第一篇:考博英语优秀
中科院博士研究生英语写作分析及范文
1999.3
2000.3
2001.3
2002.3
2002.10
2003.3
2003.10
2004.3
2005.3 题目解析:
“如何减少交通事故?”这道作文题目简洁明了,比较容易把握。正确地理解本题最重要的是抓住题眼,也就是“如何”这个词。本题十分明确地要求考生专门讨论解决某一现象或问题的具体措施,而有的考生没能紧紧围绕解决办法多着笔墨,而去分析交通事故这个问题背后的根源,显然无法取得理想的成绩。范文:
With the rapid development of society, more and more people in China can afford to buy a car.As a consequence, traffic accidents gradually become a serious problem and bring great inconveniences to people.In my opinion, this problem can be solved from three aspects.Firstly, our government should take drastic measures and enforce a series of effective traffic rules, which must be well acknowledged and understood by every person.Those who do not obey the rules will be punished according to the actual situation.Secondly, the Ministry of Communications should make every effort to better the poor traffic environment.We need traffic police to be responsible for their job.If our policemen can be committed to what they are doing, the traffic condition will surely be improved.Thirdly, every member of the society should realize the seriousness of traffic accidents, which not only bring mischief to the drivers themselves, but also lead their families into bitterness.As drivers, they should not drink alcohol before driving.As walkers, they should not cross the street when red light is still on.In a word, it is the task of the whole society to solve the traffic accidents.I believe the traffic accidents will be reduced through the endeavor of everyone, and our society will have a nice traffic order and environment.(220 words)
2006.3 题目解析:
本题首先列出了一个现实生活中的现象:中国虽然拥有世界上最多的人口和大量的研究工作者,却至今没能培养出一名诺贝尔奖获得者。针对这一现象,题目的要求是十分具体的,就是去分析这种现象背后的根源。换句话说,对原因的挖掘是本题的重点。
范文:
Nobel Prize, an international award given for achievements in various academic fields, has been a great honor to people from different countries.However, China, with the greatest population and a large number of research workers, has not produced a single Nobel Prize winner so far.In my opinion, various contributing factors can be identified as follows.First of all, though the educational system in China has fostered many researchers, it somehow hinders individuals’ creativity.Children are usually not valued by their unique way of thinking, but are encouraged to be obedient.Especially in the traditional cramming method of teaching, schools lay particular stress on memorization at the expense of comprehension, which has a very bad influence on students’ ability to solve difficult problems.Furthermore, for a long period in Chinese history, China had been isolated from the outside world.In ancient times, we were self-contained for self-pride, believing that China was at the center of the whole universe.In modem times, we were self-fettered for self-protection, afraid of the invasion of other countries.As a consequence, China has lagged behind in many fields including science development.Researchers in China have little idea about the research interests of their own areas.At the same time, discoveries by Chinese researchers cannot be made known to foreign countries.For instance, the clone technology was first explored by scientists from Chinese Academy of Sciences decades ago, but their research did not arouse international concern simply due to lack of communication.Fortunately, the situation mentioned above has been changing.Our educational system has improved a great deal and more and more opportunities to communicate with the external world have been offered.Therefore, I am sure that in the near future China will have one or more Nobel Prize winners.(298 words)
第二篇:考博英语
1How compelling and thought-provoking the above image is(images are)!
多么引人注目的、容易让人产生联想的画面呀!
2What is apparently betrayed in the cartoon(s)is that …,in contrast, …
这个漫画明显表现出来的是、、、、,相反的,、、、、、3What on earth can we derive from the interesting and instructive drawing?
从这幅有趣的、有教育性意义的图画上我们究竟可以得到什么信息呢?
4It goes without saying that(there is no denying the fact that)what the painter actually aims to convey in the picture is(pictures are)profound.毫无疑问,事实上作者在这幅画中传达的目标意义深刻。
5Primarily, we can learn that such cases are far from being rare and upsetting parallels can be readily found anywhere from our neighborhood and around the world.6What’s more, there has been a growing concern nowadays over the worsening phenomenon.7It is hard to imagine what our society would be like if such pervasive trend go unchallenged.首先,我们可以发现这样的事情很常见,在我们附近,在世界范围内很容易的就能看到类似的令人不愉快的事情。其次,现在已经对这类恶化的现象给予了越来越多的关注。很难想象如果类似的影响恶劣的趋势没有得到制止我们的社会将变成什么样子。
8Additionally, to reverse the grim situation, effective and efficient measures should be entailed by all parties concerned.9The authorities, the mass media and every one are on the list.10Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priority of the agenda.另外,为了扭转严峻的情况,相关政党应该采取有效的方法,职权部门、大众传媒和每一个人都包括在内。提高大家对这些措施的关注程度、制定相关规章制度应该是位于日程之首。11Considering what’s presented above, we may safely come to the conclusion that it is high time that such stories were ended or at least reduced.12I am strongly convinced that only when such things vanish or disappear, can we maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.考虑到以上提到的事情,我们可以顺利的得出结论:是该结束或者减少这类事情的时候了。我坚信只有这类事情消失的时候,我们才能够维持一个我们希望所的快乐、健康、和谐的社会。
若是好的话题:
1.第5句去掉upsetting
2.第6句去掉worsening
3.第7句移到最后一段的最后一句,且改./;成It’s hard …if we fail to grasp such cases and can
not put them into practice.4.把第8句换句举例:To make the point even clearer, let’s come to example regarding an
acquaintance of mine.(为了更明显的表达这个观点,我将举一个关于我一个熟人的例子)
5.第3段 …that it is high time all parties concerned took effective and efficient measures to
practice.The authorities, the mass media, as well as each individual are involved.And I’m strongly convinced that we’ll ensure such practices, thus maintaining a happy, healthy, harmonious society as we all wish.(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一____.On the other hand, __原因二___.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of _作文题目, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, _方法
(4)谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.(5)图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease
(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.1.开头万能公式一:名人名言
原理:名人名言尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理
经典句型:A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2.开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。还是靠编
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面几个题目我们都可以这样编造:Honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某大学,学生课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:A recent statistics shows that …
结尾万能公式:
1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者眼光太浅罢了!更多过渡短语:to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2.结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型:Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
第三篇:英语自荐信--考博
Dear Prof.Gao,Thank you very much for reading my recommendation.I hope I could get the opportunity to pursue advanced studies under your guidance.I am a postgraduate student of China University of Petroleum , studying in the major of Chemical Engineering.And I will get my master degree in July 2011.As my great interest in
scientific research and the endless of knowledge studying, I wish I could get advanced study under a learned tutor like you.I have been researching on sweetening catalyst for gasoline and small-sized continuous
experiments with the help of my supervisor Professor X.An article on my subject was published as the assistant author on Petroleum Refinery Engineering.At present, my experiment have been being performed successfully on schedule.I am skilled in kinds of instruments , for example, I can operate Ultraviolet-visible spectroscopy, Gas chromatograph and Sulfur nitrogen analyzers.I once participated in a research on catalyst for removing naphthenic acid by esterification from heavy oil with the guidance of professor Wang , and published a article as the assistant author on Petroleum Refinery Engineering.Thank you very much for reading my recommendation again.If given a chance to pursue advanced studies, I would highly appreciate you.I look forward to receiving your reply.Yours sincerely,Ma X X
第四篇:考博英语自我介绍
Good morning, Dear Professors: it is my pleasure to introduce myself to you.My name is MSJ.I major in Pesticide Science and I will graduate from the Research and Development Center of Biorational Pesticide Northwest A&F University in July ,2015.Hope a chance to work and develop myself in your department.I passed the CET band 6 test in2012,after that,I tried my best to learn Medical English and mastered a lot of professional vocabulary.I can manipulate computer proficiently and master Microsoft Office software,also be familiar with SPSS and Photoshop.During the past three years,under the strict guidance of my tutor,professor MA.I have learned systematically the theory of profession and got the basic manipulative skills about Phytochemistry.With the help of my supervisor,I have successfully finished the subject “Agricultural Activity of Alkaloids from Cephalotaxus sinensis ” and grasped some experimental skill,such as abstraction,separation,…....I am looking forward to working in your department.If I am admitted,I will be thankful and try my best to work for you.That’s all.SKS
原文地址:考博复试英语自我介绍范例作者: Good morning, Dear Professors: It’s my honor to introduce myself.My name is XXX, I am fromXXCountyXXProvince, December XXXX I was born in a poor family, and my parents are peasants。I love and respect them very much.We were delight with my becoming a fresh man in September 1997.Luckily, I was permitted to be a graduate student after 4 years colorful life on campus.I received my Bachelor degree2001 inXX Institute of Science and Technology, then a Master degree2004 inXX University of Science and Technology.For those 7 years my major was Die Design.Before I received my Master degree, I had done the subject of XXXXXXXXXXX.For the past 3 years, I have been inXXXXXXCollege, where I have been and still am a teacher.I teach students Machine Design etc.I have published more than 10 first-author papers.That’s all, thanks!
博士面试时英语自我介绍技巧
一、第一句话(first word)见到考官的第一句话,很关键,不用说的很复杂。可以是一个简单句,但一定要铿锵有力。展示出自信和实力。千万不要来一句“sorry, my English is poor”.常见的开头有:1.Good morning!may I introduce myself..2.I am glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.I’m peter white, my NO is „(北大清华等学校参加面试的考生很多,可能对考生有一个编号,说一下自己的编号显得很职业,也很正式。)
二、作自我介绍——成长经历(making a self-introduction ——developing history)有很多学校要求做一个自我介绍,这一问题并非在请你大谈你的个人历史。考官是要在你的介绍中寻找有关你性格、资历、志向和生活动力的线索。来判断你是否适合读MBA。你可以先介绍一下成长的经历,出生地和毕业学校等内容。在这一部分要介绍的有些特色,让老师在听几十个人流水帐式的介绍中增加一点乐趣,就权且当作MBA人际关系管理的第一个挑战吧!
I come from ******,the capital of *******Province.I graduated from the ******* department of *****University in July ,1997.(很简单的一句话,一定要发音准确!要把毕业学校的英文准确名字搞清楚了。)
你可以借光一下家乡的名人,可以用这句高水平的话,展示高超你高超的口语。You know, there is a saying that “The greatness of a man lends a glory to a place”.I think the city really deserves it.另外在介绍性格和爱好的时候,适合把家庭介绍结合在一起,可以说父母给了你哪些方面良好的影响。不要流水帐似的介绍家庭成员。可以这么说: Just like my father, I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.Frequently I exchange ideas with my family during super.In addition , during my college years, I was once the chairman of the Student Union.These work have urged me develop active and responsible characters.在这里给出描述个人品质常用词汇的中英文对照,可以参考。
able 有才干的,能干的adaptable 适应性强的active 主动的,活跃的
aggressive 有进取心的ambitious 有雄心壮志的amiable 和蔼可亲的amicable 友好的 analytical 善于分析的apprehensive 有理解力的aspiring 有志气的,有抱负的 audacious 有冒险精神的capable 有能力的,有才能careful 办理仔细的 candid 正直的competent 能胜任的constructive 建设性的
cooperative 有合作精神的creative 富创造力的dedicated 有奉献精神的
dependable 可靠的diplomatic 老练的,有策disciplined 守纪律的dutiful尽职的 well-educated 受过良好教育的efficient 有效率的energetic 精力充沛的
faithful 守信的,忠诚的frank 直率的,真诚的generous 宽宏大量的genteel 有教养的 gentle 有礼貌的humorous 有幽默impartial 公正的independent 有主见的
industrious 勤奋的ingenious 有独创性的motivated 目的明确的intelligent 理解力强的 learned 精通某门学问的logical 条理分明的methodical 有方法的
modest 谦虚的objective 客观的precise 一丝不苟的punctual 严守时刻的
elastic 实事求是的responsible 负责的sensible 明白事理的sporting 光明正大的 steady 踏实的systematic有系统的purposeful 意志坚强的
sweet-tempered性情温和的temperate 稳健的tireless 孜孜不倦的
三、作自我介绍——职业发展(making a self-introduction ——career development)这是很关键的一部分,也是MBA考官会重点考察的一部分。要把工作经历和MBA的学习以及职业发展方向作为一个整体来谈,让老师感到你选择MBA是一个理性的选择而不是一时冲动,选择MBA是职业发展中的一个必然选择,而不是因为找不到工作。你可以用这些句型:
1、In the past years, I’ve worked at IBM as a software engineer.In my work, I found communication and management is very important.I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.So I choose MBA!if I am given a chance to study MBA in this famous University, I will stare no effort to master a good command of communication and management skill.(在过去的几年中,我作为一个软件工程师在IBM工作。在工作中,我发现交流和管理非常的重要。我一直认为一个人很容易落后,如果不持续学习的话,所以我选择了MBA!如果我有机会在这个著名的大学学习MBA,我会不遗余力的掌握沟通和管理的技能。)
附英文自我介绍一篇
It’s my pleasure to be here to introduce myself.That’s a difficult question.I think all the night.How to introduce myself? Tell you who I am? You all know my name is Liu Xiaonao.Tell you what my major is or what I am doing now? You all know I study ink-jet paper, and yesterday you all my examiners.So today I’ll tell you my characters and favorites.I’m an open-minded, kind and smart girl.I like dancing, especially national and classical dancing, waltz is also my love.Dancing can make me relax when I study tired.But about two years I have no chance to dance because my study subject is more attractive than dancing.Last month I began to study play piano.But till now I only can play one song “jasmine flower”.Maybe I’m a slow learner.I also like drama.I had participated in the exam of actress.I’m very luck I succeed in the exam.But make me surprised the director asked me to give him 50,000 yuan.So I went back to my study.Now I realize what I really like.That’s my major—printing and paper making.It’s the place which can actualize my own personal worth.That’s my life, wonderful life and interesting life.I hope the sun is always in my life.Thank you.博士生医学考博复试英文自我介绍样板
Thank you for giving me the chance to interview and it is my pleasure to introduce myself to you.My name is LiFeng.I major in „„and I will graduate from the„„..Medical University in July, 2006.Hope a chance to work and develop in your department.During the past three years, under the strict guidance of my tutor, professor „„in college of „„„, I have learned systematically the theory of profession and got the basic manipulative skills about „„..With the help of my supervisor, I have successfully finished the subject “„„„ ” and grasped some experimental skill , such as cell culture, DNA extraction and other molecular biology technique;abstraction, separation, „ I passed the CET band 6 test in2002, after that, I tried my best to learn Medical English and mastered a lot of professional vocabulary.I am good at listening, speaking, reading and writing..I can manipulate computer proficiently and master Microsoft Office software, also be familiar with SPSS and Photoshop, etc.During three-year study in research, I studied hard and strived for excellence in our field.I benefit from working together with excellent colleague.I developed quality of diligence, responsibility, kindness and honesty.My internship in college of „..could qualify me for this job, and I believe I can be fit for the position quickly.I am looking forward to working in your department.If I am admitted, I will be thankful and try my best to work for you.
第五篇:考博英语复试
导师眼中的学生:能提出与专业有关的建设性问题;
1.So first, please make a self-introduction
Professors **,Good morning, the first thing I would like to say is thank you.I’ve been looking forward to this interview for a long time.My name is Dan Yanfang from Hanchuan, Hubei Province.I got a Bachelor’s degree for rhythmic gymnastics and Master’s degree for sports humanities.Now I’m teaching sports humanities and figure exercises in a university in Hunan Province.I am married and have a lovely daughter.You may agree with me that once you become a parent, you will be responsible to set yourself as a good example, so I am trying my best to be a qualified role model.As you can see, I am easygoing.I have a lot of friends, and I am pretty good at dealing with personal relations.Besides, I am ambitious and diligent.When I work in the university, I could not help thinking about pursuing a doctor’s degree.For I think knowledge is indispensable spiritual food.A person who is easily content with the present will quickly lag behind, so I make up my mind to take the doctor’s entrance exam.I know it is not easy to pass it, but I believe when there is a will, there is a way.I am never afraid of challenges, what I fear is staying still and never going forward.When I was at graduate school, I have done a great job.I have hosted some academic projects at university, provincial and national levels, published several papers in provincial and national core journals and got some prizes as well.But since I am more interested in rhythmic gymnastics, I decide to change back and continue studying rhythmic gymnastics.These two majors are closely linked to each other, so I am confident that I can adapt to the change.As for my doctor-plan, I will first strengthen theoretic study and achieve a more systematic view of its essence and spirit.Secondly, I will proceed to do academic research, and assist professors of sport popularization, either theoretically or practically.2.Well, could you tell me why you choose this major?(Why do you change your major?)
As to this question, I have mentioned that I’ve learned rhythmic gymnastics and sports humanities.Personally speaking, the former one is more interesting and fascinating.Besides, these two majors are closely related to each other.What I learned on master’s degree should be put to practice, so as to show the practical value of physical education.Furthermore, rhythmic gymnastics can reflect the beauty of life.As a PE practitioner, I will spare no effort to make a contribution to the development of this sport.3.Why do you choose our school?
To tell you the truth, I am a native citizen.All my friends are here.I really miss my parents.What’s more, Wuhan is universally known for its education.Among all the universities, WIPE is the best at physical education.I am deeply impressed by distinguished professors, such as **, and advanced facilities.Also your campus is amazing in terms of learning atmosphere and natural scenery.It will be so great if I can study here.4.What do you think of rhythmic gymnastics?
Generally speaking, rhythmic gymnastics is a sport interpreting the beauty of life.It should be fully developed, but in reality, it is not so.It is now facing with some problems, for example, lack of professional team and qualified human resources, insufficient fund and limited sources, low competitiveness and so on.In my opinion, we can handle these problems by attaching equal importance to popularize and improve the sport, further expanding marker demand, and sticking to sustainable development.5.How do you plan your doctorate study?
As I have mentioned that rhythmic gymnastics is of some problems.Therefore, I will first strengthen theoretic study in order to achieve a systematic understanding of its essence and spirit.Secondly, I will proceed to do academic research, and assist professors of sport popularization, either theoretically or practically.Thirdly, I will focus on **(自己的创新点)
6.What kind of academic achievements have you got at graduate school?
I have hosted 3 academic projects at university and provincial levels, and taken part in another 3 at national level.4 papers have been published in provincial and national core journals as first author.3 of them got the first, second, and third prizes respectively.7.Please make a self-evaluation.(English proficiency/character/scientific research ability)You may see that I am a woman, a mother, a teacher and above all, a student.As a woman, I am considerate and meticulous.As a mother, I am tender and kind.As a teacher, I am analytical, rigorous and composed in front of difficulties.As a student, I am humble, adaptive and have a strong sense of comprehension.The curiosity about rhythmic gymnastics is a constant motivation that can push me forward.I am not afraid of meeting challenge.Of course, I still have some weaknesses.My understanding of both rhythmic gymnastics and sports
humanities may be limited and need improvement.I might not live up to your standard, but I would do my best in academic and practical study so as to contribute to the development of rhythmic gymnastics.8.Except rhythmic gymnastics, what else do you like?
Except rhythmic gymnastics, I am fond of playing table tennis.It is a good way of relaxation and it is helpful to your physical and mental health.9.What do you think of your English?
I have finished New Concept English 3 and 4 when I was at school and at work, so I am good at reading and writing.But as you can see it, due to lack of practice, I am poor at listening and speaking like most of Chinese students.10.Since you mentioned your job in Hunan, could you tell us more about it?
I teach rhythmic gymnastics and figure exercises in the university, including a brief introduction to PE, aerobics and so on.After class, I often do research work with my workmates.Sometimes I will read and write some papers.Some of them got published.I really have a good time with my colleagues.Campus lift is really wonderful.