第一篇:初中英语作文写作技巧
初中英语作文高分秘诀
1.动笔之前,认真审题
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2.围绕中心,拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条:
(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
3.语言通顺,表达准确
(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3).注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。
1)语态、时态要准确无误。
2)主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4)注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如:
汉语英语
A.句号。.B.省略号………
C.顿号、无
(4)描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:
1)表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or …
2)表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however …
3)表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空间关系的过渡词:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as …
13)表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
(1)迂回而行
当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。
(2)小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
(3)借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用。
5.锦上添花,量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:
(1)句型多样化,不要I(We)……到底,使人觉得乏味。
(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。
(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句。
(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词。
(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感。
(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。
(7)上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。
6.书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
7.写完之后,勿忘检查
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必
不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
(1)格式是否有错。
(2)拼写有无错误。
(3)语言是否用错。
(4)时态、语态错误。
(5)标点错误。
(6)人称是否用错。
【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动,以免顾此失彼,影响全局。
总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。
五个步骤写好中考英语作文
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式
时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。
如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ago,last…——过去时 next,in…——将来时等 人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English。
其中we和our就是人称的统一。
格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。
根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。
特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。
同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…
And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What ismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,but
Although+clause(从句),In spite of+n/doing
On the one hand…
On the other hand… Some…,while others… 4.表因果关系的:Because,As So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。
常用状语从句句型:
1)时间when,not…until,as soon as
2)目的so that+clause;to do(为了)
3)结果so…that+clause,too…to do(太……以至于……)
4)条件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要)
5)让步though,although,even though,even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6)比较as…as…,not so…as…,than
五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。
下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:
1.We live more and more comfortable。
改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)
2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。
改正:much information
(不可数名词由much修饰)
3.There has many programs in TV。
改正:There are many programs on TV。
(There be句型和介词短语)
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。
改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(动名词作主语)
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章,特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。
第二篇:初中英语作文写作技巧
熟悉写作步骤:审题:审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称等细节;列提纲(文章结构框架):分几段,以及每段大体内容;写作:在提纲的基础上补充要点;复查:2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题;2遍不出声读查,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等; 5 誊抄:不允许做任何的更改。
总之做到三审:体裁、时态、人称;
三思:词汇—>短语—>句式;
三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯。
作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
四、学会列作文提纲:
例一:利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊
Para1:(综述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2:(利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time;Second, share… with…;Last, express views free, money-free…
Para3:(弊)However, one coin has two faces.On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study;On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings
Para4:(个人)As a student, make good use of it.例二:计划安排型作文——谈假期安排
Para1:(综述)graduate from…, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday
Para2:(正文)Firstly, study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly, visit tourist attractions;Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.(I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)
例三:图表、数字比例型作文
(提出讨论或调查的事实)Last week, our class had a class meeting on(how to)… Here are the results.(表达出不同看法或观点)Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to….Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…(表达个人看法)As a student, I agree to…
例四: 说明利弊型作文
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First, 优点1… Besides, 优点2…
However, every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand, 缺点1… On the other hand, 缺点2…
In my opinion,个人观点 …
例五:不同观点型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾问题.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe …正方观点.First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…
While others don’t agree.They think…反方观点.On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2.。As for me,个人观点 …
例六: 解决问题型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious.…should do something to solve it.Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.范文1.How to make friends
It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time.It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests.Don’r be afraid to show people what you are really good at.Talk about the things you like and do best.Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them.Be a good listner.Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself.Be friendly to a lot of people.Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends.范文2.My view on television
Television has come into our life for many years.We can’t live happily without television.Jt can give us the latest information and news.It can open up our eyes and enlarge our knowledge.We can get happiness from the plays on television.We’ll be boring all day if there is no television.Television programs are attractive.After a whole day’s hard worlk we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea.How wonderful it is!
Television is also bad for people’s health.It’s bad for you to watch TV too long, especially bad for your eyes.It is true that watching TV can influence our behavior.However, it depends on what we do.范文3.My view on school uniform
At our school , we have to wear uniforms every day.The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly.We think young people should look smart and so we would like to wear our own clothes.Our teachers believe that if we did that.We would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies.We disagree.We should feel more comfortable and thate is good for studying.If we can’t do that, we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.We also think everyone should be different from others.That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.
第三篇:初中英语作文写作技巧
初中英语作文写作技巧
一、掌握常用过渡性词语
叙事文常用的句子间连接词
at first;at last;in the end…
then / next/ after that…
when / while/as soon as/not… until…
at the same time;at times;once in a while;
so that
To one’s surprise/joy
Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…
in a word/in all
议论文常用连接词
表示并列:either…or;neither…nor;both…and;not only…but also;
表示递进的:besides;what’s more;what’s worse;(moreover);
表示原因的:because;for…;because of…;thanks to…;(for the reason that…);
表示结果的:so;as a result;so…that…;therefore;
表示目的的:so that…;in order that…;(in order)to…;for…;
表示对比的:while;on the one hand + on the other hand;Each coin has two sides.;prefer…to…;would rather do…than
do…;
表示转折的:however;but;
表示举例的:for example;for instance;such as…;like…;that is to say…
表示总结的:in all/short;in a word;in brief/ total;last but not least;last;
表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;…have great/much influence on sb.;sth.benefit
sb.;sb.benefit from sth.affect;have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱的:love/like/enjoy…;be fond of…;be interested in…;show great interest in…;lose oneself in…;put one’s
heart into…;be good at;be poor at;be weak in;
表达个人想法的:
I think/believe…;(as)for me;in my opinion/view;as a student;from the bottom of my heart;personally;
其他:
in general;generally speaking;to be short;to be honest;to tell the truth;as we know;make up one’s mind to do;in a way;
二、记住作文万能句式
常考主题的典型句子
1、环保
1.It's our duty to protect our environment。
2.It is very important to take care of our environment
3.We should not throw litter onto the ground
4.We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees
5.We should plant more flowers and trees。
6.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
7.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
2、旅游
1.Last Sunday(Saturday,…),it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)
2.I got up very early(late).After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike, bus,…
3.We enjoyed ourselves。
4.We forgot the time.We didn't come back until 5 o'clock。
5.We all felt very tired, but we were happy。
6.I thought I would never forget this trip。
7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。
8.We visited a lot of places of interest。
9.We had a good time there。
10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap。
3、比赛
1.Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two。
2.All of us went to watch it。
6.Class One won this match.Class Two lost。7.Class One played well.They deserved to win。8.Their PE teacher was very pleased with their performance。
4、健康 1.It is very important to keep healthy。2.How can we keep healthy? 3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late。4.We should eat the food healthily。5.We should do more exercise。6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。7.I didn't feel like eating anything。8.I decided to see the doctor。9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully。10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful。12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
5、学科 1.My favorite subject is English。2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful。5.So English is very important and I like English very much。6.We have a lot of fun in the English class。7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。8.I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。9.I like English and try my best to learn it。
6、节日 1.In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival。2.It comes in January or February。3.On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner.They have a lot of nice food to eat。4.During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do。5.People visit their relatives and friends。6.They greet each other with a hug and say, “Happy New Year”。7.As China is a big country, people in different places celebrate this holiday in different ways。
7、写人 1.His name is Jack。2.He was born in London in 1982。3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos。4.He is 20 years old。5.He comes from England。6.He is a good ping-pong player。7.He is medium build。8.He has short hair。9.He is outgoing.Every one likes to talk with him.He gets on well with us。10.He teaches English very well。11.He works very hard.He works in No.5 Middle School。12.He loves watching football games after work。13.He often helps me with my English。14.At the age of six, he began to play table tennis。
8、生活 1.Jim got up very early。2.Jim cleaned the room and do the housework。3.Jim went to shop and did some shopping。
7.He washes the dishes。8.He has lunch at school。9.It is a busy day.He is very tired.But he feels happy。
三、熟悉写作步骤:审题:审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称等细节;列提纲(文章结构框架):分几段,以及每段大体内容;写作:在提纲的基础上补充要点;复查:2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题;2遍不出声读查,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等;誊抄:不允许做任何的更改。
总之做到三审:体裁、时态、人称;
三思:词汇—>短语—>句式;
三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯。
作文一般框架:文章分3段:
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3 个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
四、学会列作文提纲:
例一:利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊
Para1:(综述)with the development of internet… more and more popular…
Para2:(利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time;Second, share… with…;Last, express views free, money-free…
Para3:(弊)However, one coin has two faces.On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study;On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings
Para4:(个人)As a student, make good use of it.例二:计划安排型作文——谈假期安排
Para1:(综述)graduate from…, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday
Para2:(正文)Firstly, study comes first.make preparations for the first senior year;Secondly, visit tourist attractions;Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.Para3: I am sure I’ll have a meaningful holiday.(I’m looking forward to the coming holiday.)(I can’t wait to enjoy my summer vocation.)
例三:图表、数字比例型作文
(提出讨论或调查的事实)Last week, our class had a class meeting on(how to)… Here are the results.(表达出不同看法或观点)Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to….Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that…(表达个人看法)As a student, I agree to…
例四: 说明利弊型作文
Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.First, 优点1… Besides, 优点2…
However, every coin has two sides.It also brings us bad influences.On the one hand, 缺点1… On the other hand, 缺点2…
In my opinion,个人观点 …
例五:不同观点型
We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾问题.Different people hold different ideas.Some believe …正方观点.First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…
While others don’t agree.They think…反方观点.On the one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2…
As for me,个人观点 …
例六: 解决问题型
Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious.…should do something to solve it.Firstly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…
I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.掌握了以上的写作方法和技巧,经过反复的写作磨练,我相信,参加中考的学子们一定会在中考中写出一篇能够展示内心世界的美丽的英语作文。
第四篇:初中英语作文写作技巧
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(4)描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
3)内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
4)感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
5)动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:
1)表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or …
2)表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however …
3)表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空间关系的过渡词:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as …
6)表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as …
13)表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
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第五篇:初中英语作文写作技巧
初中英语作文写作技巧
初中英语作文高分秘诀 1.动笔之前,认真审题
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2.围绕中心,拟定提纲 书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。3.语言通顺,表达准确
(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3).注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1)语态、时态要准确无误。
2)主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4)注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5)注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如:
汉语英语A.句号。.B.省略号………C.顿号、无(4)描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:
1)外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
2)服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3)内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4)感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5)动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法: 1)表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or … 2)表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however …
3)表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
4)表示空间关系的过渡词:near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
5)表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as … 6)表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
7)表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
8)表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
9)表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
10)表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
11)表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
12)表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as …
13)表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …
4.不会表达,另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好,造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话:“错误面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(1)迂回而行
当汉语词义不会用英语表达时,可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。(2)小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用:take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3)借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用。5.锦上添花,量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:
(1)句型多样化,不要I(We)……到底,使人觉得乏味。(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。
(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句。(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词。(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感。
(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。6.书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
7.写完之后,勿忘检查
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
(1)格式是否有错。(2)拼写有无错误。(3)语言是否用错。(4)时态、语态错误。(5)标点错误。
(6)人称是否用错。
【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动,以免顾此失彼,影响全局。
总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。