第一篇：中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1.审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher。
正 my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有
动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。
误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
误 the apples cheap.i'll take some。
正 the apples are cheap.i'll take some。
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example, my friend in high school。
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。
例1.when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 when i get to the station the train leave。
正 when i got to the station the train had left。
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
如何写好文章开头
开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相，它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味着有了良好的开端，也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done，我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢？
1.“开门见山”式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month，my family went to Huangshan by train.It took us ten hours to get there.What a long and tiring journey!We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us。
② 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time.But I don't think so.First，when money is used up，you can earn it back，but„„
2.回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、remember(记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad(难过的)„„如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan.或It was really an unforgettable experience I had。
3.疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is„„ 再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have anopportunity to travel abroad，why not consider Singapore?
4.倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves(捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital.I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt.Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you.It's a „„ story。
十字诀
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分；四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQ is extremely strong.观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1.每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday!详举吃的是什么。2.每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，inaddition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but, yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
中考英语作文必备的10个“万金油”句型
1.不用说„„ It goes without saying that „
=(It is)needless to say(that)„
= It is obvious that „
例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。
It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours。
2.在各种„„之中，„„ Among various kinds of „，„ /= Of all the „，„
例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。
Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular。
3.就我的看法„„；我认为„„
In my opinion, „
= To my mind, „
= As far as I am concerned, „
= I am of the opinion that „
例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health。
就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
4.随着人口的增加„„ With the increase/growth of the population, „
随着科技的进步„„ With the advance of science and technology, „
例：With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass。
随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
5.„„是必要的 It is necessary(for sb。)to do / that „
„„ 是重要的 It is important/essential(for sb。)to do / that „
„„ 是适当的 It is proper(for sb。)to do / that „
„„是紧急的 It is urgent(for sb。)to do / that „
例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean。
It is proper that we(should)keep the public places clean。
我们应当保持公共场所清洁。
6.花费 spend „ on sth./ doing sth.„
例：我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。
We shouldn't spend too much time on something we aren't interested in。
7.how 引导的感叹句
例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。
At least it will prove how honest you are。
8.状语从句
A)如果你不„„，你就会„„ If you don't „，you'll „
例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance。
如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。
B)如此 „„，以至于„„ so „ that „
例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up。
当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。
C)每当我听到„„我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear „，I cannot but feel excited。
每当我做„„我就忍不住感到悲伤。Whenever I do „，I cannot but feel sad。
每当我想到„„我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of „，I cannot but feel nervous。
每当我遭遇„„我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with „，I cannot but feel frightened。
每当我看到„„我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see „，I cannot but feel surprised。
例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad。
= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad。
每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。
9.宾语从句
我认为，„„ / 我认为„„不 I think / I don't think that „
我想知道是否„„ I wonder whether „
例：He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club。
他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
10.Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。
例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard。
自从他上高中，他就一直很用功
中考指导：英语作文万能开头14句
1、关于„„人们有不同的观点。一些人认为„„
There are different opinions among people as to ____。Some people suggest that
____。
2、俗话说(常言道)„„，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______。Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in
many cases even today。
3、现在，„„，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，„„；其次，„„。更为糟糕的是„„。
Today，____，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First，____ Second，____。What makes
things worse is that______。
4、现在，„„很普遍，许多人喜欢„„，因为„„，另外(而且)„„。
Nowadays，it is common to ______。
Many people like ______because ______。Besides，______。
5、任何事物都是有两面性，„„也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages。
6、关于„„人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)„„，在他们看来，„„
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them，_____。
7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题„„，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious。
8、„„已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their
way。
9、„„在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
_____ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。
10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出„„。很显然„„，但是为什么呢？
According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______while.Obviously，______，but why？
11、Recently，the problem of „ has aroused people’s concern。
最近，„问题已引起人们的关注。
12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well。
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。
13、Nowadays，(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face。
如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。
14、With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that„
随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为„
冲刺高分四步骤法
多关注焦点、热点、人文关怀类题材
李老师告诉记者，近几年的中考书面表达命题常见题型一是根据所给标题写作，即命题作文，如 My school/family/class/hometown 等；二是根据英语情景提示写作或者是根据表格提示写作，即话题作文；三是根据一幅图画或者带有一些图片说明的题目，即看图写作。
这三种都属材料作文，特点是给出特定的书面材料，并准确地记述、描写、转达某一活动的内容或动机，从而达到书面语言交际的目的。体裁有记叙文、描写文、说明文和应用文(英文书信、E-mail、感谢信)、日记、请假条、便条、讲稿、启事、电话留言条、贺卡、发言稿(值日报告)、介绍、通知、看图写话等。
李老师着重强调了一点，近年的中考英语作文基本上是材料作文。这些题材与生活实际紧密联系，并关注社会焦点、热点问题，体现人文关怀。所设计的情景密切联系现实生活，写作题材源于生活，使学生有话可说，有利于写出真情实感，也有利主动性、创造性地发挥。所以，学生在复习时要多关注社会焦点、热点问题、人文关怀类题材。
打牢基础，养成勤练习的好习惯
李老师表示，要想在有限的篇幅和时间内，使书面表达行文流畅，语言丰富、得体，就要按题目的需要和自己实际英文水平，扬长避短，选用最熟悉的最有把握的词、句，注意时态、语态等多种句式的交替使用。
“最主要的是一定要平时打牢基础，练好基本功，养成练习的好习惯；多研究中考书面表达的要求，重视技巧训练；适时进行备考训练。”李老师提醒学生要掌握中考书面表达对学生的能力要求。
这些能力包括：在所学词汇、语法和句型的基础上写出句意完整、语法准确的句子；能根据所提供的材料、信息、图片、图表及英文词汇完成应用文、话题作文和看图作文；切中题意，文理通顺；上下文连贯，逻辑正确；要素完整，语言得当；格式正确；无拼写错误及大小写错误，书写规范整洁，标点正确。
四步骤法轻松“拿下”书面表达
李老师结合自己多年的教学心得，以及近几年编写指导学生中考英语的经验，就中考英语书面表达如何能够在考场有限时间内得高分，给出了四个步骤，初三学生不妨一试，并在寒假里按此法多多练习。
认真审题 包括文字说明、图表、短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇、字数要求等，准确把握人物关系和故事情节，理解主题大意，审清文体，确定格式，确定人称、主体时态。
列出要点 结合提示信息，把涉及的所有写作要点逐条列出，编写要点提纲，组织语言。如：1.开篇句：I think that.。我认为......；It is often said that....。人们经常这么说......2.连接句：Among all the given reasons, one should be mentioned。在所有理由中，有一个值得一提；The main reason why......is that....。之所以....。的主要原因是......3.结束句：一般情况下，记叙文和说明文采用自然结尾法；夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语，首尾呼应。结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。如：Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that„„考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以做出这样的结论„„另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year等。
完成写作 写作时语言要纯正地道，避免母语的影响；用多种表达方式，避免重复和呆板；使用熟悉的短语、句式，提高准确率。如：1.并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, not only...but also, neither...nor......both...and„„2.转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however„„3.时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last„„4.空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right„„5.比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as„„6.对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of„„7.递进关系的过渡词：also, and, then, too, in addition„„8.因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, so, therebefore„„9.解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually......10.强调的过渡词：in fact, in deed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important„„11.目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose„„12.列举的过渡词：for example, such as„„13.总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally„„
仔细检查 查格式是否有误；人称、时态是否恰当；语法结构是否正确；注意英汉表达的差异；字母大小写；字数是否合乎要求等
第二篇：中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
1.审题不清
如2004年中考作文
要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题：
误 My father and my mother is all teacher.正 My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.误 The apples cheap.I'll take some.正 The apples are cheap.I'll take some.5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代词的误用 / 6
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.For example, my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.例1.When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.改为 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 When I get to the station the train leave.正 When I got to the station the train had left.10.综合性错误：
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
特别说明：由于各方面情况的不断调整与变化，新浪网所提供的所有考试 / 6
信息仅供参考，敬请考生以权威部门公布的正式信息为准。/ 6 / 6 / 6 / 6
第三篇：中考英语作文常见错误分析
中考英语作文常见错误分析
1.审题不清
如某年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题：
误 My father and my mother is all teacher.正 My father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.误 The apples cheap.I'll take some.正 The apples are cheap.I'll take some.5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。误 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.For example, my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.例1.When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是
典型的主谓不一致.改为 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 When I get to the station the train leave.正 When I got to the station the train had left.10.综合性错误：
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养.
第四篇：英语书面表达十大常见错误解析
在长期的英语教学过程中，我分析了学生写作时常犯的错误，主要表现在以下几个方面：
（1）时态错误：文章中忽视了动作发生的时间。
（2）人称代词错误：单复数、形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词错误。
（3）名词单复数、动词单复数、主谓语不一致。
（4）用词错误：对同义词的区别、使用场合、习惯用法不熟悉，或者忘记了单词。
（5）内容不连贯：不会用关联词，语序混乱。没有统筹安排，写到哪里，就停在哪里。
（6）不会使用某些英语应用文格式。
（7）大小写、标点符号错误，缺少冠词。
（8）书写混乱，卷面潦草。
根据以上分析，若要提高学生书面表达能力，就需要进行大量训练和指导，就写作步骤来说，要指导学生遵循以下几点：
（1）认真审题，确定体裁。要求学生仔细审题，明确体裁，领会出题者用意。
（2）构思要点。根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点，设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架。
（3）选词造句，避难选易。在要点、层次明确的情况下，选用自己最熟悉的单词、句式进行造句，如果不会用复杂句就用简单句表达要点，注意主谓语一致、人称、数量、大小写、标点。
（4）认真检查，避免错误。仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确，逻辑是否一致。
面表达是中学生学习英语应掌握的一项基本技能，它要求学生有扎实的语言基本功，具备一定的审题能力、想象能力、表达能力和评价能力等。《英语课程标准》也对学生的写作提出了一定的要求，然而从近几年的考试情况来看，学生书面表达错误较多，与《英语课程标准》前言中“发展学生综合语言运用能力”的要求还有一定的差距。具体说来，学生书面表达中主要存在以下错误：
1．时态误用
主要表现在两方面：1）学生写作之前没有判断整篇文章主要用哪种时态，常出现该用一般现在时的句子，用了一般过去时；而该用将来时的句子，用了完成时。2）时态构成表达错误。由于学生对各种时态掌握不好，常常将所学的各种时态混淆，以致出现如下的错误如，I„m go to school by bike.He told some children that there are some places of interest in Beijing.2.汉语式英语
由于受汉语的影响，再加上对英语句子结构掌握不好，导致学常常按汉语的词序来翻译句子，在学生的作文中常常见到这样的句子： You can be bus.In china have different places of interest.In autumn is best season for traveling.3.逻辑错误
在做书面表达的过程中，有的学生一拿到考题慌慌张张开始写，在写作之前没有构思好先写什么后写什么，哪些内容应该详写，哪些内容应该略写，而是一边写一边构思，从而导致整个文章逻辑不清，层次感不强，整篇文章不知所云。
4．单词拼写错误
由于部分学生平时不注意记忆单词，基础知识掌握不牢固，所以在文章中常出现单词拼写错误如，September 写为 septber because 写为 beacause
5.缺少衔接
有些学生虽然在词汇运用书面表达方面能够达到基本要求，但由于句子之间没有添加适当的衔接成分，使句子之间和文段之间缺乏必要的过渡和连贯，影响了信息的传递和表达效果。
6．文体不对
中学阶段要求学生掌握的文体主要有说明文、记叙文、议论文和应用文，其中应用文又包括通知、请假条、书信和电子邮件等，由于一些学忽视了各种体裁的写作特点，从而导致文章体裁格式不正确如：将写信的日期写在信末；写请假条不写署名等。
英语书面表达十大常见错误解析
俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1.审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher.正 my father and my mother are both teachers.4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有
动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired.误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.误 the apples cheap.i'll take some.正 the apples are cheap.i'll take some.5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example, my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.例1.when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants(to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 when i get to the station the train leave.正 when i got to the station the train had left.10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
第五篇：中考英语十大常见作文话题
中考英语十大常见作文话题---按要点分类
一、难忘的事（1）别人帮助我 We became friends by accident.One day Jack was playing basketball on the playground.Amazed at how skillful he was, I made up my mind to play as well as him.I was grateful when he agreed to teach me.Every time when I wanted to give up halfway, it was Jack who encouraged me.Gradually, I mastered the skills and became confident enough to challenge the best players in our school.（2）我帮助别人 It happened on a Friday when I was seated in a crowded bus, heading for my school.It was just at that moment that an elderly lady with her little grandson stepped onto the bus.Immediately, I offered my seat to them without hesitation.The elderly lady expressed her great appreciation to me and we enjoyed a pleasant short trip together.（3）做家务表示对父母的感恩 Being a 15-year-old middle school student and feeling my parents have done so much to me, I have been considering what I can do for them to show my gratitude.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I decided to take this opportunity to do something helpful for our family.Not only did I clean the bowls and cookers, but I put all the messy things away.Tired and sweaty, I was about to open the door to throw rubbish when my parents showed up at the door.They were amazed to see what I had done and praised me.From then on, I determined to work harder to do more for my family.二、写人（1）外貌 My favorite teacher is Mr.Wang who is handsome and of medium build.My best friend is Linda who is a beautiful girl with long black hair and beautiful bright eyes.（2）性格
Mary is always wearing a sweet smile and willing to help others.Mr.Lee is our favorite teacher who has great sense of humor and always makes his class lively and interesting.（3）爱好 He is not only good at playing basketball but also does well in playing chess.Swimming is his favorite thing to do in his free time and he also shows great interest in playing soccer.（4）学习成绩 She is very good at lessons especially English, so she is one of the top students in our class.（5）难忘的一件事（见话题一）（6）感想（体会）I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream.That’s his best quality I should learn from him.Maybe that’s only a small thing and it’s not worth being mentioned.But I always believe a small act of kindness will make a big difference, so I make up my mind to learn from him to be the person who offers timely help to those in need.（7）祝福（祝愿）I sincerely hope Li Lei will make greater progress in a new high school.And I also wish he will have a bright future.三、与人相处，友情
（How to get on well with others）建议式
In our daily life, it is of great importance to know how to get along well with other people.First, sharing common hobbies or happiness with others may be of great help for you to make new friends.Then, being a friendly person, you’d better learn to smile to others often.Because smile passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people.Last but not least, when facing problems, always remember to communicate with each other patiently, try to overcome the difficulties together, which will also deepen your friendship.四、与父母沟通
例题：如何与父母建立良好关系（1）父母与子女关系良好的重要性
An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth.（2）这种良好关系应该是怎样的
Parents always show love and concern for us.They are our good listeners, advisers and supporters.With their help, we can over many difficulties in our life.（2）如何建立良好关系
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children show respect each other and exchange ideas freely.To build a relationship of this kind, parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.五、课余生活，兴趣爱好（1）集邮版 I’ve always been fond of collecting stamps since I was a little child.As far as I’m concerned, collecting stamps is a meaningful hobby, making my spare time interesting and exciting.Besides, when reviewing my collection of valuable stamps, my heart if filled with great sense of satisfaction and I can relax myself and keep away from the great pressure of school study life.Although my parents are strongly against my hobby for they consider it as a waste of money and they also think that searching for stamps may take up much of my time, which should be spent on my studies, I will try my best to communicate with them patiently and I believe they will understand and support me eventually.（2）运动版 户外运动---（健康话题）If the weather is fine, I will always spend my weekends jogging in a park to breathe fresh air which can refresh my mind and make energetic enough to concentrate better on my study.团队运动---（与人相处话题）Playing basketball / volleyball / football with your classmates after school will be a good idea, which will be of great help to not only keep you physically strong but build up team work spirit and deepen the friendship between you and your friends.六、环保
（1）环保的重要性 It is of extreme importance to protect the environment by leading a low-carbon life style which is environmentally friendly.（2）具体做法
种树---
Firstly, planting trees in a park on weekends with your friends will be a good choice.Because by doing so, the air will be refreshed and the environment where we live will be beautified.走路/骑车上学---
Besides, if I were you, I would walk to school instead of driving so that the gas that does to our health will be reduced effectively.随手关水龙头---Last but not least, It is necessary to save water by turning off the tap after washing hands.Or we’ll run out of fresh water very soon.（3）结尾，呼吁大家一起来保护环境 The environmental protection is not only the business of the government, but also the responsibility of each of us.Even a small effort can make a great difference, so let’s take actions from now on to protect our environment.七、学习方法（1）学习英语---听 It is of great help for you to listen to English songs and radio in order to improve your English pronunciation every morning on your way to school.（2）学习英语---说 It is strongly suggested to make friends with native English speakers so that you will know the culture of English speaking countries better and speak the language fluently.（3）学习英语---读 Reading some English newspapers and books will be a good idea, this way your English vocabulary will be enlarged effectively.（4）学习英语---写 If I were you, I would write to my pen pal who lives in America because by doing so, my writing skills will be improved.（5）老师指导 Having an English teacher is of great importance.Because you can hardly learn English well without instruction.（6）有信心 If you believe in yourself, you will be strong enough to overcome any difficulty that you face in studying English.（7）团队合作式学习 Study with a group by discussing problems that you can solve and learn from the practical study methods shared selflessly by others.八、假期计划（1）志愿者
做法---Our school is home to many special young people who all volunteer their free time to help others.I have been always dreaming of becoming a professional singer.So in the coming vacation, I volunteer to sing for groups of the elderly people at the old people’s home to cheer them up.What’s more, I love reading, and I put this love to good use by being a volunteer and working in the after-school care center at her local elementary school.Here, I help young children to read.感想---Volunteering is great!Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but I get to spend time doing what I love to do.”（2）旅行放松（减压话题）After a tiring and stressful school term, the summer vacation which I have been longing for is around the corner.回老家度假---I will go to visit my grandparents and spend my summer vacation there because beautiful natural views of that small country always flash in my mind during the busy school days.I was brought up by them and I always take the place as my second hometown.国内外旅行---Traveling around China or abroad will be my first choice to spend the summer vacation.It can enrich my knowledge that can’t be gained from school books and broad my horizons.What’s more, I will be completely relaxed and free from the stress and tiredness of busy school study life.九、健康话题
（1）以H1N1为例，说明健康的重要性 Presently, the disease HINI is flooding every corner of the world which seriously threatens people’s health.Therefore, it is a hot topic among people to keep healthy.（2）具体做法
吃---To start with, it’s very essential for us to for good habits of eating and drinking.Eating more fruits and vegetables serves our benefit.Meanwhile, keeping balanced diet is equally important to our health.运动---What’s more, we’d best take part in the proper sport activities such as playing basketball or running.It is said that no health without sports because sports can keep us refreshed and improve our immunity system.作息习惯（充足睡眠）---Additionally, a good lifestyle matters a lot.Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.乐观的生活态度---Last but not the least, an active attitude keeps the doctor away.We are supposed to get along well with our friends and keep happy all the time.（3）总结 To conclude, if we hope to lead a healthy life and be strong, we must bear in mind these words: healthy diet, proper sports, good lifestyle and active attitude.十、周围环境（1）交通安全（红灯）It’s very important for students to know about the traffic rules.When the red light is on, you must stop and you are not allowed to go on walking.Even though you have something urgent to do or maybe you think the drivers dare not run over you.But do you know that rushing is at the cost of your life? So it’s not worth taking the risk.（绿灯）It’s safe to cross the road when the light is green.（黄灯）When the orange light is on, you must wait and be careful, because the red light will be on very soon.Here are some suggestions to protect ourselves.First, we should follow the traffic lights and can’t break the traffic rules.Second, we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before stepping forward to cross the street.Last but not least, don’t forget that it’s very dangerous to play on the street.From now on not only I myself will strictly obey the traffic rules but I’ll also call on my classmates and my family to do so.（2）网络安全
利---The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.We can not only read news from home and abroad, but also get information, send emails, make phone calls, attend on-line schools, read various books and study English by ourselves.What’s more, people can enjoy music, watch sports matches, play all kinds of games and go shopping on-line.弊---However, every coin has two sides.It’s risky to make friends and shop on-line.What’s worse, some students who are addicted to the Internet don’t study hard or even quit school.个人观点---For my part, I completely agree with the latter view that the Internet has more disadvantages than advantages.It results in various computer crimes.What is more, it is harmful to the growth of the young.Something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the Internet.
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