GRE作文例子

第一篇：GRE作文例子

伽利略的所有试验中，最著名的该算是“质量相异者同时落地”，这个试验推翻了亚里士多德的关于落体速度与其质量成正比的理论。但事实上，并没有纪录表明伽利略真的做了这个著名试验。

Galileo was an Italian physicist, mathematician, astronomer and philosopher who played a major role in the Scientific Revolution.A biography by Galileo's pupil Vincenzo Viviani stated that Galileo had dropped balls of the same material, but different masses, from the Leaning Tower of Pisa to demonstrate that their time of descent was independent of their mass.This was contrary to what Aristotle had taught: that heavy objects fall faster than lighter ones, in direct proportion to weight.While this story has been retold in popular accounts, there is no account by Galileo himself of such an experiment, and it is generally accepted by historians that it was at most a thought experiment which did not actually take place.Charles Robert Darwin was an English naturalist who established that all species of life have descended over time from common ancestors, and proposed the scientific theory that this branching pattern of evolution resulted from a process that he called natural selection.He published his theory with compelling evidence for evolution in his 1859 book On the Origin of Species.Journey of the Beagle贝格尔号旅程

Movements

The term labor movement or labor movement is a broad term for the development of a collective organization of working people, to campaign in their own interest for better treatment from their employers and governments, in particular through the implementation of specific laws governing labour relations.Martin Luther King, Jr.(January 15, 1929 – April 4, 1968)was an American clergyman, activist, and prominent leader in the African American civil rights movement.His main legacy is securing progress on civil rights in the United States.Because of this work, he has become a human rights icon.In 1964, King became the youngest person to receive the Nobel Peace Prize for his work to end racial segregation and racial discrimination through civil disobedience and other non-violent means.“I Have a Dream” is the famous name given to the sixteen minute public speech by Martin Luther King, Jr., in which he called for racial equality and an end to discrimination.伊斯兰教妇女The study of women in Islam investigates the role status of women within the religion of Islam.The complex relationship between women and Islam is defined by both Islamic texts and the history and culture of the Muslim world.Sharia(Islamic law)provides for differences between women's and men's roles, rights, and obligations.Majority Muslim countries give women varying degrees of rights with regards to marriage, divorce, civil rights, legal status, dress code, and education based on different

interpretations.Scholars and other commentators vary as to whether they are just and whether they are a correct interpretation of religious imperatives.Conservatives argue that differences between men and women are due to different status and), p.278 while liberal Muslims, Muslim

feminists, and others argue in favor of other interpretations.Some women have achieved high political office in Muslim majority states.Sartorial hijab（头盖）, and the veil（面纱）in particular, has often been viewed by Westerners as a sign of oppression of Muslim women.婚礼Wedding traditions and customs vary greatly between cultures, ethnic groups, religions, countries, and social classes.Most wedding ceremonies involve an exchange of wedding vows by the couple, presentation of a gift(offering, ring(s), symbolic item, flowers, money), and a public proclamation of marriage by an authority figure or leader.Special wedding garments are often worn, and the ceremony is followed by a wedding reception.Chinese wedding customs

Main articles: Chinese marriage and Southern Chinese wedding

Traditional Chinese marriage is a ceremonial ritual within Chinese societies that involve a

marriage established by pre-arrangement between families.Within Chinese culture, romantic love was allowed, and monogamy was the norm for most ordinary citizens.A band of musicians with gongs and flute-like instruments accompanies the bride parade to groom's home.Similar music is also played at the wedding banquet.Depending on the region that the bride hails from, Chinese weddings will have different traditions such as Tea Ceremony or the use of a wedding emcee.Also in modern times, Chinese couples will often go to photo studios to take “glamour shots” posing in multiple gowns and various backgrounds.Most regional Chinese wedding rituals follow the main Chinese wedding traditions, although some rituals are particular to the peoples of the southern China region.In most southern Chinese wedding, the bride price is based on the groom's economic status.The idea of “selling the daughter” or bride isn't a phrase that is used often therefore the price of the bride isn't too

demanding.Most of the time the bride price is in the form of gold jewelry, fine fabric, or money, even a roast pig which symbolizes the bride to be a virgin.Wedding presents are given by the elderly couples or couples that are older than the newlyweds and tea is served by the younger family members.A number of cultures have adopted the traditional Western custom of the white wedding, in which a bride wears a white dress and veil.This tradition was popularized through the wedding of Queen Victoria.Some say Victoria's choice of a white gown may have simply been a sign of

extravagance, but may have also been influenced by the values she held which emphasized sexual purity.Within the modern 'white wedding' tradition, a white dress and veil are unusual choices for a woman's second or subsequent wedding.The notion that a white gown might symbolize sexual purity has been long abandoned, and is criticized by etiquette writers like Judith Martin as distasteful.The use of a wedding ring has long been part of religious weddings in Europe and America, but the origin of the tradition is unclear.Historians like Vicky Howard point out that belief in the

“ancient” quality of the practice are most likely a modern invention.“Double ring” ceremonies are also a modern practice, a groom's wedding band not appearing in the United States until the early 20th Century.The wedding is often followed by a reception, in which the rituals may include toasting the newlyweds, their first dance as spouses, and the cutting of a wedding cake.

第二篇：GRE写作名人例子

在练习作文的过程中,发现很多人名在很多人名在很多题材的作文中都可以反复用到,在没有总结这些名字之前,老是写新文章时就忘记了以前用过的人名的拼写.所以就开始积累常用人名了.由于论坛里其它形式的资料帖都有了,为求有点新意,能给g友们更快地提升作文,遂决定把本人的人名总结及其适用文章贡献出来.:)

由于适用的文章是我临时回忆的,所以肯定不止下面列举的这些适用文章.欢迎补充!

凡高 Van Gogh: 艺术类文章里引用,如arts and critics, greatness总是超前时代的所以只能由后人评判, history强调individual(因为在艺术历史领域只能强调individual),还有percive world with different eyes也可以引用这个例子.此人的另类抽象painting风格和当时的审美标准不符,故遭排挤,而几百年后的critics才发现他的价值.哥白尼 Copernicus:引用题目有:greatness超前时代,挑战权威(当时是church),history强调individual(因为在科学研究领域只能强调individual).此人是日心说,当时宗教教育说是地心说,死前才公布自已的论断(因为怕早死).莫扎特 Mozart: greatness只能由后人判断的反面例子.此人音乐才华在世时就被教皇看重,给以了很多赞助,使其.......毕加索 Picasso: greatness只能由后人判断的反面例子,arts反映hidden ideas的反面例子.此人是20世纪最伟大的画家,其画风格为cubism,很多人说他的画只反映个人的ideocyncratic,而没有反映社会的hidden ideas,此人在世时就被判为greatness了.林肯 Abraham Lincoln: history关注individuals,effective leader要随机应变,justand unjust laws.此人南北战争,解放黑奴,没有他,可能就没有今天这样的美国了.据说他在南北战争前是不支持解放黑奴的,而之后又支持了.马丁路德金 Martin Luther King: leaders要有很高的moral and ethical standards, history关注individuals的重要性,just and unjust laws,学习历史的重要性.此人为黑人获得与白人相同的权利发起了黑奴运动,他的“I have a dream”演讲教育了一代一代人.他的moral and ethical standards是不用说的,没有这个individual,美国黑人现在可能还要坐在汽车后面的座位.莎士比亚 Shakespeare: greatness由后人评判的反面例子,survive and arts里强调arts可以培养人什么的.此人的介绍我就不多说了.贝多芬 Beethoven: arts的重要性,arts and critics.此人为著名作曲家,'命运'激励了多少人,当时的critics也批斗过他,因为standards很rigid and stale.希特勒 Hitler:

不能迷信权威啊,学习历史的重要性啊(不重蹈覆辙),history强调individual啊.此人是著名战争狂,由于全国人都迷信他的言论才能坐上首相位置,学习他的例子可以使现在的社会不重蹈他的覆辙,他这个individual也反映当时common people/multitude的普遍value:战争主义,chauvinism.加利略 Galileo:不迷信权威,history强调individual(因为在科学研究领域只能强调individual),beginner and expert.当时的expert和authority就是Aristotle,认为物体越重下降越快.而此人证明了其实都是一样快的.亚力士多德 Aristotle: 和加利略一起举例.爱因斯坦 Einstein: 不迷信权威.greatness由后人判断的反面例子.beginner andexpert中expert的劣势.此人证明了权威牛顿三大定律只能在宏观世界有效,而不适于微观世界.其greatness在其在世时就确立了,他曾说过,自从他成名后,就没能找出一段完整属于自己的时间来深入思考这个世界了.牛顿 Newton.不迷信权威,greatness由后人判断.此人是个权威,被爱因斯坦挑战见爱因斯坦那条.华盛顿 George Washington: history研究individual的重要性.leaders 要有moralstandards.此人为美国开国总统,没有他开了连续任两届总统就得下台的先河,可能美国在他之后好久都是专制国家,因为当时有人要他当皇帝.凯萨 Caesar.history研究individual的重要性.此人即是亚利山大大帝,所建立的亚力山大帝国地跨三大陆.研究那个帝国如果研究他,只研究multitude怎么能研究得下去?

托马斯.杰佛森 Thomas Jefferson: 这个有点想不起来用在哪里了.此人说过all men are created

equal->the declaration of independence:

甘地 Gandhi: greatness的文章,leaders and moral standards的文章.此人是印度的建国祖师,坐过很多牢,stoic,情操很高,结果可以只demenstration来和平解放印度.拿破仑 Napoleon: individual的重要性.此人是著名战争狂,他的发起的战争虽然很荒唐,但却被法国中场阶认为很浪漫,他的individual反映当时的普遍价值观.肯尼迪 Kennedy: scandals,leaders should have moral standards.此人在位时很大程度缓解了苏美关系.却有marital scandals.所以scandals会distract us from

people's real responsibility.罗斯福 Roosevelt(FDR): individual的重要性,领导要听取群众意见,随机应变.此人有两大贡献:发动反德战争,带美国走出Depression.没有他的发动战争宣言,可能WWII不会这么快结束.据说一位英国著名经济学家曾写信给他说要他采取苏联模式来政府介入自由经济,操控经济,才使他在1930年代出台各种政府措施来改善经济,使得经济复苏(大国崛起里说的).成吉斯汗 Genghis Khan: 领导要听取群众意思,而不是有强硬持久的原则和目标: 这个也不用介绍了.斯大林 Stalin: 同成吉斯汗.达尔文 Darwin: 挑战权威.进化论的祖师爷,写过'the origin of species'.挑战当时普遍的神创论.孟德尔 Mendel: expert and beginner,data的重要性.因为是expert,因为做了十年研究积累了大量data,才由统计学原理发现了law of Inheritance.瓦特 Watt James: 很多都适用,如creativity很重要啊,兴趣很重要而不是老去考虑对社会会有什么贡献啊.此人发明了蒸汽机,从小喜欢机械,并一直研究.里根 Reagon: 投资类题目适用.他发起了星球计划.为将来的太空军备竞赛作准备.结果由于工程浩大而放弃,浪费了很多钱,所以投资都应该用在对社会有实在好处上.居里 Mary Curie: 学习历史人物的重要性,失败是成功之母.此女人经过十年才找到radium这种元素,并把提取方法毫无保留地与全世界共享,获得了若贝尔奖.其坚持不懈的品质值得学习,其十年失败,终成功的例子说明了失败是成功之母.克里克 Crick: imagination and knowledge.此人很变态,发现DNA结构是由于做梦!

麦克斯维 Maxwell: imagination and knowledge,greatness由后人判断.此人是著名物理学家,他大胆推测出电磁场理论electromagnetism并给予理论证明,但当时很多人不能相信,在他死后就有人从实验室证明了他的理论.

第三篇：新GRE写作例子使用原则

新GRE写作例子使用原则

相关性很重要，不要提供不相关的信息，和大家众所周知又对你论证不是非常必要的内容。举个不恰当的例子，说爱因斯坦和相对论的时候，不需要说爱因斯坦的其他理论;说莱特兄弟发明飞机的时候，没有必要说他们当时在哪个州。这些看似比较显而易见，但是如果自己比较随意，就会有很多不相关的信息传递出去。

不能只提供例子，不提供对例子的分析，哪怕只有一句话。例子出现的时刻，应该是分析到了一定程度，水到渠成了自然出现。然后例子之后，最好再加1-2句为什么这个例子能支撑我的观点，或者是，我们能从这个例子看出什么，或者是，这个例子为什么很重要。这样就显得饱满。

上述就是有关新GRE作文例子使用的问题解答，此外，例子其实不能展得太开。一个观点段，大概只有6-8句话。那么例子差不多也就2句话。有些例子可能只有一句话，或者只有一个such as blablabla.一定要精练，才能真正的助力GRE作文高分。

第四篇：GRE issue写作之自己总结的万能例子

Renaissance

For example, the helpless fate can be felt from the tragedy works, written by Shakespeare.Mona Lisa, created by Beethoven, revealed the mysterious and implicit smile.Although works completed by different artists and writers revealed slight variations in the access, performing form, and social aspect focusing on, as far as common theme and hidden ideas were concerned, the obvious similries to each other seemed much more than any of the minute differences, namely, resisting the feudalization and corrupt institution and enlightening freedom of human being.This is called “Renaissance” in the history.Genetic engineering

迄今为止，基因工程还没有用于人体，但已在从细菌到家畜的几乎所有非人生命物体上做了实验，并取得了成功。事实上，所有用于治疗糖尿病的胰岛素都来自一种细菌，其ＤＮＡ中被插入人类可产生胰岛素的基因，细菌便可自行复制胰岛素。基因工程技术使得许多植物具有了抗病虫害和抗除草剂的能力；在美国，大约有一半的大豆和四分之一的玉米都是转基因的。目前，是否该在农业中采用转基因动植物已成为人们争论的焦点：支持者认为，转基因的农产品更容易生长，也含有更多的营养（甚至药物），有助于减缓世界范围内的饥荒和疾病；而反对者则认为，在农产品中引入新的基因会产生副作用，尤其是会破坏环境。

诚然，仍有许多基因的功能及其协同工作的方式不为人类所知，但想到利用基因工程可使番茄具有抗癌作用、使鲑鱼长得比自然界中的大几倍、使宠物不再会引起过敏，许多人便希望也可以对人类基因做类似的修改。毕竟，胚胎遗传病筛查、基因修复和基因工程等技术不仅可用于治疗疾病，也为改变诸如眼睛的颜色、智力等其他人类特性提供了可能。比如，运用此技术，可使患儿的父母生一个和患儿骨髓匹配的孩子，然后再通过骨髓移植来治愈患儿。

So far, genetic engineering has not been used in human, but it has achieved successful experiment in almost all the objects on non-human life--from bacteria to livestock already.In fact, all the insulin treatment for diabetes come from a kind of bacteria which can be inserted into a human genes to make copies of insulin by bacteria oneself.Genetic engineering technology makes many plants have the disease-resistant ability and herbicide, In the USA, about half of soybean and a quarter of corn is genetically modified.At present, whether the transgenic plants used in agriculture has become the focus of debate, transgenic supporters think: the agricultural is faster to growth, and easier to contain more nutrition(even medicine), to help slow down worldwide famine and disease, But opponents argued, introducing new genes into agricultural will occur side effects, especially destroy the environment.Advantage: Admittedly, ethicist rejected the innovative development of genetic engineering because, although it resolved some problems, it also produced new complications.Nevertheless，there are still many genes function and work principle beyond human knowledge, but using genetic engineering can make the tomatoes have anti-cancer effects, make the salmon bigger than in nature, and also make pet no longer allergy, many people are expect to do similar human genetic modification.After all, gene engineering technology can not only cure the disease, also make most possibility for change human characteristics, such as eye color, intelligence and others.For example, by using this technology, it is possible to make the parents pregnant to born a baby whose bone matches one needs homogenous bone, and then through the bone marrow transplants to cure patients.We said the advantages and disadvantages of biological technology, is mainly refers to the genetic engineering.弊:1)克隆将减少遗传变异，通过克隆产生的个体具有同样的遗传基因，同样的疾病敏感性，一种疾病就可以毁灭整个由克隆产生的群体。可以设想，如果一个国家的牛群都是同一个克隆产物，一种并不严重的病毒就可能毁灭全国的畜牧业。

2)克隆技术的使用将使人们倾向于大量繁殖现有种群中最有利用价值的个体，而不是按自然规律促进整个种群的优胜劣汰。从这个意义上说，克隆技术干扰了自然进化过程.7)克隆技术对家庭关系带来的影响也将是巨大的。一个由父亲的DNA克隆生成的孩子可以看作父亲的双胞胎兄弟，只不过延迟了几十年出生而已。很难设想，当一个人发现自己只不过是另外一个人的完全复制品，他（或她）会有什么感受？

所以说,科学技术有时就是一把双刃剑,有利也有没弊,没有标准答案!就看人们这样利用了!Disadvantages:

1)genetic engineering would reduce the genetic variation of individuals and own the same diseases sensitivity , as a result, a disease can destroy whole colony by cloning.So we can imagine that, if a nation is the same cloned cattle, a kind of the virus could destroy the animal husbandry.2)The use of genetic engineering will make people tend to propagate the most value individual within existing colony, rather than the natural law of survival.In this sense, the cloning technology will interrupt the procession of natural evolution.Interference

7)genetic engineering will lead a great influence on family relationships.A father of the DNA can be seen as twin brothers, but only delayed for decades.It is hard to imagine that, when a man found himself was just another man's fully reproductions, what feelings will he or she have?

So, science and technology is a double-edged sword, sometimes, there are no harm and no standard answer!Just look like people to use!

Galileo

Galileo, Italian astronomer and physicist, discovered law of uniform acceleration of falling bodies.For example, Galileo, the great astronomer and physicist in X century, overthrowed the famous theory ,established over 2000 years ago by great people—Aritle, through the experience and thus led to discover law of uniform acceleration of falling bodies.Therefore, the question on the science might usually contribute the unexpected devotion to the progress of science, not obstacle one.Bearing generation “垮掉的一代”是美国战后的一代，他们成长在一个循环发生战争的世界上，他们中的一些成为了一种新的文化的杰出代表，即“垮掉”哲学。他们的思想在绝对自由的躯体里得以升华，在美国战后忧伤失望让人窒息的精神“荒原”时代拔地腾空而起，划破了迷茫的天空，给人们以极大震撼的同时也给了人们面对现实的勇气，在很程度上决定当时社会的发展趋势。

“Beat generation is indicated that American who grew up in a cycle of world war, but some of them became a outstanding representatives of tendency of new culture, named ” the collapse “philosophy.Their thought is updated in absolute freedom body, skyrocketed in the ”wasteland" era which make the people feel disappointed during the world war two, ripped out of the sky and over to people with great shock also gives people the courage of facing reality, certainly, they determined the social development trend at that time..Thatcherism 撒切尔主义

Thatcherism inferred to the policies put forward by Margaret Thatcher, the first woman prime minister in England in 1979.the main contents of her policies included the return to private ownership of state-owned industries, the use of monetarist policies to control inflation, the weakening of trade unions and the strengthening of the role of markets forces in the economy, and an emphasis on law and order.To some extant their her program was successful and she led to one of the most remarkable period in the British economy.Measures taken by Mrs.Thatcher’s government to improve the economy 撒切尔政府为改善经济为采取的措施。

Mrs.Thatcher’s government took numerous measures to improve the efficiency of the economy during the past decade, using both macroeconomic and microeconomic policies.(1)Macroeconomic measures were directed toward bringing down the rate of inflation and achieve price stability.(2)Microeconomic policies were aimed at working with the gain of market forces by encouraging enterprise, efficiency and flexibility.geophysics地球物理

1.想象与现实（理论指导实践）

大陆漂移学说----由魏格纳提出，的提出深化了人们对地球板块构造的认识，同时也对地球的板块构造做出了一个合理的解释，并进一步在达尔文的进化学说中得到了验证。这一理论至今指导了地质学家，地球物理学家，以及有关地质方面的专家对地球进行进一步的分析和研究。

Continental drift assumption，proposed by Wagner, put forward to deepen the understanding of plate construction, and also made a reasonable explanation for it, and also verified further by the theory of revolution.Nowadays, this theory has guided geologists, geophysicists, and relevant geological experts for further analysis and research.从上面这个生动的例子可以看出，一种合理的想象----建立在一定的事实基础之上，不但会对已有的事实进行合理的解释，而且还可以指导人们进一步对现有事实进行归纳，整理和分析，从而发现其共同规律，协调着他们相互之间的复杂关系。

From vivid example mentioned above, we can infer that a reasonable imaginationpeople's umbrella, which insulate almost harmful radiation from outer space.3.知识在怀疑和证实中积累和进步

当大陆漂移学说—由魏格纳提出，刚刚被提出来的时候，人们对这个新的理论充满了热情和好奇，纷纷支持和赞扬它的伟大和新颖，但是后来随着一些历史事实的发掘，却不但被无情的批判，而且最终遭到了地质学家和地球物理学家的抛弃---随着另一种假说的提出，地幔热柱学说。现在，随着人们对更多地质事实的综合和分析，又重新对大陆漂移学说燃气了激情，认为它是最好能解释那些难以理解的地质现象的理论。

When the continental drift assumption, proposed by Wagner, firstly comes, the mostly people, who are full of enthusiasm and curiosity, completely support and praise.But later, with some relatively historical facts occurring, continental drift assumption is not only criticized ruthless, but discarded ultimately by the geologists and geophysicists as another hypothesis of plume appears.Now, by analysis more new historical evidence and summarizing geological phenomenon, the continental drift assumption is accepted again, they view that it can explain more difficult geological phenomena comparing with other assumption.从大陆漂移学说的提出到最终被人们所接受的过程中可以看出，一个学说，总是不断的在人们的怀疑和证实中进步，而不是一开始就完全正确或者完全错误，最终成为可以为人类服务的科学理论。

From the continental drift assumption mentioned above, we can infer that knowledge, especially occurred firstly, is always doubted and verified as the development of relative course, but not completely right or wrong at begin, eventually becoming authentically scientific theory.Leonardo Da Vinci 1.达芬奇怀疑权威：

Leonardo Da Vinci question authority

在天文学上，达.芬奇对传统的“地球中心说”持否定的观点．他认为地球不是太阳系的中心，更不是宇宙的中心，而只是一颗绕太阳运转的行星，太阳本身是不运动的．达.芬奇还认为月亮自身并不发光，他只是反射太阳的光辉．他的这些观点的提出早于哥白尼“太阳中心说” For example, rather than asserting the traditional view—the central of earth, Leonardo Da Vinci argues that the earth is not the central of solar galaxy, only a planet orbiting the sun.The sun itself is still quiescent.And also, he argue that the moon itself only reflect the light coming from the sun, not lighting itself.2.知识经验的积累（历史对现在的作用）

他提出的知识起源于实践的这种方法，后来得到了伽利略的发展，并由英国哲学家弗兰西斯．培根从理论上加以总结，成为近代自然科学的最基本方法． Truth coming from practice, mentioned firstly by Leonardo Da Vinci, is developed by Galileo latter, and then summarized theoretically by Francis Bacon, and at last, it becomes the most fundamental access of current science disciplines.3.全才 通才

达.芬奇在物理学方面，重新发现了液体压力的概念，提出了连通器原理．在解剖学和生理学上也取得了巨大的成就，被认为是近代生理解剖学的始祖．他的研究和发明还涉及到军事和机械方面.可以说，达.芬奇的研究涉及到自然科学的每一部门，他的思想和才能深入到人类知识的各个领域．他是世界上少有的全面发展的学者．

Leonardo Da Vinci discovered the conception of liquid pressure on physics;he also attained a great achievement on anatomy and physiology, is thought the originator of physiological anatomy.Also, his innovations and creations involve in military an mechanics.In one words, his study arrange almost involve in every section of natural science.His thought and talents penetrated into every realm of knowledge of human being.His is a less fewer one who developed comprehensively.4，学科交叉

达.芬奇把艺术和科学、理智和情感、形体和精神熔于一炉，继承和发扬了前人的人文主义思想和现实主义表现手法，把艺术推进到一个前所未有的高度，为自然科学的发展作出了巨大贡献，是当之无愧的“文艺复兴时代最完美的代表人物”．

Leonardo Da Vinci fused art and science, intelligence and emotion, form and spirit together.And at the same time, he inherited performance of realism and developed ideas of humanism of the past.Which pushed the art to a unprecedented height, making a great contribution to the development of natural science.In one words, he is the most perfectly incontrovertible delegation in Renaissance.5.达芬奇画鸡蛋 从基础做起 1467年，达·芬奇到佛罗伦萨的委罗基俄艺术工场学艺，当时他十四岁。他的老师委罗基俄对学生要求很严，他对达·芬奇说：“字画要有个好的开端，我不要你首先临摹古人名画，也不给你讲解绘画理论。你每天照着鸡蛋写生，这是画画的一个部分，而且是重要的组成部分。” In 1467, Leonardo Da Vinci, aged fourteen, was sent to study in artistic workshop, located in Florence.His mentor instructed him as follows(and I paragraph): it is very important to have a well beginning for painting, I do not ask you imitate famous art firstly and instruct any theory of painting.For you, painting egg from different angles is your necessary and indispensable task everyday.And you should know it is a vital part of painting.Even more important than others.6.想象与课本获取知识

他具有超越当时的广泛构思与想象力，著名的概念性发明比方直升机、坦克车、太阳能聚焦使用、计算机、板块构造论基本原理、双层壳等许多构想。

Sometimes, the imagination is more important than knowledge acquiring from the books.One compelling argument can favor this.Leonardo Da Vinci, great painter in Renaissance periods, owns a extensive idea and imagination that has suppressed contemporary society.Such as the innovation such as helicopter, tank, utilization of energy of concentrated sun, the principle of.computer, and fundamental principle of constituent construction is far suppressed temporal society.7.交叉学科（学科之间的关系）

文艺复兴人文主义(Renaissance humanism)在科学与艺术之间并无相互排斥的极端现象。达芬奇钻研科学、工程领域就像他的艺术作品般令人难忘与突出。手稿中约13,000页的笔记与绘画全是混合艺术与科学所组成的纪录。

There is no vital discrimination between science and art in the Renaissance humanism periods.The achievement of science and engineering by Leonardo Da Vinci is impressed groups of people just like art domain he did.The manuscript records associated with art and science takes a large amount of total number, about 13000pages.8.知识来源于实践与正式教育的相互关系(教育的重要性)达芬奇的手稿纪录是在欧陆行程中透过观察周遭并不断的创作而来，在科学上，达芬奇是一个巨细靡遗的观察家，能以极精细的描述手法表示一个现象。因为缺乏与科学相关的正式教育，所以不是透过理论与实验来验证，他打算发表一系列包含各种主题的论文，也因为缺乏系统的理论基础终未实现。

The manuscript, drafted by Leonardo Da Vinci, is created on the way of Europe by observing around.On science, Leonardo Da Vinci is an very careful observer, describing a phenomenon by vital careful describing access.Due to lack of formal education with relative science, so the phenomenon is not tested by the theory and experience.And also, he failed to public a series papers including kinds of themes.9.不遵循传统或者怀疑权威/ 理论和实践的关系

在文艺复兴早期，人们盲目地接受传统观念，达.芬奇反对经院哲学家们把过去的教义和言论作为知识基础，他鼓励人们向大自然学习，到自然界中寻求知识和真理．他认为知识起源于实践，只有从实践出发，通过实践去探索科学的奥秘．达.芬奇提出并掌握了这种先进的科学方法，采用这种科学方法去进行科学研究，在自然科学方面作出了巨大的贡献．

In the early periods of Renaissance, groups of people accepted blindly the traditional ideas.But Leonardo Da Vinci encouraged people to embrace the nature and seek the truth rather than accepting the past doctrine and assertion as a foundation of knowledge.In his point of view, knowledge is derived from the practice.Only beginning from the practice, it is possible to achieve the truth.Leonardo Da Vinci made a significant contribution to the science by this advanced access.叶红邮箱：albble1988@126.com

第五篇：作文例子

以下例子适合在议论文中用到,知道这几个人就好，不会用的话就先不用了。

● 莫言：一个小学辍学的放牛娃，胸怀一书，手执一笔，走进山东高密乡的红高粱，注写了中国当代文学的一个符号，魔幻现实主义的写法让莫言成为2012年诺贝尔文学奖的得主，可见（后面加上作文的主题，比如坚持读书，爱好，奋斗，攀登，小人物大作为等等，必须用自己的话写上这句话，否则这个例子就没有价值了）

● 霍金：霍金在正值壮年的时候得了卢伽雷氏症，在轮椅上禁锢了40多年，但他并没有因此而放弃生命的突破，他超越相对论、量子力学、大爆炸等理论，迈入了创造宇宙的“几何之舞”的进程，给物理学的版布上画上了浓重的一笔，的确，（后面加上作文主题的话，用自己的话说即可）

● 希特勒：希特勒宣扬人性泯灭论，作为德国纳粹党的元首，他直接导致第二次世界大战的爆发，阻碍了人类历史进程的发展，不得不说，（加上作文的主题）

● 马诺：因为“非诚勿扰”栏目而走红的拜金女马诺，让我们知道有一种人宁愿在宝马车里哭也不愿在自行车上笑，我们并非不去鼓励人们要设定远大的目标，但如果为了一个浮躁的“向上”理念而丢失自己，人生又又何意义呢，我相信，我们的生活里，苏紫紫们、郭美美们、兽兽们仅仅是小众的一部分，我们的大众正用自己的勤劳和心灵为自己的未来铸就美好的天空，（加作文主题）

______以上材料名字事例记住就可以，到时候自由发挥，如果有自己喜欢的材料，也可以加进去。

以下是几篇满分记叙文：

●与你为邻（890字）（高考满分）

与你为邻，我很幸运。同桌的你，水灵的像一朵带着露水的睡莲。

课堂上，你像我的战友，一丝不苟地聆听老师的教诲，埋头做笔记，抬头回答问题。我们收获知识硕果时，会相视而笑。多才多艺的你站在舞台上时，会用火红的绸缎和优美的舞姿演绎我们绚丽的年华。当我犯错误时，你严厉的目光洒下来，我便垂下眼帘，委屈的满眼含泪。现在我知道这是朋友真情的流露，朋友，请原谅我当时的任性与乖戾。

与你为邻，我很幸运。同桌的你，豁达得像一片挂着灿星的天际。

你是男生的理性与感性完美的结合，你把这种天赋融汇到你所衷爱的数学课中，面对难题屡战屡胜，在我们班的数学领域撑起了一片天。你的五官总是那样灵动，随便地一挑眉，惟妙惟肖地模仿某个大牌明星的经典动作，就为自己的个人秀拉开了帷幕，为同学们带来阵阵欢笑，驱散毕业冲刺带来的紧张压抑的气氛。

与你为邻，我很幸运。同桌的你，可爱的像坠入凡间的天使。

六月的天气格外的沉闷，热空气在风扇的抽动下慵懒的游弋在教室中，是你贴心的话语鼓励我继续学习；老师劈头盖脸的批评让我无地自容，眼泪不听话地直往下掉，是你明亮的眼眸安慰我不要在意；面对激烈的竞争与考试的压力，是你手心的温度伴我前行，以积极乐观的心态应对一切。

耳畔回荡起风铃清脆的声音，闭上眼睛，同学间的往事还历历在目：体育训练时，早晨5点钟爬起来跑步那汗流浃背的样子；晚自习后，为了争分夺秒地学习，不去餐厅吃饭，而啃方便面的样子；同学们一起外出踏青游玩的样子；老师提问时，由于紧张手足无措的样子……那一切，宛如发生在昨天一样，带着时间的温度，流逝了。

毕业了，我们带着低年级的懵懂，中年级的欢笑，高年级的勤奋毕业了。六月是离别的季节，是花儿的海洋。我们无须伤感，因为人生的下一个颠峰还在等待我们去征服，我们要用张扬的青春去谱写生命的传奇，我们要用奋斗闯出属于自己的天空，我们在期待多年后那个同学重逢的约定。

与你为邻，我很幸运。同桌的你，是同学友谊的剪影，是一笔珍贵的记忆财富，是一个值得感谢、陪伴你走过小学全部日子的人。让我们静静的珍藏这份感动吧。

那时候，天总是很蓝，日子总过得太慢，你总说毕业遥遥无期，可一转眼我们就要各奔东西了，与你为邻，我的幸运……

======这篇作文的格式可以借用，但是每段开头的第一句总感觉不舒服，建议学习它的结尾（是同桌的你的歌词），和里面对你有启发的句子。

● 与你为邻（810字）（高考满分）

城市里，有匆匆忙忙的脚步声，有一闪而过的脸庞，也有忧愁抑郁的目光。生活中的快节奏在机器的喧嚣中沉积，人的精神也在疾驰而过的汽车中变得空虚。但倘若能够在纷繁中建造一间自己的精神小屋，便能吟叹“心远地自偏”了。

我有一间属于自己的精神小屋，与其真善美的人为邻。与他们为邻，我受益匪浅。借此机会，我想向他们表达我的感情。

透过左边的窗子，我看到了与清茶为伴，与书籍为伴的季老。季老，您是一代“国学大师”，是“学术泰斗”，是“国宝”。可是您把这三顶帽子都辞掉了，您说“环顾周遭学问之深者大有人在，国学大师岂不折煞老身？”作为您的邻居，我了解您的淡薄，明白您睿智的目光背后所经历的沧桑。不过是想专心致志地翻译《罗摩衍那》，不过是想尽心尽力地保护一些经典的文化，您却在文革中屡遭打击。是天欲摧人吗？我抱着疑问，却从您巍然的笑中找到了答案。是啊！当上天赐给你荒野时，意味着他要你成为高飞的鹰。季老，您知道吗？以您为邻，我受益匪浅。您是我精神的邻居，用您一生的淡然与执着告诉了我什么是淡泊，又告诉了我“宁静致远，淡泊明志”。真的，我想谢谢您！

透过右边的窗子，我看见了躺在病床上打点滴的您--莫里老人。莫里老人，请容我像您的学生一样喊您一声“师傅”。您虽患重病，但作为您的邻居，我知道您并不会自怨自艾，也不会自我放纵自我绝望。您在昔日那般疯狂地随歌舞蹈，舞出您的生命奇迹；您在得知病症消息时仍那么珍惜生命，坚持以乐观旷达的情绪感染身边每个人，其中包括我。您知道吗？曾经让绿叶嘲笑颓废的我因与您为邻，受您的乐观熏染，我也勇敢面对阳光了。谢谢您！

在我心里，还铭记着泰戈尔的哲言：“天空不留下鸟的痕迹，而我已飞过”与您为邻，我学会了很多；与您为邻，我的精神世界得到了充实。终于，在喧嚣的城市中，我找到了属于我的蓝天！

与你为邻，与真善美的人为邻！

======这篇作文的高分之处，在于他选择的例子很新颖，很多同学没有用过，甚至没有听说过季羡林这些人物，能够看出的是他课下的功夫用的很深，特别是对中国当代文学很感兴趣。

● 与你为邻（807字）（高考满分）

你，我的同桌，我最好的朋友。

此前，我从来没觉得我们之间有什么不同。

我们一起生活在这个高楼林立的繁华城市里，一起在公交站台等车，一起在绿茵场上驰骋，一起倾听啦啦队女生的尖叫，一起讨论巴萨vs国米；一起研究编程算法，一起约好报考深大计算机专业，一起梦想着有一天我们共同开发的网站像youtube那样在纳斯达克挂牌上市„„

你高大健硕，眉宇间透出一股俊秀，班上的女生悄悄给你取了个外号――“小柏原崇”，而我却只得了个“许三多”的美称，说实在的，我还真有点嫉妒。你的学习成绩虽然在班上不是最好的，但在球队，你是最好的，教练经常拿你当作榜样来训斥其他队员，用他带着方言的普通话说：“要想踢比赛，首先学习成绩要好，进入大学里，会有更多的比赛机会。”末了总不忘补上一句：“像某某同学那样，踢球学习两不误。”

我最忘不了的是去年那件让我烦恼的事，我生病了，尿血，是你旷课把我送到深圳友谊医院的结石科去。当时数学课正上到复数这一章节，是期末考试的重点和难点。每天下课之后你都会来到医院看我，把你做好的课堂笔记给我看，第一次翻开笔记的时候我很感动，从没见你这么认真的做过笔记，几乎是把一节课上老师所说的每个字都记录了下来„„

直到高考前那最紧张的一个月，你却忽然说你要回安徽老家。按规定，考生必须回原籍地参加高考，你说会放弃报考深大，因为深大在老家的招生人数较少，另外安徽的学习环境，使用教材与深圳不同，犹豫再三，还是决定放弃。

今天，我们会同时走进考场，为自己的明天书写一份答卷，不同的是，我在深圳，而你在陌生的老家。

我知道，在深圳还有很多很多像你一样的同学，他们的父母，和所有深圳人一样，用自己辛勤的汗水推动着城市发展，他们同样拥有这个城市的光荣与梦想，彼此为邻，相互依存。然而他们却要比我们承受的更多，不情愿却又不得不成为“高考移民”的一员，并为此放弃心仪的学校，使梦想走得更远„„

我祝福你，我的朋友，我们的邻居，那些千千万万的农民工和他们的孩子们。

======这篇作文是当之无愧的第一名，也是当年广东省的首篇满分，阅卷的三名老师不约而同都给了满分，有一个老师当场留下泪水，没有华丽的字眼，但运用了排比，没有太多的抒情，但段段之间很紧密，有些句子你是可以借用的。

● 柚子中母爱的味道（47分）

推开窗，天边的那抹云霞淡了。渲染出淡淡的柚子香，包含着母爱的味道。

夕阳淡漠了云霞，化去了心中的寒冷。我依赖在妈妈身边，在夕阳下抓一束阳光，留在心间，吮吸这在寒冷中散着的柚子香。

秋天的夜晚，狂风咆哮着大树与窗户，树叶被吹的漫天飞舞，懵然不懂的我竟不知去呵护。灯光下，看着母亲。平日里那任劳任怨的手上有了横横竖竖的口子。母亲拿来柚子，放到桌上，开始剥柚子皮。

那手上的沟壑便会凶狠地张开，露出点点红色，那红色刺痛了我的心。母亲忍着疼痛，身体努力前倾。依然微笑着。

母亲用力剥着柚子皮，手指从其中穿梭，手掌紧握着柚子。灯光下，母亲是那么地苍老，母亲总对我笑着，像是再说‘没事，真的没事’。仰头，望一望星空，月亮冲我微笑，窗外一切都静悄悄的，似乎被母亲感动了。无言。

母亲剥好后，把柚子放到我手中，指与指间的相碰，我竟触到一丝温暖，如阳光般，我选了一瓣放到母亲嘴里，四目无意识相对，无言。

窗外的树叶又开始沙沙作响，仿佛为我和母亲伴奏，空气中弥漫着柚子的香气散发出一种淡淡的母爱。不觉中，眼前有一层雾霭弥漫了视线。母爱如雨天的伞，为我挡雨；母爱如初生的太阳给我温暖与力量；母爱如一本书，一本值得我一生去发现的书。不觉叹一声，何时我才能为您遮风挡雨呢？

夜的星空被点亮了，一点一点的星星勾勒出母爱的味道，伴着淡淡的柚子香，我睡着了。

● 青春需要雕琢（中考满分）

曾亲见有一位学姐用“明媚“修饰青春的日子。青春--应该是人生中最浓艳的一笔吧！

我常在想，该用什么修饰青春。是拼搏？是冷静？是羞涩？没有答案。

人生不过一瞬，混沌间，身边的一切已然在发生！

突然觉着自己长大了，有了些许的不谙。社会上的尔虞我诈，校园里的明争暗斗„„就这样周围都慢慢熟悉。也许这就是青春，一丝懵懂。

在樱花绽开的那天，我清晰地听到了时间奔走的声音，我试着去追逐，却只感受到了眼泪洒落在身后的四分五裂。落拓的我决定躲在角落一遍一遍数我的寂寞！青春，一些漫漶。

青春，应该是最圆满的吧，有中、高考。因为曾有人说过不经历高考的人生是不完美的。或许真是这样的！

“镜花水月几年间多少春逝过„„”

也许，再回首时，我会发现原来风雨中也会渗透阳光的灿烂，苦涩后也会流露甜蜜的曼妙。

青春，令我有些搞不懂。于是我坐下来发呆，偶尔抬头看看天。阿蔡却对我说：“这么好的时光就这样浪费了！”我想说：“你看天多自在，可以随心所欲，可以哭，可以笑，旁若无人，肆无忌惮。”却终究没说，因为她不像我一样喜欢看天。

青春的我们把自己包裹得像茧一样，害怕在现实中受到伤害，却也最终没能逃脱。所以，努力挣破自己的网，幻化成蝴蝶，为自己的梦想飞翔！

这就是青春吧，却依然不知该怎样修饰！● 告别（青岛中考满分）

现在已经是盛夏了。每天不是乌云密布就是晴空万里，在这种情况下，我的心也跟着时阴时晴。

上完最后一堂课，只是和老师告别。收拾一下自己杂乱的课桌，把该带走的带走，背着大包小包的和同学告别，最后在关上教室门之前，环视了一下空荡荡的教室。我的心也不禁茫然起来，似乎有太多东西留在这里了。想带也带不走。

我关上了教室门，随着“吱呀“的几声，在那一刹那间，我的心突然有一股尖锐的痛，忽然想起了四字“青春散场‘。

慢慢地走下楼梯，我似乎想起可刚刚来到这里时，数着楼梯走进教室的样子，无知，单纯，甚至幼稚。但随着一年又一年的过去，现在我已经在四楼读初三了，那楼梯也越数越长。但儿时的心情已俨然不在了。童年的心也一去不复返了。而这一切的一切都变成我脑海里那泛黄的一页了。我知道，我该和它们告别了。

最后的一堂课，是和老师告别。

最后一次考试，是和学业告别。

最后一个人离开，是和同学告别。

最后一个脚步，是和301告别。

走在通往校门的小路上，我忘不了，昔日在这里埋头苦读的身影；忘不了，昔日在这里倾心畅谈的快乐；忘不了，昔日在这片绿茵场驰聘的快感。

在这离别之际，我们依然别情依依，走一回校园的小路，数一回教室的楼梯，心中荡起了甜蜜的回忆。

在这离别之际，我们依然有千言万语，看一眼校长的白发，摸一把老师的坐椅，腮边挂满了滚烫的泪珠。

当我的脚跨出校门的一瞬间，我忽而明白我已经不是这里的一员了。但也许不是永久，但也不是瞬间。

虽然这初中三年跟高中三年和大学四年相比，是多么的微不足道，但对于我们小孩来说是多么的珍贵和满足啊啊！

再见了，我的朋友！

再见了，我的老师！

再见了，我的学校！

再见了，我的初三！