你准备怎样去写呢?回忆我们学过课文，以及上节课同学们的介绍，对你有何帮助? a、可以用方位、时间等顺序来构成文章，让人读来视野清新。b．把笔墨多花在所写的自然景观的特色上。c，联系“我的发现”。我们一起去听听小林小东的发现。你有何发现?(受到的启发是把画面呈现于脑海中，用生动形象的语言把它写出来)

4、要写一手好文章，离不开平时词汇语句的积累。出示“日积月累”。

a．看看下列这些词句对你有何帮助?自由读，指名读。

b．你发现了什么?(每一组中的两个句子的写法是一样的，四组各有特色)

c、最喜欢哪一组?为什么?在哪儿运用比较合适?

d．你在哪儿也看到过这样特别的句子?试着说几句。

e、课外去找一找这样有意思的句子，课下交流。

5、作文，教师巡视指导，及时解决学生的难题。

6、作后修改，用自己喜欢的方式修改作文(可以朗读自己的大作，默读皆可)。

7、写作文。范文

美丽的桂林

我常听别人说：“桂林山水甲天下”这话可把我的心给挠得痒痒的，向往着到桂林看看。

星期天到了，我的梦想终于实现啦，我们一家三口决定到这久富盛名的桂林去旅游。当坐上飞机时，我的心情是多么的激动，一个多小时后，飞机平稳地降落在桂林机场，我们便开始了愉快的桂林之旅。在桂林，我们游览了七星公园、象鼻山、芦笛岩……最令我难忘的就是游览漓江的那一天，天空下起了蒙蒙细雨，听导游说：“能在烟雨中游览漓江是很难遇到的。”一路上，漓江的水是那样的清，山是那样的美，一座座山倒影在水中，奇形怪状的山形，有的山像骆驼、有的像五指、有的像一只笔筒……在路上，来到了一座山前，船停了一会儿，导游给我们介绍了这座山的名称叫“九马画山”山体上有不同形状的九匹马，“谁能数出山中的九匹马，谁的眼力、智慧最丰富。”我细心的看着、找着，结果，却只找到了七匹马，还觉得真有些失望。船继续前行，一路上我高兴得唱着歌，欢呼着，这样美的山水怎么也看不够。“桂林山水甲天下，阳朔风光甲桂林”顺江而下，我们到了著名的阳朔，游览了“世外桃源山庄”果然名不虚传，桂林的山水、阳朔的风光，仿佛来到了人间仙境，这样美的山水真是让人心旷神怡。

桂林之旅结束了，桂林的山水似一幅美丽的画卷，深深地留在我的记忆里。作文批改记录

第三篇：初二上英语作文

请以“Talking about English Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对英语学习的看法以及你学习英语成功的经验，并给学习有困难的同学提几条学好英语的建议。要点如下：

Why do you learn English?

How do you learn English?

Your suggestion(建议)。

要求: 1.短文应包括所有要点，要点顺序可以自己安排。词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不记入总词数。2.要求语句通顺连贯，能表达自己的真实思想。3.所提建议应不少于两条。

Talking about English Learning

English is the most important and useful language in the world.It is also one ofthe subjects in schools.So I have learn English for many years.In class, I try to listen to the teacher carefully and speak English as much as possible(尽可能多的).After class, I often go over the lessons, listen to English tapes, watch English programmes on TV, read English newspapers and so on.I study hard, so I’m good at it.By the way, here are some suggestions about how to learn English well for you.First, believe yourself, try to read or speak English loudly.Second, you had better learn English words by heart.Third, it is a good idea to use English as much as possible.Finally, why not find an English pen friend and write email messages to each other in English? Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.(世上无难事，只怕有心人)So I believe our English will be better and better.你的美国朋友John这个寒假要到中国来学习汉语，请你给他一些建议。告诉他如何能更好地学好汉语。可能会用到的词语：Chinese class, listen to, talk with, write emails.要求：语句通顺，书写工整，可用所给词语，也可适当发挥。字数80-100，不含已给出部分。

Dear John，I’m so glad to hear you will come to my country to learn Chinese in this winter holiday.______________________________________________________________ Dear John，I’m so glad to hear you will come to my country to learn Chinese in this winter holiday.I think it is the best way to improve your Chinese.When you get here, you may go to a Chinese language school.Remember to speak Chinese as much as possible in class.You can read some Chinese newspapers or books.You can see some famous Chinese films or listen to the radio in Chinese.It can improve your listening.Besides that(除此之外）, how about writing to me in Chinese? It is good for your writing.I hope I can give you some help.See you soon.Yours,Lin Tao

Dear John,I’m glad to hear you will come to Beijing.In your last letter, you asked me for some advice about how to learn Chinese.I think you’d better go to Chinese classes.You can make more friends there and read some Chinese newspapers.Why not buy a Chinese dictionary? If you don’t know the meaning of a word, it can help you./ you can look up the word in the dictionary.Of course, I can also help you.I think Chinese is easy and I’m sure you can learn it well.Good luck!

Yours,Lin Tao

我的家乡海盐（人口、气候、特产、人民）My hometown---Haiyan

It is famous for Nanbei Lake and Qi Garden.There are many famous places in Haiyan, such as Nanbei Lake and Qi Garden.There are many famous writers in haiyan, such as Zhang Leping and Yu Hua.The weather in Haiyan is nice all the year round.It is not very cold in winter.And in summer, it is not the hottest in China.The people in Haiyan are very friendly.If you come to my hometown/Haiyan, we will give you a warm welcome.寒假旅游计划（旅游地点、住宿、交通方式的选择）

1.Winter holiday is coming.I will have a holiday of about three weeks./I will have a three-week holiday.I want to go on a holiday with my family.Where will we go ? We decided to go to Hainan Island by plane at last.Why? As we know, Hainan Island is a place of interest(名胜).The weather there is sunny all year round and the temperature is about 17 degrees, so it is neither too hot nor too cold.What’s more, there are many beautiful beaches in Hainan Island.So we can do many things there, such as swimming and diving.We can also lie on the beach and enjoy the sunshine.The price of the hotel in Hainan is 300 yuan a night.Although the price is a little high, we don’t mind it./it doesn’t matter.After all(毕竟),a pleasant trip is the most important for us.Oh, I am looking forward to our pleasant trip to Hainan Island.I believe we will have a wonderful time there.2.Winter holiday is coming.I will have a three-week holiday.I want to go on a holiday with my family.Where will we go ? We decided to go to Harbin by plane at last.Why? As we know, the weather in Harbin is cold in winter and the temperature is about minus 5 degrees, so it snows a lot in winter and Harbin is like a white world in winter.I like snow.What’s more, we can do many things there, such as skiing, skating and making snowmen.I believe I must have fun playing with snow.The price of the hotel in Harbin is 240 yuan a night.It is neither too high nor too low.Oh, I am looking forward to our pleasant trip to Harbin.I believe we will have a wonderful time there.上学方式的调查报告

There are 615 students in our school.We get to school in different ways.240 of us get to school by bike, and it is the most popular way to get to school.190 of us walk to school.It is the cheapest and safest way.125 of us take buses to school, because going to school by bus is very fast.30 of us go to school by car and 30 by taxi.Going to school by car and taxi is the most comfortable way, but it is also the most expensive way.Nobody goes to school by train.I go to school on foot because my home is close to school.I enjoy walking to school every day because it is good for my health.学生零花钱的用途的调查报告

The chart shows how the 50 students in Class1, Grade8 use their pocket money.About half of them use their pocket money to buy fast food.12 of them spend their pocket money playing computer games.A few of them spend their pocket money in buying presents, clothes or seeing films.Only 7 of themspend their pocket money on books.From the chart, we find most of them spend their pocket money on fast food and computer games.But as we know, eating too much fast food is bad for our health and playing computer games is a waste(浪费)of time.So as students, we’d better spend our pocket money in the right way, such as buying books and something useful.如何写一个人的生平

Deng Chao（邓超）

Deng Chao is my favourite actor.He is one of the most popular actors in China.He was born was the main actor in many TV plays and movies.He is becoming more and more popular with young people now.he works hard and brings much happiness to us.People like his sweet smile.We hope he will have a bright future.Ba Jin（巴金）

Ba Jin is a famous writer and his really name is Li Yaotang.He is one of the greatest writers in Modern China.He was born in Chengdu, Sichuan In 1927, he went to France for study and returned to China in 1928.His first famous work is the Family, and he wrote it in 1933.Five years later, he wrote Spring.And Autumn came out in 1940.These books made him famous all over China.He died on October 17, 2005.Now people in China still like his works very much.动物保护

1.你最喜爱的动物，它们是否处于濒危之中？濒危的原因以及保护它们的建议

My favourite animal is pandas.They are white and black.They like climbing trees and walking in the forests.They feed on bamboo.They are very cute, but now pandas’ situation is becoming very difficult.They are in danger.First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die.Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.To protect animals is to protect ourselves.So we should make a better life for pandas.We can set up natures parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat.It is a good idea to raise money for them.2.为什么要保护动物？保护动物的建议

Animals are our friends.They are part of the nature.They are very important.And we can’t live in the world without animals.So we should be kind to them.But some people cut down lots of trees and kill some rare animals to make money, so some animals are in danger now.In order to keep the balance of the nature, we should stop people from killing them.It is our duty to protect animals.And in fact, protecting animals is protecting ourselves./ to protect animals is to protect ourselves.3.老虎处于濒危之中的原因、为什么要保护老虎、保护老虎的建议

Tigers have lived in the forest for thousands of years, but now they are in danger.People cut down lots of trees, so their living areas are getting smaller and tigers don’t have safe places to live in.And they don’t have enough food to eat, either.So the situation is becoming very difficult.As we know, tigers are part of nature and they are our friend, so protecting them is protecting ourselves.We should try our best to protect them.We can set up larger tiger reserves to save as many tigers as possible.We should stop people from killing tigers and let tigers and people live in peace together.Let’s take actions now!

童话故事—小红帽

Once upon a time, there was a little girl called Little Red-Cap.One day, her grandma was ill, so Little Red-Cap went to visit her.But the wolf first swallowed her grandma, and then it stayed in bed and waited for Little Red-Cap.When Little Red-Cap got there, he jumped up and ate her.At that time, a hunter passed by.He killed the wolf and cut the wolf’s stomach.At last, Little Red-Cap and her grandma were saved.学生用手机的优点和缺点（英语议论文）

As we know, mobile phones are important for us now.They bring great changes to our lives.Now many students have their own mobile phones.They can use them to make telephone calls to their parents, friends and teachers at any time.Mobile phones can tell them the time just like a watch.What’s more(而且)/Besides that(除此之外), they can use them to play games and chat on QQ.But some students spend too much time sending messages, playing games and chatting on QQ.It is bad for their study.Also, using mobile phones for a long time is bad for their health.And the prices of mobile phonesare usually high and students must pay much money for the phone bills(账单).Every coin has two sides.I think, we can make good use of mobile phones.On one hand(一方面), we can use them to do something good for ourselves.On the other hand(另一方面), we should control(控制)ourselves and we shouldn’t lose ourselves in playing games and chatting on QQ.In a word(总之), if we can control ourselves, mobile phones will make our life colourful.地震知识What to do in an earthquake?

An earthquake may hit any place at any time.Do you know what to do in an earthquake? Let me tell you!/Here is some advice.First, we should keep calm and be brave.Second, don’t run everywhere in a hurry and try to find a safe place to stay in.If we are inside, we should hide ourselves under something hard, such as a table and even a bed.When the ground stops shaking, leave the building quickly.But remember not to use the lift.If we are outside, find an open place and keep clear of cars and waterside.Don’t stand near street lights or under power lines.If we are driving a car, we must stop our car on the side of the road.In short, we should follow what we learned at school.We can be safe and we can also help save others.火灾知识 What to do in a fire?

Fires often happen suddenly.What should we do to keep safe in a fire? Here is some advice.First, we should keep calm and be brave.Second, call 119 for help and tell other people about the fire.Then leave the burning building as quickly as possible.But remember not to use the lift.Third, if there is smoke, cover our nose and mouth with a wet cloth.If our clothes are on fire, drop to the ground and roll(滚动).Finally, it is dangerous to go back into a burning building.In short, follow what we learnt in school and we can be safe.游学，天气，风俗习惯，学习中文建议

Dear Tom,I am glad to hear that you will come to my hometown this winter holiday.In winter, it is often a little cold and snowy in my hometown and the temperature is about zero degree, so you should bring some warm clothes.When you come here, we are celebrating the Spring Festival.So it’s important for you to know about our customs.For example, you mustn’t do any cleaning on the first day of the Spring festival.And you’d better not have your hair cut or say anything unlucky during the Spring Festival month.You asked me how to learn Chinese well.I think you can go to Chinese classes.The people in my home town are very friendly, so you can make friends with them and talk with them in Chinese.That can help you improve your Chinese.I’m looking forward to your coming and I can’t wait to see you.Yours,Tony

校园安全

How to keep safe in school?

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway.Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his feet because of the wet floor.Therefore(因此), he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.So I think students should always walk carefully but not run /walk carefully instead of running in the hallway.And the teachers had better keep an eye on students /look after students(照顾)after class and stop them from running.At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.How to Keep Safe in School?

Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, in last school sports meeting, something bad happened to Tom during the competition.He ran so fast that he couldn’t stop at all and then he fell down.At last his arms were broken and he had to stay in hospital for a month.So we should pay more attention to our safety in school.In my opinion, we shouldn’t run fast on the wet playground.Also, I think we should follow the teachers’ advice when we are having a P.E.class.We should be careful when we go downstairs.We had better not climb the wall in the school.We can’t have a happy life in school unless(如果不）we are safe.So let’s take care and keep ourselves safe in school!

假如你是John，你的英语笔友Jim要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时节等。请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国的气候特点。

Dear Jim,I’m very glad that you’ll come to visit China.You asked me about the weather in China.There are four seasons– spring, summer, autumn and winter.Summer is the hottest season of the year.It often rains.And winter is the coldest.Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China.If you like snow, you can come to China at this time of year.But I think the best time to visit China is in spring or autumn because it is neither too hot nor too cold.It is very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake, Mount Yellow and so on.I believe you will enjoy yourself in China.I can’t wait to see you.Best wishes!

Yours truly,John

你知道你学校有那些规章制度吗? 请你用must/ mustn’t 写一写你们学校的规章制度，哪些是必须做到的，哪些是禁止做的，并且谈谈你对这些制度的看法。注意描述准确，观点阐述清晰，明确，语言简练。80词左右。

We have many rules in our school._____________________________________

1.We have many rules in our school.We must obey the school rules, for examples, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think it is good for our study and it can make us learn better.And we mustn’t talk too loudly in the classroom, because we need to study quietly.Besides that, we must wear school uniforms at school.And we mustn’t fight.I think good manners are important for us in our life.We mustn’t come to school late.We must finish our homework on time.These can keep our school life better.I think school rules are useful.They can make us grow better.In my opinion, it is good for us to obey our school rules because everyone likes a person with good

manners and no one likes a person with bad manners, so we should always notice our manners.2.We have many rules in our school.First, we must arrive at school on time and we mustn’t be late for school.Second, we must wear school uniforms on weekdays.But we mustn’t wear a hat in the classroom because it is rude.Third, we must get on well with our classmates and we mustn’t fight with anyone.What’s more, we must be polite to our teachers.Fourth, we must keep quiet in the classroom.It is bad manners to make some noise.Finally, we must keep our school clean,so please don’t drop litter.In my opinion, these school rules are very important because they can help us to be a person with good manners.As a student, we must obey them.Our school is our second home, if we keep doing these, I believe we will have a happy life in our school.3.We have many rules in our school.For example, we must wear school uniforms, we mustn’t fight, we must listen carefully in class, we mustn’t drop litter, we must keep quiet in the library and so on.I think these rules are good for us, because they can make us be a person with good manners.If we do something wrong, we can correct our mistakes quickly because of the rules.What’s more, these rules can also make our school beautiful and clean.If all of us can keep doing these, we will become a student with good manners.我最喜欢的电影My Favourite Film

My favourite film is Titanic.I have seen it several times.The story takes place on a large and beautiful ship called Titanic.It is the story about Jack and Rose.Rose is a lovely girl from a rich family, but she is unhappy and she is tired of her life.She happens to meet Jack, a poor young man.Jack is poor but happy and humorous.They fall in love with each other.It is so moving.The best part of the film is the part when the ship is sinking.I also like the song My Heart Will Go On.I can even sing it in English.

第四篇：初二上物理课作文

初二上物理课作文

在日常学习、工作和生活中，大家都经常看到作文的身影吧，作文可分为小学作文、中学作文、大学作文（论文）。那么一般作文是怎么写的呢？下面是小编收集整理的初二上物理课作文，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。

开学第一天，物理老师给我们上了一堂神奇的物理课。他先后做了力学、声学、光学、电磁学的小实验，让我们大开眼界，仿佛进入了神奇的世界，体验到了物理的神奇魅力。

傅先生拿着他的大瓶子、小罐子和一大堆磁铁、线圈之类的东西的时候，我仿佛看到了在哈利波特里教魔药的斯内普先生走过来，我立刻集中精神。

傅老师没有斯内普那么死板严厉。他微笑着开始了他的实验。老师先拿一个装满水的小盆，在水面上放一块泡沫板，把一个前后盖都敞开的杯子直立在水底。然后，拧紧上盖，慢慢举起杯子。当杯子快要出水时，它迅速用泡沫板堵住了杯子的下口。这时，杯子里有半杯水多。老师放泡沫板，全班鸦雀无声，我很惊讶。我想：“你打赌，水会溢出来，可能会溅到我身上。”除非，也就是他也会做斯内普的“停职”。我紧紧地盯着老师，心里很好奇。只见老师用手抓着杯子，嘴里似乎在默默念着一些咒语，慢慢的.挪动着泡沫板。我几乎绝望了，条件反射地躲了回去。但是在老师的动作下泡沫板被完全拆下来的时候，水并没有掉下来。哦，我的上帝！地球失去吸引力了吗？还是老师真的是魔法学校的？此刻，老师仿佛通过念咒知道了我的想法，用神秘的语气说：“这不是魔法，是气压造成的。”然后，他在水里捅了一根铁丝，就像捅果冻一样。我们惊呼，这一次它会溅起水花，可是我们又错了，水没动，太神奇了！肯定是“凝血”了。

老师拿着他的魔杯走在我们前面，我们奇怪地看着这一切。这时，一个声音响起：“老师，这个杯子下面为什么有铁丝网？”老师狡黠地笑了笑：“还不错，这让你发现，没有这张网，大气压可能撑不住。”我们笑了。虽然我们被老师取笑，但我觉得物理和魔法一样迷人。

随着上课铃声的响起，45分钟的神奇之旅结束了，这门神奇的物理课为我们打开了通往物理世界的大门。

第五篇：2017---2018初二上作文选集

传记 我的传记

i出生

一九九6年11月7日，我不愿意躺在妈妈温暖、舒适的宫殿里了，我要出来看看外面五彩缤纷的世界。

那天下午四点十分，医生在妈妈的肚皮上划了一刀，把一个“白白胖胖的小皇帝”从妈妈的子宫里抱了出来。一旦离开了我躺了九个月的宫殿，我仿佛失去了安全感，“哇”地一声哭了。

我一出生，妈妈就发现我特别能吃。在医院里，妈妈第一次给我喂奶，我就很熟练地吮吸着奶头，边吃边发出“吧嗒!”“吧嗒!”的声音。令其他病床上的妈妈们羡慕不已，因为她们的孩子似乎都不太会吃。外公夸奖我“将来一定是一个聪的孩子。

入园

一九九7年十月二十三日，我会走路了。一开始，我不会转弯，只会往前跑。没过多久，我突然就会转弯了。自从我会走路以后，除了睡觉，我总是一分钟也不停地在地上跑来跑去。不是跌破脸就是跌破额角，鼻梁上还留下了一个淡淡的疤。外公说“这孩子将来读书肯定成问题，没有一分钟能坐定。”

一九九六年九月二日，我进了公园路机关幼儿园。第一天上幼儿园，我在家答应妈妈到幼儿园不哭。可是，当妈妈要离开时，我拉着妈妈不松手，并哭了。因为看见别的孩子都在哭，所以我也哭了。不过，等妈妈走了，我就不哭了。真奇怪!我进了幼儿园，像变了一个人似的。我能安安静静地坐着听老师讲故事。回到家我会把老师教的儿歌、故事几乎一字不漏地复述一遍。大人们经常夸我记性真好!在幼儿园的日子真是无忧无虑，吃了睡，睡了吃。我每天要玩到幼儿园关门才肯回家。滑滑梯、钻圈圈、荡秋千、爬高落下„„再危险的我都敢玩。

2000年五月一日，我开始学钢琴了。从此，我们家多了琴声，也多了哭声。我像其他学琴的孩子一样，从一开始的喜欢到现在的厌倦。不过，当我坐在钢琴前，为同学们表演时，看到同学们羡慕的目光，我又会感到自豪。我想，在上海音乐学院贺老师和我妈妈的严格要求下，我是没有办法不坚持学下去了。

2002年九月一日，我通过测试进入了苏州市实验小学。

九月七日，班主任黄老师让我当“卫生值日组长”。我觉得很奇怪，幼儿园老师都说我是当班长的料，怎么现在只让我当了一个“卫生值日组长”?第二天，我就去和黄老师说“我要当班长。”黄老师先是一愣，接着说：“班长已有候选人了，以后再说，好吗?”我懊丧极了。后来，我不仅当上了班长，还当上了中队长。2003年十二月三十一日，我戴上了红领巾。我在庄严的队旗下宣誓：我要做一名优秀的少先队员。„„

尾声

当我要写这篇文章时，我对小时候的事已经有些模糊不清了。

母亲的传记》

母亲出生在一个小村庄，在家排行老大，性格又乖巧，所以很受外公外婆的宠爱。小时候家里不算富裕，一家以卖蔬菜来维持生活，加上一个调皮的弟弟，生活更不好过。从小，母亲就学会了帮家里承担负担，虽然经常吃不饱，但她并不抱怨自己的出生。她与其他的孩子不一样，她喜欢帮大人们的忙，喜欢在泥泞的田地中奔跑。而她的弟弟却与她成为一种比较，弟弟好玩，而且经常弄得全身脏兮兮，被父亲训了多次，却屡教不改。

小学打基础且很重要的时期就这么给耽搁了，虽然母亲是班里的干部，和其他孩子一样，学到了一些知识。小学毕业了，由于家庭原因，母亲放弃了学习。她白天帮大人们干农活，嫩白的手上别提有多少茧子了，晚上点燃了油灯，自己埋头苦学。那时才14岁的母亲怎能承受这些的？但她让我意外了，才14岁时的她白天拼，夜里拼，竟然还能从中挤出那么一些时间来替弟弟补习。她一丝不苟的教着弟弟，做起了小老师，让调皮好动的弟弟成绩直线上升，就连弟弟的班主任都起了疑心。她也为此而感到自豪——从懵懂的小女孩，竟然有那么大的能力能帮助了自己的弟弟。从此，弟弟的成绩名列前茅。

母亲踏上了工作的道路，在一家布厂找到了工作。每个月都会给父母生活费，给自己留下了一小部分，生活却只能用“勉强”来形容，不管遇到任何困难，自己独身奋战，从不让家人担心。之后，经过媒婆的介绍，认识了我的父亲。从那一刻，她做了一个义务上、职责上的母亲。

在每一个成功者的背后，必定有一位伟大的母亲。一寸光阴一寸金，寸金难买寸光阴。时间流逝了十几个春秋。母亲辛苦的把我拉扯长大，是他给我了这一切，历经了各种岁月，母亲白发逐增，我也渐渐懂事了。母亲为了家、为了我，都操尽了心，付出了珍贵的青春，在我心中，母亲是伟大的，是永远年轻的。

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我的家乡 涞源县是一个美丽的小县城，县城的中央是美丽的市政广场。走进广场正眼望去是一座雄伟的县政府大楼。县领导在这里办公。

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广场四周是绿油油的草坪，草坪被勤劳的园林工人修剪得整整齐齐，花坛里开满了五颜六色的花朵。园林工人用各种颜色的花拼成了美丽的图案，最好看的是那个用盆花拼成的花瓣，最中心是黄色月季，周围被火红色的串串红和绿色冬青间隔包围，从远处看是一个五彩大花瓣，美丽极了。东南角还有很多健身器材，有甩臂的，有压腿的，跑步的，„„

 景色广场四周是绿色环保的音乐喷泉，广场四周的地灯与喷水池中的彩灯交相辉映，夜间音乐喷泉的景色简直可以与群星闪耀的星空相媲美。音乐喷泉看到络绎不绝的人们到来，伴着优美的音乐就撒起欢来了。瞧！错落有致的水柱随着起伏的音乐跳起了舞蹈，有的交错喷着水犹如兄弟俩在打水仗，有的水柱向天空激射，一次比一次高，像进行激烈的比赛，有的喷岀喇叭般的水花，默默地在四周点缀，有的扭动着它那纤细的腰肢，相互打着招呼„„真是长短不一，粗细各异，千姿百态，再加上五彩缤纷的灯光映衬，整个喷水池显得更加瑰丽无比。

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你瞧，这就是每天都吸引着众多大人和小朋友前来观赏和健身的家乡广场。

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建议背此篇

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水云乡

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身在水云乡那些令人陶醉的日子，至今都难以忘怀。

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水云乡于城东，是一个典型的水乡古 村，依河成街，桥街相连，虽已经历了900多年的沧桑，却仍完整地保存着原有的水乡古 村的风貌和情韵。犹如一朵浮在水面上睡莲的水云乡它的美是无法用言语表达的。

在春光明媚的日子，泛起一扁小舟尽情地荡漾在一条条水巷中，春风夹着柳叶的香气拂过脸庞，看那波光粼粼的湖水，小船轻摇，绿影婆娑，一派“吴树依依是水流，吴中舟楫好夷游”的迷人景象，看着路旁江南女子窈窕的身影，任她们银铃似的笑声传入耳膜，天堂的生活也不过如此吧！

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不久，夜幕渐渐降临，火似的红霞把整个小 村染成了一片金红色，古色古香的店铺上了门板，人去街空，一片寂静，在河边漫步，走过小街，穿过小桥，或凝视宁静的水面，或仰看天际点点繁星，或倾听屋里传出的欢声笑语，放纵自己的遐思，尽情地享受小镇的这片宁静，真是别有一番情趣！

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享受了一番水云乡美景，这里的美食也自然不能错过！鲜美至极的 饺子，皮薄馅嫩，晶莹剔透；香酥美味的 猪蹄，咸甜相宜，肥而不腻；醇美可口的青团，肥而不腴，压舌生香„„面对这种种佳肴，怎能不让人垂涎三尺？

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水云乡似梦境一般美丽，吸引着无数人的目光；水云乡，似星辰一般耀眼，永远散发着迷人的光芒；周庄，似诗歌一般源远，让人品学之后，永感回味无穷。

说明文 要分清文体 滨湖公园大桥

在我的家乡有一项比较宏伟的建筑—— 滨湖公园大桥。桥下面是一条河，这河叫 拒马河，清澈的河底倒映着桥的样子，时不时有鱼儿跃起，把这倒影给分散，泛起一圈圈水的波纹。

桥的色彩是朴素的，有点灰色又有点白。它由两大部分筑成；（1）是桥身（2）是挽起桥身的桥墩，厚实而粗大，给桥身以安全感。东江桥长大约有200多米，宽有8多米，可以同时通过两辆车。如果你在桥上，一阵凉风拂过，再看看底下的河，清澈没污染，会让你的心情顺畅而开朗。桥的扶手上雕刻着许多图案，有老虎，有狮子等十二生肖。

这桥坐落在我们学校旁边，所以常常会有学生偷偷溜出去观赏，特别是春天。春天的“桥上风景”那可美了，没去桥上看的人就是不知道春天的美在哪。桥身由四条桥墩支撑，那桥墩是非常坚固的，就算洪水来了也绝不会倒塌。我爱它，因为它的坚固，给了我们人民安全和方便。

从远处看，这座桥毅然的矗立在河上，点缀了“母亲河”。慢慢的走近，在你眼前的是一座雄伟的大桥，你会发出感叹。它那雕刻精致的图案首先吸引了我的目光。接着是那宽阔的桥面，令我感叹！

从背面看，它像是一条通道，中间部分拱起了一点，让人感觉有点儿危险，可如果你从这边走到桥的尽头，你会感觉一点儿也不害怕，这就是桥的微妙之处。

拒马河像一条玻璃带子，那么 滨湖公园大桥就是点缀在河上的一颗明珠。不论何时，不论何地，这颗明珠在家乡人民的心中永远是那样的闪闪发亮，因为它凝聚着家乡人民的勤劳与智慧，它是一种象征！

我为自己的家乡有一条这样的桥而感到骄傲，我坚信；家乡的明天会有更多更雄伟的建筑。家乡的明天一定会更加美好，更加辉煌！手机---小说明文

手机 hi,大家好！我叫米妮。我是一部红色的卡通小手机。

我的身材小巧玲珑，可别看我小，我可是“麻雀虽小，五脏俱全”哟。我身长约11厘米，宽度大约6厘米，厚度大约3厘米。我有一张约为1.44寸的小脸，我的眼睛两旁是扬声器和摄像头。我的脖子上是拨号键、挂机键、确定键和取消键。我的肚子上是0~9数字键。别光看我的外表，我的肚子里还很有货哟。他们是锂电池和电话卡、内存卡。

别看我长得可爱，但我也要告诉你，我也是会有点“小脾气”的，那就是——辐射。要怎么防止被我伤害呢？尽量不要将我贴身携带，可放在书包里。通话时，不要离耳朵太近。我不能和水亲密接触，否则我会生病的哟。

好了，大家应该对我有一个全面的认识了吧。如果你喜欢我，就来和我交个朋友吧。我不仅辐射小，而且造型可爱，有很强大的功能，还很实用！千万不要错过了哟。

第一次做饭

今天晚上，妈妈买了一大袋排骨，我心想：还是妈妈懂我啊，知道我最喜欢吃排骨了。

于是我便跟在妈妈后面说：什么时候做饭呀？妈妈笑着说：这些排骨买来就是给你做的。什么！我！我大吃一惊。

我一听到这个消息，既高兴，又很无奈。我先农村两个空盆来，一个装满了水，我把一整袋排骨都倒了进去，那强烈的腥味可真是刺鼻我忍受不住那个味道，只好歪着脖子，用手用力搓掉排骨上残留的血，过了一会儿，终于把血全洗掉了，我心想：原来做菜也不是那么简单的呀。我又照妈妈的吩咐去切生姜，我拿起菜刀用力向下一劈，只见差点就砍到手了，吓出了我一身冷汗，妈妈见我害怕，只得手把手教我切菜。

要开始炒了，我迫不及待地拿出油，就要倒进锅里去，妈妈却说：做菜要先打开煤气灶才行。我一边点头一边说：哦，我知道了。我把手放到开关上，把柄向下一按，轰火苗一下子全部炸了出来，我突然感到一股热气，连忙把手缩了回来。我先把切好的生姜和辣椒放进锅里，我把一盆排骨也倒了进去。可锅里一下子溅出来了很多油，我急忙向后退。妈妈则拿起锅盖盖住了锅。过了一会儿，我把锅盖拿了起来，妈妈往锅里加了一碗水，我就用锅铲翻炒起来，然后又连续放进了两勺盐，一些十三香，还放了一些酱油，炒了几下。于是就盖上锅盖，把水煮干，然后再加一碗水，再炒几次就完成了。

我亲自把这道菜端上餐桌，立马夹了一块放进嘴里，哇！可真好吃呀，我高兴极了，忙个妈妈也夹了一块。大家都说好。我心里十分自豪。

这次我明白了做菜也不是这么简单的，只有自己动手做的东西，吃起来才是最美味的。