2013高考英语二轮复习 写作专题 第一部分 万能句子 常用词组及句型精品教案

第一篇：2013高考英语二轮复习 写作专题 第一部分 万能句子 常用词组及句型精品教案

第一部分 高考英语作文高分万能句子

常用词组及句型

提出主题

There is a widespread concern over the issue that…

The topic of(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.…has attracted extensive(广泛的)attention of the society.There is no consensus(一致)of opinion among people as to the view of…

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Firstly…secondly(besides)…thirdly(finally)For one thing…for another…what's more… On one hand…on the other hand…moreover…

转折

On the contrary…

however, a coin has two sides…

You can't take your cake and eat it.自己的看法

In my opinion

As far as I am concerned

From my point of view，With reference to my standpoint ，喊口号

I think / I firmly support…

Only through…can we…

说明事物现状(一句带过)

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)作文题目.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题.事物本身的优缺点

Its advantages can be seen as follows…

Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows…

The negative aspects are also apparent…

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Firstly, 优点一.And secondly 优点二.To begin with, 缺点一.In addition, 缺点二.To make matters worse，…… 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Through above analyses, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh(胜于)the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to……

From the comparison between……

We should do it according to the circumstances we are in.2-

第二篇：高考英语写作必备词组500个句型汇总

高考英语写作必备词组547个句型汇总

首先，尤其重要的，最重要的 above all 2 偶然，无意中 by accident 3对(于)…很积极 be active in 4合计为

add up to 5承让错误 admit one’s mistake

6接受某人的建议 take / follow one’s advice 7就…提出建议 give advice on 8建议某人做某事 advice sb.to do sth.9后天 the day after tomorrow 10毕竟;终究 after all 11违心

against one’s will 12在…岁时 at the age of 13实现目标 achieve one’s aim 14在空中;悬而未决 in the air 15在户外，在露天里 in the open air 16在机场 at the airport 17火警

the fire alarm 18满腔怒火

be filled with anger 19因某人之言行而生气 be angry at sth.20生某人的气

be angry with sb.21通知

make an announcement 22相继地，按顺序地 one after another 23相互，彼此(三者或三者以上之间)

one another 24相互(指两者之间)each other 25没有回答

give no answer 26为…而担心

be anxious about 27急于做某事

be anxious to do sth.28分开住

live apart 29除了

apart from 30因某事向某人认错或道歉 make/offer an apology to sb for sth.31与某人争论某事

argue with sb.about sth.32放在一边 lay sth.aside 33请某人指点 / 帮助

ask sb.for advice / help 34惊讶于… be astonished at sth.35以前，曾经

at one time 36注意

pay attention to 37对…抱正确的态度

take a correct attitude towards sth.38引起(注意，兴趣等)attract one’s attention 39仰卧/仰泳 lie / swim on one’s back 40重感冒

a bad cold 41两件行李 two pieces of baggage 42保持/失去平衡 keep / lose one’s balance

43在舞会上 at the ball 44洗冷水澡 have / take a cold bath 45阵亡

be killed in battle 46在海滩

on the beach 47整理床铺 make the bed 48以…开始 begin with 49在…起始，开始

at the beginning of 50自始自终

from beginning to end 51形成…局面;产生 come into being 52安全带

a safety belt 53三思而后行。

Second thoughts are best.54尽力，尽最大的努力 do / try one’s best 55尽量利用，善用

make the best of 56一切顺利，万事如意 all the best 57黑体地，粗体地 in bold 58出身于农民家庭

be born in a peasant’s family 59鞠躬

make a bow 60动动脑子 use one’s brains 61打破纪录 break the record 62深吸一口气 take a deep breath 63屏息;憋住气 hold one’s breath 64上气不接下气 out of breath 65刷牙

brush one’s teeth 66突然哭起来 burst into tears 67突然一阵大笑 a burst of laughter 68要不是 but for 69呼救声 a call for help 70保持镇静(别慌)keep calm 71保持安静(别吵)keep quiet 72保持不动(别动)keep still 73保持沉默(别说话)keep silent 74夏令营 a summer camp 75去野营 go camping 76情不自禁… cannot help doing 77打牌 play cards 78照顾，保管 take care of 79医疗护理 medical care 80假若那样的话 in that case 81以防万一 in case 82下倾盆大雨 rain cats and dogs 83赶上(或超过)catch up with 84偶然 by chance 85免费 free of charge 86主管，在掌管之下 in charge

87由…负责 in the charge of 88掌管，负责 take charge 89高兴起来 cheer up 90童年时 in one’s childhood 91挑选，选择 make a choice 92圣诞节时 at Christmas 93去做礼拜 go to church 94烟头

cigarette end 95为…鼓掌 give sb.a clap 96接近get close to 97 一块桌布 a table cloth 98 一套衣服 a suit of clothes 99 童装 children’s clothing 100 集邮 collect stamps 101.产生，发生 come about 102.(偶然)遇见或发现 come across 103.走过来;长出，发芽，上升;抬头 come up 104.共同，共有 in common 105.参加比赛 compete in a contest 106.举办音乐会 give a concert 107.条件是 on condition that 108.祝贺某人 congratulate sb.on sth.109.相反地 on the contrary 110.失控 out of control 111.与…谈话;交谈 have a conversation with sb.112.在…期间/过程中 in / during the course of 113.被…覆盖 be covered with 114.因某事和某人发脾气 be cross with sb.at sth.115.划掉 cross out 116.对…残忍 be cruel to sb.117.立方米 cubic meter 118.对…感到好奇 be curious about sth.119.对…造成巨大损害 do great damage to 120.处境危险 in danger 121.过时 out of date 122.在不久前，前几天 the other day 123.对…充耳不闻 be deaf to sth.124.对付，应付 deal with 125.负债 in debt 126.还清债务 out of debt 127.相反地 on the contrary 128.失控 out of control 129.与…谈话;交谈 have a conversation with sb.130.在…期间/过程中 in / during the course of

131.被…覆盖 be covered with 132.因某事和某人发脾气 be cross with sb.at sth.133.划掉 cross out 134.对…残忍 be cruel to sb.135.立方米 cubic meter 136.对…感到好奇 be curious about sth.137.对…造成巨大损害 do great damage to 138.处境危险 in danger 139.过时 out of date 140.在不久前，前几天 the other day 141.对…充耳不闻 be deaf to sth.142.对付，应付 deal with 143.负债 in debt 144.还清债务 out of debt 145.做…有困难，难以… have difficulty in doing sth.146.应邀赴宴 be invited to dinner 147.向四面八方 in all directions 148.做出新的发现 make a new discovery 149.正在讨论中 under discussion 150.洗盘子 wash dishes 151.在远方，在远处 in the distance 152.对…冷淡 be distant toward sb.153.对…有益 do good to 154.做坏事，犯罪 do wrong 155.挨门挨户 from door to door 156.隔壁的 next door 157.下楼 go downstairs 158.到市区去 go downtown 159.缓慢前进，拖延 drag one’s feet

160.催人泪下 draw tears from sb.161.渴望做某事 dream of doing sth.162.在墙上钻孔 drill a hole in the wall 163.赶走 drive off 164.使某人发狂 drive sb.mad 165.挣钱 earn money 166.谋生 earn one’s living

167.究竟 on earth 168.别着急，别紧张，放松些 take it easy 169.对…有很大影响 have a great effect on 170.努力做某事 make efforts to do sth.171.鼓励某人做某事 encourage sb.to do sth.172.量入而出;使收支相抵 make ends meet 173.美满的结局 a happy ending 174.说英语的国家 English-speaking countries

175.报名比赛 enter oneself for a contest 176.剧场的入口 the entrance to the theater 177.在除夕 on New Year’s Eve

178.虽然，即使 even if / even though 179.时事 current events

180.参加考试 have / take an examination 181.进行体格检查 carry out a medical examination 182.考试及格 pass an examination 183.为…树立榜样 set an example to sb.184.做早操 do morning exercises 185.产生，成立 come into existence 186.摸某人的脉 feel one’s pulse

187.觉得想做… feel like doing sth.188.伤害某人的感情 hurt one’s feelings 189.春节 the Spring Festival 190.发高烧 have a high fever 191.科学领域 the field of science 192.五十多岁时 in one’s fifties

193.关键人物 a key figure 194.填写表格 fill in the form 195.刹那间 in a flash 196.一场大洪水 a big / great flood 197.扫地 sweep the floor 198.在三层 on the third floor 199.三层楼的建筑 a building of three storeys 200.正在开花 be in flowers 201.放(风筝等)fly a kite 202.糊里糊涂 in a fog 203.欺骗，愚弄某人 make a fool of sb.204.在山脚下 at the foot of the mountain 205.空军 the air force 206.靠武力，强行 by force 207.用很大力气 with great force 208.对外贸易 foreign trade 209.养成好习惯 form a good habit 210.碰碰运气 try one’s fortune

211.每四个一组(一批);四个四个地 in fours 212.常客 a frequent visitor 213.新手 a fresh hand 214.同…交朋友 make friends with 215.那时起 from then on 216.不时地，时常 from time to time 217.不劳而不获。No pains, no gains.218.做游戏 play games

219.代沟 generation gap

220.开始认真(做某事)get down to sth.221.陷入麻烦 get into trouble

222.有音乐天分 have a gift for music

223.用尽，耗尽，筋疲力尽 give out

224.朝…看了一眼 take a glance at

225.向人瞪眼，怒目而视 glare at

226.(灯，火)熄灭 go out

227.复习功课 go over the lesson

228.进了一个球 score a goal

229.犯语法错误 make mistakes in grammar

230.懂某人的意思 grasp one’s meaning

231.勿踏草地 keep off the grass

232.养成…的习惯 get into the habit of

233.用手 by hand

234.分发 hand out

235.一方面…另一方面… on the one hand…on the other hand

236.少量的 a handful of

237.过幸福生活 live a happy life

238.损害，伤害 do harm to

239.一个好收成 a good harvest

240.保持镇静 keep one’s head

241.身体好 in good health

242.记住某事 learn / know sth.by heart

243.紧握某物 keep a tight hold on sth.244.握住;抓住 catch / take / get hold of

245.趾高气扬 hold one’s head high

246.暑假 the summer holidays

247.休假 on holiday

248.为(向)… 表示敬意;为了纪念… in honour of

249.对某人抱很大希望 have high hope for sb.250.怀着…的希望 in the hope of doing sth.251.住院 be in hospital

252.大约一小时 an hour or so

253.挨饿 go hungry

254.打猎 go hunting

255.匆匆忙忙 in a hurry

256.不知道 have no idea

257.但愿，要是…就好了 if only

258.给某人留下好印象 make a good impression on sb.259.慢慢前进 inch one’s way forward

260.患难之交才是真朋友。A friend in need is a friend indeed.261.告诉某人某事 inform sb of sth 262.坚持要做 insist on doing

263.视察工厂 inspect a factory 264.激动人心的演讲 an inspiring speech 265.急需帮助 in instant need of help 266.打断谈话 interrupt a conversation 267.介绍信 a letter of introduction 268.收到请帖 receive an invitation 269.邀请信 a letter of invitation 270.讲笑话 tell a joke 271.和某人开玩笑 play a joke with sb.272.旅行 make a journey 273.使某人高兴的是 to one’s joy

274.不可以貌取人 Don’t judge a man by his looks.275.初中 a junior high school 276.正在那时 just then 277.与…保持联系 keep in touch with 278.使…不进入… keep out of 279.成功的秘诀 the key to success 280.踢门 kick the door 281.踢掉鞋子 kick off one’s shoes 282.跪下 go down / fall on one’s knees 283.敲门 knock at the door 284.最迟，至迟 at the latest 285.迟早 sooner or later 286.哈哈大笑起来 burst into laughter 287.违(守)法 break / obey the law 288.制定一条法律 make a law 289.摆设餐具(准备吃饭)lay the table 290.过着简朴的生活 lead a simple life 291.忽略，遗漏 leave out 292.听关于…的讲座 attend a lecture on 293.给某人一个教训 teach sb.a lesson 294.从…在中吸取教训 take a lesson from 295.惊讶地叫了一声 let out a cry of surprise 296.透漏消息 let out the news 297.大写字母 a capital letter 298.仰卧 / 俯卧 lie on one’s back / stomach 299.复活，苏醒过来 come back to life 300.交通信号灯 traffic lights 301.列一张购物清单 make a shopping list 302.谋生，度日 make a living 303.丧生，死;牺牲 lose one’s life 304.泄气;灰心 lose heart 305.失音 lose one’s voice 306.输一场 lose a game

307.祝你好运 Wish you good luck.308.洗衣机 a washing machine 309.欣喜若狂 be mad with joy 310.邮寄包裹 send the parcel by mail 311.赚钱 make money 312.交朋友 make friends 313.取得进步 make progress 314.利用 make use of 315.编造故事 make up a story 316.弥补某人的过失 make up for one’s mistake 317.有礼貌 have good manners 318.商标 a trade mark 319.满分 full marks 320.观看一场篮球比赛 watch a basketball match 321.进行比赛 have a match 322.祝你成功。May you success.323.五一节 May Day 324.通过这种方式 by this means 325.用…方法，依靠 by means of 326.决不 by no means 327.按…尺寸做 make…to one’s measure 328.采取措施 take a measure 329.量身高 measure one’s height 330.获得金牌 get a gold medal 331.医疗队 a medical team 332.体检 medical examination 333.吃药 take / have some medicine 334.满足…的需要 meet the needs of 335.遇到风暴 meet with a storm 336.去开会 go to a meeting 337.开会 have a meeting 338.举行会议 hold a meeting 339.为纪念 in memory of 340.对…一点儿也不怜悯 have no mercy on sb.341.毫不容情地;残忍地 without mercy 342.在…支配下;任由…摆布 at the mercy of 343.给某人捎个信儿 take a message for sb.344.中秋节 Mid-autumn Day 345.上百万的，许许多多的 millions of 346.改变主意 change one’s mind

347.当心油漆未干。Mind the wet paint!348.下决心 make up one’s mind

349.外交部长 the minister of foreign affairs 350.错过机会 miss an opportunity

351.犯错误 make a mistake 352.由疏忽所致 by mistake 353.现代 in modern times 354.零钱 small money 355.某人身上没(带)钱 have no money with sb.356.选某人为班长 make sb.monitor 357.某一天清早 on the early morning 358.在山顶上 at the top of the mountain 359.参加海军 join the navy 360.如果有必要的话 if necessary 361.需要帮助 in need of help 362.呈现一片新面貌 take on a new look 363.打某人的鼻子 hit sb.on the nose 364.做笔记 make / take notes 365.与…无关 have nothing to do with 366.张贴通知 put up a notice 367.对某人毫不在意 pay no notice to sb.368.运转着，实施中 be in operation 369.订购某物 place an order for sth.370.失业了 out of work 371.一副眼镜 a pair of glasses 372.颐和园 the Summer Palace 373.此处禁止停车!No parking here!374.在…方面起积极作用 take an active part in 375.在过去的几天里 in the past few days 376.对某人有耐心 be patient with sb.377.熟能生巧。Practice makes perfect.378.演出，表演 put on performances 379.亲自，当面 in person 380.给某人照相 take a photo of sb.381.弹钢琴 play the piano 382.摘花 pick flowers 383.捡钱包 pick up a wallet 384.去野餐 go out for a picnic 385.一堆书 a pile of books 386.可怜某人(因同情而帮助某人)have / take pity on sb.387.出于同情 out of pity 388.代替 in place of 389.坐某人的座位，代替某人的职务 take one’s place 390.举行，发生 take place 391.代替，代理 take the place of 392.订计划 make a plan 393.玩牌 play cards 394.对某人开一个玩笑 play a joke on sb.395.与…一起玩 play with sb.396.在操场上 on the playground 397.对…感到满意 be pleased with 398.喜欢做某事 take pleasure in doing sth.399.生活富裕 live in plenty

400.正要…的时候 on the point of 401.对某人有礼貌 be polite to sb.402.受某人喜爱 be popular with sb.403.占有，拥有 take possession of 404.发电站 power station 405.当权，执政 take power 406.因为某事赞扬某人 praise sb.for sth.407.赞扬 in praise of 408.出席会议 be present at a meeting 409.眼下 at present 410.互赠礼物 exchange presents 411.在压力下 under pressure 412.防止某人做某事 prevent sb.from doing 413.以…为代价 at the price of 414.无论花多少代价(不惜任何代价)at any price 415.以…为自豪;对…感到得意 take pride in 416.小学 primary school 417.入狱，被监禁 go to prison 418.在狱中服刑 be in prison 419.将某人送进监狱 throw / put sb.into prison 420.越狱 escape from prison 421.解决问题 solve the problem 422.回答问题 answer the question 423.遵守诺言 keep one’s promise

424.答应，许下诺言 make a promise 425.以…自豪 be proud of 426.养家糊口 provide food and clothes for one’s family

427.公共事务 public affairs 428.舆论 public opinion 429.当众，公开 in public 430.出版社 publishing house 431.故意地 on purpose 432.把…推到一边 push aside 433.推倒，(风)刮倒 push over 434.拖延，推迟 put off 435.不可能 out of the question 436.接力赛 a relay race 437.通过无线电广播 on the radio 438.衣衫褴褛，穿破衣服 in rags

439.在火车站 at the railway station 440.小(大)雨 light / heavy rain 441.一线希望 a ray of hope 442.伸手去拿 reach for sth.443.够不着 out of ones’ reach 444.乐意干某事 be ready to do 445.事实上 in reality 446.实现希望 realize one’s hope 447.为此，为此理由 for this reason 448.接待处 reception desk 449.参考;谈到 refer to 450.留在某人的记忆中 remain in one’s memory 451.提醒某人做某事 remind sb.to do sth.452.使某人想起 remind sb.of sth.453.应…请求 by request 454.因此，结果 as a result 455.盛产;有大量的… be rich in 456.除掉 get rid of 457.抢走某人某物 rob sb.of sth.458.起重要作用 play an important role 459.扮演…的角色 play the role of 460.给…腾出地方 make room for 461.对某人无礼 be rude to sb.462.用完 run out of 463.高峰时间，拥挤时间 rush hour 464.满足某人的需要 satisfy one’s needs 465.节省体力 save one’s strength 466.也就是说 that is to say 467.为某事责备某人 scold sb.for sth.468.就座，坐下 take one’s seat

469.不让人知道某事，保密 keep sth.a secret 470.抓住小偷的衣领 seize a thief by the collar 471.与某人握手 shake hands with sb.472.店员;营业员 shop assistant 473.领某人出去/进来 show sb.out / in 474.炫耀 show off 475.对岸;在…另一面 on the other side of 476.支持某人(方)take the side of 477.站在…一边 take sides in 478.看不见 lose sight of 479.看到，发现 catch sight out 480.看不见 out of sight 481.静静地 in silence 482.和…类似的 be similar to

483.单程票 single ticket 484.量…的大小(尺寸)take the size of 485.偷偷塞给某人一张纸条 486.slip a note into one’s hand

487.在雪地上滑倒 slip on the snow 488.克服困难 smooth away difficulties 489.大约 or so 490.与…有关系 have something to do with 491.国歌 the national song 492.大胆地说，清楚并响亮地说 speak out 493.发言，演讲 make a speech 494.以…的速度 at a speed of 495.平方公里 square kilometers 496.代表，象征 stand for 497.饿死 starve to death 498.处于良好状态 in a good state 499.逐步地，一步一步地 step by step 500.遵守诺言 stick to one’s word / promise 501.趴在地上 lie on one’s stomach

502.四层楼的住宅 a house of four storeys 503.赶上风暴 be caught in the storm 504.对…要求严格 be strict with sb.in sth.505.擦火柴 strike a match 506.挣扎着起来 struggle to one’s feet 507.仔细研究 make a study of 508.突然，冷不防 all of a sudden 509.暑假 summer holidays 510.向某人供应/提供 supply sb.with sth.511.使某人惊奇的是 to one’s surprise 512.擦脸上的汗 sweat off one’s face 513.坐下吃饭 sit down to table 514.纳税 pay one’s taxes 515.沏茶 make tea 516.用望远镜 through a telescope 517.讲故事 tell a story 518.辨别，分清 tell one from the other 519.量体温 take one’s temperature 520.数以万计 tens of thousands of 521.被…吓了一跳 be terrified at 522.因某事感谢某人 be thankful to sb.for sth.523.扔掉 throw away 524.吐出(食物)，呕吐 throw up 525.立刻，很快 in no time 526.交通堵塞 traffic jam

527.跟某人开玩笑，欺骗某人 play a trick on sb.528.处于困境(苦恼)中 be in trouble 529.一条裤子 a pair of trousers 530.上大学 attend university 531.拜访某人 pay a visit to sb.532.高声地(喊)at the top of one’s voice 533.在交战 at war 534.穿旧;使筋疲力尽 wear out 535.拔草 pull out the weeds 536.穿着白色衣服 be dressed in white 537.通盘，作为整体 as a whole 538.总的来说 on the whole 539.有志者事竟成。

540.Where there is a will, there is a way.541.乐意做某事 be willing to do sth.542.擦掉灰尘 wipe off the dust 543.创造奇迹 make wonders 544.不足为奇;难怪 no wonder 545.插话 get in a word 546.和某人说句话 have a word with sb.547.总之，简言之 in a word 13

第三篇：2011年高考二轮复习：写作

创新点一 深刻 ◎特征点解读

《考试大纲》对高考作文发展等级中的“深刻”作了界定，即透过现象深入本质，揭示事物内在的因果关系，观点具有启发作用。

1．透过现象深入本质。要求考生透过现象的迷雾深入思考，对现象进行“去伪存真，去粗存精，由表及里”的加工，发掘出寓于事物中的本质来。

2．揭示事物内在的因果关系。任何事物的存在都不是孤立的、偶然的，有后果就必然有前因，要善于探究事物的本源，以敏锐的目光，借助事物发展变化的脉络，探寻问题发生的原因，从而找到解决问题的方法。

3．观点具有启发作用。陈旧的、大众化的观点，不能产生振聋发聩的效果，所持观点应该具有时代感、前瞻性、震撼力，能够启人心智。

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荷之秋思 安徽考生

一茎残荷，挣扎于荷田之中，在冷风中瑟瑟发抖，显得格外凄凉。残荷似乎从噩梦中醒来，长叹一声。随着这声深深的叹息，往日的遭遇一齐涌上心头。

2008年的春天，我的主人突然心血来潮，说是这年头，没有什么不可能，硬要把我的根埋得深深的，把水灌得满满的，还美其名曰：“根深才能叶茂，水深才能养鱼。”于是，他们全家人一起出动，扛着锹镐，来到塘边，深挖塘泥。完工之后，再放进肥料，把我埋入塘泥下面。我周围还埋了许多我的兄弟姐妹。开始我也以为这样能够丰产丰收，长出许多藕崽，开出许多荷花，结出许多莲子，那不是我这一生最大的造化吗?可是，被埋入深泥深水之后，我就像被打入了冷宫，天天黑暗，日日阴沉，不能呼吸，不见光明，鱼儿虾儿不时骚扰，蛙儿虫儿经常嬉闹。终于有一天，我的身体骚动起来，不几天，便长出了一个幼小的嫩芽。可是我没办法向上伸展，根部没底气，胸中无营养，结果我一天天萎缩，终于沉睡在深泥之中。这就是我的第一次遭遇。

2009年，我的主人坐在塘边，长吁短叹，不时滴下几滴悔恨的泪水。他的泪水震撼了荷塘，也将我那死去的心灵唤醒。原来，主人从镇农技员那里获知，种荷花时水位不能太深了，越深越没有出头之日。于是，主人将奄奄一息的我捞起，还有我的那些兄弟姐妹，移栽到水田之中。这是一块长方形的瘦田，三四寸的浮土下面，全是石板。主人边栽边说：“这下将你栽得浅浅的，定会丰产丰收的吧？！”我听了也怪高兴的，从深塘到浅田，水位变了，我的好运也该到了。我躺在田泥里，天天盼，日日等，终于，我发芽了，长叶了，粗壮了，我呼吸着新鲜的空气，沐浴着灿烂的阳光，憧憬着报答主人的那一刻。可是，好景不长，到了端午节的时候，我突然觉得浑身无力，我的叶子渐渐变黄，花蕾慢慢枯瘪，刚刚发育的莲子，也开始变小。难道厄运再一次降临到我的头上，难道主人就这么倒霉，难道农技员是个冒牌专家，难道……“这水太浅了，头重脚轻根底浅，藕芽怎能长成？”田埂上，农技员对主人说着。

◎误区警示

本文采用第一人称，以“荷之秋思”为行文线索，从反面立意，写荷的两次不幸遭遇。但作者没有能很好地揭示荷的两次不幸遭遇的根本原因，没有能揭示事物内在的因果关系。另外，两次不幸遭遇之间也缺少必要的过渡。

◎升格作文 荷之秋思

山高月小，秋风萧索，一茎残荷，挣扎于荷田之中，在冷风中瑟瑟发抖，显得格外凄凉。

残荷似乎从噩梦中醒来，长叹一声。随着这声深深的叹息，往日的遭遇一齐涌上心头。

那是公元2008年的春天，我的主人突然心血来潮，说是这年头，没有什么不可能，硬要把我的根埋得深深的，把水灌得满满的，还美其名曰：“根深才能叶茂，水深才能养鱼。”于是，他们全家人一起出动，扛着锹镐，来到塘边，深挖塘泥。完工之后，再放进肥料，把我埋入塘泥下面。我周围还埋了许多我的兄弟姐妹。开始我也以为这样能够丰产丰收，长出许多藕崽，开出许多荷花，结出许多莲子，那不是我这一生最大的造化吗?可是，被埋入深泥深水之后，我就像被打入了冷宫，天天黑暗，日日阴沉，不能呼吸，不见光明，鱼儿虾儿不时骚扰，蛙儿虫儿经常嬉闹。终于有一天，我的身体骚动起来，不几天，便长出了一个幼小的嫩芽。可是我没办法向上伸展，根部没底气，胸中无营养，结果我一天天萎缩，终于沉睡在深泥之中。这就是我的第一次遭遇。

时过境迁，转眼又跨进了公元2009年，我的主人坐在塘边，长吁短叹，不时滴下几滴悔恨的泪水。他的泪水震撼了荷塘，也将我那死去的心灵唤醒。原来，主人从镇农技员那里获知，种荷花时水位不能太深了，越深越没有出头之日。于是，主人将奄奄一息的我捞起，还有我的那些兄弟姐妹，移栽到水田之中。这是一块长方形的瘦田，三四寸的浮土下面，全是石板。主人边栽边说：“这下将你栽得浅浅的，定会丰产丰收的吧?！”我听了也怪高兴的，从深塘到浅田，水位变了，我的好运也该到了。我躺在田泥里，天天盼，日日等，终于，我发芽了，长叶了，粗壮了，我呼吸着新鲜的空气，沐浴着灿烂的阳光，憧憬着报答主人的那一刻。可是，好景不长，到了端午节的时候，我突然觉得浑身无力，我的叶子渐渐变黄，花蕾慢慢枯瘪，刚刚发育的莲子，也开始变小。难道厄运再一次降临到我的头上，难道主人就这么倒霉，难道农技员是个冒牌专家，难道……“这田太瘦了，这水太浅了，头重脚轻根底浅，荷花无法扎深根，藕芽怎能长成?古人云，„不深不浅种荷花‟，你去年步入了深的误区，今年又走向了浅的极端，不从实际出发，不因地制宜，不实事求是，不按荷花的生长规律办事，必然要付出惨重的代价！”田埂上，农技员对主人说着，语重心长。那声音铿锵有力，掷地有声，回荡在田间地头、荷塘上空。“不深不浅种荷花”，这就是真理——荷花沉思着。

◎特征点突破技巧

1．打破思维定势，在创新意识的支配下求深刻。运用逆向思维立意，就是要打破常规的思维定势，对一种客观事物或现象从不同的角度进行求异思维，择其对立的一面，“反弹琵琶”。譬如名人名言、警句成语，都有一定的哲理性，但是，不少成语警句往往是从某一个角度而言的，随着时代的进步，人们的观念也在不断更新，这些名言警句的内容就显露出一定的局限性。2．进行思维系列训练，培养良好的思维品质。通过对思辨意识的系列训练，能使学生在文章中明辨是非，辨别优劣，分析前因后果，形成自己的独特的观点和看法。

3．通过妙言警语显示深刻。通过妙言警语显示观点的深刻性，就是运用判断句和修辞句写出令人深思、耐人寻味、富有哲理的警句妙语。

创新点二 丰富

◎特征点解读

“丰富”是高考作文发展等级的第二项要求，具体指材料丰富、论据充实、形象丰满、意境深远。1．“材料丰富”是写作各种文体文章的总要求。是指文章使用的材料种类多、数量大，内容丰赡，血肉丰满。

2．“论据充实”主要是针对议论性文章而言的。在确立了富有新意的正确观点之后，还要选用真实、典型、新鲜的论据来证明。这些在行文中的理论引证、事实例子、数字资料等要充分而有力，避免空洞的分析。

3．“形象丰满”是就写人叙事类文章而言的。它需要考生能够熟练地掌握几种描写方法，写环境，绘声绘色，让人如临其境；写人物，个性鲜明，让人物栩栩如生地站在读者面前。4．“意境深远”是就写景抒情类文章而言的。“意境”，就是指文章中那种情景交融、形神兼备的艺术境界。要创造深远的意境，就需要考生有写景状物的本领，做到寓情于景，寓理于形。

◎失误作文与你为邻

广东考生

“妈！隔壁的开门声，吵死了！”我皱着眉头，对着答案在自己刚做完的一道题目旁边打了一个大大的叉。我瞥了瞥桌子上无声走动着的闹钟，果然，又是11点半。

我们家在老城区一座旧楼里，住了多少年了，我从来没有想到这几天这么敏感地难以忍受哪怕游丝般的声响。要不是学校说高考前自习，要不是爸妈一再催促我回家吃好睡好补好身子，我就不用像现在这般忍受邻里三姑六婆不时的高谈阔论和这晚上11点半到访的恼人打扰了。老妈说：“孩子，你知道的，隔壁小王早出晚归，也够辛苦的，你知道环卫工人得一天扫多少地……”“我不管!这家真不讲文明，他有啥理由天天准时吵着我？甚至有时有婴儿的哭声!明天趁着周日，他轮休吧？你和我过去同他讲清楚!”说完我离开位置，上了床，用被子一层又一层地捂着自己的耳朵。

今晚，出奇地，很安静。我失眠了，躺在床上，睁大眼干盯着墙壁，仿佛要看穿墙壁对面任何一丝的喧扰。

天刚刚亮，我就拉着老妈，来到了对门。这户人家的门，是那种破旧的旧式铁栅门，上面早被岁月侵蚀得七七八八了。伴随着我急促的敲门声，是铁栅门发出的声响，出来—个小伙子，满脸胡茬，和一身似乎和铁门可以称兄道弟的褪了色的凌乱的衣服。“小王啊，我是隔壁的张阿姨，谢谢你啊，楼道这几天可干净了。”老妈拖着我，把我的话盖了下去。“哪里，应该的，这是您家的娃儿吧？多大了？长得可真俊。”我说：“十八了，就要高考了……”“那一定要加油啊！我给你点补身子的。”说完，他便一转身，走进了屋子，留下了满脸惊诧的我和老妈。

那是怎样的屋子呀！房间里满满地挤着一张床，旁边是席地而放的饭锅、电风扇，甚至破破烂烂的玩具。床上坐着小王的妻子，还有她怀里对我们微笑的婴儿。我呆住了。

小王走了出来，拿给我两个红鸡蛋。“这孩子，好好学习，上大学了给我们邻居也增添光彩！”

与你为邻，谢谢你，待我以真诚和爱。

◎误区警示

本文作者选取了高考前夕与邻居之间发生的事情，借以表达邻里之间要以真诚和爱相待的主题。但内容不够丰富，人物形象不够丰满，细节描写不够生动，对人物的语言描写、神态描写也不能给人如闻其声、如见其人的感觉。

◎升格作文 与你为邻

“妈！隔壁的开门声，吵死了！”我皱着眉头，对着答案在自己刚做完的一道题目旁边打了一个大大的叉。我瞥了瞥桌子上无声走动着的闹钟，果然，又是准时的夜里11点半。

我们家在老城区一座旧楼里，住了多少年了，我从来没有想到这几天这么敏感地难以忍受哪怕游丝般的声响。要不是学校说高考前自习，要不是爸妈一再催促我回家吃好睡好补好身子，我就不用像现在这般忍受邻里三姑六婆不时的高谈阔论和这晚上11点半准时到访的恼人打扰了。要知道，晚上正是我最清醒的时候，可也是我最敏感的时候。

老妈穿着睡衣，轻轻地，又或者说，蹑手蹑脚地走到我房间。“孩子，你知道的，隔壁小王早出晚归，也够辛苦的，你知道环卫工人一天得扫多少地……”“我不管我不管!管他是谁，他有啥理由天天准时吵着我？甚至有时还附送一两声婴儿的哭声！我不管！明天趁着周日，他轮休吧？你陪我过去和他说清楚！”说完我便转身而去，一头扎到床上，用被子一层又一层地捂着自己的耳朵。床“咿呀”了一下，像是一声痛苦而又无奈的呻吟。

今晚，出奇地，特别的安静。我失眠了，躺在床上，睁大眼干盯着墙壁，仿佛要看穿墙壁对面任何一丝的喧扰。

天蒙蒙亮，拽着老妈，我挺着身板来到了对门。这户人家的门，是那种破旧的老式铁栅门，上面早被岁月侵蚀得七七八八了，仿佛只需轻轻—碰，便顷刻粉碎。伴随着我急促的敲门声，是铁栅门“吱呀吱呀”的呻吟，还有一个小伙，满脸胡茬，和一身似乎和铁门可以称兄道弟的褪了色的凌乱的衣服。

“小王啊，我是隔壁的张阿姨，谢谢你啊，楼道这几天可干净了。”老妈拖着我，把我的话生生地盖了下去。“哪里，应该的，这是您家的娃儿吧？多大了？长得可真俊。”“十八了，”终于让我插上话了，“就要高考了……”“呀！那可得加油啊!来，叔叔给你点补身子的。”说完，他便一转身，走进了屋子，留下了满脸惊诧的我和老妈。

那是怎样的屋子呀！房间里满满地挤着一张床，旁边是席地而放的饭锅、电风扇，还有破破烂烂的玩具。床上坐着小王的妻子，还有她怀里对我们微笑的婴儿。我呆住了。

小王走了出来，塞给我两个红鸡蛋。“那娃儿，好好念书，上大学了给咱邻居也添添光！”说完轻轻地拍了拍我的头。我用力地点点头，踮起脚尖对小宝宝做了个鬼脸。

与你为邻，谢谢你，待我以真诚和爱。

◎特征点突破技巧

1.要做到材料丰富，需要：①注重材料的积累和整理。各种材料中，最需要关心的是生活材料。身边小事要留意观察，身外大事更要注意了解，如通过报刊、影视、网络等各种途径，从大量的信息中筛选出社会热点事件。当然还要注重经典作品的阅读。“读万卷书”可以使我们的文章具有深厚的文化内涵。②善于在写作实践中运用材料。一般来说，写人写事的文章尽量不少于三件事，也可以一个主体事件为主，以其他事件来作铺垫。

2.要做到论据充实，需要：①加强两个方面的积累；事实论据和理论论据的积累。②论据是因“论”而有“据”的，所以要尽量把中心论点切分为几个分论点，这样每一个分论点都需要一定的论据，于是论据也就派上用场了，文章就会变得论据充实。

3.要做到形象丰满，需要：①写出人物性格的不同侧面。人的性格是复杂的，往往包含着不同的甚至是矛盾的方面，所以我们要避免把人物形象简单化、平面化，而要追求人物形象的立体化。②尽可能地多描写、少叙述。必要的叙述当然是需要的，但细腻的描写可以使人物形象活起来、站起来。③运用不同手法来表现人物形象，如能全方位地进行描写，人物形象就会丰满起来。

4.要做到意境深远，需要：①善于寄情于景，做到情景交融。②善于化实为虚，多给读者一点想象的空间。③善于采用比喻象征手法，给全文增添浓厚的艺术氛围。④善于把诗意与哲理结合起来。单纯的诗意，易失之晦涩；单纯的哲理，易失之直白。若能把二者有机地结合起来，可以避免晦涩和直白，而使文章显得含蓄，有深意。⑤努力写一个“意料之外和情理之中”的结尾，营造出“言有尽而意无穷”的艺术境界。

创新点三 有文采

◎特征点解读

“有文采”是高考作文在“语言通顺”的基础上提出的高一个层次的语言标准。”《考试大纲》的四个评分点是：用词贴切、句式灵活、善于运用修辞手法、文句有表现力。

1．词语生动，就是根据语境条件使用语言，即符合外部语境的各种要求。就是要求在几个可用的词中，选出最恰当、最得体的那个，把所要表达的意思恰如其分地表达出来。究竟使用哪个词语最合适，要从具体语境出发，仔细斟酌，反复推敲。

2．句式灵活，根据抒发感情、体现思想或表达内容的不同需要，有变化地、丰富地使用不同句式，以变换节奏，可以使语言抑扬有致。

3．善于运用修辞手法，指修饰文字词句，运用各种表现方式，使语言表达得准确、鲜明而生动有力，可以化抽象为具体，变枯燥为生动，使语言表达文采斐然。

4．文句有表现力，是指语言不直白，不浅露，言简意赅，蕴含深邃的意境和深刻的哲理，让读者有咀嚼、回味的余地，能给人以启迪和教益。

◎失误作文

别让环境决定你的命运

宁夏考生

中国自古就有“时势造英雄”这说法，很早就强调环境对命运的影响。不错！一个人纵使拥有满腹才华，一身武艺，但倘若社会不能为人提供良好的发展，展示空间，那么想要成功也只是空想罢了。

而我认为，我们不能改变环境的恶劣，我们阻止不了时间带来的成长，我们回避不了成才路上的波折和磨难，所以，我们要求自己有顽强不屈的毅力和适应环境的勇气。

狼对自己身处的环境，总是不断体验，以躲避危险，发现食物，从而顽强地生存下来。它懂得，物竞天择，适者生存，面对弱肉强食的自然界的残酷，它只有依靠自己的强大，才能生存。它不能改变自然界的生存法则，于是，它改变自己。它没有屈服于环境，所以，它是生命的强者。

莲，出淤泥而不染，濯清涟而不妖。扎根在肮脏的污泥中，莲却没有自甘堕落，而是不断净化自己，使自己变得美丽，变得高洁。尽管成长环境如此恶劣，它还是坚守住了自己。面对人们惊羡的目光，它笑了，它知道自己的付出是值得的，它知道自己的坚守是正确的。

阿里巴巴的总裁马云，出生在一个贫困的家庭，邻里也大多是没有文化的社会最底层的人，他们的孩子大都早早辍学，或跟着妈妈去市场卖菜，或跟着爸爸去建筑工地上搬砖递瓦。看着这些，小马云心里非常清楚，只有努力学习才能让自己走出这种命运，不再成为那些孩子的“翻版”。他成绩优异，英语这门课却让他头疼，爸妈没有能力支付高额的英语辅导费，他便趁着放假的时候，去高级宾馆等外国人经常出入的地方，目的只有一个，练习英语。当时有一个外国人说，相信这个孩子长大后肯定有不平凡的成就。的确，他成功了，环境并没有把他吓住，家庭的贫困也没能阻挡住他那颗有梦的心。

环境可能会制约一个人的成长，但是，环境却不能决定一个人的命运，恶劣环境中成长起来的人才比比皆是，我们没有什么理由喋喋不休地抱怨父母、家庭、学校、社会。

别让环境决定你的命运!◎误区警示

本文论述了“别让环境决定你的命运”这一中心论点，中心明确，结构清楚。但语言不够生动，不能有效地运用一些句式与修辞，缺少一定的文采。

◎升格作文

别让环境决定你的命运

陡峭的悬崖上，也有挺立的孤松；寒冷的冬天里，也有傲雪的红梅；猛烈的暴风雨下，也有翱翔的海鸥；湍急的流水中，也有溯流而上不屈的鲑鱼。

我们不能改变环境的恶劣，我们阻止不了时间带来的成长，我们回避不了成才路上的波折和磨难，所以，我们要求自己有顽强不屈的毅力和适应环境的勇气。

狼对自己身处的环境，总是不断体验，以躲避危险，发现食物，从而顽强地生存下来。它懂得，物竞天择，适者生存，面对弱肉强食的自然界的残酷，它只有依靠自己的强大，才能生存。它不能改变自然界的生存法则，于是，它改变自己。它没有屈服于环境，所以，它是生命的强者。

莲，出淤泥而不染，濯清涟而不妖。扎根在肮脏的污泥中，莲却没有自甘堕落，而是不断净化自己，使自己变得美丽，变得高洁。尽管成长环境如此恶劣，它还是坚守住了自己。面对人们惊羡的目光，它笑了，它知道自己的付出是值得的，它知道自己的坚守是正确的。

人才的成长之路也是如此：不屈服于环境，不安于现状，不断向前，永不言弃。

阿里巴巴的总裁马云，出生在一个贫困的家庭，邻里也大多是没有文化的社会最底层的人，他们的孩子大都早早辍学，或跟着妈妈去市场卖菜，或跟着爸爸去建筑工地上搬砖递瓦。看着这些，小马云心里非常清楚，只有努力学习才能让自己走出这种命运，不再成为那些孩子的“翻版”。他成绩优异，英语这门课却让他头疼，爸妈没有能力支付高额的英语辅导费，他便趁着放假的时候，去高级宾馆等外国人经常出入的地方，目的只有一个，练习英语。当时有一个外国人说，相信这个孩子长大后肯定有不平凡的成就。的确，他成功了，环境并没有把他吓倒，家庭的贫困也没能阻挡住他那颗有梦的心。

环境可能会制约一个人的成长，但是，环境却不能决定一个人的命运，恶劣环境中成长起来的人才比比皆是，我们又有什么理由喋喋不休地抱怨父母、抱怨家庭、抱怨学校、抱怨社会，止步不前呢？

人的发展潜力是无穷无尽的，别让环境决定你的命运！

◎特征点突破技巧

1．妙用生动的词语。词语生动是指在恰当的基础上增强词语的表现力，就是要求我们选用恰当精妙的、新鲜传神的、具有形象性的、极具表现力的词语，使所描述的对象给人如闻其声、如见其形、如临其境的感觉，以增强感染力；把所阐发的事理表达得清楚明白，深刻透彻，以增强说服力。

2．巧用漂亮的修辞。巧用修辞，指在文章中巧妙地运用比喻、拟人、夸张、排比、对偶、借代、反问和设问等辞格。修辞手法的巧妙运用，能增强语言的表现力和感染力，是保证语言精彩的一个最简单也最有效的手段。运用排比，叙述则气韵流畅，描写则文笔奔放，议论则汪洋肆意，抒情则一泻千里，极易撩动人的心弦；运用比喻，语言形象生动，文章激情飞扬；运用拟人，行文新颖，精巧别致；运用反问，加强语气，摇曳多姿。

3．活用灵动的句式。在一篇文章中，能根据文章内容、体裁等特点，从强化表情达意的效果出发，恰当而自如地变换使用各种不同句式，既不显单

一、贫乏，而是丰富多样；又不显单调死板，而是变化多姿。文言语句含蓄典雅，口头用语简练泼辣，长句周详严密，短句简洁明快，独词句鲜明突出，感叹句便于抒情，对偶句铿锵凝练，反复句余韵悠然，排比句气势磅礴，反问句加重强调，引人深思。总之，要句随意转，活泼灵动。

4．善用哲理的文句。所谓有哲理的文句，往往是在精短的语句中包含着深刻的道理，其道理可以说是人们在实际生活中的体验或感悟。可以用名言警句表达哲理，可以用深厚意蕴表达哲理，可以用浓郁思辨表达哲理。

创新点四 有创意

◎特征点解读

“有创意”是对文章立意、选材、结构等方面的要求。它包括见解新颖，材料新鲜，构思新巧，推理想象有独到之处，有个性特征。

1．见解新颖，针对的是作者的认识、看法，考生要用自己的眼光去看别人见过的事物，在深刻感悟、真切体验的基础上，提出创造性的新见解。

2．材料新鲜，针对的是写作素材的选用，考生写进文章中的事例要具有浓郁的生活气息和时代感、新鲜感。不要使用陈旧俗气的事例材料，多多了解社会的热点问题对满足这一要求极有帮助。

3．构思新巧，主要是就结构而言的，指文章的谋篇布局应当以新立意，不落俗套，以巧构造，引人入胜。考生需对材料进行正面、侧面、反面等多角度的分析思考，体会和领悟所要表达的思想的深刻与重要，再结合立意选定一个恰当的角度切入，下笔成文时能够选用合适的体裁并能灵活运用多种写作方法。

4．推理想象有独到之处，是就思维过程而言的。考生应该对材料进行正面、侧面、反面等多角度的分析思考，选定一个恰当的角度切入，能够变换角色，体会和领悟所要表达的思想的深刻与重要，能够灵活运用象征、拟人、科幻等手法与形式，改变那种僵化死板的说教方式。5．有个性特征，针对的是文章的特色、风格。指文章的整体风格有鲜明的个性特色，这是对“有创意”的最高要求。

◎失误作文 光与影的合奏 山东考生

光与影有着和谐的旋律，如梵婀玲上奏着的名曲。

——题记

看光影变幻，斑斑驳驳，抑扬顿挫，于人生添一抹传奇色彩。“举世浑浊而我独清，众人皆醉而我独醒。”屈子，他用了多大的勇气才抵抗住人间的凛冽寒风，踽踽独行？他是个柔弱的文人，却也是一位坚贞的楚国大夫，正道直行，不同流合污。他是那个庞大的污浊池中一点明亮的星光，执著地坚守着内心的高洁。他眼看山河破碎，心痛滴血；他紧握手中酌笔，将正义情怀倾泻而出，至今还刺痛无数人的神经。“亦余心之所善兮，虽九死其犹未悔。”他以一曲《离骚》响彻云霄。但现实的残酷最终摧毁了他内心的光明，破灭的阴影挥之不去。于是，汨罗江边，他衣袂飘飘，将头颅高高扬起，纵身跃入江中。这一跃，成就了人世间最永恒的坚守。光与影的迷离中，幻化出一位惊世骇俗的正人君子，传唱千秋。“献我最热的一滴眼泪，我的信仰，至诚，和爱的力量，永远膜拜，膜拜在你美的面前。”林徽因，她是诗人，是建筑家，更是人间四月天。她曾经在阴影中艰难前行，病魔缠身让她痛苦不已，战争岁月的阴郁和悲怆让她的内心无法平静，但她依旧坚强，在穷乡僻壤中奔走，去深山荒郊寻访古庙、文物、遗迹，在艰苦的环境下坚持做学问，只因现实的阴影永远熄灭不了她内心的炽热光芒。她娇小柔弱，却和力与美交融的建筑凝为一体。她是幽晦林中的一抹光，回响成精神空谷中的一串清音。她的坚强，在与困难环境的交融下，奏出的音乐竟如此高亢，如此美丽动人。

人生因为有了光明而耀眼，也因为有了阴影而富有内涵。前途是光明的，道路是曲折的。我不会再为身处困境而惆怅，也不会为取得—点成绩而骄傲，因为我明白，无论是光还是影，都是人生乐谱中美妙的音符。

请让光与影合奏，谱出属于我们的奇迹。

◎误区警示

本文运用屈原和林徽因的例子很好地说明了“看光影变幻，斑斑驳驳，抑扬顿挫，于人生添一抹传奇色彩”这一主题。但文章构思不够新巧，视角不够新颖（如用第三人称给人以疏远感），分析也缺少理性。

◎升格作文 光与影的合奏

光与影有着和谐的旋律，如梵婀玲上奏着的名曲。——题记

看光影变幻，斑斑驳驳，抑扬顿挫，于人生添一抹传奇色彩。

是你告诉我，光是坚守，影是破灭，光和影的交织下，奏出一首铿锵激昂的交响曲——“举世浑浊我独清，众人皆醉我独醒。”屈子，你用了多大的勇气抵抗住人间的凛冽寒风，踽踽独行？你是个柔弱的文人，却也是一位坚贞的楚国大夫，正道直行，不同流合污。你是那个庞大的污浊池中一点明亮的星光，执著地坚守着内心的高洁。你眼看山河破碎，心痛滴血；你紧握手中酌笔，将正义情怀倾泻而出，至今还刺痛无数人的神经。“亦余心之所善兮，虽九死其犹未悔。”你以一曲《离骚》响彻云霄。但现实的残酷最终摧毁了你内心的光明，破灭的阴影挥之不去。于是，汨罗江边，你衣袂飘飘，将头颅高高扬起，纵身跃入江中。这一跃，成就了人世间最永恒的坚守。光与影的迷离中，幻化出一位惊世骇俗的正人君子，传唱千秋。

屈子，你是一抹光，在与阴影的合奏中，谱写了一曲传奇。

是你告诉我，光是坚强，影是困苦，光和影的交织下，奏出一曲温暖人心的轻音乐——“献我最热的一滴眼泪，我的信仰，至诚，和爱的力量，永远膜拜，膜拜在你美的面前。”林徽因，你是诗人，是建筑家，更是人间四月天。你曾经在阴影中艰难前行，病魔缠身让你痛苦不已，战争岁月的阴郁和悲怆让你的内心无法平静，但你依旧坚强，在穷乡僻壤中奔走，去深山荒郊寻访古庙、文物、遗迹，在艰苦的环境下坚持做学问，只因现实的阴影永远熄灭不了你内心的炽热火焰。你娇小柔弱，却和力与美交融的建筑凝为一体。你是幽晦林中的一抹光，回响成精神空谷中的一串清音。你的坚强，在与困难环境的交融下，奏出的音乐竟如此高亢，如此美丽动人。

林徽因，你是一抹光，在与阴影的合奏中，谱写了一段如此不可思议的旋律。

托尔斯泰说过：“人生的一切变化，一切魅力，一切美都是由光明和阴影构成的。”不曾知道人生在光明与阴影交织下原来如此丰富多彩。梵·高的成与败，谢娜的当红与背后的辛酸……他们，他们的光与影，都演奏着动人的音乐。

人生因为有了光明而耀眼，也因为有了阴影而富有内涵。前途是光明的，道路是曲折的。我不会再为身处困境而惆怅，也不会为取得点成绩而骄傲，因为我明白，无论是光还是影，都是人生乐谱中美妙的音符。

请让光与影合奏，奏出属于你的奇迹。

◎特征点突破技巧

1．可在构思立意与选材取材上进行创新。文章要写得视角独特，富有新意，关键在于立意与选材。这就要求考生，立意要善于跳出陈旧的框框，力求“言前人所未言，发前人所未发”。或与时俱进以求新，或自出机杼以求新，或打破定势以求新，或老歌翻唱以求新。观察事物要视野开阔，要善于联系社会时代背景，关注现实人生；并能多角度、多层面地进行观察和分析，从而透过表面现象看清事物的真实本质。2．可在文体形式与表现手法上进行创新。①选取比较得心应手的文体形式。如日记、书信，这是抒发情感、刻画内心的最好形式；章回体（可以拟写小标题），可使许多复杂的故事和情感变得条理有序；剧本，能够在有限的时间和空间中，将故事情节压缩在几个人物、几个场景和几段对话中，表现独特的主题；童话、寓言和科学幻想，有利于学生发挥自己的想象力，写出生动、新颖、神奇的故事；其他如小小说、调查报告、网络聊天、新闻、演讲词等，都可成为文体的创新形式。②采用新颖而得体的表现手法来布局结构。如日记缀连式，用之于考场作文的布局，具有层次分明、过渡简便、感情真挚等优点；镜头组接式，可以把发生在不同时间、不同地点、不同场景的不同镜头按一定的顺序有机地连接起来，可以突破时空局限，灵活自由，变而不乱，视觉强烈；散点式，即围绕一个中心，从数个点上进行发散、铺排，每个点都有一个精美的句段，数个点连成一体就是一篇优美的散文，这种“散点式”习作最突出的优点是层次明晰、语言优美、情感浓郁；小剧本式，因其时空情节集中，矛盾冲突尖锐，台词简练生动等优点而引人入胜。

3．可在语言方式上进行创新。形式的创新要落“实”，必须通过语言标志来突出文体特征，如出现年、月、日、星期、天气可表明是日记体；出现标题、电头、导语、主体可表明是新闻体；出现四、五、七字对仗句和“话说”“欲知后事如何且听下回分解”等套语可表明是章回体等等。

“有创意”的前提是有个性。在命题、立意、选材、结构、语言、表达方式等方面个性突出，别具一格，令人信服和感动的文章就是“有创意”的文章。

第四篇：高考英语作文万能写作及句型

欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 社会热点的两种写作模式

一种以社会热点引出的问题开头，着重于现象背后的缘由以及其解决方案。另一种以分析可争议问题的两面性为主。Hot Issue型(1)模板一

With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem that ______________(主题问题).Accordingly, _______________________________(伴随主题问题出现的新问题)is becoming more and more serious。

Confronted with ___________________________(主题问题)，we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, _________________________(解决方法1).For another, _________________________________(解决方法2).Finally, _________________________________(解决方法3)。

As far as I am concerned, the best way out is ________________________(解决方法3).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ____________________(解决方法3的优点和好处)。(2)模板二

With the development of the society, with the advent of _____________(相关事物或现象)，we have to face a problem that ______________________(主题问题)。

What are the reasons for it? In the following paragraphs, I’ll venture to explore the reasons.To start with, _____________________(阐述原因1).Moreover, __________________(阐述原因2).In addition, _______________________(阐述原因3)。

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken.For one thing, it is high time that people all over China realized the importance of __________________(解决主题问题).For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control。

利弊型(1)模板一

Nowadays many people prefer __________(主题)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, 高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 ________________(主题的优点1).On the other hand, ___________________(主题的优点2)。

But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________(主题的缺点1).To make matters worse, __________________________(主题的缺点2)。

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________(主题)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society。(2)模板二

With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ________(主题现象)is an example of the former / latter one。

There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, __________________(原因1).Furthermore, ______________________(原因2).Eventually, __________________________(原因3)。Good as ____________(主题现象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that ___________(缺点例子1).In addition, ___________(缺点例子2)。

On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________(主题现象)and make our life more comfortable。

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The topic of ①------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------(理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．

阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述． 1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义． 2． 分析并举例使其更充实．

The good old proverb----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三)．

高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it 解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 1． 问题现状

2． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明A的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）1． 说明事物现状

2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的优点之一).Besides-------------------（A的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测)．)

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(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.实用性写作(申请信)Your address Month, Date, year Receiver's address Dear..., 高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours, X X X

英语作文模板：现象说明文

Recently ____,what amazes us most is_______,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining____.The main reason is_____.What is more________________.Thirdly______________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,____________.For one thing_______,for another________ ____.In Conclusion____________________.高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040 句型 一.开头句型

1.As far as...is concerned

2.It goes without saying that...3.It can be said with certainty that...4.As the proverb says，5.It has to be noticed that...6.It`s generally recognized that...7.It`s likely that...8.It`s hardly that...9.It’s hardly too much to say that...10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是

11.There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that...13.what’s far more important is that...二.衔接句型

A case in point is...As is often the case...As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述

But the problem is not so simple.Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……

But it’s a pity that...高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

For all that...In spite of the fact that...Further, we hold opinion that...However , the difficulty lies in...Similarly, we should pay attention to...not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是

In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势

As has been mentioned above...In this respect, we may as well(say)从这个角度上我们可以说

However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即 …

三.结尾句型

I will conclude by saying...Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...All things considered,总而言之

It may be safely said that...Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好

四.举例句型

Let’s take...to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明

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let’s take the above chart as an example to

illustrate this.Here is one more example.Take … for example.The same is true of….This offers a typical instance of….We may quote a common example of….Just think of….五.常用于引言段的句型

1.Some people think that ….To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.2.For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.3.I believe the title statement is valid because….4.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….I believe….5.My argument for this view goes as follows.6.Along with the development of…, more and more….7.There is a long-running debate as to whether….8.It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….9.As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.10.Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.六 表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

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1.A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2.A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3.A and B differ in….4.A differs from B in….5.The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6.Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7.A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….8.While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9.Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.10.Both A and B ….However, A…;on the other hand, B….11.The most striking difference is that A…, while B….七 演绎法常用的句型

1.There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.2.There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.3.Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.4.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.5.The reasons are as follows.八 因果推理法常用句型

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3.We read the book;as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.4.As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.5.The cause of/reason for/overw eight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7.The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.8.Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

一、英语书信的常见写作模板：

开头部分：

How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.结尾部分：

With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口头通知常见写作模板：

呼语及开场白部分：

Ladies and gentlemen，May I have your attention，please? I have an announcement to make.正文部分：

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.结束语部分：

Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

三、议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板

导入：

第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...（导入话题）

Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）

Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第3段：However，the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）

Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论：

第4段：Personally speaking，the advantages overweigh the disadvantages，for it will do us more harm than good，so I support it.（个人观点）オ

2.“A或者B”类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others，however，argue that B is much better.Personally，I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)

第3段: Of course，B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个B的优势)

结论：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered，A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above，we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出结论)オ

3.观点论述类议论文模板：

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导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student，I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）

The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（过渡句，承上启下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)

结论：

第3段：In conclusion，I believe that...（照应第1段，构成“总—分—总”结构）

4.“How to”类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文：

第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem，but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论：

第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

四、图表作文写作模板：

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题.The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点.This means that as(进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一.After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个

变化，the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化).The figures also tell us that图表细节二.In

the column，we can see that accounts for(进一步描述).Judging from these figures，we can draw the conclusion that(结论).The reason for this，as far as I am concerned is that(给出原因)./ It is high time that we(发出倡议).高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/ 欢迎关注@高考直通车 微博：http://weibo.com/gaokao96040

五、图画类写作模板

1.开头

Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture，we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...2.衔接句

As we all know，.../As is known to all，.../It is well known that.../In my opinion，.../As far as I am concerned，.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.3.结尾句

In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...高考直通车网站：http://www.xiexiebang.com/

第五篇：全国高考英语作文写作句型及

结尾句：however, ____ does more good than harm to ____.扩展句：what we should do is to ______.范文

china finally succeeded in jointing the WTO after many's efforts.this event will influence the economy in china greatly.jointing the WTO brings china many benefits and opportunities.as a member coutry, china can enjoy many rights that can boost the development of the economy in china.what's more, the chinese people can buy products of high quality with less pay.every thing has two aspects.joining the WTO can also bring us some challenges.for example, some producers may be wiped out because of the intense competition.in addition, it will be more difficult for us to get a job, as the requirement for the employees will become higher.however, this great event does more good than harm to us.what we should do is to improve ourselves to become qualified for certain positions and live a better life.···

三。英文信函题型作文

写作步骤：

people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what's more, the fare is also a little higher at university.Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, cards have taken the place of money in the canteen, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.(彻底的)

四．图表作文常用句型

As is shown in the graph… 如图所示… The graph shows that… 图表显示…

As can be seen from the table, … 从表格中可以看出… From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…

All these data clearly prove the fact that…所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即… The increase of ….in the city has reached to 20%.这个城市的….增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.五。百变句子开头使你的句型多变

1.以同位语作为句子的开头。

The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party.2.以单个修饰语作为句子的开头。

这个修饰语可以是形容词、分词或副词。

Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.Secretly, the girl entered the room.With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.3.以短语修饰语作为句子的开头。

短语修饰语可以是介词短语、不定式短语、分词短语以及独立主格结构。

In front of me stood a beautiful girl.To pass the exam, the students worked hard.Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.Your homework finished, you may go home.4.用从句作为句子的开始。

If I am free, I will attend your lecture.Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.六。英语高分作文必须要记住的二十六句式

一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主语 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.常老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V 例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V...（不可否认的...）

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~（全世界都知道...）

例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~（毫无疑问的...）

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（...的优点是...）

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create(produce)any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...）

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~（愈./越..愈/越...）：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈。十、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~（借着...，..能够..）

e.g：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

十一、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V（..使..能够..）

例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

十二、It is time + S + 过去式（该是...的时候了）

例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the trafficproblems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

十三、Those who ~~~（...的人...）

例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。

十四、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V（不得不...）例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

十五、It is conceivable that + 句子（可想而知的）

It is obvious that + 句子（明显的）

It is apparent that + 句子（显然的）

例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

十六、That is the reason why ~~~（那就是...的原因）

例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don’t like it.夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

十七、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

十八、be based on（以...为基础）

例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

十九、be closely related to ~~（与...息息相关）

例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。

二十、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V（养成...的习例句：We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.= we should make it a rule to keep good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。二

十一、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!（多么...！)例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守诺言是多么重要的事！二

十二、Leave much to be desired（令人不满意）

例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我们的交通状况令人不满意。

二十三、Have a great influence on ~~~（对...有很大的影响）

例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的响。二

十四、do good to（对...有益），do harm to（对...有害）例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。

二十五、Pose a great threat to ~~（对...造成一大威胁）

e.g：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。二

十六、do one’s utmost/best to + V = do one’s best（尽全力去...）例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。

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作文套句总结

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1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.2.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.3.Nowadays,(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.4.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…人们一般认为… Many people insist that…很多人坚持认为…

5.With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that … 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…

6.A lot of people seem to think that…很多人似乎认为… 结尾

1.Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…

2.Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that … 考虑所有这些因素, 我们可能会得出合理的结论…

3.Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that… 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…

4.There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.5.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.过渡词 1.强调

still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.2.比较

like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.3对比

by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.4列举 for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except(for), to illustrate.5.时间

later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during,nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.6.顺序

first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.7可能presumably(可能), probably, perhaps.8解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.9递进What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.10.让步although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.11转折however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on theother hand, unfortunately.whereas 12原因

for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.13结果

as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.14总结

on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.15其他

Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case.