第一篇:英语作业评语大全
英语作业评语集锦
英语作业评语不仅仅是对作业本身进行评价,也可以包括学习和生活的各个方面,它的语言形式更是丰富多彩,千变万化,既可以是一个词或一个短语,也可以是一句话、一个段落或一则格言。例如:
A
●Great!/ Nice!/ Perfect!/ Good!/ Very good!/ Wonderful!/ Correct!/ Excellent!/ Careless!/ Unclear!/ Untidy!
B.短语:
●Well done!/ Neat and tidy!/ Very nice!/Quite correct!/Quite OK(Okay)!/Well-written!/Just so-so./Far from correct./So careless!
C..语气:
● Your English is excellent.● I wish you would work harder.● How I wish you would be more careful.● Pay attention to your spelling.D.格言:
●Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
●Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成
●A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。● A man becomes learned by asking questions.不耻下问才能有学问。
●A man cannot spin and reel at the same time.一心不能二用。
●Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。
●Complacency is the enemy of study.学习的敌人是自己的满足。
● Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。
●Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母。
●.Never deter till tomorrow that which you can do today.今日事须今日毕,切勿拖延到明天。
.●.Diligence is the mother of good fortune.勤勉是好运之母。
●Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
E.句型:
●That's OK!/ That’s all right!/ That's wrong.What a good job you have done!/What a good boy you are!/ ●How carefully you've worked!/How nice your work is!
●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!
●Your English will become better if you work harder.● It is clever of you to do so./It's nice of you to say so./It's careless of you to write this way.●You've done so nicely./You've made such a careless mistake!●Try to do better next time!/See what you've done!/ Correct your mistakes./Don't do that again!● I find you've made a lot of progress!I think you can work more carefully next time.I' m sorry you've made so many mistakes in your work.● Your handwriting is not so nice as Maggie's.You've done better than last time.You can do best of all if you try harder.F.段落:
●Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever
Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more
progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English.G.“What a beautiful handwriting!If only be more careful!”(多漂亮的书法呀!要是作业再仔细一点就好了!)
“Well done!But would you please improve your handwriting?”(做得很好!再设法改善一下你的书 法怎么样?)
“I'm so glad to see your great progress in your exercises.”(你的作业进步这么大,我真高兴!)
“I'm pleased that you have made so great progress now.Thank you!(很高兴看见你现在取得 这么大的进步。谢谢你!)
“Try again;I'm sure you will do better next time!”(再努一把力!相信你下次会做得更好!)
“Well done!Try to be better next time, will you?”
(真棒!争取下次更好,行吗?)
“If only your handwriting were better!”(要是你的字能写工整点该多好啊!)
“How I wish you did your homework all by yourself!I think you can!”
(我多希望你能自己 完成作业啊!我相信你能做到。)
“Would you please pay attention to„„?”(请你注意……好吗?)
“I'm afraid you used Chinglish here, do you think so?”(恐怕你在这儿用的是中国式英语,你说呢?)
(“Chinglish ”是“Chinese English”的幽默说法)
“I’ve found your handwriting is better than before.Thank you!”(我已发现你的字比以前 好了,谢谢你!)
“Wonderful in spite of a few mistakes!You have made progress now!”
(好极了!尽管有点小 错,但你已经进步了!)
英语作业评语
自上初三以来,许多同学便开始抱怨,英语怎么这么难学了,课文也难了,语法也不是一看就会了,明显感觉难度加大了很多!好多同学也开始慢慢的对英语失去了兴趣,有的就干脆开始放弃英语了。这时候,学校领导要求老师们在批改作业的时候要适当的加些鼓励性的评语。对啊,我何不利用写作业评语的方法来激励某些同学呢!还记得初一初二时的英语作业,每次要么就是听写单词,短语,要么就是抄课文,翻译课文。每次都是一个呆板的“pass”或“A,A-,B+...”,看多了学生也就觉得乏味,麻木了.觉得作业只是一件任务,只忙于去应付作业,久而久之便会慢慢地对英语失去了兴趣。现在已经到了初三的关键时期了,这时候,适当的评语也许能起到很好的作用。例如:
“I believe you can do it better next time!” “You must believe in yourself!”
“You have made much progress,work harder and you will realize
your dream.” “Excellent!”
“Perfect!”
一句好的评语,不仅能反映学生解题的正误,对学生进行恰当的学法指导,使学生形成正确的解题思路和方法,而且还能挖掘学生的潜在能力。通过积极引导,拓宽学生的思路,培养学生自主创新精神。
第二篇:英语作业评语集锦
英语作业评语集锦
英语 作业评语不仅仅是对作业本身进行评价,也可以包括学习和生活的各个方面,它的语言形式更是丰富多彩,千变万化,既可以是一个词或一个短语,也可以是一句话、一个段落或一则格言。例如:
A 一个词: ●Great!/ Nice!/ Perfect!/ Good!/ Very good!/ Wonderful!/ Correct!/ Excellent!/ Careless!/ Unclear!/ Untidy!
B.短语 :
●Well done!/ Neat and tidy!/ Very nice!/Quite correct!/Quite OK(Okay)!/Well-written!/Just so-so./Far from correct./So careless!C..语气 : ● Your English is excellent.● I wish you would work harder.● How I wish you would be more careful.● Pay attention to your spelling.D.格言 :
●Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
●Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成 ●A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。● A man becomes learned by asking questions.不耻下问才能有学问。●A man cannot spin and reel at the same time.一心不能二用。●Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。
●Complacency is the enemy of study.学习的敌人是自己的满足。● Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。●Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母。
●.Never deter till tomorrow that which you can do today.今日事须今日毕,切勿拖延到明天。.●.Diligence is the mother of good fortune.勤勉是好运之母。
●Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母 E.句型 :
●That's OK!/ That’s all right!/ That's wrong.What a good job you have done!/What a good boy you are!/ ●How carefully you've worked!/How nice your work is!
●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!
●Your English will become better if you work harder.● It is clever of you to do so./It's nice of you to say so./It's careless of you to write this way.●You've done so nicely./You've made such a careless mistake!●Try to do better next time!/See what you've done!/ Correct your mistakes./Don't do that again!● I find you've made a lot of progress!I think you can work more carefully next time.I' m sorry you've made so many mistakes in your work.● Your handwriting is not so nice as Maggie's.You've done better than last time.You can do best of all if you try harder.F.段落 :
●Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English.G.“What a beautiful handwriting!If only be more careful!”(多漂亮的书法呀!要是作业再仔细一点就好了!)
“Well done!But would you please improve your handwriting?”(做得很好!再设法改善一下你的书 法怎么样?)
“I'm so glad to see your great progress in your exercises.”(你的作业进步这么大,我真高兴!)“I'm pleased that you have made so great progress now.Thank you!(很高兴看见你现在取得 这么大的进步。谢谢你!)“Try again;I'm sure you will do better next time!”(再努一把力!相信你下次会做得更好!)“Well done!Try to be better next time, will you?”(真棒!争取下次更好,行吗?)
“If only your handwriting were better!”(要是你的字能写工整点该多好啊!)“How I wish you did your homework all by yourself!I think you can!”(我多希望你能自己 完成作业啊!我相信你能做到。)
“Would you please pay attention to„„?”(请你注意„„好吗?)“I'm afraid you used Chinglish here, do you think so?”(恐怕你在这儿用的是中国式英语,你说呢?)(“Chinglish ”是 “Chinese English” 的幽默说法)“I’ve found your handwriting is better than before.Thank you!”(我已发现你的字比以前 好了,谢谢你!)“Wonderful in spite of a few mistakes!You have made progress now!”(好极了!尽管有点小 错,但你已经进步了!)英语作业评语
自上初三以来,许多同学便开始抱怨,英语怎么这么难学了,课文也难了,语法也不是一看就会了,明显感觉难度加大了很多!好多同学也开始慢慢的对英语失去了兴趣,有的就干脆开始放弃英语了。这时候,学校领导要求老师们在批改作业的时候要适当的加些鼓励性的评语。对啊,我何不利用写作业评语的方法来激励某些同学呢!还记得初一初二时的英语作业,每次要么就是听写单词,短语,要么就是抄课文,翻译课文。每次都是一个呆板的“ pass ”或“ A,A-,B+...”,看多了学生也就觉得乏味,麻木了.觉得作业只是一件任务,只忙于去应付作业,久而久之便会慢慢地对英语失去了兴趣。现在已经到了初三的关键时期了,这时候,适当的评语也许能起到很好的作用。例如: “ I believe you can do it better next time!” “ You must believe in yourself!” “ You have made much progress,work harder and you will realize
your dream.” “ Excellent!” “ Perfect!” 一句好的评语,不仅能反映学生解题的正误,对学生进行恰当的学法指导,使学生形成正确的解题思路和方法,而且还能挖掘学生的潜在能力。通过积极引导,拓宽学生的思路,培养学生自主创新精神。
作业评语与小学英语评价
浙江宁波镇海区骆驼实验学校 顾寅
摘要:作业是教学步骤中重要的一环。它既可以帮助学生及时巩固课堂上所学的新知,也可以协助教师了解自己的教学效果,对学生的学情作出客观的评价。现阶段小学英语作业批改方式以打分数,划等级(画星星等)为主。这种方式不能精准地描述学生知识掌握的真实情况,教师无法把握个体学生作业中存在的具体问题,从而无法做到具体问题具体分析,进而因材施教的目的。我认为小学英语教师在作业批改时应多采用鼓励性的、描述性的评语。使学生在愉悦的氛围里清楚地了解自己作业中的优缺点。这对师生之间的情感沟通、调动学生的学习积极性以及促进学生养成良好的学习习惯都会起到良好的促进作用。本文将对小学英语作业评语的意义、形式及书写注意事项三方面进行阐述。
关键词:作业评语,小学英语评价,意义,形式,注意事项
教学离不开作业。作业对于巩固课堂上学到的新知识、检测学生对新知的运用能力、检查教学效果、修正教学方案,从而进一步指导学生的学习都起着相当重要的作用。因此,作为小学英语教师,面对着初次接触英语的孩子们,不仅要有效地设计能够激发小学生英语学习兴趣的作业,而且要有效地批改和评价这些作业。这是新课程标准对小学英语教学评价的指导性建议。同时也是切实提高小学英语教学质量不可或缺的环节。
目前,绝大多数小学英语教师把大量的时间用于备课、课堂教学、作业的布置与批改、测验考试等方面,却很少花时间用在学生的作业评语上。大家处理学生作业的方法是:逢对必钩,有错必叉;或打分数,或划等级。这种只重结果,无法客观描述学生知识掌握情况的做法不仅使学生对作业逐渐失去兴趣,而且在很大程度上对学生的学习积极性、主动性、创造性以及学生的个性塑造产生了消极的影响。这样,英语作业也就失去了课标所倡导的意义和作用。
因此,小学英语作业除了要适合小学生心智健康发展外,还要求小学英语教师改变传统的作业批改方式。我认为那些充满爱心的、鼓励性的评语能对学生的作业给予恰如其分的评价。使他们在看到自己取得成绩的同时,意识到存在的缺点和需要努力的方向。
事实上,作业评语与课堂用语一样也是英语教学的重要因素,属于英语教学中的一个重要环节。它对于促进英语教学,提高教学质量有着积极的作用。奥斯丁(Austin)曾做过这样的实验:他把一个教学班的学生随机分成两组,并对其中一个组的学生的作业全部予以评分,而对另一个组的学生的作业只随机地抽取一半给予评分。七周后他发现两组学生的成绩并没有什么差别。后来,奥斯丁拓展了这项研究,他把一个教学班的学生同样随机分成两组,对其中一组学生的作业不加说明地判出分数,而对另一组学生的作业不仅给出分数,而且还加写评语,用以赞扬或鼓励学生。经过检测,加写评语的学生的平均成绩高于没加评语的学生。这个实验充分地体现了作业评语的重要性。
在我看来,小学生作业评语的重要性主要体现在以下三个方面:
1.作业评语有助于小学生对所学知识的理解和记忆
语言的学习目的在于运用。所以教师在写评语时应尽可能运用学生所学的英语知识,以促进学生对学过的内容进行理解和记忆。因此,教师在写评语时所使用的语言一方面要尽可能与学生的语言水平相当,另一方面要尽可能运用学生所学过的表达,以帮助学生巩固和运用语言。对于小学生来说,由于受到词汇与表达的限制,要保证学生看得懂作业评语,我们除了尽可能使用学生学过的语言进行评价外,还可以采用鼓励学生自觉使用字典、尝试双语评价等方法,甚至可以采用中英文混合的评语表述形式,以充分体现作业评语的交际作用。
课堂上教师面对的是全班同学,有限的教学时间内不可能逐一对学生进行评价;而教师在批改作业时所面对的是每一位学生的作业,便于因材施教,个别指导。可以说,作业评语可弥补课堂教学的不足,是教学活动的延续。学生阅读作业评语的过程就是在真实语境中理解语言的过程。教师在评语中使用学生学过的语言,对某个学生及其作业的具体情况进行的分析或评价,往往很容易被学生理解、接受和效仿。事实证明,在入门阶段,一个“Good!”或是“Great!”都能让小学生模仿老半天。
2.评语有利于激发小学生的学习热情
美国人本主义心理学家马斯洛曾将人类的需要分为五个层次:生理需要、安全需要、社交需要、尊重需要、自我实现需要。这表明人类除了最基本的生理和安全需要外,最重要的需求就是被尊重的需要。希望得到他人的尊重和认可,得到别人肯定性评价,可以说是人的社会性这一特征的具体表现。被尊重是人性中最本质的渴望。因此每个小学生都有被尊重、被表扬、被认可的需要。
需要是学生学习行为的动力之一,需要的满足会直接影响学生积极性的发挥。对于感性认识比较强烈的小学生来说更加如此。如果学生的作业得到了老师的表扬和鼓励,他们精神上的需要就得到满足,他们的学习热情和学习积极性就能得到充分的发挥。教师的评语恰恰就是实现这一目的的重要手段之一。优秀的评语,就像久旱之后的甘霖,“随风潜入夜,润物细无声”。它能抚慰学生的心灵,激发其向上的热情;优秀的评语,就如同漫漫冬日之后的第一声春雷,它能震撼学生的灵魂,激发其内在动力。反之,不得体的评语不但对学生起不到促进和教育作用,反而会在学生的内心深处投下黑色的阴影,引起学生的反感和抵触,从而带来不可估量的负面效应。
3.作业评语是师生沟通的桥梁
评语不仅是教学信息的单向反馈,而且是联系和沟通师生感情的桥梁。我们要充分利用作业评语增进师生间情感的交流。在教师的评语中学生能领悟出教师对他的关心、信心和责任心。对于学生的作业,教师要真诚地写上评语,话不在多,能引起共鸣就行。评语可以是教师的赞赏,教师的感受,教师的鼓励,教师的教诲„„同时,还可以让学生对教师也写一些看过评语后的反馈信息。这种作业本就成了师生沟通思想、交流感情、探讨生活、教学相长的工具。在这样的氛围中,师生的情感得到了升华,达到教与学两者的和谐统一。
在小学阶段,我们往往会发现这样一种有趣的现象:一个受到小学生喜爱的老师,他所任教的学科也常常成为学生最喜欢的学科。这是由小学生的心理特点决定的。如果小学英语教师能够充分利用作业评语紧紧抓住学生的心,那么将对后续的教学工作产生深远的积极影响。
有些教师认为作业评语只是对作业本身进行评价,其实这是一种狭隘的观点。我认为作业评语不仅仅是对作业本身进行评价,也可以包括学生学习和生活的各个方面,它的语言形式更是丰富多彩,千变万化,既可以是一个词或一个短语,也可以是一句话、一个段落或一则格言。根据不同年级学生的学习实际,我认为对于低年级学生的评语可以使用词或简单的短语,中年级的学生评语可以选用相对复杂的短语、段落,高年级学生的评语可以运用段落格言等。例如:
(1)词
Great!/Perfect!/Good!/Wonderful!/Correct!/Excellent!
(2)短语
Well done!/Neat and tidy!
(3)句型
That's OK!
What a good job you have done!
Now you can do better than before.Your handwriting is excellent!
Keep it up.Your English will become better if you work harder.(4)段落
Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever.Keep it up.Remember that little by little one goes far.(5)格言或谚语
Practice makes perfect.Where there is a will, there is a way.当然写好评语的方式和要求还有许多,教师要深入研究学生的心理特点、思想情绪、个人爱好、学生习惯及英语水平等,以便言之有理、以理服人。这样才能写出激励人的好评语,不断促进学生作业质量的提高。通过作业评语真实地对学生的学习效果进行描述性的评价,使学生作业情况在步入良性循环的同时,进一步加强师生间的交流,促进学生各方面协调发展。
同时,教师给学生的作业评语,是对学生在校表现以及学生学业情况的科学评价。这就要求评语科学,切合实际,起到积极的导向作用。我认为,教师给学生的作业写评语,应注重下面几个原则:
1.针对性原则
所谓“针对性”,就是教师针对学生的阶段性差异与个别差异,进行不同的作业评价。针对不同年级段的小学生,使用符合其年龄特点的评语,例如:
(1)对起始阶段的学生,使用简单的表达,如:
Good!
Great!
Super!
Try hard!
(2)对有一定英语基础的学生,除了巩固原有知识构架外,可以适度拓展,鼓励学生自主学习,培养学生运用工具书自发学习新知的能力,例如:
Fabulous!Both of your handwriting and spellings are very good.You should do more listening work after class.(3)针对不同的个体,我们也要做出恰如其分的评语。让优等生更上一层楼,使中等生改正缺点、发扬优点,使暂时落后的学生能克服畏惧心理,树立信心。对优等生的作业表扬中要有指正,教师可通过评语向他们提出更高的要求,例如:
It's good to be correct.It's also important to be creative.Excellent.You haven't made any mistakes, but do try to make your handwriting neater(better).对中等生的作业要慎重评价,在评语中要多督促,例如:
You had better be more careful!Pay more attention to your handwriting.Your work is quite good except for a few spelling mistakes.对于学困生的作业要多点激励,在温和地指出错误的同时,也要表扬他的优点进行激励,例如:
I like your handwriting very much, but there are some mistakes here.I am sure you can correct them.You have done your work better this time.I think that nothing is impossible if you work hard.Practice makes perfect.2.客观性原则
尺有所短,寸有所长,教师评语要客观公正。只有真正说到学生心坎上的评语,才会受到学生的欢迎,起到积极的教育作用。如果评语不切实际,就会导致一叶障目,不见泰山。不但无法起到积极的教育作用,相反还会影响学生的情绪,给学生带来不必要的心理负担。这样的评语就失去了积极的意义。学困生的作业如果有进步,就应得到表扬和认可,教师可以写上 Your work is much better now.等等之类的话。反之那些优等生的作业如有不足之处,则应该提出婉转的批评。如:I am afraid this time your work isn't good enough.Be more careful next time.总之,我们不能总是用一成不变的眼光去看待学生的作业。如果教师对于学生的作业不进行客观的评价必将伤害学生的自尊心,挫伤其学习积极性,这样的情形是任何教师都不希望看到的。
3.鼓励性原则
教师的评语要多鼓励、少批评,给学生以温馨的开导、安慰,带给学生以潜移默化的影响,学生就会受到教育。诸如“Good!”“Well done!”“You've made some progress.”之类的评语,往往最具有鼓励性。如果我们纯粹因为一个学生的作业中有各种各样的错误就把它一棍子打死,那必然会挫伤学生的学习积极性。因此,学生的作业即使做得再差,哪怕较之前次只要有一点点进步,评语也应该给以肯定。记得有一次我在批改一个平时不喜欢记单词的学生的作业时,发现他的字迹很清晰,便在他的作业本上写道:“Your handwriting greatly interested me.Well done!”作业本发下后,我观察到他马上拿出字典翻阅,急切想知道我在他的本子上写了些什么。后来,大伙儿发现他渐渐地开始主动记起单词来了,虽然速度相对还是比较慢的,但比原来要用心得多。可见学生的每一个闪光点都可能成为其进步的动力,老师的鼓励就是学生心田里的阳光雨露,它能给学生的成长带去巨大的动力。作为小学英语教师,我们要找到学困生最希望得到鼓励的地方并进行放大。“良言一句三冬暖,恶语伤人六月寒。”我们必须要注意多给学生以鼓励,但是,鼓励也要注意适时,并不是任何情况都能给学生鼓励。特别是错的东西千万不要盲目鼓励,否则势必让学生在错误的鼓励中迷失自我,摸不到前进的方向。
4.明确性原则
评语是写给学生看的,因此评语的表达应该是清楚明白的。只有这样的评语,才能让学生一看就知道老师期望他干什么,进而依照老师的要求去做。有一次我在批改一个学生的作业时发现很多地方存在书写错误,就写下了如下评语:Your work is not so good.Please rewrite it.第二天该学生把他自己认为已经订正好的作业本交了上来,我发现除了通篇作业重写过,笔记较之以前工整之外,一些拼写错误基本保持不变。原因就在于该生作业真正的问题并没有在评语中体现出来。于是我重新写下了这样的评语:Your handwriting is quite good now, but would you please correct your wrong spellings? 这下学生从评语中得到了明确的信息:原来是一些拼写错误需要更正!
由此可见,教师平时在批改学生的作业时,一定要把其不足之处写清楚,如字迹不够工整、书写不够规范、拼写错误过多等等,对小学生出现的错误,教师还可以提出协助订正错误的方案,如:Please read the dialogue in Page...first.等等。这样学生在订正作业时就会取得事倍功半的结果,久而久之,还能培养小学生自主发现问题与解决问题的能力。因此,作业评语一定要遵循明确性原则。
“高谈阔论终觉浅,情至深处方感人”。教师给学生作业评语写得恰当,可以鼓励学生积极向上,引导更多的学生朝着教育教学目标所希望的方向发展,从而取得较好的教育教学效果。因此,小学英语教师要不断铸炼书写作业评语的能力水平,把它作为小学英语形成性评价中重要的环节、小学英语教师基本素质之一进行关注与训练。http:// 文章来源:青年教师网
一、研究背景
由于我们的考试制度的关系,广大英语教师要花大量的时间去批改学生的作业和试卷。但往往是学生对老师的批改几乎看都不看一眼,只看一下自己的等级或分数了事,至于自己哪儿出了错,却不去深究。其实,学生做作业的过程就是一个学习的过程,做作业的“报酬”就是学到一些东西。如果我们不能使学生在作业中得到教益的话,那么就失去了做作业的意义。
随着教学理念的更新,英语作业的批改不应该再是简单的等级和对或错了,对学生的作业应当进行科学的评价。为此进行英语作业评价的课题方案。
二、理论依据和研究原则
“发现教学理论”,“暗示教学理论”,“发展性教学理论”,“创新教育理论”等教育学心理学和现代教学论的一般原理是该课题研究的教育学心理学理论。
1、循序渐进的原则
无论做什么事情都不可能一蹴而就,因此教师在评价学生作业时,开始不能要求过高,而要由易到难,循序渐进,使学生意识到在做作业的过程中,自己有收获,在不断进步,以此激发学生的求知欲和学习兴趣。
2、因人而异的原则
在先进的教学理念的推动下,“分层次教学”已经得到了广泛推广,对学生作业的评价也应该要体现“层次”;坚持“因人而异”的原则。有的学生基础好,教师应要求这样的学生做作业时积极探索、努力思考,在作业中培养自己的创新精神和实践能力;而对另一部分基础较差的学生,评价时要求就要与基础好的学生区分开,要求只能逐步提高,一次比一次上一个台阶。
3、多表扬、少批评的原则
周弘教授的“赏识教育”已经深入千家万户,得到了广泛的运用。教师在评价作业时,要充分肯定学生的闪光点和进步,及时的给予正面的鼓励和表扬,从而使学生认识到自己的长处,看到自己的进步,获得成就感,增强自信心。对于学生作业的评价,要以激励为主,少用批评性语言。
三、方法和措施
1、多用“A”,少用“B、C”
只要学生的作业认真做了,只要学生的作业有了进步,哪怕是一点点的进步,老师都不能忽略,要批上一个“A”,并且写明为什么作业会得到“A”,并鼓励学生朝这个方向发展。学生需要鼓励,更需要表扬。当老师表扬了他,他的心中会非常愉快和自豪,他会把老师的表扬高兴地告诉家长,让他们也享受自己成功的喜悦,同时,学生也会以此为起点,逐渐对英语学习产生兴趣。
2、妙用符号,学生纠错
教师批改作业不应该仅仅只是一个评判手段,在大多数情况下,更应该是一种教学手段。通常教师习惯于采用“√”“×”符号,或采用“A”“B”“C”等级制对作业情况做出简单的评价,但这样做并不能给学生传递准确的、广泛的信息。如果学生获得“×”的信息反馈,往往只知道错了,但不知道为什么错?错在哪里?这就不利于他们改正作业的错误。因此,我们将J.A.布赖特和G..P.麦格莱葛提出的“符号”引入英语作业的批改中。
∧(a word has been omitted)漏掉一个词 /(the word ought to be omitted)应删去这个词
Ⅱ(Why don't you start a new paragraph?)为什么不另起一段
P(a mistake punctuation or capitalization)标点和大小写错误 S(a mistake in spelling)拼写错误 T(tense error)时态错误 G(grammar error)语法错误 W(wrong word)用词错误
W.O.(wrong word order)词序错误
R(repetition ought to be removed)去掉重复
?(I don't know what you're trying to say?)我不明白你的意思 例如:She don't understand the leson.G S 用“符号”指明错误,作业发还给学生之后,他们会主动的去辩明错误的类型并加以改正。对于学生来说,这样做调动了学生的学习积极性,比只是浏览一下教师的批改要求更高,效果也更好。
3、使用激励性评语
1976年奥斯丁的实验告诉我们中小教育中普遍存在的单纯的等级评价已不太适合评价的需要,而对学生作业进行激励性的评价更加有效果。教师在写作业评语时应做到丰富多彩,避免单调枯燥,使学生日久生厌。
A.一个词:Great!/ Perfect!/Good!/Wonderful!/Correct!/Excellent!/ Nice!B.短语:Quite right!/Very good!/Well done!/ Neat and tidy!C.句子:That's OK!/What a good job you have done!/Now you can do better than before./ Your handwriting is excellent!/Keep it up./Your English will become better if you work harder.D.段落:Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English.E.格言:Practice makes perfect./Where there is a will, there is a way./ A willful man will have his way./ Failure is the only highroad to success./ Diligence is the mother of good fortune./ He who does not advance falls backward./ The water wears away stones.作业评语要符合学生的实际水平,教师应使用学生能看得懂的英语来写,运用的词汇和语法不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平,能够起到“跳一跳,摘到桃子”的作用,也就是说学生通过上下文的猜测或借助于词典就能理解。
四、预期目标
评价作业的目的是为了得到反馈信息,以便调节教学活动,做到教学互动、教学相长,因此,教师应通过英语作业评价方式和方法的改变,提高学生学习英语的兴趣,使学生从被动的学习局面下走出来,积极思考,主动的完成作业,并感受作业所带来的成功与喜悦,在富有个性的学习中快乐的成长。
五、研究对象 以南郊中学初一(4)班为实验班,初一(6)班为对照班。
六、研究步骤
1.准备阶段(2004年9月到2004年10月)
① 成立课题级,制定方案和计划。
② 宣传新课题思想,学习理论依据。
2.实验研究阶段(2004年10月到2006年7月)
按照方案和计划开展实验教学研究,加强集体备课,统一教师备课过程对作业的评价标准。在研究过程中要及时总结,积累资料,写出阶段性总结及召开阶段总结交流会。
3.总结阶段(2006年8月到2006年10月)
系统分析整理资料,总结、鉴定实验成果,撰写课题研究总结及有关论文。
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英语作业评语集锦
王华 发布时间: 2010-8-5 17:27:44
Good!Great!Wonderful!Excellent Perfect!How clever you are!Your work is quite good!I'm very proud of you!Well done!
It’s excellent you haven't made any mistakes, but it’s much better to be creative.What good work!But try to make your handwriting nicer.I think you can do better if you work harder.Would you mind being careful next time? It’s Chinglish.Let’s try to say correct English, shall we?
I’m sorry you have made a few mistakes.I think you will work as carefully as you can next time.Try to do it by yourself!I believe you can!You are a clever boy.If you use your own head, maybe you will make fewer mistakes.Listen carefully and come to me if you find anything you can't understand.I’m so glad you do your homework by yourself!Work harder, you can do it better!
You have made great progress!Congratulations!I wish you succeed in the coming examination.Good!There are only a few mistakes this time!Try to spell the words correctly!I’m so glad to see your work has improved!But try to remember the words and phrases carefully!You will catch up with others soon!It’s good work!But pay attention to the tense!You’d better use the past tense here.Do you think so?
第三篇:英语作业评语集锦
A 一个词: ●Great!/ Nice!/ Perfect!/ Good!/ Very good!/ Wonderful!/ Correct!/ Excellent!/ Careless!/ Unclear!/ Untidy!
B.短语 :
●Well done!/ Neat and tidy!/ Very nice!/Quite correct!/Quite OK(Okay)!/Well-written!/Just so-so./Far from correct./So careless!C..语气 : ● Your English is excellent.● I wish you would work harder.● How I wish you would be more careful.● Pay attention to your spelling E.句型 :
●That's OK!/ That’s all right!/ That's wrong.What a good job you have done!/What a good boy you are!/ ●How carefully you've worked!/How nice your work is!
●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!
●Your English will become better if you work harder.● It is clever of you to do so./It's nice of you to say so./It's careless of you to write this way.●You've done so nicely./You've made such a careless mistake!●Try to do better next time!/See what you've done!/ Correct your mistakes./Don't do that again!● I find you've made a lot of progress!I think you can work more carefully next time.I' m sorry you've made so many mistakes in your work.● Your handwriting is not so nice as Maggie's.You've done better than last time.You can do best of all if you try harder.F.段落 :
●Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English.G.“What a beautiful handwriting!If only be more careful!”(多漂亮的书法呀!要是作业再仔细一点就好了!)“Well done!But would you please improve your handwriting?”(做得很好!再设法改善一下你的书 法怎么样?)
“I'm so glad to see your great progress in your exercises.”(你的作业进步这么大,我真高兴!)“I'm pleased that you have made so great progress now.Thank you!(很高兴看见你现在取得 这么大的进步。谢谢你!)“Try again;I'm sure you will do better next time!”(再努一把力!相信你下次会做得更好!)“Well done!Try to be better next time, will you?”(真棒!争取下次更好,行吗?)
“If only your handwriting were better!”(要是你的字能写工整点该多好啊!)“How I wish you did your homework all by yourself!I think you can!”(我多希望你能自己 完成作业啊!我相信你能做到。)“Would you please pay attention to„„?”(请你注意„„好吗?)“I'm afraid you used Chinglish here, do you think so?”(恐怕你在这儿用的是中国式英语,你说呢?)(“Chinglish ”是 “Chinese English” 的幽默说法)“I’ve found your handwriting is better than before.Thank you!”(我已发现你的字比以前 好了,谢谢你!)“Wonderful in spite of a few mistakes!You have made progress now!” “ I believe you can do it better next time!” “ You must believe in yourself!” “ You have made much progress,work harder and you will realize your dream.” “ Excellent!” “ Perfect!”
Well done!It’s excellent you haven't made any mistakes, but it’s much better to be creative.而对那些中等程度的学生,就要抓住优点,用略为夸张的感叹句进行肯定和赞扬,顺带提出希望,这样效果较好。例如,对字迹工整、认真但作业却有错,或是作业基本正确但书写不够工整、认真的学生,笔者的批语是What a beautiful handwriting!If only be more careful!Well done!But would you please improve your handwriting?
这类评语富有感情,能打动学生的心,而且他们认为老师已看到且承认了他们的努力进步,为获得更多表扬,通常会努力做得更好。
2.真诚的鼓励性的评语
心理学认为,每个人都有被赏识的欲望。通过赏识、鼓励,一旦潜在的积极向上的心理动机被激发出来,他们具有的潜能将如火山喷发一样,淋漓尽致地发挥出他们的本色。学生更是如此,他们更需要受到不断地鼓励,以展开奋飞的翅膀,增加前进的信心。笔者经常会在学生的作业本上写这样的评语:
You have made great progress!Good job!
Congratulations!I wish you success in the coming examination.等等。
尤其是学习后进生,经常得到老师真诚的关爱,学生会产生一种积极向上的情感动力,促其奋进。因此写评语时,要客观、公正地对待每个学生,更应该注意他们的点滴进步,及时给予鼓励,并保持一定的连续性。例如:
I have found your handwriting is better than before.Thank you!
Don't lose heart!Failure is the mother of success.Where there is a will, there is a way.No pains, no gains.I hope you will make more
progress in the future.I’m so glad to see your work has improved!You will catch up with others soon!
3.灵活的启发型的评语。
对于一些重要问题和学生经常出现的错误,我们也可以加一些提示型的评语。笔者经常利用作业批语,为学生搭建“梯子”,点燃他们的创新火花,诱发他们的创新思维: You are different from the others, excellent!I don’t know the way you put forward, I should from you.You are so clever, your answer is better than mine.等等,这样能充分调动学生主动自觉学习的积极性,引导他们自主增强探索学习的能力。
4.运用格言(谚语)警句,拓展学生语言实践
恰当给学生的作业写评语,会使学生的内心油然而生一种希望, 进而产生一种动力,从而感到自身的价值所在。如:
Where there is a will,there is a way.(有志者事竟成。)Actions speak louder than words.(说到不如做到。)
Today must borrow nothing of tomorrow.(今日事今日毕。)Never put off what must be done today till tomorrow.(不把今天的事拖到明天。)Knowledge is power.(知识就是力量。)With time and practice the leaf the mulberry becomes satin.(只要功夫深,铁锤磨成针。)Time flies.(光阴似箭。)Idle young , needy age.A young idler, an old beggar./An idle youth, a needy age.(少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。)类似这些简单明了的格言(谚语)警句,不仅会给学生以启迪,还可帮助学生巩固所学知识,让学生在不知不觉中都能恰当准确的运用它们,从而达到提高学生的英语交际能力和书面表达能力。
5.委婉的劝勉式的评语
在这类评语中,教师要用很委婉的语气,提出自己的看法或建议,并指出今后如何复习巩固所学知识,如何做各种类型的作业。常用评语有:
Could you spend more time reading and reciting the text? Please use the sentence structure that we have learned in this unit.三、平等地与学生开展评论性的讨论
我们要尊重学生的个性、人格和创新精神。教师要以学生的学习伙伴、益友身份加入学生的自主学习中,而不要总以“长者”的姿态居高临下地指手画脚,以教训的语气评头论足;要以平等的态度与学生开展评论性的讨论,营造平等、自由的学术气氛,让学生与教师能在作业和评语中自由地交流思想,让学生拥有创造性地运用所学知识的机会和自由。例如:
What do you think about this? Is that right? It is only a suggestion.Don’t you think so?
Nothing is more precious than time.Do you agree with me? Would you like to tell me your own opinions and your timetable?
总之,一个恰当而适时的评语,不仅是对学生作业完成质量的评价,更是给了他们一份鼓励、一份信任,让他们对学习英语时刻充满信心与兴趣,并积极努力、勇往直前。正如人们常说:“教师的语言如钥匙,能打开学生心灵的窗户;如火炬,能照亮学生的未来;如种子,能深埋在学生的心里。”因此我们要学会提高自己的业务能力,在语言上精雕细琢,在形式上力求和谐统一,争取让评语创造出一种意境。这样,学生会从教师评语的字里行间中受到美的熏陶,在潜移默化中陶冶自己情操,净化自己的心灵,从内心深处赞赏、欣赏每一位学生,通过作业评语加强师生间的交流,促进学生各方面协调发展,从而达到教育、教学的效果。A.Good!Marvous!Pleasant!B.Well done!Neat and tidy!Well written!C.Well done!You have used a lot of what we have learnt in this passage.Glad to know you are interested in English study now.D.What good work you have done!How carefully you’ve worked!
二、及时建议、忠告性评语
教师应及时批改学生的作业,以便及时了解他们的学习效果。学生也就能够及时得到老师的帮助和指导。再者,教师要及时应用学生新学到的词汇和语法知识来为学生写评语。这样教师也就能够及时帮助学生巩固知识,教师的评语也才更有意义。如:
A I advise that you should listen and speak more at school and do more reading after school.B Try to do better next time C I find you’ve made a lot of progress.D You can do better if you try harder.E The harder you work ,the better you will be.三、真情实感——感动性评语
评语是师生进行沟通和联系的方式之一。学生在英语书面表达中,常常写到学习、生活等各个方面的情况,有成功和喜悦,也有失意和悲伤,细心的教师从他们的作业中就能察觉到。学生同样也能从教师的评语中体会到教师对他们的责任心和真情实感。教师要把英语教学与情感教育有机结合起来,对学生所作的一切努力一定要实事求是地鼓励;对他们所取得的进步和成绩,也一定要有来自内心的喜悦和赞赏;面对学生在作业中的疏忽和错误,教师要用恰当的方法诚心诚意地为他们指出。教师的评语就好像在和学生说悄悄话,和他们进行面对面交谈。如:
A.You have done your homework better this time.I believe nothing is impossible if you work hard ,Practice makes perfect.B.Though you were a little late in achieving ,you have caught up with your classmates now.I hope you will do better in your English studies.C.Happy birthday to you,my dear student.Hope to share in your pleasure A一个词:
●Great!/ Nice!/ Perfect!/ Good!/ Very good!/ Wonderful!
/ Correct!/ Excellent!/ Careless!/ Unclear!/ Untidy!
B.短语:
●Well done!/ Neat and tidy!/ Very nice!/Quite correct!/Quite OK(Okay)!/Well-written!/Just so-so./Far from correct./So careless!
● Your English is excellent.● I wish you would work harder.● How I wish you would be more careful.● Pay attention to your spelling.D.格言:
●Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
●Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成●A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
● A man becomes learned by asking questions.不耻下问才能有学问。
●A man cannot spin and reel at the same time.一心不能二用。
●Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。
●Complacency is the enemy of study.学习的敌人是自己的满足。
● Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。
●Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母。
●.Never deter till tomorrow that which you can do today.今日事须今日毕,切勿拖延到明天。
.●.Diligence is the mother of good fortune.勤勉是好运之母。
●Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
E.句型:
●That's OK!/ That’s all right!/ That's wrong.What a good job you have done!
/What a good boy you are!/
●How carefully you've worked!/How nice your work is!
●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!
●Your English will become better if you work harder.● It is clever of you to do so./It's nice of you to say so./It's careless of you to write this way.●You've done so nicely./You've made such a careless mistake!
●Try to do better next time!/See what you've done!/
Correct your mistakes./Don't do that again!
● I find you've made a lot of progress!
I think you can work more carefully next time.I' m sorry you've made so many mistakes in your work.● Your handwriting is not so nice as Maggie's.You've done better than last time.You can do best of all if you try harder.F.段落:
●Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more
progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English.G.“What a beautiful handwriting!If only be more careful!”
(多漂亮的书法呀!要是作业再仔细一点就好了!)
“Well done!But would you please improve your handwriting?”
(做得很好!再设法改善一下你的书 法怎么样?)
“I'm so glad to see your great progress in your exercises.”
(你的作业进步这么大,我真高兴!)
“I'm pleased that you have made so great progress now.Thank you!
(很高兴看见你现在取得 这么大的进步。谢谢你!)
“Try again;I'm sure you will do better next time!”
(再努一把力!相信你下次会做得更好!)
“Well done!Try to be better next time, will you?”
(真棒!争取下次更好,行吗?)
“If only your handwriting were better!”
(要是你的字能写工整点该多好啊!)
“How I wish you did your homework all by yourself!I think you can!”
(我多希望你能自己 完成作业啊!我相信你能做到。)
“Would you please pay attention to……?”(请你注意……好吗?)
“I'm afraid you used Chinglish here, do you think so?”
(恐怕你在这儿用的是中国式英语,你说呢?)
(“Chinglish ”是“Chinese English”的幽默说法)
“I’ve found your handwriting is better than before.Thank you!”
(我已发现你的字比以前 好了,谢谢你!)
“Wonderful in spite of a few mistakes!You have made progress now!”
第四篇:英语作业评语集锦
英语作业评语集锦
作业评语不仅仅是对作业本身进行评价,也可以包括学习和生活的各个方面,它的语言形式更是丰富多彩,千变万化,既可以是一个词或一个短语,也可以是一句话、一个段落或一则格言。例如:
A 一个词:
●Great!/ Nice!/ Perfect!/ Good!/ Very good!/ Wonderful!/ Correct!/ Excellent!/ Careless!/ Unclear!/ Untidy!
B.短语 :
●Well done!/ Neat and tidy!/ Very nice!/Quite correct!/Quite OK(Okay)!/Well-written!/Just so-so./Far from correct./So careless!
C..语气 :
● Your English is excellent.● I wish you would work harder.● How I wish you would be more careful.● Pay attention to your spelling.D.格言 :
● Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧
● Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成● A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
● A man becomes learned by asking questions.不耻下问才能有学问。
● A man cannot spin and reel at the same time.一心不能二用。
● Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。
● Complacency is the enemy of study.学习的敌人是自己的满足。
● Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。
● Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母。
●.Never deter till tomorrow that which you can do today.今日事须今日毕。
●.Diligence is the mother of good fortune.勤勉是好运之母。
● Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
E.句型 :
●That's OK!/ That’s all right!/ That's wrong.What a good job you have done!/What a good boy you are!/
●How carefully you've worked!/How nice your work is!
●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!
●Your English will become better if you work harder.● It is clever of you to do so./It's nice of you to say so./It's careless of you to write this way.●You've done so nicely./You've made such a careless mistake!
●Try to do better next time!/See what you've done!/ Correct your mistakes./Don't do that again!
● I find you've made a lot of progress!I think you can work more carefully next time.I' m sorry you've made so many mistakes in your work.● Your handwriting is not so nice as Maggie's.You've done better than last time.You can do best of all if you try harder.F.段落 :
●Although you have not been successful, you have done better than ever Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practicing your spoken English.G.“What a beautiful handwriting!If only be more careful!”(多漂亮的书法呀!要是作业再仔细一点就好了!)
“Well done!But would you please improve your handwriting?”(做得很好!再设法改善一下你的书 法怎么样?)
“I'm so glad to see your great progress in your exercises.”(你的作业进步这么大,我真高兴!)
“I'm pleased that you have made so great progress now.Thank you!(很高兴看见你现在取得 这么大的进步。谢谢你!)
“Try again;I'm sure you will do better next time!”(再努一把力!相信你下次会做得更好!)
“Well done!Try to be better next time, will you?”(真棒!争取下次更好,行吗?)“If only your handwriting were better!”(要是你的字能写工整点该多好啊!)“How I wish you did your homework all by yourself!I think you can!”(我多希望你能自己 完成作业啊!我相信你能做到。)
“Would you please pay attention to„„?”(请你注意„„好吗?)
“I'm afraid you used Chinglish here, do you think so?”(恐怕你在这儿用的是中国式英语,你说呢?)(“Chinglish ”是 “Chinese English” 的幽默说法)
“I’ve found your handwriting is better than before.Thank you!”(我已发现你的字比以前 好了,谢谢你!)
“Wonderful in spite of a few mistakes!You have made progress now!”(好极了!尽管有点小错,但你已经进步了!)
“ I believe you can do it better next time!”
“ You must believe in yourself!”
“ You have made much progress,work harder and you will realize your dream.”“ Excellent!”
“Perfect!”
一句好的评语,不仅能反映学生解题的正误,对学生进行恰当的学法指导,使学生形成正确的解题思路和方法,而且还能挖掘学生的潜在能力。通过积极引导,拓宽学生的思路,培养学生自主创新精神。
第五篇:如何写英语作业评语
如何写英语作业评语
作者:林永文转贴自:本站原创点击数:1054
如何写英语作业评语
南安华侨中学林永文
作业评语是一种作业批阅的方式,也是英语教学法中的一个重要环节,它便于学生更加清楚地了解自己作业中的优缺点,有利于沟通师生之间的情感,调动学生的学习积极性,促进学生养成良好的学习习惯。首先我们从奥斯丁的两次实验来看一看作业评语的重要性。
1974年奥斯丁(Austin)做了这样一个实验。他把高中教学班的学生随机分成两组,并对其中一个组的学生的作业全部予以评分,而对另一个组的学生的作业只随机地抽取一半给予评分。七周后,他发现两组学生的成绩并没有什么差别。
1976年奥斯丁拓展了这项研究。他把高中教学班的学生同样随机分成两组,对其中一组学生的作业不加说明地判出分数,而对另一组学生的作业不仅给出分数,而且还加写评语,用以赞扬或鼓励学生。后来经过检测,加写评语的学生的平均成绩高于没加评语的学生。
这两次实验显而易见地说明了中小教育中普遍存在的单纯的分数评价已不太适合评价的需要。它只是对知识内容进行评价,而对学生在学习知识、完成作业过程中相伴而生的目的、心态、方法等并没有直接评价。相反对学生作业的短语评价的做法则更加有效果。所以教师应该改变传统的遇对必钩(√),有错必叉(×)或打分数,或分等级的批改作业的方式,而采取在作业本上标出正误符号后,用赞扬、鼓励、期盼、惋惜等情感语言代替学生见惯不惊的分数标记。那么如何写好作业评语呢?本人就教学中的一些体验谈一谈看法。
一、作业评语要符合学生的实际水平
评语是写给学生看的,所以一方面评语要使用学生能看得懂的英语来写,所使用的词汇和语法不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平,要切合学生的实际水平,符合学生的个性心理发展需要;另一方面要做到循序渐进,由易到难,能够起到跳一跳,摘到桃子的作用,也就是说学生通过上下文的猜测或借助于词典就能理解。例如:
It's very clever of you to do so.It's nice of you to write this way.Wonderful!Your English is very good and your answers are correct.I'm sure you can do your work better next time.You've done a good job.You are doing wonderfully!
You can do better now than you did before.二、作业评语要有助于学生对所学知识的理解和记忆
语言的学习在于运用,所以教师在写评语时应运用所学的知识,以使学生能加强理解和记忆。例如: You have improved a lot.I am proud of you.That's great.Please never give up trying.Success comes through hard work and constant effort.No pains,no gains.I hope you will make more progress in the future.Whatgood work!You are the pride of our class.Work harder,and you will make more progress.The harder you work,the sooner you will improve.Come on!I am sure you will catch up soon.利用所学过的短语、句型和时态给学生写评语就能取得很好效果,可以帮助学生巩固和运用语言。
三、评语要有利于激发学生的学习热情
学生有被尊重、被表扬、被认可的需要。在写作业时,希望得到教师的表扬和鼓励,这是学生精神上的需
要。如果精神上的需要长久得不到满足,他们就会产生消极的思想。因此,需要是学生学习行为的动力之
一。需要的满足直接影响学生积极性的发挥,要充分发挥学生的积极性,对学生进行有效地鼓励是教育的策略之一。激励就是激发鼓励。一般地讲,激励就是以某种刺激为引诱,调动人的主动性、积极性和创造性。教师的评语就是刺激学生的诱因。学生有不同的性格,有不同的需要,那么激励的方法也不同。教师针对不同的学生及其作业,在不同场合所作的评语可激发学生的学习热情,让优等生更上一层楼,使中等生改正缺点、发扬优点,使暂时落后的学生能克服畏惧心理,树立信心。所以对优等生的作业表扬中要有指正,教师可通过评语向他们提出更高要求。例如:
It's good to be correct.It's also important to be creative.Excellent.You haven't made any mistakes,but do try to make your handwriting neater.对中等生的作业要慎重评价,在评语中要多督促。例如:
You had better be more careful!Pay more attention to the tenses.Your work is quite good
except for a few spelling mis-takes.Keep it up.Remember that little by little one goes far.对于差生的作业要多点激励,温和地指出错误的同时,也要指出他的优点以资鼓励。例如:
The structure of the composition is good,buttry to make sure the word order in your sentences is correct.Lily,I like your handwriting very much although there are some mistakes here.I am sure you can correct them.Bill,I think you can do better if you work harder.Your answers show you have real ability in the course,and you are developing increasing depth of thought and clarity of expression in your written work.However there are some grammar mistakes in the essay/here.Your work has improved.I am sure there is nothing too difficult for us to learn.You have done your work better this time.I believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard.Practice makes perfect.四、作业评语要能体现师生感情的交流
作业不仅是师生间教学信息的相互反馈,而且是联系和沟通师生感情的桥梁。在作业中教师可以觉察到学生的思想和自主学习情况,从评语中学生也能领悟出教师对他是否关心、有信心和责任心。因此我们要充分利用作业评语加深师生情感交流。评语言辞恳切,切中要害;或热情鼓励、或委婉告诫……始终使学生保持清醒的头脑、强烈的兴趣、昂扬的斗志,激励并坚定他们青出于蓝而胜于蓝的信念。通过评语,教师尽可把祝福、问候、关切、激励、真诚、信任之情化作甘甜的泉水,去滋润学生的心田,引起师生教与学的共鸣,达到教与学两者的和谐与统一。
例如在节假日或某学生生日前,教师可以给予学生一些祝愿语:
●Merry Christmas!/Happy New Year!/Enjoy yourself in the coming holidays!/Happy birthday1/Many happy returns!
又如某个学生因为生病缺课作业完成得很糟糕,教师就要说一些安慰的话:
●Lingling,you have made a few mistakes in your work.I know that is because you were absent...I think it is only natural.Don't lose heart.I am ready to help you.再如某个学生因为考试不及格失去信心,教师就要说一些激励的话:
●Iam sorry to hear that you didn't pass the exam.I hope you are not too disappointed.I want to cheer you up with the sayingFailure is the mother of success.I nope to see much improvement in your future studies.五、作业评语形式要丰富多彩
作业评语不仅仅是对作业本身进行评价,也可以包括学习和生活的各个方面,它的语言形式更是丰富多彩,千变万化,既可以是一个词或一个短语,也可以是一句话、一个段落或一则格言。例如:
A一个词:
●Great!/Perfect!/Good!/Wonderful!/Correct!/Excellent!
B.短语:
●Well done!/Neat and tidy!
C.句型:
●That's OK!
●What a good job you have done!
●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!
●Keep it up.●Your English will become better if you work harder.D.段落:
●Although you have not been successful,you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practising your spoken English.E.格言:
●Practice makes perfect.●Where there is a will,there is a way.●Awillfulman willhave his way.●Failure is the only highroad to success.●Diligence is the mother of good fortune/good luck.●He who does not advance falls backward.●The water wears away stones.当然写好评语的方式和要求还有许多,教师不仅要不断提高自己的英语书面表达能力,更重要的是深入研究学生的心理特点、思想情绪、个人爱好、学生习惯及英语水平等,以便言之有理、以理服人,这样才能写出激励人的好评语,不断提高学生的书面表达能力,通过作业评语加强师生间的交流,促进学生各方面协调发展。