第一篇：印-如何正确应用雅思写作的高分
如何正确应用雅思写作的高分范文
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有些学生认为写作无非就是提前背诵一些优秀范文，到考试的时候就能套就套，能扯就扯，分数应该就不错了。有些学生的高考作文或四六级作文就是靠这种方式“快速提高”的。那你一定要注意了：“雅思考试中抄袭范文一律0分！”
那如何对待优秀范文呢？我们从以下几个方面来说明一下。
(一)读书要有筛选。由于每个人的水平都不一样，所以提醒同学们不是每篇文章都要精读，首先要有选择，选择里面最适合自己的水平或要求的段落或篇章。
(二)抓住词汇。作文中词汇缺乏是大多数同学的问题，而背单词本身又很枯燥，然在范文中背单词有句子有情景，至少不会混淆单词的意思。在范文里背单词主要把握里面的动词，非实物的名词，以及形容词和副词等。
(三)短语和句型。短语能扩大自己表达意思的长度，有价值的搭配需要掌握，尤其是一些自己不熟但作文常用的词的固定搭配，一定要牢记。句型多变是作文高分的重要因素，所以在范文里若见到好的句子结构，不妨摘抄下来，并做一些类似的句子造句。如：
1.Modern device such as computer has wide applications in our daily life.2.Another reason for my perference of computer is that it can improve our working effiency.这两句我们只需换一下黑体的单词就可以用在别处了。
(四)注意文中的衔接与连贯。最简单的衔接与连贯就是连词了，在雅思范文中注意出现的自己不常用的那些词如：nevertheless,whereas,consequently，enhance等;比较高级的衔接与连贯就是分词，从句了，如“Zidane decided to retire from football,claiming that he had accomplished all the goals he had wanted to achieve.”;如果文章里有表示顺序的词,要特别注意那些我们不常用的词。
(五)段落的写作方法。如何引入？如何展开？引用事实，数据，或者说理？有什么方法值得我们借鉴？有哪些内容我们可以引用？同学们须多思考总结。
(六)英汉对比。这一步一定要做，同学们可以看着范文的汉语翻译自己再用英语重反一次，对比英语原文找差距，找不同，体会英汉差异。改正自己汉语味较浓的句子。
如:目前，关于人和动物之间的关系出现了不同层次的讨论。
Nowadays,about people and animals’ relationship appear severl different layers of discussions.这句显然是chinglish,尤其是黑体的部分尤为突出，汉语里的出现有及物动词的性质，但直译为appear就讲不通了，因为appear是不及物动词。这句正确说法应该用there be 句型。Nowadays there are discussions on several different levels about the relationship between humans and animals.下面以剑桥文章举例说明：A successful uniform needs to balance two key sets of needs.(大意为：成功的制服主要需要平衡两种需求。跟自己想到的表达方式对比一下，黑体部分值得借鉴)On the one hand,no uniform will work if staff feel uncomfortable or ugly.Giving the wearers a choice has become a key element in the way corporate clothing is introduced and managed.On the other , it is pointless if the look do not express the business’s marketing strategy.The greater chanllenge in this respect(短语“在这个方面”)is time.When it comes to human perceptions , first impressions count.(句型)Customers will size up the way staff look in just a few seconds , and that few seconds(习惯表达，强调)will color their attitudes(动词color极其到位，可扩展为短语整体记忆)from then on.Those few seconds can be so important that big companies are prepared to invest(动词，形象是否比自己想到的spent 要好？)years,and millions of pounds ,getting them right
第二篇：雅思：如何正确应用写作的高分
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雅思：如何正确应用写作的高分范文
有些学生认为写作无非就是提前背诵一些优秀范文，到考试的时候就能套就套，能扯就扯，分数应该就不错了。有些学生的高考作文或四六级作文就是靠这种方式“快速提高”的。那你一定要注意了：“雅思考试中抄袭范文一律0分！”
那如何对待优秀范文呢？我们从以下几个方面来说明一下。
(一)读书要有筛选。由于每个人的水平都不一样，所以提醒同学们不是每篇文章都要精读，首先要有选择，选择里面最适合自己的水平或要求的段落或篇章。
(二)抓住词汇。作文中词汇缺乏是大多数同学的问题，而背单词本身又很枯燥，然在范文中背单词有句子有情景，至少不会混淆单词的意思。在范文里背单词主要把握里面的动词，非实物的名词，以及形容词和副词等。
(三)短语和句型。短语能扩大自己表达意思的长度，有价值的搭配需要掌握，尤其是一些自己不熟但作文常用的词的固定搭配，一定要牢记。句型多变是作文高分的重要因素，所以在范文里若见到好的句子结构，不妨摘抄下来，并做一些类似的句子造句。如：
1.Modern device such as computer has wide applications in our daily life.2.Another reason for my perference of computer is that it can improve our working effiency.这两句我们只需换一下黑体的单词就可以用在别处了。
(四)注意文中的衔接与连贯。最简单的衔接与连贯就是连词了，在雅思范文中注意出现的自己不常用的那些词如：nevertheless,whereas,consequently，enhance等;比较高级的衔接与连贯就是分词，从句了，如“Zidane decided to retire from football,claiming that he had accomplished all the goals he had wanted to achieve.”;如果文章里有表示顺序的词,要特别注意那些我们不常用的词。
(五)段落的写作方法。如何引入？如何展开？引用事实，数据，或者说理？有什么方法值得我们借鉴？有哪些内容我们可以引用？同学们须多思考总结。
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(六)英汉对比。这一步一定要做，同学们可以看着范文的汉语翻译自己再用英语重反一次，对比英语原文找差距，找不同，体会英汉差异。改正自己汉语味较浓的句子。
如:目前，关于人和动物之间的关系出现了不同层次的讨论。
Nowadays,about people and animals’ relationship appear severl differentlayers of discussions.这句显然是chinglish,尤其是黑体的部分尤为突出，汉语里的出现有及物动词的性质，但直译为appear就讲不通了，因为appear是不及物动词。这句正确说法应该用there be 句型。
Nowadays there are discussions on several different levels about the relationship between humans and animals.下面以剑桥文章举例说明：
A successful uniform needs to balance two key sets of needs.(大意为：成功的制服主要需要平衡两种需求。跟自己想到的表达方式对比一下，黑体部分值得借鉴)On the one hand,no uniform will work if staff feel uncomfortable or ugly.Giving the wearers a choice has become a key element in the way corporate clothing is introduced and managed.On the other , it is pointless if the look do not express the business’s marketing strategy.The greater chanllenge in this respect(短语“在这个方面”)is time.When it comes to human perceptions , first impressions count.(句型)Customers will size up the way staff look in just a few seconds , and that few seconds(习惯表达，强调)will color their attitudes(动词color极其到位，可扩展为短语整体记忆)
from then on.Those few seconds can be so important that big companies are prepared to invest(动词，形象是否比自己想到的spent 要好？)years,and millions of pounds ,getting them right
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第三篇：雅思写作高分
雅思写作大作文必看高分范文
TASK 2: 高分范文一
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what
do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.TASK 2: 高分范文二-----Argumentation
The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.What are your opinions on this?
The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years.However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative.While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate.Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger.These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world(and all of the information in it)at our fingertips.In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves.Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button.Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs.Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.TASK 2: 高分范文三-----Report
With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail.This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle.Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families.Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other-typically the mother-acted as the homemaker.Recently, though, double income families have become the norm.Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment.Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated.Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of entertainment.In order to solve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes.Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parents who choose to remain at home and take care of their families.Admittedly, such incentives would probably not fully compensate couples for lost income;however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single income and provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints.One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term.However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of “fairness” is not the issue.While those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and achievements.In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?
In more and more developed countries we see the following trends: incomes rise, people get married later and have fewer kids.The result is the demographics change and the population ages.While having more old people sounds like a good thing(as they tend to be kind and warm-hearted), it can have a serious impact on economies and societies.Consider, for example, that in order for a country’s GDP to grow it needs to produce more goods and services each year.With an aging population and more people retiring, fewer are left to work, creating an economic hole.The result is that such countries have to rely on immigration to fill the gap and this is a less-than-desirable solution.Consider also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems and this puts huge pressure on health care and other social programs.In most countries the government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensions, all of which means a big bill someone has to pay for.To be fair, however, we should be careful not to direct our anger towards old people themselves.Old people can still make contributions to society, whether it means helping look after grandchildren, working part time or even doing voluntary work.On an individual level, old people can be a real treasure.To sum up, governments should recognize the challenges of an aging society and take the appropriate action.But in addition to fixing the short-term impact of an older society, they should also look at the bigger picture and do their best so that in the future we have a better age balance.
第四篇：雅思写作高分
雅思写作高分模板分享
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1.NO invention has received more praises and abuses than cars… Now there is a growing awareness over traffic safety.2.Although some people acclaim that… I am still prone to go along with the other side based on the following sound reasons.：
3.To embark on it, it comes as the first problem that...：
4.Should it remain unable to unfold my perspectives, it'll come as reinforcement that…
5.It is indisputable that nowhere in history has...been more visible.As far as I am
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1.Recently the...has been brought into focus...Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.2.As far as I am concerned, an array of integrated factors contributes to the...The first role that should be blamed is...Another equally important factor lies in… Last but not least...：
3.As a matter of fact,...gives rise to a host of problems, such as...Confronted with such a thorny issue, people come up with a variety of constructive countermeasures.Personally, the following are worth recommendation...：
4.When everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, I firmly believe...以上雅思写作高分模板都是以句子为单位进行列举的，这样的话也便于考生们自由的组合，通顺的表达雅思文章的主题思想。
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第五篇：雅思高分写作范文
下面是三个雅思高分写作模板，都是关于选择观点类型的。观点选择类型的雅思写作话题在雅思写作考试中是最常见的一类，对于这类话题，大家一定要准备一个适合自己的雅思写作模板，这样在考试的时候，就可以有备无患的应对了。下面是详细内容。
雅思写作观点选择类型的题目：A or B ,which one do you agree with? Give specific reasons for your answer.(A,B 表示供选择的两种观点。Do C 指题目中提及的某件事情。如：some people prefer A in order to Do C.雅思写作观点选择类型的写作模板：
1、As for the question that which is better, A or B, different people have different opinions.A has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages.In my point of view, I would prefer B.First of all,(1)支持 B 的原因之一。For example,(2)举例说明支持 B 的原因之一。
Another reason is that(3)支持 B 的原因之二。
The third reason, however, goes this way:(4)支持 B 的原因之三。
So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that(5)重申观点。
2、Some people believe A, they point out the fact that(1)人们支持 A 的原因。However, other people believe B.They hold that(2)人们支持 B 的原因。
As far as I’m concerned, I prefer A.As we all know(3)我支持 A 的原因之一。I remember(4)举例说明。
In addition,(5)我支持 A 的原因之二。
On the other hand,(6)从反面论证 A 的优势。
Last but not least,(7)我支持 A 的原因之三。
As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A，such as(8)举例说明 A 的劣势。But these can be compensated by its advantages.3、There are two different views on the matter of DOING C.Some people believe that(1)支持的观点 A.By this , they argue that(2)进一步阐述观点 A.For example,(3)举例说明。
Others hold, on the other hand, that(4)反对的观点 B。
Furthermore,(5)进一步阐述观点 B.For instance,(6)举例说明观点 B。
Considering the views on the two sides, I prefer to put weight to the pros rather than cons.personally,(7)我支持 A 的原因。
以上就是这三个雅思高分写作模板的全部内容，总体来讲就是在雅思观点选择类型的写作中，考生可以选择一种观点进行详细的论述，但是一定不要忘记对两种观点都有所涉及，这样才客观，同时也增加的写作的字数。
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