2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(15)及参考：健康幸福话题作文

第一篇：2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(15)及参考：健康幸福话题作文

2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（15）及参考范文：健康幸福话题作文

生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。

简要描述事情的经

过

分析发生冲突的原

因

谈谈避免冲突的做

法

注意: 1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2.词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。(请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)1.遇事不够冷静2.…… 打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等

3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.【参考范文】

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball.Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.To be honest, it was Su爷s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.They cared too much about winning and losing.As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying aharmonious life.It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.Instead of blaming each other, we should

communicate more and put ourselves in others’place.Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate.We must learn to handle

conflicts calmly andwisely.********************************************************结束

例1： 根据下面提示，写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。

(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。

(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。

(3)提出自己的看法。

注意：单词数120个左右。

Wealth and Happiness

Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them.It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor.They work hard and overcome many difficulties.After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。

But some people believe wealth can't bring them happiness.For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him.And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing.What a terrible result!

In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society.If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life.But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth.Remember： money is not everything。

例2：

最近，你班同学展开了一场讨论，主题是：Wealth & Health。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇100词左右的文章，介绍一下你们讨论的情况。

一些人认为财富更重要一些人认为健康更重要

1.没有钱万万不行

2.想办法多挣钱

1.健康是本钱

2.要爱惜身体

个人看法：更看重健康。身体不好，钱再多也无济于事。

Wealth & Health

Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing.In order to accumulate more money they can do anything.However, other people regard health as more important.Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more.Everybody wants to live a happy life.So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless.In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy.So, just do our best to keep healthy.*****************************************************结束

第二篇：2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(13)及参考表格作文

2013高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（13）及参考范文：表格作文(1)(25 min.)(2012·师大附中二模)某英语报向中学生征集关于开展研究性学习的文章，请你根据提示，用英语写一篇介绍你校和你们小组研究性学习活动的短文。全校研究性学习所涉及的主题

当地风俗习惯

人民生活变化

环境保护

„„

你们小组的研究课题

家乡河流的污染问题：

1.发现三大污染源：

工厂废水、生活污水、农民使用的农药；

2.建议：„„

感想与体会

„„

注意：

1.开头语已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译； 3.词数：不少于120。

参考词汇： agricultural chemicals Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school.We are very interested in this kind of activity.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】One possible version：

Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school.We are very interested in this kind of activity.We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs, changes of people's living conditions，and protection of the environment.Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown.The river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smell.Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories.Waste water from people's daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river.To deal with the problem, we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it.Through our research，not only did we gain practical experience, but also we developed various abilities.We find such research very valuable and helpful.**********************************************************结束(2)(25 min.)假定你在参加一场英语辩论赛。你是正方辩手，试用英语简要地表明自己的观点。词数：不少于120。主题

Shall a senior student take a parttime job in holidays？

观点

1.高中生重视功课，而对社会知道甚少。

2.假期做兼职是很好的社会实践。

3.通过书本学到的东西不如通过实践学到的东西有效。

4.通过社会实践，我们可以在知识和能力两个方面取得进步。

5.假期做兼职的报酬或多或少对家里有些帮助。

结论

高中生„„

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】One possible version： Dear friends，Here are my points.We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it's not our fault.A holiday is the best time to make up for that.Taking a parttime job is a good form of social practice.What is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience.In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability.Besides, taking a parttime job, we may get paid more or less to help our family.Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a parttime job in holidays, if possible, of course.***********************************************************结束(3)(25 min.)(2012·师大附中月考)假如你是红星村的李华，家乡人民决定开发农业旅游，邀请你参与策划红星生态山庄旅游项目，并请你写一篇英语文章向旅游者推介红星生态山庄。地理位置

长沙市以北35公里处，占地面积15平方公里；北面靠山，湘江从村边经过

主要产品

茶叶，绿色蔬菜，鱼等

娱乐休闲项目

钓鱼，„„

生态旅游有利

条件(不少于两条)„„

参考词汇： ecological village 注意：自拟标题，词数不少于120。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】One possible version： A village like no other Do you feel tired after a week's hard work in the noisy city? Why not visit Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself?

Red Star Ecological Village is a beautiful and quiet village, located 35 kilometers north of Changsha, which only takes approximately 30 minutes' drive from the center of the city.It covers an area of 15 kilometers.It is a place where you can see many big pine trees in the mountains in the north, where you can see a lot of ducks on the Xiangjiang River, and where you can join the villagers picking up green tea leaves and growing vegetables in the garden.If you are a fishing lover, you can go fishing in the pond and barbecue what you get in the water under the big trees.It is really fantastic to enjoy your lunch in the open air with your family and friends, talking and laughing.Whether you are looking to try green food or enjoy quiet country life, Red Star Ecological Village is the place for you.Come to Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself.***********************************************************结束(4)(25 min.)实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。为何倾听

表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听

家长倾听孩子

理解孩子，消除代沟，„„

老师倾听学生

了解学生，满足需求，„„

同学相互倾听

增进友谊，互帮互学，„„

怎样倾听

请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。

注意：

1.对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数不少于120。

3.演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】One possible version： Good afternoon, everyone，The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”．

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;be openminded to different opinions even though you don't like them.In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!********************************************************结束

第三篇：2013高考英语二轮书面表达(话题为主)训练(13)及参考

2013高考英语二轮书面表达（话题为主）训练（13）及参考范文

1.书面表达(满分25分)(注意：在试题卷上作答无效)

假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导 中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1．本人简介； 2．求助内容： 3．约定时间；

4．你的联系方式(Email：lihua@1236．com；Phone：12345678)。注意：1．词数100左右;2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3．结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam, Look forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua

2.第三节书面表达（满分30分）

【预测试题12】毕业感言——【提纲类】【演讲稿应用文】

假如你是高三学生李华，英语老师要求你在毕业典礼上做一个简短的演讲，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。

1、最难忘的一次经历；

2、所取得的优异成绩：

3、你对未来的展望。

（半）开放作文是一种传统的“书面表达”限制更少，留给考生自由发挥空间更多的书面表达题型。这样的考试模式注重突出语言的应用、突出在语境中对学生语言能力的考查。与传统的“书面表达”相比，这种“开放作文”对学生构思、表达、写作以及语句的组织应用能力有了更高的要求。它要求考生在写开放作文时，要注意审题，尽可能做到内容充实、逻辑清晰、表达得体、语言准确。这样的考试模式能让考生发挥出自己的特长，有利于高校选拔优秀学生。

对于（半）开放作文,同学们写作时要注意以下事项：

1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态；

2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应：

3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者意识；

4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑；

5、要有主次之分，详略得当：

6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑；

7、要做到思想健康，积极向上。主题演讲型

Ladies and gentleman, Today I will talk about.（演讲主题）.As you know, there are many advantages of（演讲主题）

First of all，.（分要点一）..（展开一句或两句）.Besides,.（分要点二）.,（展开一句或两句）.Last but not least,（分要点三）..（展开一句或两句）

In a word（In my opinion/Personally）,（重申主题/总结主题）.Hello, everyone!I'm glad to make a speech here.When I look back on the past three years, what

第四篇：2013高考英语二轮书面表达(话题为主)训练(17)及参考

2013高考英语二轮书面表达（话题为主）训练（17）及参考范文

书面表达（满分35分）

最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动的情况；

2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处 3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议 3.为学校开展课外活动提出建议 注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名‘ 3.稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）

After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.【预测试题10】孩子与父母交流——【提纲类】【演讲稿应用文】

假如你校要举办一次主题为“How to Communicate with our parents”的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：

1、尊重并信任父母：

2、常与父母聊天；

3、换位思考问题。

写作时，应注意：

1、参考词汇：换位思考put oneself in another's shoes

2、有时提纲类作文所提供的要点顺序并非就是写作时的顺序，因此，写作前先将要点标出，并按照一定的逻辑关系，如时间顺序、空间顺序、事件发生的先后顺序等，把这些要点排列并整理好。

3、提纲类作文不是简单地把汉语提示转换成英文，不能简单地直译。考生要用平时自己最有把握的单词、短语和句型，围绕主题，将意思完整清楚地表达出来。在遇到自己想不起来或找不着相应的英语词汇或句型时，学会用相近的句子来表达。写作模板

一、问题解决型

In recent days, we have to face a problem A, which is becoming more and more serious.First.（说明A的现状）.Second,.（举例进一步说明）.We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,（解决方法一）.For another,（解决方法二）.Finally，Personally, I believe that.（我的解决方法）.I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because.（带来的好处）.

第五篇：18高考英语作文评分标准及十份高考英语书面表达

18高考英语作文评分标准及十份高考英语书面表达

1.感谢信

假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。【优秀满分范文】 Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help.You not only wrote a recommendation（推荐）for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.It is your unreserved(无保留的）help that enables me to obtain this splendid（极好的）opportunity of further education.For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate（回报）your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.Yours truly, Zhang Ying 2.道歉信

假设你是李华，你上星期参观伦敦，当时你爸的一个朋友Rogers先生对你照顾有加，请写封信表达你对他的感谢。【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sarah, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.That is owing to（因为）the fact that（同位语从句）my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.I have to go there immediately and take care of him.As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends.I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes.Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party.Cordially,（sincerely）

Li Hua 3.申请信

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣，要写一封求职信，包括下列要点： 1．年龄：182．

2.学习情况：班级前5，英语口语好

3．兴趣和特长：打字快，喜欢阅读，听音乐 4．性格特点：积极向上 注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行为连贯； 3．开头语和结束语己为你写好。【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam, I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.I’m18 years old and will graduate from Xin xing Foreign Languages School this July.I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.I’m good at English, especially spoken English.I often use the computer and I type very fast.In my spare time, I read a lot.Poems are my favorite.I enjoy music very much too.Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities.Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.I hope I may be granted（授予）an interview, when I can explain my qualifications（资格，条件）more fully.I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely/Yours, Li Hua 4.通知

假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。时间：下周五6：00—8：00 地点：教学楼101室

内容：1．唱中国歌

2．比赛用筷子

3．学习包饺子

注意：1．词数不少于50；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【优秀满分范文】

Good afternoon, everyone.May I have your attention, please?

I’m the chairman of the Students’ Union.As the New Year is around the corner（即将到来）, we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks.What’s more, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings.Sounds great.Doesn’t it? The party is scheduled（计划于）in Room 101of the

Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m.to 8:00 p.m.next Friday.Please make sure you won’t miss it.Thank you for your attention.5.邀请信

你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：

1.时间：8am—5 pm； 2.集合地点：校门口； 3.交通工具：公交车；

4.携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【优秀满分范文】 Dear Chris，I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.We are supposed together at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp.The bus will serve as our transportation.We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch.At about 2:00 pm.We will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about5.00pm.You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain.Please spare some time to join us.Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.Yours, Joe 6.建议信

假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者

2．说明该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻

2)介绍名人成功故事

3．提出建议：

刊登指导英语学习的文章

注意：1．词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【优秀满分范文】 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I’m a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror.Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news.By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad.Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them.In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language.Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours, Li Hua 7.求助信

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意: 1.词数:120—150；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【优秀满分范文】 Dear Tom，How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So I’m busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts.Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation（语调）.Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest.I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing!I can hardly wait to see you!I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua 8.投诉信

你是李华，两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物（Bookworm Series）昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下： 1.介绍购物情况 2.反映存在问题 3.提出解决方案 注意：

1.词数100词左右

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 3.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词 可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n.【优秀满分范文】

To whom it may concern, I am one of your customers(顾客).I ordered（订购）a set of(一套)Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely, Li Hua 9.祝贺信

假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。

内容包括：1.表达你的愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺； 3.请她介绍成功的经验。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest

【优秀满分范文】 Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you!Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua 10.求职信

假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．

Requirements attached：1．Good at English．2．Experienced priority． Contact us by e-mail：Englishtec@163．com．

注意：1．短文词数100字左右；2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称； 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Director: I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.I found this position quite appealing to me.I’ve just graduated from high school.Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently.In addition, I have previous experience.During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.I’m available for interview at any time.It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Sincerely, Li Hua 高中作文评分标准

第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务;2.覆盖所有内容要点;3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力;5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑;6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务;2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容;

3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑;6.达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务;2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容;3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解;5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯;6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务;2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容;3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解;5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性;6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务;2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求;3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解;5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯;6.信息未能传达给读者。

不得分：(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。