第一篇：批改网高分表达总结
批改网高分表达
一、短语，高分词组
1.creating a green campus创建绿色校园 2.enjoy great prestige in the world享誉世界 2.is the essence of 是…的精华
3.Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。
4.Undoubtedly毫无疑问
5.Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。
6.Needless to say, a green campus includes...不必说 7.Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。8.make efforts to Meanwhile, we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health.9.Work out 解决，实现
10.Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性 11.Rewind the clock 时光倒流 12.In addition to this除此之外
13.Go all out全力以赴(属于四六级经典高分短语)14.what's more意思是另外，而且…，是四六级经典补充类词组。What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure.而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。15.whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。
16.nothing but意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。17.take advantage of利用，是四六级经典短语
18.attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语 19.take pride in意为：以…自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒
20.take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。21.on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语
22.far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。23.may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！We may as well cut across the playground.我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。24.it pays to 意为：...是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.25.not to mention意为“更不用说/别提„„”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the studying abroad become more significant.A case in point, we can have it.On account of an accident, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in.What's more , it is universally acknowledged that studying abroad is of consequence.For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to other's pain since they might go through some surge.That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence.For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well.For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals.What,more 提高文章连接性 studying 4.1 When there is love, there comes hope.[修改] [学习提示] 易混词汇: affection, love, attachment 均含“爱，热爱”之意。
4.2 The picture depicts a common sense of a lamp brightening the darkness, telling a philosophy to us as to love.[修改] [学习提示] 易混词汇: lamp, light 均有“灯”之意。
4.3 As we can see, evidently, love compared to be a lamp and when the darker surrounding is, the brighter it will be.[修改] [学习提示] 易混词汇: enclose, encircle, envelop, fence, surround 均有“包围”之意。4.4 The drawing is undoubtedly meaningful and pays to think that has we ever attach importance to love surrounding us.[修改] [学习提示] 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。第4段
5.1 It goes without saying that whereas only when our condition is rougher will the love become more significant.[修改] [优秀词汇] whereas意思是然而…，是经典转换话题类词汇。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: significant, important, momentous 均含“重要的，重大的”之意。
[精彩句型] it goes without saying that 意为：不用说...，很明显...。类似的表达有：属于经典高分句型，(It is)needless to say(that)，It is obvious that，Obviously,...。用得很棒！
5.2 A case in point, we can have it.[修改] [闪光短语] a case in point 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[拓展辨析] 动名搭配 have...it 在语料库中出现过 34 次
5.3 On account of an accident, he died of tetanus and his son was completely paralyzed.[修改] [学习提示] accident表示“意外事故”。注意与incident的区别。详情点击 [闪光短语] on account of 意为：由于，属于经典高分短语。
5.4 Without her help and affection, he hardly can achieve this spectacular project and not to mention the reward he can take pride in.[修改] [闪光短语] 高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提……”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: plan, design, plot, scheme, project, blueprint, programme 均含“计划”之意。
[闪光短语] take pride in意为：以…自豪，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！5.5 What's more, the Brooklyn indeed light up the world, so do their love.[修改] [闪光短语] what's more有助于提高文章衔接 [闪光短语] what's more意思是另外，而且…，是经典补充类词组。[学习提示] 易混词汇: earth, world, globe 均可表示“地球”之意。第5段
6.1 As far as I am concerned, it is universally acknowledged that love is of consequence, while loving each other is our obligation and being loved is our privilege.[修改] [学习提示] 易混词汇: acknowledge, admit, confess, recognize, concede 均含“承认”之意。
[精彩句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，是经典句型。[闪光短语] 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。6.2 For one thing, on no account can we be indifferent to other's pain since they might go through some surge.[修改] [精彩句型] On no account can意思是...绝对不能...，是经典句型。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: energy, force, power, might, strength, vigour 均有“力”之意。[闪光短语] on no account 意为：决不，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[精彩句型] on no account can we 意为：我们绝对不能...，属于经典高分句型，用得很棒！
6.3 That is the reason why we should hug and counsel them to restore their confidence.[修改] [精彩句型] that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是经典句型。[学习提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击 [精彩句型] the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于经典高分句型。6.4 For the other thing, we may as well go all out to lend them a hand and take advantage of our love to illuminate the darkness of their hearts as well.[修改] [闪光短语] may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[闪光短语] take advantage of的意思是利用，是经典短语。
[闪光短语] go all out意为：全力以赶；鼓足干劲，属于经典高分短语，用得很棒！[拓展辨析] 动名搭配 lend...hand 在语料库中出现过 559 次
6.5 To conclude, only when we fall into the darkest place, will we truly understand how precious love is.[修改] [拓展辨析] 注意conclude和deduce区别。
6.6 For your information, it is love that contributes to the harmony and wealthiness of a nation, that results in our power and ability to tackle the challenge and finally cope with it once for all, that leads to a considerable number of people struggle to achieve their goals.[修改] [学习提示] 易混词汇: battle, war, campaign, struggle, warfare, fight, combat, engagement 均有“战斗，战争”之意。
is the essence of 是。。的精华
Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。Undoubtedly毫无疑问
Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。Needless to say,a green campus includes...不必说 Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。
Meanwhile,we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health.过渡句：In the first place,it is essential that...,furthermore,it is high time for us to...,last but not least...Work out 解决，实现
Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性 Rewind the clock 时光倒流 In addition to this除此之外 Go all out全力以赴属于四六级经典高分短语 What’s more [高分词汇] whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。
nothing but意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。
what's more意思是另外，而且„，是四六级经典补充类词组。What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure.而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语 attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语
[高分短语] take pride in意为：以„自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒 高分短语] take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语
it goes without saying that意为：不用说...，很明显...。类似的表达有：属于四六级经典
高分句型，(It is)needless to say(that)，It is obvious that，Obviously,...。用得很棒！
[高分词组] far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。
It goes without saying thatit pays to keep early hours.不用说早睡早起是值得的。[高分短语] may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！
We may as well cut across the playground.我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。
[高分句型] it pays to 意为：...是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！It pays tohelp others.帮助别人是值得的。
[高分表达] 高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提„„”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。[高分表达] 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better.高分短语] contribute to意思是对某事有帮助，有贡献；有助于做某事…，是四六级经典短语。[高分短语] stay up late意思是熬夜，是四六级经典短语。Many retired people can still contribute to the society with their rich experience.许多退休的老人还能用他们丰富的经验为社会作贡献。好评报错
[高分短语] on no account 意为：决不，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！Young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercises.青年人决不应疏忽每天的体育锻炼。好评报错
[高分句型] On no account can意思是...绝对不能...，是四六级经典句型。On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。好评报错
There is no denying that意思是不可否认的，是四六级经典句型。
There is no denying thatthe qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
[高分句型] the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。The reason whywe have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。好评报错 [高分表达] 高分词组，look forward to意为“期望/等待„„”。好评报错
[高分表达] 高分词组，look forward to意为“期盼/期待”。
[高分句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，是四六级经典句型。
whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇
take into account意为把„考虑进去，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！A case in point is[高分短语] 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！[高分短语] cope with 意为：对付„，妥善处理，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！[高分短语] once for all意为：一劳永逸地，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！
比如take into account（我不觉得它很牛的样子）、heart and soul，play an role in等等。
[高分句型] that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是四六级经典句型。referring to not hesitate to Give priority to给===优先权
Recently,a heated debate arose online in China about the “Chinese style of crossing the road”, a term referring to the tendency of large crowds of people to cross roads in disobedience of red lights.Puzzle out苦思，puzzle over Be short of 缺乏。。
attach great importance to 高度重视
七、An advantage of ~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...)例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(produce)any pollution.三、~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
It makes me understand that perseverance makes the impossible possible.To make a long story short enrich one's experience增长见识 in defiance of 不顾，无视
It’s highly desirable for sb to do something.很希望某人做。。Submit oneself to...遵守 Interpret...as...把什么理解为 Whereas 然而
Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that /There are many ways which can be adopted to 解决问题
第二篇：批改网高分作文
批改网高分作文
Who Are Teachers’ Pets, Boys or Girls?
1）
Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?
Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures.Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school.As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age.While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls.In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time.Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school.The most
reasonable explanation is that girls are superior to boys in math and physics up to the age of ten, fall behind from then on.under that circumstance, teachers is shown to call on male in class far more than female students.While in college, teachers seem to have no preference in student because of the less attention and unawareness
2）
It is obviously that the answer of such question changes frequently as students growing up and here is my analyze according to the chart.First of all, girls, in my opinion, are much more welcomed in primary school.Over two-thirds of students believe that female students are teacher's pet in primary school.Second,however, conclusion in senior middle school is quite different because half of students hold the view that it was boys that are teacher's pet.Thirdly, the circumstance in junior middle school as well as In college is between two extremes which means neither boys nor girls have advantage to be pets of teachers.What conclusion can I draw is that the chart indicates us girls are more welcomed by teacher at low grades because they are not only quite gentle and quiet but also boys are naughty at the same time.As time goes by, though, such difference gradually disappear which lead to
such result.Last but not least, I hold the view that there is no sex, including boys and girls, can hold teachers' love forever
3）
Rencently, a survey on“who are teachers' pets”has developed among students.According to the chart, we can easily find that the majority of pupil's answers are girls, the junior students said that all of them were favored, a lot of middle school students replied: “girls!”, while college students thought neither of them is teachers' pet.So, why did the phenomenon occurred? I suppose the following reasons can account for it.In primary school, girls are generally obedient, while boys may be more naughty.Girls are good at reading and writing, but boys show nothing superior.Of course , teachers think more of girls.In junior school , boys perform as well as girls , so the teacher will think all of them are great.When go to the senior school , boys become more initiative and are more interested in mathematics, which can ignite teachers' enthusiasm of teaching.On the university , boys and girls have to rely on their own efforts to learn more, thus, the teachers can pay less attention.As far as I'm concerned, teachers shouldn't hold different attitudes to students'gender.Both girls and boys should be treated equally to have a better prospect.4）
Reading this chart, we can discover that most of the primary school students think girls are teachers' pets.In contrast, most of the high school students think boys are teachers' pets.While in junior middle schools and in colleges, the numbers of students who think boys or girls are teacher's pets are almost equally, more that they think it depends on teachers' mind.For this, its reasons are obviously.First, primary school teachers have to pay more attention to girls.In that not only girls are timid, but also boys may bully them.Second, high school teachers believe boys have more advantage to pay off and more likely to be rolled in
world-famous universities than girls meeting the challenge of college entrance examinations.Third, in junior middle schools and in colleges, teachers feel boys and girls have similar
capabilities, alternatives and so on.Moreover, university teachers know seldom students, not to mention who are their pets.Nowadays, gender is not crucial.It is urgent to persuade teachers to care about gender in a reasonable way, especially elementary school teachers and high school teachers.
第三篇：雅思写作高分表达50句总结
雅思写作精选50句单句练习，10词内单句，雅思历年来考试中的高分句子!资料中对句子高分的核心结构做了简单的解析!绝对有用的一份资料哦!赶紧学起来吧~
1.Some students earn some extra cash from part-time jobs.学生们可以通过兼职工作赚到一些零用钱。
核心结构：A earn some extra money from B
A从B处赚得零用钱
注：extra cash=pocket-money
2.Industrial particulates are mortally detrimental to one’s physique.工业悬浮颗粒对人的身体有致命伤害。
核心结：A be mortally detrimental to B
A对B有致命危害
3.Some parents feel hemmed-in by their daily routines.很多父母感觉他们被工作束缚住了。
核心结构：A feel hemmed-in by B
A感觉受到B的牵制(束缚)
4.Give-and-take is common in any relationship.付出与给予是人类社会中的一种普遍关系。
核心结构：A be common in any relationship
A是人类社会中的一种普遍关系
5.Youngsters are given to making mistakes.年轻人一定会犯错误。
核心结构：A be given to doing A一定会(做)。
6.Scientific developments have been fast and furious.科技发展业已一日千里。
核心结构：A be fast and furious A一日千里。
7.In the abstract, women are more easy-going.从理论上来说，女性更加和蔼。
核心结构：in the abstract 从理论上来说
8.A violent area is always the locus of poverty.一个充斥着暴力的地区总是贫困地区。
核心结构：locus 地点
9.It is too moralistic to condemn new lifestyles.谴责新的生活方式未免有些上纲上线。
核心结构：
1.it is moralistic to do(做某事)显得上纲上线。
2.condemn 谴责
10.The paranormal can be rarely explained.超自然现象很难得到解释。
核心结构：
1.A can be rarely explained A很难得到解释。
2.paranormal 超自然的/ 超自然事物
11.Retirees are always unprepared for the oncoming boredom.核心结构：退休者对于即将到来的枯燥生活总是毫无准备。
（1.A be unprepared for B A对于B毫无准备。
（2.oncoming 即将到来的
12.Massacres are often done by those unprepossessing loners.大屠杀的实行者总是那些不为人所注意的孤独者。
核心结构：unprepossessing 不为人所注意(关注)的
13.The suggestion is weighted against average students.这个建议不利于一般学生。
核心结构：A be weighted against B A不利于B
注：A be weighted against B
所表示的“不利结果”是深思熟虑后得出来的。
14.Conservative people are rather wedded to traditions.保守的人总是遵循传统。
核心结构：A be wedded to B A遵循B
“遵循”的其它表达方式：follow/ observe/ adhere to/ stick to/ abide by
15.The reason is not valid.这个理由站不住脚。
核心结构：valid 站得住脚的
16.The upshot would be win-win.结果将是双赢的。
核心结构：
1.upshot 结果
2.win-win 双赢的
17.The criticism is trenchant indeed.这个批评的确是一针见血.核心结构：trenchant 一针见血的
18.Trials and tribulations always lead us to success.历练与苦难总是会引导我们走向成功。
核心结构：trials and tribulations 历练与苦难
19.It is nothing but a piece of excuse.这不过是一个借口。
核心结构：A be nothing but B A不过是B而已。
20.Fairness is the keystone of legislation.公平是立法的基础。
核心结构：keystone 基础
21.Dying patients are not loath to end their lives.垂死的病人情愿结束他们的生命。
核心结构：A be not loath to do A情愿(做某事)
注：A be loath to do A勉强(做某事)
22.I obsess over those disabled children.我非常关注那些残疾儿童。
核心结构：A obsess over B A关注B
“关注”的其它结构：A be preoccupied with B/ A concentrate on B/ A be engrossed in B(通常指对于工作与学业的关注)/ A be dedicated to B(通常翻译为A致力于B)
23.We must bring perpetrators to justice.我们必须将违法者绳之以法。
核心结构：A bring B to justice A将B绳之以法。
24.I cannot tolerate the permissiveness in education.我无法容忍在教育当中出现的纵容行为。
核心结构：permissiveness 纵容行为
25.In the face of a plurality of cultures, I feel befuddled.面对各种各样的文化概念，我感觉头晕目眩。
核心结构：
1.in the face of 面对
2.a plurality of 各种各样的
3.befuddled 头晕目眩(文气用法，通常指对概念与观点的茫然、不知所措)
26.Torrents of youngsters flood into universities in frenzy.如潮水一般的年轻人疯狂的涌入大学。
核心结构：
1.A flood into B A涌入B
2.in frenzy 疯狂的(副词结构)
27.Teachers tend to be magisterial.教师们总会有些专横跋扈。
核心结构：
1.A tend to do A倾向于(做)
2.magisterial 专横跋扈的、权威的(反语或幽默说法)
28.When put in public eyes, the problem is magnified.在公众的眼中，问题总会被放大。
核心结构：
1.A put B in public eyes A将B置于公众视线当中。
2.magnify 放大(动词)
29.Offstage, celebrities do not behave differently from commoners.在日常生活中，名人与普通人的表现并无不同。
核心结构：offstage 在台下、在日常生活中(副词结构)
注：offstage的原意是演员为上场前的状态。
其实，人生也是一场戏。在台上、在公众面前，人总是会尽量表示出自己优雅、博学、幽默的一面(社会属性)，虽然很少有人真正具备这些素质。在台下，我们总是会回归自己的真实属性(自然属性)。难怪先古哲学家苏格拉底讲“人类的全部知识都是隐藏人类自身局限性与愚蠢的知识，我们很少能够解释真实的生活。”多么cynical(犬儒主义的、秉持怀疑论的)的一个哲人啊!
30.The rupture between two generations is caused by communication failure.两代人之间的隔阂是有沟通不畅造成的。
核心结构：rupture 隔阂
注：rupture的原意是“断裂”。
它最早被借用表示抽象关系还是在哲学专著《论道德的谱系》中。记得在4年前，北大的一些文学博士曾经拿周星驰的电影风格说事，讲他的电影是后现代主义风格。他们英文论文中曾有一个句子“His works mark the rupture between industrial and surrealistic works.”(他的作品标志着工业电影与超现实主义电影的断裂)。后来据星星自己讲“我就是想拍电影，没想成什么后现代主义大师。”
31.Much of pressure is self-inflicted.很多的压力都是自己强加的。
核心结构：self-inflicted自己强加的
32.Many of trendsetters were not pioneers in their childhood.很多先驱者在他们的童年期并不是领袖。
核心结构：trendsetter先驱者
注：trend本意为趋势，setter可理解为创造者。可谓“时势造英雄、英雄造时势”。
33.Trepidation is usually caused by inferiority complex.恐慌感总是由自卑造成的。
核心结构：
1.trepidation 恐慌
2.inferiority complex 自卑感(情结)
注：complex的形容词意为复杂的，名词为情结(心理学词汇)。复杂就是纠结、情结也是纠结。就是没事和自己较劲!
34.It is hard for us to figure out the definition on an infant prodigy.我们很难得出天才儿童的定义。
核心结构：
1.figure out 得出
2.infant prodigy 天才儿童
注：中国古代有个名篇叫《伤仲永》，不知大家看过没有?文中的protagonist(主人公)小小年纪就可以写poem(诗)，也许还能写acrostics(藏头、尾诗)。我小的时候只勉强写过几首doggerel(打油诗、歪诗)。
35.No measures are infallible.方法没有绝对无误的。
核心结构：infallible 绝对无误的。
36.One’s childhood and adulthood are inextricable.一个人的童年期与成年期是不能分割的。
核心结构：inextricable 不能分割的
37.Some youngsters may commit crimes without rhyme or reason.一些年轻人会无缘无故的犯罪。
核心结构：without rhyme or reason无缘无故地(副词结构)
38.Human society develops invariably to a better state.人类社会总是向好的方向发展。
核心结构：
1.invariably总是
2.a better state 一个好的状态
注：大家看过The Day After Tomorrow吗?最近几年气候怪异，地球总发脾气。希望大家能够热爱地球，少用纸巾(facial tissue)、多用手绢(handkerchief)。注意环境保护(environmental protection)。否则说不定世界末日(Armageddon)很快就来了。
39.Rampant hackers are proud of attacking PCs skillfully.猖獗的黑客以能够娴熟的攻击个人电脑为骄傲。
核心结构：
1.rampant hacker猖獗的黑客
2.A be proud of B A以B为荣
注：很多的网络犯罪(cyber-crimes)不以为耻、反以为荣(see a crime as a pride)。不过，大家还是要小心被“烧香”。
40.In an extended family, sibling rivalry is rather obvious.在一个大家庭中，兄弟姐妹间的对立是很明显的。
核心结构：
1.extended family大家庭
2.sibling rivalry 兄弟姐妹间的对立
注：不知大家是生长在大家庭(extended families由三代或三代以上的人所组成的家庭。看过《我爱我家》没有?对!就是这种!太准确了!)还是小家庭(nuclear families由两代人组成的家庭)中?不过肯定不是丁克家庭(Dink，由两个冷酷的上班族所组成的无小孩家庭。)就对了。
41.Many of traditional beliefs are erased by new ones.很多的传统观念因新观念的出现而消失了。
核心结构：erase擦除
42.While inveighing against the phenomenon, we must figure out solutions.在抱怨这种现象的时候，我们必须得出解决方法。
核心结构：inveigh against 抱怨、批评(有亵渎意味)
43.Some inveterate liars are born and brought up in violent families.很多有撒谎习惯的人都生长在暴力家庭中。
核心结构：inveterate liar习惯撒谎的人
注：大家看过皮诺曹(Pinocchio)的故事吗?
44.Modern buildings are always pale in comparison to ancient ones.与传统建筑相比，现代建筑显得那么苍白。
核心结构：in comparison to A 与A相比
45.Large rambling buildings are piled in cities.高大的、杂乱的建筑被堆砌在城市当中。
核心结构：rambling杂乱的
注：东京和上海没有什么区别。京都和北京有很大区别。小日本对于传统建筑的保护还是很有一套的。
46.A series of ramifications are bound to be found.核心结构：一系列的后果定会接踵而来。
1.a series of 一系列的 2.ramification 后果
3.be bound to do 一定会
47.One’s idiosyncrasies always developed from his childhood.一个人的嗜好总是从他的童年期发展而来的。
核心结构：idiosyncrasy 嗜好
注：朱军的童年嗜好一定是看悲剧片。他的《艺术人生》就是一个典型。非把嘉宾、观众(电视里、电视外)弄哭。非把美好的回忆弄成悲剧、赚足眼泪!太没教养!导演、策划、主持人一起没教养!
48.One’s socialization may be encumbered by a multitude of factors.一个人融入社会的过程可能会受到很多因素的制约。
核心结构：
1.encumber 阻碍
2.a multitude of 很多的 “很多的”其它结构：
multifarious/ various/ a variety of / multifarious
49.Violent crimes are especially rambunctious in under-developed areas.在贫困地区，暴力犯罪尤其猖獗。
核心结构：rambunctious 猖獗的
注：美国有个纽约(又叫Big Apple)，它由曼哈顿(Manhattan)、布鲁克林(Brooklyn)、皇后区(Queens)、布郎克斯(Bronx)和斯塔滕岛(Staten Island)五个区(Five Boroughs)组成。其中的布鲁克林就曾经是一个暴力犯罪rambunctious地区。
50.One’s savoir-faire is of vital importance to his success.对于一个人的成功而言，社会能力至关重要。
核心结构：
1.savoir-fair 社会能力
2.A be of vital importance to B A对B至关重要。
第四篇：书面表达高分技巧
书面表达高分技巧：
1.语言简洁，层次清晰
主题句：点出段落的主旨
拓展句：说明或展开支持主旨
结尾句：点题
2.用词准确，句式多变，多用简单句，少用复杂句
选好词，造好句，分好段
3.巧用连接词，内容连贯，过渡要自然，表达地道，无明显错误
4.书写规范，卷面整洁
Dear Cindy,Time goes by, but the friendship between us become stronger.I was not good at math at first.I can’t pass the exam.As my best friend, you are worried about me.So you decided to help me with my math.I felt warm because I know there was still someone who didn’t give me up.Then I tried my best to learn English.Finally, I gave my parents, teachers and classmates a big surprise.I still remembered that you looked at me with a smile that day.Because of your help, I can make such great progress.The most important exam is coming soon, I wish you can getgood grades.At last, I want to say thank you, and I hope our friendship can be longer and stronger.Best wishes!
Yours
Dear Cindy,We know that we’ll leave school in several months.Now I’m writing a thank-you letter to you.In the past,you really helped me a lot.I still remember when I came to this school for the first time.I was so shy that I didn’t have a friend.When you come to my world.You let me know what a real friend is.When I have trouble with my study.You always help me work out the problems and I found you teach me carefully than anyone else.When I’m in trouble,you are always the first listener to listen to my complaints.After talking with you,I feel much better.My friend,I think without you I have nothing.Also I can hardly imagine the days I don’t have you.Thanks for your help.You are my best friend forever.Is it a proper way to study in the 10-minute break?
Is it proper way to study in the 10-minute break?
Students are under much more pressure while we are entering into Grade Nine.More and more students begin studying in the 10-minute break to save time.Some of them think they can do more exercises in this way.However,in my eyes,we’dbetter not.Relaxing yourself in the 10-minute break is a proper way.After 40-minute class,having a rest is a helpful way to keep away from getting tired in the next class.Also,too much noise can stop you from thinking hard.On the other hand,it isn’t healthy to use your eyes for a long time.Put the 10-minute break to good use,only then will you be active to learn more in the next class.假设你叫Kimi，初中生活即将结束。三年里，你和你的同学们在一起学习，参加各种活动，互相帮助，互相照顾，彼此之间建立了深厚的同学情谊。近日，我校校园网的英语论坛专门开辟了“Thank you letter”专栏。请根据提示内容给你的同学Cindy写一封感谢信。
要点提示：
1.表达感谢并说明原因；
2.列举具体事情；
3.你的感受和想法。
Dear Cindy,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursKimi
九年级学生面临着升学的压力。因此，许多学生课间休息时依然在教室里做作业。这样的行为会给学生带来帮助吗？初三的学生们就这个问题进行了热烈的讨论。现在请你以“Is it a proper(适当的)way to study in the 10-minute break?”为题，根据同学们的讨论结果写一篇短文，并谈谈你的看法。讨论结果如下：
Some students’ ideasYour ideas
1.save time1…
2.do more exercises2…
3.get rapid(飞快的)progress3…
注意：
所写内容必须包括表格中一些同学的想法和你的至少三个想法。
词数：80左右。
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第五篇：英语六级写作高分表达短语
大学英语六级
高分积累
2011六级写作高分积累
万能词汇(Omnipotence)：
1、方便：convenient/convenience2、效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency3、节省和浪费：save time/money/space;economical, thrift waste time/money/space;costly, lavish
4：人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance;selfish, isolated, conservative5、人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic6、娱乐：colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax tired, boring, lonely7、环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty8、安全和危险：safe, danger, risk
9：经验：experience, social experience, enter the society10、人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely
基本表达(Basic Elements of English Writing)：
越来越：be increasingly + adj.,be on the rise,the growing number of
人们认为：it isgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat
许多问题：a host of/a number ofproblems
引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意识到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that,awaken sb.to the fact/danger 适应新的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change
接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems
接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society
获得成功：achieve/accomplish success
提出观点/建议：advance / put forward / come up withthe arguments/ideas/suggestions
作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)
影响学习/工作：interfere with studies/work
产生影响：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on
较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of one's life
剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity
取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way
采取措施：take effective steps/measures to
控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment
躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge
满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of
补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage
解释某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon
对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on.provide/gain an insight into
把某因素考虑进去：take sth.Into account(consideration), give much thought to
品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth
培养对……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in
经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience
表现出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image
补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage
解释某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon
对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on.provide/gain an insight into
把某因素考虑进去：take sth.Into account(consideration), give much thought to
品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth
培养对……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in
经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience
表现出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image
生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice
追求学习/职业：pursue one's academic interest/professional career
学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill
被看作学习的……榜样：be held up as a good example
交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge
发挥/起到重要作用：play an(important/active/great)role/part
逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture
知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience
确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard
到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective
克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty
面临危险/困难：be confronted/facedwith/in the face of danger/difficulty
阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth
阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of
持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom
发表看法：voice/express one's opinion
持相反/合理的观点：take the opposite/fresh view
揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of
求得帮助：enlist one's support/help
缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf(between city and country)
把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to
对……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to
施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on
重视：assign/attach much importance/significance to
强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on
把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon
提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住机会：grab/seize/take the opportunity
得到机会：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information
有可能：there is(little/much)possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that
展开竞争：compete against/with sb.for the prize/position/control/the mastery of
开展运动：conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage)a
(vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising)campaign(for/against)
对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me
带来无穷的幸福/满足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint 献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career
大不（没什么）两样：make much(little/no)difference
真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …
改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life
建立在大量的学习/实践上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice
进行调查/执行任务：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment
辞去工作/学习：leave/quit one's job/work/school
参加考试/竞赛等：enter(for)the examination/contest, race
参加活动/讨论：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion
影响思想/态度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude
进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals 实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)
减轻压力/紧张：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension
提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership
提高技术/能力：sharpen(increase/improve/enhance/boost)one's skill/ability
加快/促进发展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boostthe development of
随着生活节奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society
开阔眼界/兴趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge)one's mental horizons 有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of
有助于解决问题：go a long way to(towards)solving the problem
迷恋名利/分数：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune
把时间花/浪费在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用机会/技术：make(full/better)use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent
把知识/经验运用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use
取得进步：make much progress/strides/gains in
充分发挥潜力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability 充满激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion for
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