英语说明文及点评

第一篇：英语说明文及点评

英语说明文及范文点评

【要求】

要求：假设你是一名图书馆的工作人员，请写一篇文章说明文，介绍图书的借阅规则。字数在80100字之间。

【范文】

Something You Must Know

This library is and English Language teaching and learning librany.If you want to borrow some books, you must fill out a library application form and put it in the box on the librarian's desk.Because of the large number of applications we receive each week, you must wait oneweek.Please bring yor student or work card to pick up your library card.Library application forms which are not picked up within 2 months will be discarded and you will have to reapply.【评语】

本文的借书规则表述得比较清晰，注意到了说明文语言的精练准确、通俗易懂的特点。对于高中生而言，这是一篇优秀的应试作文。

There is no indefinite liberty.【要求】

要求：小程原来英语成绩很差，自从他参加了学校的英语角，成绩有了很大的进步，尤其是听力和口语提高更是迅速。请你代小程写一篇短文，介绍一下英语角的情况。

【范文】

English Corner

English Corner is very useful to learn to communicate in English.Learning a foreign language requires four skills: reading, writing, listening and speaking.The English Corner is a wonderful place to practise both listening and speaking.English Corner is also a good place to meet new friends.When I went to English Corner last Sunday, I came across a variety of people, who all had one thing in common;that is they wanted to communicate in English.So the atmosphere was relaxing.English Corner enlarges our would.As we listen to foreigners talking about their countries and customs, we learn many things that we can't learn from books.【评语】

本文第一段是总领段，点明了English Corner 在英语学习中的地位和作用。紧接着简单介绍了English Corner如何在我们英语学习中发挥作用。全篇文章结构紧凑，语句连贯，无华丽词汇之堆砌，但文章中心却表达的清晰而明确。

Without you ,it would have never been possible.Thank you.【要求】

请用英语写一篇关于你校的校园平面图（diagram

教师办公室在教学楼三楼。

学校四周是树。

字数：100

【范文】

This is a diagram of our schoolyard.It is four hundred meters long and three hundred meters wide.The school gate faces the south.Our teaching building stands in the middle of our school yard.It is a building of five stories.The teachers' offices are on the third floor.There is a garden in front of the teaching building.On the left of the garden is our library.Our lab is on the right of the garden.There is a large playground behind the teaching building.Many trees are planted

around the school-yard.【评语】

本文按照由外到内、由前往后的顺序进行介绍说明，使文章层次分明，脉胳清晰，说明简短有力。

Brevity is the soul of wit.文以简洁为贵

English Dictionaries

【要求】

English Dictionariesspelling）；发音（pronunciation）和意项（meanings）。请你写一短文向别人介绍一本普通的英文字典。

【范文】

English Dictionaries

Most English dictionaries will tell you a number of things about the

language.There are three important things, spelling, pronunciation and meanings.The first is the spelling of the words.If you are not sure about the

spelling of a word, you can try to find the correct spelling in a

dictionary.The words are always given in alphabetical order.The second thing is pronunciation, Most dictionaries give the pronunciation of a word in a special kind of alphabet, which is called phonetic.The third thing a dictionary will tell you is the meanings of words,Many

words have more than one meaning, and a good dictionary will explain all of the word's meanings.These are some of the important facts that you can learn from dictionaries.【评语】

本文抓住了英文字典的三个方面的主要内容进行阐述，采用总—分—总的结构方式组织材料，显得结构严谨。文章紧扣字典的主要特点进行说明，显得重点突出，对字典有一清晰的认识。

“barbecue”是日常生活中常见的一种食品，想知道是什么就去查字典吧。

Hans Christian Anderson

【要求】

请根据下列内容和所给单词及词组，用英语写一篇介绍世界著名童话作家安徒生

（Hans Christian Anderson100——120。内容提示：安徒生生于1805年。十一岁丧

父。由于家境贫困，童年时代没能上学，开始跟人学习缝纫。十四岁时到一剧院工作。后来在一些热心的艺术家的帮助下，上了学。1828年接受高等教育，毕业后献身文学（literature）。他写剧本、小说、诗歌等等。他努力创作，获得很大成功。一生共创作160多个故事。1875年去世。

Words and Expressions to Be Used:

world-famousdevote oneself tofairy tales

by the timeadvanced educationlead to

【范文】

Hans Christian Anderson

Hans Christian Anderson was a world-famous writer of fairy tales.He was born in 1805.When he was eleven his father died.His family was then so poor that he could not go to school during his childhood.He learned sewing from a tailor.At the age of fourteen, he went to work in a theatre.Later helped by some warm-hearted artists, he went to school.In 1828, he began to get advanced education.After graduation, he devoted himself to literature.He wrote plays, novels, poems and so on.He worked hard at literature.This led to his great

success.He wrote more than 160 stories in all.He was famous for his funny fairy tales, which became popular all over the world.He died in 1875.【评语】

本文用词准确，语言流畅，内容符合要求

My favorite program

【要求】

现在随着电视等传播媒介的普及和发展，电视节目的花样越来越多，知识性、娱乐性的侧重也各有不同。请你写一篇文章，介绍一下你最喜欢的节目。

【范文】

My favorite program

Nowadays radios and TVs play a more and more important role in our daily life.There are many programs shown every day.Some of them are very good.My favorite program is called“The Animal World”, which is broadcast by CCTV every Sunday night.The program provides us with natural scenes, the life of all kinds of wild animals and the wonderful explanation about it.We also acquire some knowledge about animals, even some plants.So in my opinion, it is an

interesting as well as an instructive program.Be sides, the pictures are very beautiful.It's really a great joy to watch it.If you don't believe it, Just watch it yourself.【评语】

这篇文章给我们提供了一种写说明文的一般结构：点明主题——一般介绍——文章主体——概括和归纳结尾。通过这种结构，可使描述脉络清晰，表述自然流畅，不致于发生思路混乱的局面。

你喜欢哪个电视台的什么节目？你也试写一下？

第二篇：英语说明文

这一类文章的性质和目的是在解释，提供知识，和表明观念；“exposition”这个字的意思就是“explanation”(解释)，既然如此，这类文章最大的要求是清晰；作者可以使用任何方法和技巧，以期能达到清晰明确的境地。

依一般分类，说明文有下列六种：

(1)定义法(Definition)

(2)例说法(Example)

(3)分类法(Classification)

(4)分析法(Analysis)

(5)类比法(Analogy)

(6)比较法或对比法(Comparison Or Contrast)

[注]说明文中亦可穿插以描写文与叙述文的写作方法。

说明文是写作最常用到的体裁，其最常用的方法就是将事物加以解说。例如，说明事物的过程，说明事物的因果，说明事物的状态等等。对人物来说，说明该人物的处境，说明该人物的想法，说明该人物的背景等等。如果要将描述文与说明文作一严格区分的话，那就是描述文重官能的观察与感受，而说明文重头脑的分析与理性的研判。对事物的体验是一同事，而对事物的彻底了解又是另一同事。体验是官能的，而了解却是观念上的问题。闻到花是香的，乃是官能上的，而花为什么是香的，却是知识性的观念上的问题。前者是描述文的范围，后者则是说明文的范围。

知识性的东西我们可从百科全书，字典辞源，各科手册，以及语言的文法修辞等书籍来获得。但这些仅是资料而已，要将资料变成一篇文章还需要文字的组织能力。我们可以这样说，说明文是一种实用的写作方法，将人类的知识系统化，这可以说是一种其功至伟的写作方法。

说明文最简单的方法就是例证法：将详细资料表列，一一举证，以说明什么是什么，怎样发生，结果怎样。另外两种较复杂的说明文是分析法与定义法：其方法必用到归类法与等级法。例如，要说明一件机器的操作，就必须把这件机器加以归类，引述其功能目的。又如，要了解一条鲸鱼，首先要将其归为哺乳类，因为它是胎生动物而非卵生鱼类。而后再进而分析鲸鱼中许多不同的类别。定义法以研究其事物的必然性为主，不涉及其他。

说明文中当有比较法与对照法，必须用此类方法的原因，乃是有些抽象事物无法具体归类，于是只好用类例来此较对照之；即以类例说出与其相关的概念，使读者容易接受其概念。

<范文> Dreams

Men have always been interested in their dreams.In superstitious(2)ages and countries, dreams were regarded very seriously.Every dream was supposed to have a meaning, and it was the business of priests and astrologers(3)to interpret people's dreams for them.They were generally looked upon as predictions of the future warnings of coming dangers or sorrows, or prophecies of coming good fortune.Dreams were believed to be supernatural communications from the gods, or the spirits of the dead, and so were divine revelations.Educated people no longer look on dreams in this way.Some laugh at them as mere illusions, and not worthy of any serious consideration;but others find them interesting for psychological(4)study.For one thing, dreams prove that in the sleep we are not completely unconscious.Part of our brain is awake and working.We are unconscious of our immediate surroundings in sleep.We see nothing, we hear no-thing, and know nothing of what is going on around ns.Yet the fact that we dream proves we are not completely unconscious.It is often interesting to try to discover the cause of dreams.The causes of some dreams are purely physical.A heavy supper which causes indigestion, will give us nightmare, particularly horrible and terrifying kind of dream.Some one knocking at our door may make us dream we are on the battlefield and deafened with the thunder of guns.One man dreamt he was walking near the crater of a volcano and his feet were burnt with the hot rocks;but when he woke up, he found his feet were pressed upon his hot-water bottle!

Most dreams are really confused and disjointed memories of past events in our lives.We can often trace a dream back, and find it was suggested by something we saw or heard or read about only a day or two before.For example, a lawyer, who had been thinking over a case late at night, dreamt when he went to bed of nothing but lizards.When he came to his study in the morning, he found that, while he was thinking out his case, he had been staring unconsciously at his clock, the case of which was decorated with(5)the bronze image of a lizard.Dreams refer to the past, not the future.And they are not supernatural, but only the confused workings of our own imaginations.语汇说明

(1)Dreams(梦)：这篇说梦的文章是从四个方面来加以述说：(A)梦曾被认为是预卜未来的超自然表现；(B)梦证明我们睡着了的时候并非全然没有知觉；(C)有些梦是因生理上的原因而引起的；(D)大部份的梦是过去事件的杂乱记忆。

(2)superstitious：迷信的(3)astrologers：占星家；星象家

(4)Psychological：心理上的；心理学上的(5)be decorated with：饰以…；装饰着...

第三篇：英语四级作文点评及

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will.四级写作考题出炉了。看到考题，我们眼前又是一亮：这不是新东方四级写作教材必背范文第13篇The Way to Success 的翻版吗！

这已经不是第一次了。

如果说以前这种情况颇为“偶然”，近年这种“命中考题”的情况似乎不再鲜见、渐渐变成“必然”了。2003年四、六级写作共用的题目Honesty Is the Best Policy就是我们教材必背范文第3篇Honesty；08年6月四级考题“大学生休闲娱乐的方式”和我们必背范文第12篇Ways of Relaxing 非常相近；08年12月考题Disposable Plastic Bags 是我们考前预测的重点；09年12月考题“创建绿色校园”和我们必背范文第9篇Make Our Cities Greener 非常接近，只要把city 改成campus 就可以了。

当然，猜题押题不是我们的宗旨。我们更重视的是如何培养学生的写作能力传授写作技巧。

一般来说，文章的主体段落展开方式不外乎因果分析和举例说明。今年的考题与以往很多“现象类”或“争议类”考题不同，要求评述一句格言，这和03年Honesty 非常相似。对这种文章，因果分析比较牵强。那么我们主要就依靠举例说明了。在我们的教材范文中就举了两个例子，一为孙中山依靠坚强的意志创建中华民国，二为苏秦刺股挑灯夜读。

其实考生只要掌握了方法，随便举一两个自己生活中的例子。只要文字表达顺畅，就是一篇好文章。

碰到熟悉的考题固然欣喜；碰到陌生的考题学会自如应对才是制胜的法则。

附教材范文：

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

第四篇：英语说明文范文

说明文是对事情的发生、发展、结果、特征、性质、状态、功能等进行解释、介绍、阐述的一种文体。这类文章的目的和性质是客观地介绍、解释事物，使读者获得知识和信息，并不需要发表主张、做出证明。一般说来，知识简介，商品介绍，旅游指南，科技读物，工作总结，实验报告，教材辅导等均属说明文之列。

写说明文，可以按时间、空间、结构、逻辑顺序来写，也可以采取举例、比较、对比、分类、分析、说明、叙述等方法。

1.比较对照

比较对照有两种，一是逐点比较，二是整块比较，即AB交错或先A后B：

1）逐点比较：多数人认为这种AB交错的方式可以避免行文的单调沉闷，对比的效果更鲜明突出。如：

There are basic differences between large and small enterprises.In a small enterprise, you operated mainly through personal contacts.In a large enterprise, you have established “policies” , “channels” of organization, and fairly strict procedure.In the small enterprise you have immediate effectiveness in a very small area.You can see the effect of your work and of your decisions ground.In the large organization you are normally taught one thing thoroughly.In the small one the danger is of becoming a Jack-of-all-trades-but-master-of-none.In the large it is of becoming the man who knows more and more about less and less.2)整块比较

It is easy to be a winner.A winner can show his joy publicly.He can laugh and sing and dance and celebrate his victory.People love to be with winners.Winners are never lonely.Unlike winners, losers are the lonely ones of the world.It is difficult to face defeat with dignity.Losers can not show their disappointment publicly.They can not cry or grieve about their defeat.They may suffer privately, but they must be composed in public.They have nothing to celebrate and no one to share their sadness.2.分类

分类是人类认识客观世界的重要手段之一，也是描写事物、解释观点最有效的方式之一。通过将一事物分类，可使复杂事物变得清晰明了，便于作者阐述自己的观点。

分类段落的各类排列要条理，可采用从主要到次要，从次要到主要，从多到少或从少到多等方式排列，亦可平行排列。如：

1）As far as political views are concerned, people fall into three categories.First are the conservative people.Conservatives are opposed to sudden or great changes.Second are the liberal people.These people are in favor of progress and reform.But their opinions often seem to idealistic.The third type is the moderate people.The moderates keep everything within reasonable limits.They are more practical in this hard world.In my opinion, most people seem to belong to this group.本段采用平行排列的方式，按人的政治观点分为三类：保守、自由和温和。

2)These are several reasons why I decided tom attend Bingston University.First of all, the tuition is reasonable.Secondly, the university has a deferred payment plan., which lessons the load of peasant families like mine.Another reason is that Bingston has the finest teachers in its graduate program.My chief reason, however, is Bingston’s program in agriculture, my chosen field, which is recognized as the leader in this area.该段采用主次排列的方式，分析了作者决定上Bingston大学的原因。

3)According to Mr.Li, the fifteen students of his cLASS fall into three groups.Seven of them work hard and study well.They always get good marks in examinations and are often praised by

the teachers.Li calls them “good students”.The monitor, the secretary of the Youth League, and the captain of the cLASS volleyball team, are quick in finding out what their fellow students are interested in or what they should do as a collective.They always organize proper activities at the proper time.So Li calls them “good organizers”.Four other students are very kind to their cLASSmates, always ready to lend them a helping hand.They help to clean the cLASSroom and the corridor even when they are not on duty.Li says that they are “ good comrades”.“What about yourself?” someone asks him.“I’m a group by my self ——a good observer”.该段不同于以上两段，不是先分类再解释，而是先说明其特点，然后定义分类。虽分类并不科学，却达到了其幽默之目的。

3.特征

例证指具体说明人或事物特点、本质及其规律的方法。所用例子需有代表性、典型性。例证型段落的写作方式多为先提出主题再列举事例。在事例之前一般有For example或For instance。例证后面，根据情况还可以加上结论句。如：

In order to prevent non-smokers from being affected, measures must be taken to reduce the chances of smoking.A lot of work can be done concerning this.For example, in some public places, such as in the theatres and cinemas, smoking should be forbidden.Even on the train or plane people should not be allowed to smoke.Doctors, teachers and government leaders should take the lead not to smoke.Above all, the harmfulness and dangers caused by smoking should be made known to all through newspapers, broadcast, or TV programs.Also the growing of tobacco and the production of cigarettes should not be encouraged.If these measures can be taken, we can effectively reduce the chances of smoking.因果

因果是两个事物之间的关系。一些说明文，议论文通过分析因果关系说明一个中心思想。如不能把因果关系解释清楚，文章将无法说明任何主题。

因果型段落的扩展模式有两种，一是分类编法，另一个是连环编排法。如果只讨论成因或只讨论结果，细节比较简单，只需按其重要性或其逻辑顺序进行编排。分类编排法指先讨论原因，然后讨论结果；或先讨论结果，后讨论原因。

1）分类编排法：

Music is my chief hobby.When I listen to music, good things happen to me.If I am lonely or homesick, I listen to pop music.The quick rhythm, the strong beats of drums lift my sprits.If I am familiar with a song, I will sing alone with it and my depression disappears.When I am bored or very tired, I listen to Mozart.His music makes me feel alive.Music also reminds me of home.Before I came to college, my sisters and I would listen to music and sing songs together and cheer us.Now I enjoy listening to music and singing with my roommates because their smiles make me remember the happy times with my family.For me, music is an excellent escape, and without it, I wouldn’t be so happy。

2)连环编排法是先讨论一组因果，再一组因果，再一组因果，形成一个锁链。当因果紧密相连，前一果为后一果之因时，经常使用这种方式。

Students shouldn’t stay up so late.Because of the pressure of examinations, many students burn night candles.The next day, they have to get enough sleep.As a result, many of them get sleepy in ClASs.They couldn’t catch what the teacher says.Not having studied their lessons well, they find it difficult to make good performance in examinations.So, it is not worthwhile to stay up late if you want to study well.5.人物描写

人物描写包括外部特征、性格特征、思想状态、行为语言等，用于表现人物精神面貌、披露人物内心活动、揭示人物性格变化，借以突出作品主题思想。如：

My sister is a boyish girl.She has short and straight hair like a boy’s.She likes white, black and grey colors, as most boys do.She never cares for shirts, stockings but loves jackets and jeans.Sometimes she wears a men’s suit and leather shores as if she were a gentleman.Basketball and football are her favorite sports.She also enjoys watching boxing.She always shouts and cheers excitedly when she is watching a football match.When she is with her friends, she always says Ladies first” to other girls.The most interesting thing is that she has been mistaken for a boy many times.And she is pleased with that.She always says that she should be a boy.第一句作者明确表示他眼中的妹妹是个男孩子气十足的小姑娘。这样读者大都会在心中勾画出一种从长相、穿着到言谈举止都特男孩化的女孩。下文作者正是通过穿着、外貌和性格等方面向读者展现一个活生生的人物形象。

6.地点描写

地点描写指用生动形象的语言对某一地点、某一环境进行具体逼真的描绘，使读者如临其境、如睹其物。地点描写的对象可大可小，在可以为城市、国家，小可是一间教室，一个房间。地点描写自然按空间顺序排列，作者应立足于一个出发点，由远及近，由近到远，从里到外，从外到里，由左到右，或由右到左进行描写，顺序不可混乱，否则读者会迷失方向。如下面一段作者从大门开始，由外向里逐步介绍学校的布置，读者如同跟着作者参观了一所校园。Now I will show you around our school.It is one of the largest middle schools in the city.When you step into the gate, you will see a beautiful flower bed before you.In the middle of the flower bed there is a fountain with many colored flowers around it.If you walk along the school road, you will come to the playground, on each side of which are rows of trees.We often read books under the trees.On the right of the playground are two ClASsroom buildings.On the left is the newly-built four-storyed building.I’m lucky to study here.I love my school very much.7.物体描写

描写物体时应侧重物的形状、规格大小、颜色和功能。任何一段文字都应有叙述的中心，对物的描写也不例外。同样，主题句也应反映出作者对所要描写物体的看法、态度。如： The first thing I notice in the bride’s room is the beautiful curtain.This curtain is patchwork in design, and is sewn out of squares of materials of different colors like white, light green, brown and orange.It is made of silk, trimmed with delicate braids.It is about six feet long and hangs from a wooden rail.The curtain matches perfectly with the dark wooden rail and furniture in the room.通过主题句可以看出作者想向读者描写的是一幅漂亮的窗帘。

第五篇：英语作文说明文

英语作文说明文

说明文类

写作指导

说明文的出题形式为文字提示或图表，文体有报道、投稿、书信等。写作步骤如下：

第一步：审题，确定主题句、主体时态(一般以现在时态为主)和中心人称；

第二步：在主题句后按提示顺序将各要点以完整的句子表达出来；

第三步：用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。

常用词有：

①表示时间：now, then, afterwards, soon, five minutes later,before long, shortly after that, soon after supper, to this day, just now, just then

②表示顺序、动作过程：first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next

③表示转折：but, yet, and yet, however, although, otherwise, in spite of

④表示结果：thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately

⑤表示强调： above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most⑥表示并列： and, also, as well as, and then

⑦表示递进： besides, what's more, in addition, even, once more, what was worse

⑧表示解释和说明： that is to say, namely, for example, actually, and so on, such as, believe it or not,to tell you the truth,according this, for this reason

⑨表示比较、对比： just like, just as, in the same way, more or less, sooner or later, on the contrary, on the other hand

⑩表示总结： finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short, as you know, in the end需要注意的是：使用上述过渡性词必须根据上下文需要的原则，力求自然，决不可牵强附会，让人感觉别扭。

精选范文

以“早起是好习惯”为题写篇议论文。请围绕以下几点来写：

①早起与健康；

②早起与学习；

③早起与一天的活动。

(字数80～120，要求自拟标题)

Getting Up Early Is a Good Habit

Getting up early is a good habit.It is very important to our health, our study, our life and so on.First, getting up early helps to keep us strong.We can do morning exercises in the open air in the morning and breathe fresh air to build our bodies.Second, getting up early helps us to memorize what we have learned in class by reading aloud in the morning.Third, getting up early can help us to find enough time to prepare our work of the day.If we stick to getting up early every day, it will do us a lot of good.练习

①某国际性英语刊物有一个介绍各国风俗习惯的专栏，请为该专栏写一篇短文，简单介绍中国的农历新年(春节)。请包括以下要点：

a．春节是中国人的重要节日；

b．春节在哪一天(农历：the lunar calendar)；

c．除夕一家人吃团圆饭(have a…feast)；

d．守岁爆竹迎新年(爆竹 firecracker)；

e．大年初一亲朋好友拜年(exchange…greetings)；

f．孩子们的压岁钱(lucky money)；

g．狮子舞及其他节目(lion dances and others performances)，是节日不可少的活动内容，要延续三天。(字数80～120)

②年末将至，某英文报纸开办“99回顾”专栏，就一年中的10件大事做总结性报道。报社请你对夏季的特大洪灾进行简要评述(第一句已给出)。

性质

a．本世纪最严重的一次；

b．损失严重(举例：农田、房屋、灾民)。

原因

a．连月降雨；

b．滥伐林木，水土流失；

c．围湖造田，堵塞河道(waterway)。

防范措施

a．保护沿河植被；

b．改建堤坝；

c．退田还湖。

难点说明：

用词达意：损失严重，围湖造田，退田还湖。

时态变化：以一般过去时和现在完成时为主，考虑到实际情况，还应使用过去完成时。

句子结构：注意句子结构的完整、主语的选择、被动语态的使用和举例部分的完整表达。

文章组织：分三段写，注意每段主题句的选择。

参考词语

引起损失cause losses

无家可归become homeless

围湖造田turn lakes into fields

③根据以下提示写一篇有关交通事故的报道。

(字数：90～100)。

提示：

a．时间：昨天；

b．地点：市中心大街第二个拐角处；

c．原因：卡车司机开车前饮酒，开车时头晕，车失控撞翻一小汽车；

d．伤亡人数：5人死亡，部分人受伤；

e．影响：市区交通中断3小时；

f．经济损失：200万元；

g．市政府告诫司机要从事故中吸取教训。

参考词语

头晕dizzy

经济损失economic losses

市中心downtown

中断交通to delay all traffic

饮酒过多to have too much wine

吸取教训to learn a lesson from…

④几位外国旅游者到公园“英语角”参观。假定你是“英语角”的负责人，请用一篇英语文章介绍，内容提示如下：

a．简况：4年前成立，许多中学生参加，至今已有几百人。许多大学生和外国友人也常光顾；

b．活动时间：每星期日上午；

c．活动内容：练习英语会话、谈论有兴趣的话题、交流学习英语的经验；

d．效果：通过参加活动学习了许多东西，对英语课是一个补充，学生、家长、老师都非常欢迎，认为对学英语很有帮助。如果还想了解得更多，可问在场的学生。

参考词语

对……补充a supplement to…

聚集to gather around

交流to exchange

活动activity

受欢迎to be popular with

⑤有些外国人想了解中国的教育制度。请你用英语写一篇简介，以便刊登在某英文报上。内容要点如下： a．7岁上小学(primary school)，学6年。

b．然后直接上初中(junior middle school)，学完3年，就完成了9年义务(compulsory)教育。

c．通过(pass)考试后，部分初中毕业生(graduates)上高中(senior middle school)，读 3年。部分学生进职业(professional)学校，被培养成熟练(skilled)工人。

d．高中毕业后，考生通过全国性的考试就成为大学生。大学通常学4年，毕业后，可获得学士学位(bachelor's degree)。制度：(system)。字数为(80～120)

注意：

a．简介要有标题；

b．简介应包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。注意时态及语态；

⑥写一篇题为“Give up Smoking”约120字的短文。

提要：

a．不少学生吸烟，而且人数还在增加；

b．据调查，某校2／5以上学生吸烟，有的学生还偷钱买烟；

c．学生吸烟危害比成人更大，它不仅有害于身体，而且有害于心灵；

d．中学生是国家未来的建设者，吸烟者应下决心戒烟。

注意：

a．要有标题；

b．不要逐条翻译。

参考词语

调查investigation

建设者builder

有害to be harmful to

⑦根据下列提示写一篇名为“Development of Agriculture in China”的短文。

a．中国是一个拥有12亿人口的大国；

b．在过去的20年间，中国发生了巨大的变化，尤其在农业方面；

c．中国仅有世界7％的土地，却成功地养活了世界 22％的人口；

d．其耕地的灌溉面积是世界上最大的。种植了世界 1／3的水稻。渔业也非常重要，淡水鱼随处可见； e．废弃的蔬菜被用来养猪、养鸡；人和动物的粪便产生的气体被用来供热和做饭；

f．如果世界上其他地方也像中国一样具有公平的土地所有权，就不会再有饥饿。(字数：100左右)注意：

要有标题。

参考词语

养活人口feed…of the world's population

灌溉面积irrigated area

具有公平的土地所有权

have fair ownership of land

饥饿starvation

耕地farming land

废弃的蔬莱vegetable waste

粪便waste

⑧某国教育代表团前来你校参观，顺便问及“希望工程”，请你简单介绍一下。(字数：100左右)

提示：

a．1989年10月“希望工程”在全国启动，目的是救助贫困地区儿童上学。

b．从政府官员、企业家到普通百姓都积极捐款。从1989年到1997年底的8年间，共筹款12.57亿元；资助184.7万失学儿童；兴建5256所希望小学；对数百名希望小学的教师进行了培训。

c．希望工程还将继续改善贫困地区的办学条件，促进中国教育的发展。

难点说明：

用词达意：“积极捐款、希望小学、办学条件”，数字的表达。

时态变化：所选的时间表达方式不同，时态也不同。

句子结构：注意被动语态、同位语和定语的使用。

文章组织：分两段即可，第一段写提示a的内容，第二段写提示b和c的内容。

参考词语

目的是to aim to do

积极干……to be active in…

帮助……回到校园to help…back to school

促进to promote

⑨请根据提示，以“为什么学英语”为题，写一篇英语说明文。

提示：

a．英语是国际性语言，世界上有许多国家把它当做官方语言。

b．学习英语的重要性。如它是国际会议的工作语言；许多书籍为英语版；懂得英语可加强对世界的了解。c．希望大家重视英语学习。

参考词语

a．官方语言official language

b．与……交流to communicate with…

⑩请你以“水污染”(Water Pollution)为题写一篇说明文。必须写明：

a．水的重要性；

b．随着工农业的发展，水源受到污染，以至不能饮用；

c．采取措施，保护环境。

参考词语

水源water source

环境environement

采取措施 to take up measures

(11)请你以“遵守交通规则”为题写一篇说明文。现在交通事故很多，以至于都怕过大马路，汽车、摩托车开得太快，总是有人闯红灯。为了安全，遵守交通规则很重要。(字数：80左右)

参考词语

走人行道to use the crosswalk

闯红灯to speed past the red light

注意：

题目已给出ObeyingtheTrafficLaws

(12)以“The Value of Time”为题目写一篇短文。该短文有四个小段。第一段是引言，提出时间比金钱更宝贵，我们必须珍惜时间这个论题。第二段是扩展段，说明时间是有限的，作为学生更应该充分利用时间，将来为国家服务。第三段也是扩展段，指出有些人还没有认识到时间的价值。第四段是结论段，指出我们必须有一个节约时间的好习惯。

参考词语

宝贵的precious

珍惜value(v．)

充分利用to make full use of

养成习惯to form a habit of

(13)下星期一的一堂英语课，分组讨论关于考试问题，请你写一篇英语发言稿，内容大致如下：

有人说不错，考试会帮助我们及时复习功课，考试之后又能使我们了解学得如何。但是你认为目前考试太多，又很难考及格，使我们对学习失去了兴趣，也没有时间参加体育活动，我们的健康受到了损害。是到了改进考试的时候了。(字数：80～120)

参考词语

复习to go over

考试to have examinations

考及格to get through

参加to go in for

该干……了It's time to do sth.(14)写一张化学实验室的规则。

要点：

四要：

保持卫生和整洁；

按老师要求做；

做后器皿放回原处；

出实验室前先要洗手，关灯、关门。

三不要：

没有老师带领勿入内；

未经允许勿动一切；

实验时勿喧哗。

1999．7．2

(15)请你用英语写一篇有关计算机的短文。提示如下：

a．计算机是一种精细微妙的机器。它有多种类型，大多数计算机都有储存器，信息可以储存，需用时，随时取出；

b．计算机经过几百年的变化，体积越来越小，价格越来越低，操作越来越容易，工作速度越来越快； c．计算机可以应用在许多方面，它们确实已成为一种最流行的使用工具。(字数：130左右)

参考词语

储存to store in

取出to take out

(16)一日，你校外籍教师问你：“军训”是什么意思，为什么中学生在三年的高中学习中参加一至二星期“军训”，请按提示回答。

a．中学生在军营生活一两个星期，不仅仅是为了学习一些军事术语和技术。

b．军训对学生特别是对独生子女训练性格有利。在军营，当他们被当做真正的军人对待时，他们会成熟起来。

c．在学校，他们学习了一些关于无私、勇敢和守纪律的好品质的教育，但从书本上学到的东西没有从亲身体验中学到的对品质影响深刻。通过军训，他们更加认识到这一点。(字数：100左右)

参考词语

军训military training

兵营camp

成熟的mature

独生子女家庭one-child family

宠坏spoil

宠坏的孩子a spoiled child

军事术语military terms

(17)写一篇说明“乘火车旅行比乘飞机好”的文章。题目自己拟定。

提示：

a．坐火车更实惠；

b．更好观光；

c．坐火车旅行更安全。

参考词语

买得起to afford

观光to get a view