第一篇：巧用原味英语主张 增效高三写作复习
巧用原味英语主张 增效高三写作复习
【摘要】如何开展高三英语写作复习和帮助学生有效提高英语作文得分一直都是诸多英语教师研究和努力的方向。本文将结合人教版高中英语选修10 Unit 3 I have a dream的教学案例，探讨将“原味英语”的教学主张运用于高三英语写作复习的有效性和可行性。
【关键词】原味英语 教学主张 高三写作
一、引言
英语写作水平一直被视为体现高三学生英语综合运用能力和成就高考英语第二卷成绩高低的重要指标。纵观现今高考英语作文的评分标准，除了高颜值的卷面外，有条理的写作框架、有意义的内容要点、有技巧的地道表达都是高分卷的特质和亮点。
然而近年来大多数英语教师面对高三英语写作复习却往往陷入了一种“不懂教什么只能教范文、不知怎么教总是教不会”的尴尬境地，更别提帮助学生针对全国卷中常见的各类应用文体进行地道写作和流畅表达的指导和点拨。因此，对于大多数高三英语教师而言，开发复习资源和优化写作教学显得越发迫切和重要。为此，笔者将在本文中结合自身的行动研究和教学实例，论述在高三英语写作复习教学中运用“原味英语”教学主张的有效性和可行性。
二、“原味英语”教学主张的内涵和应用价值
“原味英语”的教学主张是近两年由福建高中英语教育界大名鼎鼎的特级教师林枫老师和福建师范大学外国语学院黄远振教授联袂提出并大力倡导的。他们认为，“原味英语”不能如传统理解仅局限于原滋原味的英语材料，它应随着时代和教学的发展而不断更新和完善。因此，“原味英语”的教学主张主要涵盖如下五个方面：原味语言、原味语境、原味教学、原味体验和原味素养。这五个方面在英语教与学的过程中缺一不可，相辅相成。其中，提供自然地道的语言是“原味英语”的基本条件；创设生动真实的语境是“原味英语”的环境需求；开展有效本真的教学是“原味英语”的核心环节；促进快乐积极的体验是“原味英语” 的教学方式；培养广博精深的素养是“原味英语”的教学目标。
“原味英语”的教学主张以它接地气的教育理念和易操作的教学思路已受到了广大教学专家及同行的关注和认可。作为其教学主张的坚定践行者，笔者积极尝试将其应用于高三英语写作复习的教学中。经过一段时间的摸索和研究，笔者发现，“原味英语”的教学主张能够很好地突破目前高三英语写作复习教学中“没教材、教不来”的瓶颈，对高三英语写作的高效复习和有效教学有着深广的应用价值。
三、“原味英语”在高三英语写作复习教学中的应用
1.教学背景与教学目标。不久前笔者接到一个省级观摩课的任务，要求笔者展示一节有关高三英语写作复习的公开课。一接到任务，笔者就着手选材，并最终将课题定为一种常用的应用文写作?D?D“演讲稿”写作。然而在查阅众多试卷中有关“演讲稿”的作文范文后，笔者无助地发现范文中蹩脚的框架结构和中式英语实在不适合作为学生模仿和学习的范本。受到“原味英语”教学主张的启发，笔者将寻觅地道“演讲稿”范例的目光最终定格在人教版高中英语选修10 Unit 3 Using Language中的阅读文本I have a dream上。该文本是美国黑人民权运动领袖马丁?路德?金在1963年8月于美国首都华盛顿所发表的题为《我有一个梦想》的著名演讲的片段。该文本框架规整、语言原味，是一篇非常适合学生反复诵读和模仿学习的优秀演讲稿。
本节课的教学目标在于让学生通过回归课本，重新学习英语演讲稿的写作要求以及写作时三种常见修辞手法（反复、引用和比喻）的精髓和功能，并能大胆运用课上所学，完成一篇题为《我的高中》的演讲稿写作。
2.教学过程与设计说明。
Step 1 Lead-in――开启新课
笔者利用PPT上的一幅照片导入本节课的新话题――“演讲”。
[设计说明]用呈现图片的形式快速导入新课，激活学生已有的背景知识和激发学生对新课的学习兴趣。
Step 2 Pre-writing――原味输入
（1）Set the writing task。学生被告知将作为高三学生代表在下周的周会上发言，故在本节课上要完成一篇100词左右、题为《我的高中》的英语励志演讲稿。
[设计说明]在新课伊始就让学生明确本节课的教学目标和学习任务，为即将展开的“演讲稿”学习和写作做好心理和知识上的准备。
（2）Teach the structure of the speech。笔者通过启发和探究的教学方式让学生掌握“演讲稿”的基本写作框架（开头、主体和结尾），并在PPT上呈现本节课要撰写的《我的高中》的演讲稿的开头和结尾部分。
[设计说明]让学生对英语演讲稿的写作结构有更深的认识。为提高教学的实效性，笔者将写作框架中“开头”和“结尾”部分的文本先给予学生，为学生在接下来的“主体”写作提供更多的时间和必要的学习支架。
（3）Brainstorm the contents of the main body。笔者引领学生通过大脑风暴和小组讨论的形式思考和分享演讲稿――《我的高中》中正文部份的写作要点，并将其归纳为回忆、成长、感恩和祝福等四个方面。
[设计说明]让学生通过“大脑风暴”、“小组讨论”和“分享观点”等学习活动锻炼自身合作探究的能力，以及对发散型和聚拢型思维的培养。
（4）Review the rhetorics in the famous speech。笔者先是让学生重温人教版高中英语选修10 Unit 3中的已学文本I have a dream，让学生从该演讲稿中找出运用到反复、引用和比喻三种修辞手法的句子并学习它们的功能。接着，笔者分别从反复、引用和比喻这三个角度给出在《我的高中》英语演讲稿正文中可能运用到的相关词块，让学生从形态上和口头上感知不同修辞手法的特征和效果。
[设计说明]让学生通过回归已学教材，从熟悉且原味的演讲稿文本中感知反复、引用和比喻这三种修辞手法的句式特征和功用，再通过观察模仿和口头操练，为接下来的写作环节储备必要的句式和表达。
Step 3 Writing――原味输出
笔者要求学生开始动笔进行现场写作，鼓励学生大胆运用本节课所学的反复、引用和比喻这三种英语演讲稿中常用的修辞手法。
[设计说明]让学生通过现场写作巩固本节课所学的修辞要点，培养学生用英语思维和写作的能力。
Step 4 Presentation and peer comments――原味呈现
笔者邀请各小组的发言人上台有感情地朗读他们现场写出的有关《我的高中》的演讲稿正文，要求作为听众的其余学生分别从卷面、句子结构、修辞手法和现场感染力等四个维度认真聆听和评判同伴所写的演讲稿。
[设计说明]让学生感知英语演讲的魅力，感受修辞手法给演讲稿所带来的魔力，体味到合作探究和学以致用的乐趣和成就感。
Step 5 Homework assignment――原味内化
笔者要求学生在课后依据本节课所听所学，润色和完善各自演讲稿。
[设计说明]让学生积极回顾课上所学，改进自身演讲稿的不足，实现从输入到输出的语言习得。
四、感悟和结语
“原味英语”的教学主张在此次高三英语“演讲稿”写作复习课中的应用收获了学生、同行以及专家们的一致认可和广泛好评。课后，笔者积极反思成功教学的经验，得到以下三点教学感悟：
1.巧用教材资源，实现原味输入。本节课笔者摒弃以往高三写作复习教学时拿试卷范文当复习教材的做法，适时回归教材，挖掘教材中的原味语言和原味元素。例如，在本节课中，笔者精心挑选人教版高中英语选修10 Unit 3 I have a dream作为研学文本，引导学生关注其本真地道的语言表达，以及之前学习该文本时不曾特别留意的体现反复、引用和比喻这三种修辞手法的典型词组和句子。笔者对已学课文的再深挖和巧利用，为学生在写作复习的输入阶段提供了有效的原味语言和学习支架。
2.遵循习得规律，实施原味教学。授课教师在本节课中紧紧围绕“演讲稿写作”这个教学主线展开教学，主要设计以下五个环节：Lead-in，Pre-writing，Writing，Presentation and peer comments和Homework。细言之，笔者先是让学生结合先前的学习经验通过小组探讨完成“演讲稿”写作框架的构建，接着引导学生根据自身生活感知对“演讲稿”的写作要点借助大脑风暴和小组讨论的形式进行思考和归纳，再者带领学生回归教材通过鉴赏和分析的方式提炼出该演讲文本中出彩的三种常用修辞。上述从 “框架构建―要点归纳―修辞润色”的原味教学使学生在笔者创设的原味语境中就着由易到难，以旧带新，从说到写的学习梯度，遵循语言学习的基本规律，自然又高效地完成从 “输入―内化―输出”的习得过程。
3.关注学科素养，实行原味体验。《普通高中英语课程标准（实验）》（教育部，2003）指出，英语学科素养不仅是指学生的思辨能力、创新精神和文化意识，更关注学生价值取向和道德品质方面的养成。本节课笔者一方面引导学生在框架感知、大脑风暴、重温课文、操练修辞、现场写作和分享评价等多模态的学习任务链中领悟英语“演讲稿”写作中三种常见修辞手法的精髓。能在高三写作复习指导中大胆引入修辞实为有特色、有深度的教学尝试。此举有别于以往鼓励学生背范文、套句型的生硬做法，有益于鼓励学生多关注得体措辞和个性表达，为提升学生的思辨能力和创新精神提供绝妙的契机，也为高三英语写作复习之“语言润色”部份的教学增添新思路和新技巧。另一方面，笔者在让学生重温和体验完已学课文《我有一个梦想》 中马丁?路德?金原味有力的语言以及对国家及民族的大爱后，结合自身即将毕业离校的学情，完成一篇题为《我的高中》的演讲稿写作，畅谈高中三年的校园生活、活动经历、个人成长和祝福母校等话题。这个写作任务和教学目标旨在激发学生爱校如家、感恩师长的博大情怀，亦凸显出本节课“寓德于教，知情合一”的教学特色。
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[1]中华人民共和国教育部《普通高中英语课程标准》.（实验）[M].人民教育出版社，2003.[2]普通高中课程标准实验教科书英语选修十（学生用书）[M].人民教育出版社，2010.
第二篇：高三英语作文写作复习
Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below.简要描述图片内容，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
范文：
In the picture, a girl is riding a bicycle, but her father is on her right showing the direction, her mother is on her left with a first-aid box and behind her is her granny, who is out of breath.They are all running as they are holding the bicycle.Sweat is falling down from their foreheads.The girl is shouting, “Leave me alone, I can manage.”
Today parents and grandparents tend to worry too much about their children.As an lonely child, I am looked after from head to foot by my parents.But is it necessary for them to do so? No!Indeed, they love me, but I don’t want this kind of love.I need independence more, because independence is important in modern society.Without it, we will not be able to meet challenges in the future.Certainly, I don’t mean that I don’t need my parents’ help, but I want them to help me gain my independence.Dear parents, please understand what we need!
第三篇：高三英语写作
Section C(25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.在生活中，你或者你的朋友都有可能遭遇过这样的尴尬：年长的人不能理解或误解你们这一辈比较流行的文化现象，比如说：“快闪（flash mob）”。请你就此“generation gap”的现象由此展开想像或结合你的实际经历以第一人称写一篇英语短文。内容应包括：1.你的这次被误解的具体经历；
2、你当时的心情；
3、你如何向长辈解释清楚你的“古怪”行为。
注意：
1、词数不少于120；
2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
3、“快闪”只是提供一个例子，你可以自由地选取任何“流行文化现象”进行描述
第四篇：英语写作复习
1．假如你叫李华，你的澳大利亚朋友来信想了解有关北京为迎接2008年奥运会而进行的城市美化工作的情况。请你根据下表内容用英语写一封短信，并欢迎他届时能来北京。
口号：“绿色奥运”
计划投资：122亿美元
美化内容：环境：大面积植树，种草，栽花
环保：使用清洁能源；处理和再利用污水
目标：花园城市；天再蓝些，水再清些
Dear David,How nice to hear from you again.Now let me tell you something about the beautifyingwork on Beijing for the 2008 Olympic Games.Our slogan is ―Green Olympic‖.12.2 billiondollars will be spent on this project.A lot more trees, flowers and grass will be plantedin many places to make Beijing more beautiful.We will use clean energy and try out best to
make waste water clean and reuse it.In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden,with cleaner water and a clearer sky.I look forward to meeting you in Beijing in 2008.Li Hua
2.你叫李红，一周前去香港度假时在一家商店买了一件女上衣，现有质量问题。请结合下面提示向该店
外籍经理写一封英文信。
所购衣物：绿色女上衣，价格268元
问题：洗涤时退色，并说明理由。
要求：退款或换衣，并说明理由。
就此事发表看法或提出建议。
Dear Sir,While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green blouse for 268dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it.When it is washed, thecolor runs.Now I can‘t possibly wear it.It‘s not my fault, so I‘d like you to solve theproblem for me.I insist you change it for another one for me or give me my money back.I
think it‘s better for you to make sure that everything in your shop is good.Then you willhave more customers.I‘m looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely,Li Hong
3.假定你是李明，你收到了下面这封美国的笔有写来的信。请根据来信的内容写一封回信。May 28,2003
Dear Li Ming,I hop you are very well.I‘m glad to tell you that my parents have agreed to let me goto your country this summer.The first city I plan to visit is Beijing, where I will stayfor a week, and then I will go to your city by train to see you and your parents.As wehaven‘t met before, I‘m afraid there will be some difficulty in meeting each other, and I ‘m also afraid that it will not be easy for me to find your house.So please tell me how toget in touch with you while I stay in Beijing and how to meet or find you when I arrive inyour city.Please give my regards to your parents.Best wishes
Jack
June 6th, 2003
Dear Jack,I‘m so happy to learn that you will come to my country and to my home.Let me expressmy warmest welcome to you.My parents insist that I should write back to you as soon aspossible to invite you to our home.You don‘t have to worry about our meeting each other in my city.Now let me tell youwhat to do.When you have got the train ticket for my city in Beijing, please telephone me.My phone number is 0731-8847543.I will go to the station to meet you.When you get out of
the station, you will see me holding up a little board, on which is written ―Welcome, Jack!‖ We will surely meet there.I look forward to seeing you soon.With kind regards to your parents,Li Ming
4.在日常生活中，因特网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示英文为某英文报纸写一篇题为On
the Internet 的征文稿。
因特网的主要用途：
信息：看国内外新闻、获取其他信息
通讯：发e-mail、打电话
学习：上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语
娱乐：欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、晚期排游戏
生活：购物、聊天
On the Internet
The internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the net, wecan learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well.We can
also send messages by E-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds ofbooks and learn foreign languages by ourselves.Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports or
matches and play chess or cards.On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat withothers and make friends with them.In a word, the Internet has made our life more colorful.5.假设你叫王红，于5月7日星期五在学校门口看到两则海报后，决定邀你的好友Harry一起参加其中的一
项活动。你赶到Harry住处时，发现他不在。请根据海报内容给Harry 写一张留言条，要他选择其中的一
项活动并尽快通知你。
Movie –Gone with the Wind
In the School Hall
Sat.Mayp.m.Lecture—Women ‗s Liberation
Speaker: Prof.Power---writer of
The Other Half of the Sky
Date: Sat., 8 May 27, 2005
Time: 7 p.m.Place: Room 10
1Dear Harry,It‘s a pity that you are not in, so have to leave you a note.There are two posters atthe school gate.One is about the movie ― Gone with the Wind‖, which is to be shown at 7Saturday evening in the school hall.The other is about a lecture on women‘s liberation,which is to be given by Prof.Betty Power, writer of the book ― The Other Half of the Sky‖ , at 7 on Saturday evening in Room 101.I‘d like to invite you to either the movie or thelecture, but I wonder which you would prefer.Please let me know your decision as soon aspossible.Wang Hong
6.假如你是李华，你澳大利亚的朋友Johnson来信告知将来北京工作，他打算买一套合适的住房。碰巧你
在报纸上看到了一则售房广告。该房位于市中心，交通十分便利。给Johnson写一封信，介绍住房的情况，以征求意见。
Dear Johnson,Thanks for your letter.I‘m very glad to learn that you‘re coming to Beijing.You sayyou want to by an apartment in Beijing, and here is one for you.The apartment building lies
in the center of the city.It is very convenient for you to travel anywhere from here.Theapartment is made up of six rooms—a living room, a dining room, two bedrooms, a kitchen and
a bathroom.A newly built parking lot lies in front of the apartment building.A lawn andmany trees are around it, which makes the air here very fresh.I‘d like to know your
opinion about the apartment.If you‘re satisfied with it, just telephone me.My telephonenumber is 010-64308389.I‘m looking forward to your reply.Best wishes to you,Yours truly,Li hua
7．假设你是李平，将赴美学习，并已拿到去纽约的机票。请你根据下面你将乘坐的班机起落时间表，写
信告所将到纽约机场接你的美国朋友John.SCHEDULE
FromToFlightDateTimeArrival
BeijingShanghaiCA981June2510:20 AM12:20 PM
ShanghaiLos AngelesCA981June 2513:40 PM10:50 AM
Los AngelesNew YorkCA981June 2514:45 PM19:45 PM
Dear John,I‘ve got my plane ticket to New York, I will take Flight CA981 to New York on June
25th.My plane takes off at 10:20 AM from Beijing Airport.It arrives at Shanghai at 12:20PM and stops for one hour and twenty minutes.Then it continue its flight and lands at LosAngles at 10:50 AM on June 25th.I will have to stay about four hours at Los Angles Airport.Then my plane leaves Los Angles at 14:45 PM.The flight takes five hours and I will finallyget to New York at 7:45 in the evening.I‘m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours
Li Ping
8.下面是一家电子公司刊登在2002年2月6日的China Daily 上的一则招聘广告。假如你是李平，符合该
公司的招聘条件，并对其待遇感到满意，请写一封自荐信。
Part-timeLab Assistant Wanted
Required by busy electronics company to help with the development of computer.Should
have an electronics degree andpractical experience of working in an electronics lab.Should be good at physics and English.Should be in good health.Hours 3:30 pm—5:00pm.Mon.–Fri.Salary: 3520.Letter of application to: Mrs.Chan NOVA
LECTRONICS, 45 GORDON Rd, Hung Hom, Kowloon.NOVA EECTRONICS
Gordon Rd
HungHom, Kowloon
February 8th, 2003
Dear Mrs.Chan,Having seen your advertisement for a part-time lab assistant to help with development of
computer in China Daily, I beg to offer myself for the position.I graduated from the Physics Department of Beijing University with an electronics degree
and I have been working in the electronics lab in Honda Electronics Company in
Guangdong for
five years.I‘m good at physics and both my spoken English and written English are verygood.Besides, I‘m in good health because I like sports very much.I work in my companyfrom 8:00 am to 12:00 am.From Monday to Friday, so I‘m quite able to work in your company
from 3:30 pm to 5:00pm.And I‘m quite pleased with the salary your company offers.Yours sincerely
Li Ping
9.张华在有一个外宾参观团居住的宾馆丢失了一个方形的棕色手提箱，箱内有收音机、照相机个一台、三卷胶卷、两件衬衣、一张从深圳去纽约的飞机票和一本电影杂志。请你为他用英语协议则寻物启示，并
写明：如有拾到者，请马上与他联系，他的电话号码时0755-3319582，他将不胜感激。
Lost
I wonder if I can get some help from you.I left my case in this hotel today.My case issquare and brown in color.Inside the case, there is a radio, a camera, three rolls of filmand two shirts.I also have a movie magazine and a plane ticket from Shenzhen to New York in
it.Will the finder please get in touch with me at once? My telephone number is 0755-3319582.I will be very thankful.Zhang Hua
10.你是黎明。请以为题，向英文报纸写一封信，批评子女虐待老人，老人死后却又花钱大*大办丧事的不良社会风气。信的开头部分已经写好，要求根据下面的要点提示将信补全
1．二自虐待老人的事例：在住、吃、治病方面各举一例；
2．老人死后儿子花钱大办丧事的事例：2-3例。
Big Funeral Is Too Late
Dear editor:
Grandma Li was my neighbor, who died last month.The old lady had three sons.All ofthem had grown up and got married, but none of them wanted to take care of her.They let her
live in a small dark room.They gave her little food.When she got ill, they refused to takeher to hospital.But to my surprise, the old lady‘s sons spent a lot of money on her funeral.The
funeral lasted several days, and scores of cars and trucks were used on the day when the old
lady was buried.What is the use of such a big funeral for the old lady? It is too late for her.We
should take care of old parent s while they are alive instead of spending so much money onthem when they are dead.
第五篇：高三英语写作好句
高三英语写作好句
◆ 名词从句
① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.②◆（非限制性）定语从句
① The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→
② It was quite an experience for us both,◆ 分词结构
① I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending ② We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people.③ Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.④ Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.◆ with结构
①② ◆ It句型
① It will be + some time + before…
It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.（2008年湖北卷）③ It is + 被强调部分 + that…
1)It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2)Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.◆ more …than any other 表示最高级
Among the optional courses, spoken English and computer study are more popular than any one else.◆ 倒装句
① The library is to the east of the teaching building.→
② Although we are tired, we are happy.→
③上海卷)
④ May all your dreams come true!May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!（2007年湖南卷）◆ 被动语态
① Opinions are divided on the question.(NMET 2002)
② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.(2004全国卷 Ⅳ)③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.(2004 江苏卷)
◆ 巧妙的改写
（1）．Only 改成no one but
Only Tom passed the exam last week.→ No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）．as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/Themoment No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.（3）．have sb/sth do/done
The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken(her leg was broken.).（4）．变换插入语的位置
① However, they suggest fees should be charged low.→
They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.(NMET 2002)
② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.→This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.(2004 全国卷Ⅰ)
(5).用同位语代替非限制性定语从句
Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→
Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.（2008年湖南卷）
◆ 其它
（1）注重句子的开头
① 用with复合结构开头
With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems.（2006年湖南卷）
With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.（2009年江苏卷）
② 用非谓语动词形式开头
ⅰ）In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.ⅱ）Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.（2）长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）
No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best to learn it..Nothing can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations.As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't say a word.There is no denying(the fact)that the new management method has greatly increased the production.It is often said that..我们经常这么说……
It goes without saying that...毫无疑问……
It can be easily proved that...……很容易被证明。
One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is...与以上一点同样重要的是…
I am for the opinion that…我支持……
The chief reason why...is that...之所以……的主要原因是……
To take...for an example(instance)...把……作为一个例子
According to a latest study, it can be predicted that...最近的研究预测……
Another special consideration in this case is that..关于这件事还有一点值得考虑，那就是……
This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to..这也许对，但关于……我们仍然有一个问题。Besides, we should not neglect that...另外，我们不应该忽视……
Therefore, these findings reveal the following information that...因此，这些发现揭示了以下信息…… On account of this we can find that...据此我们可以发现……
Wonderful as A is, it has its own disadvantages too.尽管A很优秀，但它也有自身的缺陷。
Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned.在所有可信赖的理由中，有一个值得一提…… Currently there is a widespread concern that...目前，对于……普遍关注。
There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but...might be helpful.关于解决……没有快速的办法，但……可能会有作用。
All available evidence points to the fact that...所有的证据证明……
No one can deny the fact that...没人能否定……这个事实。
Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that...考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以做出这样的结论……
强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。
It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.It was then that I realized the importance of English.◆倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。
Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.◆with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。
With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits
He always likes to sleep with the windows open.◆巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。
Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking.(低级形式：When he heard that, ……)
◆恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。
Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。
◆感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ……”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此改造。
How terrible I felt today!I failed again in the math exam.◆高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。
We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.◆进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。
I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.◆婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。
I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.◆what引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。
What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it.◆“数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词”。
As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests
◆适当加一些不关痛痒的插入语：一些连词、副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, what’s more等，有时可以考虑几个插入语连用，就更像英美人士的文章了。
◆独立主格：将主从句去掉连词，前句动词变为分词即可。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.◆把简单句改成复合句：适当的时候把两个简单句改成“too….to…”或者“so…that…”等高级一点的复合句。例如： I was very tired.I couldn’t keep up with them.我们可以改成：I was so tired that I couldn’t keep up with them.或：I was too tired to keep up with them.这样一来，英语基础不是很好的学生只要能够写出最基本的句子，然后再对这些句子进行加工、改造、润色，慢慢的，就会让句子靓起来，在高考中就可以得到比较满意的成绩。
许多否定句不含not的否定结构。如果考生能正确使用他们，就会增加写作的闪光点，使文章显得生动活泼。
1、Instead of indulging in playing computer games, children should be taught how to benefit from useful information on the internet.应该教孩子们如何从互联网获取有益的信息，而不是沉溺于玩电脑游戏。
2、On no account(Under no circumstances)can we ignore the immense value of knowledge.我们绝不能忽视知识的巨大价值。
3、College students take part-time jobs not for more money but for a better understanding of societies.大学生参加兼职工作不是为了赚更多钱，而是为了更好地了解社会。
4、One’s salary does not depend so much on his educational background as on his ability and contribution to the society.一个人的工资与其说取决于他的教育背景倒不如说取决于他的能力和对社会的贡献。
5、In terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory.从营养角度来说，快餐远非令人满意。
6、Parents would not expect their children to become useful persons without working hard.父母们不能指望孩子们不经过刻苦努力就可以成才。
二、非限制性定语从句
如果需要对前述的整个句子内容进行解释或说明，就可以用到非限制性定语从句。
1、Undoubtedly, practical courses can be used to the reality, which is of vital importance to their development in the future.毫无疑问，实用性课程可以用于实际中，这对于他们未来发展是非常重要的。
2、Children tend to imitate what they have seen and heard on mass media, which is sometimes dangerous and harmful.孩子们倾向于模仿大众媒体上的所见所闻，这在有时是危险和有害的。
3、The majority of students believe that part-time jobs will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力, 这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的.三、让步句
让步句是写议论文最常用的句式之一，考生务必掌握以下4种用法，可以使英文句子起伏跌宕，富于变化。
1、This view is widely acknowledged；however，there is little evidence that smoking is beneficial to people’s health.这个观点被广泛认可，然而，几乎没有证据表明吸烟对人们健康有利。
2、Although(While, Even though)the computer has been widely used in class, it cannot replace the role of teachers.尽管计算机已经广泛用于课堂，但是它不能取代教师的作用。
3、Reasonable(Plausible)as the opinion sounds, it cannot bear much analysis.虽然这个观点听起来有道理，但是它经不住分析。
4、In spite of(Despite)a lot of conveniences that cars bring to people’s life, they can create a series of serious problems.尽管汽车给人们的生活带来了许多便利，但是也产生了一系列严重的问题。
四、It引导的句子
It引导的句子是写作中使用频率最高的句式。考生应熟练掌握其用法，并能灵活运用到文章的开篇、主体段和结尾段中。
1、It is hard to imagine what our life would look like without computers in modern society.很难想象如果现代社会没有了计算机，我们的生活会变成什么样子。
2、It is conceivable(imaginable)that being physically active(taking an active part in physical training)does good to health.可想而知，积极参加体育活动有利于身体健康。
3、It is a highly controversial issue whether women should join the armed forces or not.女性是否应该参军是一个非常有争议的问题。
4、It is universally(widely, generally, commonly)acknowledged that water and air are indispensable to human beings.人们普遍认为，水和空气对人类不可缺少。
5、It is essential that endangered species of animals be protected against being killed.保护濒危的动物物种免遭残杀是必需的。
6、It is high time that the government took effective measures to resolve these problems.该是政府
采取有效措施来解决这些问题的时候了。
7、It has been made easier for modern people to communicate with each other by the internet in a few seconds.现代人很容易通过互联网在几秒钟内就取得联系。
8、It is worth caring about the way a child behaves.关心孩子们的行为方式是值得的。
9、It is no use crying over the spilt milk.覆水难收。
10、It has been a few decades since the computer came into being.自从计算机问世以来已经有几十年的时间了。
五、假设句& 倒装句
假设句可分为真实假设句和非真实假设句两种。常用在主体段落表示正、反论证。
1、If we destroy old buildings, then we will ruin the traditional culture and heritage.如果我们推倒老房子，就要破坏传统的文化和遗产。
2、You would miss the chance to interact with other students if you used internet at home.假如你在家上网，你就会失去与其他同学交流的机会。
3、Once you change your present job, you will be faced with the danger of being unemployed.一旦你变换了现在的工作，就面临着失业的危险。
六、倒装句
在写作中恰当和准确地使用倒装句，有助于句子表达形式的多样化，使语言更加生动有力。
1、Only in this way can the problem be tackled properly.只有这样才能妥善地解决这个问题。
2、Only when children take arduous efforts can they become successful.只有当孩子们付出艰苦的努力他们才能获得成功。
3、Not only does studying in school serve academic purpose, but students learn how to handle interpersonal relations.在校学习不仅为了学术目的，而且还可以学会如何处理人际关系。
4、Under no circumstances should youngsters follow negative information on mass media blindly.青少年决不应当盲从大众媒体上的不良信息。
5、So valuable is water that we cannot afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
6、Nowadays, most dangerous for youngsters is the tendency to indulge in playing PC games.如今对青少年最为危险的事情是倾向于过多地玩电脑游戏。
七、强调句
写作时为了突出句子的某一成分，常常使用强调句。
1、It is for the benefit of maintaining the ecological balance that human beings ought to protect the endangered animal species.正是为了维持生态平衡，人类才应该保护地球上濒危的动物物种。
2、It is not until people suffer from some fatal diseases such as SARS and AIDS that they are becoming aware of how significant it is for the government to invest more money in medical care.直到人们患了像非典和爱滋病这样致命的疾病时，才意识到政府把更多的钱投入到医疗
上的重要性。
3、Nothing in the world is more valuable than health.世界上没有比健康更重要的了。
4、International tourism does promote mutual understanding between people from different countries.5、This is the very advantages brought by computers.6、Under no circumstances can we neglect the immense value of education in one’s life.7、One cannot emphasize the importance of education too much.8、It is no exaggeration to say that computers are of vital importance to human’s lives.八、比较句
正确地使用比较结构可以使文章的句式增加变化，有利于提高写作成绩。
1、Studies show that juvenile delinquency rates are twice as high for youngsters from single-parentfamilies as for those in traditional households.（同级比较）研究表明来自单亲家庭的青少年犯罪率是来自传统家庭的两倍。
2、Generally speaking, people in modern times enjoy less leisure time than they did previously.（比较级）一般说来，现代人比过去享有更少的休闲时间。
3、Compared with those with different abilities, children with intelligence do more well in their school work and intelligence tests.与不同能力的孩子相比，聪明的孩子在学业和智力测验方面表现更加突出。
4、Contrary to(In contrast to, Unlike)pop stars, other professionals like doctors and teachers create the true value for their society.与明星不同，其他专业人员如医生和教师为社会创造了真正的价值。
5、Air is to human what(as)water is to fish.空气对人类就如同水对鱼一样。
九、插入语
插入语是对一句话做一些附加说明或解释。最常见的位置于句中,一般用逗号或破折号与句子隔开。用得恰当，不仅可以增加字数，而且使文章更显地道和精彩。
1、Computers, most important of all, create wide communication around the world.最重要的是，计算机在世界范围
内建立了广泛的交流。
2、Providing more parking areas, in the long run, has proved to be a practical way out in many
large cities in the world.从长远的利益来看，提供更多的停车位证明是许多世界大城市切实可行的出路。
3、Observing local culture, consciously and unconsciously, can reduce the chance of offending the locals, or it will lead to the embarrassment and even conflict.无论是否意识到，遵循当地的文化可以减少冒犯当地人的机会，否则，就会导致尴尬甚至冲突。
十、原因句
几乎所有的写作试题都要求写原因或者可以写原因。议论文的讲道理实际就是说明原因。因此，掌握好表达原因的结构是十分重要的。
1、Violent films can do harm to young people, because they contains numerous negative information.暴力影片对年轻人是有害的，因为其中包含大量负面信息。
2、Human beings are chiefly responsible for wild animal extinction.野生动物灭绝的主要责任在人类。
3、We should attribute(ascribe)medical advances to the animals which do substantial contributions to the experiment.我们应该把医学的发展归因于动物对实验做出的巨大贡献。
4、Because of overpopulation, water shortage has become one of the most serious problems.由于人口过剩，水短缺已经成为一个最严重的问题。
5、Owing to the fierce competition in today’s world, a great many young people find themselves under great pressure.由于当今世界的激烈竞争，大量的年轻人承受巨大的压力。
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