高二英语writing学案

第一篇：高二英语writing学案

投诉信范文

第三次校本检测书面表达范文： Dear Sir or Madam, As one of your regular customers, I am writing to complain about the poor quality of the electric dictionary bought in your online store that enjoys years of reputation.In order to improve my English, bought it from your online store on January 1st,but I found it has some problems after using it for a short period of time.To begin with, the battery needs recharging after a mere 2 hours of use.This means that I need to carry my charger with me when I go out for a day.In addition, the buttons on the electronic dictionary are so small that it is nearly impossible to type anything with them.Personally, I find this to be completely unacceptable.Therefore, I would like to either change the electronic dictionary for another model that works well or a full refund.Your help is greatly appreciated.Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei

投诉信要点

语言注意点：投诉信应重点表明投诉的原因，叙事应客观、准确、简洁。最后提出的解决方法应切实可行。在表达自己的不满时，语言要把握分寸，不失风度。

结构要点：投诉信是对产品或服务表示不满的信件，一般分三个部分： 1.提出投诉内容； 2.说明具体情况； 3.提出解决办法。1.投诉内容。一般放在信的开头。常用的表达法有：

1)I am writing to you to complain about...which I received/bought...2)I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...2.具体情况。一般讲述对商品质量或售后服务不满意的地方。常用的表达法有：

1）When we checked..., we noticed...2）When I took...out of the bag and examined...closely, I found...3）When I unpacked...and tried to use it, it did not work.4)There are some problems with… that I wish to bring to attention.For one thing, … For another,...5)I can hardly bear /put up with it any more.3.解决办法。常用的表达法有：

1）Please let me know what you intend to do in this matter.2）I look forward to receiving a full refund of...3)We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to… 4)We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.投诉信模板

1）Dear_____，①I am ______（自我介绍）.②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______(商品质量或者服务).③The reason for my dissatisfaction is _____（总体介绍）.④In the first place,______（抱怨的第一个方面）.⑤In addition, ______（抱怨的第二个方面）.⑥Under these circumstances, I find it _____（感觉）to _____（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）.⑦I would appreciate it very much if you could _____（提出建议和请求）.And I would like to have this matter settled by _____（设定解决事情最后期限）.⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

2）Dear_____，①I am writing to complain about the poor service of your_______ which I received _______.(时间）

②The causes for my dissatisfaction are three points as follows: 1)_____(投诉的一个方面);2)_____(投诉的另一方面);3)(投诉的第三个方面).③Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to __________(客观的评论).④I am sure that you are able to understand my discontent, and I hope for a satisfactory solution.⑤I would be grateful if you could _____(表达本人的愿望)as soon as possible.试一试：

假如你叫李明，上星期你买了一台冰箱（refrigerator），但是收到货发现有质量问题，现在请你写一封投诉信，投诉信应当包括以下内容：

1)What’s wrong with the refrigerator?

the temperature in the refrigerating compartment：around 15℃（the standard（标准）temperature range: from 0℃ to 9℃）

the food stored in it: easily go bad 2)What do you want the store to do? eg.To repair it or to refund in full 注意：(1)短文须包括上述全部要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(2)词数：100左右。短文开头已给出（不计入词数）。Dear Sir，I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time._____________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第二篇：english writing 英语写作

如何避免由于汉语思维导致的英语写作错误

对英语作文的典型错误进行分析既是检验汉译英水平的最佳方法，也是提高英语作文水平的最有效途径。在此我们充分展示一下错误分析的方法和作用。下面 列举的学生译文收入了学生们在练习和考试中普遍出现的、具有代表性的英语错误。我们要仔细对照原文，努力挑出其中的错误，并且学会改正它们。在这个过程 中，我们可以做一件非常有用的事，就是把找出的错误分门别类，然后根据自己容易犯的错误类型，有针对性地进行深入的英语学习和写作训练。

翻译错误 的出现不仅是因为水平有限，而且往往出于思维的惰性。把汉语原文的词语都变成英文词语，按一定顺序串成句子，确实已经让初学者费了不少脑筋。这时尤其要认 识到，写作过程远远没有结束。你还需要自问:词语是否译得恰当?要避免虚假对应;词语间搭配是否合适?要避免照搬汉语搭配;句子结构是否自然?要避免中式 英文和翻译腔。

需要说明的是，有一类常见错误这里没有列举，那就是英语单词的拼写问题。因为它属于英语学习的基础内容，与汉译英本身没有直接关系。但大家还是要充分意识到正确拼写的重要，勤查词典，避免此类错误的发生。

原作文

Chinese have the custom that they eat sweet dumplings made of glutinousrice flour and appreciate festive lanterns at the night of January 15.错误分析

(1)少用冠词:“中国人”应该译为the Chinese(people)。再比较:“美国人”可译为Americans，而“日本人”必须加冠词，译为the Japanese.(2)搭配不当:the custom that they eat…不通，应改为the custom of eating...。

(3)动词使用不当:appreciate为“赞赏”(to value or regard highly)之意，而原文中的“赏”意思应该是“观赏”(watch).(4)介词使用错误:原文指具体某一天的晚上，译文介词应由at改为 on(on the evening of)。

(5)不忠实于原文:January 15是公历一月十五日，而原文“正月十五”指阴历(lunar calendar)的一月十五日。

英语作文正确句子

The Chinese have the custom of eating yuanxiao(sweet dumplings made of glutinous rice flour)and watching festive lanterns on the fifteenth evening of the first lunar month.单句写作是英语写作的基本功。在一个句子中，每个词语都和其它词语发生关系，互为语境，而句子本身则处于孤立状态。所以当我们翻译各个词语时，要做到相 互协调，前后一致，逻辑严谨;而当我们对句子做整体处理时，就享有一定灵活性，也许能够给出多种恰当的译法，而这些译法分别适用于不同的段落或篇章语境。无论在词语的选择还是句子结构的处理上，我们对其适用范围都要作到心中有数.

第三篇：writing英语作文300字

Which Is More Important About Younger and Older Generation

From my point of view, I think the younger generation more important in the modern word.First of all, as we know, with the economic development drastically and the society become more and more informational zed, the technology plays more and more essential role in the study and life.The younger generation knows the technology better, and they can use it very well.For example, they can communicate with others in online chatting rooms to practice their interpersonal ability and make the networking widely.What’s more, the younger generation can buy a lot of things through the computer or the mobile phone, such as ordering meals without going out、buying clothes with a bargain price and so on.It can save lots of time and keep energy to study or work more efficient.Second, most of the younger generation has been educated for many years, and they have a good understanding about the new words which were created by them.Obviously, they can use their rich imagination to create many new things which can make our world better.In addition, the younger generation is awfully passion, and they have the strong-willed to counteract every difficulty and change the

world.Furthermore, they are willing to contribute their energy and efforts to the world.Did you ever think about that why the older generation works so hard? Absolutely, they are working for their children—the younger generation.They want to create the best life for their children.The older generation has the responsibility to bring up their children and make every effort to make children better.This is their historical mission, and this is the recycle of human life.As the younger generation is on the way to powerful enough to control the whole world, meanwhile, the older generation is becoming more andmore older so that they even can not keep up with the great progress of the society.In a word, the younger generation is the hope of the world, and they do become more and more important.

第四篇：高二英语学案课堂工作总结

高二英语学案课堂工作总结

泸化中学

刘岚

这次在新课程改革下，学校在学习新绛中学学案导学的模式后，在泸州率先推出了适合我校发展的学案导学模式。这次深刻的改革，强调新课程要促进每个学生身心健康的发展，培养学生良好的品质和终身学习的能力，注重科学探究的学习，关注体验性学习，提倡交流与合作、自主创新学习。课程改革的成败关键在于教师，教师是课程改革的实施者，作为高二备课组长教师的我做好了充分的准备，学习了新课程改革理论，更新了教学观念，迎接了新课改的挑战。从上学期开始,在我校掀起了一场“新绛教学模式”改革，经过研究和探索，我认为“新绛教学模式”之所以推广，有其特殊性和先进性。另外，我也清醒地认识到，任何一种先进的教学模式和先进经验都不能照搬，必须结合自己的实际情况，因此，为了将新绛教学先进经验和本校实际想结合，我进行了一系列探索。所以，下面简单地回顾一下开学以来在这些方面所做的一些英语课堂教学工作。

一、学案导学面向全体学生，为学生全面发展和终身发展奠定基础。

1、创设各种情景，鼓励学生大胆地使用英语，对他们在学习过程中的失误和错误采取宽容的态度。

2、为学生提供自主学习和直接交流的机会，以及充分表现和自我发展的一个空间。

3、鼓励学生通过体验、实践、合作、探索等方式，发展听、说、读、写的综合能力。

4、创造条件让学生能够探究他们自己的一些问题，并自主解决问题。

二、学案实施中药关注学生情感，营造民主、和谐的教学气氛。

1、尊重每个学生，积极鼓励他们在学习中的尝试，保护他们的自尊心和积极性。

2、把英语教学与情态有机地结合起来，创造各种合作学习的活动，促进学生互相学习，互相帮助，体验成就感，发展合作精神。

3、关注学习有困难的或性格内向的学习，尽可能地为他们创造语言的机会。

4、建立融洽、民主的师生交流渠道，经常和学生一起反思学习过程和学习效果，互相鼓励和帮助，做到教学相辅。

三、加强对学生学习策略的指导，让他们在学习和使用的过程中，逐步学会如何学习，做到：

1、积极创造条件，让学生参与到阶段性学习目标，以及给他们介绍实现目标的方法。

2、引导学生结合语境，采用推测、查阅和协调的方法进行学习。

3、引导学生在学习过程中，进行自我评价，并根据需要调整自己的学习目标和学习策略。

新课程改革不是纸上谈兵，它必须要与实践相结合，所以，我将继续努力学习，积极进取，积极参与课程改革，在课改中不断学习，不断实践，不断反思，愿与新课程共同成长。

第五篇：英语四级作文5--note writing

1.祝贺类便条模板

①获悉值得庆祝的消息，说出祝贺事由；

②表达祝贺之情；

③指出对方成功原因，肯定其努力；

④肯定对方成绩，说出对方优点；

⑤表达对对方的信心和祝福

⑥表达真诚祝福

信件结尾与签名

Date

Dear___,①I have heard with delight that you___.②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on __.③ I know this is surely owing to___.④ It is a reward you richly deserve for your___.⑤ With ___, I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake.⑥ My best wishes for your further success.Sincerely yours,Tom

2.告示，通知类便条模板

①告示的内容；

②具体的细节；

③有关活动的具体地址；

④鼓励有兴趣的人联系自己

⑤写明联系方式

信件结尾与署名

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Dear,①I am happy to announce you that____.②____.③ Those who are interested please go to____.④ If you need any further information, please don’t hesitate to call me up.⑤ My telephone number is___.Sincerely yours,Tom

3.安慰类便条模板

①安慰的事由；

②表达写信人的心情；

③表达写信人对事由的关心

④鼓励；

⑤表达写信人的希望； ⑥写信人去看望所安慰之人 信件结尾与署名

Date Dear,①I have just heard from___ that ____.② I am very sorry to hear this news ③ I am very concerned about your ____.④ I just want you not to be so depressed and not to lose heart.⑤ ____________________.⑥ I will go and see you as soon as I can.Sincerely yours,Tom

4.道歉类便条模板

①不能实现的愿望或约定； ②诚恳希望对方的原谅； ③引出失约的原因； ④描述具体原因；

⑤提出建议，希望仍有机会实现 ⑥约定新的时间地点 ⑦再次表达下次见面的愿望 信件结尾与署名

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Dear,①I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that____.② Please accept my sincere apology with gratitude.③ I hope you will understand me and excuse me for___.④ _______.⑤ Naturally, I want to suggest ____.⑥ I shall be obliged感激的 if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____.⑦ We may meet again and I really hope to see you soon.Sincerely yours,Tom

5.邀请类便条模板

①开门见山提出事件以及时间，地点； ②表达邀请愿望； ③正式发出邀请；

④引出受邀人参加的理由； ⑤提出具体的时间和地点 ⑥再一次发出邀请 信件结尾与署名

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Dear,①____________.② It would be pleasant/an honor to have you here.③

Will you join us/give me the pleasure of your company?④ I know/believe that you are very interested in_____ and I am sure you will enjoy it.⑤ The ____ will begin at____.Is it possible for us to meet at____?⑥We do hope you can come.Sincerely yours,Tom

6.婉拒类便条模板 ①表示感谢，为拒绝埋下伏笔； ②正式表达拒绝之意； ③开始解释拒绝的原因； ④陈述拒绝原因一； ⑤陈述拒绝原因二； ⑥总结原因，正式拒绝对方； ⑦真诚表达歉意，希望对方谅解 ⑧表达对对方的美好住院； 信件结尾与署名

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Dear,①Thank you very much for ____.② However, I have decided not to____.③ Two reasons contribute to my declining_____.④ On one hand, ______.⑤ On the other hand, _____.⑥ In view of these, I regret____.⑦ I am sincerely looking forward to___.⑧ I do wish that _____.Sincerely yours,Tom

Tom

7.建议类便条模板 ①写信的原因； ②引出写信人的建议； ③提出建议的理由一； ④提出建议的理由二； ⑤对建议内容所作的承诺； ⑥表达本人的愿望； 信件结尾与署名

7.建议类便条模板

Date

Dear, ①I am delighted to learn that____.②In my opinion, ______.③ On one hand, _______.④ On the other hand,______.⑤Please inform me______.⑥I am looking forward to_______.Sincerely yours,Tom 与你进一步详谈此事。

8.询问类便条模板 ①写信的原因； ②描述所询问的事件或情节； ③询问的细节； ④询问的细节； ⑤表达想得到信息的渴盼； ⑥通知询问人的方式； ⑦表达本人的愿望； 信件结尾与署名

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Dear,①I am delighted to learn that____.② I am very interested in ____.But I don’t know some specific details.③ what____?④ Where_____?⑤ Would you please be so kind as to let me know more about it?⑥ Please inform me_____.⑦ I am looking forward to_____.Sincerely yours,Tom 8.询问类便条模板实例

June 22, 2010

Dear Michael, ①I am delighted to learn that you are organizing a weekend excursion for ②But I don’t know some specific details.③ what should we bring?④ Where shall we meet?⑤ Would you please be so kind as to let me know more about it?⑥ Please inform me at 123456.⑦ I am looking forward to your answer.Sincerely yours,Tom 9.感谢类便条模板 ①直接表达谢意； ②表达自己非常珍惜对方的付出/礼物； ③介绍自己的近况； ④提出希望下次见面的愿望；

⑤再次表达感谢； 信件结尾与署名

9.感谢类便条模板实例

May 2, 2010

Dear Mike, ①I am now writing these lines to express my sincere thanks for your I’d like you to know how much your meant to me.③④ How nice it would be to see you again and I amI repeat my thanks again.Sincerely yours,Tom 10.抱怨类便条模板 ①写信人的身份； ②表示抱怨内容； ③提出抱怨内容的核心点； ④抱怨内容的一个方面； ⑤抱怨内容的里一个方面； ⑥提出仍有改进空间； ⑦表达本人愿望 ⑧结尾常用语 信件结尾与署名

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Dear,①I am ____.② I am writing to bring your attention to_____.③ The focus of the complaint is ____.④ For one thing, _______.⑤ For the other, ___ ____.⑥ All in all, there is still much room for improvement.⑦ I do hope______.⑧ Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Tom 10.抱怨类便条模板实例

July 20, 2010

Dear Jim, ①I am a customer of your hotel.② I am writing to bring your attention to my ③ The focus of the complaint is ④ I tried to take a shower and I found that only cold water came out.I tried every means to adjust it, but I failed.⑥ I do hope this incident will arouse your enough attention.⑧ Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Tom

11.求职类便条模板 ①直接点明想申请的职位； ②介绍大学时专业； ③强调自己符合要求；加深对方印象； ④告知随信附详细简历； ⑤希望被考虑； ⑥争取面试机会； ⑦告知联系方式； 信件结尾与署名

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Dear,①I am applying for the position of____ advertised in _____.② I major in _____in university.③ My training in ____ definitely meet your qualifications.④ My complete resume is attached.⑤ I hope that you will consider me for your position.⑥May I have a personal interview at your convenience?⑦ I can be reached by telephone_____.Sincerely yours,Tom