如何写出高分的高考英语作文

第一篇：如何写出高分的高考英语作文

如何写出高分的高考英语作文？

本人高三党，现在英语成绩是130+，不过考砸的时候就剩120+了。英语作文每次分数都是19/20，感觉还有提高空间，想问一下该如何进一步提高到22/23。（这样总分上140就大有希望）感觉每次老师给出的范文写的都特别的简单，这样的文章真的能拿23/24分吗？

给大家举个例吧，2014年的全国2卷，如果写这篇作文的话如何拿高分。

（最受不了的是我们这里居然考应用文啊，名人名言、托福句型神马都用不上啊~~~）条评论 分享

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我一直相信，在讲解一个题之前，我们要先去看它在高考的考察点和得分点是什么，有针对性的下手最省时省力（我并不反对想提高英语素养的孩子，以后我也会写如何提高英语素养这类答案，这里不做阐释）。写作文也是一样，我们得先了解一下高考作文的考察点在哪里。

从五三的统计结果来看（我很喜欢五年高考三年模拟这本书），全国卷基本都是提纲类作文（曾经考过一次表格类作文，暂且不提），所以我这篇也只说题纲类作文该怎么写。

说了这么多废话，那到底什么是提纲类作文呢？？提纲类作文，就是题干中先给我们个写作背景，然后列出几点汉语/英文提示（也就是提纲）。考生根据题目中的背景和提示的内容，再加上部分补充，最后写成的作文。

我之前一直说，除了短文改错之外，全卷最容易提分的就是作文，而且哪怕只剩下一个月了，补作文也是可以快速提分的。作文，尤其是高考作文，确实有一些技巧拿分点，只要做到了，判卷老师也不好意思给低分的。

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在这里，我先插几个需要强调的地方～ 1.本篇所写内容都是针对全国卷作文来答的，其他自主命题省市可能会和全国卷体裁不同，可以参考，但是还是要准备适合本省的作文策略。

2.考试的时候我们写多少词比较恰当呢？一般来说，比要求的字数多30～50字是比较好的，比如100词的作文应该写到130～150词。要求120词的就写到150～180词酱紫。

3.作文的内容要不要写的很有主见很有思想呢？？答，千万不要，这是一种作死行为。思想这个东西，根本不是高考英语作文的给分点，写的越简单直白、积极向上就越好。咱们自己发挥的内容，思想高与不高，对得分基本没啥影响。但是呢，一般学生都是想的很复杂，根本不会翻译，想的越复杂，写出来的越差，硬写出来的东西基本自己和老师都看不懂，违背了自己表达思想的初衷不说，还得不到分。所以说，千万不要因为自己一时想表达什么思想就作死，不得分就不划算，也没必要。

好啦，开始讲方法，还是先写导航吧～～～

一、高考作文得分点分析

1、内容分-7分

2、结构分-6分

3、词句分-6分

4、卷面分-6分

二、【结构分】提分方法

（一）完美的段落分配

（二）顺畅的连词

三、【词句分】提分方法

（一）变换句型——中心主语法

（二）10个最好用的替换单词

四、【卷面分】提分方法

（一）偏旁部首练字法

（二）如何做到卷面工整

～～～～～～～～我为正文分界线～～～～～～～～

我对学生们只有两类标准要求，一是得高分（21～25分），二是达到优秀（16～20分）。平时120分左右的孩子请大胆冲高分档～

首先贴上〖高考作文得分点〗（非官方，官方评分标准和实际阅卷情况有一定出入）

好了，有了评分标准之后就好办多了～

一、作文得分标准分成四个部分～

1、【内容分】（7分），内容分也叫要点分，也就是题目给的所有信息都写全、不要漏点，没有反社会言论，就可以拿7分了。【想拿高分和优秀的孩子千万不要漏点！！一定要检查再检查，内容分扣分是很夸张的，漏一个大要点直接扣10分，也就是降两档处理（阅卷老师会怀疑我们提前背了与考试无关的作文去考场写），漏一个小要点也要扣2分了】

2、【结构分】（6分），结构分包括（1）段落分配和（2）连词的运用。我们平时背的那些模板，其实就是在帮我们梳理结构，背下模板，拿到结构分满6分是非常非常正常的～～所以，我非常鼓励大家背模板～～（结构写的灰常棒，比模板还好的娃请折叠我）后面结构分我会重点说。

3、【词句分】（6分），词句分，顾名思义，是指运用„‟准确的单词+优秀多变的句型„‟得到的分数。词句这一块是整个作文最难的部分，考察的是学生的基本功，6分满分非常难得，但是拿2～4分还是相当容易的。优秀和高分的分水岭就在词句分上～

4、【卷面分】（6分），卷面一是字迹工整美观，二是不能涂改（所以一定要打草稿啊）。这两个都达到了，卷面满分6分妥妥拿到～ ［我对大家的要求就是，想拿高分，卷面请不要扣分！！在这里扣分非常不划算，要用好几个准确的单词和高级语法才能换回来。］

二、【结构分】提分方法

（一）完美的段落分配

前文已经说过，全国卷是提纲类作文，当拿到一个提纲作文时，我们首先要干嘛呢？对咯，就是要根据背景和提示内容分段。我和其他老师一致认为，高考作文分成三段来写最清晰简单、容易得到结构分。所以为了节省空间，我就直接说一下如何把题干写成三段式作文了哈。

三段式作文请按照下图结构来写～

我解释一下图片哈～我们总是说，英语作文需要长短句搭配，但是很多人不是很清楚怎样才算是长短句搭配，怎样分配长短句，所以我就写了上面这张图片。我算了一下，130个词大概是8句话左右（150词就是9～10句），图片就是130个词、8句话最好的段落和长短句分配模式了。『如果你有更好的长短句分配方案，欢迎和我讨论～』

【第一段】 我们可以分成两句，一长一短，其中长句写题干中交代的背景，短句为过渡句或是补充长句观点。

〖例题〗2015全国I卷，题干中给的背景如下，［假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗 和中学生生活的短文，请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下...］

根据题干所给背景，我们可以把第一段分成一长一短两句话来写，其中短句原题已给出，［I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.我希望你可以为我们学校英文报写篇文章］，这句话已经提出了约稿和英文报，那么我们再加一句长句，就需要包含题干中的剩余所有背景了，那么我们就可以这样写［The topic of this column are American customs and the life of American high school studwnt.这个栏目的话题是“美国节日风俗”和“中学生生活”］

【第二段】第二段是作文中中心段，我们要分成四句话（一短+三长）来写。

那么我们第二段到底写什么内容呢？一般来说，提纲类作文会有三个左右的提示，我们要选出其中最重要，可以分点论述的提示，放在第二段，『如，活动的3个具体内容、造成某个现象的3个原因、对某事提出的3个意见和看法等』；

〖例题〗2015年北京卷，题目中所给要点如下［邮件内容包括：1.介绍训练营相关的内容，如时间、地点、参加者等；2.说明你打算参加的原因；3.询问对方的意向］

根据题干所给信息，第2个提示要求我们写原因，应该是最重要的题干信息，这个时候我们就应该把第2个提示放在第二段进行分点论述。剩下的第1个提示则放在第一段，第3个提示放在第三段。

【第三段】结尾段应该写一长一短两句话，其中长句表达自己的观点，短句写个升华句。

作为结尾段，我们需要在这段表达积极向上的人生态度，所以一般来说要用一个长句子表达个人观点，『我认为、我希望、我建议、我感谢、我期待....』短句部分需要升华感情，所以最好用的句式就是感叹句、谚语、倒装句这三种，既可以升华感情又能加词句分～

（二）顺畅的连词

我一直要求学生作文里每句话都要加上过渡词，然后好多学生就和我说，老师~我写了太多过渡词，看起来就很像模板，判卷老师会不会因此觉得我很low啊，，23333～这点大家就不用担心了，连词可以放心使劲用，最好每句都用（当然前提是使用正确），外国人写作文和中国人最大的区别就是他们每句话都有比较强的逻辑性（1是语法更严谨、2是过渡连接词灰常多）。没有任何判卷老师会因为我们文章的结构清晰而扣结构分，只有不用过渡词才会扣分！！

这里我只给几个过渡词，足够我们用了，如果你有更习惯的一套连词也可以用自己的，没问题～

(1)两个方面：

For one thing,….For another,…..On the one hand,….On the other hand,..(2)三个方面：

First and foremost,… Additionally/ Besides/ What's more,… Last but not least,…(3)四个方面：

To begin with,… Besides,….What‟s more,….Finally,…(4)换个话题：

By the way,…（顺便一说，…）Similarly/ Certainly，…（同样/当然，…）(5）活动过程：

To begin with(一开始),… Then(然后),… After that(之后),… Finally(最后),…

【注】先把（2）三个方面的连词记住或是抄在纸上。

好了，以上分段部分全部掌握，连接词背下来，多多练习，相信你们可以拿到6分结构分。那我们接下来就进入作文中最难 得分 的部分～～

三、【词句分】提分方法

（一）变换句型——中心主语法

好多人都说自己不会写作文，尤其是句子不知道怎么写。据我观察，学生们并不是整篇文章的句子都不会写，一般来讲，大家首段和尾段写的都不错，都有自己的固定套路，最主要的还是第二段不会写。

也就是说，第一段和第三段基本上都可以提前准备模板，背熟练好之后带进考场；第二段就需要在考场上根据提示内容来发挥了。所以我在这里重点讲解第二段怎么写，（关于第一段和第三段的模板我还在想要不要放在答案里～）前文说过，第二段的句子最佳分配为，1个短句（主题句）+3个长句（要点句）。短句我就不说了，也要用模板句式，那么第二段我们自己发挥的三个长句子应该如何写呢？？？

大家首先要记住，长句子（也就是高分作文要求的复杂的句式），是由三部分组成的，包括

（一）连接词部分、（二）主干部分、（三）补充部分。

请看下图

我来解释一下上图。我把每个长句子都分成了三部分，包括连接词、主干句和补充句。

【连词】连接词部分我们在前文已经背过了，按照顺序写就可以了。

【主干句】说到主干句，就不得不提我自创（没错，我又自创了…）的一个造句方法，中心主语法！！

什么意思呢？？？就是我们在写主干句时，首先要确定主语是谁，进而决定写什么句式（而不是先想句式）。我们早就知道，主语（名词）无非分成三类，人/事/物。

以人做主语的句子就是主动句，『如』I'm good at oral English and I won the first prize in last year's speech contest.以物做主语的句子就是被动句，『如』The Changjiang River has been affected.以事儿做主语的句子就是主语从句或动名词做主语的句子，『如』Watching TV too much is bad for our eyes.关于这三个主语的顺序，是可以调换顺序的。

【补充句】我们如果想写出三个复杂的长句子，那么每句话除了中心主干部分外，还应该写一句补充句，这样句式才会复杂，符合第一档评分标准。

那么补充句怎么写呢，其实很简单，只要在主干句后面，加一些原因/结果/定语从句进去就可以了。参考刚刚那张图片，已经写的很清楚了～～

（二）10个最好用的替换单词

基本上在还有一个月高考这个时候，我们想要提高自己的词汇输出水平已经不可能了，但是我们还有作文高频词这个东西啊，这些词基本上我们写作文都会用到，只要把它们替换成高级单词，词句分就可以妥妥拿到了吖～～～

写作高频词，10个已列出，拜托大家至少每个替换词背下来一两个，以后，那些简单的高频词就不要再写了……多为自己挣词句分～～

（1）should Sb ought to do sth.Sb be supposed to do sth.Why not do sth? It is beneficial for you to do sth.If I were you, I would do sth.如果我是你，我就会怎么做。（虚拟语气）It is high time that sb did sth.真的到了某人该做某事的时间了。

（2）want sb plan to do sth.sb would like to do sth.sb can‟t wait to do sth.sb desire to do sth.渴望做某事。

sb has a great desire to do sth.渴望做某事

（3）like sth

sb be fond of sth/doing sth.喜欢… sb is crazy about sth/doing sth.为…而疯狂 sb fall in love with sth.sb爱上sth。

（4）good great / wonderful excellent棒极了的，极好的 fantastic棒极了的，极好的 brilliant棒极了的，极好的 fabulous棒极了的，极好的 superb棒极了的，极好的 terrific 棒极了的，极好的 meaningful 有意义的 educational 有教育意义的（5）beautiful

attractive 吸引人的，迷人的 appealing* 吸引人的，迷人的 fascinating* 吸引人的，迷人的

（6）difficult

challenging 有挑战性的

（7）important

vital 重要的，必不可少的 significant* 至关重要的 essential* 必要的（8）we

We teenagers….我们青少年…

We middle school students…我们中学生… We English learners …我们英语学习者…

（9）In my opinion,…

From my perspective,… 从我观点看来… From my point of view,..从我观点看来… As far as I am concerned,… 就我而言 Personally,… 在我看来,…

（10）very extremely 极端地 surprisingly 令人惊讶地

好啦，上面的一定要背啊，词句分请尽量拿到3～5分，我只能帮大家这么多啦～～～

四、【卷面分】提分方法

我对想拿高分和优秀的学生对于卷面的要求都是全6分，不要扣卷面分，真的不划算，而且这一块也非常容易提高分数～看一下其他答案大家就知道卷面多重要了，那我不说废话了，开始练字环节～～（已经练成印刷体，或不屑于印刷体的孩子直接忽略以下部分，本篇不讨论印刷体是否优于其他字体的问题～）

（一）偏旁部首练字法

从来没想过要教大家怎么练字，因为我写的也不是标准印刷体～～不过好像有好多学生宁愿不要那6分卷面分，也不愿意练字，我还是多说两句吧。

为什么许多孩子在其他题型上，一分两分锱珠必较，作文这里就不当回事儿了？是觉得写字难看不会扣分么？？还是觉得练字浪费时间而且困难呢？？于是我琢磨着，有没有有效又快速的印刷体练字法，遂写了下面两张图，自创了一个最快的速度练成印刷体的方法。

1、四种偏旁部首 虽然英语只有26个字母，比中文好写一万倍，但是每次收上来的作业还是让我觉得惨不忍睹。要求学生对着印刷体写，但是很多人还是习惯性的写出歪七咧八的瘦高体。我觉得印刷体写不好，最主要的原因是没有领悟印刷体的精髓。那么印刷体的精髓是什么呢？四个字，『一笔一划』，比如我们写a、写b、写p...有没有分成两笔来写，既然决定要写手写印刷体，就要强迫自己忘记头脑中已有的写法。练印刷体的前提就是，不可以连笔！！

在这里，我把英文字母拆成了偏旁部首，各个偏旁之间不可以连笔哦～首先请大家花五分钟时间把下表的偏旁部首练好，写漂亮～

大家应该练得差不多了吧，23333，那我在这里再解释一下～～我把英语的偏旁分成四类。分别是【圆】、【竖】、【折】、【勾】，因为手写印刷体是不能连笔的，如果想把整个字母写的好看，前提是每一个笔画都要符合标准。

2、字母练习

好啦，如果练熟四种偏旁了就可以练26个字母了～如图

现在，每个字练出来之后，可能写起来会比较慢，整体效果大概也不是特别好。所以建议下面的事情～

（1）平时写字很难看的孩子，请在高考之前一直用四线英语本写英语（包含且不限于作文），横线可以强迫自己把字写的高低一致（单线本也是可以的，可以手动画横线）。

（2）考试的时候记得拿个尺子、铅笔和橡皮。就在给出来的横线上面轻轻画一条线，作文誊写完之后再把画线擦掉就是了（摆脱不要把纸搓破了）。

（3）实在不推荐字帖，印刷体真心不需要字帖，浪费时间又效果不大，我们就一笔一划的写吧，比什么字帖都管用的。

（4）练字就是这样的，前两天写的慢，第三天开始就会越来越快越来越顺，所以不要嫌弃平时这样写字浪费时间，平时不练习就想在考试写工整才是浪费时间。Anyway，英语才26个字母，很容易就可以练出来的，如果可以的话，希望各位都不要放弃卷面分。

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【补】以下与高考写作无关，只是想根据收到的部分私信说点自己的看法。 不要太多的质疑为什么，高中生还不够成熟到可以独立质疑高考存在的意义。

 为什么努力到了120分之后就再也看不到进步了呢？

各位真的不要太慌乱，连减肥都有平台期，更何况英语呢～～首先，英语成绩是跳跃性进步的，这个月每次都是120分，题目难一点也许才110，但是每天坚持背单词和刷题，下个月也许就上130了。

当我们词汇量越来越大，理解力越来越强，读文章越来越享受而不是痛苦的时候，怎么能说自己没有进步呢？这个渐进的过程也许不体现在成绩上，但是肯定会潜移默化的影响自己，何况着急也没太大用，安心学习吧。 老师你这答题速度，我看的都醉了。请问之后你要答什么啊？

预计是全国卷听力吧（广东听说已经考完了，我暂时先不答了哈）。之后应该会写语填和阅读，但是我更新的这么龟速，你们不要等我了，先去刷题可好～～  至于每天用多少时间学英语的问题，这个看个人精力如何了，毕竟英语有150分也不少了，每天用的时间应该是比数学少，比语文多吧～～

 还有50天高考，各位加油，有问题请私信/留下评论（可能回复会比较晚）～～

第二篇：高考英语作文高分

英语作文模板

第一类：观点对比

模板一：

The topic about … is becoming more and more popular in our school recently.There are two sides of opinion about it.Some students prefer to consider doing sth.(Some students say … is their favorite.)they think that…(理由一).What’s more，…(理由二)。Moreover，…(理由三)

However，others believe … is a better choice for three reasons.(然而，其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择，有三个方面的理由)to begin with，…(理由一)。Next。In addition，…

From my point of view，the former is surely a wise choice.The reason is that…(或者用：As far as I am concerned，I firmly support the view that…(依我来看，我坚决支持这种观点… that引导同位语从句)

模板二：

There is a widespread concern over the issue that(作文题目)。But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that 观点一。In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows： in the first place，原因一.Furthermore，in the second place，原因

二。So it goes without saying that 观点一。

People，however，differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that 观点二。In their point of view，on the one hand，原因一。On the other hand，原因二。Therefore，there is no doubt that 观点二。

As far as I am concerned，I firmly support the view that 观点一或二。It is not only because，but also because。The more，the more。

第二类：好处与坏处的对比

模板一：

In recent years，…… has been popular.There are many advantages in…… First，…… Second，…… Third，……

However，there’re some disadvantages.……(之一)。Besides，……(之二)。Also，……(之三)

In my opinion，it is true that advantages are more than disadvantages.(依我看，的确是好处多于坏处)I think…… One big advantage of … is that…。/ One obvious advantage of … is …。/ Finally，…

While it is true that … has many advantages，andit is also important to realize that…。(虽然某事确实有许多好处，但是意识到…也很重要。

第三类：问题与建议

（第一段 提出问题）In recent days，we have to face a problem that……近来，我们面临这样一个问题，就是(that同从)。

（第二段：解决办法：）With the help of modern technology，we now have many means to solve it.By doing ……，we can……What’s the most important is that……

（第三段：结论：）In a word，it is clear / obvious that…… Only when……can we ……。

第四类：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法

模板：1.有一些人认为… 2.另一些人认为… 3.我的看法…

The topic of ①____________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②____________(支持A的理由一)What is more，③(理由二)。Moreover，④_____________(理由三)。

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly，_________(支持B的理由一)。Secondly(besides)，⑥______________(理由二)。Thirdly(finally)，⑦_____________(理由三)。

From my point of view，I think ⑧__________(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨__________(原因)。As a matter of fact，there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me，the former is surely a wise choice。

第五类：给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①____________(观点一)。For example，they think ②___________(举例说明).And it will bring them ③_______________(为他们带来的好处)。

In my opinion，I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing，④__________(我不同意该看法的理由一)。For another thing，⑤____________(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said/In a word/In conclusion，I agree to the thought that ⑥__________(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).第六类：解决方法题型

模板：要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径：1。问题现状;2。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)。

In recent days，we have to face a problem A，which is becoming more and more serious.First，_________(说明A的现状).Second，___________(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A，we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing，_____________(解决方法一)。For another thing ____________(解决方法二)。Finally，______________(解决方法三)。

Personally，I believe that ____________(我的解决方法)。Consequently，I‘m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________(带来的好处)明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1。说明事物现状;2。事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);3。你对现状(或前景)的看法。

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally，its advantages can be seen as follows.First _________(A的优点之一)。Besides ___________(A的优点之二)。

But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that _______________(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse，_______________(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis，I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore，I would like to _______________(我的看法).From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A，we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way，(对前景的预测).)

第三篇：高考英语高分作文技巧

高中英语高分作文技巧

一．高级词汇

1．occur 替换 think of Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.→ An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2．devote替换spend He spends all his spare time in reading.→ He devotes all his spare time to reading.3．seek替换want / look for They sought(wanted)to hide themselves behind the trees.4．average 替换ordinary I’m an average(ordinary)student.5．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting.→ The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring.6．seat 替换sit On his way to school, he found an old lady seated(sitting)by the road, looking worried.7．suppose 替换should He is supposed to(should)have driven more slowly.8．appreciate 替换thank Thank you very much for you help.→

We appreciate your help very much./ Your help is much appreciated.9．the case替换 true I don’t think it is the case(true).10．on替换as soon as As soon as he arrived, he began his research.→ On his arrival, he began his research.11．due to替换because of He arrived late due to(because of)the storm.12．cover替换walk/read After covering(walking)10 miles, we all felt tired.13．contribute to替换 be helpful/useful Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14．round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby ① The summer vacation is round the corner(coming).Do you have any plans? ② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner(nearby).15．come to light替换discover The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels.→

The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16．have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself After visiting the workshop, we went back to school.Every one of us had a ball(had a good time).17．come up with替换think of Jack is very clever.He often comes up with(thinks of)new ideas.18．set aside替换save Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.19．be of + n.替换adj.The products are of high quality(very good)and are sold everywhere in China.20．refer to 替换talk about/of, mention The professor you referred to(talked about)is very famous.21．can not but / can not help but替换have to do I could not but(had to)go home.22．more often than not替换usually More often than not(Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.23．lest替换so that /in order that I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it.→

I wrote down his telephone number lest I(should)forget it.24．be long for sth./be long to do sth.替换want to do sth./wish for I want to see you very much.→ I am long to see you.25．be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in He is caught up in(very interested in)collecting stamps.26．more than替换very ① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.→

I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.27．perfect(ly)替换good/ very well He speaks perfect(good)English./ He speaks English perfectly(very well).28．do sb a/the favor 替换help Would you please do me the favor(help me)to turn down the radio?

29．the other day替换a few days ago The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.30．in the course of替换during In the course of(During)the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31．the majority of替换most The majority of(Most of)the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.32．consist of替换be made up of Our class consists of(is made up of)50 students.33．be worn out替换 be tired / broken ① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out(tired).② My shoes are worn out(broken).Please buy me a new pair.34．become of替换 happen What do think has become of(happened to)him ?

35．attend to替换look after 36．on condition that替换as long as 37．nevertheless替换however 38．express one’s satisfaction with替换be satisfied with 39．spare no efforts to do替换try one’s best to do 40．many a 替换many 41．be rushed off one’s feet 替换be busy in doing 42．a handful of替换a little / some 43．meanwhile替换at the same time 44．get to one’s feet替换stand up 45．beneath替换under 46．occasionally替换sometimes /once in while 47．for instance替换for example 48．seldom替换not often 49．wealthy替换 rich 50．amazing替换surprising 51．as a matter of fact 替换in fact

二．高级句型结构

◆ It句型

① It will be + some time + before…

It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.（2008年湖北卷）

③ It is + 被强调部分 + that…

1)It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2)Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.◆ more …than any other 表示最高级

Among the optional courses, spoken English and computer study are more popular than any one else.◆ 名词从句

① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.② My hometown is no longer what it used to be.◆（非限制性）定语从句

① The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→

The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.② It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life.◆ 分词结构

① I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well.② We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people.③ Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.④ Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.◆ with结构

① A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people killed and almost eighty injured.② He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand.◆ 倒装句

① The library is to the east of the teaching building.→ East of the teaching building is the library.② Although we are tired, we are happy.→ Tired as we are, we are happy.③ Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man.④ May all your dreams come true!May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!

◆ 被动语态

① Opinions are divided on the question.② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.◆ 巧妙的改写

1.Only 改成no one but Only Tom passed the exam last week.→ No one but Tom passed the exam.2.as soon as…改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.3.have sb/sth do/done The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken(her leg was broken.).4.变换插入语的位置

① However, they suggest fees should be charged low.→ They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.→

This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.5.用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→

Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.◆ 注重句子的开头

1.用with复合结构开头

With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.2.用非谓语动词形式开头

In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.3.长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）

◆ 相关过渡语

1.表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last 2.表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side 3.表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise… 4.表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus… 5.表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of… 6.表示并列关系: and, as well as, also… 7.表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude…

第四篇：高考英语作文高分(带)

高考英语作文高分模板（带范文）

-------提纲式作文

常见的提纲作文有两种：一种是中文提纲，另一种是英文提纲。提纲类书面表达不是将写作要点简单地逐条翻译，而是根据情景的发展，按照一定的顺序组织安排好写作材料，然后用比较通顺的语言表达出这些内容要点。

第一步：认真审题，明确文体形式，确定文章主题； 第二步：围绕主题，选择材料。根据提纲，构思文章内容； 第三步：按照一定的顺序开始写作（提出问题——找原因，给论据——提出措施，进行总结），注意内容的连贯性以及逻辑性。模板：

Nowadays, there are more and more(问题).It is estimated that(举例).Why have there been so many(问题)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(原因一).Besides,(原因二).The third reason is(原因三).To sum up, the main cause is due to(总结).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,(建议一).On the other hand,(建议二).All these measures will Certainly(结论).模板范文

Nowadays, there are more and more misunderstandings between parents and children which is so-called generation gap.It is estimated that 75% of parents often complain their children’s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old-fashioned.Why have there been so many misunderstandings between parents and children? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that the two generations have grown up at different times, thus the disagreement often rises between them.Besides, due to having little in common to talk about, they are not willing to sit face to face.The third reason is with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, both of them can’t spare enough time to exchange ideas.To sum up, the main cause is due to lack of communication and understanding each other.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,children should respect their parents.On the other hand, parents also should show solicitude for their children.All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.【译文】

如今，在孩子与父母之间的误会越来越多，这被叫做代沟。据估计，有75%的父母经常抱怨他们孩子不合理的行为，而孩子们经常认为父母太落伍。

为什么在父母和孩子之间会出现这么多的误会？原因可能如下： 首先是两代人的成长年代不同，因此产生分歧。另外，由于几乎没有共同话题可以谈论，他们不愿意面对面地坐下来交流。第三个原因是现代生活的节奏越来越快，双方没有空闲 时间来交换看法。总之，主要原因是彼此之间缺乏沟通和理解。到了做些什么来解决这个问题的时候了。一方面，孩子应该尊重父母。另一方面，父母也

应该给予孩子关怀。通过这些措施一定会将代沟消除。对立观点型 答题模板

There is no consensus of opinions among people about_______(问题).Some people are for the view that(观点一).While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that _______ 观点二).As far as I am concerned, thelatter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, _______(论据一).Furthermore, _______ 论据二).Among all ofthe supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, _______(论据三).A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that_______(观点).模板范文

There is no consensus of opinions among people about whether young people shouldlive with their parents.Some people are for the view that they prefer to live with their parents.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that they need independent life.As far asI am concerned, the latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are

obvious.First of all, we should make a living by ourselves and live independently.Furthermore, we can seek greater freedom and get a place of our own, in which wecan do whatever we want.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, we have enough chances to face the society by ourselves, no matter whatkind of experience we will have.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that living alone is necessary.译文：关于年轻人是否应该与父母一起生活的观点，人们没有达成一致。有些人持更喜欢与父母一起生活的观点。然而还有一些人持有相反的观点，坚定认为他们需要独立的生活。就我而言，后者的观点从多种意义上来说更可取一些。理由很明显。首先，我们应该独立谋生，独自生活。另外，我们可以获取更大的自由并拥有我们自己的 空间，做自己想做的事情。在所有的支持论据中，有一个是最有力的。那就是我们可以有足够的机会来独自面对社会，不管我们会拥有什么样的经历。根据以上所述很自然得出结论，那就是独立生活是有必要的。

第五篇：秀出高分英语作文(带译文)

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Many people believe that human activity is causing the earth’s temperature to rise.They say that this global warming will have dreadful consequences for our environment, such as drought and flooding.What should governments do to help prevent global warming? Give reasons for your suggestions.The earth’s temperature is rapidly changing.As a result there has been a lot of climate change such as heat waves, droughts and floods.Scientists believe that this is the result of human activity, which is polluting the Earth’s atmosphere.This could become a disaster if governments do not act to help prevent global warming.They can act in three ways;by supporting research, by making laws and by keeping the general public informed.Firstly, governments can support research.For example, they should encourage companies to develop vehicles that cause less pollution.They should also support alternative sources of electricity from wind and water rather than from oil and coal.As well, they should sponsor conferences to discuss the effects of greenhouse gas emissions and possible solutions to the problem.Copyright joozone

Secondly, they should make laws that limit the amount of greenhouse gases that companies can emit.Private companies should be rewarded for following these laws.They should also be punished for creating pollution.Finally, everybody is affected by global warming.Therefore, it is important that governments involve individuals in the problem solving process.For example they should encourage households to save as much energy as possible by using more efficient light bulbs or less hot water.They should also encourage the public to recycle, and this should be compulsory for everyone.Another way of saving energy is by public transport systems.Governments should spend money on public transport to make it as easy as possible for the public to save energy.In summary, it is clear that there are a lot of things that governments can do to prevent global warming.They should involve companies, support scientists and encourage individuals to protect the planet.参考译文：

许多人认为人类活动是造成地球气温升高的。他们说,全球变暖会造成可怕的后果,我们的环境,如干旱和洪水。政府应该做什么来帮助阻止全球变暖吗?给您的建议的原因。

地球的温度正在迅速改变。因此有许多气候变化如热浪、干旱和洪水。科学家认为这是人类活动的结果,这是污染地球的大气层。这可能成为一个灾难,如果政府不采取行动来帮助防止全球变暖。他们可以在三个方面,通过支持研究,通过法律和通过保持公众知情。

首先，政府支持研究。例如，他们应鼓励企业开发的车辆造成的污染少。他们也应该支持替代的电力来自风能和水的来源，而不是从石油和煤。同时，他们应该赞助会议，讨论温室气体排放和可能的解决问题的方法的影响。版权joozone

其次,他们应该制定法律限制的温室气体,公司能发出。私人公司应该奖励遵循这些法律。他们也应该受到惩罚创建污染。

最后,每个人都是受到全球变暖的影响。因此,重要的是,政府在解决问题涉及个人的过程。例如,他们应该鼓励家庭节省多少能源,尽可能使用更高效的灯泡或少热水。他们也应该鼓励公众回收,这应该是义务为每个人。另一种方法是节约能源的公共交通系统。政府应该把钱花在公共交通使它容易

总之,很明显,有很多事情可以做,各国政府防止全球变暖。他们应该涉及公司,支持科学家和鼓励个人来保护地球。